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You don't mod easy... Well, that's up to you, thanks for moddingMokouSmoke wrote:
[Hard][Normal]
- 00:07:766 (4,1,2) - http://puu.sh/nlNAW/6cc35bc3e1.jpg to avoid overlap between 00:07:244 (3,1) -
- 00:11:940 (3,1,2) - too much unnecessary overlap here as well. suggestion: http://puu.sh/nlNPR/9e1b612eac.jpg http://puu.sh/nlNTe/9253fbee35.jpg
- 00:15:070 (2,4) - avoid overlap and make nice blanket instead. http://puu.sh/nlNZx/03e48942f6.jpg
- 00:18:722 (4,5,6,7) - avoid overlap. I think you get the point, so I'll stop commenting on these. - Yep, I have fixed them
- 00:20:809 (8,9,10) - flow break, pls fix. http://puu.sh/nlOcC/cd7d53e120.jpg a few other places such as 01:15:592 (2,3) - 01:23:939 (2) - 02:48:200 (2,3) - have similar issues as well. - Fixed
- 00:23:940 (3,4) - blanket? - Not anymore, I turned it into a flow
- 00:38:287 (6) - change this to something else. 00:38:809 - should be clickable object, especially since you map drums with clap here - Yep, I replaced it with a slider
- 00:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - use ctrl+shift+d for better star pattern - I don't know how, can you help me?
- 01:21:853 (2,3,4,5) - why are these spacings so big when identical sounding part at 01:13:504 (1,2,3) - has normal spacing? - Fixed
- 01:58:374 (7,8,9) - could blanket - Did blanket, fixed
- 02:03:853 (1,2,3) - I don't think music here calls for such big jumps. - Something like this ok? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609851
- 02:41:418 (7,8,2) - stack these - Stacked
- 02:59:418 (4,5) - jump doesn't fit song. you don't use similar spacing at 02:57:331 (6) - even though it sounds similar - Like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609852
- 00:14:548 - strong downbeat here (you even put finish) so make this clickable - DONE
- 00:15:070 (1,2,3) - generally linear flow doesn't play very well - Something like this will do? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609857
- 00:22:114 (5) - move to [235,293] for better flow - I moved the 3 objects so it gonna be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609860
- 00:22:896 (1) - make this flatter for smoother flow http://puu.sh/nlP7U/ab7eb37474.jpg - I don't understand what " flatter" is. Sorry I'm new. Here's what I did https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609863
- 00:28:114 (4,5) - these don't look very nice since the slidertail overlaps with sliderhead - I blanket them, yeah... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609865
Thanks a lot!Black Emptiness wrote:
hi.
* Text "Thanks For Playing" could last longer. Extend it a little. (+ It doesn't show in Normal) - I'll add it
* MP3 isn't in 192kbps quality. - It's 320kpbs I supposed...
* Add some custom colors. - Sure
* You can turn off an epilepsy warning since there isn't anything flashy. - Done
Easy:
* 00:38:548 - Remove a reverse arrow here and put a note instead of it. - Oh, so you mean like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609945
Normal:
* 00:06:201 (1,3) - Stack them together. - Fixed
* 00:32:287 (4,2) - Shouldn't be overlaping. Redesign a slider 4 a little. - Replaced with a blanket instead
* 00:59:939 (8) - Move this a little bit down to perform a better blanket. - I moved the all, at the same time created a great blanket
* 02:19:244 (1) - End this slider on 02:20:287 - . Not enough recovery time. - FIXED
Hard:
* 00:08:287 (1,2,3,4) - Place them symmetrically. - Done
* 00:16:114 (4,1) - I see here some attempt for a blanket, but a failed one. Try something like this. [Image] - Oh, ModouSmoke helped me, so I fixed them
* 00:53:679 (4,2) - Not properly stacked. - Fixed
* 02:20:026 (6,7) - Unreadable. Replace (7) with a normal circle and place in the middle of (6) & (8). - Fixed
Good luck, Itsuki Hako.
Yes it does indeed. Thanks. The mod was very helpfulLog Off Now wrote:
Hope this helps!
I'm not gonna say anything... Thanks...LMT1996 wrote:
Random mod hehe.HardNo kidding this might get ranked if you get enough good mods. Things are pretty clean and nice already.00:52:114 (2,3) - so generally sliders shouldn't start on red tick just because it's reserved for highlights otherwise the player's going to feel slightly off when they play. My suggestion is: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4877733 . Redesign how the objects should be placed as you wish.
01:42:722 (2,3) - same stuff.
02:20:548 (4,1) - spacing? Not sure. If it's intentional then it's not wrong.
01:05:157 (3) - NC?
01:07:244 (8) - ^
01:15:070 (1) - remove NC this? And NC the downbeat.
01:21:331 (1) - here as well. You might be following the vocals, but then the downbeats are way too strong to ignore.
01:23:418 (1) - same
01:55:766 (1) - same
01:32:287 (8) - NC this to break the combo up?
01:58:374 (7) - same
02:01:505 (3,4) - There isn't a note on 4, so turn 3 to a slider that ends at 4 fits the music more imo.
02:18:200 (5) - NC to highlight this note.
03:14:548 (3) - might want to NC to emphasise this note, not sure.
03:09:331 (1,1) - spinner then there's a note here right away is quite mean, especially for Hard diff. Either shorten the spinner (might cause the spinner to be too short), or start the spinner 1 or 2 white ticks earlier.
Thanks for the mod. Very appriciateCookieBite wrote:
Hello there, from my modding queue.
*M4M
[Easy]
AR = 3
00:09:853 (4) - NC
00:19:244 (1) - change to this would be better?
00:24:461 (3,4) - blanket
00:41:679 (3) - recommend use 1 arrow only in easy difficulty, cause newbie players may cannot read that
00:52:114 (2,3) - blanket
00:54:331 - map something here or put a break here
00:56:809 (1,3) - too close
01:11:417 - map something here or put a break here
01:25:504 (1,2) - too close
01:44:804 - map something here or put a break here
01:47:940 (1,2) - too close
01:50:026 (3,4) - blanket
01:52:113 (1,2) - clone the first one and instead of slider 2?
01:57:331 (2,3) - blanket
02:21:331 - should begin here
02:31:766 (3) - use 1 arrow
[Normal]
HP can be higher
00:23:940 (3,4) - blanket
00:23:940 (3,6) - too close
00:31:244 (1,2,3) - blanket
00:56:287 (1) - in normal difficulty should be no sv change stuff
00:58:635 (5,7) - too close
00:59:417 (7,8) - improve blanket
01:13:504 - different kiai end with easy difficulty
01:16:113 (2,4) - close
02:38:026 (1,2) - ^
02:39:070 (3,4) - ^^
Lots of sv changing, not recommend
kk too many thing still need to improve, no mod for hard difficulty (cuz im tired).
gl with your map!
(btw nice sb)
LeNitrous wrote:
From my Modding QueueGeneral
- I don't know if its from my end but I get several Storyboard-related errors regarding missing files. Check AI-mod - Those files are not missing. I was just too lazy to add the extension, so osu can't find them. But they do show in SB.
- Use these colors. The pale colors suit the theme of the song. - Nice
Easy
- HP: 3, AR: 3, OD: 3
- 01:12:983 - Unsnapped Kiai
- 02:04:635 to 02:21:853 - I feel this break is too long even for Easy. Try to atleast shorten the break.
- 02:21:331 - Add Circle
Hard
- 03:17:156 (4) - Unsnapped object end
Nice Storyboard and thank you for using my Queue! Good luck on Ranking too! - Thanks