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Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore [OsuMania]

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wamster2
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wamster2
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 30, 2017 at 5:38:58 PM

Artist: Panda Eyes & Teminite
Title: Highscore
Tags: Teminite Panda Eyes Instrumental Virtue-
BPM: 110
Filesize: 6648kb
Play Time: 04:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane - 4Key (3.2 stars, 1771 notes)
  2. Normal - 4Key (1.95 stars, 1136 notes)
  3. Terminate - 4Key (4.19 stars, 2581 notes)
  4. V's Hard - 4Key (2.35 stars, 1473 notes)
Download: Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Fixed some Issues
No Hitsounds Yet XD
Added SV's



V's Hard by Virtue- (100%)

Still looking for mods and suggestions, feel free to post here :D :D
Last edited by wamster2 , edited 27 times in total.
wamster2
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Topic Starter
wamster2
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Adri
270 posts
Joined June 2014
Adri
Hi :)
This is my first mod so it might not be accurate, but i am kind of an exeprienced player and i have some things to say regarding playability.
Also. DO NOT REMOVE HITSOUNDS PLEASE. Thank you :)

Terminate | 4.23 stars | screen of my first play

Good difficulty overall but a lot of overmapping (chart notes that don't really appear in the song). A lot of jacks but the song fits well with that and they are great.

Some things i have to say:
01:11:837 - The 4 combos shouldn't be the same because the song doesn't play the same note 4 times
01:14:019 - Same
01:36:656 and 01:36:792 - These notes are repeated for a long time are are in the rhythm, but they don't come naturally because the song doesn't behave like this at all. (Personal opinion) There are interesting things to map like the sounds we hear at 01:39:656 in the background
01:45:383 and 01:45:519 - Same problem as the previous part, the notes don't really fit into the song. Search for the sounds in the background.
01:53:019 to 01:53:701 - I think that you are starting the "big" pattern too early. I recommend you to make some stairs from 01:53:292 to 01:53:837 and then keep you're good.
02:15:656 - I think that this combo note should be different from the previous one
02:26:565 - The long note should start at this time
03:23:292 - There is basically no sound, there shouldn't be anything. We hear some kind of snare sound but it only justifies a long note at most ^^ Not stairs :/
03:59:156 - I don't really understand why all those notes, you could have kept the same patterns
04:02:087 - Same as before, the little stairs shouldn't be here because the song it slowing down and somehow, this is the hardest part of your map. The difficulty should decrease with the song's pace.

Here you go for the first difficulty !
The Normal difficulty i won't say anything because there is nothing to say, it's really boring the same pattern is used the whole song. You should not focus only on the main rhythm but also on the little details the song has. I don't know much about easy difficulties so i'll just tell you that :)
If you want the easy replay here it is, and yes at the end i didn't even look at the screen because of the repetitive pattern a blind guy could play :p

I hope this post will help you improve your map because there are interesting things and i kind of enjoyed the 4* :)
Keep your good work going !
wamster2
113 posts
Joined February 2015
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wamster2
Adri

Thanks for your mod, It really helped me a lot!
BloowXv2
BloowXv2
HI! here my mod of the pm request.

Columns: |1|2|3|4|

Terminate

on this part 01:00:928 - in the column 2, you can add other Ln, due the sound
01:01:065 - col 2 same add ln
01:01:201 - col 2 same add ln
01:01:337 - col 2 same add ln

in this parts you can add other ln
01:04:337 - col 3
01:04:474 - col 4
01:04:610 - col 3

01:04:883 - col 3
01:05:019 - col 4
01:05:156 - col 3
----------------------------------

Place another column of Ln like this, in column 4
01:06:383 (66383|1,66519|1,66656|1,66792|1,66928|1,67065|1,67201|1,67337|1) -

01:29:565 - col 3 add note here
01:29:633 - col 2 add note here

02:14:565 - col 1 add note
02:14:701 - col 1 add note
02:14:837 - col 1 add note
02:14:974 - col 1 add note
02:15:247 - col 1 add note
02:15:383 - col 1 add note
02:15:519 - col 1 add note
02:15:656 - col 1 add note

Move this note 02:27:656 (147656|2) - to col 4
and add a note here 02:27:656 - in col 2
02:28:201 - col 2 add note
02:28:747 - col 2 add note

02:36:519 - col 4 add note here
02:36:656 - col 4 add note
02:36:792 - col 4 add note

03:44:565 - col 4 add ln
03:44:701 - col 4 add ln
03:44:837 - col 4 add ln
03:44:974 - col 4 add ln

03:48:928 - col 1 add ln
03:49:065 - col 1 add ln
03:49:201 - col 1 add ln
03:49:337 - col 1 add ln

Ok my friend, this is all ^_^
wamster2
113 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
wamster2

BloowXv2 wrote:

HI! here my mod of the pm request.

Columns: |1|2|3|4|

Terminate

on this part 01:00:928 - in the column 2, you can add other Ln, due the sound
01:01:065 - col 2 same add ln
01:01:201 - col 2 same add ln
01:01:337 - col 2 same add ln

in this parts you can add other ln
01:04:337 - col 3
01:04:474 - col 4
01:04:610 - col 3

01:04:883 - col 3
01:05:019 - col 4
01:05:156 - col 3
----------------------------------

Place another column of Ln like this, in column 4
01:06:383 (66383|1,66519|1,66656|1,66792|1,66928|1,67065|1,67201|1,67337|1) -

01:29:565 - col 3 add note here
01:29:633 - col 2 add note here

02:14:565 - col 1 add note
02:14:701 - col 1 add note
02:14:837 - col 1 add note
02:14:974 - col 1 add note
02:15:247 - col 1 add note
02:15:383 - col 1 add note
02:15:519 - col 1 add note
02:15:656 - col 1 add note

Move this note 02:27:656 (147656|2) - to col 4
and add a note here 02:27:656 - in col 2
02:28:201 - col 2 add note
02:28:747 - col 2 add note

02:36:519 - col 4 add note here
02:36:656 - col 4 add note
02:36:792 - col 4 add note

03:44:565 - col 4 add ln
03:44:701 - col 4 add ln
03:44:837 - col 4 add ln
03:44:974 - col 4 add ln

03:48:928 - col 1 add ln
03:49:065 - col 1 add ln
03:49:201 - col 1 add ln
03:49:337 - col 1 add ln

Ok my friend, this is all ^_^


Thanks a lot for mod XD
[-No One-]
6 posts
Joined April 2015
[-No One-]
HELLO!!!!


Note: These are just my opinons wamwam!

Terminate
00:11:292 (11292|0) - Siguro add more notes dito kasi malakas yung beat :>
00:13:474 (13474|3) - dito rin^
00:15:656 (15656|2) - ^
00:17:292 (17292|1) - ^
00:17:837 (17837|0) - ^
00:19:474 (19474|1) - may I suggest na long note ito until dun sa may 3 notes? waahaha
00:21:656 (21656|3) - ito rin, ln ehehe
00:23:837 (23837|2) - ito rin, ln heheh
00:26:019 (26019|3) - ln
00:26:565 (26565|3,26565|2) - dagdag note since malaks beat? wahaha
00:35:292 (35292|0) - iba na beat dito so di na kailanagn na jack and dagdagan ng notes since malakas yung beat? :o
01:09:383 (69383|0,69383|2) - remove kasi walang beat? :o
01:36:247 (96247|0) - no beat? :o
01:51:656 (111656|2,111656|1,111656|0) - remove one note :D
01:52:747 (112747|1,112747|3,112747|2) - ito rinn, ^
02:15:656 (135656|2,135656|3) - di mo ba to lalagyan nung ln na nilagay mo sa next part nito? :o
03:23:292 (203292|3) upto 03:23:292 (203292|3) - ln nalang? hahaha wala kasi sa beat yung ibang notes eh ;o;
03:34:201 (214201|1) - add more notes? :o

YUN LANG! :>
GOOD LUCK WOOH!
wamster2
113 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
wamster2

[-No One-] wrote:

HELLO!!!!


Note: These are just my opinons wamwam!

Terminate
00:11:292 (11292|0) - Siguro add more notes dito kasi malakas yung beat :>
00:13:474 (13474|3) - dito rin^
00:15:656 (15656|2) - ^
00:17:292 (17292|1) - ^
00:17:837 (17837|0) - ^
00:19:474 (19474|1) - may I suggest na long note ito until dun sa may 3 notes? waahaha
00:21:656 (21656|3) - ito rin, ln ehehe
00:23:837 (23837|2) - ito rin, ln heheh
00:26:019 (26019|3) - ln
00:26:565 (26565|3,26565|2) - dagdag note since malaks beat? wahaha
00:35:292 (35292|0) - iba na beat dito so di na kailanagn na jack and dagdagan ng notes since malakas yung beat? :o
01:09:383 (69383|0,69383|2) - remove kasi walang beat? :o
01:36:247 (96247|0) - no beat? :o
01:51:656 (111656|2,111656|1,111656|0) - remove one note :D
01:52:747 (112747|1,112747|3,112747|2) - ito rinn, ^
02:15:656 (135656|2,135656|3) - di mo ba to lalagyan nung ln na nilagay mo sa next part nito? :o
03:23:292 (203292|3) upto 03:23:292 (203292|3) - ln nalang? hahaha wala kasi sa beat yung ibang notes eh ;o;
03:34:201 (214201|1) - add more notes? :o

YUN LANG! :>
GOOD LUCK WOOH!

Thanks for Mod! I owe you one XD :D :D
Hydria
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Joined April 2011
Hydria
I presume you were the one that asked for the mod so here you go

also nice "BG"

Terminate
00:26:565 - should be a quad

00:29:565 (29565|1,29701|2,29837|3) - move one to the left

00:34:474 (34474|0,34747|0,35019|0) - should be 3|2|1

00:35:292 (35292|0) - this should be like a 3-note chord tbh

00:45:928 (45928|2) - move to 4 and then move 00:46:201 (46201|3) - to 1

00:49:201 (49201|3) - move to 2

00:50:565 (50565|3) - move to 2

00:51:383 (51383|3) - move to 3?

00:54:656 (54656|3) - move to 2

00:56:837 (56837|0,56974|2) - move one column to the right

00:58:201 -

01:04:201 (64201|1,64201|0,64337|0,64474|1,64610|0,64747|1,64883|0,65019|1,65156|0) - generally bad idea, balance between hands

01:06:928 (66928|1,67065|1,67201|1,67337|1) - ctrl-H, this long jack doesn't work out so well

01:19:747 (79747|3,79883|3,80156|3,80292|3,80565|3) - this is like super awkward to hit

01:36:383 (96383|2,96928|3,97474|0) - etc etc all these LNs should end on a white line

01:49:747 (109747|2,109883|1) - ctrl-H that minijack was a surprise

for consistency reasons 01:51:656 (111656|2,111656|0,111656|1) - and 01:52:747 (112747|1,112747|3,112747|2) - should be 2 note chords

01:53:292 - this bit is 1/4 so you should do something like

01:54:247 (114247|1,114383|1,114519|1) - avoid this

01:55:747 (115747|2,115883|2,116019|2) - if you can help it

01:56:837 (116837|0,116974|0,117110|0) - see it's not optimal

02:02:565 - to 02:09:110 - I can't hear what these notes are representing

02:12:928 (132928|1,132928|0,132997|2,132997|3,133065|0,133065|1,133133|2,133133|3,133201|1,133201|0,133269|3,133269|2,133337|0,133337|1,133406|2,133406|3,133474|1,133474|0) - I don't think there's 1/4 sounds here

02:14:565 (134565|3,134565|2,134701|3,134701|2,134837|3,134837|2,134974|3,134974|2,135110|2,135110|0,135110|1,135247|3,135247|2,135383|2,135383|3,135519|2,135519|3,135656|2,135656|3) - this is a good idea, why is it not mirrored at like 02:16:747 - or 02:18:928 - you know?

02:25:065 (145065|0,145201|2,145337|2,145610|3,145747|1,145883|1,146019|0,146156|0,146292|3,146428|3,146565|1) - dunno why these stopped being 2 note chords

I'm going to stop here for now, this map feels like it has a lot of potential, but it needs quite a lot doing to it to bring it to that stage. Get ~3 pages of mods, and then send another mod request and I'll mod the whole thing when that happens
wamster2
113 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
wamster2

Hydria wrote:

I presume you were the one that asked for the mod so here you go

also nice "BG"

Terminate
00:26:565 - should be a quad

00:29:565 (29565|1,29701|2,29837|3) - move one to the left

00:34:474 (34474|0,34747|0,35019|0) - should be 3|2|1

00:35:292 (35292|0) - this should be like a 3-note chord tbh

00:45:928 (45928|2) - move to 4 and then move 00:46:201 (46201|3) - to 1

00:49:201 (49201|3) - move to 2

00:50:565 (50565|3) - move to 2

00:51:383 (51383|3) - move to 3?

00:54:656 (54656|3) - move to 2

00:56:837 (56837|0,56974|2) - move one column to the right

00:58:201 -

01:04:201 (64201|1,64201|0,64337|0,64474|1,64610|0,64747|1,64883|0,65019|1,65156|0) - generally bad idea, balance between hands

01:06:928 (66928|1,67065|1,67201|1,67337|1) - ctrl-H, this long jack doesn't work out so well

01:19:747 (79747|3,79883|3,80156|3,80292|3,80565|3) - this is like super awkward to hit

01:36:383 (96383|2,96928|3,97474|0) - etc etc all these LNs should end on a white line

01:49:747 (109747|2,109883|1) - ctrl-H that minijack was a surprise

for consistency reasons 01:51:656 (111656|2,111656|0,111656|1) - and 01:52:747 (112747|1,112747|3,112747|2) - should be 2 note chords

01:53:292 - this bit is 1/4 so you should do something like

01:54:247 (114247|1,114383|1,114519|1) - avoid this

01:55:747 (115747|2,115883|2,116019|2) - if you can help it

01:56:837 (116837|0,116974|0,117110|0) - see it's not optimal

02:02:565 - to 02:09:110 - I can't hear what these notes are representing

02:12:928 (132928|1,132928|0,132997|2,132997|3,133065|0,133065|1,133133|2,133133|3,133201|1,133201|0,133269|3,133269|2,133337|0,133337|1,133406|2,133406|3,133474|1,133474|0) - I don't think there's 1/4 sounds here

02:14:565 (134565|3,134565|2,134701|3,134701|2,134837|3,134837|2,134974|3,134974|2,135110|2,135110|0,135110|1,135247|3,135247|2,135383|2,135383|3,135519|2,135519|3,135656|2,135656|3) - this is a good idea, why is it not mirrored at like 02:16:747 - or 02:18:928 - you know?

02:25:065 (145065|0,145201|2,145337|2,145610|3,145747|1,145883|1,146019|0,146156|0,146292|3,146428|3,146565|1) - dunno why these stopped being 2 note chords

I'm going to stop here for now, this map feels like it has a lot of potential, but it needs quite a lot doing to it to bring it to that stage. Get ~3 pages of mods, and then send another mod request and I'll mod the whole thing when that happens


Thanks for your mod!
CommandoBlack
258 posts
Joined September 2015
CommandoBlack


|0|1|2|3|

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00:09:110 Add another note once notes after are double for this same sound

00:19:474 (19474|1) - Move to column 3

00:28:747 (28747|0) - Should be a double
00:34:747 (34747|1) - Should be a double

00:35:292 (35292|0) - Should be a triple

00:36:928 should have a Long Note
00:36:928 should only Have a Long note (Unless) you add a note at 00:37:474
00:37:474 Should have a Long note

00:35:292 (35292|0) - & 00:39:110 (39110|3) - & 00:39:656 (39656|1) - Should have Long Notes (Also keep in mind of note density changes above)
00:40:747 (40747|3,41292|2,41837|1) - Ditto

00:43:610 (43610|0,43610|1,43747|2,43747|3,43883|0,43883|2) - make these Singles to balance itself with the later section (Which has a clear song compared to a muffled)

01:01:201 (61201|1,61201|2,61337|1,61337|2) - make these 2 triples for the fade in

01:01:883 is missing a note
01:03:928 is missing a note
01:04:065 is missing a note
This same sound comes up a lot during the song which you didn't map (Mentioned because 01:01:747 (61747|1) - Is mapped to that same sound)
The 4 spots I showed are not the only places. Keep an eye out for those. I just don't want to flood my mod with Missing note, Missing note, Missingno Note.

01:20:974 Is missing a note

01:21:519 (81519|1,81656|3,81656|1,81656|0,81792|2,81928|2,81928|0,82065|2,82065|0,82065|1,82201|3,82337|3,82337|1,82474|3,82474|1,82610|0,82610|2,82747|3,82747|1,82747|0,82883|0,82883|2,83019|3,83019|2,83156|1) - What is this? Lazy eh? Lemme break it down for ya!
01:21:656 (81656|1) - Should not be a Long note
01:21:928 (81928|2) - Remove this note
01:22:201 (82201|3) - Why is this only a single? It should be a triple like all the other drum sounds in the chart
01:23:019 (83019|2) - Remove this note

01:25:337 is missing a note

01:29:633 (89633|1) - is a ghostie. Delete it

01:32:019 (92019|1) - Where is a Long note

01:34:747 (94747|3) - Were is a Long Note?

01:36:383 (96383|2,96383|1,96383|3,96656|0,96792|3,96928|3,96928|1,96928|0,97201|1,97337|0,97474|0,97474|1,97474|2,97747|2,97883|3,98019|3,98019|2,98019|1,98292|1,98428|0,98565|2,98565|0,98565|1,98837|1,98974|0,99110|0,99110|3,99110|1,99383|2,99519|3,99656|3,99656|2,99656|1,99928|1,100065|0,100201|0,100201|1,100201|2,100474|1,100610|3,100747|3,100747|2,100747|1,101019|1,101156|0,101292|0,101292|1,101292|2,101565|2,101701|1,101837|1,101837|3,101837|2,102110|3,102247|0,102383|0,102383|3,102383|2,102656|1,102792|3,102792|2,102928|2,102928|1,103201|1,103337|0,103474|0,103474|1,103474|3,103747|2,103883|3,104019|3,104019|2,104019|1,104292|1,104428|0,104565|0,104565|1,104565|2,104837|2,104974|3,105110|2,105110|1) - What are you mapping here? The Long Notes seem like they go to the main Synth at times. Then at other times it seems to be for the Bass synth. I'm ultimately confused about this part. I think this was cause by lazyness.. Edit: Ok. After checking your profile you don't seem to be an experienced mapper. Sorry if saying lazy is a little too harsh. Though this part is lacking a purpose to a sound. Recheck it. You'll see what I mean.

01:53:837 (113837|0,113837|2,113837|3,113974|3,113974|1,114110|2,114110|0,114247|3,114247|2,114383|1,114383|0,114383|3,114519|2,114519|1,114656|3,114656|0,114792|3,114792|1,114928|1,114928|2,115065|0,115065|3,115201|3,115201|1,115337|2,115337|0,115474|3,115474|2,115474|1,115610|0,115747|1,115747|2,115883|0,115883|3,116019|2,116019|1,116156|1,116156|0,116292|0,116292|3,116428|1,116428|2,116565|3,116565|0,116565|1,116701|3,116701|2,116837|2,116837|0,116974|0,116974|1,117110|1,117110|2,117110|3,117247|3,117383|0,117383|1,117519|2,117519|0,117656|2,117656|3,117792|0,117792|1,117928|3,117997|2,118065|1,118133|0,118201|2,118201|1,118201|3,118337|0,118337|3,118474|1,118474|0,118610|3,118610|2,118747|1,118747|2,118747|0,118883|0,118883|3,119019|3,119019|2,119019|1,119292|1,119292|0,119428|1,119428|2,119565|1,119565|0,119701|2,119701|3,119837|0,119837|1,119837|2,119974|0,119974|3,120110|1,120110|3,120110|2,120383|1,120383|0,120519|2,120519|3,120656|2,120792|3,120792|1,120928|2,120928|1,120928|0,121065|3,121065|2,121201|3,121201|1,121337|1,121337|0,121474|3,121474|2) - This section has some parts where the drum is double & some parts where its triple for the same sound at different places. Please check the consistency of this part.

02:09:110 (129110|3) - Why is this only a single?

02:11:428 (131428|1,131428|0,131701|2,131701|3,131974|3,131974|1,132247|1,132247|0) - delete these

02:12:928 (132928|1,132928|0,132997|2,132997|3,133065|0,133065|1,133133|2,133133|3,133201|1,133201|0,133269|3,133269|2,133337|0,133337|1,133406|2,133406|3,133474|1,133474|0) - NOOO! SOOOO MANY GHOSTIES!!! 02:12:997 (132997|3,132997|2,133133|3,133133|2,133269|2,133269|3,133406|2,133406|3) - All of these can be deleted.

02:14:019 (134019|2,134019|3) - Should be a triple

02:14:565 (134565|3,134565|0,134565|2,134701|2,134701|0,134701|3,134837|3,134837|2,134837|0,134974|3,134974|0,134974|2) - this is the only time this part of the song has triples unlike every other part. (Should be doubles)

02:16:201 (136201|2,136201|0) - Should be a triple
02:16:747 (136747|2,136747|1) - ditto
02:18:383 (138383|3,138383|0) - ""
Look for these more often. At the begaining of the chart triples were for these drums. Hold some consistency here

02:22:201 (142201|1) - This Long note is outa place. I know what you mapped it to but I think its unnecessary for 4k, Maybe this whould work for a 7k chart but not 4k
02:26:565 (146565|0) - Ditto

02:29:974 (149974|2,149974|1,150110|2,150110|1,150247|2,150247|1,150383|2,150383|1,150519|1,150519|2,150656|2,150656|1,150792|1,150792|2) - Do the same as 01:00:519 (60519|2,60656|2,60792|2,60928|1,60928|2,61065|1,61065|2,61201|1,61201|2,61337|1,61337|2) - once its the same thing

02:35:292 (155292|1) - Long note pls

02:37:337 (157337|2) - split this into 2 long notes

02:40:474 (160474|2) - shouldn't be a Long note

Imma end my mod here with a note. Check you chart over a few times. There are super easy to catch mistakes along the way. Some Long notes are not placed where they should be. some long notes are missing. I'm not saying that all parts after are not done well. I'm saying that Only Some Are not done well. Anyways. Have fun with this beatmap. It has potential!

Hope this helps
wamster2
113 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
wamster2

CommandoBlack wrote:



|0|1|2|3|

Terminate
00:09:110 Add another note once notes after are double for this same sound

00:19:474 (19474|1) - Move to column 3 Fixed

00:28:747 (28747|0) - Should be a double Fixed
00:34:747 (34747|1) - Should be a double Fixed

00:35:292 (35292|0) - Should be a triple Fixed

00:36:928 should have a Long Note Fixed
00:36:928 should only Have a Long note (Unless) you add a note at 00:37:474 Fixed
00:37:474 Should have a Long note Fixed

00:35:292 (35292|0) - & 00:39:110 (39110|3) - & 00:39:656 (39656|1) - Should have Long Notes (Also keep in mind of note density changes above)
00:40:747 (40747|3,41292|2,41837|1) - Ditto Fixed

00:43:610 (43610|0,43610|1,43747|2,43747|3,43883|0,43883|2) - make these Singles to balance itself with the later section (Which has a clear song compared to a muffled) Fixed

01:01:201 (61201|1,61201|2,61337|1,61337|2) - make these 2 triples for the fade in Fixed

01:01:883 is missing a note Fixed
01:03:928 is missing a note Fixed
01:04:065 is missing a note Fixed
This same sound comes up a lot during the song which you didn't map (Mentioned because 01:01:747 (61747|1) - Is mapped to that same sound)
The 4 spots I showed are not the only places. Keep an eye out for those. I just don't want to flood my mod with Missing note, Missing note, Missingno Note.

01:20:974 Is missing a note Fixed

01:21:519 (81519|1,81656|3,81656|1,81656|0,81792|2,81928|2,81928|0,82065|2,82065|0,82065|1,82201|3,82337|3,82337|1,82474|3,82474|1,82610|0,82610|2,82747|3,82747|1,82747|0,82883|0,82883|2,83019|3,83019|2,83156|1) - What is this? Lazy eh? Lemme break it down for ya! Fixed
01:21:656 (81656|1) - Should not be a Long note
01:21:928 (81928|2) - Remove this note
01:22:201 (82201|3) - Why is this only a single? It should be a triple like all the other drum sounds in the chart
01:23:019 (83019|2) - Remove this note

01:25:337 is missing a note Fixed

01:29:633 (89633|1) - is a ghostie. Delete it Fixed

01:32:019 (92019|1) - Where is a Long note Fixed

01:34:747 (94747|3) - Were is a Long Note? Fixed

01:36:383 (96383|2,96383|1,96383|3,96656|0,96792|3,96928|3,96928|1,96928|0,97201|1,97337|0,97474|0,97474|1,97474|2,97747|2,97883|3,98019|3,98019|2,98019|1,98292|1,98428|0,98565|2,98565|0,98565|1,98837|1,98974|0,99110|0,99110|3,99110|1,99383|2,99519|3,99656|3,99656|2,99656|1,99928|1,100065|0,100201|0,100201|1,100201|2,100474|1,100610|3,100747|3,100747|2,100747|1,101019|1,101156|0,101292|0,101292|1,101292|2,101565|2,101701|1,101837|1,101837|3,101837|2,102110|3,102247|0,102383|0,102383|3,102383|2,102656|1,102792|3,102792|2,102928|2,102928|1,103201|1,103337|0,103474|0,103474|1,103474|3,103747|2,103883|3,104019|3,104019|2,104019|1,104292|1,104428|0,104565|0,104565|1,104565|2,104837|2,104974|3,105110|2,105110|1) - What are you mapping here? The Long Notes seem like they go to the main Synth at times. Then at other times it seems to be for the Bass synth. I'm ultimately confused about this part. I think this was cause by lazyness.. Edit: Ok. After checking your profile you don't seem to be an experienced mapper. Sorry if saying lazy is a little too harsh. Though this part is lacking a purpose to a sound. Recheck it. You'll see what I mean. Still confused about what i have done wrong in this part XD

01:53:837 (113837|0,113837|2,113837|3,113974|3,113974|1,114110|2,114110|0,114247|3,114247|2,114383|1,114383|0,114383|3,114519|2,114519|1,114656|3,114656|0,114792|3,114792|1,114928|1,114928|2,115065|0,115065|3,115201|3,115201|1,115337|2,115337|0,115474|3,115474|2,115474|1,115610|0,115747|1,115747|2,115883|0,115883|3,116019|2,116019|1,116156|1,116156|0,116292|0,116292|3,116428|1,116428|2,116565|3,116565|0,116565|1,116701|3,116701|2,116837|2,116837|0,116974|0,116974|1,117110|1,117110|2,117110|3,117247|3,117383|0,117383|1,117519|2,117519|0,117656|2,117656|3,117792|0,117792|1,117928|3,117997|2,118065|1,118133|0,118201|2,118201|1,118201|3,118337|0,118337|3,118474|1,118474|0,118610|3,118610|2,118747|1,118747|2,118747|0,118883|0,118883|3,119019|3,119019|2,119019|1,119292|1,119292|0,119428|1,119428|2,119565|1,119565|0,119701|2,119701|3,119837|0,119837|1,119837|2,119974|0,119974|3,120110|1,120110|3,120110|2,120383|1,120383|0,120519|2,120519|3,120656|2,120792|3,120792|1,120928|2,120928|1,120928|0,121065|3,121065|2,121201|3,121201|1,121337|1,121337|0,121474|3,121474|2) - This section has some parts where the drum is double & some parts where its triple for the same sound at different places. Please check the consistency of this part. Fixed

02:09:110 (129110|3) - Why is this only a single? Fixed

02:11:428 (131428|1,131428|0,131701|2,131701|3,131974|3,131974|1,132247|1,132247|0) - delete these Fixed

02:12:928 (132928|1,132928|0,132997|2,132997|3,133065|0,133065|1,133133|2,133133|3,133201|1,133201|0,133269|3,133269|2,133337|0,133337|1,133406|2,133406|3,133474|1,133474|0) - NOOO! SOOOO MANY GHOSTIES!!! 02:12:997 (132997|3,132997|2,133133|3,133133|2,133269|2,133269|3,133406|2,133406|3) - All of these can be deleted. Im beggining to fear ghosts, XD Fixed

02:14:019 (134019|2,134019|3) - Should be a triple Fixed

02:14:565 (134565|3,134565|0,134565|2,134701|2,134701|0,134701|3,134837|3,134837|2,134837|0,134974|3,134974|0,134974|2) - this is the only time this part of the song has triples unlike every other part. (Should be doubles) Fixed

02:16:201 (136201|2,136201|0) - Should be a triple Fixed
02:16:747 (136747|2,136747|1) - ditto Fixed
02:18:383 (138383|3,138383|0) - ""
Look for these more often. At the begaining of the chart triples were for these drums. Hold some consistency here Fixed

02:22:201 (142201|1) - This Long note is outa place. I know what you mapped it to but I think its unnecessary for 4k, Maybe this whould work for a 7k chart but not 4k Fixed
02:26:565 (146565|0) - Ditto Fixed

02:29:974 (149974|2,149974|1,150110|2,150110|1,150247|2,150247|1,150383|2,150383|1,150519|1,150519|2,150656|2,150656|1,150792|1,150792|2) - Do the same as 01:00:519 (60519|2,60656|2,60792|2,60928|1,60928|2,61065|1,61065|2,61201|1,61201|2,61337|1,61337|2) - once its the same thing Fixed

02:35:292 (155292|1) - Long note pls Fixed

02:37:337 (157337|2) - split this into 2 long notes Fixed

02:40:474 (160474|2) - shouldn't be a Long note I think it follows the pattern for the LN section

Imma end my mod here with a note. Check you chart over a few times. There are super easy to catch mistakes along the way. Some Long notes are not placed where they should be. some long notes are missing. I'm not saying that all parts after are not done well. I'm saying that Only Some Are not done well. Anyways. Have fun with this beatmap. It has potential!

Hope this helps
Thanks a lot for your mod and your time! Really a big help XD
Another Lie
Another Lie
Your req mod from my queue. I'm sorry can't fully mod it due of the "map's quality". [Note: I'm not saying your map is bad, i'm bad mapper too. But i'm going to say "you should study the basic first before mapping"]

Terminate
00:36:928 (36928|2,36928|0) - delete one of them, consistency pattern
00:39:110 (39110|3,39110|2) - same like above
00:41:292 (41292|1,41292|2) - ^
00:43:610 (43610|1,43610|0,43747|3,43747|2,43883|0,43883|2) - they should be 1 note and same column for better playability
I can't mod any further, but i suggest you to download this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/495696 for better reference.

Well then, have a good day dear mapper.
wamster2
113 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
wamster2

Another Lie wrote:

Your req mod from my queue. I'm sorry can't fully mod it due of the "map's quality". [Note: I'm not saying your map is bad, i'm bad mapper too. But i'm going to say "you should study the basic first before mapping"]

Terminate
00:36:928 (36928|2,36928|0) - delete one of them, consistency pattern
00:39:110 (39110|3,39110|2) - same like above
00:41:292 (41292|1,41292|2) - ^
00:43:610 (43610|1,43610|0,43747|3,43747|2,43883|0,43883|2) - they should be 1 note and same column for better playability
I can't mod any further, but i suggest you to download this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/495696 for better reference.

Well then, have a good day dear mapper.
Thanks for the help ! XD
riunosk
1,116 posts
Joined January 2015
riunosk
m4m reply
Terminate
Before i mention anything else, please put your bpm to 110. The standard ranked version bpm is 110, so follow suit
00:12:383 (12383|0) - move to 2 since its slightly higher pitched than the next note
00:14:565 (14565|2,14837|1) - maybe move to the right for more natural pitch?
00:29:292 (29292|2,29428|3,29565|0,29701|1,29837|2) - the sound is descending in pitch, so flip these
01:22:065 (82065|1,82201|1,82337|1,82474|1,82747|1) - anchor here, please fix
01:36:110 (96110|0,96383|1,96656|0) - flip for pitch + playability
02:14:565 (134565|2,134701|2,134837|2,134974|2,135110|2,135247|2,135383|2,135519|2,135656|2) - even though some anchors are intended, please dont let them stretch this long
02:43:065 (163065|2,163201|2,163337|2,163474|2) - this anchor isnt needed
03:16:474 (196474|0,196474|2,196474|3,196474|1) - this quad isnt needed and since its the same sound as the previous part, make this a double
03:18:383 (198383|0,198383|3,198383|2,198656|1,198656|0,198656|2) - keep them doubles to be consistent with your patterning
03:44:565 (224565|0,224565|3,224565|1,224701|1,224701|0,224701|3,224837|0,224837|3,224837|1,224974|0,224974|3,224974|1) - i dont see why triples are needed, since the rest are the same sound, and be consistent with your patterning
03:48:928 (228928|3,228928|0,228928|2,229065|0,229065|3,229065|2,229201|3,229201|0,229201|2,229337|3,229337|0,229337|2) - ^
03:50:565 (230565|2,230701|2,230837|2,230974|2,231110|2,231247|2,231383|2,231519|2,231656|2) - shorten the anchor
03:57:110 (237110|2,237247|2,237383|2,237519|2,237656|2,237792|2,237928|2,238065|2) - ^
03:59:360 (239360|3,239360|2,239497|3,239497|2,239633|2,239633|3,239769|3,239769|2,239906|3,239906|2,240042|3,240042|2,240178|3,240178|2,240315|3,240315|2) - these arent needed, since they dont follow any sound, the LNs will suffice
04:04:201 - move some notes to the first column, since its a little empty after this
04:17:837 (257837|2,257837|3) - this isnt needed since theres literally no sound after the last note
good luck with your map
wamster2
113 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
wamster2

riunosk wrote:

m4m reply
Terminate
Before i mention anything else, please put your bpm to 110. The standard ranked version bpm is 110, so follow suit
00:12:383 (12383|0) - move to 2 since its slightly higher pitched than the next note
00:14:565 (14565|2,14837|1) - maybe move to the right for more natural pitch?
00:29:292 (29292|2,29428|3,29565|0,29701|1,29837|2) - the sound is descending in pitch, so flip these
01:22:065 (82065|1,82201|1,82337|1,82474|1,82747|1) - anchor here, please fix
01:36:110 (96110|0,96383|1,96656|0) - flip for pitch + playability
02:14:565 (134565|2,134701|2,134837|2,134974|2,135110|2,135247|2,135383|2,135519|2,135656|2) - even though some anchors are intended, please dont let them stretch this long
02:43:065 (163065|2,163201|2,163337|2,163474|2) - this anchor isnt needed
03:16:474 (196474|0,196474|2,196474|3,196474|1) - this quad isnt needed and since its the same sound as the previous part, make this a double
03:18:383 (198383|0,198383|3,198383|2,198656|1,198656|0,198656|2) - keep them doubles to be consistent with your patterning
03:44:565 (224565|0,224565|3,224565|1,224701|1,224701|0,224701|3,224837|0,224837|3,224837|1,224974|0,224974|3,224974|1) - i dont see why triples are needed, since the rest are the same sound, and be consistent with your patterning
03:48:928 (228928|3,228928|0,228928|2,229065|0,229065|3,229065|2,229201|3,229201|0,229201|2,229337|3,229337|0,229337|2) - ^
03:50:565 (230565|2,230701|2,230837|2,230974|2,231110|2,231247|2,231383|2,231519|2,231656|2) - shorten the anchor
03:57:110 (237110|2,237247|2,237383|2,237519|2,237656|2,237792|2,237928|2,238065|2) - ^
03:59:360 (239360|3,239360|2,239497|3,239497|2,239633|2,239633|3,239769|3,239769|2,239906|3,239906|2,240042|3,240042|2,240178|3,240178|2,240315|3,240315|2) - these arent needed, since they dont follow any sound, the LNs will suffice
04:04:201 - move some notes to the first column, since its a little empty after this
04:17:837 (257837|2,257837|3) - this isnt needed since theres literally no sound after the last note
good luck with your map

Thanks for the mode! :D :D :D :D
[ Junko ]
13 posts
Joined November 2014
[ Junko ]
Teminite Mod Requested

|1|2|3|4|

01:00:519 (60519|2,60656|2,60792|2,60928|2,60928|1,61065|1,61065|2,61201|1,61201|0,61201|2,61337|1,61337|0,61337|2) - Weird Patterns to be fair, you could just change it to normal notes and make them jacks. If not just keep it the way it is. This is just my opinion, since I love Jack maps.

01:01:747 (61747|1,61883|2) - Now in this section you could actually just add 1/8 holds.

01:02:019 - 01:03:656 - Now this part felt smooth, I really enjoyed this part.

01:04:337 (64337|2,64474|3,64610|2) - I like this section, the idea of using the holds as trills, its pretty creative.

01:36:383 (96383|2,96383|1,96383|3,96656|0,96792|3,96928|3,96928|1,96928|0,97201|1,97337|0,97474|0,97474|1,97474|2,97747|2,97883|3,98019|3,98019|2,98019|1,98292|1,98428|0,98565|2,98565|0,98565|1,98837|1,98974|0,99110|0,99110|3,99110|1,99383|2,99519|3,99656|3,99656|2,99656|1,99928|1,100065|0,100201|0,100201|1,100201|2,100474|1,100610|3,100747|3,100747|2,100747|1,101019|1,101156|0,101292|0,101292|1,101292|2,101565|2,101701|1,101837|1,101837|3,101837|2,102110|3,102247|0,102383|0,102383|3,102383|2,102656|1,102792|3,102792|2,102928|2,102928|1,103201|1,103337|0,103474|0,103474|1,103474|3,103747|2,103883|3,104019|3,104019|2,104019|1,104292|1,104428|0,104565|0,104565|1,104565|2,104837|2,104974|3,105110|2,105110|1) - During this Section, I think you're able to add more notes and make it more difficult but in a fun way where there's jacks, and singles while holding. If not this works, because I really like the use of Holds and Doubles in there.

02:29:974 (149974|2,150110|2,150247|2,150383|1,150383|2,150519|2,150519|1,150656|0,150656|1,150656|2,150792|0,150792|2,150792|1) - This section same thing, you can add jacks or leave it like this, either way it works but since It keeps the feeling of jacks in it.

03:26:019 (206019|1,206019|2,206019|0,206292|2,206292|3,206565|1,206565|0,206565|3,206837|0,206837|2,207110|1,207110|3,207383|0,207383|2,207519|1,207656|2,207656|3) - Instead of using long notes in here, you can make this section jumpy, due to the beat in it. I don't think Long notes match on this section, but i guess you can feel the rhythm in it.

03:28:201 (208201|3,208201|1,208201|0,208337|0,208337|2,208474|2,208474|1,208610|1,208610|3,208747|0,208747|2,209019|2,209019|1,209292|0,209292|3,209292|1,209565|2,209565|1,209837|0,209837|1,210383|2,210383|3,210519|0,210519|1,210656|0,210656|3,210792|2,210792|1,210928|2,210928|3,211201|0,211201|1,211474|1,211474|2,211474|3,211747|2,212019|3,212019|0,212019|1,212565|2,212565|1,212701|1,212701|3,212701|0,212837|0,212837|3,212974|3,212974|2,213110|0,213110|1,213247|3,213383|3,213383|1,213656|1,213656|2,213656|0,213928|0,213928|3,213928|2) - Same thing here, i feel the jacks more instead of Long notes.

03:43:474 - 03:51:656 - Um... Overused, you can just keep it simple instead of using short holds. But I kinda like it.

Overall I Approve your map, I really enjoyed it, some patterns were meh, but I still enjoyed them. I hope this map, gets Qualified or Ranked in the future, because I want more Jack maps. I hope this helped if not no Kudosu for me xD. But I hope you keep working on it, in till it becomes a master piece :D
Knif3rism
30 posts
Joined March 2014
Knif3rism
IRC Mod
14:31 wamster2: excuse sir, can you take a look at my map? if youre not busy XD, im looking for mods and suggestions, heres the link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550476 thanks :)
15:24 Knif3rism: what diff do you want me to look at?
15:26 wamster2: terminate sir XD
15:36 Knif3rism: 03:54:383 (234383|0,234383|2,234383|3,234519|1,234656|1,234792|1,234928|2,234928|0,235065|2,235201|2,235337|2,235474|1,235474|2,235474|3,235610|3,235747|3,235883|3,236019|3,236019|1) -  inconsistent from the previous pattern which was short LN, this is more of gripe than a error tbh
15:36 Knif3rism: oops highlighted the wrong one
15:37 Knif3rism: I mean the synth sound you were mapping ln is still present
15:37 Knif3rism: so
15:37 Knif3rism: take what you want from that
15:37 Knif3rism: I suggest personally short ln pattern like what you did earlier
15:37 Knif3rism: but it's not a huge error
15:37 Knif3rism: actually not a error at all just a personal gripe
15:38 Knif3rism: 03:59:292 (239292|1,239292|0,239360|3,239360|2,239428|1,239428|0,239497|3,239497|2,239565|1,239565|0,239633|2,239633|3,239701|1,239701|0,239769|3,239769|2,239837|1,239837|0,239906|3,239906|2,239974|1,239974|0,240042|3,240042|2,240110|1,240110|0,240178|3,240178|2,240247|1,240247|0,240315|3,240315|2) -  strange patterning doesn't really fit with the song
15:38 Knif3rism: Especially with the doubles at the release with the long note
15:38 Knif3rism: the release part is enough to emphaise the sound personally
15:39 Knif3rism: let me preface that the map is good xd
15:39 Knif3rism: its not a bad map
15:39 wamster2: oh ok sir
15:39 wamster2: thanks
15:41 Knif3rism: 03:35:837 (215837|1,215837|3,215837|2) -  should be a long note here
15:41 Knif3rism: not a triples ln
15:41 Knif3rism: but 1 will suffice
15:41 Knif3rism: 03:36:383 (216383|1,216383|0) -  same with this one
15:41 Knif3rism: just missed the synth part that you were mapping to
15:43 Knif3rism: mainly what I believe your map is lacking personally is consistency, like you omit the synth sometimes even though you were mapping to it which although isn't the biggest problem in the world its nice to have makes the map for me more fun to play
15:43 Knif3rism: 03:38:565 (218565|0) -  can add a ln here for synth sound
15:43 Knif3rism: 03:38:019 (218019|2) -  same here
15:43 Knif3rism: 03:40:201 (220201|3) - same
15:44 wamster2: oh ok, still working to improve my consistency XD
15:44 Knif3rism: it's alright kek
15:46 Knif3rism: 03:27:656 (207656|2) -  same kek
15:48 Knif3rism: why is this 01:32:428 (92428|3,92565|3,92837|3,92974|3,93247|3,93383|3) - different to this 01:23:701 (83701|3,83837|3,84110|3,84247|3,84519|3,84656|3,84928|3,85065|3,85337|3) -  ?
15:48 wamster2: oh ok, fixed
15:48 Knif3rism: they're the same 
15:48 Knif3rism: so do either one but don't do both just to make it a bit more consistent
15:50 wamster2: fixed
15:50 Knif3rism: hmm let's see
15:51 Knif3rism: 01:55:747 (115747|1,115747|2,115883|0,115883|3,116019|2,116019|1,116156|1,116156|0,116292|0,116292|3,116428|1,116428|2,116565|3,116565|0,116565|1,116701|3,116701|2,116837|2,116837|0,116974|0,116974|1) -  this entire section of the song is missing LNs if you want to do 01:57:110 (117110|2,117383|1,117519|0) -  I suggest mapping LNs to the synth again to make it more consistent xd
15:52 Knif3rism: apologies if I sound too nitpicky xd
15:53 wamster2: nah its okay XD, i really need suggestions cuz im a newbie in mapping heheh
15:53 Knif3rism: ah okay
15:54 Knif3rism: I suggest changing this 01:04:201 (64201|0,64201|3,64201|2,64337|2,64474|3,64610|2,64747|2,64747|3,64883|2,65019|3,65156|2,65292|3,65292|2,65292|1) - into something like this 01:04:201 (64201|0,64201|3,64201|2,64337|2,64474|3,64610|2,64747|2,64747|3,64883|2,65019|3,65156|2,65292|3,65292|2,65292|1) -  much more friendlier and doesn't strain one hand too hard
15:54 wamster2: 01:55:747 (115747|1,115747|2,115883|0,115883|3,116019|2,116019|1,116156|1,116156|0,116292|0,116292|3,116428|1,116428|2,116565|3,116565|0,116565|1,116701|3,116701|2,116837|2,116837|0,116974|0,116974|1) - about this, ill think about it, whether ill mAke it LNs or not for the whole section
15:54 Knif3rism: I see
15:54 Knif3rism: hmm
15:56 Knif3rism: I'm merely suggesting, I'm not pointing big errors here, just making it more consistent as a map, you can take my suggestions or not its fine \o/
15:56 Knif3rism: I won't be offended if you don't take my suggestions lol
15:56 Knif3rism: dw
15:56 wamster2: hehe its fine,
15:56 wamster2: consistency is really my big enemy right now hahaha
15:57 Knif3rism: ah alright
15:59 Knif3rism: 02:01:747 (121747|2,121815|1,121883|0,121951|1) -  if you're going to change it, keep stuff like that, that is fine
16:00 wamster2: what do you mean in this part? 02:01:747 (121747|2,121815|1,121883|0,121951|1) -
16:01 Knif3rism: because the synth is like 1/4, a 1/4 ln sorta burst would be uncomfortable to play imo, especially with a triple right after it
16:05 wamster2: oh, ok. But i think ill keep it cuz i like it personally hehehehe, and its a rare occurence for this map so i want to give him a chance since this map are full of jacks haha
16:05 Knif3rism: alright
16:05 Knif3rism: hmm
16:06 Knif3rism: I don't there's anything else that I can see from your map tbh
16:06 Knif3rism: I think that just about covers all the things I can see
16:07 Knif3rism: hmm yeah
16:08 wamster2: oh ok sir, thanks for your time, it really helped me a lot, ill update my later since i got some mods for this day XD. thanks a lot for your help
16:08 Knif3rism: 'aight good luck on your map!
16:08 Knif3rism: \o/
16:09 wamster2: yeah thanks XD
wamster2
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[ Junko ] wrote:

Teminite Mod Requested

|1|2|3|4|

01:00:519 (60519|2,60656|2,60792|2,60928|2,60928|1,61065|1,61065|2,61201|1,61201|0,61201|2,61337|1,61337|0,61337|2) - Weird Patterns to be fair, you could just change it to normal notes and make them jacks. If not just keep it the way it is. This is just my opinion, since I love Jack maps.

01:01:747 (61747|1,61883|2) - Now in this section you could actually just add 1/8 holds.

01:02:019 - 01:03:656 - Now this part felt smooth, I really enjoyed this part.

01:04:337 (64337|2,64474|3,64610|2) - I like this section, the idea of using the holds as trills, its pretty creative.

01:36:383 (96383|2,96383|1,96383|3,96656|0,96792|3,96928|3,96928|1,96928|0,97201|1,97337|0,97474|0,97474|1,97474|2,97747|2,97883|3,98019|3,98019|2,98019|1,98292|1,98428|0,98565|2,98565|0,98565|1,98837|1,98974|0,99110|0,99110|3,99110|1,99383|2,99519|3,99656|3,99656|2,99656|1,99928|1,100065|0,100201|0,100201|1,100201|2,100474|1,100610|3,100747|3,100747|2,100747|1,101019|1,101156|0,101292|0,101292|1,101292|2,101565|2,101701|1,101837|1,101837|3,101837|2,102110|3,102247|0,102383|0,102383|3,102383|2,102656|1,102792|3,102792|2,102928|2,102928|1,103201|1,103337|0,103474|0,103474|1,103474|3,103747|2,103883|3,104019|3,104019|2,104019|1,104292|1,104428|0,104565|0,104565|1,104565|2,104837|2,104974|3,105110|2,105110|1) - During this Section, I think you're able to add more notes and make it more difficult but in a fun way where there's jacks, and singles while holding. If not this works, because I really like the use of Holds and Doubles in there.

02:29:974 (149974|2,150110|2,150247|2,150383|1,150383|2,150519|2,150519|1,150656|0,150656|1,150656|2,150792|0,150792|2,150792|1) - This section same thing, you can add jacks or leave it like this, either way it works but since It keeps the feeling of jacks in it.

03:26:019 (206019|1,206019|2,206019|0,206292|2,206292|3,206565|1,206565|0,206565|3,206837|0,206837|2,207110|1,207110|3,207383|0,207383|2,207519|1,207656|2,207656|3) - Instead of using long notes in here, you can make this section jumpy, due to the beat in it. I don't think Long notes match on this section, but i guess you can feel the rhythm in it.

03:28:201 (208201|3,208201|1,208201|0,208337|0,208337|2,208474|2,208474|1,208610|1,208610|3,208747|0,208747|2,209019|2,209019|1,209292|0,209292|3,209292|1,209565|2,209565|1,209837|0,209837|1,210383|2,210383|3,210519|0,210519|1,210656|0,210656|3,210792|2,210792|1,210928|2,210928|3,211201|0,211201|1,211474|1,211474|2,211474|3,211747|2,212019|3,212019|0,212019|1,212565|2,212565|1,212701|1,212701|3,212701|0,212837|0,212837|3,212974|3,212974|2,213110|0,213110|1,213247|3,213383|3,213383|1,213656|1,213656|2,213656|0,213928|0,213928|3,213928|2) - Same thing here, i feel the jacks more instead of Long notes.

03:43:474 - 03:51:656 - Um... Overused, you can just keep it simple instead of using short holds. But I kinda like it.

Overall I Approve your map, I really enjoyed it, some patterns were meh, but I still enjoyed them. I hope this map, gets Qualified or Ranked in the future, because I want more Jack maps. I hope this helped if not no Kudosu for me xD. But I hope you keep working on it, in till it becomes a master piece :D


Thanks for the mod and the compliments! :) :)
Virtue-
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Virtue-


Hi there, from Ngeng Familiy Mania Queue! and Christmas☆Queue 2016

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- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : NO!
- Files : OK!

col 1|2|3|4

first, i wanna remind you about this http://puu.sh/tagus/4850b009ad.png pls don't try to kill the beginners =w=
second, fix all of the patterns. if u ask why, then my answer will be same ^

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  • well... i don't really mind the normal like this (it's ez lol) but in here i pretend to be a beginner. and after playing this diff for a long time i've found many umcomfortable, please make the patterns like this :
    - Kicks : single
    - Snares : double
    - Hihats : single or maybe u don't want to put any of it
    - Crashes : double
    - Another instruments : single LN or normal note
  1. 00:43:474 (43474|0,43474|3,43747|2,44019|3,44019|0) - delete this pls 00:43:747 (43747|2) - it's really unnecessary, try this http://puu.sh/tah8k/5c330f65f6.png
  2. from 00:44:565 - until 00:59:292 - so, 00:44:565 (44565|2,44565|3,44701|0,44837|1,44974|2,45110|0,45110|1,45247|3,45383|2,45519|0,45656|2,45656|3,45792|1,45928|2,46065|1,46201|3,46201|0) - for this part and so on, i think it better to give it jacks http://puu.sh/tahNC/65382b41b9.png
  3. 01:00:110 (60110|3,60110|0) - single
  4. 01:21:928 - missed here
  5. 01:38:292 - ^
  6. 01:53:837 - until 02:02:565 - well, you really want to kill the beginners don't you? =w= fix it pls change 01:53:974 (113974|0,114110|1,114247|2,114519|1,114656|2,114792|3,115065|3,115201|2,115337|0,115747|2,115883|1) - into LNs or something easier pls
  7. 02:14:019 - until 02:29:837 - same mod with the 2nd mod up there ^

    well, i don't find any errors :/
    but i'm concern about the patterns, better do some selfmod owo
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