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Kawada Mami - JOINT (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Janpai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ramsa
Wow pending d graveyarded gz
Hnde mo na i uupdate to??
san anime to lol
Ramsa
ar9!!!
:c
Starset
IRC mod

SPOILER
13:16 HB24: first of all
13:16 Jana Marie: and modding lol XDD
13:16 HB24: remove op1 from the source
13:16 HB24: and put it in tags
13:16 Jana Marie: thanks :D
13:17 HB24: 00:04:225 (2) -
13:17 HB24: keep the same DS with other jumps
13:18 HB24: 00:04:725 (1,2) -
13:18 HB24: this dosnt follow the rythme
13:18 HB24: try this instead
13:18 HB24: http://puu.sh/kc2uc/6f8a04bfe6.jpg
13:21 Jana Marie: whats DS ? XDD sorry im just a noob mapper ._.
13:21 HB24: distance snap
13:21 Jana Marie: oh thanks :DD
13:22 HB24: u have notes which are far and some others very close
13:22 HB24: despite the fact that they are on the same timeline
13:22 HB24: respect the DS pls
13:22 HB24: if u dont players will get confused
13:22 Jana Marie: XDDD im just so bad at DS XDDD
13:23 HB24: its okay we all learned from practicing
13:23 HB24: put the AR on 9
13:23 Jana Marie: BTW thanks a lot >_< you helped a noob such like me :3
13:23 HB24: and the OD on 7
13:25 HB24: 00:57:725 (4,1) -
13:25 HB24: they are at the same time close and overlapped
13:25 HB24: its not beautiful :/
13:25 HB24: try to avoid overlapping
13:26 HB24: 01:04:058 (2,3,4,5) -
13:26 Jana Marie: >_< okayy
13:26 HB24: this will lead players to get confused
13:27 HB24: they will think that stream begins right after the slider
13:27 HB24: this is the main probleme of the map
13:27 Jana Marie: what i should do? XDDD
13:27 HB24: put it far
13:28 HB24: dont abuse from jumps
13:28 HB24: but dont
13:28 HB24: keep them very close
13:28 HB24: too
13:28 HB24: idk if u know wat i mean im bad at explaining x)
13:29 Jana Marie: its okay hehe XD
13:29 HB24: i mean
13:29 HB24: 00:01:059 (1,2,3,4) -
13:29 HB24: these are okay
13:29 HB24: but
13:29 HB24: 00:02:225 (5) -
13:29 HB24: this is close to the previous slider
13:30 HB24: despite being on the same timeline
13:30 HB24: 00:02:725 (1,2,3,4,5) -
13:30 Jana Marie: it should be a bit far?
13:30 HB24: these are okay too
13:30 HB24: 00:04:225 (2) -
13:30 HB24: but this is nope
13:30 HB24: yeah
13:31 Jana Marie: okay XD
13:31 HB24: want me to mod other diffs?
13:33 Jana Marie: if you wanted to XD
13:33 HB24: i dont mind at all ^^
13:34 Jana Marie: okie dokie XDDD
13:34 HB24: btw
13:34 HB24: ur mp3 is very high quality
13:34 HB24: http://puu.sh/kc30P/062f324b07.png
13:34 HB24: try reducing the kbs
13:34 Jana Marie: yeah im trying to XD
13:35 HB24: put it on 192
13:35 HB24: if u dont know how
13:35 HB24: u can use this website
13:35 HB24: http://audio.online-convert.com/convert-to-mp3
13:35 Jana Marie: im gonna convert it maybe other days because im soo busy this week and doesnt have enough time XD
13:35 Jana Marie: i know that site XDDD
13:36 HB24: u have the same problemes on the hard diff as well :/
13:36 HB24: 00:12:392 (4,1) -
13:37 Jana Marie: oh sorry XDD
13:37 HB24: im here to help u no need to be sorry lol
13:37 HB24: 00:39:392 (3,4) -
13:37 Jana Marie: XDDD
13:37 HB24: this isnt beautiful
13:38 HB24: 00:41:058 (1,2,3) -
13:38 HB24: idk why low sv here
13:38 HB24: there s no reason to
13:38 HB24: 00:44:725 (3,4) -
13:39 HB24: :/
13:39 HB24: 01:11:558 (2,3) -
13:39 Jana Marie: >_<
13:40 HB24: consider to recheck ur map about these DS problemes
13:40 HB24: i think u got wat i mean
13:40 HB24: and u can find them by yourself
13:40 Jana Marie: okay thanks a lot :DDDD
13:40 Jana Marie: your a big heeelppp >_<
13:41 HB24: still gonna have a little check on the normal :D
13:41 Jana Marie: i think you getting disappointed too lol XD
13:42 HB24: normal and easy diffs ALWAYS need to have DS on
13:42 HB24: *1.0
13:42 HB24: otherwise its unrankable
13:43 HB24: u can see ur DS problemes with the AI mod
13:43 HB24: ctrl+shift+a
13:43 Jana Marie: Ugh i totally sucked at spacings T^T
13:43 HB24: like i said keeping the DS on is only necessary for easy and normal
13:44 Jana Marie: >_<
13:45 HB24: im a player who can read all ARs and play every diff
13:45 HB24: imagine the one who begins playing osu in 2 days
13:45 Jana Marie: :O
13:45 HB24: DONT change the sv in easy and normal diffs
13:46 HB24: NEW PLAYERS get confused really easy
13:46 HB24: i know its a pain but if u want to rank ur maps u need to follow the rules
13:47 Jana Marie: thanks a lot >_<
13:47 Jana Marie: i think my map is a pain in the ass lol
13:47 HB24: thats all i can do for u now its up to you ^^
Akitoshi
You requested NM/M4M in #modreqs and you didn't replied so I won't mod your diffs yet, let's go first for Meta

  1. Your mp3 file is higher than 192kbps (UNRANKABLE) so pls fix it.
  2. Uncheck all box in Song Setup > Design. You need them if you have storyboard. (Apply it in all diffs)
  3. In your normal Diff, I recommend to use "Distance Snap"
  4. "Artist" should 川田まみ, put Kawada Mami in "Romanised Artist" instead. (Just copy-paste my moonrunes to Artist for ez fix)
pm me in game if want NM.
Starset
too late AKiTOSHi xD
Akitoshi

HB24 wrote:

too late AKiTOSHi xD
There's no late in philippines lmao
PanPan_old_1
NM:
Insane


00:10:392 (2) - the slider should start there: 00:10:225

00:23:058 (3) - stack 00:24:058 (6)

00:45:058 (3) - stack 00:45:725

00:51:225 (2,4) - It does not look good the overlap

00:54:058 (2) - stack with 00:54:725 -

01:07:225 (1,3) - overlap

modd small but if you give me one served KDS
Topic Starter
Janpai

Panxo_Gamer wrote:

NM:
Insane


00:10:392 (2) - the slider should start there: 00:10:225 FIXED

00:23:058 (3) - stack 00:24:058 (6) I dont think it should be a stack , the slider follows the exact tone

00:45:058 (3) - stack 00:45:725 SAME ^

00:51:225 (2,4) - It does not look good the overlap FIXED

00:54:058 (2) - stack with 00:54:725 - SAME ^^

01:07:225 (1,3) - overlap FIXED

modd small but if you give me one served KDS
Thanks 8-)
NewPlayer
Hi! NM from this queue. Note: I write the next suggestion as if you didn't apply the previous.

[General]
  1. Missing second Kiai on Normal (actually, don't know why did you divided it on Hard and Insane)

[Normal]
  1. I'd recommend you to reduce the grid size (to small/tiny) for more precise blankets and consistent spacing. Also, since it's the easiest diff on mapset, place objects only with the Distance Snap on! (0.8x is fine)
  2. 00:08:058 (3) - move down the grid for better flow
  3. 00:09:058 (1,2) - better blanket (reduce grid size/turn grid snap off to make it perfect)
  4. 00:11:058 (3) - move down for better flow
  5. 00:11:725 - break is too long here, map that part!
  6. 00:35:058 (4,5) - spacing should be the same on Normal and Easy (reduce grid size to move it down)
  7. 00:36:725 (1,2) - spacing. Also, blanket here?
  8. 00:38:058 (3) - move up-left for better flow: http://puu.sh/kgX1k/4a09211b06.jpg
  9. 00:38:392 (1,2) - blanket
  10. 00:39:058 (2,3) - avoid using 1/2 in the easiest diff of mapset (Normal should match mapping techniques of Easy in that case)
  11. 00:40:392 (4,5) - spacing (won't mention it anymore)
  12. 00:41:058 (1) - SV change isn't recommended for Easy and Normal diffs
  13. 00:41:058 (1,2,3) - ^so spacing should be consistent there too
  14. 00:45:392 (3) - overlaps with (1), try to avoid that
  15. 00:46:392 (5,1) - 1/2
  16. 00:48:392 (4) - overlaps with (1)
  17. 00:49:058 (1,2) - blanket
  18. 00:49:725 (2,3) - 1/2
  19. 00:54:392 (1) - overlap since SV change
  20. 00:59:725 (1) - improve that wave: http://puu.sh/kgXrT/1023d62958.jpg
  21. 01:01:058 (3,4,1) - 1/2
  22. 01:03:725 (3,4) - 1/2
  23. 01:05:058 (1) - try to make it more symmetrical: http://puu.sh/kgXxu/6b7a13e9ea.jpg
  24. 01:13:058 (5) - overlaps with (3)
  25. 01:13:058 (5,1) - blanket
  26. 01:15:392 (3) - maybe make it symmetrical to (1) or make (1) symmetrical to this for better looking
  27. 01:21:725 (2) - move right-down or blanket with (1)
  28. 01:25:392 (2) - overlaps with 01:23:725 (4)
  29. 01:27:392 (3,4) - blanket
  30. 01:29:392 (2) - overlaps with 01:27:725 (4)
  31. 01:31:058 (1) - move right-down for better flow
In general, you should go through this diff with Distance Snap and make sure that spacing is the same everywhere. Also avoid SV changes as it's Normal and the easiest diff of the mapset. Avoid overlaps and 1/2 notes as well.

[Hard]
  1. Grid size thing
  2. 00:02:725 (1) - move up-left for better flow: http://puu.sh/kgY5U/30fe881194.jpg
  3. 00:03:725 (1) - try to curve it more: http://puu.sh/kgYdr/4167960ba2.jpg
  4. 00:04:892 (4,1) - maybe do something with this overlap
  5. 00:10:225 - add a note here? There's a strong hearable note here.
  6. 00:13:725 (2,3) - there should be a triple, add a note between those
  7. 00:14:392 (1) - suggesting to add a note after that slider to keep a rhythm
  8. 00:15:058 (2,3,4) - don't see a reason for a triple here
  9. 00:17:392 (3) - bad flow, move it down
  10. 00:21:058 (1,2) - blanket
  11. 00:27:392 (2,3) - make them parallel
  12. 00:37:058 (1,2) - increase the spacing between them since it can be readed as 1/2 by players
  13. 00:39:058 (2) - ^
  14. 00:40:392 (4) - suggesting to make a rhythm that way: http://puu.sh/kgYRw/e04ef9afa7.jpg There's a strong note on the first white tick and on the red tick next to it so players should hit both of them
  15. 00:47:725 (4) - copy-paste-flip (3): http://puu.sh/kgZ0i/4666eebf13.jpg
  16. 01:06:392 (2,1) - increase the spacing
Quite hard to mod patterns since you are changing the spacing in the parts with the same rhythm with no reason. You should stick to consistent spacing in the parts with the same rhythm (with using distance snap preferably). As in Normal, go through this diff and make spacing the same on the same parts (ofc that doesn't include jumps (but they should be consistent too)).

[Insane]
  1. Grid size
  2. 00:06:392 (1,2,3) - maybe make triangle here?
  3. 01:10:892 (5) - suggesting that rhythm: http://puu.sh/kgZTO/99487d9b17.jpg
Won't mod patterns because of (as in Hard) inconsistent spacing in many parts. You already know what to do :-)

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Janpai

NewPlayer wrote:

Hi! NM from this queue. Note: I write the next suggestion as if you didn't apply the previous.

[General]
  1. Missing second Kiai on Normal (actually, don't know why did you divided it on Hard and Insane)

[Normal]
  1. I'd recommend you to reduce the grid size (to small/tiny) for more precise blankets and consistent spacing. Also, since it's the easiest diff on mapset, place objects only with the Distance Snap on! (0.8x is fine)
  2. 00:08:058 (3) - move down the grid for better flow
  3. 00:09:058 (1,2) - better blanket (reduce grid size/turn grid snap off to make it perfect)
  4. 00:11:058 (3) - move down for better flow
  5. 00:11:725 - break is too long here, map that part!
  6. 00:35:058 (4,5) - spacing should be the same on Normal and Easy (reduce grid size to move it down)
  7. 00:36:725 (1,2) - spacing. Also, blanket here?
  8. 00:38:058 (3) - move up-left for better flow: http://puu.sh/kgX1k/4a09211b06.jpg
  9. 00:38:392 (1,2) - blanket
  10. 00:39:058 (2,3) - avoid using 1/2 in the easiest diff of mapset (Normal should match mapping techniques of Easy in that case)
  11. 00:40:392 (4,5) - spacing (won't mention it anymore)
  12. 00:41:058 (1) - SV change isn't recommended for Easy and Normal diffs
  13. 00:41:058 (1,2,3) - ^so spacing should be consistent there too
  14. 00:45:392 (3) - overlaps with (1), try to avoid that
  15. 00:46:392 (5,1) - 1/2
  16. 00:48:392 (4) - overlaps with (1)
  17. 00:49:058 (1,2) - blanket
  18. 00:49:725 (2,3) - 1/2
  19. 00:54:392 (1) - overlap since SV change
  20. 00:59:725 (1) - improve that wave: http://puu.sh/kgXrT/1023d62958.jpg
  21. 01:01:058 (3,4,1) - 1/2
  22. 01:03:725 (3,4) - 1/2
  23. 01:05:058 (1) - try to make it more symmetrical: http://puu.sh/kgXxu/6b7a13e9ea.jpg
  24. 01:13:058 (5) - overlaps with (3)
  25. 01:13:058 (5,1) - blanket
  26. 01:15:392 (3) - maybe make it symmetrical to (1) or make (1) symmetrical to this for better looking
  27. 01:21:725 (2) - move right-down or blanket with (1)
  28. 01:25:392 (2) - overlaps with 01:23:725 (4)
  29. 01:27:392 (3,4) - blanket
  30. 01:29:392 (2) - overlaps with 01:27:725 (4)
  31. 01:31:058 (1) - move right-down for better flow
In general, you should go through this diff with Distance Snap and make sure that spacing is the same everywhere. Also avoid SV changes as it's Normal and the easiest diff of the mapset. Avoid overlaps and 1/2 notes as well.

[Hard]
  1. Grid size thing
  2. 00:02:725 (1) - move up-left for better flow: http://puu.sh/kgY5U/30fe881194.jpg
  3. 00:03:725 (1) - try to curve it more: http://puu.sh/kgYdr/4167960ba2.jpg
  4. 00:04:892 (4,1) - maybe do something with this overlap
  5. 00:10:225 - add a note here? There's a strong hearable note here.
  6. 00:13:725 (2,3) - there should be a triple, add a note between those
  7. 00:14:392 (1) - suggesting to add a note after that slider to keep a rhythm
  8. 00:15:058 (2,3,4) - don't see a reason for a triple here
  9. 00:17:392 (3) - bad flow, move it down
  10. 00:21:058 (1,2) - blanket
  11. 00:27:392 (2,3) - make them parallel
  12. 00:37:058 (1,2) - increase the spacing between them since it can be readed as 1/2 by players
  13. 00:39:058 (2) - ^
  14. 00:40:392 (4) - suggesting to make a rhythm that way: http://puu.sh/kgYRw/e04ef9afa7.jpg There's a strong note on the first white tick and on the red tick next to it so players should hit both of them
  15. 00:47:725 (4) - copy-paste-flip (3): http://puu.sh/kgZ0i/4666eebf13.jpg
  16. 01:06:392 (2,1) - increase the spacing
Quite hard to mod patterns since you are changing the spacing in the parts with the same rhythm with no reason. You should stick to consistent spacing in the parts with the same rhythm (with using distance snap preferably). As in Normal, go through this diff and make spacing the same on the same parts (ofc that doesn't include jumps (but they should be consistent too)).

[Insane]
  1. Grid size
  2. 00:06:392 (1,2,3) - maybe make triangle here?
  3. 01:10:892 (5) - suggesting that rhythm: http://puu.sh/kgZTO/99487d9b17.jpg
Won't mod patterns because of (as in Hard) inconsistent spacing in many parts. You already know what to do :-)

Good luck!
Well I applied all of your suggestions but i dont know how to make my spacing consistent (especially on hard and insane) Mostly I liked making jumps in a mapset WELL ARIGATOU GOZAIMASU :D (Maybe I misinterpret your other suggestion, maybe check if you have time)
Starset
Yo!

Update:
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kawada Mami-JOINT -TV Size- www.mp3mobile.me .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67392
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 94392
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:JOINT (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:JOINT (TV Size)
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Jana Marie
Version:HB's Insane
Source:灼眼のシャナ II
Tags:Shakugan no Shana II OP 1 HB24
BeatmapID:790188
BeatmapSetID:355538

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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356,92,19642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,256,20725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,328,20892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,52,22058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,240,22225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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356,244,23225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Slayed_old_1
hi there!
from my queue

dont want to talk much about the general, but you have mistakes in timing.
to check them, open aimod (ctrl+shift+a)
and make 01:34:225 - here a timing point with 15% volume.
also u need hitsounds for the spinner because its to loud for the places, where u put it

normal
OD +1, HP +1
in general it looks nice, but u have problems with spacing.
kinda check these 2 notes 00:10:058 (3,4) - and those 00:22:392 (1,2)
they have different distances, and thats unrankable.
00:35:725 (5,1) - also here.
etc.
to fix that, try to use distance snap from the start (maybe remap?)

also here: 00:39:058 (2,3) - 00:41:725 (2,3) - bad blankets between these sliders. again use DS>

now some places, that should be fixed:

1. 00:03:058 (3,1) - here should be a flow. xmpl

2. 00:05:725 (3,1) - same

3. 00:09:725 (2,3) - blanket here looks weird. thy to do smth with slider

4. 00:31:725 (3,1) - ^

5. 00:34:725 (3,4) - make here a flow xmpl

6. 00:40:725 - i think u should not miss this note

7. 00:46:392 (5,1) - flow again

8. 00:53:392 (5) - weird. change it. xmpl

9. 01:34:392 - i should not hear the end of the spinner. so reduce the volume pls.

hard.
same things u have in hard.
use DS and check blankets. still looks ok. :lol:
p.s. u should use DS and make jumps in a few places, or triplets like other ppl do.

insane.
hmm.. dont be angry on me. but this diff looks strange and weird.
i guess it will be better, if u will do hyper (hard +) instead of this diff. HB's insane is really nice done, so it should not be a problem for you.

anyways, mod:

AR+1, OD+1, HP+2

1. 00:02:225 (5) - better to change on caz u are missing general notes.

2. 00:04:725 (5) - missing a note here for the rhytm

3. 00:15:058 (3) - make a line here xmpl

4. 00:17:058 (1) - ugly slider

5. 00:32:225 - note is missing

6. 00:32:392 (1) - looks bad and doesnt fit the song

7. 00:48:225 (1) - better to change on

8. 01:01:058 (3) - ugly slider

9. 01:25:058 (1) - same as 6
Topic Starter
Janpai

ohyeahitsjustme wrote:

hi there!
from my queue

dont want to talk much about the general, but you have mistakes in timing.
to check them, open aimod (ctrl+shift+a)
and make 01:34:225 - here a timing point with 15% volume.
also u need hitsounds for the spinner because its to loud for the places, where u put it

normal
OD +1, HP +1
in general it looks nice, but u have problems with spacing.
kinda check these 2 notes 00:10:058 (3,4) - and those 00:22:392 (1,2)
they have different distances, and thats unrankable.
00:35:725 (5,1) - also here.
etc.
to fix that, try to use distance snap from the start (maybe remap?)

also here: 00:39:058 (2,3) - 00:41:725 (2,3) - bad blankets between these sliders. again use DS>

now some places, that should be fixed:

1. 00:03:058 (3,1) - here should be a flow. xmpl

2. 00:05:725 (3,1) - same

3. 00:09:725 (2,3) - blanket here looks weird. thy to do smth with slider

4. 00:31:725 (3,1) - ^

5. 00:34:725 (3,4) - make here a flow xmpl

6. 00:40:725 - i think u should not miss this note

7. 00:46:392 (5,1) - flow again

8. 00:53:392 (5) - weird. change it. xmpl

9. 01:34:392 - i should not hear the end of the spinner. so reduce the volume pls.
Well, I remapped it thanks for the help :)

hard.
same things u have in hard.
use DS and check blankets. still looks ok. :lol:
p.s. u should use DS and make jumps in a few places, or triplets like other ppl do.
Just use few DS and making jumps is my style :D

insane.
hmm.. dont be angry on me. but this diff looks strange and weird.
i guess it will be better, if u will do hyper (hard +) instead of this diff. HB's insane is really nice done, so it should not be a problem for you.

anyways, mod:

AR+1, OD+1, HP+2 Um i dont think it needs to be adjust AR 10 is too much :v

1. 00:02:225 (5) - better to change on caz u are missing general notes.

2. 00:04:725 (5) - missing a note here for the rhytm

3. 00:15:058 (3) - make a line here xmpl

4. 00:17:058 (1) - ugly slider

5. 00:32:225 - note is missing

6. 00:32:392 (1) - looks bad and doesnt fit the song

7. 00:48:225 (1) - better to change on

8. 01:01:058 (3) - ugly slider

9. 01:25:058 (1) - same as 6
Sorry for my map if it looks like strange >_< this is my first insane though
THANKS A LOT :)
DominikWW
Hi,
I am a begginer in modding but I've tried my best :D
Normal

  1. I would change in the editor the tactline into 1/2. So you have a better review.
Rhythm of the hit objects
Don't forget to keep the distance constantly:

1. 00:02:392 (3) - move it a half tact back - Like this it hits the changing sound better

2. 00:05:058 (3) - move it a half tact back and change the lenth of the slider: +1/2 tact - same reason like 1.

3. 00:07:725 (3) - the same like 2.

4. 00:23:058 (2,3) - delete them and add here an 1 tact slider + 2 arrow (= 3 tacts) - I think like this it flows better to the rhythm

5. 00:25:725 (3,4) - the same like 4.

6. 00:29:725 (2) - I think this part sounds a bit strange/ doesn't fit. Maybe change the length of the slider: - 1/2 tact and add a circle at 00:30:892

7. 00:31:725 (2,3) - - I think something is missing here. change the length of the slider: -1 tact and delete (3). add at 00:32:392 a 1/2 tact slider + 2 arrow (=1 1/2 tacts)

8. 00:34:058 (3,4) - delete one arrow of (4) and move it to 00:35:058 and change the length of the slider (3): +1 tact - I think liek this it fits better to the vocal( if you will change that you have to change the hitsound at (4). )

9. 00:35:725 (1,2) - delete them and add a cricle at 00:35:725 and a 2 tact slider at 00:36:058. - I think like this the slider fits better to the vocal here

10. 00:46:392 (2,3) - here the same like 9.

11. 00:53:058 (2) - Try that: change the length: -1/2 tact and add 1 arrow. - I think it sounds better to the vocal

12. 00:54:392 (1) - replace it info 2 circles. - I think it fits better to the drum hits at this part

13. 00:55:058 (6,7) - move them both a half tact forward - I think like this it sound more equal to the part at 00:57:725

14. 00:56:058 (8) - delete. add a circle at 00:56:058 and a 1/2 tact slider at 00:56:392. - I think like this you hear better how it follow the rhythm

15. 00:57:058 (2) - here the same like 12.

16. 01:00:058 (4) - delete 4 an add a circle here - fits better to the drums.

17. 01:00:725 (1,2,3,4) - delete them and add a 1 tact slider at 01:00:392 and a 1 1/2 tacts slider at 01:00:892. Add a 1/2 slider at 01:01:725.

01:07:058 - hmm. I've stoped here. I tried to follow the vocals but I've seen that you follow a own rhythm here. well it's your decision if you want to change or not.

18. 01:31:725 (1) - maybe chang the length of the spinner until 01:35:725 and without the hitsound - finish


Spacing:
1. 00:51:558 (3) - yeah it fits but anyway don't stack. I think it's confusing/too hard in Normal.

2. 01:10:892 (2) - same here

3. 01:15:892 (2) - same here

4. 01:18:225 (2) - same here

5. 01:23:225 (2) - same here

6. 01:26:892 (2) - same here

More I can't tell you about spacing because I don't know what you will change and what not of the rhythm so .. :roll:


Hitsounds:
1. These are all suggestions. Try them out:

2. 00:33:058 - finish

3. 00:38:392 - finsih

4. 00:43:725 - finish

5. 00:49:058 - finish

6. 00:54:392 (1) - the whole slider(start/end) - finish

7. 00:57:058 - here the same

8. 00:59:725 and 01:00:058 - finsih

9. 01:05:392 - that sounds a bit strange. Maybe without the whistle?

10. 01:07:558 - finish

11. 01:18:225 - finish

12. 01:31:392 - finish




Hard


Rhythm of the hit objects
1. 00:13:725 (2,3,4) - maybe delete (3)? it's the only part at the beginning with 1/4 tacts

2. 00:41:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe change them into 4x 1 tact slider: at 00:41:058 , 00:41:725 ...

3. 00:47:725 (4) - place 2 circles before (4) - it'S the same part as 00:36:892 (4,5)

4. 00:51:642 (6) - maybe delete. I think 1/4 tact should not be at this time

5. 00:54:392 (4) - add 2 circles before (4). Same as 3.

6. 00:56:725 - Maybe add circle?

7. 01:06:392 (2) - maybe move it 1/2 tact forward

Please answer to my mod so I have feedback about what I can do better in my mods. If you like my mod (It was very helpful) I could mod your beatmap again so I will try to watch more on Hard next time.
I hope I could help. Good luck with your beatmap :)
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