00:00:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is fine, could change the 2nd set of 4 to slightly curved ones?
00:02:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not a fan of this, its either the extension to blue which makes it weird or the awkward shapes, I see what you're going for but I'd try something different here, either space them out or reduce the length of sliders
00:03:660 (7) - dunno why this is straight looks weird amongst the others
00:05:003 (1,2,3,4) - this looks kinda ugly inbetween 2 curved patterns, i'd make these curved too maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9278832
00:07:130 (1) - personally not a fan of this sudden spinner but if u are to keep it, move it to the right half a tick so its starts on red
00:08:473 (4) - this isnt a very appealing slider, look at sliders in ranked maps to see which ones look nice and what ones don't
00:08:809 (1,2,3) - either have these parallel to each other or rotate them all by 120 degrees so theres some thought behind your placement rather than just random
00:09:481 (1,2) - could make these sliders aswell, the lack of density is a bit jarring
00:10:264 (6) - same again, this one wasn't too bad but could make it symmetrical like this https://i.gyazo.com/eac24702e1240ec6cdf ... 55b140.png
00:10:600 (1,2,3) - same as before
00:11:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same advice/suggestion
00:12:391 (1,2,3) - keep all sliders the same in patterns like this, copy and paste
00:13:846 (4) - xd
00:16:645 (1) - white and red stick before this has a sound, map it
00:18:436 (4) - extend so theres no gap?
00:20:451 (1,2,3) - use filler rhythm or something, not dense enough
00:22:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is almost good, for each slider add an inheriting and increase the slider velocity a bit each time
00:24:929 (1,2,3) - same as before, each time this pattern comes up use same advice, maybe keep the pattern the same every time but with different slider shapes? whatever works
00:26:384 (6,1) - this gap looks awk
00:29:294 (1) - ...what - map to the instrumental instead
00:34:555 (1,2,1,2,1) - good increase slider velocity on each of these sliders too slightly? not sure if needed could be cool tho
00:33:660 (1,2,3,4) - make sure same shape
00:35:899 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - try and use filler rhtyhm throughout the map the pauses are really weird imo, just extend sliders or change notes to sliders if needed
00:39:033 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - this is cool, again just fill the rhyhtm
00:41:943 (1,2) - this seems unneeded?
00:45:414 (1) - i'd change this to 1/2 sliders with anti-flow increasingly spaced across the field cos it gets more intense here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9278946 something like this? not quite as intense as i thought but something like that might be neat
00:49:667 (1) - use better shape
also for the kiai increase the slider velocity to 1.25x or something
00:51:346 (3) - too calm for intense part, keep max slider length from white-white if u can help it (goes against what i said earlier a little but might be able to find a workaround)
00:54:257 (5) - ^
for those parts I'd try and map to something different, instead of vocals, maybe the drums, also look at other versions of the song and see what they did in these parts for inspiration
01:11:048 (2,3,4,5) - change to sliders, rhtyhm isn't dense enough
01:13:511 (7) - avoid repeats more than once if u have to actually aim the slider
01:13:511 (7,1) - map inbetween here
01:15:749 (1) - same again, map to drums or something, spinner is a bit too sudden and not intense enough for 260bpm kiai
01:19:891 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - fix this curve
01:22:914 (1) - same
01:25:936 (1) - cmon bro