15:08 anicositini: mod pls maxus -w-
15:08 anicositini: not check
15:12 Maxus: what map :o
15:13 *anicositini is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1172630 IAHN - Transform (Original Mix)]
15:13 anicositini: only Insane diff :3
15:14 Maxus: want irc?
15:15 anicositini: whatever
15:16 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1172630 IAHN - Transform (Original Mix) [Insane]]
15:16 Maxus: 00:05:141 (5141|2,5141|3,5313|2,5486|3,5658|2,5831|3,6003|2,6175|3) - this pattern is too inbalance with too long trill
15:17 anicositini: owo)!
15:18 anicositini: what should i do?
15:19 Maxus: 00:16:520 (16520|3,16693|2,16865|3,17037|2,17210|3,17382|2,17555|3,17727|2) - yeah the same case here, you usually wanna avoid having this pattern for too long because it doesn't support any specific instrument, and being too heavy in one hand for no reason
15:19 Maxus: rearrange it?
15:19 Maxus: for example, 00:05:658 (5658|2,6175|3) - you can move these 2 notes to col 1 and col 3
15:21 Maxus: 00:22:296 - 00:22:469 - 00:22:641 - felt that it's a bit of waste that you don't map these shaky 1/4, its nice to be made trill pattern
15:21 anicositini: ok rearanged
15:21 anicositini: *rearranged
15:21 Maxus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8947132 the example
15:23 Maxus: 00:24:451 (24451|3) - change this LN into normal note, you don't necessarily need the LN as you already have 00:24:537 (24537|2) -
15:23 anicositini: ok fixed
15:25 Maxus: 00:28:934 (28934|0) - this LN is more or less 5 seconds without any LN changes.. ._.
15:25 Maxus: 00:30:313 - 00:31:693 - 00:33:072 - It would be much better if you actually make new LN here, similar to what you did at 00:39:969 (39969|0,41348|3) -
15:27 Maxus: 00:44:106 (44106|1,44106|3,44279|1,44279|3,44451|2,44451|0,44537|1,44537|3,44624|0,44624|2,44710|1,44710|3) - all of these double are much better if you just make one single LN for each sound here
15:28 Maxus: since 00:43:589 - you use single note for kick, and yet double for 00:44:106 - which have softer sound
15:29 anicositini: heh?
15:29 anicositini: how?
15:30 Maxus: which point you wanna ask?
15:30 anicositini: 00:44:106 (44106|1,44106|3,44279|1,44279|3,44451|2,44451|0,44537|1,44537|3,44624|0,44624|2,44710|1,44710|3) -
15:31 Maxus: i mean, 00:44:106 - you use double note, but it doesn't suit, why? because in part before, at 00:43:158 - , you use single note for most part for louder sound
15:31 Maxus: obviously louder sound will have more note compared with smaller sound
15:33 anicositini: oh
15:33 anicositini: ok
15:34 anicositini: should i use only single nonte?
15:34 Maxus: small LN, like 00:44:796 (44796|0) -
15:36 Maxus: 00:45:486 - try use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8947179
15:36 anicositini: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8947183 like this?]
15:36 Maxus: it will enhance the layering better, since the previous one seems vague
15:36 Maxus: well it can works i guess
15:38 anicositini: ok
15:38 Maxus: 00:46:175 (46175|0,46520|2,46865|3,47210|0) - well, tbh i dont really understand what you try to layer with this LN.. since the only sound exist is 1/4 you already layer at 00:46:693 (46693|1,46779|0,46865|1,46951|0,47037|2,47124|1,47210|2) -
15:39 Maxus: if 00:47:555 (47555|2,47900|1) - , this has synth sound, while at 00:46:175 (46175|0,46520|2) - it doesn't have synth sound
15:40 anicositini: idk my mind -w-
15:41 Maxus: well in mapping you need to have clear planning on what you want to map first xd
15:42 anicositini: ok
15:42 anicositini: =w=
15:43 Maxus: so yeah, if you don't know what those LN being mapped , you better delete those 4
15:43 Maxus: and rearrange to make stream instead
15:44 anicositini: ok rearranged
15:45 Maxus: 01:05:486 (65486|0,65716|0,65946|0,66175|0,66348|0,66434|0,66693|0,66865|0,67037|0,67210|0) - another balance problem here, try rearrange to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8947212
15:46 Maxus: 01:35:831 (95831|1,96003|1,96175|1,96348|1) - this stack is bad, you need to get rid of it
15:46 Maxus: 01:40:658 (100658|3,100831|3,101003|3) - this too, because the jack pattern seems unpurposely here
15:47 Maxus: 01:48:417 (108417|1,108589|1,108762|1,108934|1,109106|1) - this too, if you saw this kind of jack, you need to rearrange
15:48 anicositini: rearranged
15:48 anicositini: -0-
15:49 Maxus: well, basically my suggestion repeating there, fix the anchor problem, fix balance problem, and have more planning
15:49 Maxus: i think that's it for your agenda first :3
15:50 anicositini: okay
15:50 anicositini: thank you
