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eyemedia - Bloody Purity [OsuMania]

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-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 Juni 2015 at 17:47:55

Artist: eyemedia
Title: Bloody Purity
Source: Mozarc
Tags: Cytus yundere chapter 6 vi the lost
BPM: 155
Filesize: 9447kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 7Key (3,13 stars, 994 notes)
  2. Insane - 7Key (4,43 stars, 1712 notes)
  3. Lunatic - 7Key (4,9 stars, 1892 notes)
  4. Normal - 7Key (1,82 stars, 580 notes)
Download: eyemedia - Bloody Purity
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All diff is done

Hitsound is remaking

Ready for mod pattern ^^
Last edited by -[ AmiShici ]- , edited 10 times in total.
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
eyemedia - Bloody Purity [OsuMania]


Hi there, i came like your request~
Here is your offset result:

BPM: 155.000
Offset: 1394

Another Cytus's song <3 I love it ~ Good luck ya ~
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

eyemedia - Bloody Purity [OsuMania]


Hi there, i came like your request~
Here is your offset result:

BPM: 155.000
Offset: 1394

Another Cytus's song <3 I love it ~ Good luck ya ~
Thanks KK :)
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
stuff
19:51 -[ AmiShici ]-: hello o/
19:51 Zenx: ohaii
19:51 -[ AmiShici ]-: do you have time for now?
19:52 Zenx: maybe
19:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel maybe
19:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: can you mod my map?
19:52 Zenx: linku
19:52 *-[ AmiShici ]- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/711792 eyemedia - Bloody Purity]
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: you have had it xD
19:53 Zenx: yea i need to redl
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaaa
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: what happen with lastest dl?
19:54 Zenx: cause you changed diff name
19:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaa,, i forgot about it xD
19:57 Zenx: uhh what is mozarc
19:57 Zenx: in the source
19:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: i dont know
19:58 Zenx: huh
19:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: i just take it from ranked map xD
19:59 Zenx: well, idk how is mozarc linked to this
20:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:00 Zenx: 02:08:361 (128361|3,128361|6,128361|0,128410|5,128410|1,128458|2,128458|4,128506|1,128506|5,128555|6,128555|3,128555|0,128652|1,128652|5,128748|2,128748|4,128748|3,128797|1,128797|5,128845|0,128845|6,128893|1,128893|5,128942|3,128942|2,128942|4,129039|1,129039|5,129135|0,129135|6) -  this burst is uhhh
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: huee, any suggest?
20:02 Zenx: are you sure it's 1/8
20:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: maybe yes
20:03 Zenx: what
20:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: am i wrong?
20:03 Zenx: do you have any source for this lol
20:03 Zenx: cause i don't hear a 1/8 :\
20:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: you hear noise sound, idk what the name of sound. i follow it
20:04 Zenx: 02:09:135 (129135|0,129135|6,129184|1,129232|2,129281|3,129329|1,129329|4,129377|5,129426|6,129474|0,129523|3,129523|1) -  even this ? _ ?
20:04 Zenx: are you sure it's not 1/12 or 1/16 though
20:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: oh that... about that idk about the snapping lel, just try to make it xD
20:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:05 Zenx: well i can't really say that it's rankable if you're not sure lol
20:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaaa, how i must do about it? make 1/12 snapping or what? ask to another mapper? :/
20:07 Zenx: well i don't think it has any snaps lol
20:07 Zenx: just ... don't map it ? _ ?
20:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwa... can you give me suggest on that timing ?
20:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:08 Zenx: i can't, cause there's no snaps lol
20:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: huehue... okay, i'll thinking it..
20:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: next xD
20:11 Zenx: well some LNs are i don't really enjoy  like these 02:09:135 (129135|0,129135|6,129184|1,129232|2,129281|3,129329|1,129329|4,129377|5,129426|6,129474|0,129523|3,129523|1) - 
20:11 Zenx: 02:20:942 (140942|3,141135|3,141523|3,141716|3,142103|3) -  *
20:11 Zenx: wrong linku
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: hehe, just make for upper star lel
20:12 Zenx: might as well just make it 1 LN ?  _ ?
20:12 Zenx: ; _ ;
20:13 -[ AmiShici ]-: well, 1 LN from 02:20:942 - to 02:22:297 - ?
20:14 Zenx: yeaaap that's easier to play
20:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: okay
20:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: fixed
20:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: then, how about this? 01:42:232 (102232|3,102426|3,102813|3,103006|3,103393|3) -
20:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: its true?
20:15 Zenx: yeea p same thing
20:15 Zenx: 01:40:587 (100587|1,100684|0,100781|1,100877|0,100877|2,100974|1,101071|0,101168|1,101264|2,101264|0,101361|1,101458|0,101555|1,101652|0,101652|2,101748|1,101845|0,101942|1) -  really really don't like this lol
20:16 Zenx: there are just waay too many brackets
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: huehue, but it sure?
20:17 Zenx: huh
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: just i forgot take it on 01:37:393 (97393|0,97393|2,97490|1,97587|0,97684|1,97781|2,97877|1,97974|0,98071|1,98168|2,98264|1,98361|0,98458|1,98555|2,98652|1,98748|0,98845|1,98942|0) -
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:17 Zenx: it has waay to many brackets
20:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: hm, well
20:18 Zenx: trilling constantly is kinda uncomfortable :\
20:19 -[ AmiShici ]-: okay... delete this 01:40:877 (100877|0,101264|0,101652|0) -
20:21 Zenx: uhhh the rest should be okk? ?? 
20:21 Zenx: maaybe
20:21 Zenx: im just bad at LNs
20:21 Zenx: i need to go shower now though brb
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaaa, well
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: nope
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: thanks for mod
20:35 Zenx: lel
20:36 Zenx: im not really done on all diffs though :\
20:36 Zenx: well it's not really a good mod since idk what i can mod
20:37 Zenx: probably cause im just too lazy to think of stuff now
20:38 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaa, well, nope
20:38 -[ AmiShici ]-: maybe next time i'll req again lol
20:39 Zenx: if you don't want me to mod and stuff you can just say i guess
20:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: no no no, i need more mod because i new mapper, and i cannot play 7k lel
20:40 Zenx: it's a pretty good map from a new mapper 
20:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: so i dont feel if the map have wrong
20:40 Zenx: don't really see many errors with playing lol
20:41 -[ AmiShici ]-: lol
20:41 Zenx: well good luck getting more mods anyways
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Zenx wrote:

stuff
19:51 -[ AmiShici ]-: hello o/
19:51 Zenx: ohaii
19:51 -[ AmiShici ]-: do you have time for now?
19:52 Zenx: maybe
19:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel maybe
19:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: can you mod my map?
19:52 Zenx: linku
19:52 *-[ AmiShici ]- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/711792 eyemedia - Bloody Purity]
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: you have had it xD
19:53 Zenx: yea i need to redl
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaaa
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: what happen with lastest dl?
19:54 Zenx: cause you changed diff name
19:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaa,, i forgot about it xD
19:57 Zenx: uhh what is mozarc
19:57 Zenx: in the source
19:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: i dont know
19:58 Zenx: huh
19:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: i just take it from ranked map xD
19:59 Zenx: well, idk how is mozarc linked to this
20:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:00 Zenx: 02:08:361 (128361|3,128361|6,128361|0,128410|5,128410|1,128458|2,128458|4,128506|1,128506|5,128555|6,128555|3,128555|0,128652|1,128652|5,128748|2,128748|4,128748|3,128797|1,128797|5,128845|0,128845|6,128893|1,128893|5,128942|3,128942|2,128942|4,129039|1,129039|5,129135|0,129135|6) -  this burst is uhhh
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: huee, any suggest?
20:02 Zenx: are you sure it's 1/8
20:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: maybe yes
20:03 Zenx: what
20:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: am i wrong?
20:03 Zenx: do you have any source for this lol
20:03 Zenx: cause i don't hear a 1/8 :\
20:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: you hear noise sound, idk what the name of sound. i follow it
20:04 Zenx: 02:09:135 (129135|0,129135|6,129184|1,129232|2,129281|3,129329|1,129329|4,129377|5,129426|6,129474|0,129523|3,129523|1) -  even this ? _ ?
20:04 Zenx: are you sure it's not 1/12 or 1/16 though
20:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: oh that... about that idk about the snapping lel, just try to make it xD
20:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:05 Zenx: well i can't really say that it's rankable if you're not sure lol
20:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaaa, how i must do about it? make 1/12 snapping or what? ask to another mapper? :/
20:07 Zenx: well i don't think it has any snaps lol
20:07 Zenx: just ... don't map it ? _ ?
20:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwa... can you give me suggest on that timing ?
20:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:08 Zenx: i can't, cause there's no snaps lol
20:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: huehue... okay, i'll thinking it..
20:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: next xD
20:11 Zenx: well some LNs are i don't really enjoy  like these 02:09:135 (129135|0,129135|6,129184|1,129232|2,129281|3,129329|1,129329|4,129377|5,129426|6,129474|0,129523|3,129523|1) - 
20:11 Zenx: 02:20:942 (140942|3,141135|3,141523|3,141716|3,142103|3) -  *
20:11 Zenx: wrong linku
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: hehe, just make for upper star lel
20:12 Zenx: might as well just make it 1 LN ?  _ ?
20:12 Zenx: ; _ ;
20:13 -[ AmiShici ]-: well, 1 LN from 02:20:942 - to 02:22:297 - ?
20:14 Zenx: yeaaap that's easier to play
20:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: okay
20:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: fixed
20:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: then, how about this? 01:42:232 (102232|3,102426|3,102813|3,103006|3,103393|3) -
20:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: its true?
20:15 Zenx: yeea p same thing
20:15 Zenx: 01:40:587 (100587|1,100684|0,100781|1,100877|0,100877|2,100974|1,101071|0,101168|1,101264|2,101264|0,101361|1,101458|0,101555|1,101652|0,101652|2,101748|1,101845|0,101942|1) -  really really don't like this lol
20:16 Zenx: there are just waay too many brackets
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: huehue, but it sure?
20:17 Zenx: huh
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: just i forgot take it on 01:37:393 (97393|0,97393|2,97490|1,97587|0,97684|1,97781|2,97877|1,97974|0,98071|1,98168|2,98264|1,98361|0,98458|1,98555|2,98652|1,98748|0,98845|1,98942|0) -
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:17 Zenx: it has waay to many brackets
20:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: hm, well
20:18 Zenx: trilling constantly is kinda uncomfortable :\
20:19 -[ AmiShici ]-: okay... delete this 01:40:877 (100877|0,101264|0,101652|0) -
20:21 Zenx: uhhh the rest should be okk? ?? 
20:21 Zenx: maaybe
20:21 Zenx: im just bad at LNs
20:21 Zenx: i need to go shower now though brb
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaaa, well
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: nope
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: thanks for mod
20:35 Zenx: lel
20:36 Zenx: im not really done on all diffs though :\
20:36 Zenx: well it's not really a good mod since idk what i can mod
20:37 Zenx: probably cause im just too lazy to think of stuff now
20:38 -[ AmiShici ]-: uwaa, well, nope
20:38 -[ AmiShici ]-: maybe next time i'll req again lol
20:39 Zenx: if you don't want me to mod and stuff you can just say i guess
20:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: no no no, i need more mod because i new mapper, and i cannot play 7k lel
20:40 Zenx: it's a pretty good map from a new mapper 
20:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: so i dont feel if the map have wrong
20:40 Zenx: don't really see many errors with playing lol
20:41 -[ AmiShici ]-: lol
20:41 Zenx: well good luck getting more mods anyways
Thanks zenx :)
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Hi there nyan~ Ami
hope it will help :3

ETlie is moe ?(no!)
Collumn 7K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[General]
ALKJZELKRJQSKLDFJKLJ LK ET MAP OF THE ET PIANO OF THE AAAA
I LOVE IT !
[Insane]
00:07:297 (7297|5) - This Ln starts here : 00:07:393 -
00:07:103 (7103|2) - This LN ends here 00:07:393 -
00:13:297 (13297|1,13297|5) - (suggest) move to 1 collumn to the right side since it's the same sound as 00:13:200 (13200|6,13200|2) -
00:38:748 (38748|6) - Change to normal note ( the rythm isn't the same as 00:35:264 (35264|3,35458|6,35652|3) -
^ the LN 1/2 should be here : 00:38:942 (38942|5) - and here : 00:39:135 (39135|2) -
01:37:393 (97393|2,97393|5) - Ded part XD ahahaha , nice thingys there :3 tricky stuff aye~
[Hard]
00:07:103 (7103|2,7297|5) - same as Insane , first Ln end and second LN start should both be here 00:07:393 (7393|1) -
00:09:523 (9523|2,9716|0) - move two collumn to the right for pitch relevancy
00:38:748 (38748|2) - Change to Normal note (same reason as Insane)
00:38:942 (38942|4,39135|1) - change this two notes to 1/2 LN
01:01:587 (61587|5) - (suggest) you can change this one to LN aswell
01:02:168 (62168|4,62361|2,62748|1) - same for thoose 3 notes ^
01:31:393 (91393|6,91393|3) - that part is cool
[Normal]
00:07:103 (7103|2,7297|5) - Same as Insane and Hard
00:09:523 (9523|2,9716|0) - you could move two collumn to the right side for pitch relevancy ^^
01:02:168 (62168|4,62361|2) - change to 1/2 LN according to 01:00:813 (60813|4,61200|6) -

Nice map , Good Luck desu :3/ have a nice day ^^/
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there nyan~ Ami
hope it will help :3

ETlie is moe ?(no!)
Collumn 7K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[General]
ALKJZELKRJQSKLDFJKLJ LK ET MAP OF THE ET PIANO OF THE AAAA
I LOVE IT !
[Insane]
00:07:297 (7297|5) - This Ln starts here : 00:07:393 - my bad >,<
00:07:103 (7103|2) - This LN ends here 00:07:393 -
00:13:297 (13297|1,13297|5) - (suggest) move to 1 collumn to the right side since it's the same sound as 00:13:200 (13200|6,13200|2) - keep, avoid 1/4 jack. ehh lel
00:38:748 (38748|6) - Change to normal note ( the rythm isn't the same as 00:35:264 (35264|3,35458|6,35652|3) - oki
^ the LN 1/2 should be here : 00:38:942 (38942|5) - and here : 00:39:135 (39135|2) - yeah
01:37:393 (97393|2,97393|5) - Ded part XD ahahaha , nice thingys there :3 tricky stuff aye~ ahaha lel, thanks ^^
[Hard]
00:07:103 (7103|2,7297|5) - same as Insane , first Ln end and second LN start should both be here 00:07:393 (7393|1) -
00:09:523 (9523|2,9716|0) - move two collumn to the right for pitch relevancy nice ^.^)b
00:38:748 (38748|2) - Change to Normal note (same reason as Insane) yep
00:38:942 (38942|4,39135|1) - change this two notes to 1/2 LN ^
01:01:587 (61587|5) - (suggest) you can change this one to LN aswell oki
01:02:168 (62168|4,62361|2,62748|1) - same for thoose 3 notes ^ nice
01:31:393 (91393|6,91393|3) - that part is cool thanks
[Normal]
00:07:103 (7103|2,7297|5) - Same as Insane and Hard
00:09:523 (9523|2,9716|0) - you could move two collumn to the right side for pitch relevancy ^^ nice
01:02:168 (62168|4,62361|2) - change to 1/2 LN according to 01:00:813 (60813|4,61200|6) -

Nice map , Good Luck desu :3/ have a nice day ^^/
arigatou baka moe etlie-sama :)
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
Please reply properly to my mod, detailing which parts you have changed in accordance to the mod, and which parts you rejected my mod. Else I won't entertain any of your requests anymore in the future ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata :(⊙o⊙)？not checked
Timing : (⊙o⊙)？not checked
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~ nice keysound, make sure there is no incorrect layering.
a note. your default hitsound is very faint, or at least inaudible to me, this is unrankable, turn up the volume a bit to fit RC.
here for example, in insane.
00:01:297 (1297|2,1394|1,1394|3) - << this is the default hitsound.


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

first of all, nice song. nice map, nice keysound. i think you can rank this fast o(≧v≦)o~~好棒
however if you decide to use keysound please becareful with the hitsound delay (cannot be more than 5ms) and also please make sure there are NO UNUSED hitsound.

your arrangement also takes PR into consideration, which is very logical and nice, keep up the good work! rare to see such map nowadays. this is more logical especially since the song is instrumental and very heavy on instrument (be it piano, guitar, violin, harp, etc)



NM
00:01:394 - 3 note is still justified here, its normal but its the beginning of the song with very loud emphasis. its much better this way
00:07:587 - optional. 3 notes or 2 notes. 3 notes better imo
00:13:781 - 3 notes.
00:15:329 (15329|4,16877|5,18426|6) - add another note to signify 4 x 4/4 beat emphasis.
00:19:974 - 3 notes, phsae change.
00:24:619 (24619|6,24619|0,24813|0,24813|6,25200|6,25200|0,25587|0,25587|6,25781|6,25781|0,25974|0,25974|6) - you're following the pitch correctly, i have no issues here, but maybe you can think about varying the pattern for the sake of hand training for normal diffs. this is completely optional.
00:29:264 - should have 2 notes just like 00:27:716 (27716|1) -
00:30:813 - ^^^
00:32:361 - ^^^^
00:33:910 -^^^
and so on 4 x 4/4 check it and add accordingly

00:40:103 - optional. 3 notes much better.

00:52:490 (52490|0,52490|6) - continues until next white lines, snap is incorrect.


00:54:039 (54039|6,54039|0,54039|3) - move to 4 6 to allow space for those LN, and 3 notes are unreasonable here, no obvious emphasis. you should actually use 3 notes on places i mentioned above, but not here. 2 is enoughhere.
00:58:684 - should have 2 notes

01:03:135 (63135|3,64103|3,64297|4,64490|5,64684|4) - piano chord emphasis before phase change, better to use 2 notes to represent them. this gives more emphasis and feeling to the song.

01:06:426 - 3 notes here
01:07:974 - should hav 2 notes just like 01:09:523 (69523|5,69523|1) -
01:11:071 - ^^^
01:18:813 - optional. use 3 notes

01:28:297 (88297|3,88490|3,88877|4,89071|4,89458|5,89652|5,90039|4,90232|4) - 3 5 7 is much better instead of 4 5 6
01:30:619 (90619|2,90813|2) - and this move to 1
01:31:393 (91393|5,91587|5,91781|4,91974|4,92942|4,93329|3,93523|3) - pitch is incorrect, should be 6 for all of them. not 7. readjust.
01:31:393 (91393|5,91587|5,91781|4,91974|4,92168|3,92361|3,92555|2,92942|4,93135|4,93329|3,93523|3,93716|2,93910|2,94103|1) - drag 1x to right for better pitch representaiton
01:34:490 (94490|3,94684|3,94877|2,95071|2,95264|1,95458|1,95652|0) - drag 1x to right
01:35:264 (95264|1,95458|1,95652|0) - also incorrect, all should be 6 here, not 5

01:36:329 (96329|4) - wrong pitch, should be C6. there are 2 C6 here, the piano is jacked.
01:54:426 - use 3 notes for emphasis, better readability
01:56:748 - add a note to 4 for emphasis
02:07:006 (127006|5,127200|5) - all A7. wrong layering.
should be B7 or C8, same, layering mistake.
02:08:168 (128168|5) - C8 or D8. layering mistake

you made a lot of pitch layering mistakes, i did not check the layering on higher diffs, but when i checked here there are too many errors and off-pitch as well as pitch layering mistake.
i cannot point you out as there are too many at the moment. please do self-mod for the whole keysound.
feel free to catch me in game if you need furhter help on layering but onlly oafter you fix some of them
i mentioned some above, but there are still too many. i picked them randomly just from sight-reading. if i recheck it with 25% playback i'll find some more i would believe.

good luck
HD
00:01:200 - map that audible beat just like in insane, much more appropriate.
00:03:716 (3716|2,3716|6,3716|0) - 2 note is enough, 3 is overchord, this is also to differentiate with this 00:02:942 - . emphasis is different, note count should also be different
00:25:974 (25974|3) - same suggestions about the LN here
00:24:039 (24039|6) - inconsistent, delete this.
00:28:684 (28684|0,28877|3,29071|1,29264|3,29458|1) - piano hitsound shouldnt be the LN ones, should be SN, readjust and rearrange.
00:31:781 (31781|0,31974|1,32168|2,32361|1,32555|2) - ^^^
00:34:877 (34877|0,35264|1) - ^^^^
00:37:974 (37974|0,38168|1,38361|2) - ^^^^
00:52:490 (52490|6,52490|0) - snap this here 00:54:039 - . so adjust the placement

00:54:039 (54039|6,54039|3,54039|0) - can move this to 2 4 6

recheck your diffs for inconsistencies.

a short note

you spike your HD into 3 star rating due to this phase
00:23:168 (23168|0,23264|1,23361|2,23458|3,23555|4,23652|2,23748|3,23845|4,23942|5,24039|3,24039|6,24135|4,24232|5,24329|6,24426|2,24523|1,24619|6,24619|0,24619|3,24813|0,24813|6,24813|3) -

this in my opinion is not really appropriate because you're not actually reflecting the actual diffs. (maybe people like this so they can farm pp idk, i found some map with this patterning)

thus instead, it would be better if you raise the overall diffs, to bridge the gap and density between normal and insane. your hard at the moment is not hard enough to justify the jump in difficulty in insane imo.



Insane
because your placement is very balanced already imo. i will focus on emphasis and inappropriate note placement instead.

00:04:490 (4490|2,4490|4,4490|1,4490|5) - overmap, 3 note is enough, no very loud beat, this should be less than 00:02:942 (2942|5,2942|4,2942|0,2942|1) -
00:11:845 - should be 3 notes, add accordingly
00:13:393 - should be 3 notes, different emphasis, adjust
00:19:974 - add a note, should have 5 here, new phase with emphasised beat.
00:21:523 - should only be 4, inappropriate emphasis.
00:23:071 - instead you only use 4 here, which is a new phase with emphasised beat and piano chord. use 5 here or at least keep at 4
00:25:974 (25974|3) - how about changing this into short notes and
00:26:748 - add a note at 4 and make it into LN until 00:27:716 - . tihs increases flow and readability imo.

00:43:974 - should have 3 notes just like 00:42:426 (42426|6,42426|5,42426|2) -
00:46:297 - how about 4 notes for emphasise? new phase here

00:48:039 - should only be 2 notes, keep it consistent.

00:52:490 (52490|6) - should ends at 00:53:845 -
so readjust other LN's length to match
00:54:039 (54039|5,54039|1,54039|0,54039|6,55587|1,55587|5) - this is exactly the same in terms of emphasis, why 4 notes, then 2 notes? keep it consistent. use 3 notes here for consistency and to avoid overmapping.
00:55:006 - should only be 2 notes here, wrong emphasis
.00:57:135 - 3 notes enough, overchord.
00:58:684 - same reason, and every 4 x 4/4 white lines after this until the next phase, recheck. just because you want to create higher diffs it doesn't mean that you can just add more notes, you need to consider the emphasise of the actual song.

01:01:781 - use 4 here, 5 is too much
01:08:361 - keep it consistent, you've been using 3 notes for this beat so add
01:09:135 (69135|5,69135|3,69135|1,69910|2,69910|4,70297|6,70297|0,70684|2,70684|4) - same reason.

01:45:135 - add a note to 4? 5 notes for this emphasis should be nicer
the rest are fine apart from some inconsistencies, please do some self mod to recheck carefully.


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

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