1. Normal (2.24 stars, 111 notes)
2. o_Q (4.92 stars, 703 notes)
3. qinche's Hard (4.22 stars, 200 notes)
4. Tonoko's Hard (4.39 stars, 507 notes)

• I noticed that you swapped timing sections a lot for the sliderticks. Consider adding the same sound for both soft-sliderslide and normal-sliderslide, it sounds more polished that way.
  If you changed the Backgrounds, remember to full reupload the map.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:12:335 - almost overlapped timing sections.
  01:54:043 (5) - unintuitive, the map has a regular flow and that slider should be 1/4 shorter to respect that.
  01:56:443 (6) - ^ same
  01:58:844 (4,6) - ^ same (is it really intentional? At least try to avoid impossible jumps so that the player won't break the combo uselessly)
  Please check the sliders, i think that's an error due to resnapping.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  The Background image is not working. Checking the .osu file, i noticed that the filename is wrong, fix it please.
  01:52:543 (1,2,3,4) - the whole map goes on with a regular basic spacing, then you make something like this? Please no, it's just D:
  01:56:443 (6,7,8,9) - ^ same, and really hard to click even for a Hard difficulty
  01:58:844 (4,5) - ^
  Before i go on, why the sudden change of rhythm/patterns/spacing at 01:52:543? This doens't fit a Normal, but a Hard. Please revise it, the flow before this part was good for a Normal. If you want to have the map increasing in difficulty, try to slowly increasing the harshness of the map, it's more fun that way. Don't just suddently use impossible jumps/triplets/sliders, it's only tedious.
  02:27:950 (7,8) - 02:42:053 (7,6) - check these kind of things too, unless you REALLY know what you're doing (there are a LOT of these)
  03:00:356 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 1/2 jumps scattered randomly in the playfield (and again, this is a Normal)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  What's the difficulty name supposed to mean? O.o
  Now, this is what i was talking about: this map is really well balanced, there are good patterns that are fun to play and there's consistency.
  It seems incomplete since it lacks hitsounds and it ends in a weird spot, but it's flawless for the moment.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  What's the difficulty name supposed to mean? O.o
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  The Background image is not working. Checking the .osu file, i noticed that the filename is wrong, fix it please.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  What's the difficulty name supposed to mean? ç_ç
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  This map works better than normal. It's playable, but i strongly recommend to give it a more polished look: most of the patterns are just a punch in the eye because most of the beats just seem to be randomly scattered across the screen. Also, some spacing inconsistencies are quite bad (look below)
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  01:09:041 (7,8) - non consistent spacing
  01:51:650 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  02:03:052 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  02:09:353 (6,1) - ^
  And so on...

xierbaliti wrote:

eveless wrote:

建议丢个sliderslide进去

[Insane]
绿线都没对齐到线上:o
00:27:333 (3) - 可以拉更好看一点0.0?
00:29:733 (4) - ^
00:31:534 (6) - new combo 而且这个和7都属于比较硬的slider...觉得不太适合这里这么柔软的音乐?
01:09:641 (8) - new combo
01:21:644 (1,2) - 没叠好0.0
01:43:398 (5) - 去掉?
02:27:957 (8) - new combo? 跟前面形成对比0.0
02:28:257 (1) - 取消new combo
02:29:157 (6) - new combo 突出重音?
02:32:458 (6,7,8) - 这三个可以利用复制粘贴旋转角度摆更好看一点0.0
02:38:159 (2) - 没叠好0.0?
02:42:060 (6) - new combo
03:07:565 (5) - ^
03:14:166 (1) - 取消new combo
03:14:766 (4) - new combo
03:17:167 (11) - new combo
03:18:367 (1) - 取消new combo
03:37:071 (6) - 建议new combo因为降速
03:40:479 (1) - 觉得结尾需要压下音0.0

虽然可能我挑的都是一些combo问题可能你会觉得我比较无聊0.0 可是combo也算图的整体性的一部分吧>.> 觉得还是比较规律一点最好:D
节奏和音效都不错...排版方面感觉还没形成体系...没有一个整体感0.0

[殿子's Hard]
00:02:728 (6) - 感觉这里应该new combo?
00:05:879 (5) - spacing
00:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 喜欢这边0.0
01:06:941 (7) - 感觉还可以更圆滑一点
02:30:508 (3,4) - 可以离12再远一点点?

[呆呆's Hard]

/me slaps daidai with ice cream

同绿线没对齐
02:00:952 (3) - 感觉可以放开一点?

[Normal]
这个normal太多故意的降spacing了...对于新玩家来说太难认了 建议那些部分重新排或者改用slider
最后的那些绿线可以删掉

00:27:333 (3) - 尾部的finish去掉
00:32:734 (7) - 结束在前面那根白线上?
00:36:335 (4) - 尾部的finish0.0
00:47:137 (2) - 建议改成1/2的折返
00:53:138 (4) - ^
01:12:342 (7) - new combo
01:21:644 (x) - 加一个note

我是渣mapper所以我的意见肯定有很多是不对的0.0
如果有说错的地方请不要笑我<(_ _)>

[呆呆's Hard]

/me slaps daidai with ice cream

同绿线没对齐
02:00:952 (3) - 感觉可以放开一点?