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Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size)

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Weez
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Weez
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March-30-11 at 3:20:06 PM

Artist: Yui Horie
Title: Silky Heart (TV Size)
Source: Toradora!
Tags: Opening 2 vincerio lovhin456 OnosakiHito
BPM: 135
Filesize: 8935kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ami-Insane (4.93 stars, 270 notes)
  2. Kitamura-Normal (2.8 stars, 104 notes)
  3. lovhin's Ryuji-Easy (1.26 stars, 73 notes)
  4. Ono's Taiko (4.94 stars, 389 notes)
  5. Taiga-Hard (4.44 stars, 168 notes)
  6. vincerio's Minori-Insane (4.98 stars, 314 notes)
Download: Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size)
Download: Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd beatmap!

Yaaaaay Toradora <3
Ryuji diff done by lovhin456
Minori diff done by vincerio
Taiko diff done by OnosakiHito
Re-download if you got this before March 30 Changed the video

Thank you all :D
Last edited by Weez , edited 65 times in total.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
The link on your signature doesn't work btw

Star~
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

Saten-san wrote:

The link on your signature doesn't work btw

Star~
i know
fixed now
Musty
2,246 posts
Joined February 2010
Musty
Oh , FUUU you have uploaded it ( I almost put it too :< )

Nice map :>
Shana
748 posts
Joined June 2010
Shana
taigar taigar taigar = Toradora!
jameskong1
403 posts
Joined December 2008
jameskong1
NICE~~
can I make a hard diff?.?
star~
:)
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

jameskong1 wrote:

NICE~~
can I make a hard diff?.?
star~
:)
Sure go right ahead
jameskong1
403 posts
Joined December 2008
jameskong1

Weezy wrote:

jameskong1 wrote:

NICE~~
can I make a hard diff?.?
star~
:)
Sure go right ahead
Wow a quick response~
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

jameskong1 wrote:

Wow a quick response~
I was on and just saw it XD
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Happy New Year Weezy!

Here's something unexpected :D
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

Saten-san wrote:

Happy New Year Weezy!

Here's something unexpected :D
yaaay thanks :D and happy new years to you
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Hiii :3

[General]
Map's good, i'm providing a better video :) -> http://www.mediafire.com/?7gexh2k00mj544g
^ this means i'll mod only things i don't like, in graphic way.

[Kitamura]
00:20:774 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45696
00:35:219 (5) - Use thie one here above ^ but rotating it 90° clockwise.
00:38:774 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45698
00:41:441 (6) - Like the one of 00:35:219 (5), but horizontally flipped.
00:49:886 (1) - Put the end tick 3 gris up.
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
Good news everyone, I like toradora, so I guess I'll mod this.

[general]
Delete the osb if you're not using it and redo the full submit. Doesn't have to happen immediately.

[sounds]
this is a clapping song, at least during kiai. usually claps are found on beats 2 and 4, but there are some spots where it goes 2,4,2,4,2,4,2,e of 3,+ of 3,4 (go play http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12216 for the last part of this rhythm). I think a whistle on beats 1 and 3 or wherever there is a bass drum hit sound really good.

[easy]
SPOILER
this is too hard for an easy IMO. The map's not fun due to lack of a downbeat. Since I think easy is better than normal, I'll try to provide suggestions to get the beats off the red notes and onto the white ones.
00:04:330 copy what you did before or do this:

00:11:663 keep on with the sliders, ignore the lyrics.
00:13:219 (3,4) good, keep these.
00:22:108 go with the half beat here.
00:29:219 half beat sliders here so it seems like it picks up, but you're still hitting the same beats. You can add in a few red notes, but keep it mostly white.
00:57:441 get rid of this beat
01:01:219 repeat what you did earlier
01:06:552 shorten the slider to make it have a red beat in the middle, and add a beat where the end of the slider used to be.
01:11:663 repeat what you did earlier, perhaps spice it up a little with a note on every white beat now.
01:14:774 extend the previous slider to here (remove repeater and add a clap to go with music)
silence the spinner at the end.

[normal+]
SPOILER
You've got a perfect clapping song, yet you're using zero claps. There's only a few sections with claps built in. You've got a nice bass drum going most of the time but only on the beat. I think emphasizing that with a whistle on every bass hit sounds good.
00:13:219 this is like, the perfect spot for a spinner.
00:44:997 finish
00:50:108 not digging the slider
00:52:108 finish
00:52:330 this doesn't match the previous two.
00:53:663 just stack 3 and 4
00:54:552 If you put in a spinner earlier, take out this spinner and put in beats plus a long slider.
01:27:219 end spinner here
01:27:886 start a straight slider here until 01:28:552

The kiai section doesn't really follow either the lyrics or the beat faithfully, and there's breaks in the beats for no apparent reason (where there should be claps!).

[palm top tiger]
SPOILER
insane is anything goes. I sort of like the map, but there are parts which are overstepped. If there's one thing I hate, it's notes or beats on something that is not in the BGM, and this map is chock full of them, so that's the only thing I'm going to point out (if I don't say anything it's because there is no beat in the BGM at this spot). Don't get me wrong, I like streams, just not when you made it up.
00:03:997
00:06:997
00:07:552
00:11:330 there IS a beat here
00:13:663
00:14:108 to 00:14:997 is rageworthy.
00:27:663 to 00:29:219 has beats on most of those notes, but there's a ewi playing which leaves out a few beats, and you should too.
00:42:663
00:42:886
00:53:997 the notes in this section which have that mid range note in the background need a finish (you've got it right in normal+
00:55:886
00:56:219
00:56:441
00:56:886
01:19:663 double check that you want this slider here and not on the blue note. She sings something different which sounds better than just following the beat IMO.
01:27:663 most of these beats are made up.

I like the maps and the song, but the made up notes are a deal breaker for me, so I can't give you a star unless you fix the streams. I think that taking away notes makes a rhythm much more interesting (and somewhat harder too).
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

ziin wrote:

Good news everyone, I like toradora, so I guess I'll mod this.

[general]
Delete the osb if you're not using it and redo the full submit. Doesn't have to happen immediately.

[sounds]
this is a clapping song, at least during kiai. usually claps are found on beats 2 and 4, but there are some spots where it goes 2,4,2,4,2,4,2,e of 3,+ of 3,4 (go play http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12216 for the last part of this rhythm). I think a whistle on beats 1 and 3 or wherever there is a bass drum hit sound really good.

[easy]
SPOILER
this is too hard for an easy IMO. The map's not fun due to lack of a downbeat. Since I think easy is better than normal, I'll try to provide suggestions to get the beats off the red notes and onto the white ones.
00:04:330 copy what you did before or do this:

00:11:663 keep on with the sliders, ignore the lyrics.
00:13:219 (3,4) good, keep these.
00:22:108 go with the half beat here.
00:29:219 half beat sliders here so it seems like it picks up, but you're still hitting the same beats. You can add in a few red notes, but keep it mostly white.
00:57:441 get rid of this beat
01:01:219 repeat what you did earlier
01:06:552 shorten the slider to make it have a red beat in the middle, and add a beat where the end of the slider used to be.
01:11:663 repeat what you did earlier, perhaps spice it up a little with a note on every white beat now.
01:14:774 extend the previous slider to here (remove repeater and add a clap to go with music)
silence the spinner at the end.

[normal+]
SPOILER
You've got a perfect clapping song, yet you're using zero claps. There's only a few sections with claps built in. You've got a nice bass drum going most of the time but only on the beat. I think emphasizing that with a whistle on every bass hit sounds good.
00:13:219 this is like, the perfect spot for a spinner.
00:44:997 finish
00:50:108 not digging the slider
00:52:108 finish
00:52:330 this doesn't match the previous two.
00:53:663 just stack 3 and 4
00:54:552 If you put in a spinner earlier, take out this spinner and put in beats plus a long slider.
01:27:219 end spinner here
01:27:886 start a straight slider here until 01:28:552

The kiai section doesn't really follow either the lyrics or the beat faithfully, and there's breaks in the beats for no apparent reason (where there should be claps!).

[palm top tiger]
SPOILER
insane is anything goes. I sort of like the map, but there are parts which are overstepped. If there's one thing I hate, it's notes or beats on something that is not in the BGM, and this map is chock full of them, so that's the only thing I'm going to point out (if I don't say anything it's because there is no beat in the BGM at this spot). Don't get me wrong, I like streams, just not when you made it up.
00:03:997
00:06:997
00:07:552
00:11:330 there IS a beat here
00:13:663
00:14:108 to 00:14:997 is rageworthy.
00:27:663 to 00:29:219 has beats on most of those notes, but there's a ewi playing which leaves out a few beats, and you should too.
00:42:663
00:42:886
00:53:997 the notes in this section which have that mid range note in the background need a finish (you've got it right in normal+
00:55:886
00:56:219
00:56:441
00:56:886
01:19:663 double check that you want this slider here and not on the blue note. She sings something different which sounds better than just following the beat IMO.
01:27:663 most of these beats are made up.

I like the maps and the song, but the made up notes are a deal breaker for me, so I can't give you a star unless you fix the streams. I think that taking away notes makes a rhythm much more interesting (and somewhat harder too).
god damn o_o time to get busy with this
will take some into consideration and thanks for making this a hard mod :/
nante
248 posts
Joined December 2009
nante
[General]
I'd recommend you to switch soft-hitnormal with normal-hitnormal. Normal one fits better.
Consider making a hitclap pattern in kiai time(maybe on every full beat?)
I've (probably, I hope it wasn't my osu who added it) received an osb file. Please delete it.

[Insane]
00:22:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing between these notes?
00:46:330 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:04:997 (3) - I might be wrong, but probably you need to move it 1 or 2 lvl4 grids down
01:16:774 (7) - add a note
01:16:330 (6) - ^
01:20:774 (3,4,5) - stack properly on lvl4 grid
01:28:330 (4) - (just a suggestion) - delete this slider, move spinner to its beggining (01:28:330). Hitfinish will sound better if its like this.

[Normal]
00:11:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - in previous combos nice-sounding finishes are missing in this one. Why?
00:40:330 (1) - distance
01:28:774 (1) - in not sure about this spinner, it's kinda short as for [Normal] diff

[Easy]
00:15:219 (1,2,3,4,5), 00:22:330 (1,2,3,4) etc. - move them to full beats, not half, these half beat notes are really confusing. Do it through all the map, where half-beats follow only vocal.
00:24:775 (4) - when moved to full beats, lenghten this slider to a white thick too


Everything nice expect of [easy] diff which is a real pain to play.
star
// seems like the map wasn't fixed yet and I'm repeating few things after ziin...
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
offset 110
Audio lead-in 2000

Download: Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [vincerio].osu
:)
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

vincerio wrote:

offset 110
Audio lead-in 2000

[attachment=0:4091d]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [vincerio].osu[/attachment:4091d]
:)
fixed the offset and will fix the audio leading in the next update (forgot to now and im pretty lazy :P)

thanks for the diff :D If you don't like the name let me know!
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio

Weezy wrote:

vincerio wrote:

offset 110
Audio lead-in 2000

[attachment=0:aaffd]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [vincerio].osu[/attachment:aaffd]
:)
fixed the offset and will fix the audio leading in the next update (forgot to now and im pretty lazy :P)

thanks for the diff :D If you don't like the name let me know!
I'm minori(n) fan xD
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez
Finally all done and let's get this ranked :P
val0108
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val0108
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