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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 22. ožujka 2016. at 14:15:45

Artist: xi
Title: ANiMA
BPM: 183,5
Filesize: 4457kb
Play Time: 00:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,68 stars, 7 notes)
  2. Extra (6,47 stars, 788 notes)
Download: xi - ANiMA
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For those that really hate their fingers.

Would gladly accept guest Easy/Normal/Hard difficulties. Also looking for someone to mod this.
Strategas
zzlog
2016-02-24 22:56 Maus: bruh
2016-02-24 22:56 Maus: Mind playing this?
2016-02-24 22:56 Maus: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/911166 xi - ANIMA]
2016-02-24 22:56 Maus: I made it and I'm trying to get opinions from better players
2016-02-24 22:57 Maus: You might need nf bt
2016-02-24 22:57 Maus: w
2016-02-24 22:57 Strategas: I suck atm but ok
2016-02-24 22:58 Maus: np at least give criticism
2016-02-24 22:58 Maus: It's not done tho, small pause in the middle
2016-02-24 23:00 Strategas: how did I do that last steram
2016-02-24 23:00 Strategas: lol
2016-02-24 23:00 Maus: No idea hahah but nice/10
2016-02-24 23:00 Strategas: well the only thing that is important mistake here is
2016-02-24 23:00 Maus: I watched a 2digit friend play it 5 times, didnt fc once
2016-02-24 23:01 Strategas: that you don't make it obvious if it's 1/3 1/6 or 1/4
2016-02-24 23:01 Strategas: and you can polish the slider art in the star a bit
2016-02-24 23:01 Maus: Star?
2016-02-24 23:01 Strategas: start*
2016-02-24 23:01 Maus: oh start
2016-02-24 23:01 Maus: xd
2016-02-24 23:01 Maus: General thoughts?
2016-02-24 23:02 Strategas: has potential imo
2016-02-24 23:02 Strategas: if you just just make it mroe obvious
2016-02-24 23:03 Strategas: the streams
2016-02-24 23:03 Maus: I guess, though it can be understood after a play or tweo
2016-02-24 23:04 Strategas: well if you want more in depth things
2016-02-24 23:04 Strategas: I can say
2016-02-24 23:04 Strategas: but they can be subjective so
2016-02-24 23:04 Maus: Well mapping is quite subjective
2016-02-24 23:05 Maus: So literally any criticism is appreciated as long it has some depth to it
2016-02-24 23:05 Strategas: okay so what bothers me logically
2016-02-24 23:05 Strategas: is
2016-02-24 23:05 Strategas: 00:19:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -
2016-02-24 23:05 Strategas: this stream
2016-02-24 23:05 Strategas: music gets intense here like
2016-02-24 23:05 Strategas: for real
2016-02-24 23:06 Strategas: but you put repeat sliders there
2016-02-24 23:06 Strategas: on the drum things
2016-02-24 23:06 Maus: Right, makes sense
2016-02-24 23:06 Maus: The stream is long so I thought it would be better
2016-02-24 23:06 Strategas: 00:19:958 (5,10) -
2016-02-24 23:06 Maus: tho my first idea was to space out the stream
2016-02-24 23:06 Strategas: atleast make these
2016-02-24 23:06 Strategas: circles
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: or
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: into two kick sliders
2016-02-24 23:07 Maus: There's a change in music there, I'll keep those that way
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: since theres the drum thing
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: on red tick
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: and white
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: 00:21:593 (13,14) -
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: same with these
2016-02-24 23:07 Strategas: would be better if you split them
2016-02-24 23:08 Strategas: into kick sliders
2016-02-24 23:08 Strategas: well ye it's your choice
2016-02-24 23:09 Maus: I'll change it up a bit
2016-02-24 23:09 Maus: Thanks for the help bruh
2016-02-24 23:09 Maus: Much appreciated
2016-02-24 23:10 Strategas: 00:45:844 (1,2) -
2016-02-24 23:10 Strategas: overmapped tho
2016-02-24 23:11 Strategas: 00:44:808 (2,3,4,5,6) -
2016-02-24 23:11 Strategas: so you introduce to 1/3 thing here right
2016-02-24 23:11 Strategas: but
2016-02-24 23:12 Strategas: it's better to start as a slider
2016-02-24 23:12 Strategas: than switch to circles
2016-02-24 23:12 Strategas: then*
2016-02-24 23:12 Strategas: so you would understand the music from the slider ticks
2016-02-24 23:12 Strategas: if you know what I mean
2016-02-24 23:12 Maus: Yeah
2016-02-24 23:12 Maus: I like it this difficult though
2016-02-24 23:12 Maus: idk
2016-02-24 23:13 Maus: I'm yet to decide on those parts with 1/3 and 1/6
2016-02-24 23:13 Strategas: ye it's difficult but
2016-02-24 23:13 Strategas: uhh idk maybe some players like it
2016-02-24 23:13 Strategas: but it's just feels more fun to know what to click to
2016-02-24 23:13 Strategas: than to guess
2016-02-24 23:13 Strategas: :D
2016-02-24 23:14 Strategas: 00:55:271 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2016-02-24 23:14 Strategas: this is extreme but I guess it'd intended
2016-02-24 23:14 Maus: I suppose lol
2016-02-24 23:14 Maus: Very intended, def keeping that part
2016-02-24 23:14 Strategas: and also it's first time you use 1/6 like that so might get confusing too
2016-02-24 23:14 Strategas: ya ok
2016-02-24 23:14 Strategas: ah
2016-02-24 23:14 Strategas: well I just noticed it's overmapped
2016-02-24 23:14 Strategas: zz
2016-02-24 23:15 Strategas: it's 1/3 lol
2016-02-24 23:15 Maus: idk, some people prob wont like it but that part is just something i really want to keep personally
2016-02-24 23:15 Maus: The part after that?
2016-02-24 23:15 Maus: Yea
2016-02-24 23:15 Strategas: if you plan to make this as unranked map then sure
2016-02-24 23:15 Strategas: 00:55:271 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2016-02-24 23:15 Strategas: nah this
2016-02-24 23:15 Strategas: is 1/3
2016-02-24 23:16 Maus: Srs?
2016-02-24 23:16 Maus: Slow down the music I hear 6 ticks
2016-02-24 23:16 Strategas: 00:55:435 -
2016-02-24 23:16 Strategas: only here
2016-02-24 23:16 Strategas: one note 1/6
2016-02-24 23:16 Maus: Aha
2016-02-24 23:17 Maus: Wait what, I hear the first 3 1/6 and then 1/3
2016-02-24 23:17 Strategas: http://i.imgur.com/Tw7Uq7N.png
2016-02-24 23:18 Strategas: I'm like 100% sire
2016-02-24 23:18 Strategas: sure
2016-02-24 23:18 Maus: Yea it is
2016-02-24 23:18 Maus: True
2016-02-24 23:19 Strategas: 00:57:887 (5) -
2016-02-24 23:19 Strategas: it's better to nc here I think
2016-02-24 23:19 Strategas: since it stars 1/3 from there
2016-02-24 23:19 Strategas: 00:58:541 (4) -
2016-02-24 23:19 Maus: Right thanks
2016-02-24 23:19 Strategas: then it's prob better to nc this too
2016-02-24 23:19 Strategas: since it switches to 1/4 again
2016-02-24 23:20 Strategas: 01:00:176 (5) -
2016-02-24 23:20 Strategas: nc
2016-02-24 23:20 Strategas: like that combo is hella long
2016-02-24 23:20 Maus: Did that
2016-02-24 23:20 Strategas: 01:01:484 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-02-24 23:20 Maus: All
2016-02-24 23:20 Maus: Now
2016-02-24 23:20 Strategas: prob better if use 1/2 sliders instead
2016-02-24 23:20 Maus: Removed that
2016-02-24 23:21 Maus: Added new on next note
2016-02-24 23:21 Maus: nc
2016-02-24 23:21 Strategas: that break is weird for me
2016-02-24 23:21 Strategas: ok
2016-02-24 23:21 Strategas: 01:06:716 (5) -
2016-02-24 23:21 Strategas: nc too
2016-02-24 23:21 Maus: Alright changed it all up
2016-02-24 23:22 Strategas: like you tdid
2016-02-24 23:22 Strategas: 01:07:370 (1) -
2016-02-24 23:22 Maus: Ok did
2016-02-24 23:23 Maus: Yeah I have to say it's looking much sexier imo now
2016-02-24 23:23 Strategas: 01:10:721 (2,4) -
2016-02-24 23:23 Strategas: overmap
2016-02-24 23:23 Strategas: the piano thing starts playing 01:10:721 (2,4) - im sure
2016-02-24 23:23 Strategas: wth I linked
2016-02-24 23:23 Strategas: 01:10:966 (5) -
2016-02-24 23:23 Strategas: **
2016-02-24 23:24 Strategas: 01:13:092 -
2016-02-24 23:24 Strategas: is like
2016-02-24 23:24 Maus: Should I replace those 4 with a slider then
2016-02-24 23:24 Maus: ?
2016-02-24 23:24 Strategas: which 4
2016-02-24 23:25 Maus: 01:10:639 (1) -
2016-02-24 23:25 Maus: Starting here
2016-02-24 23:25 Maus: Up to the reverse
2016-02-24 23:25 Strategas: you mean 1/2 slider?
2016-02-24 23:25 Maus: No one which overlaps with the reverse
2016-02-24 23:25 Maus: Like 1 tick before it
2016-02-24 23:25 Maus: It stops
2016-02-24 23:25 Maus: Y'know
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: I still don't get it
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: xdxd
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: if I would be in your place
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: I'd just
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: 01:10:639 (1) -
2016-02-24 23:26 Maus: I'm updating the map
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: make this
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: into the
2016-02-24 23:26 Strategas: extended slider
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: up to 01:10:885 -
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: since the strong is pretty strong
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: sound*
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: XDXD
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: strong is stron yeyeye
2016-02-24 23:27 Maus: lol
2016-02-24 23:27 Maus: I literally did that
2016-02-24 23:27 Maus: hahah
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: oke
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: ok so as I was saying
2016-02-24 23:27 Maus: Anything else you think should be changed?
2016-02-24 23:27 Strategas: 01:13:092 -
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: these two notes
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: should be definetely map
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: pped
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: it literally gets to highest pitch
2016-02-24 23:28 Maus: Added another halfslider
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: imo convert 01:13:092 -
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: into slider
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: ADasdasdas
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: circles
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: and add two more
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: IMO
2016-02-24 23:28 Strategas: slider can work too but it doesn't get emphasis then
2016-02-24 23:29 Maus: Right true
2016-02-24 23:29 Strategas: 01:15:626 -
2016-02-24 23:29 Strategas: this also cuts off for no real reason
2016-02-24 23:30 Strategas: oh and
2016-02-24 23:30 Strategas: 01:13:255 (1) -
2016-02-24 23:30 Strategas: you should prolly make this like
2016-02-24 23:30 Strategas: the part before
2016-02-24 23:30 Strategas: with the extended slider
2016-02-24 23:30 Strategas: since it is also partly overmap
2016-02-24 23:30 Strategas: and it will make things consistent
2016-02-24 23:31 Maus: Okay I'll add two reversing sliders during it where the nmusci is louder
2016-02-24 23:32 Strategas: 01:21:756 (9,5,9) -
2016-02-24 23:32 Strategas: I really want to be picky about these reverses
2016-02-24 23:32 Strategas: but
2016-02-24 23:32 Strategas: uhh
2016-02-24 23:32 Strategas: it can work
2016-02-24 23:33 Maus: Yeah I should probably make them follow the music better
2016-02-24 23:33 Strategas: 01:28:051 - could make this imo
2016-02-24 23:33 Strategas: map*
2016-02-24 23:33 Strategas: something is wrong with my wording today holy shit
2016-02-24 23:34 Strategas: 01:29:359 - same here
2016-02-24 23:34 Maus: np I get what you're saying lol
2016-02-24 23:36 Strategas: 01:42:192 (10) -
2016-02-24 23:36 Strategas: I don't really like this
2016-02-24 23:36 Strategas: and I'm not sure exactly why
2016-02-24 23:36 Strategas: lol
2016-02-24 23:36 Maus: Ehh, that part I think I'm keeping
2016-02-24 23:37 Strategas: 01:40:885 (2) -
2016-02-24 23:37 Strategas: like this spacing was good
2016-02-24 23:37 Strategas: but the 10 is eehh
2016-02-24 23:37 Maus: The 10 before the part
2016-02-24 23:37 Maus: The
2016-02-24 23:37 Maus: part
2016-02-24 23:38 Strategas: 01:42:192 (10) -
2016-02-24 23:38 Strategas: 01:49:631 (14,16) - this is also overmap but I think it's fine
2016-02-24 23:39 Strategas: somehow this turned into a mod lol
2016-02-24 23:39 Strategas: time to get kudosu
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2016-02-26 15:14 [ Seni ]: 00:19:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
2016-02-26 15:15 [ Seni ]: 00:19:958 (5) -
2016-02-26 15:20 [ Seni ]: 00:46:116 (6,7,8) -
2016-02-26 15:29 [ Seni ]: 01:01:811 (1,2,3) -
2016-02-26 15:29 [ Seni ]: 01:19:141 (7,8,1,2,3,4) -
2016-02-26 15:38 [ Seni ]: 00:54:291 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-02-26 15:39 [ Seni ]: 00:54:291 (9) -
2016-02-26 15:42 [ Seni ]: 00:55:353 (17) -
2016-02-26 15:44 [ Seni ]: 00:55:353 (17) -
2016-02-26 15:44 [ Seni ]: 00:54:291 (9) -
2016-02-26 15:45 [ Seni ]: 00:54:454 (11) -
2016-02-26 15:45 [ Seni ]: 00:55:844 (19) -
2016-02-26 15:50 [ Seni ]: 00:54:944 (14) -
2016-02-26 15:55 [ Seni ]: 00:51:021 (10) -
2016-02-26 15:56 [ Seni ]: 00:51:348 (11,12,13) -
MetoA
EXTRA DIFF
* 00:39:904 (5) - i think this should be 2 ticks longer
* 00:41:212 (5) - same here
* 00:57:996 (1,2,3) - if im not mistaking these are still a 1/4, or if they rly are 1/6 and im just hearing wrong, change the pattern or make these be a repetitive slider since its rly hard to notice the bpm change, it looks like a stream with the same bpm
* 01:09:495 (2) - i think that this is a 1/8 repetitive slider and it lasts till 01:09:658
* 01:09:658 (3) - not sure about this one but here's what i think http://puu.sh/nOxDC/4ccf56ef71.jpg this slider i mentioned starts from 01:09:822 and place a note between it, and after that u had 4 notes stream but now its turned into 3(this might sound very wrong u dont have to do this im not sure with it either but jsut giving a suggestion)
* 01:15:626 (14) - the sound of the song is the same with this slider 01:14:236 (13) - so i would suggest making it the same as this one, make the slider 1 tick earlier and with 1 more reverse arrows
* 01:31:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - u have (tap tap slider,tap tap slider,tap tap stream slider slider) and after that comes the same sound but u mapped the next one like(tap tap slider,tap tap stream slider stream slider slider) like its a different style for the same sound, and dont get me wrong, its probably ok to make a different style for the same sounds , but i like to make it the same(just my opinion and i suck at explaining LOL)
* 01:35:816 (2,3,4,5) - doesnt this stream look weird? like its a stacked stream and the last note is not stacked with the others, just feels weird
* 01:50:530 (6) - isnt this a 1/8?
* 01:51:239 (1) - i think that it should end at 01:53:800
* 00:19:631 (1) - i think that a repetitive slider should start here and end 00:19:876 (4) - , make 00:19:958 (5) - a stream and a repetitive slider starting 00:20:285 (6) - ending 00:20:530 (9) - and make 00:20:612 (10) - a stream, and not sure but maaaaaaybe 00:20:939 (1) - is a small slider, 1 tick long in 1/4
* 00:41:375 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - since u made the spacing on this and 00:42:192 (5,6,7,8,9) - much lower cuz of the kicks or what are the sounds called u should do it for the next notes ( will mention in a sec) but remember my previous thoughts, if u do as i said by making 00:41:212 (5) - 2 ticks longer,the low spaced stream will actually be 00:41:538 (8,9,10,11) - which means that the next one will also be 4 notes and being 00:42:192 (5,6,7,8) - meaning ur gonna have to make the 00:42:519 (9) - space away, and bringing us to the next low spaced stream that should be 00:42:846 (13,14,15,16) - or in the end i could be hearing bad and an alternative would be for those 3 streams to be 5 notes long
* 00:44:808 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - and this 00:50:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - are completely the same sound again ( i think so) and yet u have different styles , like , the first one i mentioned is a 4 note 1/6 stream, followed by a 1/6 slider and 1/8 stream, which is ok imo, but the next one i mentioned is a 5 note longer 1/6(timing is ok) but then u made a 1/4 repetitive slider which should be 1/8, like this stream 00:45:844 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Well i mentioned as much as i could, all of this could be wrong or right, its jsut things that i notice and think could or should be changed, u dont have to change anything if u think this is a bad mod and stuff, if u think some of these SHOULDNT be changed, i would like to hear ur opinion WHY. :D
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the last 20/30 mins or so
22:14 Maus: Ok fixed all except last comment
22:14 Maus: It's a stream jump and it's intentional
22:14 Megatron is bad: kk
22:14 Megatron is bad: 00:56:089 (9,10,1) - looks a bit too straight for my liking
22:15 Megatron is bad: 00:58:105 (3,4) - irregular spacing?
22:15 Megatron is bad: or intentional? idk
22:15 Maus: Ok I fixed it in the while fixing the previous stuff
22:15 Maus: And second thing, yes
22:15 Megatron is bad: 01:04:754 (9,10,11,12) - curving here is awk
22:16 Megatron is bad: 01:09:495 (2,3) - NC somewhere here? hard to read cause they look so similar :>
22:16 Megatron is bad: 01:14:073 (11,12,13) - spacing here's like an odd transition
22:19 Megatron is bad: 01:14:808 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - curve issue
22:22 Maus: Ok fixed those
22:23 Megatron is bad: 01:19:958 (3) - just move this up a bit to fix the curve
22:23 Megatron is bad: 01:22:083 (10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - curve fix pls
22:23 Megatron is bad: 01:23:310 (9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - curve fix pls
22:24 Megatron is bad: 01:26:661 (5,6,7,8,9) - think this should curve a bit towards the left
22:24 Megatron is bad: and same with the next section
22:27 Megatron is bad: 01:35:489 (1,2) - spacing? think you changed the spacing for the next section
22:27 Megatron is bad: and applied it here D:
22:32 Maus: Ok these are done
22:32 Megatron is bad: 01:39:740 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - curve fix from 3-10, and spacing from 10 and 11
22:32 Maus: Fucking curves tho
22:32 Megatron is bad: LOL
22:33 Megatron is bad: 01:41:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - curve
22:36 Megatron is bad: 01:45:871 (16,1,2,3) - curve
22:38 Maus: Ok
22:38 Maus: Fixed all the curves
22:39 Maus: Not changing the last stream even if u see a messed up curve there ;d
22:39 Maus: I like it that way
22:39 Megatron is bad: 01:46:280 (5,6,7,8,9) - curve this maybe?
22:39 Maus: Nah, I want it straight
22:39 Megatron is bad: kk
22:39 Megatron is bad: 01:47:669 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - strongly recommended to make this more smooth
22:40 Megatron is bad: space streams have to be perfectly curved pretty much, otherwise its not even figuratively impossible to hit
22:41 Megatron is bad: 01:48:405 (15,16,1) - round this out, you don't want straight lines in spaced streams XD
22:41 Megatron is bad: 01:49:059 (7,8,9) - curved here
22:41 Megatron is bad: 01:50:203 (2,3,4,5,6) - space this out even more! climax of the whole map
22:44 Maus: Ok done it all except the last long stream, that will wait for tomorrow
22:45 Maus: It's 7 am here ;d
22:45 Maus: I'm uploading, if you can play I'll spec
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