1. Time's Up (old ver.) (4.65 stars, 1220 notes)
2. Time's Up (5.13 stars, 463 notes)

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EZDT Pass when the map was 75% complete

Nomod FC

1. 00:08:896 (1) - The overlap with the previous and next stream looks strange IMO
2. 00:11:562 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow with the last object feels strange, move it a little up
3. 01:32:007 (7,8) - 7 Where 8 is, and 8 where 7 is, like this
4. 01:32:674 (1) - This spinner can start in the previous tick ( 01:32:562 )
5. 02:04:229 (7) - Why not put between 02:03:562 (4,5) - in x:400 y:272
6. 05:27:118 (1) - This can be a spinner

DaxMasterix wrote:

GENERAL

1. Use custom combo colours I'm thinking of what combo colours I should use. Maybe I could get some reccommendations? Either way, I think I may have good combo colours though, so don't worry about it ^w^
2. AR 9.6 Is pretty unnecesary, use 9.2 or 9.4 or 9 instead IMO is better Sure, okay!

Tick Tock

1. 00:08:896 (1) - The overlap with the previous and next stream looks strange IMO I don't think I find anything wrong about this stream.
2. 00:11:562 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow with the last object feels strange, move it a little up Moved.
3. 01:32:007 (7,8) - 7 Where 8 is, and 8 where 7 is, like this Sure. Kinda makes a good cross pattern though
4. 01:32:674 (1) - This spinner can start in the previous tick ( 01:32:562 ) Okay. Maybe that will do.
5. 02:04:229 (7) - Why not put between 02:03:562 (4,5) - in x:400 y:272 Moved.
6. 05:27:118 (1) - This can be a spinner No, I don't think a spinner could fit here. Besides I think it's a little bit too short for the last long note

That's all! Good luck! Thank you!

depzdai wrote:

#modreq Hiya!

TickTock
- 01:24:562 (6) - Maybe it's too far? Moving it to x:120 y:352. Fixed
- 01:28:118 (6) - Same reason. Move it up one grid (x:256 y:376). Fixed
- 01:29:229 (2) - Is it your intention? With me, it's okay. I'm fine with this though.
- 01:32:451 (9) - Too close. Gotta make it farther like 03:33:340 (specifically x:328 y:152). Fixed
- 03:27:007 (4,5,6) - It's quite hard to not lose the combo here --> Make it rounder. Fixed
- 04:51:562 (1) - Should have a finish sound here. I don't think a finish sound fits here.
- 04:58:229 (1) - Finish sound, too. Sounds better and make the climax more climactic. The finish sound usually plays after 2 beats in the final kiai, usually thinking of a ringing bell. So I don't think I could put that there.

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M Oho! You have arrived~!

01:17:785 (5) - this slider's tail is the start of kiai, so what about making it a 3/4 slider and a circle? I don't think it would fit well. Fixed in new diff~
02:27:562 (1,3) - they touched lightly, not very beautiful imo. http://puu.sh/r44Q0/33cc7bcab3.jpg It's meant to be a 1/4 gap. I don't find anything wrong about it as it seems okay for me.

05:03:340 (7,8) - ^ ^ Same as mentioned.

good luck! Thanks!

wew

1. normal-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitwhistle3.wave are both 28ms, which is unrankable as they are too short. I think they need to be like 30ms minimum or something? Double check with someone
2. Looking back at the parts I modded, you don't seem to space out your objects very much at all. Things like 00:40:007 (4,5,6,7) or 00:28:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) and 02:24:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) . The reason I'm pointing this out in general is because it's annoying for both of us for me to point out every single instance in which object could use more spacing from each other. If you agree, I suggest going through your entire map and giving your map some breathing room.

1. 00:08:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not a fan of how this early in the song you use the same section of the playfield twice. Imo I would move stuff around so that you start off using as much area as you can
2. 00:19:118 (8) - everything infront of this note is basically the exact same, give or take some very tiny changes. No improvements visually on the same rhythm, minimum differences in patterns, I reccomend going back and making this part more interesting. Maybe change the flow or change the aesthetics because it is very repetitive.
3. 00:19:785 (2,3) - maybe make the angle between these two a bit sharper by bringing 00:20:007 (3) up to around x217 y107?
4. Ok honestly from here the song is just 5 minutes of repetitiveness, which is mirrored by 5 minutes of repetitive mapping. I think what I said in general and what I said on the first point covers all of this map, the patterns are very the same over and over, and the spacing between objects needs works.

Logic Agent wrote:

wew

Thanks so much!

hi m4m stuff, sorry I took so long Hiya!

[General]

1. normal-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitwhistle3.wave are both 28ms, which is unrankable as they are too short. I think they need to be like 30ms minimum or something? Double check with someone Sure, maybe I could double check with someone, don't worry ^w^
2. Looking back at the parts I modded, you don't seem to space out your objects very much at all. Things like 00:40:007 (4,5,6,7) or 00:28:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) and 02:24:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) . The reason I'm pointing this out in general is because it's annoying for both of us for me to point out every single instance in which object could use more spacing from each other. If you agree, I suggest going through your entire map and giving your map some breathing room. Maybe I can do that.

[Time's Up]

1. 00:08:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not a fan of how this early in the song you use the same section of the playfield twice. Imo I would move stuff around so that you start off using as much area as you can I'll think about it.
2. 00:19:118 (8) - everything infront of this note is basically the exact same, give or take some very tiny changes. No improvements visually on the same rhythm, minimum differences in patterns, I reccomend going back and making this part more interesting. Maybe change the flow or change the aesthetics because it is very repetitive. I'll think about it.
3. 00:19:785 (2,3) - maybe make the angle between these two a bit sharper by bringing 00:20:007 (3) up to around x217 y107? I don't think that will work, in my opinion.
4. Ok honestly from here the song is just 5 minutes of repetitiveness, which is mirrored by 5 minutes of repetitive mapping. I think what I said in general and what I said on the first point covers all of this map, the patterns are very the same over and over, and the spacing between objects needs works.

I know this mod is short, and I'm sorry about that but I'd rather not spend all night pointing out the same things over and over throughout the map. So, one final recap. Spacing is important, give your objects some room. You might like how it looks in the editor but the spacing is awkward to play in game and doesn't make for a fun experience. Also, try to be more creative with your patterns. This song is 5 minutes of the same thing, so 5 minutes of basically the same patterns isn't very fun. Good luuuuuuuuuuuuck