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Ayumi. - Hanagoyomi short version

posted 2015-09-02T07:58:57+00:00

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Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2015-09-07T14:52:21+00:00

こんちゃ。きになったとこだけ突っ込んで見ます

General

Image Resolution は全て同じにした方がいいと思います（maxresdefault (1)だけ違ってましたので）
Turn off "Letterbox During Breaks". Storyboardは無いのでこれはひつようないです。

Easy

00:47:505 (1) - Blanketが少しずれてます。
00:55:505 (1,2) - このスライダーですがほんの少しだけずれてます。多分 (1) をCopyしてRotateした方がきれいに見えます。
01:08:172 (2,3) - この二つのスライダーですが少しずらせばBlanketができますよ。
01:12:838 (1,3) - (3)が(1)の尻に触れてます。01:14:172 (3) - を下におろしてカーブを上向きにしてみたらどうですか？参考になれるとうれしい～。これは(2)をBlanketに変えた物です。

Normal

00:24:505 (4,1) - 次は1/2のStackがくるのでここをUnstackさせるのが自分なりにオススメ
01:02:172 (3) - これとかどうでしょう？
01:15:505 (1,2,3,4) - (1)のカーブを減らして(4)の尻は(2)とStack.1,2,3 and 4.コレをおｋした場合この後の部分も直さなければならないので頑張ってください。
01:34:172 (1) - これは01:32:838 (4) - に合わせてBlanketしたほうがイイと思います

Hard

00:41:505 (8) - 1/3 reverseもアリ
01:02:338 (1) - Spinner Starts at 01:02:255 -
00:49:505 (3) - を00:48:172 (3) - とStack
ここから上のDiffはそんなにModできないのですみません (╯︵╰,)

Insane

00:35:505 (1,2,3,4) - わざとかもしれませんが四角がすこしずれてます(Highlightすれば見えます)
01:23:755 (2,3) - このStackですがDistance Snap = x0.2かx0.5にしてずらせばきれいに見えるとおもいます

Extra

00:49:172 (3) - ボーカルに合わせこれを上向きのジャンプにしたら？
01:08:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - もっと激しくしていいと思います俺ドMヘ(￣ω￣ヘ)
01:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - 同じく↑
01:27:505 (1,2,3,4) - これはボーカルにあわせたジャンプ

少しだけでも参考になれたら嬉しいです(´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-09-09T02:04:39+00:00

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
こんちゃ。きになったとこだけ突っ込んで見ます

Ashemu's Extra
00:49:172 (3) - ボーカルに合わせこれを上向きのジャンプにしたら？ -Fix
01:08:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - もっと激しくしていいと思います俺ドMヘ(￣ω￣ヘ) -Fix
01:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - 同じく↑ - 01:08:838 (1,2,3,4,5)との強弱をつけるため NoChange
01:27:505 (1,2,3,4) - これはボーカルにあわせたジャンプ-Fix

少しだけでも参考になれたら嬉しいです(´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)

Modありがとうございますーヽ(=´▽`=)ﾉ♪

Update plz ~ <3

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TitleUnicode:Hanagoyomi short version
Artist:Ayumi.
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DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-09T06:45:43+00:00

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
こんちゃ。きになったとこだけ突っ込んで見ます

General
Image Resolution は全て同じにした方がいいと思います（maxresdefault (1)だけ違ってましたので）
Turn off "Letterbox During Breaks". Storyboardは無いのでこれはひつようないです。

Easy
00:47:505 (1) - Blanketが少しずれてます。
00:55:505 (1,2) - このスライダーですがほんの少しだけずれてます。多分 (1) をCopyしてRotateした方がきれいに見えます。
01:08:172 (2,3) - この二つのスライダーですが少しずらせばBlanketができますよ。
01:12:838 (1,3) - (3)が(1)の尻に触れてます。01:14:172 (3) - を下におろしてカーブを上向きにしてみたらどうですか？参考になれるとうれしい～。これは(2)をBlanketに変えた物です。

Normal
00:24:505 (4,1) - 次は1/2のStackがくるのでここをUnstackさせるのが自分なりにオススメ
01:02:172 (3) - これとかどうでしょう？
01:15:505 (1,2,3,4) - (1)のカーブを減らして(4)の尻は(2)とStack.1,2,3 and 4.コレをおｋした場合この後の部分も直さなければならないので頑張ってください。
01:34:172 (1) - これは01:32:838 (4) - に合わせてBlanketしたほうがイイと思います

Hard
00:41:505 (8) - 1/3 reverseもアリ
01:02:338 (1) - Spinner Starts at 01:02:255 -
00:49:505 (3) - を00:48:172 (3) - とStack
ここから上のDiffはそんなにModできないのですみません (╯︵╰,)

Insane
00:35:505 (1,2,3,4) - わざとかもしれませんが四角がすこしずれてます(Highlightすれば見えます)
01:23:755 (2,3) - このStackですがDistance Snap = x0.2かx0.5にしてずらせばきれいに見えるとおもいます

少しだけでも参考になれたら嬉しいです(´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)

Mod有難うございます！！！
All fix

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-09-12T06:40:43+00:00

Ashemu's Extra
Update plz <3

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Artist:Ayumi.
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Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
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DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-12T13:40:12+00:00

A s h e m u wrote:

Ashemu's Extra
Update plz <3

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Title:Hanagoyomi short version
TitleUnicode:Hanagoyomi short version
Artist:Ayumi.
ArtistUnicode:Ayumi.
Creator:Yasaija 714
Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
Tags:hana no no ni saku utakata no opening ashemu
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更新しました

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2015-09-18T05:29:39+00:00

Hi hi :^ saw you from #modreqs
[Easy]
-Should improve more on hitsounding. Some parts really make me annoying, such as 00:43:172 - 00:44:505 - 00:45:172 etc,... If it's a slider, then make slidertick a hitsound same as clap will be better.
0018:172 (1,4) - bad overlap
00:23:505 (1) - maybe stack it with 00:21:505 - cause you can see the overlap
00:35:505 (3) - bad drawed slider. Do this

00:38:172 (3) - you may thing this is no problem at all, but Easy and Normal diff shouldn't have self-overlap sliders. Also, this slider has a bad overlap with 2. So I suggest you to re-draw it. ( I learned that from Milan- )
00:43:172 - like I mention before, some part like this should have a clap.
00:44:505 - ^
00:45:172 - ^. Just listen carefully to the snare, and put clap there.
00:46:172 (2) - easy to misunderstanding. Do this

00:49:838 - Even when you followed the vocal, you missed a strong beat here
00:50:172 (1,2,1) - These objects has a little wrong distance. Fix that, also fix the overlap of 00:50:172 to 00:48:838
01:05:505 (2,4) - bad overlap
01:12:505 (4,1) - stack them with 01:11:172
01:22:172 (3,4) - blanket them
01:32:172 (2) - bad overlap with 01:31:172
01:34:172 (1,2) - not symmetrical yet? Fix them
[Normal]
*This is just me, but I don't really like it when I have something same with others. Such as Normal Background. As you can see, my current pending map has no same background with the Fycho's one. So yeah, just keep it if you're too lazy to search for another lol
00:09:506 (1) - This is too close from the previous circle. Consider move it further or stack it with 00:07:506 - for better look and better play
00:15:006 (2) - Do this? It makes the pattern more pretty. And the DS after it is easy to fix too.

00:30:172 (2) - bad overlap
00:41:172 (4) - bad slider shape. Redraw it
00:42:172 (1) - bad overlap
Well, this Diff has too many bad overlap and slider shape. I'm not gonna mod it, because there's too many to fix O.o Best suggest: Remap it
[Hard]
00:05:006 (3,4,1) - Do this, so the 1 can stack with 00:04:006

00:17:505 (3) - too curve, and bad overlap too. Fix this
00:18:255 - there's no sound here, and you make it a 1/4 return slider, but then 00:18:422 - there's a sound, and you place nothing? Fix this
00:20:838 - ^
01:32:838 - ^
00:23:588 - no sound here, so remove the 1/4 slider and change it to 1 1/2 slider
00:26:422 - nothing? you should add something here
00:40:505 (4) - stack it with 00:41:172
01:22:005 - no hitclap at the slider end
[Ashemu's]
00:09:006 (4) - Ctrl + G it for clearer Distance.
00:13:006 (2) - bad overlap
00:17:505 (4) - this could be a better blanket. Fix it
00:18:172 (1,2,3) - move this away to avoid overlapping
00:20:838 (1) - slider end stack with 00:20:172 - pls?
00:41:505 - remove the inherited point. The sound is bad. Also change 1,2,3,4 to 2 return sliders, that's enough
00:44:505 (6) - stack pls
Good luck on the map

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-19T02:04:37+00:00

[quote="[ Shana Yami ]"]Hi hi :^ saw you from #modreqs
[Easy]
-Should improve more on hitsounding. Some parts really make me annoying, such as 00:43:172 - 00:44:505 - 00:45:172 etc,... If it's a slider, then make slidertick a hitsound same as clap will be better.
0018:172 (1,4) - bad overlap
00:23:505 (1) - maybe stack it with 00:21:505 - cause you can see the overlap
00:35:505 (3) - bad drawed slider. Do this

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-09-19T10:16:01+00:00

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:
[Ashemu's]
00:09:006 (4) - Ctrl + G it for clearer Distance.
00:13:006 (2) - bad overlap
00:17:505 (4) - this could be a better blanket. Fix it
00:18:172 (1,2,3) - move this away to avoid overlapping
00:20:838 (1) - slider end stack with 00:20:172 - pls?
00:41:505 - remove the inherited point. The sound is bad. Also change 1,2,3,4 to 2 return sliders, that's enough
00:44:505 (6) - stack pls
Good luck on the map

Thanks for mod :3

update plz .

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208,200,84672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Silky

767 posts

Joined October 2014

Silky 2015-09-21T13:33:06+00:00

軽く。
Unrankable issue / must fix.
Should be fixed / highly suggested.

General

Ashemu's Extraのコンボカラーを設定してください
BGやSBが1024*768等で上下の両端を見切らせたくない場合とか以外はWidescreen Supportは外しましょう
00:16:506 - add timing point

Insane

OD7が妥当だと思います
00:16:672 - 音あるのでadd note
00:18:505 (4) - add clap
00:25:172 - ここもadd note 2の始点にStackするのがいいと思います
00:41:505 (5) - 正直分かり辛いのでNCあってもいいかも
00:46:672 (5) - こういうのちゃんとStackしたほうがいいと思いました
00:50:172 (1,2,3,4) - ここ赤線からの1/4じゃないですか?
00:51:838 (2,3) - 音取り普通に1/2+circle2個でいいと思います
01:12:172 (3,7) - Stack miss
01:27:588 - add noteしてもいいかも
01:38:255 (2) - 置くなら01:38:422 - じゃないですかね

Ashemu’s Extra

spread的にもSD的にも OD+1した方がいいと思いました
00:02:506 (4) - 00:03:006 (5) にStackしません？
00:12:256 (2) - 音ありますか?
00:27:005 (5,1,2,3,4) - 音がなくovermapにしても不自然なので削除して00:25:505 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 辺りを再配置したほうがいいかもしれません

他のDiffは見るかも見ないかもです
I give top priority to my queue sorry ;w;

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-22T03:21:40+00:00

fuyuyu- wrote:
軽く。
Unrankable issue / must fix.
Should be fixed / highly suggested.

General
Ashemu's Extraのコンボカラーを設定してください
BGやSBが1024*768等で上下の両端を見切らせたくない場合とか以外はWidescreen Supportは外しましょう
00:16:506 - add timing point
Insane
OD7が妥当だと思います
00:16:672 - 音あるのでadd note
00:18:505 (4) - add clap
00:25:172 - ここもadd note 2の始点にStackするのがいいと思います
00:41:505 (5) - 正直分かり辛いのでNCあってもいいかも
00:46:672 (5) - こういうのちゃんとStackしたほうがいいと思いました
00:50:172 (1,2,3,4) - ここ赤線からの1/4じゃないですか?
00:51:838 (2,3) - 音取り普通に1/2+circle2個でいいと思います
01:12:172 (3,7) - Stack miss
01:27:588 - add noteしてもいいかも
01:38:255 (2) - 置くなら01:38:422 - じゃないですかね

他のDiffは見るかも見ないかもです
I give top priority to my queue sorry ;w;

mod有難うございます！
すべて変更いたしました

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2015-09-23T09:58:23+00:00

以前request受けてたので
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General

Titleを漢字の華暦に、平たくいうならランクドに合わせてください
00:16:839 - ここにもう一つ赤線がいります
The following hitsounds are unused:
softl-hitfinish3.wav
soft-hitfinish4.wav　使われてないので削除してください
HitSoundがDiff毎にバラバラです、GDは良いとして自分の分はある程度統一してください
E.Nに関してはNCつけすぎるのは問題です、１拍置くなどしましょう
Modの域を出てしまうので基本的に重要なことしかいってません

Easy

あらかじめいって置きますがEasyだからといって白線だけしか音をとっちゃいけないわけではありません１/１間隔でrhythmを取ればいいだけなので右上を1/2に切り替えて赤線から(ボーカルを拾ってrhythmを変えるなど)する必要があります

00:13:506 (1,2,3) - 手前のスタックはまだ許容範囲だと思いますが、Easyでは1/1、1/2問わずスタックは避けるべきです、たくさんあるので以後省きます
00:16:839 (1) - 普通に2/1sliderでいいのでは
00:18:172 (1) - こっちは00:18:505 - ここの音を拾うべきだと思うので1/1reverseで
00:23:505 (1) - 1/2二つでいいとおもいます
00:30:172 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - さすがに拾いなおしましょう
00:45:838 - 00:48:505 - add Note、rhythmを優先すべきです、ボーカルの為にここを空けるとプレイしづらいと思います
00:48:505 - ^ 00:54:172 - 1/1reverse
01:00:838 (1) - 01:01:338 - ここで切ってreverseさせましょう
01:10:172 (1) - 手前と違いボーカルが強いので1/1reverseにしましょう
01:38:172 (4) - reverse消して01:38:839 - circleで〆た方がいい終わりだと思います

　HitSonud

00:14:006 (2) - 静かなとこでClapはいりません消しましょう
00:19:505 - add Finish
00:26:839 - ^
00:16:839 - SC1
に切り替え　00:17:839 - 00:19:172 - 00:19:838 - 00:20:505 - 00:21:838 - にClap
00:45:172 - Tickを使う場合はVolを10％下げるのがbetterです、また使用が終わったのであれば00:45:338 - あたりでSC1に戻してください
00:53:505 - 静かなとこでNormal hitnormalは合いません、SC2あたりに切り替えましょう
01:04:838 - 01:28:505 - このセクションは全ての2/4BaetにClapを追加してください
01:10:172 - Finish
01:19:505 - ^
01:20:838 - ^
01:26:838 - ^
01:38:838 - ^

Normal

SVは1.1でいいのでは？、180BPMで0.9から1.2は差が大きいと思います
もう一ついうとNormalで1/1rhythmしかないのはHardのSpreadで引っかかる可能性が高いです(SDで判断するのではなくrhythmで判断しているので)
スタックは1/1または1/2rhythmどちらかひとつにしてください
正直FullRemapになるので音取りの指摘はしません
幸い色んな人がこの曲で作っているので参考にするといいと思います
以下リンク
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/669695
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/734183
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/722528
HitSoundについてもEasyを流用できると思うので省きます

Hard

00:01:506 - ここから伸ばすべきです
00:03:506 - same
00:10:506 (2) - end point 00:11:006 -
00:16:839 (1,3) - Overlap、こういう無駄な重なりは外観損なうのでやめましょう
00:18:172 (1,2) - 音が違うので重ねるのはプレイ中やりにくいです
00:20:838 (1,2) - same
00:16:839 - 00:26:838 - 見てもらえば分かるように真ん中にNote寄りすぎです、再配置しましょう
00:26:839 - ここはクリックさせるべきです
00:28:839 - このセクションはSV下げた方がいいと思います
00:39:505 - 正直Insane以下のDiffでここを拾う必要があるのか疑問です、どうしても1/3がネックになりますし、とるにしてもスピナーでいいのでは？
現状00:41:505 (8) - これだけでアンランクです
01:04:839 (1) - どう聞いてもここでreverseはおかしいと思います
01:08:839 (1) - ^01:09:005 - 01:09:339 - 拾うべきです
01:12:838 (1) - end at 01:13:089 -
01:16:839 (1) - ^same as 01:08:839 (1) -
01:38:172 (1) - ３連Beatは01:38:339 - 01:38:422 - ここです
DSに一貫性がありません、途中で配置みるのやめました lol

Insane

00:16:672 (2) - せっかく〇作ったのであれば317/218に置きませんか
00:26:422 - add note
01:20:839 (1,2,3,4) - なぜに3/4sliderなんでしょう、01:10:172 (1,2,3,4) - 私にはこことの違いが分かりません
01:26:172 (1,2) - これ終点は何をフォローしてるんですか？01:26:505 - 01:27:172 - Vocalがあるここで終わるべきです
01:35:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmap

Ashemu's Extra

正直180BPMでSV2.0は速すぎます、01:04:838 - ここから1.2倍と考えるとどうみても過剰演出です
ある程度自分のpatternを持った慣れたマッパーなら扱い切れると思いますが私にはこれはそうみえませんでした
ランクド狙ってるのであれば1.8あたりがbetterでしょう

00:17:339 (3,4) - このDSどう考えても浮いてます、00:26:838 - ここまでのあなたの配置を見てもらえば分かると思います
00:24:838 (1,1) - 鳴ってる音違いますし違う音取りにしませんか？配置気に入ってそうですが個人的に楽しくなかったです
00:26:005 (3) - Remove note
00:27:005 (5,1,2,3,4) - same、明らかにOvermapですし空白が嫌なのであれば00:26:838 - sliderで伸ばしてもいいと思います
00:41:338 (7,1) - 1/3に切り替わるここでこのDSは意地悪だと思います
00:49:588 (6) - Remove Note
00:50:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - このOvermapは絶対通りません
01:07:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:20:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 減速させるにしても逆だと思いますアレンジでFinish付けてるにも関わらず強い音で減速させるのは間違ってると思います、また0.6から1.2の速度差も理解できません、読めないですしつけさせるにしてももっと緩やかでいいかと
個人的にいえば01:10:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここと同じ感じがbetterです、ただ試みは面白いと思いました
01:37:505 (3,2) - 最初と同じです
01:38:505 (3,4) - この3の形から4の流れは気持ちよくないです、置きなおして進行方向に置いた方がいいと思います、最初も同じく

なんとなく綺麗に置こうとしてるのは伝わりましたが、00:23:172 (6,7,1,2,3) - 00:43:172 (4,5,4,5) - 00:46:338 (2,3,4,5) - 00:59:505 (1,4) - 01:22:672 (3,4) - 01:24:005 (4,5) - 01:35:505 (1,2,3) - 軽く見ただけでもこれだけ強引な流れがあります
もちろん綺麗に見せることは重要ですが、ある程度のプレイアビリティを維持しなくてはいけないのと、もう少し画面広く使ってもいいと思います

Extra

SV1.9理由はAshemuさんに書いてます
01:04:172 - Vol20%以下はアンランク要素です、この場合終点は５％などにしても構いませんが始点はダメです
失礼を承知で言いますが正直このDiffは全体的にRemapが必要だと思います
Modでどうこうだと指摘点がありすぎて別人の譜面になるからです

全体的に無駄なOverlapが多くて汚い印象を受けました
ランクドを目指すのであればblanketなど基本的な技術を覚え、ある程度は綺麗にみせる必要があり(他人の譜面をよく見るといいかもしれません)
個人的にEditはいかに綺麗において見る人も楽しませれるかも醍醐味だと思ってます
吹雪もですが指摘点が多すぎてランクド前提だとModができなかった為なかなかできませんでした
適当におくのではなくそこらへん意識するといいと思います
これからもModreqは気軽にしてくださって構いませんが、このままですと言えることがすくないというのが現状です

多々失礼な物言いがあったと思いますが、すみません
良き譜面になることを祈ってます
頑張ってくだい

mod time: 1.5hour

Last edited by Gamu 2015-09-23T10:14:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2015-09-23T10:03:13+00:00

Modはしないと決めていたところだったけど、明らかな問題を見つけたのでそれだけ書いときます。kdsはどっちでもいいです。
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
[General]

00:16:839 - ここにBPM180の赤線引き直し。
常にdownbeatの長白線がワンテンポずれて置かれているため、これは特にNCでのエフェクト再生の問題を引き起こすため明確なルール違反となります。
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Uninherited (red) Timing Sections should be used to accurately map the song's timing. They should synchronize to the beats of the song as accurately as possible and use the correct time signature whenever possible. If an incorrect time signature would last for more than 2 bars, add another timing section to fix it. Please see this thread for more information on downbeats.
soft-hitnormal、及びそれと同じサウンドを使用しているものに関して警告。
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.
これらのサウンドはおよそ10ms経過するまでは非常に小さな音で、プレイ時に置けるフィードバックに一定の遅延を生じさせる恐れがあり、リスクのあるwavファイルだと感じました。現状許可されているのは5ms未満で、このサウンドのメインとなるポイントまでの10msの箇所はヒットサウンドとしての意味を成していません。
編集をしたwavを用意したのでそちらに置き換えて使用してみてください。
http://puu.sh/klblN/5c6d1297b1.rar

こちらであればその問題を回避することが出来ます。
AiModが文句言ってきてるので対応して下さい。一番下は過去のお話なのでスルーしていいですが、上2つの指摘は必ず修正しなければならないことです。
Title: 花暦 short version
visual novelだとかappliqueだとかのタグ関連の追加は任せます。

ザルチェックなので過度な期待はしないこと。

Edit:
double post -Nanaka-

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2015-09-23T10:11:54+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
Modはしないと決めていたところだったけど、明らかな問題を見つけたのでそれだけ書いときます。kdsはどっちでもいいです。
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
[General]
00:16:839 - ここにBPM180の赤線引き直し。
常にdownbeatの長白線がワンテンポずれて置かれているため、これは特にNCでのエフェクト再生の問題を引き起こすため明確なルール違反となります。
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Uninherited (red) Timing Sections should be used to accurately map the song's timing. They should synchronize to the beats of the song as accurately as possible and use the correct time signature whenever possible. If an incorrect time signature would last for more than 2 bars, add another timing section to fix it. Please see this thread for more information on downbeats.

soft-hitnormal、及びそれと同じサウンドを使用しているものに関して警告。
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

これらのサウンドはおよそ10ms経過するまでは非常に小さな音で、プレイ時に置けるフィードバックに一定の遅延を生じさせる恐れがあり、リスクのあるwavファイルだと感じました。現状許可されているのは5ms未満で、このサウンドのメインとなるポイントまでの10msの箇所はヒットサウンドとしての意味を成していません。
編集をしたwavを用意したのでそちらに置き換えて使用してみてください。
http://puu.sh/klblN/5c6d1297b1.rar

こちらであればその問題を回避することが出来ます。
AiModが文句言ってきてるので対応して下さい。一番下は過去のお話なのでスルーしていいですが、上2つの指摘は必ず修正しなければならないことです。

Title: 花暦 short versionvisual novelだとかappliqueだとかのタグ関連の追加は任せます。ザルチェックなので過度な期待はしないこと。

Edit:
double post -Nanaka-lol Kudosuも２倍に？QATに消してもらいます

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-26T06:36:57+00:00

-Nanaka- wrote:
以前request受けてたので
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General
Titleを漢字の華暦に、平たくいうならランクドに合わせてください
00:16:839 - ここにもう一つ赤線がいります
The following hitsounds are unused:
softl-hitfinish3.wav
soft-hitfinish4.wav　使われてないので削除してください
HitSoundがDiff毎にバラバラです、GDは良いとして自分の分はある程度統一してください
E.Nに関してはNCつけすぎるのは問題です、１拍置くなどしましょう
Modの域を出てしまうので基本的に重要なことしかいってません

Easy

あらかじめいって置きますがEasyだからといって白線だけしか音をとっちゃいけないわけではありません１/１間隔でrhythmを取ればいいだけなので右上を1/2に切り替えて赤線から(ボーカルを拾ってrhythmを変えるなど)する必要があります
00:13:506 (1,2,3) - 手前のスタックはまだ許容範囲だと思いますが、Easyでは1/1、1/2問わずスタックは避けるべきです、たくさんあるので以後省きます
00:16:839 (1) - 普通に2/1sliderでいいのでは
00:18:172 (1) - こっちは00:18:505 - ここの音を拾うべきだと思うので1/1reverseで
00:23:505 (1) - 1/2二つでいいとおもいます
00:30:172 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - さすがに拾いなおしましょう
00:45:838 - 00:48:505 - add Note、rhythmを優先すべきです、ボーカルの為にここを空けるとプレイしづらいと思います
00:48:505 - ^ 00:54:172 - 1/1reverse
01:00:838 (1) - 01:01:338 - ここで切ってreverseさせましょう
01:10:172 (1) - 手前と違いボーカルが強いので1/1reverseにしましょう
01:38:172 (4) - reverse消して01:38:839 - circleで〆た方がいい終わりだと思います
　HitSonud
00:14:006 (2) - 静かなとこでClapはいりません消しましょう
00:19:505 - add Finish
00:26:839 - ^
00:16:839 - SC1
に切り替え　00:17:839 - 00:19:172 - 00:19:838 - 00:20:505 - 00:21:838 - にClap
00:45:172 - Tickを使う場合はVolを10％下げるのがbetterです、また使用が終わったのであれば00:45:338 - あたりでSC1に戻してください
00:53:505 - 静かなとこでNormal hitnormalは合いません、SC2あたりに切り替えましょう
01:04:838 - 01:28:505 - このセクションは全ての2/4BaetにClapを追加してください
01:10:172 - Finish
01:19:505 - ^
01:20:838 - ^
01:26:838 - ^
01:38:838 - ^

Normal

SVは1.1でいいのでは？、180BPMで0.9から1.2は差が大きいと思います
もう一ついうとNormalで1/1rhythmしかないのはHardのSpreadで引っかかる可能性が高いです(SDで判断するのではなくrhythmで判断しているので)
スタックは1/1または1/2rhythmどちらかひとつにしてください
正直FullRemapになるので音取りの指摘はしません
幸い色んな人がこの曲で作っているので参考にするといいと思います
以下リンク
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/669695
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/734183
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/722528
HitSoundについてもEasyを流用できると思うので省きます

Hard
00:01:506 - ここから伸ばすべきです
00:03:506 - same
00:10:506 (2) - end point 00:11:006 -
00:16:839 (1,3) - Overlap、こういう無駄な重なりは外観損なうのでやめましょう
00:18:172 (1,2) - 音が違うので重ねるのはプレイ中やりにくいです
00:20:838 (1,2) - same
00:16:839 - 00:26:838 - 見てもらえば分かるように真ん中にNote寄りすぎです、再配置しましょう
00:26:839 - ここはクリックさせるべきです
00:28:839 - このセクションはSV下げた方がいいと思います
00:39:505 - 正直Insane以下のDiffでここを拾う必要があるのか疑問です、どうしても1/3がネックになりますし、とるにしてもスピナーでいいのでは？
現状00:41:505 (8) - これだけでアンランクです
01:04:839 (1) - どう聞いてもここでreverseはおかしいと思います
01:08:839 (1) - ^01:09:005 - 01:09:339 - 拾うべきです
01:12:838 (1) - end at 01:13:089 -
01:16:839 (1) - ^same as 01:08:839 (1) -
01:38:172 (1) - ３連Beatは01:38:339 - 01:38:422 - ここです
DSに一貫性がありません、途中で配置みるのやめました lol

Insane
00:16:672 (2) - せっかく〇作ったのであれば317/218に置きませんか
00:26:422 - add note
01:20:839 (1,2,3,4) - なぜに3/4sliderなんでしょう、01:10:172 (1,2,3,4) - 私にはこことの違いが分かりません
01:26:172 (1,2) - これ終点は何をフォローしてるんですか？01:26:505 - 01:27:172 - Vocalがあるここで終わるべきです
01:35:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmap

Ashemu's Extra

正直180BPMでSV2.0は速すぎます、01:04:838 - ここから1.2倍と考えるとどうみても過剰演出です
ある程度自分のpatternを持った慣れたマッパーなら扱い切れると思いますが私にはこれはそうみえませんでした
ランクド狙ってるのであれば1.8あたりがbetterでしょう
00:17:339 (3,4) - このDSどう考えても浮いてます、00:26:838 - ここまでのあなたの配置を見てもらえば分かると思います
00:24:838 (1,1) - 鳴ってる音違いますし違う音取りにしませんか？配置気に入ってそうですが個人的に楽しくなかったです
00:26:005 (3) - Remove note
00:27:005 (5,1,2,3,4) - same、明らかにOvermapですし空白が嫌なのであれば00:26:838 - sliderで伸ばしてもいいと思います
00:41:338 (7,1) - 1/3に切り替わるここでこのDSは意地悪だと思います
00:49:588 (6) - Remove Note
00:50:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - このOvermapは絶対通りません
01:07:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:20:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 減速させるにしても逆だと思いますアレンジでFinish付けてるにも関わらず強い音で減速させるのは間違ってると思います、また0.6から1.2の速度差も理解できません、読めないですしつけさせるにしてももっと緩やかでいいかと
個人的にいえば01:10:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここと同じ感じがbetterです、ただ試みは面白いと思いました
01:37:505 (3,2) - 最初と同じです
01:38:505 (3,4) - この3の形から4の流れは気持ちよくないです、置きなおして進行方向に置いた方がいいと思います、最初も同じく

なんとなく綺麗に置こうとしてるのは伝わりましたが、00:23:172 (6,7,1,2,3) - 00:43:172 (4,5,4,5) - 00:46:338 (2,3,4,5) - 00:59:505 (1,4) - 01:22:672 (3,4) - 01:24:005 (4,5) - 01:35:505 (1,2,3) - 軽く見ただけでもこれだけ強引な流れがあります
もちろん綺麗に見せることは重要ですが、ある程度のプレイアビリティを維持しなくてはいけないのと、もう少し画面広く使ってもいいと思います

Extra
SV1.9理由はAshemuさんに書いてます
01:04:172 - Vol20%以下はアンランク要素です、この場合終点は５％などにしても構いませんが始点はダメです
失礼を承知で言いますが正直このDiffは全体的にRemapが必要だと思います
Modでどうこうだと指摘点がありすぎて別人の譜面になるからです

全体的に無駄なOverlapが多くて汚い印象を受けました
ランクドを目指すのであればblanketなど基本的な技術を覚え、ある程度は綺麗にみせる必要があり(他人の譜面をよく見るといいかもしれません)
個人的にEditはいかに綺麗において見る人も楽しませれるかも醍醐味だと思ってます
吹雪もですが指摘点が多すぎてランクド前提だとModができなかった為なかなかできませんでした
適当におくのではなくそこらへん意識するといいと思います
これからもModreqは気軽にしてくださって構いませんが、このままですと言えることがすくないというのが現状です

多々失礼な物言いがあったと思いますが、すみません
良き譜面になることを祈ってます
頑張ってくだい

mod time: 1.5hour

mod 有難うございます
すべて変えさせてもらいました

Normalを改めて作り直しました！
リアルの事情でExtraまでを修正することがきつかったのでEasy~Insaneまで修正しました

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-26T06:44:02+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
Modはしないと決めていたところだったけど、明らかな問題を見つけたのでそれだけ書いときます。kdsはどっちでもいいです。
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
[General]
00:16:839 - ここにBPM180の赤線引き直し。
常にdownbeatの長白線がワンテンポずれて置かれているため、これは特にNCでのエフェクト再生の問題を引き起こすため明確なルール違反となります。
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Uninherited (red) Timing Sections should be used to accurately map the song's timing. They should synchronize to the beats of the song as accurately as possible and use the correct time signature whenever possible. If an incorrect time signature would last for more than 2 bars, add another timing section to fix it. Please see this thread for more information on downbeats.

Title: 花暦 short versionvisual novelだとかappliqueだとかのタグ関連の追加は任せます。ザルチェックなので過度な期待はしないこと。

Edit:
double post -Nanaka-HitSonudについてはあまり詳しくないので助かりました！
ありがとうございます

Yales

827 posts

Joined February 2013

Yales 2015-09-26T16:28:23+00:00

Hello, M4M.

[General]

Unicode title conflicts with Ashemu's Extra diff.
Tags conflict with Ashemu's Extra diff.
Uninherited timing points conflict with Ashemu's Extra diff.
On Normal/Hard/Insane/Extra, the claps in the calm section are really unfitting and should probably be replaced with whitsles.

[Easy]

00:56:839 (4) - The clap at the reverse feels too much, I'd rather add a whistle instead. Because it's really inconsistant right now.
01:02:338 (1) - The gap is way too close for an easy. 01:02:172 (2) - Remove it and place the spinner here instead.
01:08:838 (3) - The clap is missing on the tick of the slider
01:12:505 (5) - Stack isn't a really good thing in Easy, and should be avoided as much as possible because hard to read.
01:18:172 (1,2) - A nice blanket would look like this instead: http://puu.sh/koRtI/87965cfdea.jpg
01:20:505 (4) - Same for the stack
01:22:172 (4,5) - I think you should move a bit (4) on the left, in a way that (5) stacks with 01:20:505 (4,1) - to be neater.
01:31:172 (4) - You missed the blanket
01:37:505 (2) - Try to not make it overlap with 01:35:505 (3) - it doesn't look that neat.

[Normal]

00:05:006 (3) - As I said, this clap is really unfitting, the music doesn't call for it at all I think. It's not the only one.
00:15:006 (3) - Move the middle tick to x312y32 and the end at x452y120 so it'll be nice blanket.
01:02:338 (1) - Gap is too close
01:08:838 (4,5) - I don't know if that's supposed to be a blanket or not but it really doesn't look neat
00:28:838 (1) - ^
00:52:505 (3) - ^
01:08:005 (2,3) - It might be a bit troubling for a new player to do this sort of "wave" try to stay in the same flow or stack it at worse.

[Hard]

00:28:838 (1) - I really really don't the claps
00:39:588 (1) - You should reduce it until previous white tick. It's rhythmically more correct and it gives more time to catch the next slider which would be pretty good.
00:52:838 (1) - Arrange blanket :S
01:02:283 (1) - The biginning isn't snapped 1/4 properly
01:09:505 (3) - I think hiding this note under (1) might be a bit conusing.
01:13:172 (2) - Lower the DS, it's a hard diff and it's the first time you put a rythme like this it's really unexpected and your DS make it hard to read because of that
01:20:172 (3) - Improve blanket http://puu.sh/koSAp/83e4696c1d.jpg
01:29:505 (3) - ^
01:33:505 (4) - ^
01:31:838 (2) - Inconsistant spacing
01:33:005 (2) - ctrl+g might play better even if easier.

[Insane]

00:18:838 (6,7) - Make a blanket?
01:01:338 (3,4) - ^
01:26:005 (5,1) - ^

[Ashemu's Extra]

00:20:338 (4) - I think you're breaking the flow here you can try something like this http://puu.sh/koT7N/84760ccbe4.jpg
00:24:838 (1,2) - The rythme is really cool, the idea as well for that matter, but I think it the spacing makes it really hard to read properly.
00:25:505 (1) - ^
00:41:505 (1,2,3,4) - Same, really unexpected. But really good idea. (not sure about the choice of the hitsound thogh, a bit too loud !) so, I suggest you to try something like : http://puu.sh/koTkx/c11fc6b845.jpg for the hitsounds, I don't really know, but I think you should at least add Soft sampleset at the reverse position if you do like in my example
00:50:505 (4) - NC? I think it reflects even better what you're trying to show in the music
00:51:172 (3) - NC, to stay constant if you did the point above, AND because it would really help the reading.
00:54:838 (6) - NC because your rhythm is really, really hard to expect.
00:56:505 (9) - remove finish doesn't sound well with the next slider
01:21:505 (3) - NC cause slowdown
01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Not sure about the flow here :c Try also to make a nicer curve on the stream
01:36:838 (3,1,2,3,1) - Same remark as previsouly, but at least, this is the end, we can expect something like this

Good diff overall, there's just one thing I don't like that much it's this kind of spacing 00:23:505 (1,2) - even here actually 00:21:088 (2,3) - nowadays it's used a lot, but it's still a technique that actually doesn't play that good and affect reading too. At least, here, the song sort of allows it but yea...

[Extra]

00:15:131 (1) - Should finish on the next white tick instead of that 00:16:506 (1) -
00:18:339 (3,6) - I'd remove whistles at the end of the slider, it reflects the music better I think
01:30:338 (3,6) - ^
00:50:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is fun!

Good extra too.

It's a nice set, except those claps... And I feel sorry to have mod a lot of blankets (and yet I didn't say them all) but I think you really need to work on this to make your diffs looks neater. I'm not even a fan of blankets but sometimes, it really looks like you simply messed them up and it kills the quality.

Good luck!

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-09-27T05:09:14+00:00

-Nanaka- wrote:
Ashemu's Extra

正直180BPMでSV2.0は速すぎます、01:04:838 - ここから1.2倍と考えるとどうみても過剰演出です
ある程度自分のpatternを持った慣れたマッパーなら扱い切れると思いますが私にはこれはそうみえませんでした
ランクド狙ってるのであれば1.8あたりがbetterでしょう
00:17:339 (3,4) - このDSどう考えても浮いてます、00:26:838 - ここまでのあなたの配置を見てもらえば分かると思います
00:24:838 (1,1) - 鳴ってる音違いますし違う音取りにしませんか？配置気に入ってそうですが個人的に楽しくなかったです
00:26:005 (3) - Remove note
00:27:005 (5,1,2,3,4) - same、明らかにOvermapですし空白が嫌なのであれば00:26:838 - sliderで伸ばしてもいいと思います
00:41:338 (7,1) - 1/3に切り替わるここでこのDSは意地悪だと思います
00:49:588 (6) - Remove Note
00:50:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - このOvermapは絶対通りません
01:07:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:20:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 減速させるにしても逆だと思いますアレンジでFinish付けてるにも関わらず強い音で減速させるのは間違ってると思います、また0.6から1.2の速度差も理解できません、読めないですしつけさせるにしてももっと緩やかでいいかと
個人的にいえば01:10:172 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここと同じ感じがbetterです、ただ試みは面白いと思いました
01:37:505 (3,2) - 最初と同じです
01:38:505 (3,4) - この3の形から4の流れは気持ちよくないです、置きなおして進行方向に置いた方がいいと思います、最初も同じく

なんとなく綺麗に置こうとしてるのは伝わりましたが、00:23:172 (6,7,1,2,3) - 00:43:172 (4,5,4,5) - 00:46:338 (2,3,4,5) - 00:59:505 (1,4) - 01:22:672 (3,4) - 01:24:005 (4,5) - 01:35:505 (1,2,3) - 軽く見ただけでもこれだけ強引な流れがあります
もちろん綺麗に見せることは重要ですが、ある程度のプレイアビリティを維持しなくてはいけないのと、もう少し画面広く使ってもいいと思います

ご指摘ありがとうございました！全体的に見直して再配置、SVの変更など行わせてもらいました！
(どうしても気に入ってた部分の変更を躊躇っていますが、絶対にUnrank要素となるようであれば変更しようと思います。)

Update plz :3

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416,28,98838,1,12,0:0:0:0:

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-27T06:05:47+00:00

Yales wrote:
Hello, M4M.

[General]
Unicode title conflicts with Ashemu's Extra diff.
Tags conflict with Ashemu's Extra diff.
Uninherited timing points conflict with Ashemu's Extra diff.
On Normal/Hard/Insane/Extra, the claps in the calm section are really unfitting and should probably be replaced with whitsles.
　I do not know

[Easy]
00:56:839 (4) - The clap at the reverse feels too much, I'd rather add a whistle instead. Because it's really inconsistant right now.
01:02:338 (1) - The gap is way too close for an easy. 01:02:172 (2) - Remove it and place the spinner here instead.
01:08:838 (3) - The clap is missing on the tick of the slider
01:12:505 (5) - Stack isn't a really good thing in Easy, and should be avoided as much as possible because hard to read.
01:18:172 (1,2) - A nice blanket would look like this instead: http://puu.sh/koRtI/87965cfdea.jpg
01:20:505 (4) - Same for the stack
01:22:172 (4,5) - I think you should move a bit (4) on the left, in a way that (5) stacks with 01:20:505 (4,1) - to be neater.
01:31:172 (4) - You missed the blanket
01:37:505 (2) - Try to not make it overlap with 01:35:505 (3) - it doesn't look that neat.
All fix

[Normal]
00:05:006 (3) - As I said, this clap is really unfitting, the music doesn't call for it at all I think. It's not the only one.
00:15:006 (3) - Move the middle tick to x312y32 and the end at x452y120 so it'll be nice blanket.
01:02:338 (1) - Gap is too close
01:08:838 (4,5) - I don't know if that's supposed to be a blanket or not but it really doesn't look neat
00:28:838 (1) - ^
00:52:505 (3) - ^
01:08:005 (2,3) - It might be a bit troubling for a new player to do this sort of "wave" try to stay in the same flow or stack it at worse.
All fix

[Hard]
00:28:838 (1) - I really really don't the claps
00:39:588 (1) - You should reduce it until previous white tick. It's rhythmically more correct and it gives more time to catch the next slider which would be pretty good.
00:52:838 (1) - Arrange blanket :S
01:02:283 (1) - The biginning isn't snapped 1/4 properly
01:09:505 (3) - I think hiding this note under (1) might be a bit conusing.
01:13:172 (2) - Lower the DS, it's a hard diff and it's the first time you put a rythme like this it's really unexpected and your DS make it hard to read because of that
01:20:172 (3) - Improve blanket http://puu.sh/koSAp/83e4696c1d.jpg
01:29:505 (3) - ^
01:33:505 (4) - ^
01:31:838 (2) - Inconsistant spacing
01:33:005 (2) - ctrl+g might play better even if easier.
All fix

[Insane]
00:18:838 (6,7) - Make a blanket?
01:01:338 (3,4) - ^
01:26:005 (5,1) - ^
All fix

[Extra]
00:15:131 (1) - Should finish on the next white tick instead of that 00:16:506 (1) - 　No Change
00:18:339 (3,6) - I'd remove whistles at the end of the slider, it reflects the music better I thinkfix
01:30:338 (3,6) - ^fix
00:50:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is fun! thanks

Good extra too.

It's a nice set, except those claps... And I feel sorry to have mod a lot of blankets (and yet I didn't say them all) but I think you really need to work on this to make your diffs looks neater. I'm not even a fan of blankets but sometimes, it really looks like you simply messed them up and it kills the quality.

Good luck!

thank you for mod

litoluna

1,074 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2015-09-28T13:39:14+00:00

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Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

videoの容量が20MB近くあるので15MBぐらいにおさえたいです；

[Easy]

00:16:839 - volume60~70%
盛り上がってる感じありますし40%は少し控えめかなッて思います。
00:26:172 (1) - 終端を中心よりにもっていきたいです。
個人的にspin前は終端を外側にもっていくより弧を描く感じで内側にもっていきたいです。
SPOILER
00:30:838 (2,4) - 重なりをなくしたほうがgoodです
Circleサイズがでかい分難しいと思いますが頑張ってみてください
SPOILER
00:58:505 (2) - clapよりwhistleのほうが合いそうですがどうでしょ
01:19:505 (3) - 少し緩やかにして01:20:505 (4) - をblanketすると綺麗に見えると思います
SPOILER
01:28:838 (1) - 01:29:505 (2) - 頭にfinishほしいです

[Normal]

00:08:006 (3) - Backの音が静かなのでwhistleのほうが合いそうです
00:09:006 (5) - 上と同じです
00:11:006 (2) - 上と同じです
00:12:506 (4,5) - ピアノの音が強いのでどちらかにwhistleつけても合うとおもいます。
00:25:838 (3,2) - 微妙にずれているのが意図的でないのならきっちりStackするか重ならない位置に置いたほうがいいかなっておもいます。
00:34:172 (1,3) - 微妙な重なりが気になります！
00:34:172 (1) - の終端を少し下げてあげれば重ならないとおもいます。
SPOILER
00:39:505 (1,2,3) - ピアノの音がガッツリ鳴ってるのでヒットサウンドほしいです！whistleとか合うとおもいます。
00:50:172 (1) - 2回ReverseするのはNormaldiffでは難しく感じます。
1回のReverse sliderに変えて単発を置いてもfitするとおもいます。
00:57:838 (5) - 個人的にdelete note
00:55:505 (1,2) - と同じようにvocalに合わせて止めちゃったほうがカッコいいかなって思いました。
ただspacing合わせるのも大変だと思うのと今のままでも問題無いと思うので...
01:00:838 (1) - こんな感じにしてみませんか

01:01:338 -, 01:01:838 - のvocalの音拾いませんか！？
01:16:172 (3,4) - もう少し流れをよくできるとgood
出来れば下のような感じで入れたらいいのですが前のnoteの調整が必要になると思います。
SPOILER
01:18:838 (2,3) - 流れが急すぎると思います。
もう少し緩やかな流れにしてみませんか?
SPOILER
01:20:172 (5,6) - 01:20:505 (6) - delete 01:20:172 (5) - の終わりを01:20:505 - に

01:20:338 - vocalの音もないので最後まで伸ばしたほうが自然だと思いました。
01:38:172 (4) - 短いけど個人的にNC欲しいです。

[Hard]

00:13:006 (4,1,2,3,4) - ここ五角形にした方が綺麗だと思います。
ctrl+shift+dで綺麗な五角形つくれます！！
SPOILER
00:19:172 (5,6) - 完全にStack
もしずれているのが意図的なら00:21:838 (5,6) - ここも統一させてずらすべきかなって思います。
00:23:838 (2,3) - blanketした方が見栄えが良さそうです
SPOILER
00:33:505 (3,1,3) - 同じsliderが縦に3つ並んでるように見えてすこし単調かなって思います。
角度をつけるだけで変わってくると思うので色々試してみてください
ex)00:34:172 (1) - ctrl+J Ctrl+R
SPOILER
00:34:172 (1) - 00:34:838 (3) - の終端をblanket
SPOILER
00:56:338 (4) - sliderの向きを変えませんか？少し今のままだと流れがわかりにくい感じがします。
SPOILER

少しだけ見ようと思ってたのですが長くなりそうなのでここまでで

また時間のあるときに見ようと思います。
分からないことありましたらゲーム内チャットしてもらえると多分答えれます
gl~

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-09-29T01:26:31+00:00

litoluna wrote:
PMよりﾖﾘﾖﾘﾖﾘ

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
videoの容量が20MB近くあるので15MBぐらいにおさえたいです；
こちらの問題かもしれませんが抑えるために編集するとoffsetがずれるので絶対に変えないといけない場合にしてみます

[Easy]
00:16:839 - volume60~70%
盛り上がってる感じありますし40%は少し控えめかなッて思います。
00:26:172 (1) - 終端を中心よりにもっていきたいです。
個人的にspin前は終端を外側にもっていくより弧を描く感じで内側にもっていきたいです。
SPOILER
00:30:838 (2,4) - 重なりをなくしたほうがgoodです
Circleサイズがでかい分難しいと思いますが頑張ってみてください
SPOILER
00:58:505 (2) - clapよりwhistleのほうが合いそうですがどうでしょ
01:19:505 (3) - 少し緩やかにして01:20:505 (4) - をblanketすると綺麗に見えると思います
SPOILER
01:28:838 (1) - 01:29:505 (2) - 頭にfinishほしいです
[Normal]
00:08:006 (3) - Backの音が静かなのでwhistleのほうが合いそうです
00:09:006 (5) - 上と同じです
00:11:006 (2) - 上と同じです
00:12:506 (4,5) - ピアノの音が強いのでどちらかにwhistleつけても合うとおもいます。
00:25:838 (3,2) - 微妙にずれているのが意図的でないのならきっちりStackするか重ならない位置に置いたほうがいいかなっておもいます。
00:34:172 (1,3) - 微妙な重なりが気になります！
00:34:172 (1) - の終端を少し下げてあげれば重ならないとおもいます。
SPOILER
00:39:505 (1,2,3) - ピアノの音がガッツリ鳴ってるのでヒットサウンドほしいです！whistleとか合うとおもいます。
00:50:172 (1) - 2回ReverseするのはNormaldiffでは難しく感じます。
1回のReverse sliderに変えて単発を置いてもfitするとおもいます。
00:57:838 (5) - 個人的にdelete note
00:55:505 (1,2) - と同じようにvocalに合わせて止めちゃったほうがカッコいいかなって思いました。
ただspacing合わせるのも大変だと思うのと今のままでも問題無いと思うので...
01:00:838 (1) - こんな感じにしてみませんか

01:01:338 -, 01:01:838 - のvocalの音拾いませんか！？
01:16:172 (3,4) - もう少し流れをよくできるとgood
出来れば下のような感じで入れたらいいのですが前のnoteの調整が必要になると思います。
SPOILER
01:18:838 (2,3) - 流れが急すぎると思います。
もう少し緩やかな流れにしてみませんか?
SPOILER
01:20:172 (5,6) - 01:20:505 (6) - delete 01:20:172 (5) - の終わりを01:20:505 - に

01:20:338 - vocalの音もないので最後まで伸ばしたほうが自然だと思いました。
01:38:172 (4) - 短いけど個人的にNC欲しいです。
[Hard]
00:13:006 (4,1,2,3,4) - ここ五角形にした方が綺麗だと思います。
ctrl+shift+dで綺麗な五角形つくれます！！
SPOILER
00:19:172 (5,6) - 完全にStack
もしずれているのが意図的なら00:21:838 (5,6) - ここも統一させてずらすべきかなって思います。
00:23:838 (2,3) - blanketした方が見栄えが良さそうです
SPOILER
00:33:505 (3,1,3) - 同じsliderが縦に3つ並んでるように見えてすこし単調かなって思います。
角度をつけるだけで変わってくると思うので色々試してみてください
ex)00:34:172 (1) - ctrl+J Ctrl+R
SPOILER
00:34:172 (1) - 00:34:838 (3) - の終端をblanket
SPOILER
00:56:338 (4) - sliderの向きを変えませんか？少し今のままだと流れがわかりにくい感じがします。
SPOILER
少しだけ見ようと思ってたのですが長くなりそうなのでここまでで
また時間のあるときに見ようと思います。
分からないことありましたらゲーム内チャットしてもらえると多分答えれます
gl~

mod有難うございます！ All fix :

Last edited by DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-14T04:13:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2015-10-03T14:52:40+00:00

こんにちはYasaijaさん、Ashemuさん o/　リクエストありです

[Easy]

00:30:172 (1,2,3) - spinner後のジグザグaimは初心者の方に優しくないと思いますので(1)と(2)を以下の座標に移動して一直線の流れを作ってみてはいかがでしょう。
(1). x:149 y:45 (2). x:0 y:150 , 座標は画面右上からご確認ください。
00:54:172 - vocalとpianoに合わせてwhistleいかかでしょうか。
00:59:838 ~ 01:01:838 - 他のdiffみたいにこちらにもhit soundが欲しいと思いました。

[Normal]

00:16:839 - Audio Volumeを60%か70%に。
00:26:838 - finishいかがでしょう。
00:37:172 - ここのclapはBGMのどの音ともフィットしませんので外すことをオススメします。
01:03:505 - volume20% ( soft ) の緑線を引いてみてください。
01:05:338 (2,3) - 配置パターンの提案。01:16:005 (2,3) - こちらのようにスタックを外して並べてみてはいかがでしょう。低難易度では曲のフレーズが同じところの配置&音取りを統一させるとプレイヤーのmissや混乱をなくすことができます。
01:38:838 - おそらくfinishの付け忘れです。

[Hard]

00:03:506 (1) - Distance x1.93は飛びすぎだと思います。x1.50くらいまで落としたほうが良いと思います。
00:08:006 - clapは不要かと思います。
00:12:006 - ^
00:13:506 (1) - 他のdiffと同じようにfinishが欲しいです。
00:26:838 - Normal同様。
00:28:838 ~ 00:39:505 - 曲調が静かになりますので、DS x1.70 ~ x2.10で構成するのは飛びすぎだと思います。
おそらくNormal ~ Hardのspreadに関わってきます、DS x1.50 ~ x1.80あたりで再配置することをオススメします。
00:48:005 (2) - x:256 y:80 ?
00:50:338 (2,3) - デザインの提案。少し窮屈に感じたのでimgのようにしてみてはいかがでしょう。
img
00:53:505 - 00:54:172 - 00:54:838 - この3点にwhistleどうでしょう。
00:58:172 ~ 01:01:838 - なにかしらのhit soundが欲しいです。
01:05:172 - clap ? 01:05:838 - こちらはwhistle → clap

[Insane]

InsaneのBGだけすこしボヤけているように見えたので、もし他に良いのが出回ってきたら変えてみてください。
00:02:006 ~ 00:14:006 - ここのpartはclapよりwhistleのほうがフィットすると思いました。

[Ashemu's Extra]

00:01:006 ~ 00:16:506 - 少しだけでも良いのでhit soundを付けてみてください、whistleがオススメです。
00:18:672 - ここの単発が少し打ちずらかったのでimgのようにしてみはいかがでしょう。
img
01:25:672 (4) - ここの1/4sliderですが、01:25:755 - ここに音がないので違和感を感じました。単発に変えませんか？

[Extra]

5連のovermapingはたぶん通りませんので、単発 + 3連に変えることをオススメします。00:43:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - この2セットですと(2)を消す感じです。他の1/4sliderが混ざっているところはグレーといった感じなので最終的にBNの指示に従ってください。

以上です。意味のわからないところがもしあれば、game chat か PMで気軽に聞いてください。GOOD LUCK!!

Last edited by iyasine 2015-10-04T06:14:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-04T01:13:03+00:00

iyasine wrote:
こんにちはYasaijaさん、Ashemuさん o/　リクエストありです

[Easy]
00:30:172 (1,2,3) - spinner後のジグザグaimは初心者の方に優しくないと思いますので(1)と(2)を以下の座標に移動して一直線の流れを作ってみてはいかがでしょう。
(1). x:149 y:45 (2). x:0 y:150 , 座標は画面右上からご確認ください。
00:54:172 - vocalとpianoに合わせてwhistleいかかでしょうか。
00:59:838 ~ 01:01:838 - 他のdiffみたいにこちらにもhit soundが欲しいと思いました。
[Normal]
00:16:839 - Audio Volumeを60%か70%に。
00:26:838 - finishいかがでしょう。
00:37:172 - ここのclapはBGMのどの音ともフィットしませんので外すことをオススメします。
01:03:505 - volume20% ( soft ) の緑線を引いてみてください。
01:05:338 (2,3) - 配置パターンの提案。01:16:005 (2,3) - こちらのようにスタックを外して並べてみてはいかがでしょう。低難易度では曲のフレーズが同じところの配置&音取りを統一させるとプレイヤーのmissや混乱をなくすことができます。
01:38:838 - おそらくfinishの付け忘れです。
[Hard]
00:03:506 (1) - Distance x1.93は飛びすぎだと思います。x1.50くらいまで落としたほうが良いと思います。
00:08:006 - clapは不要かと思います。
00:12:006 - ^
00:13:506 (1) - 他のdiffと同じようにfinishが欲しいです。
00:26:838 - Normal同様。
00:28:838 ~ 00:39:505 - 曲調が静かになりますので、DS x1.70 ~ x2.10で構成するのは飛びすぎだと思います。
おそらくNormal ~ Hardのspreadに関わってきます、DS x1.50 ~ x1.80あたりで再配置することをオススメします。
00:48:005 (2) - x:256 y:80 ?
00:50:338 (2,3) - デザインの提案。少し窮屈に感じたのでimgのようにしてみてはいかがでしょう。
img
00:53:505 - 00:54:172 - 00:54:838 - この3点にwhistleどうでしょう。
00:58:172 ~ 01:01:838 - なにかしらのhit soundが欲しいです。
01:05:172 - clap ? 01:05:838 - こちらはwhistle → clap
[Insane]
InsaneのBGだけすこしボヤけているように見えたので、もし他に良いのが出回ってきたら変えてみてください。
00:02:006 ~ 00:14:006 - ここのpartはclapよりwhistleのほうがフィットすると思いました。
[Ashemu's Extra]
00:01:006 ~ 00:16:506 - 少しだけでも良いのでhit soundを付けてみてください、whistleがオススメです。
00:18:672 - ここの単発が少し打ちずらかったのでimgのようにしてみはいかがでしょう。
img
01:25:672 (4) - ここの1/4sliderですが、01:25:755 - ここに音がないので違和感を感じました。単発に変えませんか？
[Extra]
5連のovermapingはたぶん通りませんので、単発 + 3連に変えることをオススメします。00:43:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - この2セットですと(2)を消す感じです。他の1/4sliderが混ざっているところはグレーといった感じなので最終的にBNの指示に従ってください。

以上です。意味がわからないところがもしあれば、game chat か PMで気軽に聞いてください。GOOD LUCK!!

すべて変更させていただきました！
mod有難うございます

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2015-10-04T02:24:24+00:00

PMから

Extraだけ軽く見ました

[General]

BGのサイズ1366x768にしましょう。BG.zip

使ってないBGあるので消しましょう

[Extra]

00:11:506 (1,2,3) - (1)のリバース無しで00:12:506 ここから1/1の方が合うと思います
00:20:839 (1) - 1/2にして00:21:088 にCircle
00:25:172 - Extraだしここで音取ってもいいんじゃない？
00:25:839 (3) - 00:26:005 に音あるから1/2にするべき
00:27:505 (1) - vol.50の緑線を追加
00:28:172 (1) - vol.40の緑線を追加
00:27:505 (1) - vol.30の緑線を追加
01:00:505 (4) - (3)にBlanketするか00:59:505 (1,2) のように(3)の終端にStackしましょう。
01:01:505 (4) - 離すならもっと離しましょう
01:02:172 (7) - 01:00:838 (1) にStackでも良いと思います
01:04:172 (1) - vol.40の緑線を追加
01:04:505 (2) - vol.50の緑線を追加
01:10:505 (2) - 01:09:505 (5) にStack
01:21:172 (2) - 01:20:172 (1) にStack
01:26:172 (1) - しっかりStackさせましょう
01:32:838 (1) - 1/2にして01:33:088 にCircle
01:38:505 (3,4) - over mapじゃないかな？01:38:505 と01:38:672 にCircleが良いと思います
01:38:838 (5) - これ配置変えないならしっかりStackさせましょう

分からないところあったらPMでもゲームチャットでも聞いてください
Good luckです

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-04T04:18:15+00:00

-Maruk- wrote:
PMから

Extraだけ軽く見ました

[General]

BGのサイズ1366x768にしましょう。BG.zip

使ってないBGあるので消しましょう
BG有難うございます

[Extra]

00:11:506 (1,2,3) - (1)のリバース無しで00:12:506 ここから1/1の方が合うと思います fix
00:20:839 (1) - 1/2にして00:21:088 にCircle no changeでまた指摘をもらうようでしたら変えてみます
00:25:172 - Extraだしここで音取ってもいいんじゃない？fix
00:25:839 (3) - 00:26:005 に音あるから1/2にするべきfix
00:27:505 (1) - vol.50の緑線を追加fix
00:28:172 (1) - vol.40の緑線を追加fix
00:27:505 (1) - vol.30の緑線を追加fix
01:00:505 (4) - (3)にBlanketするか00:59:505 (1,2) のように(3)の終端にStackしましょう。fix
01:01:505 (4) - 離すならもっと離しましょうfix
01:02:172 (7) - 01:00:838 (1) にStackでも良いと思いますfix
01:04:172 (1) - vol.40の緑線を追加fix
01:04:505 (2) - vol.50の緑線を追加fix
01:10:505 (2) - 01:09:505 (5) にStackfix
01:21:172 (2) - 01:20:172 (1) にStackv
01:26:172 (1) - しっかりStackさせましょfixう
01:32:838 (1) - 1/2にして01:33:088 にCircle
01:38:505 (3,4) - over mapじゃないかな？01:38:505 と01:38:672 にCircleが良いと思いますfix
01:38:838 (5) - これ配置変えないならしっかりStackさせましょうfix
分からないところあったらPMでもゲームチャットでも聞いてください
Good luckです

mod有難うございます！

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-10-05T04:59:37+00:00

iyasine wrote:
こんにちはYasaijaさん、Ashemuさん o/　リクエストありです

[Ashemu's Extra]
00:01:006 ~ 00:16:506 - 少しだけでも良いのでhit soundを付けてみてください、whistleがオススメです。
00:18:672 - ここの単発が少し打ちずらかったのでimgのようにしてみはいかがでしょう。
img
01:25:672 (4) - ここの1/4sliderですが、01:25:755 - ここに音がないので違和感を感じました。単発に変えませんか？

以上です。意味のわからないところがもしあれば、game chat か PMで気軽に聞いてください。GOOD LUCK!!

Thanks for mod !!

最初のヒットサウンド完全に忘れてました( ﾟдﾟ)ご指摘ありがとうございます！

Update plz

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: hanagoyomi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64172
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5006,27505,28838,39505,42172,45172,52838,55505,58172,62172,64172,64838,75505,86172,87505,88838
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Hanagoyomi short version
TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
ArtistUnicode:Ayumi.
Creator:Yasaija 714
Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
Tags:hana no no ni saku utakata no opening A_s_h_e_m_u
BeatmapID:775393
BeatmapSetID:351841

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hanagoyomi_Ashemu_BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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87172,-83.3333333333333,4,2,3,70,0,0
87505,-83.3333333333333,4,2,3,70,0,1
88505,-100,4,2,3,70,0,0
88839,-83.3333333333333,4,2,3,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 196,0,196
Combo2 : 255,232,255
Combo3 : 255,34,255
Combo4 : 255,168,255

[HitObjects]
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Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-10T07:48:45+00:00

A s h e m u wrote:

iyasine wrote:
こんにちはYasaijaさん、Ashemuさん o/　リクエストありです

[Ashemu's Extra]
00:01:006 ~ 00:16:506 - 少しだけでも良いのでhit soundを付けてみてください、whistleがオススメです。
00:18:672 - ここの単発が少し打ちずらかったのでimgのようにしてみはいかがでしょう。
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01:25:672 (4) - ここの1/4sliderですが、01:25:755 - ここに音がないので違和感を感じました。単発に変えませんか？

以上です。意味のわからないところがもしあれば、game chat か PMで気軽に聞いてください。GOOD LUCK!!

Thanks for mod !!

最初のヒットサウンド完全に忘れてました( ﾟдﾟ)ご指摘ありがとうございます！

Update plz

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申し訳ない遅れました　（書く数日前に更新してます）

BluOxy

196 posts

Joined November 2010

BluOxy 2015-10-10T12:37:13+00:00

PMからです。Moddingなんて久々だ…。
配置と音取りのいちゃもんが大半ですが、適当に見て対応をしてください。

注意事項

・modding修正後の例として画像を使用する事があるが、詳しい事項は下記を参照してほしい。
・URLは画像を小さくするのに手間がかかる(modding forumではかなり見づらくなる)ため、画像を組み込んでいない。そのため画像はurlをコピペして確認してほしい。

[General]
全体的に整合性が取れていないのが気になります。(連打やジャンプのスペーシングが、0.4xだったり0.7xだったりする事、譜面が意味なく重なっている事などetc)

[Ashemu's Extra]
00:41:505 (1) - 重なりが、初見では苦しい様に感じる。配置を再度検討してほしい。
00:54:172 (3) - new color
00:56:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音取りに違和感がある。2を消して00:56:588にnoteを置いた音取りが曲に合っていると感じる。
01:13:672 (4,5) - Ctrl+Gしてくれる方が流れが良く感じる。
01:29:505 (3,4,5) - 流れに違和感がある。再度検討してほしい。
01:38:838 (4) - 閉めは下記の画像の様な音取りを薦める。

http://puu.sh/kF5dZ.jpg

[Extra]
00:15:006 (4) - 3を引用してCtrl+HとCtrl+Jするとよろしく見える。
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音が1と3のスライダーの終始、4、6のスライダーの始めしか聞こえないのだけれど、そのせいかこの音取りには違和感がある。
01:30:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここにも00:18:172と同様、音取りの違和感がある。
00:23:672 (2,3,4) - 流れに繋ぎづらい部分がある様に感じる。もう少し時計回りに向きを傾けてほしい。
00:27:505 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 配置の意図は判るけれど、初見の人は適当な配置に感じるのではないかと思う。離し具合と配置に少し整合性がほしい。
00:40:672 (2,3,4) - 基本理由がなければ他のノートと重ならない方が良い
00:41:505 (1) - 同じく。
00:46:838 (1,4) - 同じく。理由の無い(様に見える)重なりは避けるべきだと思う。的を飛ばす事や重ねる事は、見た人から理由がパッと判らないと不自然に感じる。
00:44:505 (7) - 00:44:172 (6) をコピーして、-120度動かした物を配置すると見た目が自然だと思う。
00:55:505 (1) ~ 00:58:172 (1) - この範囲の音取りは作者のノリが強く感じる。(音取りが過剰に感じる、overmap)下記の音取りを検討してみてはいかがか。

http://puu.sh/kF3Zw.jpg

00:58:005 (5,6,1) - この流れはプレイがし辛いと思う。00:57:338 (1,2,3,4)の流れを少し左に向け、後の7連打を既存の流れの様に横へ配置すると自然に感じる。

http://puu.sh/kF4qp.jpg

01:00:172 (3,4) - 手前の1と2を重ねたのであれば、ここも重ねたい。整合性の問題。
01:04:505 (2) - ここにNewColorを入れる方が好きだ。
01:13:505 (1,2,1,2) - この部分はあまり曲が強調的に流れていないのでNewColorは外すべき。後の01:14:172 (1,2,1,2)は後ろの音とマッチして素晴らしい。
01:24:172 (1,2,1,2) - 同じく。
01:27:505 (1) - new color
01:38:838 (5) - 閉めは下記の画像の様な音取りを薦める。

http://puu.sh/kF0Yn.jpg

Good luck!!

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-11T03:46:34+00:00

BluOxy wrote:
PMからです。Moddingなんて久々だ…。
配置と音取りのいちゃもんが大半ですが、適当に見て対応をしてください。

注意事項
・modding修正後の例として画像を使用する事があるが、詳しい事項は下記を参照してほしい。
・URLは画像を小さくするのに手間がかかる(modding forumではかなり見づらくなる)ため、画像を組み込んでいない。そのため画像はurlをコピペして確認してほしい。
[General]
全体的に整合性が取れていないのが気になります。(連打やジャンプのスペーシングが、0.4xだったり0.7xだったりする事、譜面が意味なく重なっている事などetc)

[Extra]
00:15:006 (4) - 3を引用してCtrl+HとCtrl+Jするとよろしく見える。fix
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音が1と3のスライダーの終始、4、6のスライダーの始めしか聞こえないのだけれど、そのせいかこの音取りには違和感がある。また指摘をもらうようでしたら変更します
01:30:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここにも00:18:172と同様、音取りの違和感がある。同じく
00:23:672 (2,3,4) - 流れに繋ぎづらい部分がある様に感じる。もう少し時計回りに向きを傾けてほしい。fix
00:27:505 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 配置の意図は判るけれど、初見の人は適当な配置に感じるのではないかと思う。離し具合と配置に少し整合性がほしい。fix
00:40:672 (2,3,4) - 基本理由がなければ他のノートと重ならない方が良いfix
00:41:505 (1) - 同じく。fix
00:46:838 (1,4) - 同じく。理由の無い(様に見える)重なりは避けるべきだと思う。的を飛ばす事や重ねる事は、見た人から理由がパッと判らないと不自然に感じる。fix
00:44:505 (7) - 00:44:172 (6) をコピーして、-120度動かした物を配置すると見た目が自然だと思う。fix
00:55:505 (1) ~ 00:58:172 (1) - この範囲の音取りは作者のノリが強く感じる。(音取りが過剰に感じる、overmap)下記の音取りを検討してみてはいかがか。fix
2
http://puu.sh/kF3Zw.jpg
00:58:005 (5,6,1) - この流れはプレイがし辛いと思う。00:57:338 (1,2,3,4)の流れを少し左に向け、後の7連打を既存の流れの様に横へ配置すると自然に感じる。fix
3
http://puu.sh/kF4qp.jpg
01:00:172 (3,4) - 手前の1と2を重ねたのであれば、ここも重ねたい。整合性の問題。fix
01:04:505 (2) - ここにNewColorを入れる方が好きだ。fix
01:13:505 (1,2,1,2) - この部分はあまり曲が強調的に流れていないのでNewColorは外すべき。後の01:14:172 (1,2,1,2)は後ろの音とマッチして素晴らしい。fix
01:24:172 (1,2,1,2) - 同じく。fix
01:27:505 (1) - new colorfix
01:38:838 (5) - 閉めは下記の画像の様な音取りを薦める。画像の音取りの仕方がわからなかったので変えてません
4
http://puu.sh/kF0Yn.jpg

Good luck!!

mod有難うございます！

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2015-10-13T05:50:37+00:00

From PM.
reqありです。少しでも役にたてれば幸いです
所々、hit sound書いてる所は各diffも見直してみてください

Easy

00:14:506 (3) - 1beatずらして元の所（00:14:506 - ）に1circle足しませんか？00:13:506 (1,2) - の流れを見るとvocalで取ってもいいと思います。

00:23:505 (3) - 00:24:172 (4) - 前奏の流れがまだ終わっていないので尻尾にclapがほしいです

00:36:838 (1) - 直線より波線のほうがvocalに合ってると思います。これは好みなので無視してもらって構いません

SPOILER

00:42:172 (1,2) - Blanketの修正お願いします。また尻尾のclapが気になります。ここに付けるのであればＡパートの2と4に全て付けた方がいいと思います

SPOILER

00:43:505 (1) - 同じフレーズの00:46:172 (3) - と00:48:838 (3) - にはNCが無いので、ここも必要ないと思います。ここもです 00:51:505 (1) -

00:46:172 (3,4) - ^

00:50:505 - 00:51:172 - スタートが00:42:172 (1) - からで曲の勢いが衰えて無いのに、ここにnoteが無いのは不自然に感じました。00:50:172 (1,2) - を1/1sliderにすることをお勧めします。Easyで難しいと考えるのであれば3/4に設置されている各noteを取り除くのも良いかもしれません。00:44:505 (3) - 00:47:172 (4) - 00:49:838 (5) -

00:54:172 (2) - これは00:52:838 (1) - と同じ流れなので2beat sliderが無難です

00:55:505 (1) - 00:56:172 (3) - Finishがほしいです。ここの頭にもほしいです 00:56:838 (4) -

00:58:505 (2,3) - 間隔が1.08になってます。1.0で揃えましょう。ここもです 01:00:172 (4,1) - ここは1.05になってます 01:19:505 (3,4) -

01:10:172 (1) - 尻尾のclapが抜けてます。ここの折り返しにも必要です 01:11:505 (4) - 01:16:838 (3) - 01:22:172 (4) -

01:12:838 (1,3) - このstackはEasyではダメだったような、、様子見てつっこまれたら直したほうがいいです。ここもです 01:18:838 (2,3) -

01:21:838 (3) - clapください

01:30:172 (3,4) - Blanketの修正お願いします

01:38:172 (4) - 頭と尻尾にFinishがほしいです

Normal

00:20:838 (3) - 流れが直角過ぎます。こんなのどうですか？
image

SPOILER

code

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00:34:172 (1) - Easyでも書いたように波線のほうがいいと思います

01:07:505 (1,2) - 間隔1.04が気になります。1.0でお願いします

01:37:838 (3,1) - Blanketの修正お願いします

Hard

※AImodで１つerrorが出てます。修正お願いします
00:51:172 (5,1) - 微妙に被ってるのが気になります。折り返しx270 y184とかどうですか？

01:23:838 (2) - ここのリズムが少し奇妙です。01:12:838 (1,2) - と同じフレーズ（ヴォーカルのフォロー）なので同じようにされてはいかがですか？例えばこんな感じ

SPOILER

01:38:338 (2) - 次の01:38:672 (3) - へ行くのに左への流れがいいと思います。折り返しをx350 y108とかどうですか？

全体的にnote間隔にばらつきがあります。意図している箇所はいいのですが同じフレーズでのばらつきは統一したほうがいいと思いました。例えば前奏の00:16:839 (1) - ～ 00:22:005 (6) - は1.31～2.16ですが同じリズムの00:22:172 (1) - ～ 00:24:672 (4) - は0.99 ～ 2.04です。しかも１note毎にばらつきが目立つので統一をお勧めします。強調できるnoteは多少離れても問題ありません。（Finish付いてる所とか）

Insane

00:07:756 (2,3,4,5) - 四角形の配置にしたが為に流れに違和感を感じました。00:07:756 (2,3) - を移動させませんか？

SPOILER

00:22:505 (2,3,4) - 流れに窮屈さを感じました。また00:22:838 (4) - の直線を少し変えた方がリズムに合ってると思います。こんなのどうですか？

SPOILER

00:30:172 (1) - Ctrl+< の方が00:30:672 (2) - への流れがよくなると思います

SPOILER

00:54:172 (4) - Extraではsoftで気にならなかったのですがInsaneでここはnormal使ってるようなのでsliderslideのWhistleがとっても気になります。これは意図的かな？

01:19:505 (1) - 恐らくvocalのフォローで1/4にしたと思うのですが私は2noteのほうが無難だと思います。01:19:672 (2) - と合わせてトリプルにするとリズミカルに叩けます

Hardと同じで間隔にばらつきがあります。修正したほうがいいと思います

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-10-13T08:33:32+00:00

BluOxy wrote:
PMからです。Moddingなんて久々だ…。
配置と音取りのいちゃもんが大半ですが、適当に見て対応をしてください。

注意事項
・modding修正後の例として画像を使用する事があるが、詳しい事項は下記を参照してほしい。
・URLは画像を小さくするのに手間がかかる(modding forumではかなり見づらくなる)ため、画像を組み込んでいない。そのため画像はurlをコピペして確認してほしい。
[Ashemu's Extra]
00:41:505 (1) - 重なりが、初見では苦しい様に感じる。配置を再度検討してほしい。
00:54:172 (3) - new color
00:56:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音取りに違和感がある。2を消して00:56:588にnoteを置いた音取りが曲に合っていると感じる。
01:13:672 (4,5) - Ctrl+Gしてくれる方が流れが良く感じる。
01:29:505 (3,4,5) - 流れに違和感がある。再度検討してほしい。
01:38:838 (4) - 閉めは下記の画像の様な音取りを薦める。
1
http://puu.sh/kF5dZ.jpg

Thanks for modding !! All fix :3

Update plz

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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
ArtistUnicode:Ayumi.
Creator:Yasaija 714
Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
Tags:hana no no ni saku utakata no opening A_s_h_e_m_u
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DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-13T12:09:50+00:00

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
From PM.
reqありです。少しでも役にたてれば幸いです
所々、hit sound書いてる所は各diffも見直してみてください

Easy
00:14:506 (3) - 1beatずらして元の所（00:14:506 - ）に1circle足しませんか？00:13:506 (1,2) - の流れを見るとvocalで取ってもいいと思います。

00:23:505 (3) - 00:24:172 (4) - 前奏の流れがまだ終わっていないので尻尾にclapがほしいです

00:36:838 (1) - 直線より波線のほうがvocalに合ってると思います。これは好みなので無視してもらって構いません
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00:42:172 (1,2) - Blanketの修正お願いします。また尻尾のclapが気になります。ここに付けるのであればＡパートの2と4に全て付けた方がいいと思います
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00:43:505 (1) - 同じフレーズの00:46:172 (3) - と00:48:838 (3) - にはNCが無いので、ここも必要ないと思います。ここもです 00:51:505 (1) -

00:46:172 (3,4) - ^

00:50:505 - 00:51:172 - スタートが00:42:172 (1) - からで曲の勢いが衰えて無いのに、ここにnoteが無いのは不自然に感じました。00:50:172 (1,2) - を1/1sliderにすることをお勧めします。Easyで難しいと考えるのであれば3/4に設置されている各noteを取り除くのも良いかもしれません。00:44:505 (3) - 00:47:172 (4) - 00:49:838 (5) -

00:54:172 (2) - これは00:52:838 (1) - と同じ流れなので2beat sliderが無難です

00:55:505 (1) - 00:56:172 (3) - Finishがほしいです。ここの頭にもほしいです 00:56:838 (4) -

00:58:505 (2,3) - 間隔が1.08になってます。1.0で揃えましょう。ここもです 01:00:172 (4,1) - ここは1.05になってます 01:19:505 (3,4) -

01:10:172 (1) - 尻尾のclapが抜けてます。ここの折り返しにも必要です 01:11:505 (4) - 01:16:838 (3) - 01:22:172 (4) -

01:12:838 (1,3) - このstackはEasyではダメだったような、、様子見てつっこまれたら直したほうがいいです。ここもです 01:18:838 (2,3) -

01:21:838 (3) - clapください

01:30:172 (3,4) - Blanketの修正お願いします

01:38:172 (4) - 頭と尻尾にFinishがほしいです
Normal
00:20:838 (3) - 流れが直角過ぎます。こんなのどうですか？
image
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code
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00:34:172 (1) - Easyでも書いたように波線のほうがいいと思います

01:07:505 (1,2) - 間隔1.04が気になります。1.0でお願いします

01:37:838 (3,1) - Blanketの修正お願いします
Hard
※AImodで１つerrorが出てます。修正お願いします
00:51:172 (5,1) - 微妙に被ってるのが気になります。折り返しx270 y184とかどうですか？

01:23:838 (2) - ここのリズムが少し奇妙です。01:12:838 (1,2) - と同じフレーズ（ヴォーカルのフォロー）なので同じようにされてはいかがですか？例えばこんな感じ
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01:38:338 (2) - 次の01:38:672 (3) - へ行くのに左への流れがいいと思います。折り返しをx350 y108とかどうですか？

全体的にnote間隔にばらつきがあります。意図している箇所はいいのですが同じフレーズでのばらつきは統一したほうがいいと思いました。例えば前奏の00:16:839 (1) - ～ 00:22:005 (6) - は1.31～2.16ですが同じリズムの00:22:172 (1) - ～ 00:24:672 (4) - は0.99 ～ 2.04です。しかも１note毎にばらつきが目立つので統一をお勧めします。強調できるnoteは多少離れても問題ありません。（Finish付いてる所とか）
Insane
00:07:756 (2,3,4,5) - 四角形の配置にしたが為に流れに違和感を感じました。00:07:756 (2,3) - を移動させませんか？
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00:22:505 (2,3,4) - 流れに窮屈さを感じました。また00:22:838 (4) - の直線を少し変えた方がリズムに合ってると思います。こんなのどうですか？
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00:30:172 (1) - Ctrl+< の方が00:30:672 (2) - への流れがよくなると思います
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00:54:172 (4) - Extraではsoftで気にならなかったのですがInsaneでここはnormal使ってるようなのでsliderslideのWhistleがとっても気になります。これは意図的かな？

01:19:505 (1) - 恐らくvocalのフォローで1/4にしたと思うのですが私は2noteのほうが無難だと思います。01:19:672 (2) - と合わせてトリプルにするとリズミカルに叩けます

Hardと同じで間隔にばらつきがあります。修正したほうがいいと思います

GL

mod有難うございます！
すべて変更させてもらいました！
指摘蔵ってからまた変えるとつらいので変えておきました

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-13T12:10:15+00:00

A s h e m u wrote:

BluOxy wrote:
PMからです。Moddingなんて久々だ…。
配置と音取りのいちゃもんが大半ですが、適当に見て対応をしてください。

注意事項
・modding修正後の例として画像を使用する事があるが、詳しい事項は下記を参照してほしい。
・URLは画像を小さくするのに手間がかかる(modding forumではかなり見づらくなる)ため、画像を組み込んでいない。そのため画像はurlをコピペして確認してほしい。
[Ashemu's Extra]
00:41:505 (1) - 重なりが、初見では苦しい様に感じる。配置を再度検討してほしい。
00:54:172 (3) - new color
00:56:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音取りに違和感がある。2を消して00:56:588にnoteを置いた音取りが曲に合っていると感じる。
01:13:672 (4,5) - Ctrl+Gしてくれる方が流れが良く感じる。
01:29:505 (3,4,5) - 流れに違和感がある。再度検討してほしい。
01:38:838 (4) - 閉めは下記の画像の様な音取りを薦める。
1
http://puu.sh/kF5dZ.jpg

Thanks for modding !! All fix :3

Update plz

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468,272,98838,1,12,0:0:0:0:

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Sam GoRiRa

48 posts

Joined January 2013

Sam GoRiRa 2015-10-15T07:11:57+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3815553
00:57:172 (5,6) -ここの連打の２個　ずれているので修正したほうご奇麗にみえます！

修正後
00:57:172 (5,6) -ノート２

00:57:338 (1,2,3,4) - ノート5

00:57:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ノート７

で　自分なりに奇麗にできました　参考程度にどうぞ

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3815561

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-16T02:59:21+00:00

Sam GoRiRa wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3815553
00:57:172 (5,6) -ここの連打の２個　ずれているので修正したほうご奇麗にみえます！

修正後
00:57:172 (5,6) -ノート２

00:57:338 (1,2,3,4) - ノート5

00:57:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ノート７

で　自分なりに奇麗にできました　参考程度にどうぞ

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3815561

修正しました。
00:57:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここのストリームが見えづらくなったので少し変えました

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-17T01:55:32+00:00

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
From PM.
reqありです。少しでも役にたてれば幸いです
所々、hit sound書いてる所は各diffも見直してみてください

Hard

全体的にnote間隔にばらつきがあります。意図している箇所はいいのですが同じフレーズでのばらつきは統一したほうがいいと思いました。例えば前奏の00:16:839 (1) - ～ 00:22:005 (6) - は1.31～2.16ですが同じリズムの00:22:172 (1) - ～ 00:24:672 (4) - は0.99 ～ 2.04です。しかも１note毎にばらつきが目立つので統一をお勧めします。強調できるnoteは多少離れても問題ありません。（Finish付いてる所とか）[/notice]
Insane

Hardと同じで間隔にばらつきがあります。修正したほうがいいと思います[/notice]

GL

遅くなりましたが間隔を統一しました

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-10-17T06:35:47+00:00

ヒットサウンドと音取り軽く見ました！

[Extra]

00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音取り変だと思うので見直しを
SPOILER
用例
http://puu.sh/kN8UN.png
http://puu.sh/kN91R.png
01:30:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:20:839 (1,2) - こんなのどうでしょう
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/kN99t.png
00:21:422 (5) - ↑に合わせて削除した方が自然かもです
00:26:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音に合ってないと思うので変更しましょう
SPOILER
これで合ってるかと
http://puu.sh/kN9ii.png
00:49:505 (3,4) - 単調だと思ったので何か捻りがあるとしたらココに入れるといいかもです
00:54:172 (1,2) - Stackしない方がいいかも？
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/kN9yv.png
01:00:172 (3,4) - これ　00:59:505 (1,2)　コピペして動かした方が見た目良くなりそう
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/kN9Fs.png
01:14:338 (2) - Remove Whistle
01:14:672 (2) - ^
01:14:838 (1) - Add Whistle
01:15:172 (3) - ^
01:24:172 (5,6,7,8) - Stackするより動きがあった方がいいと思います

自分も色々見直したりしてます！頑張りましょう！:D

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-17T07:05:25+00:00

A s h e m u wrote:
ヒットサウンドと音取り軽く見ました！

[Extra]
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音取り変だと思うので見直しを
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音が1と3のスライダーの終始、4、6のスライダーの始めしか聞こえないのだけれど、そのせいかこの音取りには違和感がある。
変えてみます
SPOILER
用例
http://puu.sh/kN8UN.png
http://puu.sh/kN91R.png
01:30:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 同じ音取りですが変えてみました
00:20:839 (1,2) - こんなのどうでしょう　ここもまたいわれるようでしたら変えてみます
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/kN99t.png
00:21:422 (5) - ↑に合わせて削除した方が自然かもです単調になるので変えませんう
00:26:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音に合ってないと思うので変更しましょう fix
SPOILER
これで合ってるかと
http://puu.sh/kN9ii.png
00:49:505 (3,4) - 単調だと思ったので何か捻りがあるとしたらココに入れるといいかもです　00:50:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここをいきなりくると難しいと重いあえて単調にしたので変えません
00:54:172 (1,2) - Stackしない方がいいかも？ fix
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/kN9yv.png
01:00:172 (3,4) - これ　00:59:505 (1,2)　コピペして動かした方が見た目良くなりそうfix
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/kN9Fs.png
01:14:338 (2) - Remove Whistlefix
01:14:672 (2) - ^fix
01:14:838 (1) - Add Whistlefix
01:15:172 (3) - ^fix
01:24:172 (5,6,7,8) - Stackするより動きがあった方がいいと思います01:13:505 (5,6,7,8) - ここと一緒にしたいので変えません
自分も色々見直したりしてます！頑張りましょう！:D

modありです！自分では思い浮かばない案ばかりなので参考になります！

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2015-10-19T17:23:31+00:00

Hello :3

[General]

"normal-hitclap4"のファイルに遅延が見られたのでこちらの修正した物を使用してください。http://puu.sh/kOoHy/f4b92d4930.zip
Ashemu's Extraにビデオが追加されていないので追加してください。
Tagsに"Yasaija_714"があったほうがいいと思います。
コンボカラーの(2)と(4)があまり大差ないので、(2)をもう少し薄くしてみてはどうでしょう？
00:16:839 - すべての難易度で、ここのセクションでスライダーの速度を変更していないので緑線を消してください。重複しています。

[Easy]

サークルサイズ2、スペーシングがx1.0なのでかなりプレイしていて窮屈に感じます。サークルサイズの値を少しあげるかスペーシングを少しあけてみてはどうでしょう？サークルサイズの変更はSDの値が変わりますが、すべてのオブジェクトのスペーシングを調節するよりかは簡単にできると思います。
00:03:506 (2,2,2) - ピアノの音があるのでwhistleを追加してみてください
00:18:838 (4,5) - 直線に配置してしまうと前後のスライダーからの流れが悪くなります少し角度をつけて配置してみてください。
SPOILER
00:22:838 - clapがあると00:16:839 (1,2) - 前のここと同じようなパターンを作ることができ、より良いと思います。
00:24:505 - clapを追加。定期的に追加することでリズムが取りやすくなります。
00:24:172 (4,2) - ここの2つの間隔が狭いので余裕があるくらいに広げてください。
SPOILER
00:26:172 (1) - New comboはいらないと思います。
00:28:838 - ここからのsoft-hitnormalは音に合っていないのと、かなり煩く感じました。ピアノとボーカルだけなのでsoft-hitwhistleなんかを使って音をつけるべきだと思います。またそうすることで00:42:172 - ここからのパートと区別がつき抑揚もできます。Ashemuさんの難易度を参考にするといいかもしれません。
00:38:172 (1) - New comboを削除
00:39:672 - 右上のボタンでBreak timeを追加してください。
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
00:52:838 (1,2) - スライダーのノイズが目立つので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"を追加してみてはどうでしょう？また00:52:838 - ここをSoft Custom 2に設定してください。
00:56:838 (4) - 前の３つ00:55:505 (1,2,3) - でボーカルを取っているのでこちらもボーカルを取ったほうがわかりやすく叩きやすいリズムになると思います。
SPOILER
00:58:505 (2,3,4) - デフォルトのclapは音に合っていないので変わりにデフォルトのwhistleを使用してみてください。
01:04:838 (1) - 始点のclap入らないと思います。
01:24:838 (1) - New comboを削除
01:35:505 (3) - 01:34:172 (1,2) - ここの始点で取っている音があるので終点にfinishを追加？
01:37:505 (2) - ^

[Normal]

00:01:506 - Easyでも指摘しましたがスライダーのノイズがここでも気になるので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"の追加をお勧めします。
00:01:506 (1,2,1) - 終点にwhistleを追加
00:09:506 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - この部分も一定のリズムでwhistleを入れてあげるとリズムが取りやすくなります。パターンはお任せします。
00:20:838 (3) - Normalという低難易度であるのでわかりにくい形のスライダーは良くないので、終点を曲げるのであればよりわかりやすく作成してください。
00:25:338 (2) - どちらかというと終点にfinishかな・・・？両方でもいいかもです。
00:26:172 (1) - new comboを削除
00:43:505 (3,4,1) - ちょっと(4)の位置が窮屈なので30度ほど曲げてみてはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
00:52:838 (1) - 上記と同じ00:20:838 (3) -
01:38:172 (1) - new comboを削除
リズムに関してはいいと思いますがスライダーの形や01:31:838 (2,4) - こういった重なりが気になりました。もう一度確認してみてください。

[Hard]

00:09:006 (4) - ここから1/2スライダーを使用して00:09:256 - ここにあるボーカルの音を取ってみてはどうでしょう？
00:15:256 (1) - ここのスピナーでボーカルを取るなら00:15:131 - ここから開始したほうがよりよいと思います。
00:25:505 (3) - finishを追加
00:51:172 (5,1) - 、01:32:172 (3,4,1) - プレイしていて窮屈に見えるのでもう少し間を空けてください。

[Insane]

00:09:006 (6) - Hardと同じです。
00:25:505 - ,00:26:838 - finishを追加
00:39:505 (1) - ここにはfinishを追加するほど大きな音が無いので削除したほうがいいと思います。
01:04:505 (1) - new comboを削除。
01:20:838 - ,01:37:338 - ,01:37:505 - finishを追加
Normal,Hard同様に窮屈な配置が多く見られるのでなおした方がより見やすくなると思います。01:28:838 (1,2) - or 00:51:838 (2,3,4,5) -

[Ashemu's Extra]

いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。
00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。
00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。
00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！
00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。
00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです
00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。
SPOILER
RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです)
SPOILER
00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？
00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？
01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。
01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。
01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加
01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？
01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。
01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。

[Extra]

HP Drain Rateは7でいいと思います。
00:08:506 (5) - 終点に音が無いので変わりにノートにしてみてはどうでしょう？
00:10:256 - ここだけピアノを取らないのは不自然に感じました。他の静かなパートではすべて追加してあったのでここも追加したほうがいいと思います。
00:16:839 - finishを追加
00:18:005 (4) - 次の00:18:172 (1) - ここで大きくジャンプさせたいので、00:18:005 (4) - このノートを右上に少し移動してみてください
00:19:338 (7) - 前の連打00:18:339 (2,3,4) - に合わせて配置してみてはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
00:25:338 (1) - new comboを削除。
00:25:505 - finishを追加
00:28:505 (1,2,1) - 音に対してジャンプがでかすぎると思います。改善案としては全体的に小さくするか、２つずつ間隔を空けるのではなく、画像のように４つで二段階、間隔を広げていくのもよさそうです。
SPOILER
00:40:672 (2,3,4) - Ashemu's Extraと同じです。
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
00:56:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped。ここまで多くの音は聞こえませんでしたもう一度聞いてノートを減らしてください。
01:10:505 (2) - もうすこし01:10:172 (1) - との間隔を空けたほうが、見た目と流れが良くなります。
01:16:255 (5) - overmapped。
01:19:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここの連打で仮にピアノの音を取るとしたら1/3の音になるので、通常通りボーカルを取り1/2などのリズムをお勧めします。
SPOILER
01:20:838 (1) - 01:10:505 (2) - と同じで01:20:838 (1) - このスライダーを少し上に移動してみてください
01:28:839 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
00:43:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 、00:48:172 (5,6,7) - このあたりのスペーシングが音に合っていなく大きく感じたので、強い音はジャンプを置いてこういった部分は通常のスペーシングにして抑揚をつけるとより良い内容になると思います。

以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-10-20T10:29:53+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hello :3
[Ashemu's Extra]
いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。 - delete note
00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。 - fix
00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。- fix
00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！- fix
00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。- fix
00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです- fix
00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。- fix
SPOILER
RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです) - fix
SPOILER
00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。- fix
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish- fix
00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。- fix
01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。- fix
01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加- fix
01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。- fix
01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^- fix
01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。- fix　~~再配置できて嬉しいです~~
以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～

Thanks for modding !!
指摘に見合った更新ができたか不安も少しありますが自分の理解でき得る範囲で全体の配置を見直しました！

Update plz

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
ArtistUnicode:Ayumi.
Creator:Yasaija 714
Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
Tags:hana no no ni saku utakata no opening A_s_h_e_m_u
BeatmapID:775393
BeatmapSetID:351841

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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244,232,72505,2,0,P|200:208|180:156,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,92,72838,6,0,B|480:140|480:140|416:168,1,161.999995056153,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,204,73172,2,0,P|312:256|328:312,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,368,73505,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,152,73672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,296,73838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,132,74005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,232,74172,6,0,L|80:116,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,74422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,74505,2,0,L|209:144,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,296,74838,6,0,P|312:312|368:296,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,284,75088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,252,75172,1,10,0:0:0:0:
408,216,75255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,184,75338,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,152,75422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,128,75505,6,0,B|260:152|260:152|292:112,1,161.999995056153,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,44,75838,2,0,P|420:44|460:92,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,76172,2,0,B|288:324|288:324|270:275,1,161.999995056153,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,76505,2,0,P|193:177|140:228,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,344,76838,5,10,0:0:0:0:
340,196,77005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,217,77172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,316,77338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,77505,2,0,P|140:116|92:132,1,119.999996337891,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,77838,2,0,P|340:212|388:196,1,119.999996337891,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,78172,6,0,B|112:332|112:332|116:284,1,161.999995056153,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,78505,2,0,P|99:194|155:210,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,78838,2,0,B|388:344|388:344|384:296,1,161.999995056153,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,79172,2,0,P|424:208|360:216,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,356,79505,5,14,0:0:0:0:
236,184,79672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79838,1,12,0:0:0:0:
68,136,80005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,80172,2,0,P|340:124|344:196,1,107.999996704102,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,166,80422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
351,166,80505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,332,80672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,252,80838,6,0,B|456:136|456:136|416:168,1,148.50000453186,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,268,81172,2,0,P|316:264|276:240,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,132,81505,2,0,B|116:28|116:28|152:60,1,148.50000453186,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,81838,2,0,P|260:180|296:172,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,56,82172,6,0,L|88:32,1,80.9999975280763,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,20,82505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,96,82672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,192,82838,2,0,P|32:224|60:240,1,53.9999983520508,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,108,83172,2,0,P|226:81|192:56,1,53.9999983520508,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,237,83505,6,0,L|144:99,1,107.999996704102,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,131,83755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,131,83838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,48,84005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,144,84172,1,10,0:0:0:0:
40,292,84338,2,0,P|76:328|132:332,1,107.999996704102,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,200,84672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,324,84838,6,0,P|344:324|385:278,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,148,85172,2,0,L|388:40,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,20,85505,1,10,0:0:0:0:
148,76,85672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,85838,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,292,85922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,300,86005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,296,86088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,280,86172,6,0,B|328:160|328:160|344:208,1,161.999995056153,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,300,86505,2,0,P|428:304|480:276,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,216,86838,2,0,B|336:96|336:96|320:148,1,161.999995056153,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,236,87172,2,0,P|244:256|188:244,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,190,87505,5,10,0:0:0:0:
120,20,87672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,190,87838,1,10,0:0:0:0:
26,85,88005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,94,88172,2,0,P|281:130|341:126,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,128,88505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,40,88672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,127,88838,6,0,P|294:87|218:99,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,89172,2,0,P|99:183|40:152,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,68,89505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,4,89672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,89838,2,0,L|212:204,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,304,90172,5,8,0:0:0:0:
292,328,90338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,328,90422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,328,90505,2,0,L|320:216,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,90838,2,0,P|469:110|472:40,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,0,91172,2,0,P|258:44|252:120,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,91505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
404,204,91672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,91838,2,0,P|248:156|216:204,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,308,92172,2,0,P|204:348|272:348,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,92505,2,0,P|292:148|224:148,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,92838,6,0,L|184:80,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,93088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,108,93172,2,0,L|376:60,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,244,93505,2,0,L|158:283,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,376,93838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,320,94005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,168,94172,6,0,P|20:112|60:84,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,94505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,212,94672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,94838,2,0,P|76:336|120:364,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,177,95172,2,0,P|294:133|239:96,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,95505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
136,220,95672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,95838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,228,96005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,144,96172,2,0,P|472:168|500:224,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,336,96672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,96838,2,0,P|248:96|324:128,1,161.999995056153,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,148,97172,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,336,97338,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,96,97505,2,0,P|228:60|308:96,1,161.999995056153,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,124,97838,2,0,L|296:248,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,312,98172,6,0,P|280:336|340:328,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,285,98422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,285,98505,2,0,L|360:180,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,24,98838,1,12,0:0:0:0:

追記：ビデオの追加よろしくお願いします(｀･ω･´)ゞ

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-21T08:23:11+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hello :3

[General]
"normal-hitclap4"のファイルに遅延が見られたのでこちらの修正した物を使用してください。http://puu.sh/kOoHy/f4b92d4930.zip
Ashemu's Extraにビデオが追加されていないので追加してください。
Tagsに"Yasaija_714"があったほうがいいと思います。
コンボカラーの(2)と(4)があまり大差ないので、(2)をもう少し薄くしてみてはどうでしょう？
00:16:839 - すべての難易度で、ここのセクションでスライダーの速度を変更していないので緑線を消してください。重複しています。

[Easy]
サークルサイズ2、スペーシングがx1.0なのでかなりプレイしていて窮屈に感じます。サークルサイズの値を少しあげるかスペーシングを少しあけてみてはどうでしょう？サークルサイズの変更はSDの値が変わりますが、すべてのオブジェクトのスペーシングを調節するよりかは簡単にできると思います。
00:03:506 (2,2,2) - ピアノの音があるのでwhistleを追加してみてください
00:18:838 (4,5) - 直線に配置してしまうと前後のスライダーからの流れが悪くなります少し角度をつけて配置してみてください。
SPOILER
00:22:838 - clapがあると00:16:839 (1,2) - 前のここと同じようなパターンを作ることができ、より良いと思います。
00:24:505 - clapを追加。定期的に追加することでリズムが取りやすくなります。
00:24:172 (4,2) - ここの2つの間隔が狭いので余裕があるくらいに広げてください。
SPOILER
00:26:172 (1) - New comboはいらないと思います。
00:28:838 - ここからのsoft-hitnormalは音に合っていないのと、かなり煩く感じました。ピアノとボーカルだけなのでsoft-hitwhistleなんかを使って音をつけるべきだと思います。またそうすることで00:42:172 - ここからのパートと区別がつき抑揚もできます。Ashemuさんの難易度を参考にするといいかもしれません。
00:38:172 (1) - New comboを削除
00:39:672 - 右上のボタンでBreak timeを追加してください。
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
00:52:838 (1,2) - スライダーのノイズが目立つので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"を追加してみてはどうでしょう？また00:52:838 - ここをSoft Custom 2に設定してください。
00:56:838 (4) - 前の３つ00:55:505 (1,2,3) - でボーカルを取っているのでこちらもボーカルを取ったほうがわかりやすく叩きやすいリズムになると思います。
SPOILER
00:58:505 (2,3,4) - デフォルトのclapは音に合っていないので変わりにデフォルトのwhistleを使用してみてください。
01:04:838 (1) - 始点のclap入らないと思います。
01:24:838 (1) - New comboを削除
01:35:505 (3) - 01:34:172 (1,2) - ここの始点で取っている音があるので終点にfinishを追加？
01:37:505 (2) - ^
[Normal]
00:01:506 - Easyでも指摘しましたがスライダーのノイズがここでも気になるので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"の追加をお勧めします。
00:01:506 (1,2,1) - 終点にwhistleを追加
00:09:506 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - この部分も一定のリズムでwhistleを入れてあげるとリズムが取りやすくなります。パターンはお任せします。
00:20:838 (3) - Normalという低難易度であるのでわかりにくい形のスライダーは良くないので、終点を曲げるのであればよりわかりやすく作成してください。
00:25:338 (2) - どちらかというと終点にfinishかな・・・？両方でもいいかもです。
00:26:172 (1) - new comboを削除
00:43:505 (3,4,1) - ちょっと(4)の位置が窮屈なので30度ほど曲げてみてはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
00:52:838 (1) - 上記と同じ00:20:838 (3) -
01:38:172 (1) - new comboを削除
リズムに関してはいいと思いますがスライダーの形や01:31:838 (2,4) - こういった重なりが気になりました。もう一度確認してみてください。
[Hard]
00:09:006 (4) - ここから1/2スライダーを使用して00:09:256 - ここにあるボーカルの音を取ってみてはどうでしょう？
00:15:256 (1) - ここのスピナーでボーカルを取るなら00:15:131 - ここから開始したほうがよりよいと思います。
00:25:505 (3) - finishを追加
00:51:172 (5,1) - 、01:32:172 (3,4,1) - プレイしていて窮屈に見えるのでもう少し間を空けてください。
[Insane]
00:09:006 (6) - Hardと同じです。
00:25:505 - ,00:26:838 - finishを追加
00:39:505 (1) - ここにはfinishを追加するほど大きな音が無いので削除したほうがいいと思います。
01:04:505 (1) - new comboを削除。
01:20:838 - ,01:37:338 - ,01:37:505 - finishを追加
Normal,Hard同様に窮屈な配置が多く見られるのでなおした方がより見やすくなると思います。01:28:838 (1,2) - or 00:51:838 (2,3,4,5) -
[Ashemu's Extra]
いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。
00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。
00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。
00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！
00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。
00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです
00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。
SPOILER
RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです)
SPOILER
00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？
00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？
01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。
01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。
01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加
01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？
01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。
01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。
[Extra]
HP Drain Rateは7でいいと思います。
00:08:506 (5) - 終点に音が無いので変わりにノートにしてみてはどうでしょう？
00:10:256 - ここだけピアノを取らないのは不自然に感じました。他の静かなパートではすべて追加してあったのでここも追加したほうがいいと思います。
00:16:839 - finishを追加
00:18:005 (4) - 次の00:18:172 (1) - ここで大きくジャンプさせたいので、00:18:005 (4) - このノートを右上に少し移動してみてください
00:19:338 (7) - 前の連打00:18:339 (2,3,4) - に合わせて配置してみてはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
00:25:338 (1) - new comboを削除。
00:25:505 - finishを追加
00:28:505 (1,2,1) - 音に対してジャンプがでかすぎると思います。改善案としては全体的に小さくするか、２つずつ間隔を空けるのではなく、画像のように４つで二段階、間隔を広げていくのもよさそうです。
SPOILER
00:40:672 (2,3,4) - Ashemu's Extraと同じです。
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
00:56:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped。ここまで多くの音は聞こえませんでしたもう一度聞いてノートを減らしてください。
01:10:505 (2) - もうすこし01:10:172 (1) - との間隔を空けたほうが、見た目と流れが良くなります。
01:16:255 (5) - overmapped。
01:19:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここの連打で仮にピアノの音を取るとしたら1/3の音になるので、通常通りボーカルを取り1/2などのリズムをお勧めします。
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01:20:838 (1) - 01:10:505 (2) - と同じで01:20:838 (1) - このスライダーを少し上に移動してみてください
01:28:839 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
00:43:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 、00:48:172 (5,6,7) - このあたりのスペーシングが音に合っていなく大きく感じたので、強い音はジャンプを置いてこういった部分は通常のスペーシングにして抑揚をつけるとより良い内容になると思います。
以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～

mod有難うございます！
すべて変更させていただきました

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Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-21T08:24:17+00:00

A s h e m u wrote:

alacat wrote:
Hello :3
[Ashemu's Extra]
いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。 - delete note
00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。 - fix
00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。- fix
00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！- fix
00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。- fix
00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです- fix
00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。- fix
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RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです) - fix
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00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。- fix
00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish- fix
00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。- fix
01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。- fix
01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加- fix
01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。- fix
01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^- fix
01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。- fix　~~再配置できて嬉しいです~~
以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～

Thanks for modding !!
指摘に見合った更新ができたか不安も少しありますが自分の理解でき得る範囲で全体の配置を見直しました！

Update plz

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追記：ビデオの追加よろしくお願いします(｀･ω･´)ゞ

ビデオ追加とアプデしました

Lavender

Beatmap Nominator

891 posts

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2015-10-21T13:49:53+00:00

Good luck on ranking!

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-21T14:25:23+00:00

Lavender wrote:
Good luck on ranking!

Thank you!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

P o M u T a 2015-10-24T08:33:32+00:00

request via PM 遅れてごめんなさい!!

[Easy]

00:39:172 (4) - blanketがちょっと汚く見えます。slider endのgridを右に２つ移動させるだけでもだいぶ良くなります。
SPOILER
01:15:505 (1) - 手前の(4)と重なってるのが気になります。(1)の真ん中のgridを右に１個移動させるだけで重なりは解消され見栄えもよく見えます。試してみてください。

[Normal]

特に無かったです。

[Hard]

01:04:838 (1) - このスライダーの終点は1/16でスナップされてますが、特に理由がなければ1/4で配置する事をお勧めします。01:05:005 - ここまで移動。

[Insane]

特に無かったです。

[Ashemu's Extra]

00:05:006 (3) - このスライダーの終点ですが。1/16にスナップされています。よっぽどの事で無い限り1/4でスナップするのが妥当だと思います。音聴いてみましたが、1/16に拘る理由が見つかりませんでした。 00:05:256 - ちなみに終点はこのtimeです。
01:17:505 (5,6) - ↑に同じく。 (5)の終点は01:17:672 - に。 (6)の終点は01:18:005 - に移動させましょう。

[Extra]

01:32:838 (1,2) - 曲をよく聴く限りこういう音取りの方が自然かと思います。
SPOILER

力になれなかったですが、ranked目指して頑張ってください。

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-24T09:26:08+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
request via PM 遅れてごめんなさい!!

[Easy]
00:39:172 (4) - blanketがちょっと汚く見えます。slider endのgridを右に２つ移動させるだけでもだいぶ良くなります。fix
SPOILER
01:15:505 (1) - 手前の(4)と重なってるのが気になります。(1)の真ん中のgridを右に１個移動させるだけで重なりは解消され見栄えもよく見えます。試してみてください。fix
[Normal]

特に無かったです。
[Hard]
01:04:838 (1) - このスライダーの終点は1/16でスナップされてますが、特に理由がなければ1/4で配置する事をお勧めします。01:05:005 - ここまで移動。!!!1/16にした覚えがないですが変更しました
[Insane]
特に無かったです。

[Extra]
01:32:838 (1,2) - 曲をよく聴く限りこういう音取りの方が自然かと思います。
SPOILER
A s h e m u wrote:
[*]00:20:839 (1,2) - こんなのどうでしょう
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/kN99t.png
変えてみました

力になれなかったですが、ranked目指して頑張ってください。

modありがとうございます！

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-10-24T11:53:55+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
request via PM 遅れてごめんなさい!!

[Ashemu's Extra]
00:05:006 (3) - このスライダーの終点ですが。1/16にスナップされています。よっぽどの事で無い限り1/4でスナップするのが妥当だと思います。音聴いてみましたが、1/16に拘る理由が見つかりませんでした。 00:05:256 - ちなみに終点はこのtimeです。
01:17:505 (5,6) - ↑に同じく。 (5)の終点は01:17:672 - に。 (6)の終点は01:18:005 - に移動させましょう。

なぜかスライダーの終点おかしかったのに気付きませんでした！ご指摘ありがとうございましたー！

Update ｐｌｚ- :3

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
ArtistUnicode:Ayumi.
Creator:Yasaija 714
Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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A s h e m u wrote:

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[Ashemu's Extra]
00:05:006 (3) - このスライダーの終点ですが。1/16にスナップされています。よっぽどの事で無い限り1/4でスナップするのが妥当だと思います。音聴いてみましたが、1/16に拘る理由が見つかりませんでした。 00:05:256 - ちなみに終点はこのtimeです。
01:17:505 (5,6) - ↑に同じく。 (5)の終点は01:17:672 - に。 (6)の終点は01:18:005 - に移動させましょう。

なぜかスライダーの終点おかしかったのに気付きませんでした！ご指摘ありがとうございましたー！

Update ｐｌｚ- :3

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420,144,96172,2,0,P|472:168|500:224,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,336,96672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,96838,2,0,P|248:96|324:128,1,161.999995056153,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,148,97172,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,336,97338,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,96,97505,2,0,P|228:60|308:96,1,161.999995056153,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,124,97838,2,0,L|296:248,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,312,98172,6,0,P|280:336|340:328,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,285,98422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,285,98505,2,0,L|360:180,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,24,98838,1,12,0:0:0:0:

okです

Underforest

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Underforest 2015-10-25T20:04:41+00:00

Hello, from my queue! (sorry, I don't speak japanese)

[General]

The map it's overpassing the 24MB with video limit. Put the video in 854x480.

[Easy]
00:30:838 (2) - Getting out of the grid
00:31:505 (3) - Fix distance
00:36:838 (1) - Same
00:39:672 - 00:42:005 - Delete break
00:54:172 (2) - Fix distance
00:56:838 (4) - Same

[Normal]
00:49:338 - (AiMod) This slider is far
00:56:838 (3) - Fix distance

Hard and Insane are fine
Well beatmapped and good luck with rank!

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Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2015-10-28T07:48:14+00:00

AlejandroMedia wrote:
Hello, from my queue! (sorry, I don't speak japanese)

[General]
The map it's overpassing the 24MB with video limit. Put the video in 854x480.
[Easy]
00:30:838 (2) - Getting out of the grid fix
00:31:505 (3) - Fix distance fix
00:36:838 (1) - Same fix
00:39:672 - 00:42:005 - Delete break No Change
00:54:172 (2) - Fix distance fix
00:56:838 (4) - Same fix

[Normal]
00:49:338 - (AiMod) This slider is far fix
00:56:838 (3) - Fix distance fix

Hard and Insane are fine Thank you
Well beatmapped and good luck with rank!

Thank you for modding

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