Murumoo wrote:

halo halo x)
my opinion = suggest

Minaret

holy fuck plz just place links instead of actual img :c

00:21:826 -
00:28:586 -
00:31:121 -
00:35:241 - No sounds there... Drum starts at 00:35:347
00:48:868 -
00:55:734 - I'm mapping the piano and it's on 1/3
01:23:833 - I have to disagree, the reason is hard for me to say, but the piano also in 01:23:833, that's why I map it 2
01:25:523 - ^ ^
01:27:213 - ^^
01:43:797 - use 2note only clap sound
01:49:924 - I'm separating the clap and the vocal
04:33:227 - hm i think this line over mapping.. but I will respect your style you mean the 2 notes? Yeah, but i'll keep it, because I've seen another map with 2 notes like this too.

good luck

CommandoBlack wrote:

|1|2|3|4|

Minaret

00:16:121 uses 1/6 not 1/8. 00:16:121 (16121|3,16174|2,16227|1,16280|2,16333|3) - You have five objects here while there should only be 4. (Not including 00:16:227 (16227|0) - Which is at a good spot)
00:16:966 Here too. (Found more than once) whoops.

00:18:762 (18762|3) - Seems to have the same 2 instruments as 00:08:604 (8604|3,8638|1) - except it only has 1 LN... (Add another LN like 00:08:604 (8604|3,8638|1) - )

00:23:621 a note can be added on |1|
00:25:311 a note can be added on |4|

00:31:914 (31914|2) - is a ghostie (remove)

00:32:283 (32283|3,32283|2,32600|2,32600|3) - are too long. They should be the same length as 00:32:178 (32178|1,32178|0,32495|0,32495|1) -

00:35:241 add a LN on |3| or |4| (but no note for the drums like the ones)

00:36:403 (36403|0,36456|1,36509|2,36561|3) - uses 1/6 not 1/8. Should be 3 objects but there are 4

00:36:826 (36826|0,36826|1,37037|3,37037|2) - ctrl + h (Pitch)

00:37:248 (37248|3,37301|2,37354|1,37407|0) - uses 1/6 not 1/8. Should be 3 objects but there are 4

00:38:304 (38304|1,38304|0) - should not be LN once the sound is no longer there for it. (keep 2 notes as drums) I can still hear it :/
00:43:903 a note can be added on |1|
00:45:593 a note can be added on |4|

00:56:685 (56685|3,56685|1,56790|0,56790|2,56790|1,56896|2,56896|3) - These are bothering me. It shows up alot & it just screams in my face. 00:56:790 (56790|2,56790|0,56790|1) - What is this triple for? The only sound its on is the hi-hat which should only be 1 object. The piano only starts at 00:56:826 (1/6) & is ignored. 00:56:790 (56790|1,56790|0,56790|2) - Can be made as a single & 00:56:826 could have a note added OR the hi-hat can be completely ignored & the piano could have 2 notes. You can chose any of the above or one of your own ideas but please don't make the hi-hat higher than a single. It's not a hihat, it's for the piano. yes it appears slightly above the blue line, but I'll just keep it for now. After some thinking, I decided to put just 2 there :p

01:01:755 should have a single for the clap & so should all other places like it directly after

01:03:445 (63445|0) - Remove
01:05:135 (65135|2) - remove

01:06:826 (66826|1) - Remove half of this LN. Add a second LN with it. (Double LN at half the length).
01:07:248 (67248|0) - Remove half of this LN. Add a second LN with it. (Double LN at half the length).

01:07:723 (67723|2) - remove

01:08:516 (68516|1) - remove I map chords as 3 notes x)

01:34:185 add a note at |2| I don't really see why

01:35:030 add a note at |2| ^

01:42:952 (102952|0,103058|1,103164|2,103269|0,103375|3,103480|1,103586|2,103692|3) - nonono. This follows nothing. 01:43:164 (103164|2,103375|3) - these are the only 2 that make sense. 01:42:952 (102952|0,103058|1) - Make these both regular notes & jack them. 01:43:269 (103269|0) - make this a regular note. 01:43:480 (103480|1) - make this a regular note. 01:43:586 (103586|2,103692|3) - Make these both regular notes & jack them.

01:56:051 (116051|2,116051|1,116051|0,116051|3,116473|1,116473|3,116473|2,116473|0) - These should not be quads I'll just keep it like that for now.

These errors (or thing alike: like snapping at 1/8 when it should be 1/6 & ignoring some sounds that can be used & whatnot) may be at other places in the song. I'm gonna stop here because I really do not enjoy this type of music. ):

Hope this helps

Mage wrote:

yo hi

Mod

1|2|3|4

00:01:423 - LN ends here
00:02:423 (2423|1) - this note must be 00:02:400 - here I think the current one is fine
00:08:559 - http://puu.sh/tfgPj/d536bf53ef.jpg
00:19:290 (19290|1) - this LN ends 00:19:713 - here Sounds like it's still there. It's only because of the louder sound.
00:20:135 (20135|1) - ends 00:20:558 - here ^
00:26:685 - http://puu.sh/tfgX0/34cbf977b6.jpg Rather hard to hit. I adjusted it abit though.
00:27:160 (27160|2) - remove No, this one 00:27:160 x)
00:31:914 - add note ghost
00:47:125 - LN ends here then 00:47:178 - note to 2 It ends at the white tick. But I also adjusted it a bit.
00:47:442 (47442|1) - remove again, it should be the one in the yellow tick that needs to be removed.
01:06:561 - LN ends here then 01:06:614 - note to 1 I want to follow the vocal fully ;p
01:07:459 - note to 1 how did I missed that
01:13:322 - you know what to do nah.
01:14:167 - 01:15:012 - 01:17:547 - 01:18:392 - 01:19:238 - and etc still the same reason. it ends on the white tick, and I want to follow it fully.
01:26:262 - add note
01:29:642 - 01:30:065 - ^
01:48:868 - 01:49:290 - 01:49:713 - triples I'll keep it at 2.
01:50:505 - nah
01:51:403 - double
01:53:093 - ^ how tf did I miss them
03:10:417 - 03:10:840 - replace to triples because there is no sound like 03:09:995
05:02:805 - 05:03:227 - triples

very interesting map, good luck

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
NM
If you like my mod, please support this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/456289 by modding it Don't really like the song ("Idol" song + remix, uh) but I'll see later

General

1. - nice song and good job with the hs
   

Minaret

1. 00:01:241 (1241|1) -should end at 00:01:423 -
2. 00:32:811 (32811|0,32811|1) -suggest to change it with LN to match the prev. pattern 00:32:178 (32178|1,32178|0,32283|3,32283|2,32495|0,32495|1,32600|3,32600|2) -
   Example : http://puu.sh/tt08h/c03b6968da.png
3. 00:36:192 (36192|1) -move this to 3 to different this with prev. note that have different sound
4. 00:47:495 (47495|3,47547|2,47600|1) -what sound it is ? if you want to keep it you better to map the entire sound until 00:48:023 - http://puu.sh/tt0BN/b74f97e36d.png I'm not actually following the one you are showing. I'm following the other sound like 00:47:178 (47178|3).
5. 00:48:445 (48445|2,48445|1,48868|1) -why this have different amount of note ? I hear it has same sound. So, better to make it same the one before is a mistake p:
6. 00:49:079 (49079|3,49290|1,49502|2) -it will be nice if you make this a LN to match up the prev. pattern 00:48:234 (48234|3,48234|0,48445|0,48445|3,48657|3,48657|0,48868|3,48868|0) - nah, don't really like it
   Example : http://puu.sh/tt0yK/ab2c28b056.png
7. 00:49:713 -starting from here you put a lot note in col. 1 . better to move it in other col. To make it balance. 00:50:135 (50135|0) - move to 4 and 00:50:980 (50980|0) - to 4 and 00:51:826 (51826|0) - to 4
8. 01:02:811 -you can add another LN in col. 4 until 01:03:023 - to follow dat peluit (idk the name) that one ln itself is for the whistle x)
9. 01:08:727 (68727|2,68727|1,68727|0,68727|3) -better to remove 1 note cuz I see the other part is using 3 note. Although I know cuz the other is had something that make it triple but better to make all consistent . etc…
10. 01:42:847 (102847|2,102900|1,102952|0) -move 1 col. To right cuz 01:42:952 (102952|0,103058|0) -why keeping this at col. 1 meanwhile the col. 4 is empty ? because it was meant to be a jack
11. 01:58:797 (118797|0,118903|0) -mvoe to col. 2 cuz is empty and good for hand balance I'm doing repeated patterns here
12. 02:01:755 (121755|1,121861|1) -^3 ^
13. 03:04:396 (184396|3,184396|2,184502|1,184502|0,184554|3,184607|2,184660|1,184713|0,184713|3) -chtrl+H to make mirroring with the prev. part hey that looks nice
14. 03:15:065 (195065|0,195065|1) -make triple for cymbal that part is rather weak so I'm keeping it two
15. 03:15:910 (195910|1,195910|3) -^ ^
16. 04:07:571 - http://puu.sh/tt1Oq/d6235d283c.png the current one is hard to press copy paste from 00:05:604 -
17. 05:09:671 -add in col. 2 LN until the red line. Better to follow this lone sound 05:09:143 (309143|3) - what
18. 05:09:777 (309777|1) -move to 1 nah

Good luck
Mod Done

I'm not going to mod your map because of the song and... it's 5k
sorry! and good luck with your map too.

Xinely wrote:

woo lagu ini lagi, good luck yaaa

Hydria wrote:

Decent song and pretty good map overall so far, it's nice to see something like this show up once in a while

This mapset was flagged green so all of the... 1 diffs will be checked

Minaret

having 00:31:121 (31121|0,31438|1,31491|0,31544|1) - all on one side makes it really uncomfortable to hit this burst, I tried like 4 times and broke combo each time, maybe have something like this instead:
adjusted it.. should be easier now

same goes for 00:38:727 - as well, something like this would be better:
It's no problem imo. also I want to keep the stairs like that

00:46:544 (46544|2,46755|2,46966|3,47178|3) - all of that being on one hand doesn't work so well so try moving 00:46:544 (46544|2) - to 4 and move 00:46:966 (46966|3) - to 1

01:18:762 (78762|2,78973|2,79185|2,79290|2) - that's a lot you got going on in one column there, having something like this seems more comfortable to me at least:


01:46:650 (106650|1,106861|1,106966|0,107178|1,107389|1,107600|1) - be careful on your left hand usage here, there should typically be less notes on the hand that is currently holding an LN even if it does force a OH trill (which is fine because this is only 142bpm)

01:48:868 (108868|0,109079|0,109290|0,109502|0,109713|0,109924|0,110030|0) - what's the design idea behind this then? nothing :p I just wanted to put repeated pattern there. It isn't really much of a problem, isn't it?

I'd prob change 01:54:150 (114150|1,114255|1) - and 01:54:995 (114995|3,115100|3) - around so you aren't doing two sets of jacks back to back on one hand, it's better to alternate hands when it comes to doing mini-jacks as such, that's really the only place I had issues with it though I want to do emphasis -> change side

02:17:917 (137917|0,138023|1) - , 02:18:762 (138762|3,138868|2) - and other similar patterns in this section are super awkward to hit, it's better moving the single note onto the only other available space there (with the next set, you'd want to move 02:19:713 (139713|2) - , the ones after the LN) they are just like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7178987 , so not really a problem to me.

02:41:051 (161051|3,161157|2,161262|2,161315|3,161368|2) - this seems like a really awkward thing to do tbh, try switching 02:41:368 (161368|2,161473|1) - around

I feel like 02:42:952 (162952|0,163058|0,163164|0,163269|0) - the quad jacks feel a bit too mean in this current section, move 02:43:164 (163164|0,163269|0) - to 3 and move 02:43:586 (163586|3,163692|3) - to 2 and move 02:43:797 (163797|0,163903|0) - to 4 I'm following the violin(?) so, no

03:08:093 - similar to the point I made at 01:54:150 - same point too

04:20:117 - it's too bad the red lines here aren't be used as points to mark each syllable she speaks with a note, if you were going to do that though, the first syllable is at 04:20:208 -

04:32:065 (272065|2,272171|1) - switch to avoid 04:31:854 (271854|3,271960|3,271960|2,272065|2) -

04:35:551 (275551|1) - move to 3 to avoid all that 1 handed stuff

05:09:249 (309249|2,309354|2) - move to 2 same sound, don't need to

that's probably one of the shortest mods I've done for a marathon like...ever, well done, this looks pretty much rankable

Good luck with this map, this is something I'll definitely be happy seeing hit ranked!

MrDorian wrote:

Hi Eraser! I'm from RRM queue(h)
Here's the mod you requested!

General:
Check AiMod (countdown and timing problem)
Pls raise the hp to 8.5, it's too easy to pass ;w;;;;; raised od and hp

Minarette

00:39:414 (39414|1,39466|2,39519|3,39572|0,39572|1) - maybe ctrl+h this for pitch revelancy (and comfortability) I want to make stairs
00:52:565 (52565|1,52671|1) - is there any reason to make this minijack here? nothing in melody, you could just make 23 14
01:26:473 (86473|3,86473|1,86473|2,86473|0) - delete one note? you mapped these sounds with 3 notes right, but I consider the ln as a different sound, so I add it instead of putting just 3 with one of them as ln.
02:05:347 (125347|2,125347|1) - pls move it to 34, that anchor on 2 hurts ;w;
02:41:051 (161051|1,161157|2) - ctrl+h to erase that unwanted 3 notes jack on 3?
02:56:262 (176262|2,176368|3,176473|2,176579|3,176685|2,176790|3,176896|2,177002|3,177107|2) - this hurts, you haven't used that long one hand trill in this part, so perhaps re-arrange
04:32:065 (272065|2) - move it to 1 for better comfortability (for instance)
04:40:305 (280305|0,280410|2,280410|3,280410|1,280516|1,280622|0,280622|2,280727|3,280727|1,280833|0,280833|2,280939|1,281044|0,281044|2,281150|1,281150|3,281256|1,281256|2,281256|0,281256|3) - this is hella uncomfortable to play, maybe try something like this (and mirror it in next part) really? I have no problem playing it (i'm rank 3k yeah but I made this when I was 7k or something)
04:55:727 (295727|1,295727|0,295833|3,295833|2,295939|1,295939|0,296044|2,296044|3,296150|1,296150|0,296256|3,296256|2,296361|0,296361|1) - pls flip this, this part is too left-handed because of 04:55:516 (295516|0,295516|1,295622|0,295622|1,295727|1,295727|0) - jumpjacks yeah, but I still want to keep the jumptrill element there.

Brilliant song choice and map, I've never had so much fun playing a chart

GL~~

Abraxos wrote:

hmm

you should compress and resize your BG further to reduce the file size

minaret

first off im a big fan of the LNs ngl

00:01:241 (1241|1) - think this ends on 00:01:423 - on 1/6 but eh not much of a difference just being nitpicky
00:00:695 (695|3,695|2) - same deal with these ending on 00:00:786 - on 1/3s - these make more sense to be more accurate with since these LNs are hard to time if the ends are off
00:09:572 (9572|0) - think this one should be the most obvious to you here - should end on 00:09:642 - on 1/3
00:14:220 (14220|1,14220|3) - honestly think these ends on the 1/3 tick earlier too at 00:14:502 -
applies to all sections 1/3 made me cry

00:21:826 - suppose the LN ends after this point all look good to me

00:25:100 (25100|2) - to 2 since you already have the jack on right hand at 00:23:410 (23410|3,23516|3) -

00:39:150 (39150|0,39202|3) - i guess id understand if you insist on keeping 00:38:991 (38991|1,39044|0,39097|1,39150|0) - this thing but i think its fine if you crlt-g'd 00:39:150 (39150|0,39202|3) -

00:43:164 (43164|1,43269|2,43375|3,43480|2,43586|1) - these honestly sound like back and forths to me actually so perhaps you can look into a 24243 kind of thing here
00:44:854 - ^^

00:45:699 (45699|1,45699|2,46121|1,46121|2) - think these are vastly different from 00:46:544 (46544|1,46544|2,46966|1,46966|2) - so maybe you can have the latter thing be on the outer columns so they mirror each other
or you could have them be [34]s since theres a [14] pattern above

00:49:607 - note here pls

00:52:459 (52459|3,52459|1,52565|0,52565|2) - think these are the notes that are supposed to be jacked since theyre piano notes and the piano notes in this section seem to be pretty jumpy to me - 00:52:565 (52565|0,52671|0) - doesnt really seem to have great continuity either since youre mashing the piano and the tom tom beats together rather than capitalizing on the jumpy piano thing

00:55:628 - id honestly be alright if you were to make these notes all on the same column actually - if that seems too far out to you then id have you look into something like a wristjack i.e. [34] for 00:55:769 (55769|2,55769|1,55910|3,55910|1,56051|2,56051|3) - and [14] for 00:56:192 (56192|2,56192|0,56333|0,56333|1,56473|1,56473|2) - (you have to edit the lower LNs though idk) I don't really like those kind of jacks, and I think the way I mapped it already reflected the sound perfectly. I'll leave it as is for now.

01:09:572 (69572|3) - to 3 same sound, no need for such thing. it's also a pre-kiai, so repeated patterns like this fits well imo.
01:09:783 (69783|3) - to 2 ^
you can quietly follow the deflating whitsle sound in the music

01:16:544 (76544|2) - to 4
think 01:15:910 (75910|0,76016|1,76121|2) - is fundamentally different from 01:16:333 (76333|0,76438|1,76544|2) - on its last note with the latter having a higher pitch than the former

01:16:966 - 01:17:811 - intentionally ignored? vocals? yeah

01:19:185 (79185|1) - would rather you have the jack on a normal note rather than a LN since the LN hides it

01:33:340 (93340|2,93551|2,93657|3) - think these should switch places
01:32:811 (92811|0,92917|2,93023|0,93128|2) - is far too different in pitch than 01:33:234 (93234|1,93340|2,93445|1,93551|2) - to warrant them sharing an anchor sure, but... 01:33:234 (93234|3,93340|2) -

01:33:868 (93868|2,93973|1,94079|2) - maybe have this be a one handed trill to differentiate it from 01:34:713 (94713|2,94819|1,94924|2) - since the former has this metal twinkling thing sound thing stuff

01:42:847 (102847|2,102900|1) - both on 1/6 tick before

01:49:924 (109924|0,110030|0,110135|0) - the LN hides the triple jack which is irritating
01:50:030 (110030|0,110030|1) - you could just move this to [34]

01:53:833 (113833|2) - think you should just have this be at 1 since 01:52:459 (112459|2,112565|2,112882|2,112988|2) - you know

01:54:572 (114572|0,114678|0,114783|0) - think the triple jack kinda just masks the effect of 01:54:150 (114150|1,114255|1) - what you are trying to go for here - its seems unnecessary to squeeze in the quad so that 01:54:572 (114572|0,114678|0) - these two beats AND 01:54:783 (114783|1,114783|3,114783|2,114783|0) - the crash are all mapped as a part of the jack
dk how willing you are to delete 01:54:783 (114783|0) - this note &&& I'm not willing ):

02:03:445 (123445|1,123551|3,123657|0,123762|2) - think these are the beats that are supposed to have the trill thing for me 02:03:657 (123657|0,123762|2) - sounds like it's a note lower.

02:09:255 - 02:09:678 - 02:10:100 - think theres beats here

02:16:597 (136597|2,136650|1,136702|0) - all 1/6s

02:18:023 (138023|1) - think having these be at 3 makes things clearer to hit imo - right now its pretty eh to read and hit since theres the LN your hand needs to hold at 02:17:917 (137917|0) - and press the note at 02:18:023 (138023|1) - applies to all sections
02:19:502 (139502|2,139713|2) - to be precise it applies heavily to patterns like this I mentioned why I still want to leave it like that in the last mod. It's 1/2 on 142 bpm anyways, anybody who could play 4.25 could hit this pattern. i think

02:29:326 (149326|1) - kinda nitpicky but you can have this be at 2 to alternate the jacks

02:40:945 (160945|0) - think you should delete this note and keep the [jackdouble empty jackdouble empty] pattern up till 02:41:473 - where you can just keep the 1/4 streams Think I'll keep it because of this burst 02:40:417 (160417|2,160470|3,160523|2) -, to keep flow.
02:41:262 (161262|2,161262|1,161315|3,161368|2) - you should shift this to the other hand too if you could

eg

should come out something like this

Altered it a bit

02:42:952 (162952|0,163058|0,163164|0,163269|0) - i dont think theres anything too wrong about this but i dont get why you justified the pattern by saying its the violin? maybe i just read that wrong
if you listen to the music the dudududududu thing starts to be much more pronounced after 02:42:107 - so it kinda seems pretty disparate to have those jacks and a simple 1/4 section before - like the transition is rocky and the music doesnt suggest a change that drastic either ;-; ok, how do I get those four jacks, just popped out in my head when I tried to put LNs in that section. I thought, "hey, the violin goes like this! maybe I could put jacks as the 'ln' there instead of lns that is just boring and space-hogging.". Thanks for the minijacks leading to the four jacks tho. Somebody will probably go like "wtf why is this section is in minijacks but others not" but I'll find an excuse.

couple of solutions

you can implement the increase in difficulty yourself by starting off with a couple of preliminary jacks to lead into the 4 noters

you can also start off with the jacks that alternate hands and transition into the jacks that utilise one hand for 2 different sets

you can also make everything just 4 note jacks but ehhhhhh variety is the spice of life theyd say

02:44:431 (164431|0,164537|0,164642|0) - think this is kinda eh in terms of variation - i dont see anything wrong with using something like [14][23] to lead into the next section %%%% Well there's nothing wrong with using that too. And I think using one handed jack gives more powerful effect on the percussion.

02:47:230 (167230|2,167283|0) -02:48:023 (168023|3,168076|2,168128|1) - think these are also on 1/6s too - give it a close look huh, I think it's 1/8.

02:49:607 (169607|0,169819|0,170030|0,170241|0,170452|0) - is it just me or do you tend to center on the left hand a lot ex-standard player tendencies I guess

02:58:058 (178058|3,178058|2) - same as %%%% same too

02:59:220 (179220|2,179220|3,179326|3,179326|2) - similar beats happen at 02:58:375 (178375|1,178375|0,178480|2) - 03:00:065 (180065|2,180065|0,180171|3) - I must've gone crazy because I couldn't hear it other than the place I put it... I'll keep it as is for now

03:00:752 (180752|1,180804|2) - 03:01:597 (181597|1,181650|0) - 03:04:132 (184132|3,184185|2,184238|1) - 03:04:554 (184554|0,184607|1,184660|2) - should be 1/6s? these things are weird still feels like 1/8 to me

03:04:713 (184713|3,184819|3,184924|3) - refer to %%%% guess i'll do it here

03:06:403 (186403|2,186509|2,186614|2) - would rather you have the jack not on LNs not much I can do here, I'll look at it later

03:07:671 (187671|3,187776|3) - another column perhaps? see 03:07:248 (187248|3,187354|3) -

03:08:093 (188093|0,188199|0,188304|0) - same as &&& here too yeah same too

03:11:157 (191157|3,191262|3) - same thing about jack on LN thing although this one is less pronounced in its ehhhh
03:12:847 (192847|0,192952|0) - this one is much more pronounced here

04:02:389 - snap thing should be the same as the front

04:35:234 (275234|2,275234|3,275340|3,275340|2) - pretty sure you can shift this wristjack to the other hand without much issue since you already have the same thing at 04:34:389 (274389|2,274389|3,274495|3,274495|2) -

04:55:516 (295516|0,295516|1,295622|0,295622|1,295727|1,295727|0) - dont see why you want to keep this really
04:55:727 (295727|0,295727|1,295833|3,295833|2,295939|1,295939|0) - dont think theres any issue it flipping the whole jumptrill here too ;_;

04:57:418 (297418|0) - perhaps you can start in the different column here too since 04:57:206 (297206|0,297312|0,297418|0) - isnt really tasteful

05:03:967 (303967|2,303967|3) - refer to %%%% same

05:09:143 (309143|2,309249|2,309354|2) - would rather you have this be on the other hand actually - LN is pretty restrictive and makes hitting the jack ehefghuefgb - shouldnt be too hard to end on something alternative to simple [12][34] to go out with a bang thing too

eg

the jumptrill hits like [13][24] which should be enough to grab attention and end the song with a high note too

yeah that should be all

good luck with rankkos

Verniy_Chan wrote:

yee

Hi Eraser

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. BGmu rasionya melebihi kapasitas dari 1366 x 768, donwload ini https://puu.sh/tPqm9.jpg terus replace di dalam folder mapmu
2. Jika terdapat multiple BPM diharuskan untuk menggunakan normalisasi SV
   00:00:423 - SV Normalisasi Green Linenya salah, seharusnya 1,29x (142/110). Kalau sengaja untuk slowjam, harusnya gak perlu ditempatkan pada red line Maksudnya? lalu ditempatkan dimana ya? Iya niatnya slowjam (or what I call them slowdowns).
   00:09:250 - unnecessary greenline, gak ada fungsinya oops, salah taruh. btw itu ada fungsinya, kalo ga ada, ntar jadi 1.15?
   03:54:519 - SV Normalisasi Green Linenya salah, seharusnya 1,25x (142/113)
   03:54:784 - tidak boleh ada SV change selain normalisasi, hapus green line what do you mean? try to play it, it's intentional.
   03:55:629 - sama seperti diatas, hapus green line
   04:02:390 - 1,29x rumusnya check diatas^ not normalization.
   04:20:208 - 0,87x
   04:20:390 - 0,97x
   04:20:595 - 1,13x
   04:20:833 - 0,81x
   04:21:003 - 0,97x
   04:21:208 - 0,81x
   04:21:378 - 0,97x
   04:21:583 - 0,81x
   04:21:753 - 0,97x
   04:21:958 - 1,07x
   04:22:401 - 0,96x
   04:22:603 - 1,21x
   04:23:116 - 1,37x don't plan on normalizing this one.
   04:28:580 - tidak boleh ada SV change selain normalisasi, hapus green line intentional

Insane

OD : 8,5
HP : 8,5

1. 01:09:150 - add finish 50% karena ada suara cymbal disini seperti 01:08:304 (68304|1) -
2. 01:30:065 - add note? untuk konsistensi rhytim 01:29:220 - yeah, but it looks ugly and would be awkward to play
3. 01:56:051 (116051|0,116473|3) - mengapa gunakan finish low 30%? padahal pitchnya sama dengan pattern sebelumnya 01:54:783 - 01:55:628 - no no, it's quite different if you listened close enough.
4. 02:17:600 (137600|0) - bisa add finish atau finish low 30% untuk cymbal
5. 03:02:389 - sampai 03:04:079 - thrill It's trill! t-r-i-l-l. Repeat after me: . chordnya terlalu mainstream dan agak boring walaupun anda mengikuti pitch relevancy, coba setelah 03:03:234 - dibuat variasi pattern baru mungkin bracket |1-3|-|2-4|-1-3|-|2-4|-n atau |1-4|-|2-3|-|1-4|-|2-3|-n sampai 03:04:079 - it's building the tension up, so I think repeated pattern like this fits well rather than constantly changing.
6. 03:04:819 (184819|3) - kenapa suara electro dibuar chord padahal low pitch, saran delete 03:04:819 (184819|3) - sehingga konsisten I think it fits better as a chord rather than a single note. But that doesn't matter because I always use atleast two notes for percussions. (except in calm and slow parts)
7. 03:15:065 - you missing cimbal here, selain itu 03:15:065 (195065|1) - bukan kick melainkan snare. Coba denger baik2. bagian ini juga : 03:15:910 (195910|3) - what. I couldn't hear it. I'm sure it's a kick because I have never heard a finisher using snares. I'll look at it later.
8. 03:42:107 (222107|1,222319|1,222530|1,222741|1,222952|1,223164|1,223375|1,223586|1,223797|1) - hindari anchor di kolom |2| seperti ini, coba susun lagi patternya biar balance dengan kolom lainnya
9. 04:29:425 (269425|2,269741|2,269847|1,270058|1) - kenapa gak pasang kickku 30% atau snareelectro 30% disini, suaranya gak beda jauh dengan 04:31:115 - atau 04:44:213 - btw kok bisa berbeda HSnya ehem... sesuatu
10. 04:50:129 (290129|3,290340|0) - harus konsisten dengan snareelectro 04:48:439 (288439|0,288861|2,289284|0,289706|2) - , kok malah snare actually, the snare electro sounds low enough to also act as a kick, so i'll keep it.
11. 04:55:516 (295516|1,295516|0,295622|1,295622|0,295727|1,295727|0) - perlu dipertimbangkan pattern seperti ini, kurang nyaman dimainkan dan ini mirip semi jackhammer 1/4 XD, saranku 04:55:727 (295727|0,295727|1) - geser ke kekanan 2x dan arranged pattern setelahnya
12. 05:03:967 - kenapa disini chord 2 note, pitchnya beda dengan 05:03:861 - kicknya sangat low, bahkan mungkin gak ada. saranku hapus 1 note nope. mentioned why on earlier reply.
13. 05:08:826 (308826|0,308932|3,309037|0) - gak ada snareslectro disini yang mirip dengan 05:08:720 (308720|3) - saranku remove HSnya

Notes : Good Map, patternnya lumayan solid

Verniy_Chan wrote:

[box=Score]87

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Хорошо~ Good Luck..

AchsanLovers wrote:

yee

ok m4m from my queue

[General]

- lol idk why you put preview time in 04:02:283 - try to put it at 04:02:389 - and tell me which one is better

Colomn = 1>4

[Minaret]

- 00:25:100 (25100|1) - more better if you put it in col 3 I got many scolds regarding "don't put jacks on the same hand that hold the ln you twat" so, nope.

- 00:25:100 (25100|1,32811|1,32811|0) - sebenarnya berenti di 00:33:234 - don't think so.

- 01:23:833 (83833|3,83833|2,83938|1,83938|2,84044|3,84150|1,84150|2) - kurang yakin w nih >_>y tho. cocok aja ah

- 01:40:417 (100417|1) - move to col 3 ? if you look closely, it's a copy paste from the intro

- 02:54:466 (174466|0,174466|2,174572|3,174572|1) - lebih baik single note aja, karena memang sedang fokus pada suara yg kayak 02:53:516 - ada suara 1/4 hihat jadi w pasang aja

- 02:57:530 - ini juga ^

- 03:55:629 (235629|0,235840|2,236051|3,236262|1,236474|0,236685|2) - dan lain2. hmm, ena nya di jadiin double LN aja sih kek this 03:55:840 (235840|2) - represents the sound that is "fading out" so I'll keep it.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7251373

- 05:09:249 (309249|1,309354|1) - more better to move it to col 1. It's the same sound. I don't intend on making them easier. Btw, "more" and "better" doesn't go together. Just use "better".

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udah tu aja, good luck!

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~Eraser
1|2|3|4|

Eraser

00:09:150 (9150|1) - move to 3 Then it'll be on the same column as 00:09:783 (9783|2) - , I don't want that.
00:19:290 (19290|1) - end to 00:19:607 - the sound is there up until 00:19:924 -
00:39:361 (39361|3) - ? there's a sound there.
00:48:445 (48445|2) - delete there's a cymbal there.
01:35:347 (95347|1,95347|2,95347|3,95347|0,95558|3,95558|0,95769|0,95769|3,95980|0,95980|3,96192|3,96192|0) - ^ uhm what
01:49:924 (109924|3,109924|2) - move to 1,2 it is intended as a jack.
02:03:657 (123657|0) - move to 4 it's part of 02:03:657 (123657|0,123762|2) -
02:03:551 (123551|3) - move to 1 it's part of 02:03:445 (123445|1,123551|3) -
03:46:966 (226966|2) - move to 4 I did this on every other places too 03:46:966 (226966|2,227178|2) -
02:23:304 (143304|3) - move to 3 intended
02:58:058 (178058|2) - move to 1 intended
02:59:326 (179326|2) - move to 1 intended
03:00:752 (180752|1,180804|2) - Ctrl+h this 03:00:804 (180804|2,180910|1) - would've been troublesome, don't you think?
03:54:519 (234519|0,234519|1,234784|1,234784|0,234995|1,234995|0,235206|0,235206|1,235417|1,235417|0) - ^ uhm what
03:55:629 (235629|0,235840|2,236051|3,236262|1,236474|0,236685|2,236896|3,237107|1,237319|0,237530|2,237741|3,237952|1,238164|0,238375|2,238586|3,238798|1,239009|0,239220|2,239431|3,239643|1,239854|0,240065|2,240276|3,240488|1) - Copy?too Boring it's the same non melodic sound over and over again so I don't see why I shouldn't map it like this.
04:04:299 (244299|0,244390|1,244503|2) - Move one col to the right copy paste from the intro
04:33:439 (273439|0) - move to 4 I don't see any problem as it is right now.

nice map,shooting you kudos.
Good luck!