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HoneyWorks feat.sana - Kawaiku Naritai [OsuMania]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 2 April 2017 at 7:22:54 PM

Artist: HoneyWorks feat.sana
Title: Kawaiku Naritai
BPM: 110
Filesize: 4236kb
Play Time: 04:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kawaii - 4Key (4.09 stars, 2605 notes)
Download: HoneyWorks feat.sana - Kawaiku Naritai
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yes
Zaros
hi
u made me ruin your map
im here
hello

stuff we spoke about:
02:14:509 (134509|2) -
02:16:691 (136691|0) -
02:16:964 (136964|0) - your rhythm is wrong, please fix it like we spoke :)
02:19:418 (139418|2) -
02:19:691 (139691|2) - into hold
02:24:600 (144600|2) - LN pls
02:33:259 - you know what you did
03:10:600 (190600|2) - theres no sound here. what are u doing
03:38:782 (218782|1) - maybe change this? LN can fit
xo
Topic Starter
Div

Zaros wrote:

hi
u made me ruin your map
im here
hello

stuff we spoke about:
02:14:509 (134509|2) - yes
02:16:691 (136691|0) - yes
02:16:964 (136964|0) - your rhythm is wrong, please fix it like we spoke :) i have autism
02:19:418 (139418|2) - yes
02:19:691 (139691|2) - into hold sure
02:24:600 (144600|2) - LN pls sure
02:33:259 - you know what you did please don't bully me
03:10:600 (190600|2) - theres no sound here. what are u doing refer to third change
03:38:782 (218782|1) - maybe change this? LN can fit just gave the random note the delet
xo ox
Litharrale
NM from my queue
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audio is 128kbps. This is fine but it's the lowest possible bitrate until it becomes so low that it's unrankable. I'd suggest trying to find a better version
BG is 1280x720. This is also fine and a good ratio but you can go up to 1080p if you wish

Hitsound your map

add some tags

00:00:873 (873|3,1055|1) - These are mistimed
00:14:055 (14055|0) - Not mapped to anything
00:18:782 (18782|3) - ^
00:18:600 (18600|1,18600|0) - if this is a double then 00:18:873 (18873|1,18873|0) - shouldn't also be a double
00:19:327 (19327|0) - Another ghost note. I'll stop mentioning these here
00:20:418 (20418|0) - shouldn't there be an LN here to fit with the music and your mapping theme?
00:24:055 (24055|1,24055|2) - This is a double but it's a far weaker sound than the note right before it which is a single
that's enough for this section
00:38:236 (38236|1,38236|2,38236|0) - This shouldn't be a triple because the sound is identical to the doubles unless you're mapping to the guitar as well. If that's the case, you missed a tonne of guitar sounds. I get the whole "mapping the start of the measure" thing but it's a bad habit if there's no extra sound.
00:48:236 (48236|0) - starts on the blue tick
00:54:600 (54600|3) - strong sound here I'd suggest mapping
00:55:236 (55236|0) - there's no sound here
00:55:509 (55509|1) - ^
00:57:873 (57873|1,58146|1,58418|1,58691|1,58964|1,59236|1) - There's nothing in the music that justifies this anchor

Stopping here for now. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Div

Litharrale wrote:

NM from my queue
1|2|3|4

audio is 128kbps. This is fine but it's the lowest possible bitrate until it becomes so low that it's unrankable. I'd suggest trying to find a better version
BG is 1280x720. This is also fine and a good ratio but you can go up to 1080p if you wish

Hitsound your map when i get a set

add some tags To the best of my knowledge I noted in the req I'd do tags when i got a set. Please read notes from now on

00:00:873 (873|3,1055|1) - These are mistimed no they're fine
00:14:055 (14055|0) - Not mapped to anything vocal
00:18:782 (18782|3) - ^ this is mapped to a clear swing sound
00:18:600 (18600|1,18600|0) - if this is a double then 00:18:873 (18873|1,18873|0) - shouldn't also be a double it's the same sound?
00:19:327 (19327|0) - Another ghost note. I'll stop mentioning these here upstrum
00:20:418 (20418|0) - shouldn't there be an LN here to fit with the music and your mapping theme? fixed
00:24:055 (24055|1,24055|2) - This is a double but it's a far weaker sound than the note right before it which is a single fixed
that's enough for this section
00:38:236 (38236|1,38236|2,38236|0) - This shouldn't be a triple because the sound is identical to the doubles unless you're mapping to the guitar as well. If that's the case, you missed a tonne of guitar sounds. I get the whole "mapping the start of the measure" thing but it's a bad habit if there's no extra sound. this is fine imo
00:48:236 (48236|0) - starts on the blue tick nope this is still 1/12
00:54:600 (54600|3) - strong sound here I'd suggest mapping I'd rather not map the guitar here to emphasize build for kiai, although i did notice some sounds i missed upon checking this which you don't point out so fixed them
00:55:236 (55236|0) - there's no sound here
00:55:509 (55509|1) - ^ Fixed both
00:57:873 (57873|1,58146|1,58418|1,58691|1,58964|1,59236|1) - There's nothing in the music that justifies this anchor this is the same pattern as before just shifted down a tone? fits fine

Stopping here for now. Good luck!
Thanks for your mod!
DustMoon
Hi~ Div ,from CanPoint modding queue
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KAWAII
00:09:055 (9055|3,9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1,9873|3,9873|0,9873|2) - ……idk
00:30:782 (30782|0,30873|3,30873|1,30964|2,31055|3,31146|2,31146|0,31236|1,31327|0,31418|1,31418|3,31509|2,31600|3) - change to hard and hard
00:39:964 (39964|1,40055|0,40146|1,40236|2,40327|3) - these notes no sound mapping or you can add hitsound
02:02:509 (122509|0,122509|3,122600|1,122691|2,122782|0,122782|3,122873|2,122964|1,123055|0,123055|3,123146|2,123236|1,123327|0,123327|3,123327|2) - ^
02:16:918 (136918|0) - 03:05:918 (185918|1) - Strange
03:16:782 (196782|3,196827|0,196873|1,196918|2,196964|3,197009|0) - ^
04:04:873 (244873|3,244964|0,244964|2,245055|1,245146|0,245236|1,245236|3,245327|2,245418|1) - ^
04:09:146 (249146|3) - 04:08:236 (248236|3) - 04:07:964 (247964|2) - 04:07:418 (247418|3) - strangeeeee
Kawaii ~~~
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Div

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~ Div ,from CanPoint modding queue
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KAWAII
00:09:055 (9055|3,9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1,9873|3,9873|0,9873|2) - ……idk not sure what you're "idk"ing but i've moved the first note, rest is fine
00:30:782 (30782|0,30873|3,30873|1,30964|2,31055|3,31146|2,31146|0,31236|1,31327|0,31418|1,31418|3,31509|2,31600|3) - change to hard and hard not sure what you mean so no change for now
00:39:964 (39964|1,40055|0,40146|1,40236|2,40327|3) - these notes no sound mapping or you can add hitsound keep for now
02:02:509 (122509|0,122509|3,122600|1,122691|2,122782|0,122782|3,122873|2,122964|1,123055|0,123055|3,123146|2,123236|1,123327|0,123327|3,123327|2) - ^ piano roll
02:16:918 (136918|0) - very strange indeed :thinking: 03:05:918 (185918|1) - Strange was wrong timing ><
03:16:782 (196782|3,196827|0,196873|1,196918|2,196964|3,197009|0) - ^ piano
04:04:873 (244873|3,244964|0,244964|2,245055|1,245146|0,245236|1,245236|3,245327|2,245418|1) - ^ ^
04:09:146 (249146|3) - fixed 04:08:236 (248236|3) - fixed 04:07:964 (247964|2) - keep this 04:07:418 (247418|3) - keep strangeeeee those 1/12 lns are for the synth, the ones i fixed were wrong rhythm or me not listening to the note :thinking:

Kawaii ~~~
Good luck! :)
Thanks for your mod!!
Cipse
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For all images, the suggestion is on the left and the original on the right
Move any notes around the suggestions if they become uncomfortable

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I'll be going over the patterning first, then the consistency. The consistency section, whenever the suggestions are applied, will ruin the patterning changes. This is intended, since my aim is to potentially give you ideas on how what patterns work, which you can apply to other things you're mapping - not just to improve this difficulty

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Patterning
Though this section is called Patterning, there are some consistency related stuff. It's because I've stopped the before the end, as consistency is repetitive and takes much more time to do when compared to patterning. The consistency related stuff I point out in this section are stuff I don't expect you to have changed after reading the Consistency section

I personally find LNs capped with a SN in the same hand slightly awkward to play, like 00:01:691 (1691|0,1964|1) -. Just move 00:01:964 (1964|1) - to the LH, preferably {2}. There are a lot of options so I'd prefer something more comfortable. It's mostly like this because you're playing two notes in a row in the same hand

00:02:146 (2146|3,2509|2) - is the same as the above, probably move 00:02:509 (2509|2) - to {1}

00:06:509 (6509|0,6600|1) - is slightly uncomfortable for the same reason given in the first suggestion - two notes being played in the same hand in a row. It's more noticeable when the notes have a short interval between them (relative to the difficulty) or when the first note is an LN

I don't think that 00:08:782 (8782|1,9055|1) - should be jacked. It's normally used to show that a sound, or pitch, is being repeated. And, unlike 00:09:236 (9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1) -, it seems kinda random. 00:09:236 (9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1) - is being used in an obvious pattern, where 00:08:782 (8782|1,9055|1) - is just a random jack by itself

That being said, I don't like the fact that 00:09:236 (9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1) - is jacked but I guess I'll just leave it

I'd probably ctrl+H 00:39:600 (39600|0,39873|2,39873|3,39964|1,40055|0,40146|1,40236|2,40327|3,40418|2,40418|0,40418|1) -. This keeps it consistent with the patterning for 00:36:600 (36600|3,36600|2,36873|2,36873|3,37691|2,37691|3) -

Since 00:43:418 (43418|2,43418|3,43600|2,43600|3) - have different sounds, I'd remove the jack and just have a {23,01} pattern

You had a stack in {3} with 00:53:782 (53782|3,54055|3,54327|3,54600|3,54873|3,55146|3) -. 00:55:691 (55691|2,55964|2,56236|2,56509|2,56782|2,56964|2) - should therefore be in a LH column

00:57:055 (57055|0,57236|0) - don't have the same pitch as each other, so I'd remove the jack

With 00:57:327 (57327|1,57509|1) - already being in {1}, I'd move 00:57:873 (57873|1,58146|1,58418|1,58691|1,58964|1,59236|1,59509|1) - to {0}

Since there's already a stack in the LH, I'd move two notes from 00:58:873 (58873|0,59146|0,59418|0) - to the RH

Just to reiterate, I'd definitely move 01:00:055 (60055|0,60327|0,60600|0,60782|0,60873|1,61055|1,61146|0) - to the RH, since there was a stack in the LH

If you're keeping the stack in the LH, 01:00:873 (60873|1,61055|1) - should go in the RH. If the stack gets moved to the RH, keep these in the LH.

Between 01:03:509 (63509|1) - and 01:04:327 (64327|1) -, {0} is a bit empty. I kinda like the {23} stack so I'd just move 01:03:782 (63782|1) - to {0}

01:04:418 (64418|3,64418|2,64600|3) - is pretty annoying to play and looks weird, if you ask me. Unless you actually want it to be a heavier there, because of the jack and the LN in the same hand, I'd change it. If you're wanting to keep 01:04:691 (64691|0,64691|1) - , you could rearrange as in the image below

Since LNs restrict the amount of columns, I dislike it when there's a long LN in 4K, as it reduces the available columns to 3 - limiting the total patterns and making unintentional jacks. That is what happens with 01:30:600 (90600|3,92782|1,93873|0,94964|2) -. I'd just remove the LNs
By unintentional jacks, I mean stuff like 01:32:691 (92691|2,92782|2,92782|1,92782|0) -. It's when it's impossible to avoid making a jack, given the chord sizes

As with earlier, I don't like 01:56:236 (116236|3,116236|2,116418|3) -. I'd move 01:56:418 (116418|3) - to {0}

02:05:146 (125146|2,125236|3) - uses a weird pattern. You used the same pattern for 02:04:646 (124646|2,124691|3) - but it made sense there because of the piano grace note (it plays similar to this on a piano). Those are just two different instruments. It's also slightly misleading, as I would expect the same piano to happen there, except slower, but it doesn't.
02:04:964 (124964|0,125146|2,125236|3) - are all hi-hat sounds (plus 02:05:418 - also has a hi-hat sound) so you could do the pattern in the image instead
There's a trill to represent the repeated hi-hat sound, which is probably better than using a jack, as that would probably give a larger difficulty spike than you'd want

02:11:964 (131964|1,132055|2,132055|0,132236|1,132327|0,132327|2,132509|1,132600|0,132600|2,132782|1,132873|0,132873|2) - could probably have some jacks in it. You've used jacks before to prevent this repetition of a pattern

02:14:236 (134236|2,134418|2,134782|2,135191|2,135464|2,135782|2,135873|3,136055|2,136146|3,136327|2) - feels "wrong" to play. Adding a note or two at 02:15:327 - in the LH makes it feel better to play. I used two notes, {01}

As with above, 02:16:418 (136418|0,136600|0,136964|0,137373|0,137691|0,137782|1,138055|0) - felt off when playing it. Adding a note or two at 02:17:509 - fixes it, because it adds hand balance whilst not being too difficult to play (relative to the overall difficulty)

I can't hear the sound for 02:18:418 (138418|2) -, so I'd remove the note. I'd rearrange the patterning for 02:18:236 (138236|0,138327|1,138509|3) - to be {2,1,3}, since that's the most comfortable pattern available

02:19:055 (139055|3,139146|2,139327|2,139555|3,139691|2,139873|2,140146|3,140236|2,140509|3,140691|3,140782|2,141055|2,141236|3,141327|2) - makes a kinda "trill" thing in the RH, as well as having more notes than the LH. The notes between the triples should be on different hands. For example, 02:18:782 (138782|2,139055|3,139327|2,139555|0,139873|2,140146|3) - could be {RH, LH, RH, LH...} for more comfort

I know a lot of the patterns here are intentionally unbalanced, but maybe 02:42:327 (162327|3,162327|2,162509|2,162600|3,162782|3,162873|2) - is too RH heavy. Just ctrl+H 02:42:782 (162782|3,163055|0) - for a quick fix

I would say that 03:05:964 (185964|1) - should end at 03:06:055 -

03:08:691 (188691|3,188691|2,188691|0) - should have two notes for the snare and 03:08:782 (188782|3) - should have two notes for the finish. The reason why I'm point these out (where I'm leaving the rest for the consistency section) is because it leads into the next suggestion. I would strongly suggest {23,01} for these notes

The rhythm for 03:08:873 (188873|0,188964|3,189055|0,189146|3,189236|0,189327|3) - feels off. It sounds more like a 1/8 snap trill, as shown in the image
As shown in the image as well, I'd say that 03:09:327 (189327|0) - should get a double, for the snare

Since 03:12:236 (192236|2,192327|3) - and 03:12:509 (192509|2,192600|3) - don't have the same pitch, use different columns

I'd ctrl+H 03:26:782 (206782|0,206782|3) -. It ruins the "upwards" pattern you had but 03:26:782 (206782|2) - kinda ruins it anyway

Consistency
As an overall statement, I'd say that you should assign a consistent number of notes for each sound. This whole section is just pointing out where the number of notes for a sound is inconsistent

Assuming that the double for 00:01:145 (1145|3,1145|0) - is because of the guitar, 00:02:236 (2236|0,2236|1) - should also have a double

00:06:600 (6600|1) - ^

00:10:327 (10327|1) - has a hi-hat sound. You've included it ahead with 00:10:873 (10873|2) -, 00:11:418 (11418|0) -, etc

00:11:146 (11146|1) - ^

00:12:600 (12600|2,12600|1) -, 00:13:146 (13146|1,13146|0) - and 00:13:691 (13691|1,13691|3) - have the same sound as 00:09:873 (9873|3,9873|1,9873|0) -, 00:10:418 (10418|2,10418|3,10418|0) -, 00:10:964 (10964|0,10964|3,10964|1) -, 00:11:509 (11509|2,11509|1,11509|3) - and 00:12:055 (12055|1,12055|0,12055|2) -. Since they're really in the same section, I'd keep the chord sizes consistent

00:13:918 (13918|0) - I can't really hear a distinguishable sound here - though the sound isn't very clean here. I'd remove the note. It also gives a consistent single note into chord pattern for the section

00:14:055 (14055|1) - ^

00:18:873 (18873|1,18873|0) - can't hear why this is a double, since there's only a hi-hat sound and synth. If you're having two notes because of the synth and hi-hat, 00:19:146 (19146|1,19146|3) - should have three notes - one for the synth and two for the snare. I'll assume you don't want the this

00:19:418 (19418|2,19418|3) - should be a single, only a hi-hat and synth

00:19:691 (19691|1,19691|2) - only a hi-hat, change to a single

00:19:873 (19873|3) - should be a double for the snare

00:20:509 (20509|3,20509|2) - should be a single, only a hi-hat

00:20:782 (20782|0,20782|1,20782|3) - remove a note, it's only a kick

00:21:055 (21055|3,21055|2) - change to a single, hi-hat

00:21:236 (21236|3) - could be a double. If you want a double but don't want a jack, you could make 00:20:782 (20782|3) - end at 00:21:236 -

00:21:873 (21873|3,21873|1) - change to single, hi-hat

00:22:964 (22964|1,22964|0,22964|2) - change to double, only kick and synth

00:23:782 (23782|3,23782|1) - change to single, hi-hat and synth

00:24:236 (24236|0) - change to double, snare

00:24:782 (24782|0) - can't hear a sound, remove

00:24:873 (24873|1,24873|2) - change to single, hi-hat and synth. You could make the SN an LN that ends at 00:25:055 -, to represent the synth better

00:25:146 (25146|3,25146|2,25146|1) - change to double, kick and synth

00:25:418 (25418|2,25418|3) - change to single, hi-hat

00:25:782 - can't hear a sound, remove

00:26:782 (26782|3,26782|2) - change to single, hi-hat

00:27:236 (27236|1) - change to double, snare

I guess I'll stop here for consistency. No point in listing everything, as you'll be able to find it if you're interested

_

PM me through the forums if you have any questions
Topic Starter
Div

Cipse wrote:

RRM Modding Queue

For all images, the suggestion is on the left and the original on the right
Move any notes around the suggestions if they become uncomfortable

0 1 2 3

I'll be going over the patterning first, then the consistency. The consistency section, whenever the suggestions are applied, will ruin the patterning changes. This is intended, since my aim is to potentially give you ideas on how what patterns work, which you can apply to other things you're mapping - not just to improve this difficulty

ff15
Patterning
Though this section is called Patterning, there are some consistency related stuff. It's because I've stopped the before the end, as consistency is repetitive and takes much more time to do when compared to patterning. The consistency related stuff I point out in this section are stuff I don't expect you to have changed after reading the Consistency section

I personally find LNs capped with a SN in the same hand slightly awkward to play, like 00:01:691 (1691|0,1964|1) -. Just move 00:01:964 (1964|1) - to the LH, preferably {2}. There are a lot of options so I'd prefer something more comfortable. It's mostly like this because you're playing two notes in a row in the same hand this is fine imo

00:02:146 (2146|3,2509|2) - is the same as the above, probably move 00:02:509 (2509|2) - to {1} also fine, removing some of these ruins the RH LH swing feel

00:06:509 (6509|0,6600|1) - is slightly uncomfortable for the same reason given in the first suggestion - two notes being played in the same hand in a row. It's more noticeable when the notes have a short interval between them (relative to the difficulty) or when the first note is an LN ^

I don't think that 00:08:782 (8782|1,9055|1) - should be jacked. It's normally used to show that a sound, or pitch, is being repeated. And, unlike 00:09:236 (9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1) -, it seems kinda random. 00:09:236 (9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1) - is being used in an obvious pattern, where 00:08:782 (8782|1,9055|1) - is just a random jack by itself You're right, fixed this

That being said, I don't like the fact that 00:09:236 (9236|3,9327|2,9509|2,9600|1,9782|1) - is jacked but I guess I'll just leave it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I'd probably ctrl+H 00:39:600 (39600|0,39873|2,39873|3,39964|1,40055|0,40146|1,40236|2,40327|3,40418|2,40418|0,40418|1) -. This keeps it consistent with the patterning for 00:36:600 (36600|3,36600|2,36873|2,36873|3,37691|2,37691|3) - Not sure why it matters that those are consistent unless I'm misunderstanding. But it doesn't change anything so ctrl+H'd anyway

Since 00:43:418 (43418|2,43418|3,43600|2,43600|3) - have different sounds, I'd remove the jack and just have a {23,01} pattern Sure

You had a stack in {3} with 00:53:782 (53782|3,54055|3,54327|3,54600|3,54873|3,55146|3) -. 00:55:691 (55691|2,55964|2,56236|2,56509|2,56782|2,56964|2) - should therefore be in a LH column The anchors go from 3/2/1/0 for pitch, moving them wouldn't make sense from a musical POV

00:57:055 (57055|0,57236|0) - don't have the same pitch as each other, so I'd remove the jack sure

With 00:57:327 (57327|1,57509|1) - already being in {1}, I'd move 00:57:873 (57873|1,58146|1,58418|1,58691|1,58964|1,59236|1,59509|1) - to {0} nop

Since there's already a stack in the LH, I'd move two notes from 00:58:873 (58873|0,59146|0,59418|0) - to the RH Nop same reasoning as before

Just to reiterate, I'd definitely move 01:00:055 (60055|0,60327|0,60600|0,60782|0,60873|1,61055|1,61146|0) - to the RH, since there was a stack in the LH also nop

If you're keeping the stack in the LH, 01:00:873 (60873|1,61055|1) - should go in the RH. If the stack gets moved to the RH, keep these in the LH. Moved to RH

Between 01:03:509 (63509|1) - and 01:04:327 (64327|1) -, {0} is a bit empty. I kinda like the {23} stack so I'd just move 01:03:782 (63782|1) - to {0} Sure

01:04:418 (64418|3,64418|2,64600|3) - is pretty annoying to play and looks weird, if you ask me. Unless you actually want it to be a heavier there, because of the jack and the LN in the same hand, I'd change it. If you're wanting to keep 01:04:691 (64691|0,64691|1) - , you could rearrange as in the image below Fixed these

Since LNs restrict the amount of columns, I dislike it when there's a long LN in 4K, as it reduces the available columns to 3 - limiting the total patterns and making unintentional jacks. That is what happens with 01:30:600 (90600|3,92782|1,93873|0,94964|2) -. I'd just remove the LNs
By unintentional jacks, I mean stuff like 01:32:691 (92691|2,92782|2,92782|1,92782|0) -. It's when it's impossible to avoid making a jack, given the chord sizes At first I didn't like these but after resting on it I decided that the minijacks do a decent job emphasizing, and I really don't want to get rid of the long LNs so keep for now

As with earlier, I don't like 01:56:236 (116236|3,116236|2,116418|3) -. I'd move 01:56:418 (116418|3) - to {0} Rearranged

02:05:146 (125146|2,125236|3) - uses a weird pattern. You used the same pattern for 02:04:646 (124646|2,124691|3) - but it made sense there because of the piano grace note (it plays similar to this on a piano). Those are just two different instruments. It's also slightly misleading, as I would expect the same piano to happen there, except slower, but it doesn't. Rearranged to make it less weird but it's still piano so it's just lanes that have moved
02:04:964 (124964|0,125146|2,125236|3) - are all hi-hat sounds (plus 02:05:418 - also has a hi-hat sound) so you could do the pattern in the image instead
There's a trill to represent the repeated hi-hat sound, which is probably better than using a jack, as that would probably give a larger difficulty spike than you'd want ^

02:11:964 (131964|1,132055|2,132055|0,132236|1,132327|0,132327|2,132509|1,132600|0,132600|2,132782|1,132873|0,132873|2) - could probably have some jacks in it. You've used jacks before to prevent this repetition of a pattern Fixed, not sure what i was doing here

02:14:236 (134236|2,134418|2,134782|2,135191|2,135464|2,135782|2,135873|3,136055|2,136146|3,136327|2) - feels "wrong" to play. Adding a note or two at 02:15:327 - in the LH makes it feel better to play. I used two notes, {01} Seems like ghost notes to me?

As with above, 02:16:418 (136418|0,136600|0,136964|0,137373|0,137691|0,137782|1,138055|0) - felt off when playing it. Adding a note or two at 02:17:509 - fixes it, because it adds hand balance whilst not being too difficult to play (relative to the overall difficulty) ^

I can't hear the sound for 02:18:418 (138418|2) -, so I'd remove the note. I'd rearrange the patterning for 02:18:236 (138236|0,138327|1,138509|3) - to be {2,1,3}, since that's the most comfortable pattern available Apparently I'd already fixed this before this mod xd

02:19:055 (139055|3,139146|2,139327|2,139555|3,139691|2,139873|2,140146|3,140236|2,140509|3,140691|3,140782|2,141055|2,141236|3,141327|2) - makes a kinda "trill" thing in the RH, as well as having more notes than the LH. The notes between the triples should be on different hands. For example, 02:18:782 (138782|2,139055|3,139327|2,139555|0,139873|2,140146|3) - could be {RH, LH, RH, LH...} for more comfort I prefer having the 0,1 anchor here, and it's still reasonably okay to play imo

I know a lot of the patterns here are intentionally unbalanced, but maybe 02:42:327 (162327|3,162327|2,162509|2,162600|3,162782|3,162873|2) - is too RH heavy. Just ctrl+H 02:42:782 (162782|3,163055|0) - for a quick fix As you said intentionally unbalanced. Even in saying that your fix doesn't actually fix anything just shifts the lane focus early which imo feels worse

I would say that 03:05:964 (185964|1) - should end at 03:06:055 - Fixed this

03:08:691 (188691|3,188691|2,188691|0) - should have two notes for the snare and 03:08:782 (188782|3) - should have two notes for the finish. The reason why I'm point these out (where I'm leaving the rest for the consistency section) is because it leads into the next suggestion. I would strongly suggest {23,01} for these notes

The rhythm for 03:08:873 (188873|0,188964|3,189055|0,189146|3,189236|0,189327|3) - feels off. It sounds more like a 1/8 snap trill, as shown in the image
As shown in the image as well, I'd say that 03:09:327 (189327|0) - should get a double, for the snare Yeah I agree fixed

Since 03:12:236 (192236|2,192327|3) - and 03:12:509 (192509|2,192600|3) - don't have the same pitch, use different columns Rearranged this little fiesta

I'd ctrl+H 03:26:782 (206782|0,206782|3) -. It ruins the "upwards" pattern you had but 03:26:782 (206782|2) - kinda ruins it anyway Done

Consistency
As an overall statement, I'd say that you should assign a consistent number of notes for each sound. This whole section is just pointing out where the number of notes for a sound is inconsistent

Assuming that the double for 00:01:145 (1145|3,1145|0) - is because of the guitar, 00:02:236 (2236|0,2236|1) - should also have a double

00:06:600 (6600|1) - ^

00:10:327 (10327|1) - has a hi-hat sound. You've included it ahead with 00:10:873 (10873|2) -, 00:11:418 (11418|0) -, etc

00:11:146 (11146|1) - ^

00:12:600 (12600|2,12600|1) -, 00:13:146 (13146|1,13146|0) - and 00:13:691 (13691|1,13691|3) - have the same sound as 00:09:873 (9873|3,9873|1,9873|0) -, 00:10:418 (10418|2,10418|3,10418|0) -, 00:10:964 (10964|0,10964|3,10964|1) -, 00:11:509 (11509|2,11509|1,11509|3) - and 00:12:055 (12055|1,12055|0,12055|2) -. Since they're really in the same section, I'd keep the chord sizes consistent

00:13:918 (13918|0) - I can't really hear a distinguishable sound here - though the sound isn't very clean here. I'd remove the note. It also gives a consistent single note into chord pattern for the section uh 99% sure there is a sound here

00:14:055 (14055|1) - ^ This one on the other hand you might be right

00:18:873 (18873|1,18873|0) - can't hear why this is a double, since there's only a hi-hat sound and synth. If you're having two notes because of the synth and hi-hat, 00:19:146 (19146|1,19146|3) - should have three notes - one for the synth and two for the snare. I'll assume you don't want the this

00:19:418 (19418|2,19418|3) - should be a single, only a hi-hat and synth

00:19:691 (19691|1,19691|2) - only a hi-hat, change to a single

00:19:873 (19873|3) - should be a double for the snare

00:20:509 (20509|3,20509|2) - should be a single, only a hi-hat

00:20:782 (20782|0,20782|1,20782|3) - remove a note, it's only a kick

00:21:055 (21055|3,21055|2) - change to a single, hi-hat

00:21:236 (21236|3) - could be a double. If you want a double but don't want a jack, you could make 00:20:782 (20782|3) - end at 00:21:236 -

00:21:873 (21873|3,21873|1) - change to single, hi-hat

00:22:964 (22964|1,22964|0,22964|2) - change to double, only kick and synth

00:23:782 (23782|3,23782|1) - change to single, hi-hat and synth

00:24:236 (24236|0) - change to double, snare

00:24:782 (24782|0) - can't hear a sound, remove

00:24:873 (24873|1,24873|2) - change to single, hi-hat and synth. You could make the SN an LN that ends at 00:25:055 -, to represent the synth better

00:25:146 (25146|3,25146|2,25146|1) - change to double, kick and synth

00:25:418 (25418|2,25418|3) - change to single, hi-hat

00:25:782 - can't hear a sound, remove

00:26:782 (26782|3,26782|2) - change to single, hi-hat

00:27:236 (27236|1) - change to double, snare

I guess I'll stop here for consistency. No point in listing everything, as you'll be able to find it if you're interested

I'll go through and fix most of these another time when I'm not busy so I wont reply to them here, but they will be fixed

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