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Fall Out Boy - The Phoenix

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kabmi
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GeneralCat
поставь оффсет на 11320 и будет нормальный ритм
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kabmi

GeneralCat wrote:

поставь оффсет на 11320 и будет нормальный ритм
Спасииибо, реально точнее стало :)
Rieri
The slider velocity is just WAYYYYY TOOO HIGH

Try 1.6~2.0 SV
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kabmi

ProEzreal wrote:

The slider velocity is just WAYYYYY TOOO HIGH

Try 1.6~2.0 SV
Thanks for the council, but I think this sliders velocity more suitable for this rhythm :)
Mazziv
dq because of unfitting bg Kappa
Pachiru
I can give you a Guest diff if you want some
Lully
[Fire Bird]

00:12:189 - Put a break here
00:15:233 (3) - Thats a long slider.. it needs some sliderart. try to change its shape.
00:15:885 - Break again
00:18:928 - ^
00:21:319 (1) - It needs a fancy shape. o:
00:23:928 (6) - ^ + it's offscreen.
00:26:537 (1) - ^
00:28:493 (5) - NC ~
00:30:885 (2) - Shape + offscreen
00:43:928 (3) - ^
00:48:059 (4) - ^

There are so much straight sliders.. make them more curvy and stuff.
that looks much better.

01:05:667 (3) - NC
01:09:580 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is way to straight and stuff. If something like this keeps repeating the map will be boring for people. o:
You don't have to use Distance Snap tho. So.. try it like this. http://puu.sh/o4FfD.jpg


So, as you can see.. You need much practice in mapping. I just can give you advices like.. don't map so straight and stuff.
I won't mod more because it's the same error over and over. Try to change this. o:

Hopefully this was helpful.
See chu. :3
Topic Starter
kabmi

CookieKivi wrote:

[Fire Bird]

00:12:189 - Put a break here
00:15:233 (3) - Thats a long slider.. it needs some sliderart. try to change its shape.
00:15:885 - Break again
00:18:928 - ^
00:21:319 (1) - It needs a fancy shape. o:
00:23:928 (6) - ^ + it's offscreen.
00:26:537 (1) - ^
00:28:493 (5) - NC ~
00:30:885 (2) - Shape + offscreen
00:43:928 (3) - ^
00:48:059 (4) - ^

There are so much straight sliders.. make them more curvy and stuff.
that looks much better.

01:05:667 (3) - NC
01:09:580 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is way to straight and stuff. If something like this keeps repeating the map will be boring for people. o:
You don't have to use Distance Snap tho. So.. try it like this. http://puu.sh/o4FfD.jpg


So, as you can see.. You need much practice in mapping. I just can give you advices like.. don't map so straight and stuff.
I won't mod more because it's the same error over and over. Try to change this. o:

Hopefully this was helpful.
See chu. :3
Ty for the mod :)
Namki
Привет.
Мне не нравится тайминг. Ставишь одну красную линию с оффсетом 8246 и бпм 138.
Выдели все объекты ctrl+a и посмотри, у тебя все объекты расположены по середние поля, это не очень хорошо, попытайся расположить их по краям тоже.
Кстати, при чем тут Фландре, найди бг лучше, соответсвующую песне.
Удачи~
Topic Starter
kabmi

Namki wrote:

Привет.
Мне не нравится тайминг. Ставишь одну красную линию с оффсетом 8246 и бпм 138.
Выдели все объекты ctrl+a и посмотри, у тебя все объекты расположены по середние поля, это не очень хорошо, попытайся расположить их по краям тоже.
Кстати, при чем тут Фландре, найди бг лучше, соответсвующую песне.
Удачи~
Спасибо, учту и попробую что-то сделать :)
riffy
Did some basic explanations, log was lost, so you have to trust me and kabmi on this one. Was mainly focusing on objecyt placement, although I've also mentioned loads of unsnapped notes.
_handholding
hi, did I just see my favourite high school bad in #modreqs? too bad they suck now


Wow, this is fancy

  1. 01:15:854 (10) - pls take out the double reverse; its not that fun to play. If you do this add a 1/2 slider at 01:16:506. This is because having a clickable object on 01:16:506 has a lot better feel since its on a snare
  2. 01:16:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try not to do streams like this, they are super hard and a bit obnooxious tbh. try a simple straight line http://puu.sh/o7OE0/9af44bbc76.jpg
  3. 01:17:811 (6) - move this to 01:17:593 and also add a circle on 01:18:245. The held note is on 01:17:593 so it makes sense to have the slider here.
  4. 01:17:593 (6) - http://puu.sh/o7OO4/739f619e25.jpg If you're gonna do shapes like this take extra care and make sure they're somewhat symmetrical. You can do this by literally playing around with all the anchor points (its what I did).
  5. 01:18:462 (8,9) - Sliders like these are bit, cringy.. sorry. Try and get creative, if not you can use normal straight sliders. If you wanna add a bit of flavour though play around with grey and red anchor points till you find something that doesnt look half bad. How about something like this? --- http://puu.sh/o7OYh/7161a52297.jpg
  6. 01:19:550 - Make this a 1/1 slider. Matches the vocals and flows better. Try it in testplay it should feel better to play
  7. 01:29:332 (5) - not blue tick pls, stick to red and white ticks
  8. 01:32:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe a spiral? Its a more attractive pattern . http://puu.sh/o7Pd8/2687e25593.jpg
oh last thing, nerf all your combo lengths. Make them 6-7 instead of 13-14

no kds since I only modded like 15 secs of it;the QAT above me would just get angry. I'll shoot a star instead. GL!
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