1. i think you should add HS (Whistle) more, and fix a finish sounds

1. 00:02:335 (1) - move a little to center
2. 00:11:070 (1) - i think this distance is not so good, cant first play this to other players

AIBat v2.0 wrote:

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:23:701 (snap to 00:23:696)
00:35:853 (snap to 00:35:848)
01:00:157 (snap to 01:00:152)
01:06:233 (snap to 01:06:228)

1. 00:22:082 (1,2) - this stack is not so good, gives confusion to players
2. 00:38:222 (6,7) - ^

1. 00:56:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - change reverse slider (4,5,6)
2. 01:08:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

1. Fine

Intentional, wanted to do something like 00:23:032 (4,5,6,1,2,3) here

1. Recommend you get a timing check. The offset and/or bpm is clearly off (listen to 00:29:697 (3) - and 00:33:874 (6) - Insane).
2. What's your source for your artist name?

1. 00:47:905 - Kiai section starts, yet you've got nothing to bring out. Your rhythms aren't more difficult, your sliders are the same - keep this in mind: reaching the chorus of the song doesn't automatically mean "hurr I'm gonna turn on Kiai just cuz it's chorus". Why are you using Kiai?
2. 00:58:538 (3) - I wouldn't position this vertically from 00:58:158 (2) - . Even a slight staggering would be better.

1. 00:12:968 (2,3,1) - May be very confusing for newer players.
2. 00:59:677 - A certain feeling of emptiness. Add an object here.

1. Due to abundance of 1/2 rhythms I recommend tick rate 2.
2. 00:09:835 (1) - Remove new combo spinner; clearly a continuation of 00:09:551 (2) - .

1. What's your distance spacing in this map? Care to explain it? I'd like to know before I get into modding this map.

those wrote:

[General]

1. Recommend you get a timing check. The offset and/or bpm is clearly off (listen to 00:29:697 (3) - and 00:33:874 (6) - Insane). There's nothing wrong with the timing. The BPM and offset are perfectly fine. I'm a timing expert myself. Cases like this are usually the music's fault.
   
2. What's your source for your artist name? Well let's see...Wikipedia, My Anime List, Anime News Network, Google it!

[Easy]

1. 00:47:905 - Kiai section starts, yet you've got nothing to bring out. Your rhythms aren't more difficult, your sliders are the same - keep this in mind: reaching the chorus of the song doesn't automatically mean "hurr I'm gonna turn on Kiai just cuz it's chorus". Why are you using Kiai? Why make it harder? It's only easy difficulty! The chorus is usually the most epic part of the music. Why not add kiai time there. Based on what I've studied from other maps (such as anime, eroge, nightcore, vocaloid, etc), most mappers tend to use kiai time on the chorus.
   
2. 00:58:538 (3) - I wouldn't position this vertically from 00:58:158 (2) - . Even a slight staggering would be better. Nah, I prefer positioning this vertically. It looks ugly when it's staggered imo.

[Normal]

1. 00:12:968 (2,3,1) - May be very confusing for newer players. I argee with this, but I don't know any alternative way of changing it. Hopefully, I'll think of something.
   
2. 00:59:677 - A certain feeling of emptiness. Add an object here. I also agree, but this ruins my map's symmetry.

BeatofIke wrote:

Why make it harder? It's only easy difficulty! The chorus is usually the most epic part of the music. Why not add kiai time there. Based on what I've studied from other maps (such as anime, eroge, nightcore, vocaloid, etc), most mappers tend to use kiai time on the chorus.

those wrote:

[Hard]

1. Due to abundance of 1/2 rhythms I recommend tick rate 2. I can change it, but it would be busy using the green line to need add to it quite a lot, since have slider-tick sound. So, I don't change it
2. 00:09:835 (1) - Remove new combo spinner; clearly a continuation of 00:09:551 (2) - . Fixed, but I suspect that will it unrankable?

1. Good

1. too boring, try using several rhythms for this diff

1. same as Easy with the intro..
2. 00:59:677 - add a note

1. 00:08:032 (5,6) - i'd start the hold slider from 00:08:032 -
2. 00:21:513 (8) - too busy, delete
3. 01:08:411 (8,9) - ^

1. 00:02:335 (1) - so far from center after spinner, it will be really hard to play
2. 00:06:513 (3) - ctrl+r? i think it's nice to play with both 2 and 1
3. 00:37:082 (1) - move it to 00:37:272 - and add 2 circles from 00:37:082 - ?
4. 00:48:285 (2) - ctrl+r will be enjoyable jump
5. 00:49:614 (6) - ctrl+r slider from 00:49:424 - , and try adding a circle on (200,64) it's great for me
6. 00:51:323 (2) - ctrl+r
7. 00:54:361 (2) - ^
8. 01:13:348 (4) - weird movement, ctrl+r (if you allow this, i recommend to ctrl+r 01:13:728 (1,2) - )

Star Stream wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:02:335 (1) - so far from center after spinner, it will be really hard to play Fine to me, almost the first note so can always easily retry. Spinner isn't that short as well. It did cross my mind that I may have place too far, but I couldn't think of anyway to map this part without starting the pattern out like this.
2. 00:06:513 (3) - ctrl+r? i think it's nice to play with both 2 and 1 Yep
3. 00:37:082 (1) - move it to 00:37:272 - and add 2 circles from 00:37:082 - ? Experiment with stream for all similar patterns in this section.
4. 00:48:285 (2) - ctrl+r will be enjoyable jump Don't really think it fits with this pattern
5. 00:49:614 (6) - ctrl+r slider from 00:49:424 - , and try adding a circle on (200,64) it's great for me Hmm, I just tried a different pattern with I guess the same ideas, assuming I understood what you meant. Not sure about doing a stream here so I assume by adding, you move moving the hit circle to that place.
6. 00:51:323 (2) - ctrl+r Same as 00:48:285
7. 00:54:361 (2) - ^ ^
8. 01:13:348 (4) - weird movement, ctrl+r (if you allow this, i recommend to ctrl+r 01:13:728 (1,2) - ) Still doesn't feel right to me, I tried to improve this once again through. This pattern has been adjusted a lot of times.

the ctrl+r things, they're just 'will be more exciting to play for me'. feel free to ignore if you don't like them

those wrote:

[Insane]

1. What's your distance spacing in this map? Care to explain it? I'd like to know before I get into modding this map.