intoon wrote:

hi

00:11:647 (1) - bpm이 바뀌니까 뉴콤 넣어야될듯요 - 수정
00:25:869 (1,2,3) - 멜로디에 따른거면 노트 1개 더 넣는게 맞아보임. - 수정
01:09:062 (2,3) - 간격?
02:40:790 (5,6) - ^
01:20:999 (5,6,7,8) - 음악이 빠른파트이기도 하고 다른 키아이파트도 다 일정 디스턴스이상 유지하고있어서
여기도 간격 벌리셔야 될거같은데, 구지 여기만 붙이신 이유가.... - 수정
01:26:340 (5,6) - 위와 같은 맥락으로 간격 up - 수정
01:31:994 (1) - NC - 굳이 넣을 필요는 없을 것 같네요
01:32:308 (11,12,1) - 음악이 느려지는 부분도 아닌데 이렇게 노트간격 바짝 붙이는거 비추함.... - 패턴수정했습니다.
01:35:136 (1,2) - 위와 비슷한 내용 - 수정
01:42:361 (9,10,1) - ^ - 수정
01:36:078 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 같은 음악파트이므로 일관성 있게 통일할 필요성을 조금 느껴염. :: 01:36:078 (5,6,7) - 맞추고, 01:36:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 맞추시면 될듯요 - 수정
01:46:130 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^ - 이부분은 좋다고 생각됩니다.
02:27:596 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 피아노소리 따라 넣은거라서 완전히 통일은 안하겠습니다.
03:04:036 (5,6,7) - 같은 음악까진 아니지만 이 패턴 굉장히 플레이할때 위화감이 느껴져요 - 수정
01:36:706 (1) - 위에 패턴 고치고 NC? - 아까랑 같습니다.
01:40:005 - 뭔가를 추가? - 추가 안해도 될 것 같습니다.
01:49:586 (10,11) - 여기 1/4가 아니라 1/6같아요
02:20:842 (1) - 음악이 점점 빨라지고있는데 갑자기 슬라 속도를 줄일필요가 없는거같아용. 어색해보임 - 수정
02:23:827 (1) - ^ - 수정
02:51:471 (1) - 여기도 어색해보여요 변속 - 여기는 괜찮다고 생각합니다.
04:05:136 (1) - ^ - 수정
04:08:120 (1) - ^ - 수정
04:37:020 (1) - ^ - 아까와 같습니다.
04:41:890 (1) - ^ - ^
02:37:177 (5,6) - 간격이 다른부분에 비해 너무 넓어보여요 - 수정
03:12:832 (1,2,3,4) - 릴렉스 파트인데 점프는 줄이는게 좋다고 생각해요 - 수정
03:44:246 (1,2) - 합치는게 멜로디에 더 맞다고 생각해요 제눈엔 1번노트 좀 오버매핑처럼 보임. - 무음힛사로 대체합니다.
03:49:272 (1,2) - ^
03:50:528 (1,2) - ^
04:10:005 (4,5) - ^
03:46:130 (5,6) - 음.. 6번노트 x240 y384정도가 적당하다고 생각
03:55:554 (1) - NC? 박자가 여기부터 조금 달라지니까요 - 할 필요는 없을 것 같습니다.
04:01:209 (10,11,12) - 논란의 여지가 좀 보이는데 이게 박자가 맞는지는 잘 모르겟지만, 그냥 노트로 하는게 안전하다고 생각.. - 수정
04:16:916 (1) - 여기부터 슬라 속도 올리세요 키아이타임 부분은 여기부터 시작하니까요.. - 키아이시작은 이 슬라 끝나고 나서 시작되므로 높일 필요는 없을 것 같습니다.
04:12:518 (7,9) - 이렇게 딱 붙여놓으면 읽기에 좀.. 7번슬라 끝나기전에 9번슬라가 나와서 완전히 겹쳐서 7번 다 치고나서야 9번노트가 보여서
읽기 좀 불편함 - 수정
04:20:685 (6,7,8,9) - 다른 패턴 DS만큼 이것도 좀 떼는게 낫다고 생각해요
04:21:314 (10,11) - ^
04:24:455 (1) - 앞뒤 멜로디가 별 차이없어서 x1.5 쓸 이유가 없는거 같은데, 그냥 x1.2 유지하는게 나을거같아요 - 1.5도 괝찮다고 생각됩니다.
04:31:994 (1) - ^
04:44:560 (1) - ^
04:47:073 (1) - 변속x 위와 마찬가지인데, 이런식의 노래가 한창 빠른 시점에서 갑자기 속도 줄이는 변속은 첫플에 읽기 어렵다고 생각해요.
노래가 한창 빠른데 갑자기 속도 줄이는것도 뭔가 어색하구요 - 수정
04:33:565 (5,6) - 간격 늘리세요 - 수정
04:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 다른파트에 비해 너무 어려워요 여기.. 좀 쉽게 하는걸 추천 - 수정
04:49:586 (1,1) - 둘중 하나 nc 지우세요 - 수정

슬라 모양 다듬어야 할것들이 꽤 많아보이네요..

M4M 귀찮으면 안하셔도 됩니다만, 하신다면 이거 해주세염 : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/295581
애초에 그걸 노리고 모딩한건 아니라서요..
난이도가 많으므로 난이도 1개던 8개던 님 하고싶은만 골라서 하시면 되요

HappyRocket88 wrote:

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General

Hi! Sorry for modding this map so late. But I was trying to pass the semester. ;_;

1. Consider the idea to add a break time. ;__; - It is for Approve, so I can't add break time.

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1. 00:16:449 (3,1) Try to fix the blanket between these two objects. Isn't perfect after all. - Fixed
2. 00:26:340 (5,1) ^ - Fixed
3. 00:28:853 (1) Try to make this slider shape more symmetric. - Fixed
4. 01:05:921 (2) Weird slider shape. o.o - Fixed
5. 01:12:204 (1) Set this slider here x=148 | y=44 and try this to fix the flow - Fixed
   
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6. 04:35:450 (10,11,12,13) Don't you think this is so overmapped?
7. 01:28:225 (5,6,7,8) ^ - hmm....I think It's ok.

Sorry I just have lost my ability to mod extras. ;__; Hope this would help out in something. Good luck. n.n7

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Ant wrote:

From my mod queue!

Blue for personal taste.
Red for something I see as a problem.
Orange for a small problem.

Heavens

General:
Add "marathon" to the tags. Try thinking of some more tags, too, I'd suggest. I'll find some more tags, but I think 'marathons' doesn't have to include.
I think the artist should be "xi", uncapitalized, after looking at recent ranked xi songs. - Fixed

00:04:894 (1) - Maybe make it a single-repeat slider like http://puu.sh/ivRAw.jpg. That follows the music more closely. - keep
00:06:779 (5) - Move to (260, 347) so it's a nicer triangle with 00:05:837 (2,3) - - Fixed
00:16:652 (3) - I also don't know if this is allowed, how it flips back at the tip. It might count as aBurai Slider. Try asking a BN or something. - Oh, I didn't see this slider. fixed
00:31:569 (1) - Try spacing it 1.30x away, just like the previous circles. I think that would look nicer. - Fixed
00:58:271 (4,5) - Barely touching, try moving these two a liiitle downwards. - Fixed
01:21:202 (5,7) - I think the way these overlap looks ugly. - Fixed
01:24:187 (7) - I don't think a repeating slider makes sense with the music here. Maybe just another two sliders would work (replacing 01:24:658 (8) - too.) - Fixed
01:28:428 (5,6,7,8) - It would probably look nicer to face the sliders into the stream, kinda like http://puu.sh/ivShK.jpg. - keep
01:37:538 (1) - Why is this one spaced closer than the rest of the stream? - Fixed
01:47:904 (2,3) - These two don't feel consistent with the rest of your map.
01:52:066 (7,8) - These are awkwardly barely touching. I suggest you either move them closer, or further.
01:55:129 (9,10) - This pause feels awkward, to me. - Fixed
01:56:229 (2,3) - It sounds like there should be a circle between these. - Fixed
01:57:642 (12,1) - This pause also feels awkward. - Fixed
02:09:265 (1,2,3,4) - This whole thing flows very awkwardly, and looks very prone to random (unfun) sliderbreaks, primarily because of the huge gap between 2 and 3. - Fixed
02:29:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Try and curve this a bit more. The best way I can describe how this looks right now is "clunky". - Fixed
02:35:496 (6) - It would make more sense musically for this to be a slider, and for the next to sliders to follow suit. - Fixed
02:45:234 (4,5,6,7) - Try moving 02:45:391 (5,6,7) - half a beat back and 02:45:234 (4) - over to 02:46:176. I think this follows the music better. - Fixed
03:05:182 (13) - Why is this spaced differently in the stream? - Fixed
03:05:339 (1,2) - It sounds like there should be a circle between these. - I think it's good
03:53:558 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda like 02:09:265 (1,2,3,4) - , this also looks like random-sliderbreak hell. - keep
04:36:360 (6,7,8) - Just this one angle here does not look nice at all. - Fixed

Fun map overall, and I love the song. Good luck getting it approved!

Heavens

1. 00:41:621 (1,2) - 00:42:092 (2) - ctrl + G and http://puu.sh/iNFFb/1b64792d53.jpg 이렇게하는게?
2. 01:34:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 홀수 노드에 whistle 추가
3. 01:42:876 (3) - 슬라이더 시작 부분에 whistle 추가
4. 02:34:551 (2,3) - 02:35:808 (7) - ^
5. 02:45:232 (4,5,6,7) - ^
6. 04:27:640 (3,4) - ^
   04:30:782 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
7. 01:44:447 (8,9,10,11) - 슬라이더 모두 whistle 추가
8. 02:21:358 (9) - whistle 추가
9. 02:36:122 (8) - ^
10. 04:04:551 (1) - 여기에잇는 초록색 선 볼륨을 70 ->60으로 낮추세요
11. 04:40:991 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 뉴콤보가 너무 많네요.. 이유가 없으면 하나로 통일해주세요.

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

i see your map in #modreq

Heavens

1. 00:41:621 (1,2) - 00:42:092 (2) - ctrl + G and http://puu.sh/iNFFb/1b64792d53.jpg 이렇게하는게? - 패턴수정했습니다.
2. 01:34:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 홀수 노드에 whistle 추가
3. 01:42:876 (3) - 슬라이더 시작 부분에 whistle 추가
4. 02:34:551 (2,3) - 02:35:808 (7) - ^
5. 02:45:232 (4,5,6,7) - ^
6. 04:27:640 (3,4) - ^
   04:30:782 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
7. 01:44:447 (8,9,10,11) - 슬라이더 모두 whistle 추가
8. 02:21:358 (9) - whistle 추가
9. 02:36:122 (8) - ^
10. 04:04:551 (1) - 여기에잇는 초록색 선 볼륨을 70 ->60으로 낮추세요 - 수정
11. 04:40:991 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 뉴콤보가 너무 많네요.. 이유가 없으면 하나로 통일해주세요. - 이렇게 해놓는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

L0rdCthulhu wrote:

HAI MAI! Here from Chocox Inc; so why don't we get started?

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ? )
2. Aimod : ( × ) Your file size is 10.7mb, something which Aimod doesn't like. Also, try compressing the bitrate of the song to 128kbps, which is recommended for osu! - Some maps are over 10mb. I'll ask about these things. Maybe I'll change MP3 Again.
3. Kiai : ( ? )
4. Metadata : ( ? ), although you do want to capitalize the word "Halcyon" just for good measure.
5. Hitsound : ( ? ) Some nice hitsounding here and there!
6. Video : ( ? )

HEAVEN

1. 00:20:265 (1) - This loong slider could be placed as this; where the sharp corner indicates the piano note in between the buildup. - It's good for me.
   
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2. 00:29:056 (2) - Is this slider supposed to be a S shape? If not, the slider itself looks awkward already. Suggested: - Fixed
   
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3. 00:32:511 (3,4) - Could be nicer; something like this? - This is it what I find!!
   
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4. 00:39:422 (2) - Turn into straight elbow shape? - Fixed
   
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5. 00:42:563 (3,4) - Try to blanket these two long sliders if you can; suggested below: - changed slider
   
   
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1. 00:46:647 (1) - Turn to a Bent L shape like here: - Fixed
   
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2. 00:49:474 (2,3) - Blanket the second one to the first one? - keep
3. 00:54:657 (2) - Flip the other way so that the hump is facing the other way from where it was originally from - ^
4. 00:59:212 (1,2) - The elbow isn't centred in relation to the slider tick. For reference, use the slider tick as the center of the slider and have the point of the elbow there. - Fixed
5. 01:01:254 (6) - Shift this repeat to stack with these two slider heads 01:00:783 (5,1) and have it face roughly 45 degrees to the north east. Also, copy paste this slider 01:00:783 (5) and replace 01:01:725 (1) with the copy pasted one. Symmetry FTW - First thing is not accept, but last one accept.
6. 01:02:356 (2) - ^, change this to the copy pasted slider too. Fixed
7. 01:04:474 (1) - Nice! You know that the slider holes in loop-da-loops need to be a little water droplet. But, try to balance the slider tail in accordance to the slider head. Notice how the slider ticks are right by each other? - Fixed
   
   
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8. 01:06:152 (2) - The head must fit snugly inside the body; also remove the red anchor point. - Fixed
   
   
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9. 01:09:264 (2) - The bent on this slider isn't obvious enough; well to a player at least. - Fixed
10. 01:14:761 (8) - (%) Have the slider to be a perfect S on the horizontal plane first; then rotate where necessary. - Fixed
    
    
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11. 01:16:646 (14,15) - A slider blanket is possible here.
12. Either change this slider 01:18:531 (4) to be a curved one and have the arrow stack over the start of this slider 01:17:902 (2) or leave the elbow and stack the arrow above it. - I think stack don't need.
13. 01:19:944 (1) - Accentuate the elbows; make the slider proud of it's curves! - I think it doesn't have to.
14. Stack 01:19:944 (1) to the end of this slider 01:19:944 (1) ?
15. 01:22:143 (9,10,11,12) - Streams don't always have to curve inside; try mixing them up so they wiggle wherever you want them to. - keep
16. 01:23:557 (4) - If you wish, you could also stack this up with one of the notes in the stream beneath it. - keep
17. 01:24:970 (1) - For this to work well, the angles on this corner of a octagon must be 135 degrees; A right angle plus a 45 degree one. Also copy paste this to the one below here 01:25:442 (2) too. - Fixed
    
    
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    Notice the slider tick?
18. 01:26:541 (5) - Change this into a curve slider; preferably the one it's trying to overlap. - Fixed
19. 01:28:426 (5,6,7,8) - Hitsound this to one of the drum hitsounds; the music allows it. - Fixed
20. 01:28:112 (2,3,4) - Shift this triples to the other side and separate them a bit: - Stack looks good.
    
    
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21. 01:28:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Streams! <3 Play around with the shape of the stream; my suggestion isn't the best, but maybe you could take some pointers from it? - Keep
    
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01:31:724 (6) - Refer to (%) - Changed slider.01:34:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nice stream blanket! 01:35:337 (1) - Remove a point and pull the slider to curve where necessary; the extra point causes the slider to turn into a awkward shape. - FixedIs this slider 01:37:536 (1) in line with this stream? 01:37:222 (11,12,13,14) - Fixed a bitCurve this 01:39:735 (5,6,7,8,9) - the other way around; the butt of it brushes against the notes behind it. It looks nicer in general. - Curved to East.

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Stack 01:42:405 (8) to the end of this slider 01:41:777 (6) and stack 01:42:562 (1) to the head of this slider 01:41:148 (4). Adjust 01:42:248 (7) to make the shape fit like a equilateral triangle. - I like this pattern. 01:43:661 (6) - What's up with that extra point in between the two red ones? Makes it look weird. - FixedStack 01:45:860 (3) to the start of the stream which is this 01:46:960 (9) - I try it. But it looks weird.01:48:216 (4) - Slider ends with red anchor; doesn't have them curves. Just looks like a stunted slider.01:49:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change it up! Shift it around; bent it the other way; whatever you like. Maybe see some streamy maps for inspiration? i.e. Ice angel, Freedom dive (trust me it has lovely streams), Aragami - Fixed01:50:415 (1) - Pull the white point out a little more to bend the top part of the slider. - Fixed01:51:593 (5) - Stack the head of this over the head of 01:50:415 (1), and vertically invert (Control+J) 01:51:358 (4) and move to fit flow where necessary. It looks it doesn't need to.01:51:829 (6) - Shift this to fit snugly inside the slider of 01:52:928 (3); if you have troubles seeing pull them closer on the timeline.

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01:58:740 (11) - Rotate hold slider to the bearing of 200 degrees.01:59:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I'm sure the streams can do better. - Fixed as I can

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02:00:468 (1) - Change it up! It looks too awkward to stay. - Fixed

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02:00:939 (2) - Stack to the start of stream 01:59:839 (6) (only if you did move the stream to face the hump inwards) - changed pattern02:03:923 (9) - Move the white point after the red anchor to form a roughly perpendicular angle. - Fixcd02:37:536 (6) - Shift this a little more to stack beneath this slider 02:38:792 (12) - Fixed02:39:106 (1,2) - Symmetry; either one of these slider shapes stay. (#) - Fixed02:44:133 (1) - So, is this a slider elbow? Or is it a normal curved slider? - Uh......corved slider?02:46:646 (1,2) - Same as (#) -Well... I think this part looks good 02:50:101 (10,11,12,13) - Hitsound to drums; the bzzt of the music allows for this. - Fixed02:51:986 (1) - So this is supposed to fly outwards to complement the stream; so why don't you drag it outwards? Like so: - I like this slider.

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Stack 02:52:614 (2) to either the end or start of this slider 02:53:400 (5) - Fixed02:56:227 (7,8,9,2,3,4) - These triples; maybe you would want to space them out more. Since it's the chorus of this song.Shift 02:59:682 (2) right underneath the crest of 02:59:211 (1) After that, shift 03:00:311 (4) like so: - To blanket (2), not fixed.

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03:06:750 (1,2) - One of the shapes must go; also if you wish, the could intersect nicely like so: - make them same slider

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03:20:258 (3) - Make this a nice arch like so: - Fixed

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03:24:342 (1,2) - Overlap with nice semi circles like so: - Keep

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03:30:310 (3) - Refer to nice semicircles above ^03:31:881 (1) - Shift middle white point to the middle of the curve and remove the extra point at the end. - Fixed03:31:881 (1) - Blanket?03:49:630 (2) - Make this a semicircle slider.03:50:886 (2) - Refer to (%) - Fixed04:08:321 (1) - Change this to the Zigzag Slider? - Fixed04:14:604 (1) - Try this thread for more slider art suggestions! t/37194 - Fixed as i can04:23:242 (6) - Refer to (%) - Fixed04:24:656 (1,2) - Symmetry yet again; but this time I would rather you keep the more exotic slider. Cause that looks nice.04:39:420 (8,9,10,11) - Maybe you wanna space them out more? Since this is the more exciting part. - Fixed04:43:190 (2,8) - Barely stacked. - Fixed04:52:300 (1,4) - Stack the head of the 1 to the end of the 4. - FixedAwkward slider; change it up with one of the slides found in the delicious slider thread. Suggestion: - Fixed

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Overall

1. I absolutely loved the song choice <3
2. The jumps were moderately fun, but not unenjoyable.
3. Some slider art was a bit off here and there.
4. The streams were indeed in sync with the music, and was really fun to play.
5. I was amazed by the hitsounding in the first part of the map. I hope you do work on the hitsounds for the rest of the map, then it'll be just perfect.

I hope that my work pays off well and this helped you tons! I heard that this is for rank; Good luck with rank!!

Boobs wrote:

WARNING!
I'm new to modding and I don't have a lot of experience. I might make a few mistakes here and there.

Heavens (5.71 stars, 1208 notes) Quick Modding

01:06:152 (2) - Pretty sure that is an improper slider. - It looks good to me.

02:51:436 (6,7,8,1) - Why isn't this one following the pattern? Shouldn't have decrease DS. - Because tone goes high

02:52:771 (3,4,5) - Plays out really bad. - Also, It looks good to me.

Boobs wrote:

WARNING!
I'm new to modding and I don't have a lot of experience. I might make a few mistakes here and there.

Heavens (5.71 stars, 1208 notes) Quick Modding

01:06:152 (2) - Pretty sure that is an improper slider.

02:51:436 (6,7,8,1) - Why isn't this one following the pattern? Shouldn't have decrease DS.

02:52:771 (3,4,5) - Plays out really bad.

I'm pretty stupid. Bad mod!

1. Unused hitsound: soft-hitnormal7.wav
2. pure white combo colour isn't rankable anymore, use a gray one instead

1. At the beginning of the song, the slider sound is really bad and doesn't fit the music, I suggest you to add a silent slider-slide + lower the volume a bit
2. 00:39:422 (2,3,4) - use the same spacing between them, so it doesn't looks like a mistake
3. 00:52:301 (2,3,4) - there are alot of similar parts were the lack of hitsounds isn't cool
4. 01:13:661 (5) - rhythm goes wrong here, aif you want to follow the nice melody in the music, try this:
   
5. 01:28:426 (5,6,7,8) - not sure about this, I think a 1/4 repeats will work better, since its more noticeable in the music
6. 01:36:279 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - not a fan of this rhythm, I feel that a singles repeats can worl better with the music, something like this:
   
7. 01:44:447 (8) - add NC and remove it from 01:45:075 (1) - , then add a NC in 01:45:389 (2) -
8. 01:46:646 (7,8) - same as previous suggestion, according to the music this 01:46:646 (7,8) - should be a single repeat like you did with 01:46:332 (6) -
9. 01:53:871 (1) - this can be confused, I mean the repeat is going to the wrong direction, just ctrl g 01:53:871 (1) -
10. 02:02:510 (10) - add NC and remove it from 02:02:667 (1) -
11. 02:05:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - your comboing looks a bit weird here
12. 02:14:604 (9) - use a single 3/4 slider or an 1/2 one, since there isn't any 1/4
13. 02:20:572 (3,4,5,6,7) - a bit nazi, but the stream shape looks really weird, I think you can improve the curve
14. 02:22:143 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as above
15. 02:30:468 (1) - start the spinner 1/4 early
16. 02:52:300 (1) - tail need a click action as well, due the melody, so use 2 circles instead
17. 02:54:813 (3) - similar as above, but in this case is the repeat that need a click action, so 1 circle and 1/2 slider will do the work
18. 03:10:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - spacing seems a bit weird in this stream, I suggest you to redo it
19. 04:05:651 (6) - probably will be a nice idea to space it more from 04:05:808 (1) - since people can't confuse it with an 1/4 jump
20. 04:50:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a fan of the erratic spacing here

Natsu wrote:

Hi

General:

1. Unused hitsound: soft-hitnormal7.wav - Fixed
2. pure white combo colour isn't rankable anymore, use a gray one instead - Used grey one.

Heavens:

1. At the beginning of the song, the slider sound is really bad and doesn't fit the music, I suggest you to add a silent slider-slide + lower the volume a bit - Add silent sliderslide 1 to 6.
2. 00:39:422 (2,3,4) - use the same spacing between them, so it doesn't looks like a mistake - Fixed
3. 00:52:301 (2,3,4) - there are alot of similar parts were the lack of hitsounds isn't cool - It looks fine to me.
4. 01:13:661 (5) - rhythm goes wrong here, aif you want to follow the nice melody in the music, try this: - Fixed
   
5. 01:28:426 (5,6,7,8) - not sure about this, I think a 1/4 repeats will work better, since its more noticeable in the music - Hmm...more opinion.
6. 01:36:279 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - not a fan of this rhythm, I feel that a singles repeats can worl better with the music, something like this: - Fixed
   
7. 01:44:447 (8) - add NC and remove it from 01:45:075 (1) - , then add a NC in 01:45:389 (2) - - Fixed
8. 01:46:646 (7,8) - same as previous suggestion, according to the music this 01:46:646 (7,8) - should be a single repeat like you did with 01:46:332 (6) -
9. 01:53:871 (1) - this can be confused, I mean the repeat is going to the wrong direction, just ctrl g 01:53:871 (1) - - Fixed
10. 02:02:510 (10) - add NC and remove it from 02:02:667 (1) -
11. 02:05:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - your comboing looks a bit weird here - It looks fine to me.
12. 02:14:604 (9) - use a single 3/4 slider or an 1/2 one, since there isn't any 1/4 - 3/4 one.
13. 02:20:572 (3,4,5,6,7) - a bit nazi, but the stream shape looks really weird, I think you can improve the curve - Hope now is better than before
14. 02:22:143 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as above - ^
15. 02:30:468 (1) - start the spinner 1/4 early - Fixed
16. 02:52:300 (1) - tail need a click action as well, due the melody, so use 2 circles instead - Fixed
17. 02:54:813 (3) - similar as above, but in this case is the repeat that need a click action, so 1 circle and 1/2 slider will do the work - I use 3 circle
18. 03:10:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - spacing seems a bit weird in this stream, I suggest you to redo it - Fixed as I can
19. 04:05:651 (6) - probably will be a nice idea to space it more from 04:05:808 (1) - since people can't confuse it with an 1/4 jump
20. 04:50:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a fan of the erratic spacing here - If fan you wrote mean that I think, I'm fan of this pattern. Also, this stream increases DS 0.2x steadily

GL with this c:

Kuki wrote:

[Heavens]
00:01:444 (2,3,4) - Fix triangle pattern. - Hope now it's better
01:06:152 (2) - The sliders here are great but this may be a little better. - ^
01:08:958 (1) - Stack on the start of 01:06:152 (2) - to blanket with 01:06:152 (2) - , I don't make them stack
01:34:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move so (5) is stacked on 01:33:295 (2) - Fixed
01:42:562 (1,2) - Mapped to the same sound as 01:42:405 (8) - but it's 1.5x ds instead of 1.15? Fix spacing to fix emphasis here. - Fixed