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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年10月7日 at 14:53:20

Artist: Sakurakou K-ON Bu
Title: Don't say "lazy" (TV size Ver.)
Source: けいおん!
Tags: HTT 平沢唯 秋山澪 田井中律 琴吹紬 豊崎愛生 日笠陽子佐藤聡美 寿美菜子 Hirasawa Yui Akiyama Mio Tainaka Ritsu Kotobuki Tsumugi Toyosaki Aki Hikasa Youko Satou satomi Kotobuki Minako K-ON! Yasaija 714
BPM: 181
Filesize: 3609kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Download: Sakurakou K-ON Bu - Don't say "lazy" (TV size Ver.)
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I didnt make this for dt, dthd. SORRY ww
Last edited by Asuka_- on , edited 31 times in total.
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yo


tags
    Yui Hirasawa Mio Akiyama Ritsu Tainaka Tsumugi Kotobuki Azusa Nakano Toyosaki Aki Hikasa Yoko Sato Satomi Minako Taketatsu Ayana
    (put also the japanese names, but im lazy to put it here lol)


Insane


Yasai
  • 01:20:740 (1) - is this mistake hitsound?
    cant find anything else lol GJ!


Normal
    good :)


Easy
    ok lol :)

i give star cause my mod sucks
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owo

General
Combo Color 2 and Combo Color 4 are too dark. Should be more bright like 1 and 3
Check for widescreen support and turn it off, you're not making a storyboard right


Insane
00:23:061 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Why is the hitsound different from 00:33:669 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
Sounds pretty similar to me
00:09:470 (6) - stack
00:22:895 (5) - ^
00:48:420 (2,5,6,7) - you seem to rotate this by 15 degree each then the 00:49:415 (7) - isn't properly placed and the angle is a bit off, I suggest x:124 y:332 for the (7) slider http://i.imgur.com/U7C097l.png
00:50:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhythm fits better because you are following the vocal here Image


Hard
00:40:133 (4) - should be 1/2 slider and add a circle after the slider. The vocal is very powerful but it ends on the sliderend
00:44:111 (4) - could space this between the two objects to make it look better

00:48:586 (2) - I suggest change the flow a bit or make it a bit bigger because it's a strong sound but the map doesn't change at all
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hi~

General
  • maybe add video from K-ON opening?
  • is it really correct artist name? first time I see this... I've always seen that artist is 日笠陽子


Easy


Normal


Hard
  • ok you've jumped to AR8 from 5 in Normal, for such song... maybe 7-7.5 at least?..
  • 00:42:122 (2,3) - different flow?
  • try to decrease spacing in kiai part... that is Hard! T_T


Insane

がんばろうww
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Hi, mod as requested

MA
Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768


Hard
00:02:343 (3) - circle here while 00:06:321 - empty here, decide to put circle here or not, its the same sound
00:11:790 (3,4,1) - its almost in a straight line, move up 00:12:453 (1) - a little to make better flow movement -- like you did 00:23:061 (1) - here
00:50:078 (2) - i dont see reason for uncommon slider shape, everywhere you did curve sliders 00:49:580 (1) - or red dot sliders 00:50:906 (1) - so be consistent plz
01:05:326 - again, no sound here for no reason, remove circles from this sound in previous patterns or add circle here
01:27:370 (1,2) - two the most important sounds, space them more


Insane
00:01:348 (5,6) - spacing is too small i think
00:06:486 (3,4) - here copy this 00:05:823 (1,2) - and rotate it as u want, i dont know why you did 00:06:486 (3,4) - manually
00:13:779 (1,2) - same as earlier - copy 00:05:823 (1,2) - and rotate it (by 160 degree here)
00:17:094 (3,4) - why spacing here is larger than 00:16:431 (1,2) - ?
00:18:254 (3,5) - overlap here should be equal to previous ones, do one main overlap (for example this 00:07:647 (3,5) -) and make EVERY overlap the same as the main one
00:27:205 (2,3) - for what reason overlap here isnt equal to previous ones (00:26:542 (2,3) - f.e.)
00:25:879 (2,2) - this is too close to themselves, looks ugly
00:30:851 (4,1) - reason to soooooo low spacing?
00:29:194 (3,5) - overlap :o it equally to 00:31:845 (3,5) -
00:34:829 (3,1,2) - angle is sooooo wide, really uncomfortable to play for no reason
00:39:304 (2,4) - overlap this equally to 00:38:807 (4,3) -
01:00:188 (1,2,3,4) - again, fix overlaps, for what reason 01:00:685 (4) - isnt in the middle of triangle?
Fix overlaps everywhere plz, i wont note more of them
01:04:829 (1,2) - 01:05:492 (3,4) - equal spacing
01:27:370 (1,2) - two the most important sounds, space them more to emphasise it
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I support this~

I'm always open to see new dont say lazy maps
Star~
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Minorsonek wrote:
Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768


The Ranking Criteria for background max size is actually 1920x1200 (not 1366x768 nor 1920x1080).
Confirmed with a BN before, the Criteria is not up to date
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Dubturt wrote:


tags
    Yui Hirasawa Mio Akiyama Ritsu Tainaka Tsumugi Kotobuki Azusa Nakano Toyosaki Aki Hikasa Yoko Sato Satomi Minako Taketatsu Ayana
    (put also the japanese names, but im lazy to put it here lol) i'll add lol


Insane
  • 00:03:503 (2) - ctr+g ? cause other slider pattern like this flow directly to the next slider keep for now~
  • 00:17:426 (4) - change angle, -21 degress change then move to x:329 y:124 or something little changed
  • 00:22:232 (4,5) - stack 5 to 4? nice
  • 00:25:050 (1,2) - distance 1 from 2 a bit make it like 00:35:658 (1,2) ok~
  • 00:30:851 (4,1) - spacing emphasis, might be confusin with that gap i want to keep it lol and here is calm part. it's fine to me
  • 01:05:161 (2) - ctr+g again? cause this time in the kiai you follow opposite slider movement keep for now~




timemon wrote:

General
Combo Color 2 and Combo Color 4 are too dark. Should be more bright like 1 and 3 i think it's fine...?
Check for widescreen support and turn it off, you're not making a storyboard right oh nice!


Insane
00:23:061 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Why is the hitsound different from 00:33:669 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
Sounds pretty similar to me nice
00:09:470 (6) - stack oh xd
00:22:895 (5) - ^ yea xd
00:48:420 (2,5,6,7) - you seem to rotate this by 15 degree each then the 00:49:415 (7) - isn't properly placed and the angle is a bit off, I suggest x:124 y:332 for the (7) slider http://i.imgur.com/U7C097l.png ok
00:50:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhythm fits better because you are following the vocal here Image
00:51:403 (3,4) - here dont have vocals i think. and 00:51:569 - is bigger drum than 00:51:403 - , so i want 00:51:569 - is clickable~



Morroni wrote:

General
  • maybe add video from K-ON opening? i dont have video lol
  • is it really correct artist name? first time I see this... I've always seen that artist is 日笠陽子 it's fine plobably


Easy


Normal


Insane




Minorsonek wrote:

MA
Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768 i'll change


Insane
00:01:348 (5,6) - spacing is too small i think
00:06:486 (3,4) - here copy this 00:05:823 (1,2) - and rotate it as u want, i dont know why you did 00:06:486 (3,4) - manually keep for now
00:13:779 (1,2) - same as earlier - copy 00:05:823 (1,2) - and rotate it (by 160 degree here) keep for now
00:17:094 (3,4) - why spacing here is larger than 00:16:431 (1,2) - ? fixed
00:18:254 (3,5) - overlap here should be equal to previous ones, do one main overlap (for example this 00:07:647 (3,5) -) and make EVERY overlap the same as the main one hm... no need imo but little changed
00:27:205 (2,3) - for what reason overlap here isnt equal to previous ones (00:26:542 (2,3) - f.e.) hm... no need imo but little changed
00:25:879 (2,2) - this is too close to themselves, looks ugly it's fine to me. i'll change it if point out about it
00:30:851 (4,1) - reason to soooooo low spacing? here is calm part
00:29:194 (3,5) - overlap :o it equally to 00:31:845 (3,5) - ok
00:34:829 (3,1,2) - angle is sooooo wide, really uncomfortable to play for no reason spacing little changed
00:39:304 (2,4) - overlap this equally to 00:38:807 (4,3) - ok
01:00:188 (1,2,3,4) - again, fix overlaps, for what reason 01:00:685 (4) - isnt in the middle of triangle? it emphasize next (1) (kiai). i didnt think bad when i testplayed
Fix overlaps everywhere plz, i wont note more of them
01:04:829 (1,2) - 01:05:492 (3,4) - equal spacing ok
01:27:370 (1,2) - two the most important sounds, space them more to emphasise it it's good for player to me. keep for now


Thanks!!!

@Yasaija 714
Hardのcoutdownとwide screenのチェックこっちで外したー

@My Angel Kanan
Thanks star!!! i'll ask for mod lol
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Dubturt wrote:
yo


Yasai
  • 01:20:740 (1) - is this mistake hitsound? It is not a mistake but it will be changed if further pointed out
    cant find anything else lol GJ!

i give star cause my mod sucks


timemon wrote:
owo

General
Combo Color 2 and Combo Color 4 are too dark. Should be more bright like 1 and 3
Check for widescreen support and turn it off, you're not making a storyboard right


Hard
00:40:133 (4) - should be 1/2 slider and add a circle after the slider. The vocal is very powerful but it ends on the sliderend It is according to the lyrics
00:44:111 (4) - could space this between the two objects to make it look better I think there is no problem

00:48:586 (2) - I suggest change the flow a bit or make it a bit bigger because it's a strong sound but the map doesn't change at all I changed it a bit.


Morroni wrote:
hi~


Hard
  • ok you've jumped to AR8 from 5 in Normal, for such song... maybe 7-7.5 at least?..Because Insane is ar9, hard is better for ar8
  • 00:42:122 (2,3) - different flow? No problem
  • try to decrease spacing in kiai part... that is Hard! T_T I widened the spacing to make a big distinction in the kiai part
    In order to avoid Hard getting below 3.50 unless I do



がんばろうww


Minorsonek wrote:
Hi, mod as requested

Hard
00:02:343 (3) - circle here while 00:06:321 - empty here, decide to put circle here or not, its the same sound Spaced to match the lyrics
00:11:790 (3,4,1) - its almost in a straight line, move up 00:12:453 (1) - a little to make better flow movement -- like you did 00:23:061 (1) - here I do not see this as a bad flow
00:50:078 (2) - i dont see reason for uncommon slider shape, everywhere you did curve sliders 00:49:580 (1) - or red dot sliders 00:50:906 (1) - so be consistent plz That is what I decide.The shape of this slider is my mapping style
01:05:326 - again, no sound here for no reason, remove circles from this sound in previous patterns or add circle here ^
01:27:370 (1,2) - two the most important sounds, space them more I will extend the distance if pointed out again


Thank you guys!

code
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60768
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23061,28395,38973,54884
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Don't Say "Lazy"
TitleUnicode:Don't Say "Lazy"
Artist:Sakurakou K-ON Bu
ArtistUnicode:桜高軽音部
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Yasai's Hard
Source:けいおん!
Tags:HTT
BeatmapID:1397849
BeatmapSetID:659531

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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00:09:801 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like that jump style in this moment. Dont like bcs not comfortable, too spaced patterns for map begin and Feels superfluous in comparison with other jumps. Pls make his style like others jumps : 00:20:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:08:807 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:19:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - It gonna be perfect diff with harmony jump styles.

00:05:492 (5,1) - make them parallel?

00:30:851 (4,1) - i think this need more spacing. No more patterns like this in diff. What mean this pattern is excess in concept.


Yasaija 714 Hard

Inconsistent spacings : 00:04:497 (1,2) - 00:04:497 (1) - DS "next"= x1.50. 00:12:453 (1,2) - 00:12:453 (1) - DS "next"= x1.30. 00:15:105 (1,2) - 00:15:105 (1) - DS "next"= x1.75 Try put 00:04:497 (1) - in x208 y64 . 00:15:105 (1) - x448 y352 . 00:17:757 (1) - x352 y208. In kiai you have this problem too.

00:26:376 (3,5) - these sliders positions its not ok . 00:25:713 (1,3) - this is ok. Bcs end of first slider Directed right to corner of second slider. 00:26:376 (3,5) - here you ignore that concept. (sorry for bad explanation i hope you understand what i mean)

I dont sure about this diff. Bcs in concept it feels more like "Light Insane". For example 01:00:851 (1) - in timing you putted 1.10 , 00:38:973 (1) - 0.90 and 00:28:365 (1) - 0.80 . I dont sure can Hard diff manipulate with sliders speed... + inconsistent spacings for "Hard" diff, if that was "Light Insane" all gonna be okay.


Low Diffs is ok


Tbh i think you need Final Diff (5-6*) for this mapset. Bcs it feels unfinished. Try make 5.5*+ I will be glad to mod this diff.
That all. Good Luck! :)
P.S: Pls BG with more pathos plspls
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Yasaija 714 Hard

Inconsistent spacings : 00:04:497 (1,2) - 00:04:497 (1) - DS "next"= x1.50. 00:12:453 (1,2) - 00:12:453 (1) - DS "next"= x1.30. 00:15:105 (1,2) - 00:15:105 (1) - DS "next"= x1.75 Try put 00:04:497 (1) - in x208 y64 . 00:15:105 (1) - x448 y352 . 00:17:757 (1) - x352 y208. In kiai you have this problem too. fixed

00:26:376 (3,5) - these sliders positions its not ok . 00:25:713 (1,3) - this is ok. Bcs end of first slider Directed right to corner of second slider. 00:26:376 (3,5) - here you ignore that concept. (sorry for bad explanation i hope you understand what i mean) maybe fixed

I dont sure about this diff. Bcs in concept it feels more like "Light Insane". For example 01:00:851 (1) - in timing you putted 1.10 , 00:38:973 (1) - 0.90 and 00:28:365 (1) - 0.80 . I dont sure can Hard diff manipulate with sliders speed... + inconsistent spacings for "Hard" diff, if that was "Light Insane" all gonna be okay. That's not right Why do you think Hard should not change the speed of the slider? I think that it is Easy and Normal that you should not change the speed of the slider.
As BPM I think this is not Light Insane but Hard


Low Diffs is ok


Tbh i think you need Final Diff (5-6*) for this mapset. Bcs it feels unfinished. Try make 5.5*+ I will be glad to mod this diff.
That all. Good Luck! :)
P.S: Pls BG with more pathos plspls
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Thank you~

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00:09:801 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like that jump style in this moment. Dont like bcs not comfortable, too spaced patterns for map begin and Feels superfluous in comparison with other jumps. Pls make his style like others jumps : 00:20:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:08:807 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:19:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - It gonna be perfect diff with harmony jump styles.
ok, i nerfed the jumps' distance (dont change style)

00:05:492 (5,1) - make them parallel? keep for now

00:30:851 (4,1) - i think this need more spacing. No more patterns like this in diff. What mean this pattern is excess in concept. i wanna keep it lol



Thanks!!

edit: updated also gd
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- 00:02:177 (2,3) - と 00:02:508 (4) - 音取りの位置かえません?Hardで00:02:343 - をclickableにするより 00:02:674 - にはkick drumが微かに聞こえるのでそうしてもいいかもしれないです。00:05:160 (3,4,5) - 同上 00:13:116 (3,4,5) - 00:15:768 (3,4,5) - ^
- 00:21:735 - hitsoundでN:clapを入れてるのは少しnoisyに感じます。あすかさんのと揃えてもいいかもしれないです。01:20:740 - ^
- 01:00:188 (1,2) - コンセプト的にはいいですが、ハードだと少しトリッキーかもしれないです。というのも00:59:525 (3,4) - とのスライダーと長さがほとんど同じで配置も直線的で似通ってるのでキックスライダーのように誤認するかもしれません。サークル4つに変えるか、配置やスライダーの形でアクセントをつけて差別化したりしてみてはいかがでしょう?
- 01:15:270 (5,3) - のoverlapがあまり視覚的によく見えませんでした。01:15:768 (2) - を1のスライダー側でなく逆側にflowを作れば解消されるかもしれません。

Insane.
- 00:54:718 (6) - これ消しませんか?サビ前のパートで比較的落ち着いてますし、特にclickableにすべき音がないように思いました。
- 01:21:486 - これ拾ってないのは意図的ですか?サビのクライマックス表現するならこことってもいいかもしれない…?

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