1. Easy (1,72 stars, 165 notes)
2. Hard (4,63 stars, 322 notes)
3. Normal (3,25 stars, 222 notes)

-Bakari- wrote:

Eh, eh..

request from queue. inf tickets \:D/

[General]
clear, clear (Nothing Else I Can Say)

[Easy]
only comboing suggeston
every 2nd big white line = new combo.
looks like new combos a bit overused now If I do so, I have combos up to (6), and that's something I don't want in an [Easy] --> Disaggree

Nothing else I can say :3


[Normal]
00:15:442 (5,6) - i guess this looks too close >3< maybe use this? and so on.. Disaggree
00:38:420 (1,2,3) - i guess triangle in this way better for 1/1 patterns >< Okay, "stretched" this a bit
00:37:144 (3,4) - i expected reversed 1/2 slider meow? :3 Disaggree
01:09:059 (8) - clap sounds better for me >< Disaggree
01:48:633 (6) - x228 y220 Disaggree



[Hard]
00:12:888 (1,4) - nazi: aren't properly stacked Fixed
00:15:442 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - mostly i will point out uncomfortable (for me) things 12+ on circle isn't looks good, but it follow your comboing. anyway.. maybe you can replace some notes with sliders? Disaggree
00:23:101 (1,2) - meow? :3 Disaggree
00:26:931 (7) - nazi: x272 y292 (also i think it should be 1/2 slider since i can hear vocals at 00:27:250 I want it that way, sorry
00:32:037 (4) - nazi (do the same with (6) and (8) Fixed

code for nazi fix

256,192,32037,2,0,B|228:140|268:64|336:60,1,180,0|8

00:35:867 (1) - somehow it feels like you should put hitsound at big white line (whistle would be great)(or clap?) It feels like, but neither whistle nor clap fit, so no hitsound
01:30:442 (3) -nazi: x256 y96 Disaggree
01:31:718 (5) - ^ something like this ^ this jumps looks really wrong here (and so on.) (you will ignore it, i know. i just want to say it :<) You were right xD I want this jump here
02:02:516 (1,2) - it'll place better if you use slider instead Done
02:15:442 (5) - i want to [ut NC here even if it will ruin pattern/comboing >< Disaggree
02:38:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - just awesome. i love this pattern (i think something the sawe was in Nightcore - Pinball) Thanks :3

~~~~~~~~~

gl~

HellDawn wrote:

General

SPOILER

I like this bg *-*

Hard

02:14:165- whistle Disaggree
02:15:442- ^ i think you will ignore this suggestion but if you put whistle, gonna be fit *-* Why does everyone know what I will ignore? Wtf

Normal

00:44:484- slider tick its not fit the music, its gonna weird Fixed it
02:11:931- add a note Done
02:20:548- whistle Disaggree

Easy

AR-1 Let's give it a try

Why i cant find anything much >.<
Cherry Cherry boom boom, Gaga <3

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi

General

1. Add The Fame to the tags http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Fame (or the source ?) It's already in the Tags

Easy

1. Add clap in the reverse arrow to keep the consistency in hitsounds Done

Normal

1. 00:44:484 (x) - 00:44:803 (x) - I think its better to remove those 2 inherited sections, it sounds better whit soft-slidertick2 Done
2. 00:53:101 (8) - I think 8 its a high combo for a Normal so 00:51:186 (5) Add NC Done
3. 01:09:059 (8) - Same as above add NC Done
4. 01:26:931 (1) - Add NC Done
5. 01:37:144 (1) - ^ Done
6. 01:47:357 (1) - ^ Done
7. 01:55:016 (1) - ^ Done
8. 02:15:442 (1) - ^ Done
9. 02:21:825 (1) - ^ Done

Hard

1. Clear

Nothing found, That's somthing good

Good Luck ! and Star!

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi Yli

[Hard]

1. 00:06:505 (8) - no whistle to start of slider? to keep the whistleing on red ticks Nah, I kept it. Sounds better imo
2. 00:38:261 (1,2) - I feel this a bit hard to read, maybe you will not going to change it but I wanna to give my suggest: add an 1/4 slider that start on 00:38:101 and ends on 00:38:261, that way the slider will follows the "heey~" and the end of slider will start to sounds with the vocal change that you was following originally Changed
3. 00:48:952 - maybe rise up the volume to 60% claps of normal soundset are not so listenable I already think they might be too noisy no changes
4. 00:53:740 (1) - finish at start of slider? Done
5. 00:56:771 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - my god awesome Thanks :3
6. 00:58:846 (1) - finish? Done
7. 01:03:952 (1) - finish to start of slider? ok for those previous finishes I know that there is no higher sounding on song but the vocal has like a section to this Done
8. 01:06:505 (1) - claps on custom slider tick always get moar volume, maybe add a section on 01:06:825 with a 45% volume Done
9. 01:24:218 (1) - same rhythm suggest as 00:38:261 (1,2) Done
10. 01:52:782 - noisy clap, maybe section with 35~40% volume Added a 45% section as in Kiai before

[Normal]

1. 00:17:357 (8) - improve blanket? Fixed the position, but not the slider itself
   SPOILER

   code]293,271,17357,2,0,B|305:304|285:333,1,65,8|2[/code]
   just changed the location, is not distance snapped though x_x
2. 01:24:697 - very high volume difference, maybe reduce it a bit? Raised 10%

[Easy]

1. 00:52:464 (2) - insteadad this add 2 1/2 circles? moar soft I think, also this slider is 1 ms unsaped, I think is a new bug of our editor =3= Done

that is all, everything is nice, but need moar finishes \:D/

SPOILER

SPOILER

355,103,28208,2,0,B|320:60|232:52|180:80,1,180,0|8

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi , From my queue
Wow Lady Gaga , her concert at Thailand last week was so good !! (even I didn't participate with it )

Easy
01:20:548 (3) - It isn't a big issue but can you make something like this ? , almost off-screen it does look not good Fixed

SPOILER

02:23:740 (2) - emm, I don't think this is good with 80% , 70% which is accelerate from 02:12:888 (1) - (60%) is very well imo Done
02:52:463 (1) - end at 02:53:740 is better ? Disaggree, her voice stops where the spinner ends now

Normal
01:34:271 (7) - make slider end at (1) instead ? , because It follows the vocal very well by using slider here (Cann~~~ say) Disaggree, I don't wanto begin a Kiai with a slider end >.<
02:50:867 (5) - I will add whistle here because it sounds very well with the vocal Done
02:52:463 (1) - same as easy? Same as easy

Hard
00:28:208 (3) - can you curve it better ? like this As it is curved now, it surrouds the (4) almost perfectly --> no changes

SPOILER

355,103,28208,2,0,B|320:60|232:52|180:80,1,180,0|8

00:29:484 (5) - use my code above and rotate them ? Disaggree
00:38:740 (6) - new combo ? I feel from her vocal , really appropriate to use new combo here Done
02:32:197 (x) - highly recommend to add note here cuz it fits with the vocal absolutely Done
02:42:888 (4) - where is clap ? I forgot it
02:47:995 (4) - feel weird without clap here too Done
02:52:463 (1) - same as I mentioned Same as I answered

Well ,it looks good for me , star here~~
Good luck for ranking Thanks :3

CDFA wrote:

ANOTHER MAP

WOO

Hard:
00:06:186 (7,8) - This would probably play better as just a stream
00:41:293 (2,3,4) - ^
01:21:825 (5) - NC Done
01:27:250 (2,3,4) - Probably better as a stream
02:05:548 (2,3,4) - ^
02:47:037 (1,2) - ^

About the replacing of sliders by circles to stream the parts, a quotation out of another beatmap thread (http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/76164/start=105):

13:32 <Garven> : If you're using 1/4 streams longer than 3 hits, it's really going out of Hard territory

And if I would replayce those, they would be streams of 5 or 7 hits. And well, I keep the slider.

Normal:
Stop being so good at this dammit

Easy:
ghdfgfghdf

Double star because dammit Omg, thanks :3

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Ylinestra44
Wow, this map is really neat !
also looks really good custom sound.
I'll just give you some suggestions
[General]
good
[Easy]
fine:D
[Normal]
If you've used a more finish, this map will be better.. (same as hard diff :d) Added some finishes in Kiai (in easy as well, to keep it consistent)
00:35:548 - i really recommend you to add the note :3 Done
[Hard]
fine:D

good luck for rank !

star

1. 00:32:037 (3) punktsymmetrisch mit (1) machen
2. 01:43:527 stattdessen sowas: http://puu.sh/yYG8
3. 01:46:080 zwei circles stattdessen damit hier nicht nur Slider sind sonst: benutz doch sowas hier: http://puu.sh/yYGp (ignorier die Combos)
4. 01:53:740 ich fänd zwei cirle am Anfang und am Ende besser weil es sich so ein bisschen overmapped an dieser anfühlt
5. 01:54:378 mach hier besser (2) hin und lösch (3) (ich weiß dann landet man auf dem Downbeat aber es passt sehr gut meiner meinung nach)
   ach ja und auf 01:53:740 dann einen Circle
6. *nazi-modding on* 02:28:208 den zweiten Sliderpoint ein Kästchen nach links *nazi-modding off*

1. 00:49:910 (3) versuch mal diese Formation: http://puu.sh/yYKE
2. 01:25:335 (2,3) stattdessen ein Slider?
3. 02:34:271 (3) benutz doch auch den Slider von (2,4,5,6) dann wirkt es einheitlicher

1. 00:07:144 könntest das gleiche wie bei Easy 01:46:080 machen
2. 02:12:888 (1) nen bisschen weiter von der vertikalen Linie wegrücken, damit sich die 4 Slider nicht berühren / dann auch mit den Anderen machen
3. 02:33:633 das sieht son bisschen durcheinander aus/ vllt. besser (2) kopieren bei 02:34:271 einsetzen und Horizontal+Vertikal spielgeln und dann auch mit (4) machen

GamerX4life wrote:

Omg dieses mal bin ich spät dran Oder du wirst einfach nur immer schneller
My Mod:
[Easy]

1. 00:32:037 (3) punktsymmetrisch achsensymmetrisch mit (1) machen Symmetrie schön und gut, aber ich denke, dass der Flow so besser ist
2. 01:43:527 stattdessen sowas: http://puu.sh/yYG8 Ich will keine slider spammen D:
3. 01:46:080 zwei circles stattdessen damit hier nicht nur Slider sind sonst: benutz doch sowas hier: http://puu.sh/yYGp (ignorier die Combos) Nachdem ich das obere nicht gemacht habe, hab ich schon hitcircle, und das ist okay so
4. 01:53:740 ich fänd zwei cirle am Anfang und am Ende besser weil es sich so ein bisschen overmapped an dieser anfühlt Gemacht
5. 01:54:378 mach hier besser (2) hin und lösch (3) (ich weiß dann landet man auf dem Downbeat aber es passt sehr gut meiner meinung nach)
   ach ja und auf 01:53:740 dann einen Circle Hm, nee, hab jetzt insgesamt 3 circles da, und das find ich fein^^
6. *nazi-modding on* 02:28:208 den zweiten Sliderpoint ein Kästchen nach links *nazi-modding off* Gemacht~

[Normal]

1. 00:49:910 (3) versuch mal diese Formation: http://puu.sh/yYKE Disaggree
2. 01:25:335 (2,3) stattdessen ein Slider? Gemacht
3. 02:34:271 (3) benutz doch auch den Slider von (2,4,5,6) dann wirkt es einheitlicher Ne, so ist's symmetrischer

[Hard]

1. 00:07:144 könntest das gleiche wie bei Easy 01:46:080 machen Nachdem ich das bei easy nicht gemacht hab, bin ich hier auch nicht einverstanden
2. 02:12:888 (1) nen bisschen weiter von der vertikalen Linie wegrücken, damit sich die 4 Slider nicht berühren / dann auch mit den Anderen machen Gemacht
3. 02:33:633 das sieht son bisschen durcheinander aus/ vllt. besser (2) kopieren bei 02:34:271 einsetzen und Horizontal+Vertikal spielgeln und dann auch mit (4) machen Die sind ordentlich platziert. Die Anfänge der Slider bilden einen Stern (jeder ist um 144° rotiert)

Deine Maps werden von Map zu Map besser
Viel Glück und Star! Dankö :3

Kurokami wrote:

Easy

1. 00:33:315 (1,2) - kinda mislead I don't really understand, so no changes

Normal

1. 00:17:357 (8) - x:292, y:272 the slider's border is not visible Moved[nazy]

Hard

1. seems fine

Personally I hated your new combos, but if you choose this, then I not say anything since looks fine after all.
Not bad beatmap, have my star~

1. With the last spinner on each difficulty, you might as well silence all of it. It sounds weird to have it only be silenced starting at a certain point of it.

1. 01:09:059 (3) - Instead of putting this to the side of (2), it would be better looking and flow better if you were to place it like this.

1. 01:03:952 (1,3) - Make it so that these don't touch. Sort of like this.
2. 01:30:123 (2,4) - Same situation as above.
3. 02:12:888 (1,2,3,4,1) - I love the symmetry of this pattern that you used!

1. Can't find anything.

1. The combo colors blend in with the background too much. They should be easier to see.
2. I think you should have a harder difficulty for the mapset. The Hard is very easy.

1. 02:52:463 (1) - End this at 02:53:740 instead.

1. 02:52:463 (1) - End this at 02:53:740 instead.

1. 00:44:803 (4,5,6) - Spacing's pretty weird here. I see that you're trying to make a 2x jump from 5 to 6, but the 4 to 5 is regular spacing.
2. 01:29:484 (2,3,4) - Same here. A more consistent spacing would be better (jumps on both)
3. 01:30:761 (4,5,6) - Same here.
4. 02:02:516 (1) - This starts on a slightly unexpected beat. Try moving the object to the red tick before, then adding a repeat.
5. 02:07:782 (2,3,4) - Spacing again.
6. 02:09:059 (4,5,6) - Spacing again.
7. 02:23:101 (1,2,3) - Spacing again.
8. 02:24:378 (3,4,5) - Spacing again.
9. 02:47:676 (3,4) - Decrease the spacing on this jump, it's a bit too big.
10. 02:52:463 (1) - End this at 02:53:740 instead.

1. 00:52:782 (3) - Remove clap. This is because of the scarcity of objects in this part of the phrase in the subsequent phrases (for example, there's nothing at 00:57:888 - or 01:02:995 - or 01:08:101 - ).
2. 01:43:846 (6) - Remove clap, for the same reason.
3. 02:47:676 (8) - Remove clap from head.
4. 02:52:463 (1) - Remove new combo from this spinner. Move 5% volume to the very end. The lower synthesizer notes are still present until the end, so you should keep with your 60% volume. Apply this to all diffs.

1. 01:39:059 (4) - Hitsounds are reversed.