applied.
if you include the grace for the first one, they're both 4 notes. but yes, i removed one note from the quieter part.
the focus here isn't really the instrumentals.
i think it's mapped?
sounds reasonable. however, if you look at the overall context, i've made it this way because 00:11:646 (11646|1,11646|2) - does not have any vocals immediately after it while 00:02:313 (2313|1,2313|3,2313|6) - does which helps to differentiate between instrumental and vocals visually.
changed slightly here 00:29:513 and added a note 00:30:229 (for now)
the ones at 13 left as is because not much vocal change and will feel bloated otherwise
i think it worked at 02:55:338 because you put it at the blue line, or at least close enough to it, and there was the fwook sound so it was fine. but 04:15:338 - your choice of when to put it and when not is very messy and unreadable in terms of intention.
lns should be fine now, i think you can fix the normal notes. if you listen properly at like 25 or 50% speed, you can hear a lot of the sounds have sides to it (left or right). so if you just match those sounds it will turn out better.
i got this instead, http://puu.sh/JzN8H/f42ce14aa1.osu (file)
00:10:433 (10433|4,10535|5,10620|1,10686|3) - these are different sounds (have to open in the mod diff)
focus here is the trumpets, not vocals. the variation seen here 02:20:715 - just happened to coincide with vocals but i was mapping the trumpet. plus if i was to add more stuff here 02:19:618 - then it makes the transition from rice to ln very difficult. it's fine as is right now for me
idk, i don't really see it as weaker because i feel like this 01:26:935 (86935|2) - short ln is more than enough for some reason. might be because i'm mainly focusing on the vocals here and not so much the drums. and like the pause given to the right hand just feels really nice for me.