1. Easy (1,5 stars, 97 notes)
2. eXtrA (5,72 stars, 309 notes)
3. Insane (4,42 stars, 254 notes)
4. Normal (2,11 stars, 133 notes)
5. Normal+ (2,72 stars, 152 notes)
6. ONEE-CHAAAAN (4,93 stars, 297 notes)

- General :
Ton backgroud est en 1365*768 au lieu de 1366*768. fuc**** pixel! Je vais essayé de changé ça.
Tes combo colors sont trop proche l'un de l'autre et ne permet pas de les différencier assez. Aussi j'en ajouterais une 3eme perso. Ne reste pas que sur du orange quoi. Fixé
Desactive le Countdown, le Widescrenn Support et Letterbox during Break (les 2 derniers parce que tu n'utilise pas de SB). Ok

- Easy :
Settings : AR3 / OD2 serait plus adapté. Pourquoi pas un CS2.5 mais ça c'est comme tu veux. Ok
Place un NC tout les temps forts (les grands tics blancs) parce que les diffs faciles ne doivent pas contenir des combo gigantesque tu te doute. Ok
00:03:453 - Pour le rythme de cette partie je te conseil celui-là -> http://puu.sh/hwCiU/590929ffdf.jpg. Il est beaucoup plus adapté, plus simple et tu ne manque pas de temps fort qui pourraient être cliqué. Fixé
00:09:078 (3) - Déplace le à 476:128, autant suivre le flow du slider c'est plus logique. J'ai dûs déplacer le slider -> ainsi que le hitcircle
00:16:578 (5) - 344:304 pour rester dans le mouvement et que tous les objets s'enchaine parfaitement. Fixé
00:18:453 (1) - J'aurais plus vu quelque chose comme ça -> http://puu.sh/hwCx4/e0ae63e1fa.jpg. Fixé
00:34:578 (5,1) - Evite ce genre de petit overlaps pas beau. Légèrement décalé
00:41:703 (1) - Fait le completement vertical, l'enchainement avec le reste ne sera que bien mieux -> http://puu.sh/hwCGz/3e22c74973.jpg. mmmh, pourquoi pas
00:43:203 - Fait simplement un grand 1/1 slider en reverse, pas besoin de compliquer plus. Ok ok
01:04:953 (1,1) - Il faut un plus grand recover après le spinner. Je finirais 01:04:953 (1) - à 01:07:953 - et redémarre le mapping à 01:09:453 - . A ce point 0_o
01:14:703 (2,3) - N'utilise pas de 1/2 dans une Easy. C'est bien trop dur. Remplacé par des hitcircles+ Légèrement amélioré le flow
01:19:203 (5) - Fait un long 2/1 slider ici. Un reverse comme ça ne ferait que perdre un nouveau. Fixé
01:20:046 (1) - Utilise le Soft hitsound pour finir ce spinner, sinon ça sonne vraiment très moche. A faire pour toutes les diffs ! ok
Je n'en parle pas en détail mais ça manque de pattern clair, et du coup souvent le flow est pas terrible, en particulier dans le kiai. /!\ Après m'être instrui (Live d'Azer) j'ai modifié pas mal de placement dans la map, dans le but d'améliorer le "flow" (je ne connaissais pas avant). Je ferais probablement ceci pour toutes les difficultés.

- Normal :
AR5 sera mieux. Ca reste une Normal. ok
Fait tes NC tout les temps forts comme tu as fait pour le kiai, mais partout ailleurs. ok
00:02:703 (3,4) - Interverti les 2, le rythme n'en sera que meilleur. Fixé
00:04:953 (6,7,1) - Il vaudrait mieux les aligner, le flow sera mieux et sera un peu plus beau. Fixé
00:06:453 (1) - Fait 2 1/1 sliders, un long reverse ici ne fait que tuer le rythme que tu as crée et ne se calque pas super bien avec la musique. Je préferais le reverse mais en mappant ces 2 sliders, je me dis que ça rend pas mal
00:28:953 (7,1) - Ce blanket est pas terrible. ~Fixé
00:31:578 (2,3,4) - J'éviterais des 1/4, même si le BPM est low ça reste une Normal, donc évite les rythme un peu complexe. Tu as plein de possibilité, le minimum est juste de faire un 1/2 slider pour 00:31:953 (3) - . J'ai gardé le 4 en 1/4, je ne pense pas qu'il soit vraiment compliquer, surtout que si un joueur ne peut passer ce slider, comment peut-il finir la map? xD
00:35:703 (1) - Tu manques un temps fort à 00:36:453 - qui devrait être cliqué. Du coup il vaudrait mieux que tu utilise ce rythme -> http://puu.sh/hwldl/784499d932.jpg. Ok ok
00:43:578 (2,3,4) - Même chose que 00:31:578 (2,3,4) - . Ok ok
00:50:703 (2,3,4,1) - Il vaut mieux les aligner. C'est juste...comme si il avait été placé de manière presque random. Je retravaille un peu toute la map
00:56:703 (2,3,4,1) - Pareil. Aussi peut-être blanket 00:57:265 (4,1) - ça pourrait être pas mal. ^, je préfère pas, je pense que continuer la ligne droite est bien.
00:58:203 (2,3,4,1) - ^^ (ça fait un smiley >_<
00:59:703 (2,4) - Overlap pas beau. Fixé
01:04:953 (1,1) - Recover trop court une fois encore. Supprime 01:07:953 (1) - et déplace 01:08:515 (2) - à 01:08:328 - . Fixé
01:10:953 (1,2) - Le flow pls. Change la courbe pour que ça s'enchaine mieux. Fixé
01:18:453 (5) - Choisit un autre rythme que ça. Un long reverse comme ça c'est boring et dans une Normal c'est toujours un peu moyen. Ok ça n'a pas été facile...

- Hard :
Settings : CS3.5 / AR7 serait plus adapté. ok
00:04:953 (4,2) - Maybe CTRL+J pour un enchainement plus cohérent avec 00:06:078 (5) - ? Fixé
00:09:078 (2) - Déplace le à 272:292 pour un flow plus logique. Ok, avec le ctrl+J
00:12:078 (1,2) - Interverti les pour le rythme (tu as compris pourquoi). Mouais
00:36:453 (1) - Fait le comme ça -> http://puu.sh/hwFCN/44f332a0f0.jpg , ça se joue tellement mieux avec 00:37:203 (2) - . Fixé
00:39:828 (2) - Déplace le à 108:156, il n'y a pas de raison de le décaler comme ça à par ruin le flow. Ok ok
00:42:453 (1) - CTRL+J, c'est plus beau avec 00:41:703 (7) - et améliore le flow avec 00:43:578 (2) - .Pourquoi pas
01:04:765 (8,9,10) - Fait un pattern en triangle comme ça -> http://puu.sh/hwFQt/d1b6e80e23.jpg. Fixé
01:08:140 (1,2) - Je les supprimerais pour laisser un peu plus de recover. La vitesse des slid étant rapide, ça fait bizar, mais pourquoi pas.
01:13:390 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - C'est un stream d'insane ça, simplifie ce rythme. ok xD
01:19:390 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^^

- Insane :
Settings : CS4 / OD6 ou 6.5 / HP6. ok
00:00:453 (1,2,3) - Blanket raté. J'ai fais ce que j'ai pus, ça à l'aire d'être bon >_<
00:03:078 (4) - Déplace le à 452:212 et 00:03:453 (1) - à 492:304. Le flow sera meilleur. Fixé
00:12:078 (1,2) - Blanket pas terrible aussi. :'( (la suite va m'achevé), ça à l'aire d'être bon
00:19:953 (3,4,5,6) - Déplace le groupe pour que 00:19:953 (3) - soit à 196:80, parce que sinon le flow est trop cassé. Ok, j'ai aussi courbé le slid, plus agréable à jouer (j'ai test en DT)
00:31:953 (4,5) - Fait les de la même forme, ça sera plus beau. Je vois pas trop où tu veux en venir, mais je pense qu'il falais juste les mettre de même direction, longueur mais pas même sens?
00:33:828 (2) - Fait le d'un angle de 45°, pour que l'enchainement avec 00:34:765 (3) - soit plus évident.Fixé
01:00:453 (1,2,3,4) - Je pense qu'un pattern comme ça serait plus jouable -> http://puu.sh/hwGOI/d5d828bf66.jpg.Je suis d'accord, j'ai retravaillé les patterns du même style pour les rendre plus fluide
01:12:265 (11,1) - Pourquoi ne pas les stack ? c'est moche comme ça.Fixé
01:13:390 - Je pense que le bon rythme serait comme ça -> http://puu.sh/hwGYz/a1a23d8e2a.jpg. Ah ouais x_x J'ai bugué en mappant?
01:18:265 (11,1) - Pas beau non plus :c.Fixé

- ONEE-CHAAAAN :
Settings : CS4 / OD entre 7 et 8. / HP7. ok
00:00:453 (1,2) - Fail blanket. Blanked, le retour. Fixé (je crois)
00:03:828 (2,3) - Le flow est bof entre les 2 tu peux améliorer ça je pense. Fixé
00:09:453 (1,2,3,4) - Encore une fois le flow n'est vraiment pas intuitif avec cet AR. Change ça.Fixé, j'ai été obligé de CTRL+H la suite pour garder un bon flow
00:18:078 (6,1) - Blanket pls. Il est pas si horrible que ça lui!? :'( Bon, je l'ai légèrement retravaillé.
00:20:328 (2,3) - Déplace les à 436:132 ça s'enchainera mieux. Ok, +le CTRL+H
00:39:453 (1,2,3,4) - C'est un blanket ça ? Non pourquoi? >_< bon ok, c'est retravaillé
00:42:078 (7,1) - Aligne les (00:42:453 (1) - à 468:144 et ajuste 00:43:578 (2,3,4,5) - ). Fixé
00:55:578 (7,8,9,10,1) - Je pense pas que ce soit nécessaire de changer le spacing du stream, la musique ne suggère absolument pas ce genre de changement. Fait de même avec les cas similaires. Au contraire, j'ai trouvé que la musique appellait ce changement, du 1/4 qui va faire l'aïgu, j'ai pensé indispensable de donné un rythme soutenu au stream. Je laisse comme c'est pour le moment (surtout que j'ai galéré à rendre ça jouable) mais si ce problème revient trop souvant, je changerais ça.
01:03:640 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ici ok la musique le suggère, mais ne change pas le spacing d'un groupe d'objets à l'autre. Garde le même pour les 2. Fixé
01:10:390 (9,10,11) - Pour que ce soit plus jouable, il vaudrait mieux qu'ils aient tous la même forme. J'ai encore du mal à comprendre où tu veux en venir, j'ai donc fais comme précedemment.
01:16:390 (9,10,11) - ^ et aussi, pourquoi n'ont-ils pas le même spacing alors que c'est le même pattern ? ^ copié-collé+CTRL+H, ça marche

Onee-chan
00:03:078 (4) - Either blanket with 00:01:953 (3) - or move it so it points in the direction more of the slider (00:01:953 (3) - )Fixed
00:03:453 (1) - Seems unnecessary, move 00:03:828 (2) - back and get rid of this circle if you agreeI prefer to keep it like that.
00:09:453 (1) - Try to make this slider a bit special, (maybe going with the instrument used)This slider follow the instrument and needn’t to be special (I don’t really like special slider, It’s breaking the rythme of the map, that’s why it’s good on dubstep song)
00:11:328 (6,7) - These two notes are heard nowhere in the music; overmapped, I agree, it’s overmapped, but I think it’s good for follow the rythme that I made before.
00:13:578 (2) - Try not to make a slider end on a downbeat (big white tick), big white ticks are supposed to be emphasized, so begin the big white tick with a slider or put a circle there.Fixed
00:14:703 (4) - The end of this slider is not in the song ??? There is no note here xD (in the song), ok, there is the « chan » but it’s a lyric and I didn’t really mapped it on the lyrics (Onee-chan is a language !!)
00:16:578 (2,3,4) - You should make these into sliders that still correspond with the music, as it is now, it seems completely random and does not fit with the present music It’s a Pentagon I prefer keep it like that, but if another modder say that, I’ll change.
00:25:578 (4,5,6) - Stacking like this is very plain, I would go for a reverse slider or something like this
Image I anderstand what you mean, but a player will prefer click than follow a slider on this type of sound. But yes, it’s very plain
00:28:015 (4) - Slider begins on red tick and skips white tick. This is normally okay, but in this case, I cannot even hear it in the song Fixed
00:27:828 (3) - One circle too much makes what's after it delayed Fixed
00:29:140 (6,7) - ^^ (about stacking = plain) I keep it like is it.
00:31:578 (2,3) - ^
00:39:453 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:578 (2,3) - ^
00:34:765 (4,5) - Reverse slider imo, but 00:34:765 (4) - ends on downbeat It’s following the song, here, people will prefer to keep clicked then click for follow the sound.
00:49:578 (1,2,3,4) - I would make this a stream, not stacked This one is following the drum, I anderstand what you mean but if I want to destack it, it will be a stream pretty spaced…
00:52:015 (3) - stack this on 00:50:703 (5) - No ! ‘0’ This hitcircle follow nothing in the song, it’s just for the rythme of the map, I’ll loose the player if I stack it (and the jump will be too big..)
00:53:328 (2) - stack this on the head of 00:51:640 (2) - , and move the whole stream so it looks fine It’s a good idea , but if i do this, the stream will have to go on the right and it’s ugly :’(
00:53:890 (7,8,9) - Removes the flow from the stream, because it's placed not facing in the direction of the end of the stream. You can make this a reverse slider, maybe? Reverse will break the rythme of the map, but I have replaced it for a better flow
00:56:703 (5) - Try to restack some things to make the overall map neater, like this to stack on 00:55:671 (8) - It will be to close if I do this… I prefer to keep the 1.5*
01:00:265 (10) - Stack on one of these 00:59:328 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fixed
01:03:828 (4,5) - this gap is really messy, use convert slider to stream It’s doing on purpose for follow the song, It’s 2 streams, not 1.
01:04:390 (9,10,11) - stack one of these on 01:04:390 (9,10,11) - , direct it towards 01:04:765 (12) - ^ This part want to break the flow, that’s why it’s not directed towards it.
01:07:953 (1) - You increase SV here but you can't really see it, so 01:10:203 (8,9,10) - new combos for each Can’t see it ?? Oh ? And not NC for each ! 0_o
01:12:453 (2,3,4) - NC for each
01:16:203 (8,9,10) - ^
01:18:828 (3) - stack head on 01:18:265 (10) - The big black pattern style, I won’t stack it
The hitsounds are too loud I'll fix it
I don't really like the spread out streams, I like my streams more like this 00:58:203 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - , but also this is all in kiai so try to keep the stream spacing constant, it's confusing the way it is
00:55:578 (7,8,9,10) - This is nearly impossible, I thought I was supposed to tap slower a bit as if you were using 1/8 Mmmmh, someone say it’s good, someone say it’s bad… Because I can FC it with HRHD, I’ll keep it like that. I know the map it’s true but if you listen the song when you play, it’s easy to do (easy, easy, no… I agree that it’s not the level of a 5 stars map, but it’s a special map, not an insane or extra). But I change a little for make it easier. I didn’t change others, they are fine.



Insane
00:04:953 (3) - Unnecessary, move the slider down to this (00:05:328 (4) - )I placed it for follow the rythme of the map.
00:16:578 (2) - Place in center to use that spot a lot so there are a lot of overlaps, which make the map neater Fixed
00:21:078 (6) - Unnecessary Necessary for continue the pentagon..
00:29:328 (6) - Place a little further, normally don't use DS in harder diffs, but you should when the song is slow Fixed
00:33:828 (2) - Too close, use CONSTANT SPACING ~! Oh !? I use constant spacing !!
00:41:140 (5,6) - further apart etc etc Fixed
00:44:703 (5) - Make these a little neater; it's picky, but it looks live you've randomly placed a lot of stuff Diriged to the center ;p
00:52:015 (4) - stack on 00:50:703 (5) - Fixed
00:55:390 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - CONSTANT SPACING, look you place them close together here but right before, 00:50:703 (5,6,7,8,9) - far away
01:16:015 (4) - was this on purpose It’s doing on purpose.

Hard
00:20:328 (2) - stack on 00:20:328 (2) - I don’t think it’s good.
00:41:703 (7,1) - randomly placed? at least where 00:41:703 (7) - is placed? Not randomly ;p I don’t think it’s bad, it’s overlap but easy to do and not ugly
00:58:578 (5) - stack on 01:00:078 (4) - Ok
00:58:765 (6) - neater Fixed
01:10:390 (6,7) - slider is not exactly pointing to circle Fixed
01:12:265 (5) - stack on head of 01:10:953 (1) - The spacing will be bad with it..
01:15:453 (1) - stack head on head of 01:15:453 (1) - Fixed
01:18:453 (1) - head stack on 01:16:765 (7) - Fixed

1. Song Folder: mp3 bitrate is 128kbps, which is the minimum allowed quality - I'd try to find a 192kbps version if possible. Also, BG image is 1365x768 - gotta get that extra column of pixels back!
2. Song Setup: Disable countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks for all diffs (this has to be done individually for each diff). Also, maybe try an AR spread of 2.5/4.5/6.5/8.5/9.3, since the current BPM isn't really fast enough to justify an AR9 Insane IMO
3. Metadata: No issues, but I'm no expert. Since it's LoL related, maybe add Riot Games?
4. Timing: BPM for the first half of the song (up until 00:49:953 (1) -) is 80, not 160 - the music is in traditional 4/4 time signature, so there should be 4 bars between each new measure. Currently you have 8, and thee are weak beats on every other white tick which doesn't sound right. You can easily fix this by doing the following -
   SPOILER

   1. Place a new timing point at 00:49:953 (1) with 160 BPM
   2. Set the beat snap divisor to 1/1 for Easy, 1/2 for Normal and 1/4 for the other 3 diffs
   3. Change the BPM in the Timing Setup menu and check the box "Scale objects to new timing" in the bottom left
5. Hitsounds: You're only using the default hitsounds, which is fine, if a little plain. If you're interested in finding some custom hitsounds, try looking through the song folders of similar types of song and picking out the ones you like. Otherwise, LordRaika has a huge catalogue of hitsounds on their profile page that's sure to have something you like
6. AImod: Just the Song Setup conflicts mentioned above, be sure to make these consistent across all difficulties

General Comments:

• Song Folder: mp3 bitrate is 128kbps, which is the minimum allowed quality - I'd try to find a 192kbps version if possible. Also, BG image is 1365x768 - gotta get that extra column of pixels back! I'll search a better mp3 too.
  Song Setup: Disable countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks for all diffs (this has to be done individually for each diff). Also, maybe try an AR spread of 2.5/4.5/6.5/8.5/9.3, since the current BPM isn't really fast enough to justify an AR9 Insane IMO Okok. I pref those AR xD and for the insane diff, AR9 is justifyed by the strea ms
  Metadata: No issues, but I'm no expert. Since it's LoL related, maybe add Riot Games? mmmh yeah
  Timing: BPM for the first half of the song (up until 00:49:953 (1) -) is 80, not 160 - the music is in traditional 4/4 time signature, so there should be 4 bars between each new measure. Currently you have 8, and thee are weak beats on every other white tick which doesn't sound right. You can easily fix this by doing the following - It was like it before, but I prenfered to change it for all 160 BPM. Otherwise, it's a little too hard for osu-mania diff etc..
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  Place a new timing point at 00:49:953 (1) with 160 BPM
  Set the beat snap divisor to 1/1 for Easy, 1/2 for Normal and 1/4 for the other 3 diffs ?? I don't anderstand.. xD
  Change the BPM in the Timing Setup menu and check the box "Scale objects to new timing" in the bottom left I didn't change the timing so..
  Hitsounds: You're only using the default hitsounds, which is fine, if a little plain. If you're interested in finding some custom hitsounds, try looking through the song folders of similar types of song and picking out the ones you like. Otherwise, LordRaika has a huge catalogue of hitsounds on their profile page that's sure to have something you like I'll try to change it.
  AImod: Just the Song Setup conflicts mentioned above, be sure to make these consistent across all difficulties
  
  Also, I'd only use tick rate 1, TR2 creates too many beats that aren't present in the music IMO

Difficulty-Specific Comments:
Easy

• 
  00:00:453 (1) - Try and bring the first object closer to the middle of the play field so it's easier for beginners to react. I'd rotate 90 degrees anticlockwise and move to about [x-292,y-248], then put 00:01:953 (2) directly above it Fixed (I didn't do like you said but, it's better now)
  
  00:29:703 (3,1,2) - The flow here is kinda awkward for me - I'd rotate (1) 150 degrees anticlockwise, Ctrl+G and move to about [x-56,y-248] I prefer like is it. For a better flow into 00:30:453 (1,2,3) -
  
  01:01:953 - Since you've got a break, end kiai time here instead of at 01:07:859 - (kiai through the break looks weird IMO) and then let it restart as you have done at 01:07:953 - if you decide to do this, make sure to do it for all diffs for consistency Fixed
  
  01:09:453 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern's fine, but it suffers from clockpattern syndrome - the flow just goes round in one big anticlockwise circle here and it's a bit of an anticlimax for the end of the song. If you select all the notes in this section, you'll see that you hardly use the centre of the play field! Try and rearrange some of the notes to create a more varied and interesting flow here I'll try do fix it.
  
  01:13:203 (3) - This is off-screen, so you should move it somewhere else (easy fix if you do it with the above) ^

Normal

• 
  Normal diffs should be between 1.5 and 2.25 stars, so you'll need to reduce the difficulty here. Try a lower SV, and reduce the DS if possible I'll remap the 2nd kiai time. the SV is too high
  
  00:09:078 - Add a circle here for the guitar sound Fixed
  
  00:20:703 (5) - Make this a 1/1 slider for the guitar sound Fixed
  
  00:25:578 (2) - Personal preference, but I find the consecutive whistles quite annoying - I think it's fine just having it on the tail at 00:25:953 I prefer like that for follow the song. And with a better hitsound it could be nice ;p
  00:27:453 (1,3) - As above, but this time only on the slider heads ^
  
  00:29:703 (4,1) - Try to avoid stacking in Easy and Normal diffs as it's very confusing for newer players. I'd put (4) where 00:28:953 (3) currently is, so it's blanketed by 00:30:453 (1) and move 00:28:953 (3) to [x-240,y-144] Fixed
  
  00:31:953 (3,4,1,2,3) - Too many whistles again for my taste - I'd remove all whistles except the body of 00:31:953 (3) - 00:33:453 (1) - and the tails of 00:33:828 (2,3) I removed some whistles
  00:37:578 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This section is better, but you could probably still lose the whistles on the repeat slider heads and bodies at 00:39:453 (1,3) ^
  
  00:41:703 (4,1) - Stacking again, try to do something similar to what I suggested for 00:29:703 (4,1) Fixed
  
  00:56:703 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The flow is very linear here, try to move these notes left/right a little (mainly the circles) to create a bit of variety I prefer to keep it like it is.
  
  Again, the second half of the kiai just goes around in big anticlockwise circles, so you could rearrange some notes here for more variety I'll fix it

Hard

• 
  00:20:703 - There's a long guitar sound here, so maybe move 00:20:328 (2) forward to here and place a circle where it currently starts? Fixed
  
  00:25:578 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Yeah I'm gonna stop mentioning these whistles now lol. If you like them, keep them, but they're kinda annoying to me, sorry ;_; xD It's good here
  
  00:31:953 (4,5) - These would be better as longer 1/1 sliders IMO, for the guitar sounds I don't really want to follow this sound here, I prefer my whistles <3
  
  00:41:703 (7,1) - Try to avoid weird slider overlaps like this, they don't look all that great. I'd rotate (7) 45 degrees clockwise and make a far-away blanket with (1) by curving the slider a little more Mmmh, NolanM said it too, so I'll change it, Fixed
  
  00:43:953 (4,5) - Same as at 00:31:953 (4,5) - I feel this fit better as 1/1 sliders Same as before.
  
  00:51:453 (1) - from here on, you use a lot of linear sliders, which feel a bit plain. Try making some of them into curved sliders for variety and to create a good flow Fixed
  
  00:55:203 (8) - If you wan't to keep this, I'd NC either here or at 00:54:453 (5) -, since it's difficult to tell how many repeats there are, and therefore is quite easy to mess up and lose a good chunk of health Mmmmh, ok
  
  01:04:203 (6,7,8) - Try and do something different with thee notes - repeating the same pentagon pattern again is a bit boring I prefer to keep it.

Insane

• 
  The increase in difficulty between Hard and this diff is really high (like, 1 whole star xD) you should try to reduce this gap a little if possible the difficulty is higher because of streams I don't think I can reduce the diff...
  
  00:21:078 (6) - There's no beat here, just the continuation of the guitar sound. I'd remove this make 00:20:703 (5) into a 1/1 slider I prefer it, It's not hard and have a good following about before.
  
  00:31:953 (4,5) - As in Hard, I think these would be better as 1/1 slider I won't change it xD (don't kill me please :'( )
  
  00:41:328 (6) - This note is off the screen, so try angling 00:40:578 (4,5,6) -slightly clockwise to avoid this It's not really out of the screen :/ In-game, all the circle appear.
  
  00:44:703 (5) - Make this a 1/1 or maybe even a 3/2 slider to better fit the guitar sound - you can go closer to the spinner here since it's a harder diff "I won't change it xD (don't kill me please :'( )"
  
  00:50:703 (5,6,7,8,9) - Here and throughout the kiai, you use a lot of streams, which is fine, but I would NC at the beginning of each to reduce the difficulty spike a tiny bit I don't think so. It's easier to now where is the stream without a NC
  01:19:390 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe create a stream or pattern here? It;s the end of the song and the stack isn't all that interesting to play, so you could add a lot of variety here to compliment the climax of the music It's for do like before, I think it's fine like it

ONEECHAAAAN

• 
  00:31:953 (4,5) - As in Hard, I think these would be better as 1/1 slider NYAAAAAAA
  00:44:703 (5) - As above and in the Insane, maybe even a 3/2 slider - you can go closer to the spinner here since it's a harder diff *dead* (what did I say!!! :'( )
  
  00:50:703 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same comments as in the Insane, NC at the beginning of each to reduce the difficulty spike of the streams a tiny bit "Same comments as in the Insane" ;p
  
  00:52:203 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The sharp direction change here is quite annoying to play, try smoothing it out a bit I want to keep it sorry
  
  00:56:703 (5,6,7,8,9) - As above, this sharp turn whilst streaming is really quite hard to play. It would be much better as a flowing curve IMO It's a special diff, not a regular and made for good player. I don't think it's possible to farm PP on this diff (for a 5* player), it's more for fun here, therefore it's hard
  
  00:58:203 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Here's not quite so bad, since the DS is reduced, but I still think it should be less tightly curved ^
  
  01:12:453 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here is very odd to me - if you want sliders moving this quickly, they should at least be pointed somewhat towards each other, more like what you have at 01:18:453 (1,2,3,4) - outside of super-insane levels of play I have already said why. It's a special diff and "the big black"'s paterns can be used. (I hope)

• add a muted "soft-sliderslide" in sampleset would be better imo mmmmh, no xD.-

DeppyDf's Modding Setup

1. Black = Recommend
2. Orange = Suggestion / Comment
3. Underline = Diff Name

1. SV Change In Easy Is Uncommon But Rankable.BUT THIS CHANGED TOO MUCH Easy Can Change Only Like 0.9 / 1.0 / 1.1x
2. 00:07:953 (2) - Something Like that
3. 00:20:140 - Start Spinner Here?
4. 00:41:703 (1,2,3) - Make Spacing Even
5. 00:55:203 (2,3) - change to a Slider
6. 01:09:078 - Add Circle
7. 01:16:203 (2,3) - Slider
8. Change To Reverse Slider Instead Of Long One
9. Little Bit Too Hard For Easy Maybe Make Some Jumps Smaller

1. 00:00:453 (1) - Make This Symmetrical
2. 00:03:453 (1,2,3) - make spacing even
3. 00:36:078 - add note here
4. 01:07:953 - Spinner End Here

1. 00:04:578 (3) - NC
2. 00:06:453 (1) -
3. 00:13:203 (3) - remove this and add an arrow to 2
4. 00:28:953 (5) - 3 Circlez And Add NC To First one
5. 00:40:953 (4) - NC
6. 00:50:328 (3,4,5,6) - Turn Some Of This Pattern To 2 Reverse Sliders

1. 00:01:578 (2,3) - dont stack this
2. 00:03:453 (1) - change the way this curve to U. this is upside down U. basically i mean move second dot down
3. 00:06:453 (1) - 2 or more sliders. This Slider Made This Part Too EZ
4. 00:25:765 (4,5) - dont stack this straightly. try use distance snap too make it harder ofc >w>
5. 00:27:453 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:34:765 (3,4) - ^ >w<
7. 00:37:578 (2,3) - >w<
8. 00:39:640 (1,2) - >w>
9. 00:43:578 (2,3) - -w-
10. 00:43:578 (2,3) - .w.
11. 00:48:453 - end spinner here
12. 00:50:703 (5) - NC!
13. 00:52:203 (5) - NC
14. 00:55:390 (6) - NC..
15. 00:56:703 (5) - Nc..
16. 00:58:203 (5) - nc....
17. 01:01:390 (6) - new comb....
18. 01:04:203 (7) - x464 y332
19. 01:12:453 (1) - split to 2 sliders
20. 01:18:453 (1) - 01:18:453 (1) - split to 2 slider but not as necessary as the one before this

1. that diff name realli?
2. 00:01:953 (3) - make it like 1's curve
3. 00:03:453 (1,2) - swap places in timeline and move the circle
4. 00:06:453 (1) - 2 sliderz
5. 00:20:328 (2) - no stack
6. 00:25:578 (4,5) - no stack
7. 00:29:140 (5,6) - dont stack
8. 00:31:578 (2,3) - dont stack
9. 00:43:578 (2,3) - dont fking stack
10. 00:45:453 (1) - end at 00:48:453 - or add new one here and end at 00:49:203
11. 00:52:578 (8) - NC
12. 00:53:890 (7) - NC
13. 00:55:203 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Fix Distance Plz sir. This Is fking hard to play and read. usualli mapper make it the same distance for some notes and add new circle every 4 note (in 1/4) and NC it every beat to make it ez to read.
14. 01:01:203 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - WOOOT
15. 01:08:515 (4,5) - Is This Too Big Jump?
16. 01:08:703 (5) - NightcoreI mean new combo
17. 01:11:890 (7) - nc
18. 01:13:203 (5) - nc
19. 01:14:703 (5) - new combu
20. 01:17:890 (7) - y' know right?
21. 01:19:203 (5) - .w.

annika69 wrote:

- What about changing the background to something else? Idk what, but I don't feel that the pumpkin scarecrow don't go well with a song about big sisters??

Easy
00:07:953 (2) - Something Like that Fixed
00:20:140 - Start Spinner Here? Nope ;p
00:41:703 (1,2,3) - Make Spacing Even Fixed
00:55:203 (2,3) - change to a Slider Fixed
01:09:078 - Add Circle Everyone says it need a note here, so :/ Fixed
01:16:203 (2,3) - Slider I pref 2 circles

Normal
00:00:453 (1) - Make This Symmetrical ???
00:03:453 (1,2,3) - make spacing even Fixed
00:36:078 - add note here Fixed
01:07:953 - Spinner End Here Already Fixed ;p

Hard
00:04:578 (3) - NC ~Fixed
00:06:453 (1) - Image Pref Keep like that
00:13:203 (3) - remove this and add an arrow to 2 ^
00:28:953 (5) - 3 Circlez And Add NC To First one ~Fixed
00:40:953 (4) - NC Nope
00:50:328 (3,4,5,6) - Turn Some Of This Pattern To 2 Reverse Sliders I pref like it is.

Insane
00:01:578 (2,3) - dont stack this
Why? '0' It's fine for an insane.
00:03:453 (1) - change the way this curve to U. this is upside down U. basically i mean move second dot down Fixed
00:06:453 (1) - 2 or more sliders. This Slider Made This Part Too EZ Don't need to be harder
00:25:765 (4,5) - dont stack this straightly. try use distance snap too make it harder ofc >w> I don't think it's easy because notes are "hidden". I prefer to keep stacked.
00:27:453 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:34:765 (3,4) - ^ >w<
00:37:578 (2,3) - >w<
00:39:640 (1,2) - >w>
00:43:578 (2,3) - -w-
00:43:578 (2,3) - .w.
00:48:453 - end spinner here Nope
00:50:703 (5) - NC! mmmh, everyone says I have to add a NC here, so ok.. :/
00:52:203 (5) - NC
00:55:390 (6) - NC..
00:56:703 (5) - Nc..
00:58:203 (5) - nc....
01:01:390 (6) - new comb....
01:04:203 (7) - x464 y332 Fixed
01:12:453 (1) - split to 2 sliders Nope
01:18:453 (1) - 01:18:453 (1) - split to 2 slider but not as necessary as the one before this ^

ONEE-CHAAAAN
that diff name realli? HIHI!
00:01:953 (3) - make it like 1's curve mmh, no ;D
00:03:453 (1,2) - swap places in timeline and move the circle Fixed
00:06:453 (1) - 2 sliderz Nope
00:20:328 (2) - no stack Fixed
00:25:578 (4,5) - no stack Fixed
00:29:140 (5,6) - dont stack I prefer to keep it stacked
00:31:578 (2,3) - dont stack ^
00:43:578 (2,3) - dont fking stack
00:45:453 (1) - end at 00:48:453 - or add new one here and end at 00:49:203 I prefer like that
00:52:578 (8) - NC :/ ok
00:53:890 (7) - NC ^
00:55:203 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Fix Distance Plz sir. This Is fking hard to play and read. usualli mapper make it the same distance for some notes and add new circle every 4 note (in 1/4) and NC it every beat to make it ez to read. It's not very hard Because I can FC it with HR easy ;p But I've changed it a little.
01:01:203 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - WOOOT ^ And I won't add new combo
01:08:515 (4,5) - Is This Too Big Jump? A very big sure. I changed a little for a distance snap of 2.75
01:08:703 (5) - I mean new combo ok :/ But Gl for do the jump XD
01:11:890 (7) - nc Fixed
01:13:203 (5) - nc ^
01:14:703 (5) - new combu Fixu
01:17:890 (7) - y' know right? I've to make a very big jump with a 1/64 stream right? (Fixed)
01:19:203 (5) - .w. Ok for the stream but without jump ;p

- What about changing the background to something else? Idk what, but I don't feel that the pumpkin scarecrow don't go well with a song about big sisters?? OP FIDDLE STYLE : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mlriOLDl9bk Now you know Corobizar, go look his other video, you'll anderstand this BG (don't care what he say, it's french so it's wtf). And yes, I'll fix this fuc**** pixel


Easy
00:20:328 (1) - Make the spinner start at 00:20:328 (1) and then add like a 1/1 slider at 00:20:328 or something like that?? I pref like that for a longer spinner
00:41:703 (1,2,3) - Uneven spacing Already fixed
00:57:453 (1) - Make it less curvy, doesn't look good like that imo Fixed


Normal
00:30:453 (1) - I'm probably being picky here, but fix the blanket?? I can't really make better :/ (but I tryed)
00:42:453 (1) - Same as above uh Fixed
01:16:203 (4) - Ctrl+g? ???


Hard
00:04:953 (4,5,1) - The spacing looks a little uneven, maybe try to fix it?? ??? It's good for me
00:37:953 (5) - Ctrl+g? ^


Insane
00:12:453 (2) - Fix blanket This blanket is good :/
00:21:078 (6) - Remove note I need this note for the rythme of the map :/
01:12:453 (1) - Maybe try to fix it so the later notes are centered?? That pixel '0'
01:18:453 (1) - Same as above ^


ONEE-CHAAAAN
00:08:328 - Remove note I need this note for the rythme of the map :/
00:11:328 (2,3) - Same as above I removed one note
00:17:328 (4) - Same as above Nope

Noseosu wrote:

nothing wrong here.

1. Remove Onee-chan from tags you have it in title.
2. "S" at the end is missing in League of Legends.
3. You doubled the bpm at the beginning. Pls no
4. Recommending using a silent sliderslide1.wav

00:50:709 (5) - nc maybe
00:51:459 (10,11,12) - stream?
00:53:896 (7,8,9) - maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/jxAJN/6d1fad2271.jpg
00:59:896 (7,8,9) - ^
00:58:209 (4) - NC
01:00:459 (1,2) - make same slider here.
01:01:209 (3) - NC
01:03:271 (10,1) - In my opinion this was hard to read as double stack. But maybe because I'm noob.
01:03:646 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try something else here. Like a triplet stack or sth to stay consistent.
01:04:396 (9,10,11,12,1) - NC 9 and make between 12 and 1 a triplet.
01:08:709 (5) - NC
01:09:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sound is kinda unique from the rest of the map I would suggest to use kicksliders here instead. Since you almost only use streams in the whole map.
01:15:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:10:209 (7) - NC
01:11:896 (7) - NC
01:13:209 (5) - NC
01:14:709 (5) - NC
01:16:209 (7) - NC
01:17:896 (7,8,9) - make this straight to and start NC on 7

oh the last kiai is really really loud (hitsounds) hurts ears.

end~

I think this map is a little bit overdone tbh. With spaced stream and stuff. I would not think spaced streams are a thing in >5 star maps.

00:01:959 (2) - try to avoid those tiny overlaps. They are very confusing for lower players. <= fix this and you're good to go.

rest is okay

01:18:459 (1,2,3,4) - seems not right. this runs better with sliders.

rest is okay

Feb wrote:

wtf is this map lmao. Hehehe

oh from what is this? I have played League for a Longasstime I don't know this at all. It's from france, that's why :p the man who scream "onee-chan" is Corobizar, a crazy french player of LoL

[General]

1. Remove Onee-chan from tags you have it in title. True
2. "S" at the end is missing in League of Legends. True
3. You doubled the bpm at the beginning. Pls no It looks better with 160 BPM everywhere...
4. Recommending using a silent sliderslide1.wav

I don't really like silent sliders :/

[Onee-chan]

00:50:709 (5) - nc maybe Better at the end of the stream imo :3
00:51:459 (10,11,12) - stream? mmh, nop there is no note in the song for me This diff is already overmapped I think xD
00:53:896 (7,8,9) - maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/jxAJN/6d1fad2271.jpg Good idea ! Fixed
00:59:896 (7,8,9) - ^ But not here xD I'd prefer like that for prepare the next part
00:58:209 (4) - NC I don't think it need a NC here
01:00:459 (1,2) - make same slider here. Done
01:01:209 (3) - NC I don't think it need a NC here
01:03:271 (10,1) - In my opinion this was hard to read as double stack. But maybe because I'm noob. I know it's hard, but doing on purpose hehe :3
01:03:646 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try something else here. Like a triplet stack or sth to stay consistent. I like this patern : it's following the song and it's not that hard
01:04:396 (9,10,11,12,1) - NC 9 and make between 12 and 1 a triplet. I don't think it need a NC here + I'm not following the drum here :/ I tried to place a triplet here before but it's not good in-game and just... Strange imo
01:08:709 (5) - NC I add a lot of NCs xD
01:09:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sound is kinda unique from the rest of the map I would suggest to use kicksliders here instead. Since you almost only use streams in the whole map. I like it :/ notes in the song are the same, I think it's good
01:15:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
01:10:209 (7) - NC
01:11:896 (7) - NC
01:13:209 (5) - NC
01:14:709 (5) - NC
01:16:209 (7) - NC
01:17:896 (7,8,9) - make this straight to and start NC on 7 I prefer like that :/

oh the last kiai is really really loud (hitsounds) hurts ears. Turn down the volume of the hitsounds so :p

end~

I think this map is a little bit overdone tbh. With spaced stream and stuff. I would not think spaced streams are a thing in >5 star maps. Not my fault if the star rating program don't know that spaced streams are really hard >_< This map is more like 5.4 stars that 5 stars xD (pretty hard to accu)

[Normal]

00:01:959 (2) - try to avoid those tiny overlaps. They are very confusing for lower players. <= fix this and you're good to go. Fixed

rest is okay

[Hard]

01:18:459 (1,2,3,4) - seems not right. this runs better with sliders. I think it's okay

rest is okay

ok was all ~
gl with mapset!