MrSergio wrote:

lewd GD mlmlmlmlml

http://puu.sh/pPaWX/0fe47e08aa.rar

MrDorian wrote:

Hello!
I saw your map of this beautiful song, so I took a look at it and I decided to show, what should be repaired.

Wings

00:07:264 - here ends first slider I changed the timing points as you requested after, so 7:264 is not a correct point anymore. btw i feel like it's good without changing.
00:08:850 - there's no timing point Fixed, it were very hard to fix all snaps after tbh, gders should fix their timing points by themself, i would do errors. [/color]
00:10:217 - here ends second slider Same of 7:264
Suggestion:
01:36:368 (2,3,4,5) - you could re-do it in the way, that you make end of 3 a note and delete 4, they must have bigger snap, sth like 1,2-1,3, and triangleish shape. It's nice flowbreak for me and in my opinion it better fits to music Done, not exactly like you suggested but hope it's good

Julie wrote:

OMG DORIAN YOU BAKA STALKER XDD

Wb mark x3 Thaanks <3

Here my gd you requested

Julie's Easy

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Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Mark101
Version:Julie's Easy
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:sprite eroge galgame Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament MrSergio Sharkie Julie
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1. La crescita del mapset non sembra essere molto 'regolare'. Ok che manca ancora la Hard, ma potresti anche fare un'altra diff, in quanto lo star rating va' da 2,09 a 4,83, e una diff in più non lo farebbe crescere omogeneamente
2. Non sono mai stato un amante di un'immagine per ogni diff. Secondo me potresti anche lasciarne una sola, ma scegli tu lol
3. Potresti anche mettere l'OD a 7.2/7.5, ci starebbe bene

1. 00:17:431 (7,8,9,10) - k che sono fighi, ma secondo assordanti, se vuoi lasciare il clap sul 7 a quel volume va benissimo, ma gli altri potresti abbassarli anche al 20/30 %
2. 00:29:243 (2) - questo cerchio buttato qua in mezzo non mi convince molto. Cerca di integrarlo in qualche modo con 00:29:618 (2,3,1) - questo pattern
3. 00:40:493 (1,2) - se ascolti bene il sottofondo noterai che può essere sostituito da stream simili a questi 00:17:431 (7,8,9,10) -
4. 01:05:056 (1) - perchè questa NC sparata un po' alla cazzo? lol
5. 01:33:368 (3) - non male come posizione, ma potresti anche sovrapporlo a 01:32:431 (3) - questo
6. 02:02:243 (4,2) - stack?
7. 02:06:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - ti prego no, tutto ma non questo, mi bruciano gli occhi, help D:

Naidaaka wrote:

Hi from #modreqs

Since i've analyzed the mapset and i haven't found anything that MUST be fixed, the mod will be basically "stack not stack" for the last diff in terms of good looking.


Wings:

00:05:811 (1,1) - I suggest doing 2 sliders here instead (like the Sergio's Hard), it looks better imo I'm not gonna change here, I'll wait to learn how to do good slider shapes and then replace it.
00:15:368 (2) - Maybe make this slider parallel with 00:14:806 (1) - then move this 00:16:118 (3,1,2) - a little bit to the left (to space them too from the stream since there is a pause between 00:16:493 (2) - and 00:16:868 (1) - ). Remapped this pattern in another way, now it looks a bit better. I'll change this again if I get more ideas
00:20:806 (1) - Stack this with 00:20:243 (5) - .Fix
00:29:618 (2,3,1) - Here maybe you can stack the slider with 00:29:243 (2) - somehow (to follow the stacking process that is in the whole map). Fix
00:37:306 (1) - Same here, stach this with 00:36:556 (3,5) - Fix
00:38:993 (2) - Stack this aswell with 00:38:618 (1) - maybe. Fix
00:41:806 (1) - Stack this with 00:40:681 (2,1) - Fix
00:48:556 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you should stack this with 00:47:806 (1,2,3) - , or rotate a little bit more.I want to keep it in this way
00:51:556 (1,2,3) - Same here, you stacked 00:51:556 (1) - , but not 00:51:743 (2,3) - and basically is the same rhythm (00:59:806 (1,2,3) - 01:00:556 (1,2,3,4) - Here you stacked them instead ) and same here: 01:03:556 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't understand correctly, you had to write the mod in italian =w=
00:56:056 (4) - Stack this with 00:55:681 (2) - Fix
01:21:368 (3) - Maybe stack this with 01:20:431 (3) - ? With a such distance you can't notice if there is a stack or not, they're not created to be stacked by the way.
01:40:306 (1) - Stack this with 01:39:931 (5) - Fix
01:47:056 (4) - Same here with 01:46:681 (2) - Fix
02:14:431 (7) - Maybe you can tilt this slider a bit to the right to follow 02:14:056 (5,6) - Fix

And whatever, the last thing i can say is, Good luck and rank this already!

-Bumblebee- wrote:

Wey, ecco a te una mod per l'ultima diff
[General]

1. La crescita del mapset non sembra essere molto 'regolare'. Ok che manca ancora la Hard, ma potresti anche fare un'altra diff, in quanto lo star rating va' da 2,09 a 4,83, e una diff in più non lo farebbe crescere omogeneamente Non è un problema tbh.
2. Non sono mai stato un amante di un'immagine per ogni diff. Secondo me potresti anche lasciarne una sola, ma scegli tu lol E' possibile rankare le mappe con più sfondi, avevo di già salvato questi e quindi li ho messi, dato che sono molto carini.
3. Potresti anche mettere l'OD a 7.2/7.5, ci starebbe bene Impostato a 7.5

[Wings]

1. 00:17:431 (7,8,9,10) - k che sono fighi, ma secondo assordanti, se vuoi lasciare il clap sul 7 a quel volume va benissimo, ma gli altri potresti abbassarli anche al 20/30 % Non noto nessun problema di "assordanza", che intendi?
2. 00:29:243 (2) - questo cerchio buttato qua in mezzo non mi convince molto. Cerca di integrarlo in qualche modo con 00:29:618 (2,3,1) - questo pattern E' stackato all'(1) della combo dopo questi jump, non c'è alcun problema.
3. 00:40:493 (1,2) - se ascolti bene il sottofondo noterai che può essere sostituito da stream simili a questi 00:17:431 (7,8,9,10) - L'ho lasciato così di proposito, non mi andava di mettere lo sliderino col burst perché stonava col pattern.
4. 01:05:056 (1) - perchè questa NC sparata un po' alla cazzo? lol Non è alla cazzo, ho diviso la combo in più parti per un jump
5. 01:33:368 (3) - non male come posizione, ma potresti anche sovrapporlo a 01:32:431 (3) - questo Si overlappavano un poco e li ho distanziati adesso, non era mia intenzione fare uno stack
6. 02:02:243 (4,2) - stack? Sistemato già dalla mod precedente, ma np, sono arrivate assieme
7. 02:06:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - ti prego no, tutto ma non questo, mi bruciano gli occhi, help D: Non lo cambierò per ora, ci sta decentemente imo. Non c'era altro modo di fare quella curva altrimenti.

Spero che aiuti in qualche modo. Perdona la mia mod corta ma è quasi l'1 e penso di avere un calo di zuccheri

- Marco - wrote:

Nella diff Wings:
00:17:618 (8) - Se togli questo slider e magari invece di uno slider prima metti un circle penso abbia più senso quel hitsound [00:17:431 (7)]