1. Easy (1,32 stars, 56 notes)
2. Hard (2,18 stars, 115 notes)
3. Normal (1,78 stars, 94 notes)
4. Snowfield (3,08 stars, 153 notes)

Christmas 2015 Kancolle BGM

Desperate-kun wrote:

I'm still newbie so I just check sets with <2 mods.

Exa wrote:

Snowdown:

00:03:118 (3,4,5,6,8) - These are not parallel, please make them. - Fix
00:03:663 (7,8,1) - Can you make (7,1) symmetrical to 8? - No want to keep triangle with next circles.
00:09:936 (4,5) - I would ctrl+G (4), move it a bit upwards to avoid the huge jump and reposition (5) accordingly. I think this slider deserves a bit more spacing because of the strength of the sound it's representing. - I don't like the idea sorry :c
00:19:209 (8) - Literally where it is, rotate by 25 (no selection center). It makes a nice continuation of the previous slider and also provides some diversity in the angle which sliders are played. - Kinda cool.
00:19:754 (1) - If you go with my previous suggestion do not touch this! The sudden (yet cool) change of angle makes this a nice way of indicating the beginning of the new section. - k
00:30:936 (2,3) - Too big compared to the rest before and after for a while. I think you saw this coming >.< - It's super fine.
00:30:936 (2,3,4) - Not to mention that the linear-wannabe movement makes this even harder to play. Not only because of that, but also because it's gradually decreasing, so it becomes even more weird. - ^
00:34:754 (4,2) - You've got enough space to avoid this nasty overlap. - Not overlaping because circle disapear before new one c:
00:48:663 (4,5,6) - I find these to be too impactful for the sound they are supposed to represent. A reverse slider should do the trick. - I prefer MUCH MORE circles/
00:53:572 (4,5) - Same really.
00:57:936 (4,5,4,5) - Aaand same.
01:11:027 - Lower volume. - Fix
01:11:572 - Lower volume. - ^

Hard:

00:24:936 (2) - Rotate this by 90 degrees so it actually looks like it can flow in and out properly, then move the patterns afterwards to avoid le jump. Nothing really wrong with it though. - Prefer my ver.
00:26:027 (4,1) - Haven't stacked before, shouldn't stack now. It is not only inconsistent, but also you should not stop the cursor movement now since you are going into a huge white tick (tense). - Ok :/
00:27:663 (4) - Rotate this by 90 degrees to make this sound stand out more since it now looks like it is part of the previous pattern (but it shouldn't be because the sound does not belong in the previous sound pattern) or to put it better, it is different, more tense and so, it could use a kinetic difference in comparison to everything before it. - I prefer symetry here c:
00:33:936 (2,4) - Nothing really wrong, but my inner OCD is telling me that the blanket could be improved. - Fix
00:41:300 - Should really map this, something like this should work. - I didn't because I let empty 00:38:027 - c:
00:41:572 (1) - How to: Symmetry. - It was, but we did it with Desperate-kun on purpose. I prefer flow with next circle like that.
00:44:845 (6,1) - (6)'s tail between (1)'s head and tail please! - I changed this because...yeah was kinda wrong.
00:44:845 (6,2) - Nobody will see it, but if you do the previous thing, you can blanket (2)'s down part with (6)'s head. - No more needed.
01:04:209 (3) - Would Ctrl+J for diversity but meh. - No !
01:05:027 (5,2) - Stack. - Fix
01:11:027 - Lower volume. - Fix
01:11:572 - Lower volume. - ^

Normal:

- Cuul.
01:11:027 - Lower volume. - Fix
01:11:572 - Lower volume. - ^

Easy:

- Cullest.
01:11:027 - Lower volume. - Fix
01:11:572 - Lower volume. - ^

General:

- Calm map, well approached. I am used to small objects on these kinds of songs but I think that the normal CS you went with provies kinetic calmness that goes well along with the musical and rhythmical ones.

Nozhomoe

Nozhomoe wrote:

Bored of modding same shit all day? Mod a Nozhomoe map and be happy for the rest of the day

It's 11pm, no more happiness for me

Yauxo wrote:

[Snowdown]
■ 00:09:936 (4) - I think it'd have a more chill effect if this was repeated instead of having a circle stacked underneath it (lik 00:27:390 (4) - ) - Ok
■ 00:15:390 (1,2,3) - Maybe space them a bit further apart? So far, the map feels like a greatly spaced one (objects dont seem to touch at all), and these kinda throw it off - Now 1.60x.
■ 00:29:572 (3,4,1,2) - I find this flow/curve rather weird Maybe put some makeup on that :c - I like it like this.
■ 00:39:936 (3,4,5) - Move down to equalize spacing of 00:39:663 (2,3) - and 00:40:481 (5,6) - ? - This is do on purpose to emphasis this part.
■ 00:55:754 (2,4) - NOT EVEN STACKED ;W; - okok
■ 01:08:845 (3,4,5,6) - The spacing ;w; The intensity ;w; - Despe-kun liked it and I agree this is cool. So won't change it.

[Hard]
■ 00:39:936 (5,6) - feels kind of way too close. - Hope it's a little better.

[Hard]
■ 00:50:300 (1) - Not even symmetric ;w; - Fix

How did the others find so many points ;w;
Cute map (◕▿◕✿)

NekoLumi wrote:

NekoLumi's Modding

• Easy :
  
  00:28:481 (1,3) - Tu pourrais faire en sorte que les anchors (carrés rouges) soient sur les ticks rouges pour que tes 2 sliders soient plus jolis - Non
  00:52:482 (3) - Un peu pareil, le mini carré rouge du slider est pas bien aligné sur ce red tick : 00:53:300 - - La symétrie donc non.
  01:03:390 (1,3) - Un tout petit millimètre sur le white tick (et le carré rouge) du milieu peut faire la différence, tes sliders sont bien cependant ^^ - Tssss kk orz.

• Normal :
  
  00:09:936 (5) - Je sais pas ... je dirais de virer le reverse et de mettre un hitcircle, ça sonnerait mieux. - Bof non.
  00:22:481 (2) - 490/109 pour plus de lisibilité sur une normal ? - T'es crazy ?
  00:31:481 (5) - 2 hitcircles seraient mieux pour ce genre de notes - J'aime pas trop et je préfère ce pattern.
  00:40:209 (2,3) - J'trouve ça moyen, essaie ça maybe > http://puu.sh/lRYeE.jpg ? - Changé à ma façon.
  00:43:481 (3) - 236/366 pour une meilleur lisibilité sur une normal, les stacks c'est pas trop le top surtout pour les jeunes débutants qui veulent commencer a les DT. ^^ - C'est du stack de queue de slider donc il n'y a pas de problème de lecture.
  00:43:754 (4,6) - Corrige un peu ce stack - Nazi.
  00:50:300 (1) - http://puu.sh/lRYtD.jpg ajuste un peu le carré rouge la ou se trouve la baballe, sinon l'overlap avec 00:48:663 (2) - c'est bof, mais comme ton pattern qui suit est très précis, j'doute que tu veuille changer. ^^ - Je préfère la symétrie du slider :c

• Hard :
  
  00:05:300 (3,1) - Stack a fix maybe ? > http://puu.sh/lRYHG.jpg (C'est son état actuel, j'ai rien touché) - Nazi too.
  00:07:481 (3) - Ce serait plus logique comme ça > http://puu.sh/lRYU4.jpg
  00:20:572 (3) - Same ^
  00:40:754 (7) - http://puu.sh/lRZb2.jpg ?
  01:04:209 (3) - http://puu.sh/lRZjv.jpg ? - Pour tous les reverses que tu as cité, je trouve que tu kill le flow et m'esthétique des patterns, donc non.

• Snowdown :
  
  00:23:572 (4) - J'ai loop-play ça 5 ou 7 fois, ça colle pas trop au rhytme ;w; je recommande juste de le fix - J'ai écoute à 25% et c'est ça dsl. Sinon propose un truc :c
  00:27:390 (4) - Enlève la reverse et met un hitcircle a la place pour que la derniere note du piano soit "clickable". :3 - Sonne bien comme ça.
  01:09:390 (4,5,6) - Je pige pas trop pourquoi tu fais des gros jumps quand la musique se calme (même presque du silence) sur la fin... - Parce que 01:07:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - et ça emphasis le passage tellement bien.

Modder's Word

Mesdames et Messieurs, le moddeur a attribué sa note ! NekoLumi : 9 ! Danse avec les stars c'est naze. xD
Sérieusement, très bonne map pas trop dure et plutôt douce. <3

Have fun o/ Nya~

CSLM wrote:

hi, m4m

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Suggestion

General

• Fine in my eyes

Easy

1. 00:12:118 (2) - *nazi* move this a little bit up, for conect better with 00:11:027 (1) - - Already k imo.
2. 00:32:845 (1,2) - idk, this pattern usually is bounced, with the higher space up the note for avoid confusions, specially in an Easy diff - Pattern is quite clear.
3. 00:37:209 (1) - aaa no plz, that note up there ruin the aesthetic of the map imo, plzz put it down the slider for get better with the flow - Explain better because I don't see what is wrong here at all.
4. 00:42:663 (2) - the same thing that i said in 00:12:118 (2) - Same
5. 00:48:118 (2) - ctrl-g, for consistency with 00:54:663 (1,2) - - No
6. 01:01:209 (3) - this slider doesn't seem symmetrycal at all - It is.
7. 01:03:390 (1) - ^ - Fix with previous mods.

Normal

1. 00:26:845 (2,3,4,5) - mmm, why not move this pattern more to the right, of that way 00:27:390 (3,4,5) - it's in the centre of the playfield? - because kill the rest of the map.
2. 00:35:845 (5,1) - stack plz - Fix
3. 00:43:754 (4,6) - ^ - Nazi
4. 00:48:663 (2,1) - ^ - No because want to keep symetric slider.

Hard

1. 00:08:845 (1,2,3) - make the arc of this sliders more soft, of that way fits more with the song imo - I don't want to. Works nice here.
2. 00:16:209 (3) - no plz, make this slider curve for pattern consistency - No
3. 00:17:572 (1) - ^ - ^
4. 00:40:481 (6,7) - move both upper (close of (5)'s tail), for a movement cleaner - Fix in previous mods.
5. 01:00:118 (2) - ctrl-g? - Was intentionnal.
6. 01:08:845 (2,3,1) - this pattern you should stack it in 01:07:481 (4) - or make a vertical triangle pattern instead of an horizontal one, now it looks weird imo - I just up a little it but looks fine.

Snowdown

1. 00:29:300 (2,4) - stack plz - Fix
2. 00:39:118 (4,1,2,3,4) - why not better a star pattern for this circles? and the 1/6 stream in where it's (1)? like this: http://puu.sh/lSW04/e1c7a7ec17.jpg - Because 00:39:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
3. 01:01:209 (3,4,5) - spacing inconsistent, move (5) a little bit down - You didn't play much maps right ? This is quite common pattern here.
4. 01:07:209 (6) - ctrl-g? flows better with 01:07:754 (1) - - Not at all.

GL with rank
choo choo~

Okoratu wrote:

as a wide screen player
your bg triggers me by being stretched xddddddddddddddd - :/

where did you find the mp3 anyways it's spectrograph loooks funny - Taked the 10min version and make it like it should be :>

A snow field, snowfield or neve is an accumulation of permanent snow and ice, typically found above the snow line, normally in mountainous and glacial terrain.

Glaciers originate in snowfields. The lower end of a glacier is usually free from snow and névé in summer. In the upper end and above the upper boundary of a glacier, the snow field is an ice field covered with snow. The glacier upper boundary, where it emerges from under a snow field, is ill-defined because of gradual transition.

really. interesting. - Desho ?

1/6 previewpoint seems useless and only there to trigger modders which is nice
would do the same tbh lol - Tbh I did it for having a good and precise start of preview.

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easy
00:56:845 (2) - could this overlap itself less in the end idk lol - Redo slider.
the diff is missing some whistles that should be there because you copied shit from the highest diff but forgot that this diff has no red tick rhythms so it's missing some whistles that you would normally expect in this diff - Are you kidding me ? There is almost whistle everywhere :c I add some but not so much because there is not so much places to put good one

normal
idk some whistles seem lol here too - Same
and 00:31:481 (5) - is uhh - is k :c
01:07:754 (6,1) - combos why - Fix

hard
ok so you have
00:03:118 (2,3) - 00:07:481 (3,4) - 00:11:845 (3,4) - trigger me a lot because now you got 00:20:572 (3,4,5) - 00:24:936 (2,3,4) - 01:04:209 (3,4,5) - and we already talked about that lol - 00:07:481 (3,4) - will be the only one I won't change because (4) is strong enough to have it clicked.
00:13:209 (6) - nc this shit i told you the last time i looked at it what the fuck are you doing - I did it...I think...? Fox orz.

neve
00:39:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - may look all fancy and symmetrical and stuff but uhh jump from 00:39:663 (2,3) - makes sense while that would mean 00:40:209 (4,5) - should also be one instead of 00:40:481 (5,6) - lol - Reduce these jumps :c not a regular 6 points pattern.


the way every spinner starts on a different point every diff makes no sense at all
longer spinners put more pressure on newer players because they spin huge ass circles
and you make them spin longer in every diff and it looks kind of lazy.....- Now same for Easy/Normal/Hard. Only Snowfield have a lower spinner due to difficulty up.

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Okoratu wrote:

please use this one on the description: