1. Hold Your Breath (5,48 stars, 501 notes)

• mathew1123
  Endie-
  LimePixel
  Fursum012

mathew1123 wrote:

[Hold Your Breath]
01:06:132 - add a circle ? no hit object here seems weird i put a slider here, the sound after (1) is not very strong tho.
01:28:462 (6) - too up maybe? 0_o great catch, never really saw that one.
sorry for only a short mod.This map is already good to me :3

Endie- wrote:

Hello! Noob modder here. I took a quick look at the map.

Hold Your Breath
A lot of circles arn't snapped to the grid. Example: 00:17:553 (5) |
00:18:235 (2) - You could make this slider overlap (5) like this
00:24:712 (1) - Having a new slider start here feels weird and breaks the flow of the map...
00:26:076 (1) - This slider should start at the red tick since the sound is louder there.
00:37:326 (3) - The reverse slider should be at the red tick like so | changed the whole pattern there.
00:50:280 (6,1) - Flow
00:57:951 (4) - Should start on the white tick since the guitar sound is louder.
01:04:769 (4,1,2,3) - (4) leading into the jumps breaks the flow.
01:05:962 (1,2) - Flow | what's exactly the problem here? it plays fine for me...
01:14:144 (2) - Fix the blanket
01:20:792 - Slider should start here on the red tick. This emphasizes the guitar sound | it's hard to tell by playing, plus i like how it looks.
01:24:712 (1,2) - You're going from counter clockwise flow to clockwise (01:25:394 (3,4,5,6) - ) too fast.
01:26:757 (5,6) - Jump here should be larger
01:28:121 (4) - Slider on strong sound to emphasize the guitar
01:31:189 (7) - ^ (In this instance it should be on the red tick)
01:39:030 (4) - ^
01:41:757 (4) - ^
01:44:485 (4) - ^ | too much sliders imo. i just left it as it was.
02:02:042 (3,4) - Flow

Generally speaking overlapping makes the map more visually pleasing. There are a lot of missed opportunities throughout the map imo. Like 00:31:019 (3,1) - and 00:30:507 (2,2) just to name a few.
Also, fix the grid snapping.

Nice song! Good luck with the map o/

LimePixel wrote:

Hi!
NM request from queue. Hope it helps

00:21:303 (1,2,3,4) - Make these evenly spaced out. #4 for example is a lot further away from #3 than #2 is from #1 | the point of those jump is gradually getting bigger, thus indroducing into the map

01:55:905 (8) - Seems a bit off. I'd recommend leaving a gap at the start of the slider and instead, putting a hitcircle with a new combo on the following white tick. | done

02:05:280 (7) - Slider is too long. Make it last 1/2 of a beat and add a hitcircle on the white tick. Similar to this 01:54:371 (7) | it's same as 1:59:826 (6). intended to keep it in.

02:07:667 (4) - Spacing difference is too high. Move to the left | done

02:10:394 (1) - NC | done

Really fun map!
Feel free to ignore this mod if it seems unhelpful. Good luck!

Fursum012 wrote:

Hello from my queue.

Here's my terrible terrible first attempt.

[Hold Your Breath]

First of all, jumps look like just pp jumps and hold no meaning. | the song sounds pretty much the same trough out all, they do hold a meaning.

Theres little to no blanket. | tbd

01:03:576 (5,6,7) - This shouldn't be different from any other jump.

01:04:428 (2,3,4) - ^ | both done.

00:43:717 (7) - Overmapped.