No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Hard]
我挺不理解为什么加这么个音效当whistle 好几个whistle ,不知道哪个
00:01:350 (1,2) - overlap很不美观
00:19:950 (2,3,4,5) - 调一下吧
01:04:050 (4,5,6) - 恩 不太和谐
01:27:750 (1,2,3,4) - 间距不太好 建议都弄成23那样
01:36:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - you know
02:04:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:09:600 - 能加个note
02:38:550 (1,2,3) - 下面stack效果不好 你可以把2.3放到88 200试试
02:40:500 - 缺一个啊
02:42:450 (5,6) - overlap
03:14:550 - SB这边这个特效。。。有点搞笑。。。其实前面枫叶那个效果非常棒的。。,233还行吧= =
03:17:700 (2) - overmap了吧
03:21:450 (6,1) - 这边flow好像不太好
03:44:550 (4) - 结尾去clap
03:47:700 - 缺个鼓
03:49:350 (3,6) - 对称一下？
整体问题不大。。。就是排列太不公整了..不过这个没法强求

1. 00:42:150 (3,4) - I think you can make it a more proper blanket.
2. 01:08:850 (6,7) - Maybe you can change it to something like the picture below?
   
3. 01:47:250 (3,4,5) - v
   
4. 03:04:650 (9) - Ctrl G?
5. 03:52:350 (5) - You can hear the last note lingering a little longer, I think it's possible to change or add a spinner here at the end.

Victorica wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue. (M4M) :3

[Hard]

1. 00:42:150 (3,4) - I think you can make it a more proper blanket.
2. 01:08:850 (6,7) - Maybe you can change it to something like the picture below?
   
3. 01:47:250 (3,4,5) - v very nice , fix
   
4. 03:04:650 (9) - Ctrl G? fix
5. 03:52:350 (5) - You can hear the last note lingering a little longer, I think it's possible to change or add a spinner here at the end. fix

I can hardly find anything to suggest.. >< I only managed to point a few but I hope what I suggested could help! ^^

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there
from my mod queue
[normal]
00:20:550 (5) - nc here? x
00:35:250 (4) - fix distance snap here
00:38:550 (3,4) - stack it better
00:52:650 (3) - fix DS
01:08:850 (5) - ^^
01:15:750 (3,4) - make them the same?
01:46:950 (1,2) - switch nc?
02:06:750 - you missed a strong point here, should start something new there x
02:37:950 (3,4) - fix blanket
02:43:650 (4) - fix DS
02:59:550 (5,1) - fix blanket
03:01:950 (2,3) - stack them
[hard]
00:06:150 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:06:750 (4,2) - ^^
00:56:550 (5,6,7) - kinda over mapped, i prefer to make a slider from 00:56:550 - 00:57:150. it will be good with the vocals, and its a nice slow part before the kiai time. x
01:01:350 (3,1) - fix blanket x
01:10:950 (3) - x +1
02:00:000 (5) - fix DS
02:01:950 (5,2) - fix blanket
02:38:250 (7,8,1) -fix stack
02:50:250 (7,8,1) - ^^
02:40:650 (5) - fix DS
02:54:300 (6) - ^^
02:55:050 (10) - ^^
02:55:200 (11) - ^^
03:00:150 (1,3) - fix blanket
03:19:050 (6,7,1) - fix stack
03:26:400 (5) - fix DS
03:45:600 (6) - ^^
03:47:850 (7) - ^^
03:48:000 (8) - ^^
GL!
my map- https://osu.ppy.sh/s/283731

DreaM117er wrote:

M4M request from my queue

[General]

1. No.

[Normal]

• 
  00:11:550 (6,1) - NC對掉
  00:14:550 (4) - NC
  00:16:650 (9,1) - NC對掉
  00:21:150 (7,1) - ^
  00:25:950 (6,1) - ^
  00:30:150 (4,1) - ^
  00:35:550 (5,1) - ^
  00:39:750 (4,1) - ^
  00:45:150 (5,1) - ^
  00:49:350 (6,1) - ^
  00:54:150 (6,1) - ^
  01:46:950 (5,1) - ^
  02:35:550 (7,1) - ^
  02:45:150 (7,1) - ^
  02:55:050 (1,2) - ^
  03:14:250 (1,2) - ^
  03:23:550 (8,1) - ^
  03:47:550 (6,1) - ^

1. 詢問過其他BN了，他說NC問題不大，不過我還是覺得你的NC下的地方很奇怪
   看看我這樣下你喜歡不?? 不错,之前我也是2长白1NC

[Hard]

• 
  00:03:750 - 加個Circle?? ---不加
  00:54:750 (5) - 建議還是改Circle比較好，短條尾巴沒有聲音跟，Circle的感覺會比短條好
  00:56:550 (5) - ^
  02:35:550 (5) - DS修一下，太近了

1. 看起來沒什麼問題 谢谢

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]
OFFSET个人觉得设为140更好 ---先保留150 (换了要改几小时sb snap...

[Normal]

OD5可能高了点，建议OD4
FINISH音效可以适当调小一点点。 --感觉没啥必要

00:47:540 (5) - NC 都是2长白1NC,不改
00:58:940 (4) - ^ ^
01:31:340 (5) - ^ ^
01:36:740 (6,7,8) - 不在一条线上 ---不改


[Hard]

00:21:450 (6) - 换成两个单点 --不改
00:26:250 (7) - ^ ^
00:31:050 (5,6,1) - 弄成垂直一条线往上走似乎好看些
00:53:850 (2,3) - 00:54:450 (4,5) - 这两个的间距放在Hard似乎有点不太合适，跳没问题，但建议还是保持前后等间距。 ---懒改
00:58:950 (3) - 换成两个单点 --不改
00:59:550 (5) - NC ^
01:19:050 (8) - 换成两个单点 ^
01:56:550 (2) - ^ ^
02:24:750 (2,3,4) - 这三个我觉得跟更为明显的琴声会好些，即改成3次折返，并且都往后移动到蓝线上开始。第一下琴声太弱了，很难听得清，对于Hard来说跟清晰的节奏更有利于玩家。后面类似的地方我也是同样这么认为。 那边按照Mackenzie的摸已经删了

不错的图，GOOD LUCK！

Mackenzie wrote:

m4m

Normal

1. 01:19:350 (1,2) - 疊好啊
2. 03:18:750 (5,1) - blanket

Hard

1. 00:22:950 (3,4) - 這個真不好看
2. 02:16:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 這段必須break，因為你的nm這裡有break
3. 03:33:750 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

全程ds的nh set摸個毛啊 233 ,hard 还是有些跳DS的

Karen wrote:

M4M

General

1. 01:57:150 - the lyrics here should be ‘扬帆’ not ‘杨帆’ @yf_bmp
2. soft-hitwhistle.wav only has 27ms long. please use another one with length of at least 100ms. 从狮鹫ranked图ranked图里拿来的

Normal

1. 02:00:750 (4,1) - feel a bit strange on this stack since it's 1/1 rhythm, feel wierd to play. ---不改
2. 03:01:950 (2,3) - ^ ^
3. 02:59:550 (4,1) - make the blanket perfectly

Hard

1. 02:16:950 - double green line.
2. 00:10:950 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个排整齐吧。。感觉距离都不一样
3. 01:56:550 (2) - 放远一点，跟前面太近了容易读错
4. 02:28:050 (5,6) - 这个包好吧。强迫症难受

Kyle Y wrote:

M4M

I really tried several time to download, and I can finally download today.
I will choose to mod Normal diff

[Normal]

00:01:350 (1,2) - I prefer using slider
00:04:950 (3) - not blanket (2) well
00:07:350 (1,2) - curve slider, as straight, I think a little bit hard --x
00:09:750 (3,4) - slider, if not, then prevent overlap
00:16:650 (1) - move to 00:16:950 -
00:20:550 (6,7) - slider, too much circle
00:29:550 - (=circle 4) try this ---x ,a little hard

00:34:350 (6) - 1beat slider keep mine

00:35:250 (7) - del
00:35:550 (1) - circle
00:36:150 - 1 beat slider start at here
00:37:350 - ^

00:38:550 (4,1) - 2beat slider here and circle at 00:40:950 - ^
00:41:550 (2,3) - for (2) cancel reverse, and (3) move to 00:42:750 - ^
00:46:350 (2,3,4) - slider, do not use too much circle ^
00:47:550 (5,6) - ctrl+g
00:49:350 (1) - cancel reverse and add a circle at 00:50:550 - keep mine
00:51:750 (3,4,5,6) - del 4 and 5, and add 1 beat slider at 00:52:950 - ^
00:56:550 (3) - cancel reverse ---keep
00:58:350 (4,5) - 2 beat slider at 00:57:750 - ^
00:59:550 (6,7) - slider^
01:04:050 (4,5,6) - 4 del and 5-6 slider
01:06:150 (2,3) - two one beat slider--keep first
01:08:550 (4,5) - slider
01:09:150 (1) - 1/2 beat slider at 01:09:150 - and one beat slider at 01:09:750 - ,del (2)
01:10:950 (3,4) - slider
01:19:350 (1,2,3) - prevent overlap ---keep
01:27:750 - try this (from brown circle 4)

01:31:350 (5) - 1 beat as you skipped 01:31:950 -
01:32:550 - try this

01:34:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this
(01:34:950 - )

01:37:950 (1) - circle and 1 beat slider at 01:38:550 - ---keep
01:39:750 (4,5) - ctrl+g
01:44:550 (3) - cancel reverse and add circle at 01:45:750 - ---keep
01:54:450 (2) - del
01:54:750 - circle and slider ---keep

I just stop here.
I think, slider better start at white tick, especially big white.
and do not use a lot of circle (max 2)
In fact not big problem in this map, good luck then.

我真的不太想mod 中國mapper 的圖....真的太有風格的說 唉...

Rohit6 wrote:

Hello!

[Normal]
01:04:050 - i think you should add a circle because this beat is loud and feels kinda important (Suggestion) --v
02:55:350 (1,2) - Center the sliderend of the second slider correctly --v

[Hard]
00:04:350 (1,2) - Blanket this correctly --v
00:52:950 (1,2) - If this is a blanket then fix it , if its not then ignore --v
01:33:750 (1,2) - You could change the shape of the slider to make a better blanket (Suggestion) --v
01:33:750 (1,3) - This is not a good blanket --v
01:41:850 (2,3) - Fix blanket --v
03:43:950 (2,4,5) - Spacing of the sliders from the circle is uneven --v

Good map and SB but you didnt read the rules of my queue , so no kudosu for you sorry very sorry , but really thanks for modding

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

首先tags空成这样实在太不爽了，虽然我也没找到什么，但是vocaloid china是肯定要写一写的，还要凑数的话最好把洛天依的拼音写进去
我去找过source,都不是很统一,没敢加

[Hard]

00:01:350 (1) - 像这种开头的whistle声音就有点太小，比较难听出来 ---换了个扩大了2倍音的

00:02:550 (2) - 00:07:350 (1) - 这地方听上去就感觉更应该是finish而不是whistle，而且更像是rock的那种finish

00:11:550 (3,4,1) - 01:28:350 (3,4,1) - 这三个摆成一个5连会更好一些？因为我觉得00:11:700 - 00:12:000 - 这两个地方的鼓点强度比00:11:100 - 00:11:400 - 强了很多，这时候再同样用滑条尾去摆可能就不是太好，00:11:700 - 00:12:000 - 鼓点比较强的地方完全刻意用circle来放，反正是hard应该不会有什么问题，另外一个1/4滑条和一个3连的组合我试了一下似乎效果也不错 ---不会啊,滑条头的音比滑条尾的大些,5连也不是很好打,不喜欢

00:40:050 (4) - 这个滑条尾的音量有点大，不太符合背后的钢琴，因为这个地方是没有钢琴的音色的

00:49:050 (2) - 这个掰弯可能会好看一点

00:53:850 (2,3,4,5) - 这两个感觉还是折返滑条舒服一点，当然只是从player的角度

01:04:650 (6) - ctrl+G？

01:19:350 (1) - 01:23:550 (2) - 这个我觉得finish可能更适合这个地方

02:34:200 - 这地方应该补上，因为我觉得你在这里是跟了钢琴的

02:55:350 - 这段开始的话音量是不是应该小一点了？

03:04:950 - 这个段感觉不用整段都用kiai，因为真正的高潮还没到，跟02:55:350 - 这个一样闪一下就够了

[Normal]

排列什么的没什么好改的，音效倒是可以看看hard的

GL

Reiki wrote:

Hi there. Modding from my queue.
I wonder why this guy (girl?) calls me senpai when (s?)he has more time on this game and maps better than me... o.o --

[Normal]

1. The diff is quite solid so I'll only mention some things I don't think would hurt from changing. You can then decide what to do (no harm in keeping things as they are now, though c: ).
2. 00:04:350 (2,3) - Blanket isn't perfect by a little bit. Fix it by moving the end a bit down. You should disable the Grid Snap for this. --fix
3. 01:04:350 (5) - This would flow a bit better if you curve the slider to the left like this, I think. --nice
4. 01:06:150 (2,3) - Blanket here isn't perfect by little. --fix ,bte here is 1,2
5. 01:19:050 - You should add a note here. The pause you use here is inconsistent with the rest of the rhythm (and there's some note there, so you don't lose anything). In case you don't want a circle there, a slider on 01:18:750 - would work as well, if you remove the reverse on 01:18:150 (5) - --i perfer add note~
6. 01:40:950 (6,7) - Stack here is a bit confusing as it's like the first time you stack notes like this (00:38:550 (4,1) - doesn't count as that one has more difference in the timing, and the second note had a NC). You should unstack. (I think the one during Kiai 02:00:750 (4,1) - is okay, since NC :p) --aparted
7. 02:16:350 - Add a finish here? Song suggests so. --fix
8. 03:01:950 (2,3) - Same stack thing (but you can decide to not change this one. After that Kiai, I think it isn't that sudden anymore).--yep

Hard is beautiful. I didn't found anything there. --

Nice, solid mapset. That's all I can say, and I wish you good luck in ranking it! --

Kencho wrote:

[General]

1. 沒什麼好說的

[StoryBoard]

1. 有好幾處SB Load超過了5.0x
   
   02:15:750 - 用黑色盖了下 就闪光处瞬间一下
   
   02:55:500 - 到03:13:200 - 一整段都是 我稍微移动修改了下位置 不会有大于5.0的了
   
   03:34:500 - 同上,也就有个地方瞬间一下

[Normal]

1. 還是建議AR5會比較好
   
   
2. 01:09:150 (4,1) - 間距變成1.05x了，誤差不要超過+-0.05x
   
   01:44:250 (2,3) - 1.05x

[Hard]

1. 02:00:150 (1) - 這滑條變成B型了，重新拉一下改回P型吧

其他美麗，把SB幾處改好了就可以找BN了

Mei wrote:

可以的

ZZHBOY wrote:

Normal里面有个clap和Hard不一样,黑边也没去掉 其他没发现

1. soft-hitfinish.wav has a delay over 5ms. I know this is a default hitsound, but anyways it's unrankable. Use this instead.
2. soft-hitwhistle.wav is shorter than 100ms. You'll need to found an alternative.

1. 00:54:750 - 01:52:050 - Inconsistency in sb effect.
2. 02:45:750 - This white flash being too short had less effect imo.

1. 01:06:150 (1) - Why the single combo? Remove Nc here.
2. 01:29:850 (2) - 01:34:650 (2) - 03:05:550 - 03:07:950 - Clap.
3. 01:39:150 (2) - If you wanted to use drumnormal, then it should be a sampleset-drum, not an additions-drum.
4. 02:45:150 - Finish.
5. 03:15:750 (2,3) - Spacing.

1. 00:37:950 (6) - A stronger hitsound would sound better than a whistle.
2. 03:04:050 (2) - Imo NC would indicate the sv change better.
3. 03:05:550 (2) - 03:07:950 (2) - 03:21:450 (6) - Hitsound.

Sonnyc wrote:

Bubbled for 8 months! OMG

Sonnyc wrote:

Bubbled for 8 months! OMG
// i am lazy , so it put so long ,also now to see , it no fit in 2016's style


Hitsound setting was a little disappointing
// same to me , after all , it is set 8 months ago , that time my mapping-skill so bad

moonlightleaf wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

Bubbled for 8 months! OMG
// i am lazy , so it put so long ,also now to see , it no fit in 2016's style


Hitsound setting was a little disappointing
// same to me , after all , it is set 8 months ago , that time my mapping-skill so bad

anyway , thanks for modding