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Mentai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 10, 2017 at 9:37:14 AM

Artist: Aiobahn & Yunomi
Title: Ginga Tetsudou no Penguin ft. nicamoq (Stripe.P Remix)
Tags: penguin of galactic railroad glitch hop HB24 Starset Log Off Now Akitoshi Left Shiratoi Jonawaga
BPM: 110
Filesize: 8035kb
Play Time: 03:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Hard (2.64 stars, 375 notes)
  2. Left's Galaxy Express (5.71 stars, 545 notes)
  3. LogOffHB's Insane (4.88 stars, 539 notes)
  4. Normal (1.71 stars, 179 notes)
  5. Shiwaga's Light Insane (3.48 stars, 402 notes)
Download: Aiobahn & Yunomi - Ginga Tetsudou no Penguin ft. nicamoq (Stripe.P Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hitsounds by me and Left
Normal by me
Hard by Akitoshi
Light Insane Collab by Jonawaga and Shiratoi
Insane Collab by Starset and Log Off Now
by Left

> deetz' mapset

special thanks
Kaifin and Plaudible for helping me understand how to map low SR difficulties
Kaifin
hi

theres a higher quality version of this bg used in this ranked map: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/904257

audio quality, but you know that im sure

Easy > Advanced > Hard ????? why not just Easy Normal Hard, since the star rating of the easy and the hard

Easy

  1. perhaps ar 3 or 2 even for this diff, seems pretty high at 4 for the star rating
  2. 00:41:453 - deviating from the 1/1 rhythm with these 1/2 sliders seems odd to me, why not just keep using the 1/1 rhythm like 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4)? this 1/1 baseline captures the feel of the music a lot more
  3. 00:40:635 (2,3) - Easys + Normals (except in very specific exceptions) should be fully distance snapped to a variance of around 0.05x usually, here you break distance snap
  4. 00:45:544 (2) - here, i'd use a circle rather than a 1/1 slider and place a 1/1 on 00:46:090 - so that you are making the strong beat clickable, as it is the rhythm doesn't really represent anything in the song
  5. 00:39:544 (1) - all of your red anchor sliders are uneven in this diff, wasnt sure if it was intentional but its not lopsided enough to look nice, its just off enough to look bad :?
  6. 01:24:271 (2,3) - never do flow like this in lower diffs, new players have a hard time discerning slider heads from slider ends so they'll be 100% inclined to click the slider end here

    just going to stop here as these are the major notes that apply throughout the diff, i want you to go through and check for the following things in your difficulty just as rules of thumb:
  7. 1. are all major beats (in this case, white ticks such as 01:49:362) clickable, and if they aren't, why?
  8. 2. is my rhythm following logic + consistent throughout segments of the map, barring specific emphasis which would be very little in such a low SR diff
  9. 3. is my flow intuitive? is every single point A to point B 100% clear to the player, avoiding flows like 01:24:271 (2,3) which can cause reading issues
  10. 4. am i following distance snap, and if i'm not does it make consistent and logical sense? (such as in https://osu.ppy.sh/s/494983 [Normal])

    these are just 4 pretty major "guidelines" that i saw being broken consistently throughout the diff, so is a bit of a place to start for mapping lower difficulties

    aesthetically, you also could use a lot of work but that comes after fixing the rhythm/DS/general ideas of the diff itself, an example being 02:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5)

    poke me in game if you have any questions and i can mod more thoroughly, but you're probably going to have to remap this diff if you're intending on ranking

actually, the same baselines sort of apply to the Advanced as well, so i think it would be a bit redundant to go into that diff as well

i recommend you study other lower diffs to see what general baselines look like for each difficulty level, and above all else pay attention to the rhythm, which is the fundamental part of lower difficulties

if you need help dont hesitate to message

don't worry about modding my map as well since i didn't exactly give complete feedback beyond baselines
Topic Starter
Mentai

Kaifin wrote:

hi

theres a higher quality version of this bg used in this ranked map: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/904257

audio quality, but you know that im sure

Easy > Advanced > Hard ????? why not just Easy Normal Hard, since the star rating of the easy and the hard

Easy

  1. perhaps ar 3 or 2 even for this diff, seems pretty high at 4 for the star rating
  2. 00:41:453 - deviating from the 1/1 rhythm with these 1/2 sliders seems odd to me, why not just keep using the 1/1 rhythm like 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4)? this 1/1 baseline captures the feel of the music a lot more
  3. 00:40:635 (2,3) - Easys + Normals (except in very specific exceptions) should be fully distance snapped to a variance of around 0.05x usually, here you break distance snap
  4. 00:45:544 (2) - here, i'd use a circle rather than a 1/1 slider and place a 1/1 on 00:46:090 - so that you are making the strong beat clickable, as it is the rhythm doesn't really represent anything in the song
  5. 00:39:544 (1) - all of your red anchor sliders are uneven in this diff, wasnt sure if it was intentional but its not lopsided enough to look nice, its just off enough to look bad :?
  6. 01:24:271 (2,3) - never do flow like this in lower diffs, new players have a hard time discerning slider heads from slider ends so they'll be 100% inclined to click the slider end here

    just going to stop here as these are the major notes that apply throughout the diff, i want you to go through and check for the following things in your difficulty just as rules of thumb:
  7. 1. are all major beats (in this case, white ticks such as 01:49:362) clickable, and if they aren't, why?
  8. 2. is my rhythm following logic + consistent throughout segments of the map, barring specific emphasis which would be very little in such a low SR diff
  9. 3. is my flow intuitive? is every single point A to point B 100% clear to the player, avoiding flows like 01:24:271 (2,3) which can cause reading issues
  10. 4. am i following distance snap, and if i'm not does it make consistent and logical sense? (such as in https://osu.ppy.sh/s/494983 [Normal])

    these are just 4 pretty major "guidelines" that i saw being broken consistently throughout the diff, so is a bit of a place to start for mapping lower difficulties

    aesthetically, you also could use a lot of work but that comes after fixing the rhythm/DS/general ideas of the diff itself, an example being 02:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5)

    poke me in game if you have any questions and i can mod more thoroughly, but you're probably going to have to remap this diff if you're intending on ranking

actually, the same baselines sort of apply to the Advanced as well, so i think it would be a bit redundant to go into that diff as well

i recommend you study other lower diffs to see what general baselines look like for each difficulty level, and above all else pay attention to the rhythm, which is the fundamental part of lower difficulties

if you need help dont hesitate to message

don't worry about modding my map as well since i didn't exactly give complete feedback beyond baselines

I'll work on this sometime today, school is just getting crazier every day. No worries though, I'll mod your map, even if it's just a diff or 2. Gonna give kids now since I know I will be remapping my easy diff anyway

EDIT: I took what you said in mind and remapped a bunch of flow and changed several things to 1/1. I think some comments on white ticks being clickable (mainly the reverse sliders in the kiai) should stay that way as there is no comfortable way of making these clickable without making the difficulty stupid easy because of the low bpm. Everything else was altered, and will be altered more in the future. Thanks : )
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osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:銀河鉄道のペンギン ft. nicamoq (Stripe.P Remix)
Artist:Aiobahn & Yunomi
ArtistUnicode:Aiobahn & Yunomi
Creator:Mentai
Version:Left's Extra
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Halliday
Hello! This is a M4M! ;)

General
-The intro is kinda unnecesary (and long), half of it it's just random noises, I recommend you cut the mp3 and make it start on 00:17:726 - .
-Another thing, if you want to get it ranked, you'll have to lower audio bitrate, right now it is 320 kbps and the max is 192 kbps. You'll have to recompress with an audio software and re-adjust the offset afterwards! (If you don't know how, feel free to ask me, I can do it for you :D)

Now, I think is pointless, I mean, what's wrong with wanting the best audio quality? xD But according to #modhelp, this is to prevent mp3 snatch and reduce the map file size. Hmmm... Not worthy, but needs to be done ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ So... Cut, and recompress the mp3.

-Probably remove "nicamoq" from tags, since it is already on Title.

-Nice pussy on the bg.

Easy
00:36:271 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved like this:


00:48:271 (1,2) - These would look nice as a blanket, like:


01:10:090 - It seems like you are missing that strong white tick, place a circle there.

01:20:999 (3,4,5) - I think It would look better if 01:22:090 (5) - stays in line and you place 01:23:181 (1) - higher, so it flows like:


01:24:271 (2,3) - Improve blanket.

Just move the 01:25:362 (3) - end point to x:280 y:60.

01:51:544 (3,4) - Improve blanket.

Just move 01:51:544 (3) - end point to x:104 y:300

01:56:999 (3,4) - Same, you could improve it like this:


02:36:271 (3,4,5) - Isnt 02:37:362 (5) - too close? The spacing is inconsistent:

02:39:544 (1,2) - Blanket can definitely improve, look how perfect it can be:

<3 <3 <3

02:43:908 (1,2) - Same ^^^

03:08:181 (3,4) - Improve blanket, make it look like this:


03:12:271 (1,2) - Move the 03:12:271 (1) - end point to x:124 y:168 to improve the blanket.

That's for Easy, just those slightly imperfect blankets. Small details, but they can really make you map look a lot better. Quoting my country's president:

"Lo bueno no se cuenta, pero cuenta mucho." 8-) 8-) 8-)

Normal
00:35:181 (1,2,3,4) - The slider are too curve, you are losing a very nice oportunity to use blankets.

02:22:090 (1,2) - Same ^^^

00:43:908 (1,2) - You could blanket, fixing the simmetry afterwards ofc.


01:00:817 (6) - It's bent belly looks kinda ugly.


01:10:090 - Same as Easy, place a circle there.

01:18:271 (1,2) - Improve blanket, like:


01:31:090 (8,1) - Improve blanket. Im getting tired so I think I'll stop putting the respective screenshots xD I have done many examples this far so I think you know what to do (Use the slider ball/ring and approach circles to blanket perfectly).

01:35:181 (6,7) - Improve blanket.

01:43:362 (5,6) - ^^^

01:45:271 (1) - Probably too bented. Make it more like 01:49:635 (1) - , looks nicer imo.

01:59:181 (2) - 02:30:271 (5) - Same ^^^

02:56:999 (1,2,3) - These 3 curved sliders in a row dont look that good, how about something like this or idk:


03:00:817 (9,1) - The blanket could be slightly improved, make it like this:


03:05:181 (8,1) - Improve blanket.


03:17:181 (1,2,3) - I feel like 03:18:817 - should be clickable, how about this:

Just a suggestion. You would have to the same with 03:21:544 (6,7,8) - and 03:25:908 (1,2,3) - .

That's it for Normal.

Akitoshi's Hard
00:42:817 (4,5) - Why not simmetrical?

01:07:908 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I know what you tried to do, but feels to empty. Something like this would'nt harm:


02:25:362 (3,1) - Move the 02:26:453 (1) - end point to x:68 y:244 to improve the blanket just a little. Like this:


02:36:271 (3,1) - Improve the blanket, make it look like this:


02:37:362 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Just like before, my suggestion is you do it like:


Excellent GD!! :D Even the blankets are perfect. Nice eye to details 8-) 8-) 8-)

Sorry, I definitely don't know how to mod Extras yet :(

So that would be it!

Since it's a M4M, could you take a look to my map then?

It is called Maite Zaitut, spanish folk-metal.

Thank you, and good luck!
Plaudible
M4M for yoo
just modding 2, srry ;w; long song, and I trust akitoshi/left, they're solid mappers.


General
Your audio bitrate is higher than 192 kbps, and is unrankable. Please compress it accordingly.

Easy
  1. 00:35:181 (1,2) - Flow resets like this are poor for newbies, and should really be used sparingly or rarely if appropriate. You make it very straightforward in the next parts, just make this flow nicely.
  2. 00:36:271 (2,3) - Improve this blanket. Easy fix - move slider midpoint to x153 y333, but just be sure to adjust the sliders ahead distance-wise accordingly.
  3. 00:43:908 (1,2,3) - Structuring things like this looks nice. Could you stack 00:46:090 (3,4,1) on it so it repeats it? :)
  4. 00:50:453 (3,1) - Stack?
  5. 00:51:271 (4,5) - Not really a fan of how these look, though honestly I'm not too sure how to fix. Play around with rotation angles and stuff maybe.
  6. 01:06:817 (2) - This is a more appropriate use of a flow reset, follows vocals and is in kiai.
  7. 01:10:090 please put a note here.
  8. 01:17:044 Did you mean to put the break like this? You put a custom end on it lol. If it was unintentional, click and drag the grey bar right.
  9. 01:19:908 (2,3,4) - If you're gonna do this might as well make it a perfect square :u
  10. 01:20:999 (3,4,5,6) - Putting a lot of circles in a row like this is a difficulty spike. It's a relatively calm part of the song - can you adjust the rhythm here to maybe include more sliders?
  11. 01:39:544 (4,5) - :( sharp angles like this look odd. http://puu.sh/rQ2i8/8e42308bdb.jpg ?
  12. 2:20:317 same issue with the break again, but if intended, ignore.
  13. 02:22:090 (1,2) - Again, please avoid random flow resets. Remember your audience is newer players who may have never played a map before. Making good flow is crucial for them.
  14. 02:26:453 (1,2,3,4) - This is more appropriate here I guess, it's a good way to map the vocals. Please make the zigzaggy thing even though, just copy paste 1,2 and DS after so it all looks the same.
  15. 02:29:726 (6,1) - Not as bad as others but still weird flow reset
  16. 02:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 things. 4 and 5 can be a slider, don't need to spam circles, matches vocals better. Also, this shape is just downright awful :/ Could you repeat the zigzag thing?
  17. 02:38:181 (6,7) - This is a hard overlap to play and read for newbies, please straighten it out a bit at least.
  18. 02:39:544 (1,2) - Blanket most certainly needs adjusting - open it up a bit, fit it better. Also, could you distance snap it? Honestly, you could probably get away with just doing ctrl+g on the slider, but please don't put them so close, it'll throw off players.
  19. 02:46:090 (2) - ^
  20. 02:48:271 (1,2) - Again, unnecessary flow reset. There's no reason to do this with the song, and you don't do it later. It's inconsistent, just make it flow nicely.
  21. 02:56:999 (1,2) - Personal preference, could you make this symmetrical? :) Just rotate it a bit so 2 splits 1 evenly if that makes sense.
  22. 03:00:271 (4,5,1) - 4 definitely needs to be adjusted a bit, the overall flow of the sliders is very misleading. Newbies click and drag the sliders to the end - and this'll just be hard and weird to them.
  23. 03:04:635 (2,3) - Make a little less sharp
  24. 03:08:999 (4,5,1) - This'd be a neat place to use rotation angles, like 20 to 30 or something. Too hard curves again.
  25. 03:26:453 (2,3) - ^

Normal
  1. Flow resets are a great way to emphasize something in mapping, and normals are an okay time to start using them. I take issue with 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4) though. You emphasize the lower pitch and less important vocals with harsh flow, and you give the intense part of the song very little intensity, flow wise. :( please fix.
  2. 00:43:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - This really confuses me. You start mapping the 1/2 notes, okay. But in the part before this you don't map any? The song has changed not a single bit. Please map it consistently with the song. Either change the first section to include 1/2 rhythms too or make this all 1/1 as well.
  3. 00:59:999 (5,6) - Not a fan of very curved sliders like this, doesn't really fit D: They don't blanket well and this flow is awkward for no particular reason. Try http://puu.sh/rQ3nF/51548ea2df.jpg
  4. 01:01:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - :( You need to still use distance spacing for normal IMO. From here I'm gonna guess a lot of your map isn't distance snapped. Could you please snap everything? Easy and Normal you really shouldn't break DS. Hard it's more flexible.
  5. 01:03:544 (1,2,3) - Your flow here is emphasizing strangely. The higher pitch noise is on 3, so it should be more emphasized than 1 and 2, and yet you emphasize 1 and 2 with weird flow more than 2 to 3.
  6. 01:18:271 (1,2) - Here is a good example of where you could emphasize with flow, maybe something like http://puu.sh/rQ3vG/112aadc0a4.jpg
  7. 01:22:090 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I can tell your DS is weird because of this, it's suddenly a lot closer to each other. Again, please remember to distance snap, it's very important to so newbies understand and can read the difficulty well!
  8. 01:29:453 (5) - I know this is in the song, but 1/4 is usually not appropriate for a normal, even with sliders. It's something you see in hard difficulties usually or higher. A 1/2 slider is fine. You repeat this a lot, but I still strongly suggest you change that.
  9. 01:32:726 (2,4) - Stack? They should be the same distance, it's a normal and the rhythm didn't change. Again, please DS! (wont say again, srry xd)
  10. 01:36:271 (1,3) - Could you move these a bit so they don't touch?
  11. 01:45:271 (1) - Can you set sampleset to soft here? The loud hitsound from your normal custom hitsounds is really clashing the quiet part of the song.
  12. 01:48:271 (5) - Just commenting, I can't unhear "dank meme" whenever she sings here T_T
  13. Not gonna bug you with flow suggestions anymore, I'm sure you can find them now and figure them out yourself :) Gonna look for other stuffs.
  14. 01:59:999 (3,4,5) - nonononononononononononono. Please don't put triples in a normal, they're a hard concept for new players and should definitely not be included in a low difficulty like this. The song is still the same from other parts of the chorus, keep it consistent.
  15. 02:02:999 (1) - Repeating a reverse like this for a long time can throw you off. Could you make 2 reverses?
  16. 02:21:544 (1,1) - Again, big nono for normal difficulties. Do not do 1/4 kicksliders in a normal for any map. Do a 1/2 slider onto 02:22:090 (1), or anything else, j ust not 1/4 pls.

  17. 02:58:908 (4,5,6) - no
  18. 03:03:271 (4,5,6) - ^ please remove the rest later in the song, 1/4 again, is never appropriate for a normal like this :( please no more kick sliders or triples, save that for the hard.
  19. 03:21:544 (6,7,8) - distance issue example

Really want to emphasize a few things that are very prominent in both your easy and normal.
  1. Please, use distance spacing. Spacing is key for new players to learn how to read notes and rhythms. Randomly changing it can confuse
    players a lot. Think from a new player's perspective when mapping an easy/normal - would this be hard for a newer player to be able to figure out?
  2. Don't be rough with the flow in easy or normal. Easy difficulties should have really good flow altogether and should rarely reset it or change it dramatically. This may be someone's first map - make it actually easy. Normals you can be a bit more creative with.
  3. No triples or 1/4 kicksliders in a normal. This is a big nono unless the BPM is low enough to be playable, which is rare. They are hard concepts that should only be in hard difficulties and up, please!
Work on the easy/normal a bit and then this set looks pretty good so far! I really do like this song, thanks for introducing it to me ^^ good luck~

Quick comment on Left's Extra, don't forget to add kiai's!
Topic Starter
Mentai

HallidayASR wrote:

Hello! This is a M4M! ;)

General
-The intro is kinda unnecesary (and long), half of it it's just random noises, I recommend you cut the mp3 and make it start on 00:17:726 - .
-Another thing, if you want to get it ranked, you'll have to lower audio bitrate, right now it is 320 kbps and the max is 192 kbps. You'll have to recompress with an audio software and re-adjust the offset afterwards! (If you don't know how, feel free to ask me, I can do it for you :D) ranked mapset has it, so it does not matter

Now, I think is pointless, I mean, what's wrong with wanting the best audio quality? xD But according to #modhelp, this is to prevent mp3 snatch and reduce the map file size. Hmmm... Not worthy, but needs to be done ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ So... Cut, and recompress the mp3. don't worry, i know

-Probably remove "nicamoq" from tags, since it is already on Title.

-Nice pussy on the bg.

Easy
00:36:271 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved like this:


00:48:271 (1,2) - These would look nice as a blanket, like:


01:10:090 - It seems like you are missing that strong white tick, place a circle there. i think this beat is ignorable

01:20:999 (3,4,5) - I think It would look better if 01:22:090 (5) - stays in line and you place 01:23:181 (1) - higher, so it flows like:


01:24:271 (2,3) - Improve blanket.

Just move the 01:25:362 (3) - end point to x:280 y:60.

01:51:544 (3,4) - Improve blanket.

Just move 01:51:544 (3) - end point to x:104 y:300

01:56:999 (3,4) - Same, you could improve it like this:


02:36:271 (3,4,5) - Isnt 02:37:362 (5) - too close? The spacing is inconsistent:

02:39:544 (1,2) - Blanket can definitely improve, look how perfect it can be:

<3 <3 <3

02:43:908 (1,2) - Same ^^^

03:08:181 (3,4) - Improve blanket, make it look like this:


03:12:271 (1,2) - Move the 03:12:271 (1) - end point to x:124 y:168 to improve the blanket.

That's for Easy, just those slightly imperfect blankets. Small details, but they can really make you map look a lot better. Quoting my country's president:

"Lo bueno no se cuenta, pero cuenta mucho." 8-) 8-) 8-) fixed literally everything else. thanks for your attention to detail

Normal
00:35:181 (1,2,3,4) - The slider are too curve, you are losing a very nice oportunity to use blankets.

02:22:090 (1,2) - Same ^^^

00:43:908 (1,2) - You could blanket, fixing the simmetry afterwards ofc.


01:00:817 (6) - It's bent belly looks kinda ugly.


01:10:090 - Same as Easy, place a circle there. ignorable beat

01:18:271 (1,2) - Improve blanket, like:


01:31:090 (8,1) - Improve blanket. Im getting tired so I think I'll stop putting the respective screenshots xD I have done many examples this far so I think you know what to do (Use the slider ball/ring and approach circles to blanket perfectly).

01:35:181 (6,7) - Improve blanket.

01:43:362 (5,6) - ^^^

01:45:271 (1) - Probably too bented. Make it more like 01:49:635 (1) - , looks nicer imo.

01:59:181 (2) - 02:30:271 (5) - Same ^^^

02:56:999 (1,2,3) - These 3 curved sliders in a row dont look that good, how about something like this or idk:


03:00:817 (9,1) - The blanket could be slightly improved, make it like this:


03:05:181 (8,1) - Improve blanket.


03:17:181 (1,2,3) - I feel like 03:18:817 - should be clickable, how about this:

Just a suggestion. You would have to the same with 03:21:544 (6,7,8) - and 03:25:908 (1,2,3) - .

That's it for Normal. fixed the rest


Since it's a M4M, could you take a look to my map then? soon i promise

It is called Maite Zaitut, spanish folk-metal.

Thank you, and good luck!
Topic Starter
Mentai

Plaudible wrote:

M4M for yoo
just modding 2, srry ;w; long song, and I trust akitoshi/left, they're solid mappers.


General
Your audio bitrate is higher than 192 kbps, and is unrankable. Please compress it accordingly.
in the future

Easy
  1. 00:35:181 (1,2) - Flow resets like this are poor for newbies, and should really be used sparingly or rarely if appropriate. You make it very straightforward in the next parts, just make this flow nicely. did something
  2. 00:36:271 (2,3) - Improve this blanket. Easy fix - move slider midpoint to x153 y333, but just be sure to adjust the sliders ahead distance-wise accordingly. almost all blankets were fixed by the mod previous to yours
  3. 00:43:908 (1,2,3) - Structuring things like this looks nice. Could you stack 00:46:090 (3,4,1) on it so it repeats it? :) i see
  4. 00:50:453 (3,1) - Stack? did a different stack, fixed a ds issue anyway
  5. 00:51:271 (4,5) - Not really a fan of how these look, though honestly I'm not too sure how to fix. Play around with rotation angles and stuff maybe. ^
  6. 01:06:817 (2) - This is a more appropriate use of a flow reset, follows vocals and is in kiai.b
  7. 01:10:090 please put a note here. i really think this is ignorable, but 2 for 2 have said something about it. if someone else does, i will too
  8. 01:17:044 Did you mean to put the break like this? You put a custom end on it lol. If it was unintentional, click and drag the grey bar right. lol what to heck
  9. 01:19:908 (2,3,4) - If you're gonna do this might as well make it a perfect square :u hmm, the circles are curvalinear, maybe i might need to change something later on
  10. 01:20:999 (3,4,5,6) - Putting a lot of circles in a row like this is a difficulty spike. It's a relatively calm part of the song - can you adjust the rhythm here to maybe include more sliders? i disagree with this, the song is 110 bpm, and can be arguable considered 220, so this rhythm i think is ok for easy
  11. 01:39:544 (4,5) - :( sharp angles like this look odd. http://puu.sh/rQ2i8/8e42308bdb.jpg ? made it just slightly less, my style of mapping is very linear and sharp
  12. 2:20:317 same issue with the break again, but if intended, ignore.lol
  13. 02:22:090 (1,2) - Again, please avoid random flow resets. Remember your audience is newer players who may have never played a map before. Making good flow is crucial for them. the vocals are very staccato and sharp, i actually think the reset works here
  14. 02:26:453 (1,2,3,4) - This is more appropriate here I guess, it's a good way to map the vocals. Please make the zigzaggy thing even though, just copy paste 1,2 and DS after so it all looks the same. i agree
  15. 02:29:726 (6,1) - Not as bad as others but still weird flow reset changed some stuff in this section
  16. 02:35:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 things. 4 and 5 can be a slider, don't need to spam circles, matches vocals better. Also, this shape is just downright awful :/ Could you repeat the zigzag thing? i think it looks better with the slider now
  17. 02:38:181 (6,7) - This is a hard overlap to play and read for newbies, please straighten it out a bit at least. sure
  18. 02:39:544 (1,2) - Blanket most certainly needs adjusting - open it up a bit, fit it better. Also, could you distance snap it? Honestly, you could probably get away with just doing ctrl+g on the slider, but please don't put them so close, it'll throw off players. other mod got it
  19. 02:46:090 (2) - ^ ^
  20. 02:48:271 (1,2) - Again, unnecessary flow reset. There's no reason to do this with the song, and you don't do it later. It's inconsistent, just make it flow nicely. i agree
  21. 02:56:999 (1,2) - Personal preference, could you make this symmetrical? :) Just rotate it a bit so 2 splits 1 evenly if that makes sense. yep
  22. 03:00:271 (4,5,1) - 4 definitely needs to be adjusted a bit, the overall flow of the sliders is very misleading. Newbies click and drag the sliders to the end - and this'll just be hard and weird to them. sure
  23. 03:04:635 (2,3) - Make a little less sharp copypasted the 2 slider
  24. 03:08:999 (4,5,1) - This'd be a neat place to use rotation angles, like 20 to 30 or something. Too hard curves again. did a thing
  25. 03:26:453 (2,3) - ^

Normal
  1. Flow resets are a great way to emphasize something in mapping, and normals are an okay time to start using them. I take issue with 00:35:181 (1,2,3,4) though. You emphasize the lower pitch and less important vocals with harsh flow, and you give the intense part of the song very little intensity, flow wise. :( please fix. did clockwise flow
  2. 00:43:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - This really confuses me. You start mapping the 1/2 notes, okay. But in the part before this you don't map any? The song has changed not a single bit. Please map it consistently with the song. Either change the first section to include 1/2 rhythms too or make this all 1/1 as well. done
  3. 00:59:999 (5,6) - Not a fan of very curved sliders like this, doesn't really fit D: They don't blanket well and this flow is awkward for no particular reason. Try http://puu.sh/rQ3nF/51548ea2df.jpg made the curve subtle instead
  4. 01:01:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - :( You need to still use distance spacing for normal IMO. From here I'm gonna guess a lot of your map isn't distance snapped. Could you please snap everything? Easy and Normal you really shouldn't break DS. Hard it's more flexible. it is, the 1/1 distances are too awkwardly large to place circles for them, so both times i use this structure, i use 1.00 ds just for the circles
  5. 01:03:544 (1,2,3) - Your flow here is emphasizing strangely. The higher pitch noise is on 3, so it should be more emphasized than 1 and 2, and yet you emphasize 1 and 2 with weird flow more than 2 to 3. edited
  6. 01:18:271 (1,2) - Here is a good example of where you could emphasize with flow, maybe something like http://puu.sh/rQ3vG/112aadc0a4.jpg made a subtle change
  7. 01:22:090 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I can tell your DS is weird because of this, it's suddenly a lot closer to each other. Again, please remember to distance snap, it's very important to so newbies understand and can read the difficulty well!completely accidental, shouldve been 1.4 rather than 1.3
  8. 01:29:453 (5) - I know this is in the song, but 1/4 is usually not appropriate for a normal, even with sliders. It's something you see in hard difficulties usually or higher. A 1/2 slider is fine. You repeat this a lot, but I still strongly suggest you change that. all 1/4 is staying unless it is deemed unrankable tbh
  9. 01:32:726 (2,4) - Stack? They should be the same distance, it's a normal and the rhythm didn't change. Again, please DS! (wont say again, srry xd) please refer to the top right of the editor. it is .05 variance used to subtly reuse the same circle location. this is done correctly here
  10. 01:36:271 (1,3) - Could you move these a bit so they don't touch? edited a lot of stuff here
  11. 01:45:271 (1) - Can you set sampleset to soft here? The loud hitsound from your normal custom hitsounds is really clashing the quiet part of the song. have you looked at the sampleset? its S:c1
  12. 01:48:271 (5) - Just commenting, I can't unhear "dank meme" whenever she sings here T_T looooooool
  13. Not gonna bug you with flow suggestions anymore, I'm sure you can find them now and figure them out yourself :) Gonna look for other stuffs.
  14. 01:59:999 (3,4,5) - nonononononononononononono. Please don't put triples in a normal, they're a hard concept for new players and should definitely not be included in a low difficulty like this. The song is still the same from other parts of the chorus, keep it consistent.this is more of an indicator of whats to come in the next kiai
  15. 02:02:999 (1) - Repeating a reverse like this for a long time can throw you off. Could you make 2 reverses? well, i like to think of the song sounds like a pendulum at this part, and this is the only real way to map this feeling. maybe it will change one day
  16. 02:21:544 (1,1) - Again, big nono for normal difficulties. Do not do 1/4 kicksliders in a normal for any map. Do a 1/2 slider onto 02:22:090 (1), or anything else, j ust not 1/4 pls. do i have to rename this advanced again?

  17. 02:58:908 (4,5,6) - no ^
  18. 03:03:271 (4,5,6) - ^ please remove the rest later in the song, 1/4 again, is never appropriate for a normal like this :( please no more kick sliders or triples, save that for the hard. ^
  19. 03:21:544 (6,7,8) - distance issue example no idea how this happened

Really want to emphasize a few things that are very prominent in both your easy and normal.
  1. Please, use distance spacing. Spacing is key for new players to learn how to read notes and rhythms. Randomly changing it can confuse
    players a lot. Think from a new player's perspective when mapping an easy/normal - would this be hard for a newer player to be able to figure out? i do use ds? it increased in normal during kiais sequentially, simply to add less monotony.
  2. Don't be rough with the flow in easy or normal. Easy difficulties should have really good flow altogether and should rarely reset it or change it dramatically. This may be someone's first map - make it actually easy. Normals you can be a bit more creative with.
  3. No triples or 1/4 kicksliders in a normal. This is a big nono unless the BPM is low enough to be playable, which is rare. They are hard concepts that should only be in hard difficulties and up, please! i originally called this difficulty advanced so people could expect 1/4. i think 110 bpm is a more than reasonable bpm to use 1/4, i live with friends who play 1 star difficulties still and they played them no problem. i will stick with the 1/4 unless EVERYONE complains about it
Work on the easy/normal a bit and then this set looks pretty good so far! I really do like this song, thanks for introducing it to me ^^ good luck~ very informative mod, im not one to agree with people very often, but your points were strong. i will mod your map tomorrow morning : )

Quick comment on Left's Extra, don't forget to add kiai's! Left did not add kiai's intentionally)
Really good mod, i can't add the normal mod yet, but i will later tonight, thanks!
Plaudible
ahh, forgot about kiais adding DS, but i'm not too sure about that. Definitely keep consistent in easy, in normal keep it to minor changes. I still pointed out some inconsistent distances that you should look at ;u
Akitoshi

HallidayASR wrote:

Akitoshi's Hard
00:42:817 (4,5) - Why not simmetrical? isn't parallel enough?

01:07:908 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I know what you tried to do, but feels to empty. Something like this would'nt harm: prioritizing drums


02:25:362 (3,1) - Move the 02:26:453 (1) - end point to x:68 y:244 to improve the blanket just a little. Like this:


02:36:271 (3,1) - Improve the blanket, make it look like this:


02:37:362 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Just like before, my suggestion is you do it like: same


Excellent GD!! :D Even the blankets are perfect. Nice eye to details 8-) 8-) 8-)
thanks~

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Left
no kiai is intentional, if it's more issued, i'll consider fixing it.
Logic Agent
hi m4m stuff.

[General]
  1. holy mp3 quality, 192kbps is the max for ranking
  2. Left's Extra has no kiai's, having different kiai's in gd's is fine but why remove the kiai altogether?
  3. Widescreen Support is on in every diff except Easy, toggle it off
[Easy]
  1. there's some things coming up in aimod, just doublecheck those
  2. 00:39:544 (1,2,3,4) - i see what you were going for here with the alternating slider shapes but imo it'd look nicer if you did the same 2, then different 2 instead of alternating
  3. 00:46:090 (3,4) - i think this would be better as 2 1/1 sliders
  4. 00:51:271 (4,5,1) - this rhythm is too complicated for an Easy, I reccomend toning it down
  5. 00:54:817 (3,4,5) - rhythms like this require too much clicking for a new player, and I reccomend reworking it with that in mind. 1/2 sliders in an Easy are pretty dodgy
  6. 01:03:544 (3,4,5) - here again, not gonna point it out from now on
  7. 01:08:726 (1) - maybe do this instead?
  8. 01:29:726 (3,4) - blanket these?
  9. 02:02:453 (1) - nc?
  10. 02:26:453 (1) - this should probably be at the end of 02:25:362 (4)
[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:40:090 (3,4,5) - even out the spacing between these?
  2. 00:48:817 (3,4,5) - here too?
  3. 01:20:999 (1) - move this to the right?
  4. 02:24:817 (2) - im nitpicking, but move this to the left some?
the top diff looks super clean and it's very fun, so I have nothing to say there

cute song and fun map, gl!
Akitoshi

Logic Agent wrote:

[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:40:090 (3,4,5) - even out the spacing between these?
  2. 00:48:817 (3,4,5) - here too?
  3. 01:20:999 (1) - move this to the right? nah that's triangle
  4. 02:24:817 (2) - im nitpicking, but move this to the left some? no thnx
thanks

asd
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:銀河鉄道のペンギン ft. nicamoq (Stripe.P Remix)
Artist:Aiobahn & Yunomi
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441,207,193090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Mentai

Logic Agent wrote:

hi m4m stuff.

[General]
  1. holy mp3 quality, 192kbps is the max for ranking i know, i will change after i get my GDs from everyone and the background so i don't have to redo offset and snapping at different times
  2. Left's Extra has no kiai's, having different kiai's in gd's is fine but why remove the kiai altogether?
  3. Widescreen Support is on in every diff except Easy, toggle it off
[Easy]
  1. there's some things coming up in aimod, just doublecheck those
  2. 00:39:544 (1,2,3,4) - i see what you were going for here with the alternating slider shapes but imo it'd look nicer if you did the same 2, then different 2 instead of alternating i guess so
  3. 00:46:090 (3,4) - i think this would be better as 2 1/1 sliders just reusing locations and structure
  4. 00:51:271 (4,5,1) - this rhythm is too complicated for an Easy, I reccomend toning it down realize that most ideologies of how beatmaps have certain rhythm constraints don't really work for a song this slow
  5. 00:54:817 (3,4,5) - rhythms like this require too much clicking for a new player, and I reccomend reworking it with that in mind. 1/2 sliders in an Easy are pretty dodgy think that the bpm is in 220, kind of like mentai cosmic by alacat. these would be a mixture of 2/1 and 1/1 rhythms
  6. 01:03:544 (3,4,5) - here again, not gonna point it out from now on not changing. it would become stupidly easy, and its an easy diff, not a beginner diff
  7. 01:08:726 (1) - maybe do this instead? since 3 people have said to put a circle on this downbeat, i will
  8. 01:29:726 (3,4) - blanket these? made it more noticeable
  9. 02:02:453 (1) - nc? for now
  10. 02:26:453 (1) - this should probably be at the end of 02:25:362 (4) hmm, if i had a reason why, then maybe. i had a linear idea for the combo here
[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:40:090 (3,4,5) - even out the spacing between these?
  2. 00:48:817 (3,4,5) - here too?
  3. 01:20:999 (1) - move this to the right?
  4. 02:24:817 (2) - im nitpicking, but move this to the left some?
the top diff looks super clean and it's very fun, so I have nothing to say there

cute song and fun map, gl!
thanks for the mod, background change soon, audio when GDs are done
Tralen
Hello from m4m


Akitoshi's Hard

00:52:090 (2,3,4,5) - i think those stacks are to much for this diff, you should change for sliders or reverse sliders whatever u want.Those arenot the only ones

Starting this diff

01:10:362 (2) - this part can be mapped, why? cuz is special rhythm. diferent of the rest of map just think it


02:03:271 (2) - theres 3 or 4 notes missing Before entering the break


Thats it. Sorry if was little
Parachute
Hey heres the mod from my m4m :3

SPOILER
General
You didnt even add all gd'ers in the tags. You should do that ^^

Normal
01:01:362 (1) - 01:04:635 (3) - 01:23:181 (1) - 01:31:908 (1) - 01:49:362 (1) - 01:58:090 (1) - 02:59:181 (1) - 03:01:362 (1) - 03:07:908 (1) - Fix these blankets.
(you made them like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8016661 whenever they should be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8016713&#41;
00:54:817 (3,4,1) - nc should be on your 3, not 1, to be consistent and it fits better. (you did it like that in the whole kiai so use it here too.)
02:30:544 - Id consider putting a circle here somewhere, but then you might have to remap a bit so idk.. but imo its kinda missing here :/
02:32:999 (3,4) - You mapped her singing for so long and here you just put sliders over it? dont understand why ^^

00:50:999 - Until here you used no hitsounds.. id consider adding a whistle at least for each nc you made or something like that :3 (that prob applies for all diffs but well, idk.. i just think it would be better if there was something done with the hitsounds instead of just.. nothing)
01:20:453 (2) - remove clap at the end of this slider
01:22:635 (2) - ^
02:49:908 (2,2) - ^


Akitoshi's Hard
00:44:317 - probably missing a note here. you did a lot of triplets in the beginning and always at this point ^^
Thats all for this diff.

Shiwaga's Light Insane
00:36:681 - You skip a lot of beats at the beginning. I dont understand that mapping at some parts of the map. At the beginning you try to map the singing but at the same time you dont? and then you do 00:37:635 (2,3,4) - these beats, i think you mapped the bg here but why did you change to singing 00:38:726 (6) - here when you didnt even map the singing in the first place? Imo the rhythm in the beginning makes no sense and you shouldnt skip beats for an insane and you shouldnt also just alter 2 different rhythms all the time.
00:40:090 (3) - Here you skipped the singing again for the bg music and then 00:41:181 (6,7,1,2) - singing again. i dont get why you did that
00:42:544 (2,3,4,5,1) - singing then into bg music again.. well anyways im just saying i'd recommend to remap the beginning. Once kiai starts it seems to get good.
01:08:999 (1,1,2) - Here idk what you mapped. this 01:08:999 (1) - is not there in the song. If you map the singing then map all of the beats and not only one and theres no bg thing here so this doesnt really make sense imo.
01:10:090 - Also here i think an object is missing
01:24:817 - ^
02:19:908 (1) - This drumsliderslide lol.. i dont know... i'd remove it tbh, or at least make it less volume.


LogOffHB's Insane
00:37:771 (2) - Dont really think that jump fits such a calm part, and since its literally the only jump you used in this whole section, making it a 1/4 jump seems kinda random imo.
01:45:953 (2) - shouldnt this be nc, at least since you did it like this for the whole kiai time, just here you did something different that fits less imo. i would remove all the other ncs and do one 01:44:999 (1) - and 01:45:953 (2) -
02:49:635 (1) - kinda useless nc imo
In your last kiai time until 03:14:453 (1) - ; i really dont understand your nc's here and they seem kinda random. It seems like you placed them after what you mapped instead of the music, which is not really good. I'd remake them like you did them in the second half for example or just follow the music like you did in the rest of the map.

So. Gl with the map <3
Jonarwhal

Parachute wrote:

Hey heres the mod from my m4m :3

[spoilerbox]General
You didnt even add all gd'ers in the tags. You should do that ^^

Shiwaga's Light Insane
00:36:681 - You skip a lot of beats at the beginning. I dont understand that mapping at some parts of the map. At the beginning you try to map the singing but at the same time you dont? and then you do 00:37:635 (2,3,4) - these beats, i think you mapped the bg here but why did you change to singing 00:38:726 (6) - here when you didnt even map the singing in the first place? Imo the rhythm in the beginning makes no sense and you shouldnt skip beats for an insane and you shouldnt also just alter 2 different rhythms all the time. fixed by removing the notes that didn't have vocals or loud noises during vocal holds
00:40:090 (3) - Here you skipped the singing again for the bg music and then 00:41:181 (6,7,1,2) - singing again. i dont get why you did that fixed~
00:42:544 (2,3,4,5,1) - singing then into bg music again.. well anyways im just saying i'd recommend to remap the beginning. fixed~ Once kiai starts it seems to get good. different mapper lol
01:08:999 (1,1,2) - Here idk what you mapped. this 01:08:999 (1) - is not there in the song. If you map the singing then map all of the beats and not only one and theres no bg thing here so this doesnt really make sense imo. Shira's section
01:10:090 - Also here i think an object is missing Shira's section
01:24:817 - ^ not likely, since there is no vocal there
02:19:908 (1) - This drumsliderslide lol.. i dont know... i'd remove it tbh, or at least make it less volume. Shira's section

So. Gl with the map <3
thanks for modding <3

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[color=#FF0080]Jonawaga:[/color] 02:22:090 - / 02:39:544 -
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[color=#FF0080]Jonawaga:[/color] 02:56:999 - / 03:14:453 -
[color=#0000FF]Shiratoi:[/color] 03:14:453 - / 03:31:908 -[/box]
Topic Starter
Mentai

Parachute wrote:

Hey heres the mod from my m4m :3

[spoilerbox]General
You didnt even add all gd'ers in the tags. You should do that ^^ *heavy breathing*

Normal
01:01:362 (1) - 01:04:635 (3) - 01:23:181 (1) - 01:31:908 (1) - 01:49:362 (1) - 01:58:090 (1) - 02:59:181 (1) - 03:01:362 (1) - 03:07:908 (1) - Fix these blankets.
(you made them like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8016661 whenever they should be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8016713&#41; some of them were fine, but i had to fix angles on about the other half of them
00:54:817 (3,4,1) - nc should be on your 3, not 1, to be consistent and it fits better. (you did it like that in the whole kiai so use it here too.) oops
02:30:544 - Id consider putting a circle here somewhere, but then you might have to remap a bit so idk.. but imo its kinda missing here :/ i don't want to make the player click TOO much out of kiai. this is my lowest diff so it needs to also function as an easy
02:32:999 (3,4) - You mapped her singing for so long and here you just put sliders over it? dont understand why ^^ this is the least intense section of the map that i mapped, so keeping it simple and following the base rhythm is what i was attempting to do here

00:50:999 - Until here you used no hitsounds.. id consider adding a whistle at least for each nc you made or something like that :3 (that prob applies for all diffs but well, idk.. i just think it would be better if there was something done with the hitsounds instead of just.. nothing) you're probably right, i'll need to look into some of the hitsounding, these were done about 7 months ago
01:20:453 (2) - remove clap at the end of this slider but there are snare sounds on these notes and that's why i mapped them as 1/2 ;_;
01:22:635 (2) - ^ ^
02:49:908 (2,2) - ^ ^


So. Gl with the map <3 tytytytytytytytytytytytytytyty
gonna look at all the hitsounds and apply them to all diffs since i did the hitsounding for the most part
Left
Light insane is masterpiece
Topic Starter
Mentai

Left wrote:

Light insane is masterpiece no change, it's my style
thx 4 mod! xd
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