1. Hard (3.05 stars, 367 notes)

JeirYagtama wrote:

New mapper huh
hmm.. guess Ill accept yer request guess ill do a placeholder for an Insane GD
also please watch psihifat's vids for more guidance in mapping xd

JeirYagtama wrote:

from #modreq
Welp I know that this is a new mappper's map but yeah ill mod like always do
Also check Aimod for more mistakes which is crtl shift a in the editor

Hard

00:07:788 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - welp spacing is inconsistent and i suggest using sliders and circles in this part
00:12:058 - why is there a break here?
00:14:827 (1) - weird slider
00:14:827 (1,1,2) - missing alot of notes imo
00:22:558 (2,4,5) - do not put circles in blue ticks they dont sound good if they do
00:24:865 (1,3,2) - ^
00:29:596 (1) - uhh what is this?
00:34:222 - ok again why is there a break here?
00:36:981 (1,2,3,4) - hmm atleast make a pattern that is neat looking or use distance snap
00:40:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use distance snap please thanks
00:50:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - missing notes again imo
00:53:942 (2,5) - circles in blue ticks again and its bad to put them in blue ticks because its bad polarity

I can point out more mistakes but its too many and I know this is your first map which is reasonable why its like this but I recommend you watching mapping tutorials (like pishifat) or look at other people's ranked maps for reference
hope you improve more on mapping bud

AthenaPvP wrote:

JeirYagtama wrote:

from #modreq
Welp I know that this is a new mappper's map but yeah ill mod like always do
Also check Aimod for more mistakes which is crtl shift a in the editor

Hard

00:07:788 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - welp spacing is inconsistent and i suggest using sliders and circles in this part
00:12:058 - why is there a break here?
00:14:827 (1) - weird slider
00:14:827 (1,1,2) - missing alot of notes imo
00:22:558 (2,4,5) - do not put circles in blue ticks they dont sound good if they do
00:24:865 (1,3,2) - ^
00:29:596 (1) - uhh what is this?
00:34:222 - ok again why is there a break here?
00:36:981 (1,2,3,4) - hmm atleast make a pattern that is neat looking or use distance snap
00:40:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use distance snap please thanks
00:50:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - missing notes again imo
00:53:942 (2,5) - circles in blue ticks again and its bad to put them in blue ticks because its bad polarity

I can point out more mistakes but its too many and I know this is your first map which is reasonable why its like this but I recommend you watching mapping tutorials (like pishifat) or look at other people's ranked maps for reference
hope you improve more on mapping bud

Thanks for the feedback, I've been watching over pishifat's videos since you recommended me earlier today.
Now that I look over 00:07:788 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I did notice that the timing is off as well. It's a bit more difficult than other songs I could have chosen because it has a heavy swing to it, which is why a lot of it is put into the blue ticks. I'll try swapping them out for sliders.

As for the breaks, I simply just don't know what to put in. After viewing a little bit of pishifat's vids I'll see what I can do, probably look over it tomorrow since it's about 2AM my time.

Distance Snap: I was recommended to actually disable it; if you recommend I change it back on, I'll redo it then.

Could you define polarity for me? If this song is heavily swinging like it is, wouldn't it be better to put it in the blue ticks? Or should I put it up to 1/16ths and try to fine-tune it. I didn't notice it until you pointed it out but at the very beginning, the notes I put in is rushed and not properly timed.

Thanks again for you freedback!

Edit 1: It just occurred to me the swing is on the 'Lee' or the 3 of a 1/3 beat.. Whoops!