03:10:408 you missed a note on the second column, though you can move it to the first column too if you want, depends on which column you find more comfortable to hit the note
Tried to copy your pattern, fixed it to this (https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/944543864893632532/1093589569376637100/image.png ) so the melody is followed, also added a missing note (highlighted)
In the section, you mapped the snares with triples, so to keep the same concept, 01:56:385 should also be a triple too
Sorry for not being more specific!