seselis1 wrote:

o/ from my q

[Apathy]
an HD bg would be better - It's really hard to find a nice background that's fitting but I've updated it now
00:03:847 (9) - I would suggest replacing this circle with 1/4 slider bc guitar sound is extended - I'm mapping to the drums at this part and it's so quiet that you don't really hear it while playing. I think it's fine rn
00:06:659 (7,8,9) - make it linear - Because of the rest of the movement in that pattern, the play assumes it's going to be in that direction generally so I don't really think it#s much of an issue
00:11:909 (1) - there are some sounds you could map and slider is covering them - I think these sounds are too in the background to map with anything other than passive and the guitar is much stronger. I'll ask about
00:27:097 (1) - this really should be placed further. Only with NC stronger sound is not emphasized enough - The smaller spacing is meant to emphasise the next notes, 1 and 2, more. Compared, to me at least, it's way weaker
00:28:222 - a reverse arrow covers stronger beat and makes it look passive. I suggest making 00:27:847 (4) - this to two 1/2 sliders or one 1/2 slider and two 1/2 not much spaced circles Changed
00:31:597 (1) - agin should be spaced further and btw can be hard to notice - same as above, I think it's fine from a player stamd point
00:32:722 - should be clickable. You could start 1/2 slider from here and place circle 00:32:534 - here before it - Fixed
00:34:222 (6) - should again be spaced further due to stronger sound and then 00:34:222 (6,7) - they could be closer to each other - The pattern is like this to represent the up and down nature of the vocals
00:34:784 (2) - this could also be a short reversed slider like 00:34:972 (3) - - No strong enough sound to support it
00:34:972 (3,4,5) - you could lower the hitsounds for these 3 - Fixed
00:37:597 (9) - overmapped no sound so you could make 00:37:503 (8) - 1/4 slider - Removed nine
00:38:534 - something feels missing - Changed
00:47:440 (2) - its not a problem but imao would be more comfortable if it was 1/4 slider but your choice - I think it's fine
00:58:690 - again no problem but spinner from here to 00:59:534 - would be cool - I think it's fine
01:04:878 - missed circle - Fixed
01:09:097 (1) - you use stacking for 1/2, 1/1 objects, this goes after 3/4 slider so it should overlap like in streams - Fixed
01:11:722 (7) - NC - Fixed
01:12:472 - whether you should place a circle or a low velocity slider - Fixed with a circle
01:29:347 (6) - NC - It's okay the way it is
01:30:847 (6) - ^ - ^
01:36:472 - you could map this space with some kind of low-spaced pattern - I think any anythink other than a break would be overmapped and hard to play
01:39:847 (7) - NC etc - It's a very weak sound so it's okay the way it is
01:41:534 (5,6) - these and 01:42:097 (1,2) - these are spaced almost equally. You should change spacing bc 1/4 jump and 1/2 are not the same - Changed slightly
02:11:628 - missed object - Fixed
02:16:972 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing somewhy is different from 02:14:159 (2,3,4,5,6) - here. Fix it - I don't really see the need, as long as they're both relatively small
02:27:847 (5) - NC - Done
02:32:909 (10) - NC instead of 02:33:097 (1) - - I think it's okay as is
02:34:222 (7) - NC - Done
02:36:097 - a spinner from here to 02:37:409 - would fit (or a break or some objects idk) - added break

Nice map owo GL

-CerealBox- wrote:

Hey from my queue.

00:34:972 (3) - This slider should be placed here 00:34:784 in the timline, and extend the repeat until the next white tick. - This is where it is because of the much louder 1/8 sounds. If it was moved bacl, it feels awkward and random because of how quite they are

00:50:722 - 00:52:222 - These inherit points have kiai time? If it was intentional, they have no reason to be there, it emphasizes the sound poorly. - They're fine the way they are, you can use kiai to emphasise certain sounds

01:07:222 (3,4,5,6) - This is a really awkward looking stream, consider making it straight or at least making it more clean. - made it straight

01:12:472 - This white tick has a beat but no circle. Or you could put down a spinner to put more emphasis on the other sound I don't know how to describe. - put a slow 1/1 slider on

01:17:722 (4) - Maybe put another anchor on this slider? Something like This - I don't really see why, it's symmetrical the way it is

01:34:222 (3,4,5,6,1) - Your streams look like they were made by hand and looks really messy. Consider using the Slider to Stream tool more often.
(Create a slider of your liking, preferably a 3 point slider,highlight the slider, press Ctrl+Shift+F to bring up the slider to stream options and create a perfectly shaped Stream.) - I initially done this because it overlapped with the tail of 01:33:472 (1) - but i've changed it to blanket 01:34:784 (8) -

01:46:972 (2) - Consider making this the same as these two 01:46:597 (1,3) , what I mean is have them all point the same way. Like, Copy and paste. - They're paired in twos and copy pasted. They're the same slider

01:48:097 (1,2,3,4) - This stream is missing an extra beat. It's hard to here but there is sound on the white tick. - It's the end of the noise from 01:48:378 (4) - and it's barely audible. I really don't think i need to map it but i'll check

From here 02:51:097 to here 03:03:097 - Could use more spacing between objects, this is the more intense section and the objects seems to be more closer to each other, this emphasizes sound poorly. Otherwise I think everything here has been mapped just nicely. - 02:52:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - buffed but otherrwise it's the way it is to deal with the slightly awkward rhythms

04:03:097 - This kiai time doesn't really fit here. - check milan's map, it's supposed to be there

05:02:909 (1) - Maybe move this slider to the downbeat and place a circle here. - done

Nice map, but you need to work more on spacing emphasis. A lot of the intense section has been mapped really close to each other a lot which emphasizes the sound poorly in my opinion so see what you can do to change that.

Good Luck