HD00:08:152 (8152|2) - ghost note
00:13:355 (13355|1,13355|0,13449|3,13449|2,13543|3,13543|2) - it doesn't correspond to that pitch-wise, a standard [12][34] would be better.
00:19:637 - as for HD, continuous 1/4 is a bad idea. I suggest removing notes for hi-hats. 00:19:730 (19730|2,20012|2,20293|2,20480|0,20762|0,20855|1,21043|0) - deleting those, etc
00:24:137 (24137|1,24324|1,24512|1,24699|1,24887|1) - oops, make sure you break this anchor when you delete the notes for the mod above
00:26:012 (26012|1,26199|1,26387|1,26574|1,26855|1,27137|1,27324|1,27512|1,27699|1) - another one
00:30:137 (30137|1,30324|1,30512|1,30699|1,30887|1,31074|1) - are you serious
00:33:699 (33699|0,33793|1,33980|0,34074|1,34262|0,34355|1,34543|0,34637|1) - please change this pattern for left hand
00:49:637 - you forgot a triple here
00:57:980 (57980|1) - ghost note
00:59:887 (59887|3,59887|0) - delete one of those, as you didn't map doubles for toms earlier
01:07:637 - same as before, break the streams
also those trilly patterns in HD, wow please calm down m8
01:18:324 (78324|3,78418|2,78512|0,78512|1,78605|3,78699|2,78793|1,78793|0,78887|3,78980|2) - this section needs to be changed, doesn't really reflect the song and plays stupidly.
01:42:887 (102887|2,102887|1,102887|0) - I am pretty sure I hear it 1/12 or 1/16 earlier.
01:43:637 - no reason not to make this a triple
MX00:03:980 (3980|1) - you missed a note sir
00:05:199 (5199|1,5387|1,5574|1,5762|1,5949|1,6137|1) - you use too many 2 anchors man
00:08:152 (8152|2) - same as HD, ghost note
00:09:605 (9605|2,9605|3,9699|0,9699|3,9699|1) - invert to make the jack on the left hand
00:13:262 (13262|1,13262|0,13355|1,13355|0,13449|2,13449|3,13543|3,13543|2) - same as in HD
00:14:574 - you can add a note here, on 1/2 snap
00:18:605 (18605|3,18605|0,18699|0,18699|2,18699|1) - invert to make the jack on the right hand
00:19:637 - this sections contains quite a lot of anchors that might be problematic. I will highlight just a few:
00:22:824 (22824|3,23012|3,23199|3,23387|3,23574|3,23762|3,23949|3) -
00:24:887 (24887|0,24980|3,25074|0,25168|3,25262|0,25355|3,25449|0,25543|3,25637|0,25730|3,25824|0,25918|3,26012|0,26105|3,26199|0,26293|3) -
00:28:824 (28824|3,29012|3,29199|3,29387|3,29574|3,29762|3,29949|3) -
00:34:824 (34824|0,35012|0,35199|0,35387|0,35574|0,35762|0,35949|0) -
00:36:887 (36887|3,36980|0,37074|3,37168|0,37262|3,37355|0,37449|3,37543|0,37637|3,37730|0,37824|3,37918|0,38012|3,38105|0,38199|3) -
00:39:887 (39887|3,40074|3,40262|3,40449|3,40637|3,40824|3) -
00:40:824 (40824|0,41012|0,41199|0,41387|0,41574|0,41762|0,41949|0) -
I know there are jumptrills but please balance a bit the press on outer columns.
00:20:855 (20855|1,20855|0) - remove one note, no accent whatsoever here
00:38:574 (38574|2,38574|0,38668|1,38668|3,38762|0) - I suggest [23][14]2 to avoid putting the same chords close
00:43:449 (43449|3) - move to 2 for a cool transition
00:45:605 (45605|2,45605|3,45699|3,45699|0,45699|1) - invert
00:57:980 (57980|1) - ghost note
00:59:887 (59887|3,59887|0) - same as in HD
01:10:824 (70824|3,71012|3,71199|3,71387|3,71574|3,71762|3,71949|3) - anchor
01:13:074 (73074|2,73074|3) - ghost notes (forgot to say that, delete that note from HD too)
01:13:355 (73355|3,73355|2) - make it a single
01:13:449 (73449|0,73449|1,73543|0,73543|1) - better to split into separate chords
01:14:199 (74199|1,74387|1,74574|1,74762|1,74949|1,75137|1,75324|1,75512|1,75699|1,75887|1) - hakuna matata wooo
01:16:824 (76824|3,77012|3,77199|3,77387|3,77574|3,77762|3,77949|3,78137|3) - another one
01:18:137 - ok it kinda fits and there are sounds for it so let it be
01:18:605 (78605|3,78605|2) - ghost notes though (same in HD)
01:18:699 (78699|2,78699|3,78793|0,78793|1,78887|3,78887|2,78980|2,78980|3,79074|1,79074|0,79168|3,79168|2,79262|1,79262|0,79355|2,79355|3,79449|0,79449|1) - you can invert this for a good effect
01:27:605 (87605|1,87605|3,87699|2,87699|0,87699|3) - invert
01:30:980 (90980|1,90980|2,91074|3,91074|0) - choose a different set of jumptrills here to avoid the unnecessary trill on 12
01:32:855 (92855|0,92855|1,92949|3,92949|0,92949|2) - aaaaa invert this why did you even think it's a good idea
not even consistent
01:39:137 (99137|0,99137|1,99137|3) - invert this to lessen the amount of notes on left hand
01:42:887 (102887|2,102887|1,102887|0) - fix this like in HD