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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 3 septembre 2017 at 23:03:30

Artist: AKINO from bless4
Title: MIIRO
Source: 艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags: kancolle kantai collection op opening tv size
BPM: 195
Filesize: 3746kb
Play Time: 01:32
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Download: AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO
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(Full Version) Juu's Inner Oni here play it

Originally from Xiaolin's set, mapped in February 2015.
Last edited by Unmei Muma on , edited 7 times in total.
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mod because mod

Oni

00:08:774 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - I think you can just fill this in, since 00:09:851 (21,22,23,24) - this one doesn't have a hole the ones before it feel undermapped
and I don't think anyone will say it is too hard for an intro compared to rest of map with just 1/2

00:25:389 (119) - considering section is mapped to vocals and not guitar, this is 1/2 beat late

00:58:928 (297,298) - I think you can ctrl-g these

01:31:543 (527,528) - maybe emphasize string run slightly by making this kdd- actually maybe kkd considering that is the pattern usually used in this map

Muzukashii

00:22:928 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - maybe try to replace some d with k in here, it feels really monotonous as it is right now, while there is a bit of variation in the song, and its not like it would be too much of a concern for difficulty
overall seems pretty solid, only ddd/kkk patterns for 1/4 for relatively simple to play diff

Futsuu

00:07:543 (5) - maybe k
Seems ok... I really can't mod lower diffs well, I can't tell how much would be too much for the difficulty to be fine :?

Kantan

I... I don't.. I don't know......
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mod because mod

Oni


01:31:543 (527,528) - maybe emphasize string run slightly by making this kdd- actually maybe kkd considering that is the pattern usually used in this map kats are meant to be the snare idk thing you hear, dons are just filler

Muzukashii

00:22:928 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - maybe try to replace some d with k in here, it feels really monotonous as it is right now, while there is a bit of variation in the song, and its not like it would be too much of a concern for difficulty changed non-triplets to k
overall seems pretty solid, only ddd/kkk patterns for 1/4 for relatively simple to play diff

Futsuu

00:07:543 (5) - maybe k done on 00:07:235 (4) - with higher vocal pitch support
Seems ok... I really can't mod lower diffs well, I can't tell how much would be too much for the difficulty to be fine :? its fine dw i won't kill you

Kantan

I... I don't.. I don't know......


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Now i know, the meme of supercat is real.

Kantan and Futsuu are fine to me.


Muzukashii
  • 01:23:235 - if i were you, i wouldn't make here a gap cause of loudness' growing up. Something like kat will follow this growing.


Oni
  • 00:17:389 - so loud sound to not be mentioned, imo. Kat maybe? It won't break overall density of this part.
  • 00:19:235 (92,93,94) - what about kdk? It will better emphasize your main 00:19:235 (92,94) - instrument here.
  • 00:22:312 (110,112,116) - a bit confusing to hear them different. You make this part vocal related, but instrumental is also loud here to not be considered. If you map here vocal, then 00:22:774 (112) - kat here doesn't suit the part. He emphasize nothing, only instrumental.
  • 00:25:235 (122,123,124) - d kk will be better, imo, due to tonality of vocal here.
  • 00:33:389 - here you can put don for filling the echo of vocal before.
  • 00:37:697 (196) - kat for better reading and emphasizing of vocal? But now i see, that all that vocal spots in this part are dons, so...Unnecessary to fix.
  • 00:41:697 - don't think, that you should lose that sound. Don here will be great. Pluse next, you have it 00:46:312 - in this part.
  • 01:07:774 - to emphasize stream ending and beginning of new part, you can make here a gap.
  • 01:17:620 - same as above.
  • 01:30:774 - lost sound or just did it specially here? Better without gap to not break that growing of loudness comparing to density.


Lol. It wasn't mod, i still owe you one. I tried to not write subjective things, so those are only i found. The rest is fine to me.
Good luck.
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Remus wrote:
Now i know, the meme of supercat is real.

Kantan and Futsuu are fine to me.


Muzukashii
  • 01:23:235 - if i were you, i wouldn't make here a gap cause of loudness' growing up. Something like kat will follow this growing. Partially disagree, the buildup is too faint to be really noticeable. If more people complain about it, I will surely add a kat.


Oni
  • 00:17:389 - so loud sound to not be mentioned, imo. Kat maybe? It won't break overall density of this part. The lack of note is to separate these patterns, as I didn't want to have something too long.
  • 00:19:235 (92,93,94) - what about kdk? It will better emphasize your main 00:19:235 (92,94) - instrument here. Yeah, either way it's a filler note and kats only landed on snaaaaares.
  • 00:22:312 (110,112,116) - a bit confusing to hear them different. You make this part vocal related, but instrumental is also loud here to not be considered. If you map here vocal, then 00:22:774 (112) - kat here doesn't suit the part. He emphasize nothing, only instrumental. I've changed the dkd to a single d where the k used to be (1/1 doesn't flow well)
  • 00:25:235 (122,123,124) - d kk will be better, imo, due to tonality of vocal here. I think they're already d kk
  • 00:33:389 - here you can put don for filling the echo of vocal before. There's no real echo here
  • 00:37:697 (196) - kat for better reading and emphasizing of vocal? But now i see, that all that vocal spots in this part are dons, so...Unnecessary to fix. Yeah, most vocal parts are confined to don (but honestly it's just a coincidence), but dkkdd will make the pattern weirder - even if it's accurate to vocal parts, I don't want potentially awkward patterns.
  • 00:41:697 - don't think, that you should lose that sound. Don here will be great. Pluse next, you have it 00:46:312 - in this part. The lack of note is voluntary, to clash the intensities between both parts more than putting 1/2 doubles right away. When they appear later, they are building up to the tatoe.
  • 01:07:774 - to emphasize stream ending and beginning of new part, you can make here a gap. yeah good catch, the following note has been changed to k (subject to change)
  • 01:17:620 - same as above. ^ same
  • 01:30:774 - lost sound or just did it specially here? Better without gap to not break that growing of loudness comparing to density. yeah good idea, i dont remember why i missed it.


Lol. It wasn't mod, i still owe you one. I tried to not write subjective things, so those are only i found. The rest is fine to me.
Good luck.


:eyes: thank :eyes: you :eyes: for :fire_engine: modding :eyes:
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this quick and very subjective mod is read best with HRDT
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Add tatoe to tags for the memes? xd also add op as the acronym of opening

You sure the OD spread is appropiate for a simple tv size mapset?

HP 7 on all diffs nice



Kantan

maybe HP 8 due to the length?

00:40:774 (50) - consider adding a finish for cymbals / new part of the song? that applies to the other diffs too



Futsuu

01:09:697 (158) - kat to express the higher vocal pitch and to keep the kd doublets at the end of the patterns consistent?



Muzukashii

if you apply HP8 to kantan, consider changing HP to 6 here to even up the HP spread

00:19:312 (59) - consider deleting this note? there's no real sound to emphasize and idk I feel like it stands out too much as it is

00:29:697 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - kkkddd to follow the guitar pitch? current pattern sounds weird imo

00:54:158 (173) - kat? vocal pitch decreases on 00:54:312 (174) - and it's pretty similar to the two notes after that, so it'd give more contrast

01:20:005 (306) - is it intentional that this is the only diff with a finish here?



Oni

00:15:389 (60) - kat to show the violin is at its peak here?

00:29:697 (134,135,136,137,138,139) - same as muzu

01:01:158 (306) - dkd doesn't sound fitting to me at this spot. as a suggestion, I'd make this triplet ddd and 01:01:697 (310,311,312) - kkd. I found that to be following the melody nicely, but maybe you find something better?

01:20:005 (446) - seeing you used more finishers in this diff compared to the others, consider adding a finish here too?

01:27:389 (494) - shouldn't this be a finish like 00:13:543 (47) - ?


I suck at modding /runs


good luck :eyes:
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Greenshell wrote:
wow once in a lifetime i ss'd something

this quick and very subjective mod is read best with HRDT
General:

Add tatoe to tags for the memes? absolutely FIRED xd also add op as the acronym of opening yes

You sure the OD spread is appropiate for a simple tv size mapset? -.5 to each

HP 7 on all diffs nice been a staple for some maps, like lawn wake iv for instance, which has HP6 on all 7 diffs



Kantan

maybe HP 8 due to the length? 139 notes, 7.5 should be max - holding this

00:40:774 (50) - consider adding a finish for cymbals / new part of the song? that applies to the other diffs too soft crash, having a very strong note kinda contradicts it



Futsuu

01:09:697 (158) - kat to express the higher vocal pitch and to keep the kd doublets at the end of the patterns consistent? i'm actually doubtful but yeah, simplifies a bit imo



Muzukashii

if you apply HP8 to kantan, consider changing HP to 6 here to even up the HP spread

00:19:312 (59) - consider deleting this note? there's no real sound to emphasize and idk I feel like it stands out too much as it is yea

00:29:697 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - kkkddd to follow the guitar pitch? current pattern sounds weird imo i'm putting dddddd, i don't really remember the pitch changing all that much

00:54:158 (173) - kat? vocal pitch decreases on 00:54:312 (174) - and it's pretty similar to the two notes after that, so it'd give more contrast done it on 00:54:312 (173) - to follow 00:53:082 (167,168,169,170) -

01:20:005 (306) - is it intentional that this is the only diff with a finish here? no, that's what you call a fucking dumb mapper to let that slide



Oni

00:15:389 (60) - kat to show the violin is at its peak here? didn't follow the violin at all

00:29:697 (134,135,136,137,138,139) - same as muzu well same then

01:01:158 (306) - dkd doesn't sound fitting to me at this spot. as a suggestion, I'd make this triplet ddd and 01:01:697 (310,311,312) - kkd. I found that to be following the melody nicely, but maybe you find something better? i'm just gonna put ddd on both, i don't like the second kkd idea (but in retrospect dkd wasn't that good)

01:20:005 (446) - seeing you used more finishers in this diff compared to the others, consider adding a finish here too? but the muzukashii one was a fuckup....................... i cri

01:27:389 (494) - shouldn't this be a finish like 00:13:543 (47) - ? yea


I suck at modding /runs no you dont


good luck :eyes:
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01:06:005 - https://i.imgur.com/keDjJV4.png au lieu de kdd kdd ?

muzu
oni 00:34:389 (167) - un peu chelou ca fit pas des masses comparé a ce que t'as fait avant(édité)
go delete cette note
00:58:005 - pas de petit stream ou au moins un quintuplet par la ? :weary:
00:58:620 - genre un stream la
01:05:543 (344,345,346,347,348) - go k ddk d au lieu de d kkd d
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00:08:774 - spinnar pls for low doofffs
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waito
i havent opened osu
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done
as in open the game
00:08:774 - i'd like to keep this as a noteless section, spinner is overwhelming; absence of notes brings more emphasis on the 00:11:082 -
im gonna open photoshop while you're checking other notes
im readying a meme
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alt tobbbbbbbb intensifes
01:30:774 - dem... 01:30:620 - here and 01:31:235 - red tick left plezz footshoe
and kantan same like footshoe, 01:30:312 - but delt here
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i didn't delete 01:30:312 but moved it to 01:31:543 -
because else it would be awkward
but the rest is correct
Surono - Today at 3:58 AM
kwekkk yus awkawkwarkkd
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for futsuu it's applied as is
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anything else?
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noh
just it
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i'll update then

me when qualif
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DEM BG WKKWKQWKQW
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