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Aimer - Brave Shine (TV size)

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_tasty
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SkinnyJommy
good luck baby! <3
KUURAhoshi

[General]
1. Metadata
  1. Based on the Ranked version, add 'エメ eme aimerrhythm 2nd season opening type-moon フェイト/ステイナイト defstar records notes aniplex saber ufotable hisashi koyama kenji tamai shogo ohnishi' to the tags
2. Design
  1. Nothing
3. BG
  1. Correct size
4. Timing / BPM
  1. 00:56:656 - Kiai start here
5. Hitsound
  1. No custom hitsound yet
6. Difficulty
  1. What about OD 8 ?
[Insane]
00:04:726 (5) - Change this to circle ? More suitable
00:12:094 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:24:024 (1) - Stack
00:33:323 (3,4) - Stack them on 5 ?
00:36:656 (4) - Slider end, y:232
00:40:165 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:44:551 (5) - ^
01:07:884 (2) - What about re-shape ?
01:15:252 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:25:428 (10) - ^
01:27:270 (4) - Remove, replace with circle at 01:27:358
01:28:761 (10) - x:208 y:32 ?

Don't give Kudos if there's no change~
Good luck
Topic Starter
_tasty

Kazamastar wrote:


[General]
1. Metadata
  1. Based on the Ranked version, add 'エメ eme aimerrhythm 2nd season opening type-moon フェイト/ステイナイト defstar records notes aniplex saber ufotable hisashi koyama kenji tamai shogo ohnishi' to the tags
2. Design
  1. Nothing
3. BG
  1. Correct size
4. Timing / BPM
  1. 00:56:656 - Kiai start here
5. Hitsound
  1. No custom hitsound yet
tbh idk how to use custom hit sound lel

6. Difficulty
  1. What about OD 8 ?
I'll change if more people suggest this

[Insane]
00:04:726 (5) - Change this to circle ? More suitable follow guitar tho
00:12:094 (2) - Ctrl+G nah, it's boring. fixed the blanket after.
00:24:024 (1) - Stack
00:33:323 (3,4) - Stack them on 5 ?
00:36:656 (4) - Slider end, y:232 it is on y:232
00:40:165 (2) - Ctrl+G followed guitar pattern
00:44:551 (5) - ^makes really huge weird jump
01:07:884 (2) - What about re-shape ?
01:15:252 (7) - Ctrl+G nope, changed it to 2 circles
01:25:428 (10) - ^ I don't like that kind of flow
01:27:270 (4) - Remove, replace with circle at 01:27:358
01:28:761 (10) - x:208 y:32 ?don't really like obtuse angles

Don't give Kudos if there's no change~
Good luck

Thank you for everything!!
Aste-
Mark for Full mod after you finished the mapset

Please PM me if you done it
-rage
Greetings from my queue!
You can visit my queue right here!

I noticed there was a few issues with your AImod (ctrl-shift-A), please try and fix them!

Jommy's Normal
  1. 00:17:007 (3) - make a better blanket there.
  2. 00:28:586 (1) - This slider could be moved up a little (to improve blanket) and also i think the curve should be facing down instead of up. Example.
  3. 00:37:708 (2) - slider should be moved to the rightr a little, the angle is a little too sharp.
  4. 00:59:463 (1) - slider should be facing down instead of up, it flows better in my opinion.
  5. 01:03:673 (3) - same thing as the point above but facing right instead of left?
  6. 01:05:779 (2) - same thing as the point above but facing left instead of right? (dat copy-paste right there)
  7. 01:11:393 (2) - ^
  8. 01:13:498 (1) - avoid overlap (and sharp angle).
  9. 01:19:112 - after this point, i feel like there should be something there, like a few spinners? some final sliders? there's like this open void and it's missing something.
    I noticed i pointed out a lot of sliders facing the wrong way, i'm just wondering if that was intentional or not? I just think it would all flow better with the points i mentions considering the way that the paterns move, it makes more sense.

Celsius' Hard
  1. 00:03:323 (1) - fix DS. (idk if that was intentional or not).
  2. 00:04:024 (3) - i have a slight issue with this slider and the way it suddenly goes up like that. i think it's just weird and should maybe be changed to something that's not too awkward to hit along with the patern.
  3. 00:09:463 (2) - fix DS.
  4. 00:46:831 (5) - ^
  5. (just a suggestion) how would you feel if there was a spinner here? at 00:53:849 - i feel like it fits better there.
  6. 00:59:463 (1) - fix DS.
    There was a few DS problems which i didn't point out because i felt they were appropriate there, but the ones i pointed out had an unecessary distance between the 2 notes.

That's all i have to say! Thank you for leaving your request in my queue.
Good luck with your beatmap!
Iceskulls

klonoa wrote:

Greetings from my queue!
You can visit my queue right here!

I noticed there was a few issues with your AImod (ctrl-shift-A), please try and fix them!

Celsius' Hard
  1. 00:03:323 (1) - fix DS. (idk if that was intentional or not). :arrow: it intentional cus I want jumps lol
  2. 00:04:024 (3) - i have a slight issue with this slider and the way it suddenly goes up like that. i think it's just weird and should maybe be changed to something that's not too awkward to hit along with the patern. :arrow: mm I don't have a problem with this flow looks fine as it is
  3. 00:09:463 (2) - fix DS. :arrow: it looks fine
  4. 00:46:831 (5) - ^ :arrow: it's fine some times my ds change because the change of sv
  5. (just a suggestion) how would you feel if there was a spinner here? at 00:53:849 - i feel like it fits better there. :arrow: I can hear only vocal there putting spinner on vocal sound weird for me xD
  6. 00:59:463 (1) - fix DS. :arrow: it's fine some times my ds change because the change of sv
    There was a few DS problems which i didn't point out because i felt they were appropriate there, but the ones i pointed out had an unecessary distance between the 2 notes.

That's all i have to say! Thank you for leaving your request in my queue.
Good luck with your beatmap!
thanks for the mods
SkinnyJommy

klonoa wrote:

Greetings from my queue!
You can visit my queue right here!

I noticed there was a few issues with your AImod (ctrl-shift-A), please try and fix them!

Jommy's Normal
  1. 00:17:007 (3) - make a better blanket there. fixed
  2. 00:28:586 (1) - This slider could be moved up a little (to improve blanket) and also i think the curve should be facing down instead of up. Example. fixed
  3. 00:37:708 (2) - slider should be moved to the rightr a little, the angle is a little too sharp. i think its fine
  4. 00:59:463 (1) - slider should be facing down instead of up, it flows better in my opinion. i think its okay the way that it is flowing now
  5. 01:03:673 (3) - same thing as the point above but facing right instead of left? The slider direction doesnt really make a difference in my opinion
  6. 01:05:779 (2) - same thing as the point above but facing left instead of right? (dat copy-paste right there) okay fixed
  7. 01:11:393 (2) - ^ I like this the way it is
  8. 01:13:498 (1) - avoid overlap (and sharp angle). i believe the overlap is fine here as you can directly see the other hit circle and the angle is fine to me
  9. 01:19:112 - after this point, i feel like there should be something there, like a few spinners? some final sliders? there's like this open void and it's missing something.
    I noticed i pointed out a lot of sliders facing the wrong way, i'm just wondering if that was intentional or not? I just think it would all flow better with the points i mentions considering the way that the paterns move, it makes more sense.
yeah i make weird slider shapes and directions, just fo the giggles, al intentional

That's all i have to say! Thank you for leaving your request in my queue.
Good luck with your beatmap!
thank you for the mod!!!!
Ringating
from my queue:

I found a higher res version of the image and resized+cropped it to 1366x768.
image

while this image is relatively fitting, it's actually a character named elesis from a game called elsword
if you want to find a new image, I'd suggest looking here or here. If you find something you like I can make it edit it if necessary.
also, here's a video file for the map.

no kds
SkinnyJommy
amazing map! WOOOW!!! :D :D :D :D :D
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