1. Easy (1.35 stars, 96 notes)
2. Hard (2.88 stars, 201 notes)
3. Insane (3.87 stars, 239 notes)
4. Normal (1.84 stars, 145 notes)

MY SECOND RANKED MAP!!

If you downloaded this map before 19/04/2015, please re-DL

Nanatsu no Taizai [The Seven Deadly Sins] Ending by Alisa Takigawa
Season～TV size ver.～

Special thanks to

1. Kawaiwkyik after better metadata check, REQUALIFIED~
2. -Nya- for mp3 check, her POP , continued with awesome Mods, and REBUBBLE EDIT: Thanks for rebubble after DQ ~
3. sheela901 for a lot check and QUALIFIED
4. tutuhaha for metadata check, awesome IRC mod and BUBBLE
5. Haruto_Aizawa for his awesome hitsounds
6. LordRaika for the hitsounds
7. Shad0w1and for the video and video offset
8. xxdeathx for awesome experienced mods that helps me a lot
9. People who modded this map

Lally wrote:

please use folder for next time :V it gets really long the post

Lally wrote:

[Insane]
00:11:842 - usage of low volume when there is no sound imo i see no reason to have something here or use volume 30 % atleast since the vocals are strong
00:28:445 (1) - you're missing a lot of sounds in the downbeats where should be a hitsound,same for exsample 00:31:464 (1) -
00:52:596 (1,2) - this kind of flow is really bad ,is because of 00:53:162 (2) - shape
01:22:785 - totally no sence having such low volume here

[Hard]
HP is to low here,should be 6,is not a normal to have HP 5 :V
00:59:766 (3) - here should be just 1/2
01:03:540 (1) - this kind of shape ruins the flow since is the first time you use it

you have a big gap between Hard and Normal, Hard should be a little bit easier :V specialy is because the hard looks like the insane
the dencity of the notes are specialy to create this gap

[Easy]
the offset in easy is different

=w=/ just checked because of the name of artist o3o my real name is Alisa that's why

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

NewIpas wrote:

[Insane]
00:11:842 - usage of low volume when there is no sound imo i see no reason to have something here or use volume 30 % atleast since the vocals are strong
00:28:445 (1) - you're missing a lot of sounds in the downbeats where should be a hitsound,same for exsample 00:31:464 (1) -
00:52:596 (1,2) - this kind of flow is really bad ,is because of 00:53:162 (2) - shape
01:22:785 - totally no sence having such low volume here

[Hard]
HP is to low here,should be 6,is not a normal to have HP 5 :V
00:59:766 (3) - here should be just 1/2
01:03:540 (1) - this kind of shape ruins the flow since is the first time you use it

you have a big gap between Hard and Normal, Hard should be a little bit easier :V specialy is because the hard looks like the insane
the dencity of the notes are specialy to create this gap

[Easy]
the offset in easy is different

=w=/ just checked because of the name of artist o3o my real name is Alisa that's why

Fixed all of them :3
Thank you so much Ally :3

Haru >w<
I'm sorry but I have changed my mind
NO GDs >w<
I'm waiting for your attention

LordRaika wrote:

yo ^^

Some IRC Hitsound Mod Req

2015-04-03 05:06 NewIpas: Halo kk~
2015-04-03 05:08 LordRaika: yo
2015-04-03 05:08 NewIpas: Boleh request hitsound mod disini?
2015-04-03 05:08 LordRaika: map mana?
2015-04-03 05:09 NewIpas: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/668549 Alisa Takigawa - Season [TV Size]]
2015-04-03 05:24 NewIpas: Bisa gak kk?
2015-04-03 05:24 LordRaika: btr ya
2015-04-03 05:24 LordRaika: w lg cek ssuatu
2015-04-03 05:25 NewIpas: Okeee
2015-04-03 05:37 LordRaika: ok, w bru balek... ni request hitsound yg cocok atau mod?
2015-04-03 05:37 NewIpas: Mod
2015-04-03 05:38 LordRaika: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/668549 Alisa Takigawa - Season [TV Size] [Insane]]
2015-04-03 05:38 LordRaika: nih, d bagian 00:02:030 - ad pemakaiannormal finish yg berlebihan
2015-04-03 05:38 NewIpas: Rencananya sih minta bantu improve
2015-04-03 05:38 LordRaika: eh salah
2015-04-03 05:38 LordRaika: disini aja
2015-04-03 05:38 LordRaika: 00:01:276 - remove finish
2015-04-03 05:39 LordRaika: 00:02:785 - sini juga remove
2015-04-03 05:39 LordRaika: u coba dgr lagunya lgi
2015-04-03 05:39 LordRaika: yg keras tu , suaranya disini 00:02:030 - , 00:03:540 - , 00:05:049 -
2015-04-03 05:40 LordRaika: 00:05:804 - ini bs remove, dan 00:05:426 - nambahnya finish disini
2015-04-03 05:40 LordRaika: cara cepat setting volume tau kan? ALT+ mouse scroll....
2015-04-03 05:40 LordRaika: eh std G bs XD haha, trpaksa harus view > volume
2015-04-03 05:42 NewIpas: Sorry DC kk ><
2015-04-03 05:44 LordRaika: nrima msg w smua T^T?
2015-04-03 05:45 NewIpas: Nggak .-. DC
2015-04-03 05:45 NewIpas: Huaaaa T_T
2015-04-03 05:48 LordRaika: aaaa
2015-04-03 05:48 LordRaika: ok w ulang
2015-04-03 05:48 LordRaika: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/668549 Alisa Takigawa - Season [TV Size] [Insane]]
2015-04-03 05:48 LordRaika: 00:01:276 - mnrt w , u trlalu spam finish nya nih
2015-04-03 05:49 LordRaika: coba dgr musiknya, ( view > volume ) set music 100% , dan sample 0%
2015-04-03 05:49 LordRaika: trus, coba fokus suara hitsoundnya ksini aja >>> 00:02:030 - , 00:03:540 - , 00:05:049 - , sisanya remove
2015-04-03 05:50 LordRaika: dah?
2015-04-03 05:51 NewIpas: 00:05:804 (1) - Ga perlu finish di sini?
2015-04-03 05:51 LordRaika: 00:06:559 - sini aja
2015-04-03 05:51 LordRaika: itu remove aja
2015-04-03 05:52 LordRaika: spya easier dif juga bisa konsistent
2015-04-03 05:52 NewIpas: 00:06:559 (3) - ?
2015-04-03 05:52 LordRaika: 00:06:559 (3) - yea,sini biarin...
2015-04-03 05:53 NewIpas: Okay, spamnya udah fixed
2015-04-03 05:53 LordRaika: sip
2015-04-03 05:53 LordRaika: next part
2015-04-03 05:53 LordRaika: 00:15:992 - ini kok suara snare?
2015-04-03 05:54 LordRaika: 00:15:992 - ini kan hrs nya suara drum finish / drum clap
2015-04-03 05:54 LordRaika: coba gnti
2015-04-03 05:54 NewIpas: Oke
2015-04-03 05:55 LordRaika: 00:16:747 - sama
2015-04-03 05:55 LordRaika: ujungnya, u cb SHIFT+R dan E
2015-04-03 05:55 LordRaika: setting drum , dan finish ^
2015-04-03 05:55 LordRaika: 00:17:125 - shift+R , trus E
2015-04-03 05:56 LordRaika: 00:18:257 - sama ^
2015-04-03 05:56 LordRaika: 00:19:200 (4) - ^ soalnya....
2015-04-03 05:56 LordRaika: 00:21:276 - sini buktinya u pk drum finish
2015-04-03 05:57 LordRaika: da?
2015-04-03 05:57 NewIpas: Oke
2015-04-03 05:57 NewIpas: udah :3
2015-04-03 05:57 LordRaika: smua?
2015-04-03 05:57 LordRaika: ok
2015-04-03 05:58 NewIpas: Iya
2015-04-03 05:58 LordRaika: w mw rekomendasi hitsound tuk clap3 u disni
2015-04-03 05:58 LordRaika: 00:22:785 -
2015-04-03 05:59 LordRaika: btr w link kan
2015-04-03 06:00 LordRaika: ]https://www.dropbox.com/s/vxhtom36xsxbv1o/LR_J%20Hit%20Drum.wav?dl=0 ganti ini... rename jadi clap3]
2015-04-03 06:00 LordRaika: yg skr... mnrt w sih g kdgran XD
2015-04-03 06:00 LordRaika: cb dlu
2015-04-03 06:01 LordRaika: [https://www.dropbox.com/s/lxz6dmfvdbrrjgl/LR_Drum%20Hit%20Open%202.wav?dl=0 atau yg ini, jadi clap3] plh aja, tes dlu silahkan...
2015-04-03 06:03 NewIpas: Oke
2015-04-03 06:04 NewIpas: Kak. Habis ini hitsoundnya ditulis aja ya
2015-04-03 06:04 NewIpas: Mau pergi soalnya
2015-04-03 06:04 LordRaika: sikit lagi sih
2015-04-03 06:04 NewIpas: Jam 11-12 nanti mungkin kalau sempat aku online lagi
2015-04-03 06:04 LordRaika: da mw siap soalny da bgs kok pemakaiannya ^^b
2015-04-03 06:04 NewIpas: Hehehehe xD
2015-04-03 06:05 LordRaika: [https://www.dropbox.com/s/xdm711lztvcsmi6/LR_CymbalRDW.wav?dl=0 nih, download dan rename jadi soft-hitfinish]
2015-04-03 06:05 LordRaika: tu tuk smua reef part, yg u abuse cymbal nya, pk custom tu lbh ok mnrt w
2015-04-03 06:06 NewIpas: bagian awal gimana? Boleh pake itu?
2015-04-03 06:06 LordRaika: dan 01:00:521 - d reef part u, u pk trlalu byk normal-hitnormal
2015-04-03 06:06 LordRaika: kan u pk clap yg awal
2015-04-03 06:07 LordRaika: oh yg paling awal kan u pk normal finish
2015-04-03 06:07 LordRaika: jadi gpp
2015-04-03 06:07 LordRaika: ini kan soft finish
2015-04-03 06:08 LordRaika: u sndiri yg uda setting CTRL+W ( additional normal ) while sampleset = Soft ( shift+e )
2015-04-03 06:08 NewIpas: jadi?
2015-04-03 06:08 NewIpas: spam hitnormal?
2015-04-03 06:09 NewIpas: AFK: mandi
2015-04-03 06:09 NewIpas: Kalau bisa sih tulis di thread aja ya kk
2015-04-03 06:09 LordRaika: 01:00:521 - nih, hitnormal
2015-04-03 06:09 LordRaika: 01:01:276 - hitnormal, kbykan hitnormalnya
2015-04-03 06:09 LordRaika: dan strsnya
2015-04-03 06:09 LordRaika: jadi trllu ribut X_X
2015-04-03 06:09 LordRaika: itu aja kok
2015-04-03 06:10 LordRaika: jd g gitu kdgrn custom hitsoundnya, jadi suggested, di remove aja, karena biasanya u kan pake clap... , soft-hitclap, coba cek previous section
2015-04-03 06:11 LordRaika: ok itu aja, ckup di apply di dif lain, ^^ w jg msh ad req lain T^T sry, thts all... GL ya
2015-04-03 06:11 NewIpas: Oke deh kk
2015-04-03 06:11 NewIpas: Thanks ya

Well, GL ^^b

1. 00:19:389 (1) - I don't really understand why you put that much movement on this slider while the music is pretty neat.
2. 00:52:596 (1) - Ctrl+h for better flow?
3. 01:19:766 (1,1) - Put the same cruve between those two for a better look (symmetry etc.)
4. 01:24:294 (1) - Should finish on the previous white tick I believe

1. 00:19:389 (1) - Same remark as the easy diff the cursor keep moving a bit everywhere but we're not really sure why...
2. 00:26:936 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should lighter a bit thi pattern, cause (3) doesnt follow the vocal which might be a bit disturbing for a new player).
3. 01:08:823 (3,4,1) - The spacing is a bit disturbing, stack all or unstack all.
4. 01:24:294 (1) - Should finish on the previous white tick. Already that spin at the end of the map is pretty annoying...

1. 00:02:030 (3,1) - Bad flow here. Place (1) more in the direction of (3)
2. 00:34:294 (4) - stack with 00:33:728 (1) - instead for better flow? the jump between 00:34:294 (4) - and 00:34:483 (1) - isn't really a problem
3. 01:19:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - That random pattern...
4. 01:24:294 (1) - previous white tick

1. 00:17:879 (1) - Make it start at the reverse placement of 00:16:936 (2) - for a better flow with 00:17:502 (3) -
2. 00:40:521 (1,2) - Bad flow; you should ctrlH (2) and (3)
3. 01:24:294 (1) - previous white tick .

Yales wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:19:389 (1) - I don't really understand why you put that much movement on this slider while the music is pretty neat. ~ Consider this .-. If another modder complain about this too, i think i must change it
2. 00:52:596 (1) - Ctrl+h for better flow? ~ Okay
3. 01:19:766 (1,1) - Put the same cruve between those two for a better look (symmetry etc.) ~ Its looks more better now
4. 01:24:294 (1) - Should finish on the previous white tick I believe I don't understand what do you mean here .-. I thought it's fine to starts spinner on it

[Normal]

1. 00:19:389 (1) - Same remark as the easy diff the cursor keep moving a bit everywhere but we're not really sure why... ~ Same as Easy
2. 00:26:936 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should lighter a bit thi pattern, cause (3) doesnt follow the vocal which might be a bit disturbing for a new player). ~ Deleted (3) :3
3. 01:08:823 (3,4,1) - The spacing is a bit disturbing, stack all or unstack all. ~ Unstacked all :3
4. 01:24:294 (1) - Should finish on the previous white tick. Already that spin at the end of the map is pretty annoying... ~ Same as Easy

[Hard]

1. 00:02:030 (3,1) - Bad flow here. Place (1) more in the direction of (3) ~ Fixed
2. 00:34:294 (4) - stack with 00:33:728 (1) - instead for better flow? the jump between 00:34:294 (4) - and 00:34:483 (1) - isn't really a problem ~ I don't want to put any jumps on my Hard .-.
3. 01:19:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - That random pattern... ~ Ahahaha xD Changed to another pattern and i thought the flow is better though
4. 01:24:294 (1) - previous white tick ^

[Insane]

1. 00:17:879 (1) - Make it start at the reverse placement of 00:16:936 (2) - for a better flow with 00:17:502 (3) - ~ I just want to made up this note blanket with (3) . But, this looks more better though
2. 00:40:521 (1,2) - Bad flow; you should ctrlH (2) and (3) ~ Ahahahaha xD I've realize this but doesn't change it xD
3. 01:24:294 (1) - previous white tick . ^

Good luck! ~ THANKS :3

tutuhaha wrote:

tag: use "ending" to replace "ED" and delete "2"
[Insane]
00:37:502 (1,2) - hmmm...........I understand what you try to do but still too close
00:37:879 (2) - also this one already touch the HP bar so better move it down litter bit
00:53:728 (3,1) - because there has a stress rhythm so I suggest to make a small jump here
01:11:087 (2) - move to x312 y60

pretty good map
when you have +12sp and also find another 2 mod
feel free to call me back >.0

1. Are you sure about The "TV Size"?
2. Other Combo Colour?

1. 00:02:408 - Dont Ignore this Tick, add Note here also fix the DS
2. 00:02:785 (2,3,1) - Fix DS untill the Followpoint is Appear
3. 00:04:294 (1) - Make this More Smoother
4. 00:04:294 (1,2,3) - Please make them like this http://puu.sh/hdBJp/8898572a52.jpg
5. 00:06:936 - Dont Ignore Tick Here, add a note
6. 00:07:313 (1) - Ugly Slider? please make it Smoother, Example http://puu.sh/hdCaT/fc53c6f546.jpg
7. 00:08:445 - Ignoring this tick? add note here
8. 00:11:842 (3) - Bad slider algorithm xD, try this http://puu.sh/hdCkx/da5a1da390.jpg
9. 00:13:351 (4) - Blanket with^
10. 00:14:860 (6) - Make the Slider like this http://puu.sh/hdCvL/c7db23a154.jpg after that, CTRL+H terus Rotate the slider to -77 degree will be good imo
11. 00:15:992 (7) - then you can blanket this with slider above
12. 00:17:879 (3) - too Straight, make it like this http://puu.sh/hdCJW/b0d921871a.jpg , and it'll become slider blanket with 00:16:370 (1) -
13. 00:19:389 (1) - Slider doesn't fit on this part, try using Spinner that will ends here 00:20:898 -
14. 00:22:408 (1,2) - This can be Blanket
15. 00:25:049 - Uh,, please dont ignore this Tick
16. 00:32:974 (3) - bad slider algorithm
17. 00:32:974 (3,1) - (3) slider tail is overlapping (1), and looks Ugly, fix this please
18. 00:37:125 (3,1) - blanket this please
19. 00:38:823 (3) - tail and head are touched, fix please
20. 00:52:219 - Ignoring Tick? add note plz
21. 00:54:106 (2) - Slider looks very UGLY, fix please xD, try this http://puu.sh/hdDei/68e4795e75.jpg , so, the slider will Completely blanket with (1)
22. 00:55:615 (3) - This looks ugly too, try this http://puu.sh/hdDlB/90a982f4f8.jpg
23. 01:08:445 (2,2) - these sliders can be blanket
24. 01:22:785 (3) - just make this into a simple slider http://puu.sh/hdDAg/78a8f3f7b8.jpg

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Hello as Requested Via PM

If i was a BN, i will give a Star Icon on this map lolololol

Also, i'll do a Hitsound Mod
Please kalo ngemap Timelinenya dibesarkan please ;_; susah aku liatnya

[General]

1. Are you sure about The "TV Size"? ~ I downloaded the song within it on the title
2. Other Combo Colour? ~ Tried

[Easy]

1. 00:02:408 - Dont Ignore this Tick, add Note here also fix the DS ~ Ok
2. 00:02:785 (2,3,1) - Fix DS untill the Followpoint is Appear ~ Didn't understand
3. 00:04:294 (1) - Make this More Smoother ~ Changed with my personal preferences
4. 00:04:294 (1,2,3) - Please make them like this http://puu.sh/hdBJp/8898572a52.jpg ~ ^
5. 00:06:936 - Dont Ignore Tick Here, add a note ~ No due to new long combo appears
6. 00:07:313 (1) - Ugly Slider? please make it Smoother, Example http://puu.sh/hdCaT/fc53c6f546.jpg ~ Personal preferences
7. 00:08:445 - Ignoring this tick? add note here ~ Ok
8. 00:11:842 (3) - Bad slider algorithm xD, try this http://puu.sh/hdCkx/da5a1da390.jpg ~ Personal preferences
9. 00:13:351 (4) - Blanket with^ ~ Can't because the slider doesn't follow your suggestion
10. 00:14:860 (6) - Make the Slider like this http://puu.sh/hdCvL/c7db23a154.jpg after that, CTRL+H terus Rotate the slider to -77 degree will be good imo ~ No ><
11. 00:15:992 (7) - then you can blanket this with slider above ~ Automatically can't
12. 00:17:879 (3) - too Straight, make it like this http://puu.sh/hdCJW/b0d921871a.jpg , and it'll become slider blanket with 00:16:370 (1) - ~ It is fine with straight sider at here
13. 00:19:389 (1) - Slider doesn't fit on this part, try using Spinner that will ends here 00:20:898 - ~ Woohoo nice catch ~
14. 00:22:408 (1,2) - This can be Blanket ~ :3
15. 00:25:049 - Uh,, please dont ignore this Tick ~ OK
16. 00:32:974 (3) - bad slider algorithm ~ Changed to two 1/1 notes
17. 00:32:974 (3,1) - (3) slider tail is overlapping (1), and looks Ugly, fix this please ~ Changed
18. 00:37:125 (3,1) - blanket this please ~ Ok
19. 00:38:823 (3) - tail and head are touched, fix please ~ Ok
20. 00:52:219 - Ignoring Tick? add note plz ~ Ok
21. 00:54:106 (2) - Slider looks very UGLY, fix please xD, try this http://puu.sh/hdDei/68e4795e75.jpg , so, the slider will Completely blanket with (1) ~ personal preferences
22. 00:55:615 (3) - This looks ugly too, try this http://puu.sh/hdDlB/90a982f4f8.jpg ~ ^
23. 01:08:445 (2,2) - these sliders can be blanket ~ ^
24. 01:22:785 (3) - just make this into a simple slider http://puu.sh/hdDAg/78a8f3f7b8.jpg ~ ^

I'll continue my mod tommorow :3 ~

tutuhaha wrote:

http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/SECL-1647
title should be
Season -TV size ver.-

1. 00:14:483 (2) - 456 , 164 better , also check ds here
2. 00:19:011 (4) - no problem over here , but try this one : 168 , 268 ( it's make a good placing same as 00:17:502 (2)
3. 00:55:615 (3) - give more space over , you can check in ds it can move to : 284 , 248 . soo yeah also give 00:56:370 (4) - this spacing too .. please check ds again you can move to :416 , 324
4. 01:10:709 (3) - nc
5. 01:22:785 (1) - nc maybe?

1. 00:26:936 (1,2,3) - sound weird over here. please re-map this part?
2. it's sound overmap on kiai time . please idk how to mod this diff

1. 00:56:936 - note?
2. 00:44:860 (1) - swap to nc . move to 00:45:238 (2)

1. 00:43:540 (1,2) - ctrl+g
2. 01:17:691 (4) - 228 , 88 better

1. Where is video?
2. 00:57:125 - why not put object here since this is the strongest note? when there's a strong note, the player should have a hit object there and spinner right after, not start spinning at the note without clicking anything.
3. 01:24:294 - ^

1. 00:03:917 (4) - remove this circle since there is nothing in the music to back it up and it doesn't feel right as a result
2. 00:11:464 (2) - ^ and give better emphasis to the objects around it
3. 00:13:351 (1,2) - follow music better please. the strong note is on the 3/2 beat, not the white tick
   
4. 00:14:860 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:16:370 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:17:879 (3,4) - ^
7. 00:37:125 (3) - must move to 00:36:936 since that's where the sound is and to maintain 1/1 polarity for a circle. 3/2 gap between 00:37:502 (1) - is less of an issue because of slider accuracy leniency
8. 00:41:842 (2) - you must have made a mistake here since the slider repeats on a blue tick
9. 01:01:653 (1) - here too!! move the slider to 01:01:464 because that's where the strong note and finish are on!! nothing is on the downbeat
10. 01:04:672 (1) - ^ same here, downbeat is stronger than earlier but still not as strong as 01:04:483

1. 00:03:162 (3) - there is no sound on this tick. the sound is on 00:03:351
2. 00:06:181 (3) - the sound is on the red tick
3. 00:10:143 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard for the slow part of the song in a normal diff. too many circles
4. 00:35:049 (2) - the slider head feels really weird because it starts on a beat that is almost inaudible. i don't recommend doing this. try to follow the main instruments/vocals
5. 00:38:068 (2) - ^
6. 00:57:125 (1) - you can should end spinner as late as 00:59:389 to follow music. always better to end spinner on a prominent sound than silent area
7. 01:00:709 (2) - this circle isn't on any strong sound and this is a normal difficulty so you shouldn't overdo the rhythm with objects on sounds that you can't hear easily or aren't part of the main rhythm
8. 01:06:747 (2) - ^
9. 01:21:842 (2) - ^

1. 00:10:709 (4) - remove this circle since there is nothing in the music to back it up and it doesn't feel right as a result
2. 00:14:860 (1) - curving this the other way plays better
3. 00:16:370 (1) - ^
4. 00:35:804 - strong note is on red tick, so you should not slider end there.
5. 00:59:011 - spinner end here

1. 00:04:106 (4,5,1) - check snap carefully. not sure if 1/8 or 1/6
2. 00:04:672 (2) - 1/2 beat repeat slider to cover piano
3. 00:07:125 (4,5,1) - snapping is unsure too
4. 00:08:445 (4,5) - stacking these doesn't feel right, since they belong to different vocals
5. 00:11:842 (1) - This slider ends on nothing. The vocal is on 00:12:030 so you can end it there, or change it to circle only and leave that part empty since there are no instruments.
6. 00:29:011 (2,3) - Current rhythm doesn't feel good
   
7. 00:31:276 (5,6,1) - snap?
8. 00:35:521 (4) - overmapped
9. 00:35:804 - strong note is on red tick, so you should not slider end there.
10. 00:38:540 (4) - also overmapped since there is no sound here
11. 00:38:823 - same thing i said earlier about slider end on strong beat. actually all of these 00:38:634 (5,1,2,3) - feel weird since you have all slider ends on vocals
12. 00:40:521 (1,2,3) - ^
13. 00:41:842 (4,1) - similarly, you have circle on strong note but right after you put a slider starting on the weak downbeat which downplays the effect of the circle
    
14. 00:59:011 - spinner should end here to follow vocal
15. 01:00:709 (2,3) - stronger notes are white ticks, so don't have sliders start on red ones
16. 01:01:653 (1,2,3) - why are you deliberately trying to make sliders end on awkward moments? like previously strong vocals are on white ticks but you start sliders on red ticks, and here vocals are on red ticks and you start sliders on white ticks. you should be consistent with either what you choose to follow. if drums, start 1/2 sliders on white ticks. if vocals, then start sliders on vocals.
17. 01:04:483 - strong beat

1. Paste your map links here and I will check them when I have time.
2. You Must Provide correct Metadata and give me the source name, which episode. How dare people just throw the name of a song and expect I look up everything for them?!!!!????

1. 00:11:842 (1) Is this NC really necessary?. You should remove it!
2. 00:25:049 (4) What about to move this circle to x:432 y:220 ?. For a better aspect with previous slider
3. 00:47:691 (x) You should consider to add a circle here since there are a strong beat
4. Your combo patterns are a bit weird here since sometimes you place a NC each two downbeats and sometimes each one downbeat

1. 00:11:276 (3) This circle is not following any strong beat here. So, Could be better if you remove it
2. 00:55:615 (4) This NC is not necessary at all. Maybe you could remove it but If you don't want it you can keep it
3. 01:22:785 (1) (^)

1. 00:05:238 (3,4) What about to CTRL+G the rhythm here?. Fits much better with the music and you could try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:125 (x) A circle here will be totally necessary in my opinion, since there are a strong vocal , you can hear a ha (SHI) here. So What abou to add it?
3. 00:40:143 (3) Because of the previous slider, if you move this circle to x:116 y:184 the flow will be much better in my opinion

Shad0w1and wrote:

1. Paste your map links here and I will check them when I have time.
2. You Must Provide correct Metadata and give me the source name, which episode. How dare people just throw the name of a song and expect I look up everything for them?!!!!????

offset -430
http://puu.sh/heGii/8a3f7649d1.flv

would have rejected this req.
nice song. gl

Sky Trias wrote:

#PM from game
too lazy writing
no kd

tutuhaha wrote:

http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/SECL-1647
title should be
Season -TV size ver.-

[Easy]

1. 00:14:483 (2) - 456 , 164 better , also check ds here
2. 00:19:011 (4) - no problem over here , but try this one : 168 , 268 ( it's make a good placing same as 00:17:502 (2)
3. 00:55:615 (3) - give more space over , you can check in ds it can move to : 284 , 248 . soo yeah also give 00:56:370 (4) - this spacing too .. please check ds again you can move to :416 , 324
4. 01:10:709 (3) - nc
5. 01:22:785 (1) - nc maybe?

[Normal]

1. 00:26:936 (1,2,3) - sound weird over here. please re-map this part?
2. it's sound overmap on kiai time . please idk how to mod this diff

[Hard]

1. 00:56:936 - note?
2. 00:44:860 (1) - swap to nc . move to 00:45:238 (2)

[Insane]

1. 00:43:540 (1,2) - ctrl+g
2. 01:17:691 (4) - 228 , 88 better

gonna mod this again ..
kalo lupa , PM di game aja ya

xxdeathx wrote:

m4m request in game
[General]

1. Where is video?
2. 00:57:125 - why not put object here since this is the strongest note? when there's a strong note, the player should have a hit object there and spinner right after, not start spinning at the note without clicking anything.
3. 01:24:294 - ^

[Easy]

1. 00:03:917 (4) - remove this circle since there is nothing in the music to back it up and it doesn't feel right as a result
2. 00:11:464 (2) - ^ and give better emphasis to the objects around it
3. 00:13:351 (1,2) - follow music better please. the strong note is on the 3/2 beat, not the white tick
   
4. 00:14:860 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:16:370 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:17:879 (3,4) - ^
7. 00:37:125 (3) - must move to 00:36:936 since that's where the sound is and to maintain 1/1 polarity for a circle. 3/2 gap between 00:37:502 (1) - is less of an issue because of slider accuracy leniency
8. 00:41:842 (2) - you must have made a mistake here since the slider repeats on a blue tick
9. 01:01:653 (1) - here too!! move the slider to 01:01:464 because that's where the strong note and finish are on!! nothing is on the downbeat
10. 01:04:672 (1) - ^ same here, downbeat is stronger than earlier but still not as strong as 01:04:483

[Normal]

1. 00:03:162 (3) - there is no sound on this tick. the sound is on 00:03:351
2. 00:06:181 (3) - the sound is on the red tick
3. 00:10:143 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard for the slow part of the song in a normal diff. too many circles
4. 00:35:049 (2) - the slider head feels really weird because it starts on a beat that is almost inaudible. i don't recommend doing this. try to follow the main instruments/vocals
5. 00:38:068 (2) - ^
6. 00:57:125 (1) - you can should end spinner as late as 00:59:389 to follow music. always better to end spinner on a prominent sound than silent area
7. 01:00:709 (2) - this circle isn't on any strong sound and this is a normal difficulty so you shouldn't overdo the rhythm with objects on sounds that you can't hear easily or aren't part of the main rhythm
8. 01:06:747 (2) - ^
9. 01:21:842 (2) - ^

[Hard]
Things I said in Insane can also apply here, so I won't say the same things twice.

1. 00:10:709 (4) - remove this circle since there is nothing in the music to back it up and it doesn't feel right as a result
2. 00:14:860 (1) - curving this the other way plays better
3. 00:16:370 (1) - ^
4. 00:35:804 - strong note is on red tick, so you should not slider end there.
5. 00:59:011 - spinner end here

[Insane]

1. 00:04:106 (4,5,1) - check snap carefully. not sure if 1/8 or 1/6
2. 00:04:672 (2) - 1/2 beat repeat slider to cover piano
3. 00:07:125 (4,5,1) - snapping is unsure too
4. 00:08:445 (4,5) - stacking these doesn't feel right, since they belong to different vocals
5. 00:11:842 (1) - This slider ends on nothing. The vocal is on 00:12:030 so you can end it there, or change it to circle only and leave that part empty since there are no instruments.
6. 00:29:011 (2,3) - Current rhythm doesn't feel good
   
7. 00:31:276 (5,6,1) - snap?
8. 00:35:521 (4) - overmapped
9. 00:35:804 - strong note is on red tick, so you should not slider end there.
10. 00:38:540 (4) - also overmapped since there is no sound here
11. 00:38:823 - same thing i said earlier about slider end on strong beat. actually all of these 00:38:634 (5,1,2,3) - feel weird since you have all slider ends on vocals
12. 00:40:521 (1,2,3) - ^
13. 00:41:842 (4,1) - similarly, you have circle on strong note but right after you put a slider starting on the weak downbeat which downplays the effect of the circle
    
14. 00:59:011 - spinner should end here to follow vocal
15. 01:00:709 (2,3) - stronger notes are white ticks, so don't have sliders start on red ones
16. 01:01:653 (1,2,3) - why are you deliberately trying to make sliders end on awkward moments? like previously strong vocals are on white ticks but you start sliders on red ticks, and here vocals are on red ticks and you start sliders on white ticks. you should be consistent with either what you choose to follow. if drums, start 1/2 sliders on white ticks. if vocals, then start sliders on vocals.
17. 01:04:483 - strong beat

please confirm triplet snaps with expert, i think bn's may worry about them
object placement is okay, but you need to work on rhythm. too many places you ignore the strong parts of the song in favor of weak/barely audible parts, and you have sliders starting and ending in awkward places. slider starts should emphasize the strong notes and not start on weak ones.

XinCrin wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue!

Easy

1. 00:11:842 (1) Is this NC really necessary?. You should remove it!
2. 00:25:049 (4) What about to move this circle to x:432 y:220 ?. For a better aspect with previous slider
3. 00:47:691 (x) You should consider to add a circle here since there are a strong beat
4. Your combo patterns are a bit weird here since sometimes you place a NC each two downbeats and sometimes each one downbeat

Normal

1. 00:11:276 (3) This circle is not following any strong beat here. So, Could be better if you remove it
2. 00:55:615 (4) This NC is not necessary at all. Maybe you could remove it but If you don't want it you can keep it
3. 01:22:785 (1) (^)

Hard

1. 00:05:238 (3,4) What about to CTRL+G the rhythm here?. Fits much better with the music and you could try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:125 (x) A circle here will be totally necessary in my opinion, since there are a strong vocal , you can hear a ha (SHI) here. So What abou to add it?
3. 00:40:143 (3) Because of the previous slider, if you move this circle to x:116 y:184 the flow will be much better in my opinion

That's all for me. Good luck getting this ranked! :)

tutuhaha wrote:

IRC

17:22 NewIpas: Hello~
17:22 tutuhaha: oh hi
17:22 tutuhaha: I am checking your map
17:23 tutuhaha: <3 there has some issue I think should be fix on easy diff
17:23 NewIpas: Ohh
17:23 tutuhaha: would you like to hear now？
17:23 NewIpas: YES!
17:23 NewIpas: ><
17:23 tutuhaha: ok then
17:24 tutuhaha: on easy diff
17:24 tutuhaha: 00:41:842 (2,3) - hmmm...I think this rhythm is too hard in easy, maybe just use this rhythm
17:24 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3020653
17:24 tutuhaha: 01:03:917 (2,1,2,3) - also this part
17:24 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3020659
17:24 tutuhaha: fix those first and update please
17:25 NewIpas: other diff issues?
17:25 tutuhaha: oh and turn off the widescreen support
17:25 tutuhaha: I still checking _(:зゝ∠)_
17:26 NewIpas: xD
17:26 NewIpas: Wait xD
17:26 tutuhaha: turn off the widescreen support <- to all diff
17:26 tutuhaha: normal diff
17:26 tutuhaha: 00:19:200 (4) - 
17:26 tutuhaha: delete
17:27 tutuhaha: 00:09:389 (4) - hmmm...I think use this rhythm will be better
17:27 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3020667
17:29 tutuhaha: hmmmmmm
17:31 tutuhaha: 00:22:974 (2) - delete finish
17:31 tutuhaha: 00:22:408 (1) - 00:31:464 (1) - actually on this part
17:31 tutuhaha: I think you use too much finish
17:33 tutuhaha: could you delete some finish？
17:34 tutuhaha: 01:09:011 (4) - delete
17:35 tutuhaha: 01:14:672 (3,4) - merge them to be one slider I think would be better
17:35 NewIpas: Wait
17:36 tutuhaha: _(:зゝ∠)_
17:37 NewIpas: Continue it xD
17:40 tutuhaha: Hard
17:40 tutuhaha: 01:00:709 (2) - move to x364 y120
17:40 tutuhaha: (space issue
17:41 tutuhaha: 01:09:955 (3,4,1) - use the same space
17:42 tutuhaha: 01:13:351 (3) - move to x144 y36 may looks better I think
17:43 tutuhaha: 01:20:898 (4) - move to x152 y124 may looks better
17:43 tutuhaha: 01:22:219 (3) - x336 y336 ^same reason
17:45 NewIpas: Accepted :3
17:47 tutuhaha: Insane
17:48 tutuhaha: 00:14:483 (3,1) - make a small jump, just like what you did on  00:13:351 (1,2) - 00:15:992 (3,1) - 
17:49 tutuhaha: 00:04:106 (4,1,2,3) - well actually for me on this part, just use 1.5x space
17:49 tutuhaha: because this part is very gentle
17:50 tutuhaha: 00:24:294 (2) - ctrl+g
17:51 tutuhaha: 00:27:313 (2) - move to x276 y360
17:51 tutuhaha: you can use litter bit large space on here because the slider is really easy to hit _(:зゝ∠)_
17:52 tutuhaha: 00:29:577 (3,4) - tooooooooooooo huge
17:54 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3020725
17:54 tutuhaha: try something like this^
17:54 NewIpas: 00:29:766 (4) - Is it fine when i moved it to 316,272?
17:55 tutuhaha: 00:29:766 (4,1) - still too huge between those two
17:56 tutuhaha: 00:30:332 (2) - ctrl+g
17:56 tutuhaha: 00:35:426 (3,1) - this space should large than 00:34:860 (2,3) - 
17:58 tutuhaha: 00:38:445 (3,4,1) - unified your space
17:58 tutuhaha: 00:41:464 (4,5) - toooooooooo huge......again..........
17:58 tutuhaha: hmm
17:58 tutuhaha: try ctrl+g on
17:58 tutuhaha: 00:41:464 (4,5) - 
17:59 tutuhaha: 00:51:464 (2) - ctrl+g
17:59 tutuhaha: 00:54:106 (1,2) - move litter bit far
18:00 tutuhaha: like 2.2x
18:01 NewIpas: 00:54:106 (1) - 124, 172 . 00:54:672 (2) - 361,330
18:01 NewIpas: Fine?
18:01 tutuhaha: ok
18:02 tutuhaha: 01:04:483 (5) - move to x328 y260
18:03 tutuhaha: 01:06:559 (2,3,4,5) - unified those space
18:03 tutuhaha: 01:12:219 (1,2,3,4) - ^
18:04 tutuhaha: 01:13:728 (1) - move left 1 grid
18:04 tutuhaha: 01:14:483 (3) - move right 1 grid
18:05 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3020750
18:05 tutuhaha: 01:15:238 (1,2,3) - ^do something like this
18:07 tutuhaha: 01:18:068 (6) - hmmmmmm overlap with 01:17:502 (3) - ？
18:07 tutuhaha: that‘s it
18:09 tutuhaha: call me when you finish update
18:10 NewIpas: OK
18:13 NewIpas: Updated :3
18:21 tutuhaha: turn off the widescreen support on normal
18:21 tutuhaha: and hard
18:22 tutuhaha: Insane
18:22 NewIpas: Ehh
18:22 NewIpas: Forgot it xD
18:22 tutuhaha: 01:01:276 (4,1) - use the same space like 01:00:709 (2,3) - 
18:23 tutuhaha: 01:02:596 (x) - you lose the rhythm
18:24 tutuhaha: ok and then update

yeah_(:зゝ∠)_

tutuhaha wrote:

yeah_(:зゝ∠)_

-Nya- wrote:

IRC log of the Easy and Normal.

IRC

05:43 NewIpas: Hello~
05:43 -Nya-: Hey~
05:44 NewIpas: Do you have time to check my map?
05:44 NewIpas: It's Bubbled \o/
05:44 -Nya-: First give me the link, then I'll decide.
05:44 NewIpas: Wait
05:44 *NewIpas is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/668549 Alisa Takigawa - Season -TV size ver.-]
05:45 NewIpas: :3
05:46 -Nya-: Downloading
05:46 NewIpas: :3
05:54 NewIpas: Its too fast even for me
05:54 NewIpas: Bubbled in 20 days .-.
05:55 -Nya-: Yeah, lol. But it looks ready. IRC?
05:55 NewIpas: Wow
05:55 NewIpas: OK
05:55 -Nya-: Lol :) The best part of my job: Seeing mappers happy :)
05:55 NewIpas: I'm ready
05:56 NewIpas: Wow.... I want to be a BN too so I can make people happy ><
05:56 -Nya-: Maybe one day :)
05:58 NewIpas: I hope it :3
05:59 -Nya-: The bitrate of the mp3 is 320kbps http://puu.sh/hi943/5107f256e0.png
06:00 NewIpas: Ummm, should I change it?
06:00 -Nya-: Wait . . . I'm going to make sure about that.
06:03 -Nya-: Yeah, uhm, it's unrankable. You'll have to fix that. Just make sure the mp3 is 192 kbps minimum. It may not be above that.
06:04 NewIpas: Okay :3
06:05 -Nya-: I popped the bubble, but after you fixed that and after I gave you my mod, I'll rebubble.
06:06 -Nya-: Do you still want to continue with the IRC mod?
06:06 NewIpas: Yes :3
06:07 NewIpas: But, wait untill i fix the mp3
06:07 -Nya-: Ok
06:07 -Nya-: Just tell me when you have.
06:07 NewIpas: Ok
06:10 -Nya-: Who checked your timing?
06:10 NewIpas: Fixed :3
06:10 NewIpas: Let's start
06:11 NewIpas: Via timing analyzer
06:11 -Nya-: Do you have a timing analyzer?
06:11 NewIpas: yes
06:11 NewIpas: statementreply's software
06:12 -Nya-: Really? That's cool. Does it give you the offset as well?
06:17 *NewIpas is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672240 Alisa Takigawa - Season -TV size ver.- [Easy]]
06:17 NewIpas: Readyyy xD
06:17 -Nya-: Ok, in the first part of the song, you used those water kind of hitsound, but I think you may have overused it a bit. I'll tell you where to remove some of them.
06:18 NewIpas: Ok
06:18 NewIpas: It's hard though
06:18 NewIpas: To place it ><
06:18 -Nya-: In the Easy: 00:02:030 - 
06:18 -Nya-: 00:03:540 - 
06:19 -Nya-: 00:05:049 - 
06:19 -Nya-: 00:06:559 - 
06:19 -Nya-: 00:08:068 - 
06:20 -Nya-: 00:09:577 - 
06:20 -Nya-: 00:11:087 - 
06:21 -Nya-: I think just use the same points and remove that hitsound in the other diffs as well.
06:21 NewIpas: Ok :3
06:24 -Nya-: Easy: The head of this slider: 00:11:842 (3) -  is too soft. They can be strict about that. Rather don't change the volume there at all. Rather keep it at 30%.
06:24 -Nya-: 00:19:011 (4) - Rather place this circle here for better flow:
06:24 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hia9Y/a8d48e900a.jpg
06:25 NewIpas: I will try to accept all of your mods :3
06:26 NewIpas: I'm wondering who will rank my map ><
06:26 -Nya-: Lol, ok. But it's still just my opinion. Tutuhaha can rank it.
06:27 NewIpas: It can be Easy for tutuhaha since he/she *idk* has bubbled this map xD
06:27 -Nya-: Yep, usually that BN will rank/bubble it again.
06:29 -Nya-: 00:38:257 (2) - Change this circle into a short slider instead? Imo it will fit nicely with the vocals:
06:29 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hiami/db53b1bb09.jpg
06:31 -Nya-: 00:41:842 (2) - Rather try this pattern. Imo it will fit better with the rhythm:
06:32 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hiauY/65a48e670d.jpg
06:33 NewIpas: Fixed 00:38:257 (2) -
06:34 NewIpas: Fixed too 00:41:842 (2,3) -
06:35 -Nya-: 00:57:313 (1) - Hm, this spinner feels pretty short for an Easy . . . My opinion would be to remove it completely.
06:36 -Nya-: 01:01:464 (1) - Rather place this slider here for better flow:
06:36 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hiaH3/6ff7777c83.jpg
06:38 -Nya-: 01:11:464 (2,3) - Try a sort of circular flow here:
06:38 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hiaN2/8fe3584189.jpg
06:40 -Nya-: 01:16:747 (2) - For better flow, stack the head of this slider on 01:14:860 (2) - 
06:40 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hiaSS/4edcedbd89.jpg
06:41 -Nya-: Ok, that's all for Easy
06:41 NewIpas: Wait
06:42 NewIpas: I still fixing spinner
06:42 -Nya-: Ok
06:44 -Nya-: Tell me when you're done
06:48 NewIpas: Ok
06:52 NewIpas: Done :3
06:52 NewIpas: But, it may be a little personal preferences within your suggestion
06:52 -Nya-: Ok, np. On to the Normal.
06:52 NewIpas: Ok
06:53 -Nya-: 00:57:125 (5) - Recheck this spacing again please. 
06:54 NewIpas: ok
06:54 NewIpas: Fixed
06:54 -Nya-: 00:03:351 (3,4) - Rather stack.
06:55 NewIpas: Ehhh, you directly go to Insane ><
06:55 -Nya-: No, it's Normal
06:55 NewIpas: Ehh
06:56 NewIpas: Just my osu! glitches *I guess
06:57 -Nya-: 00:05:426 (2) - Place this slider here for nice flow:
06:57 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hibAY/611ac56d01.jpg
06:58 NewIpas: 00:06:370 (3,4) - Then, what should I do to fix them?
06:58 NewIpas: If (2) has moved?
06:59 -Nya-: Just make sure the spacing is still fine.
06:59 -Nya-: You can do anything.
06:59 NewIpas: Ohhh
06:59 NewIpas: Fixed xD
07:01 NewIpas: Could you move Mod for Hard and Insane to forum? It was late here . I want to go to dreamland lol xD
07:02 -Nya-: Uhm, ok, sure. Do you still want to do the Normal?
07:02 NewIpas: Yes
07:02 NewIpas: Only Hard and Insane
07:03 -Nya-: 00:06:936 (4) - Add NC here and remove NC here: 00:07:691 (1) - 
07:04 -Nya-: 00:11:842 (1) - Change this circle into a long slider to follow the vocals better:
07:04 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hibUN/1536896344.jpg
07:04 NewIpas: ^ Like I did on Easy?
07:05 -Nya-: Like the pic. It's a longer slider.
07:06 NewIpas: Yes
07:06 NewIpas: Changed
07:07 NewIpas: And deleted timing points that decrease the volume to 10% to keep this note at 30% of volume
07:07 -Nya-: Oh, yeah
07:10 -Nya-: 01:08:257 (2) - I think a straight slider here will work better.
07:11 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hicc9/9ed88330bb.jpg
07:13 NewIpas: Will you online 7 hours later?
07:14 -Nya-: Eh, not sure. But I'll send forum PM. Uhm, can you just stay like 5 min longer for the Normal
07:15 -Nya-: Did you get that pic?
07:15 NewIpas: I think I can
07:16 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/hicqc/b747857a80.jpg
07:16 -Nya-: 01:13:351 (3) - Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 01:13:728 (1) - 
07:17 -Nya-: That's all for Normal.
07:23 NewIpas: Nope >< I can't
07:23 NewIpas: Please write it on forum
07:23 NewIpas: So I can look on it tomorrow
07:23 -Nya-: It's okay. That was all for the Normal
07:23 -Nya-: I'll post the Hard and Insane
07:24 NewIpas: Wowww.... Okay then
07:24 NewIpas: Good Bye
07:24 NewIpas: Have a Nice Day
07:24 -Nya-: You too
07:24 -Nya-: Bye
07:24 NewIpas: Have a Nice *Sleep* xD
07:24 -Nya-: Oh yeah lol

Just remember to make sure that that volume change in all the diffs are removed.

Hard:

1. 00:02:596 –Place a note here? It will fit nicely and help with the flow.
2. 00:04:860 -^
3. 00:11:087 (1) –Make the spacing of this slider a bit bigger. Imo the jump can be bigger since there’s quite a long pause between 00:10:143 (3,1) –
4. 00:18:445 (2) –Ctrl+H
5. 00:45:238 (1,2) –Make these two sliders straight. It will support 00:45:993 (3) – better.
6. 01:05:615 (3) –Ctrl+J, then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G. That pattern looks and plays much better.
7. 01:09:955 (3) –Turn this into a straight slider to support 01:09:200 (1,2) –
8. 01:17:879 (4) –Turn this circle into a slider to follow the vocals more effectively.
   
   Picture

   

Nothing really useful to add in the Insane.

Call me back~

1. 00:59:766 (3) - same as hard, use 1/2 slider here?
2. 01:04:483 (5,1) -
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:21:276 - add note here
2. 00:34:106 (3) - x360 y168
3. 01:04:483 (4,1) - same as insane
4. 01:05:238 (2,3,4) - the rhythm on here should be like this
   
   SPOILER

   

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:59:766 (3) - same as hard, use 1/2 slider here?
2. 01:04:483 (5,1) -
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:21:276 - add note here
2. 00:34:106 (3) - x360 y168
3. 01:04:483 (4,1) - same as insane
4. 01:05:238 (2,3,4) - the rhythm on here should be like this
   
   SPOILER

   

call me back after rebub

-Nya- wrote:

Before I rebubble:

Hard: 00:06:559 - Add that water-drop hitsound here as well.
Normal: 00:06:559 - ^

Call back.

-Nya- wrote:

Let's get this mapset back on track again.

Rebubbled~

sheela901 wrote:

Hey NewIpas!

General

1. According to the website of the artist, the title should be Season～TV size ver.～. See Kawaiwkyik's post for what to change.
2. I think the timing is too early. I believe the offset is 1286, so everything should be shifted by +10. I confirmed with pishifat. But edit it after applying this mod.
3. In Easy and Normal, remove the green point on 00:01:276 . You cannot have two timing / inherited points at the same time, unless it's a special condition, like in Insane.
4. I would end the kiai time to 01:24:294 . This is where the "chorus" ends.

Normal

1. 00:03:351 to 00:05:804 - I would change the rhythm because sliders ending on a downbeat sound weird to me.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Same thing to 00:06:936 (1) . You can try a circle-slider rhythm. From 00:06:936 to 00:08:257 -, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:087 (2) - This is not a big issue, but the overlapped circle is a little ugly to me. Maybe move it to a new place while editing 00:10:332 (1) ?
3. 00:11:842 (1) - The tail has "normal" as a sampleset, but in the music, there isn't any big beat. From what I see in the other difficulties, it's only in Normal. So change the sampleset to "auto".
4. 00:43:351 (1,2) - The rhythm 00:43:351 (1,2,3,4,1) seems kind of hard to me due to circles. I would try adding a repeat on 00:43:351 (1) .

Hard

1. 00:21:276 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2,3) are not the same rhythm. The stack can end up being confused to the players. You can either move 00:21:276 (1) to somewhere else, or 00:21:653 (2,3,4) .
2. 00:37:879 (2) - 00:41:276 (3) - The head on those slider should not have a finish. The finishes don't really emphasize the beat in the music.
3. 00:51:653 - There should be something on that tick if you follow the instruments, like 00:51:087 (1,2) . The skip sounds weird to me. Starting from 00:51:087 -, you can do a rhythm like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:219 (1) - This slider following the vocals doesn't fit with the rhythm. I would add an object on 01:12:596 or add a repeat on 01:12:219 (1) .

Insane

1. 01:16:747 (1,2,3) - Add more distance between them, so it could reach to 1.20x. It resembles to 01:11:841 (4,1) .
2. 01:18:257 to 01:21:087 - Check the distance between those objects. Some seem to go for 1.0x instead of 1.20x.

Pretty clean!

Everything else looks perfect! Until Kawaiwkyik drops a mod, you can reach me or him. I don't mind that.

1. Revised hitsounds
2. Changed some rhythms and patterns

2015-04-19 20:45 NewIpas: Inconsistency of finish at Kiai ><
2015-04-19 20:45 sheela901: Oh
2015-04-19 20:47 sheela901: You didn't fix the offset
2015-04-19 20:48 NewIpas: Forgot it ><
2015-04-19 20:48 NewIpas: Sorry
2015-04-19 20:48 sheela901: No problem
2015-04-19 20:50 sheela901: Update the mapset when the timing has changed
2015-04-19 20:51 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-19 20:59 NewIpas: Updated :3
2015-04-19 20:59 NewIpas: Fixed offset
2015-04-19 20:59 sheela901: Okay
2015-04-19 20:59 sheela901: Recheck...
2015-04-19 21:07 sheela901: In Easy and Hard, the finish on 00:23:927 - doesn't fit very well
2015-04-19 21:08 sheela901: In Easy, the same suggestion with the head of 00:27:512 (3) - 
2015-04-19 21:08 NewIpas: 00:29:965 (2) - End of this slider too I guess
2015-04-19 21:09 NewIpas: Easy*
2015-04-19 21:09 NewIpas: 00:44:304 (2) - too
2015-04-19 21:10 NewIpas: 00:32:229 (2) - Normal hit doesn't fits with end of this slider
2015-04-19 21:10 sheela901: 00:29:965 (2) - I don't hear anything on the end
2015-04-19 21:10 sheela901: There's no finish?
2015-04-19 21:11 NewIpas: 00:29:965 (2) - This? I think finish at the end doesn't fits
2015-04-19 21:11 sheela901: It doesn't fit
2015-04-19 21:12 sheela901: 00:32:229 (2) - The normal at the end doesn't go with the music
2015-04-19 21:13 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-19 21:14 sheela901: Now go in Normal
2015-04-19 21:15 sheela901: lol. I'm modding two maps at the same time, if that doesn't bother you
2015-04-19 21:15 NewIpas: Ehhh
2015-04-19 21:15 NewIpas: It doesn't bother me but
2015-04-19 21:15 NewIpas: Do you tired?
2015-04-19 21:16 NewIpas: If you tired, stop mod 1 map
2015-04-19 21:16 sheela901: It's fine. The other map is ready, so I'll just do a quick check
2015-04-19 21:17 NewIpas: Wew
2015-04-19 21:18 sheela901: For now, check the hitsounds in Normal. There's an object with a finish at the beginning of the map that doesn't fit
2015-04-19 21:18 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-19 21:23 NewIpas: Fixed
2015-04-19 21:24 sheela901: Alright, give me a second
2015-04-19 21:24 NewIpas: And I don't have time to online anymore ><
2015-04-19 21:25 NewIpas: I want to go to my Grandma's House
2015-04-19 21:25 sheela901: Lol
2015-04-19 21:25 sheela901: Do an update
2015-04-19 21:25 NewIpas: Updated
2015-04-19 21:26 sheela901: Alright, I'll deal with the map
2015-04-19 21:27 sheela901: Are you leaving later?
2015-04-19 21:27 NewIpas: Yes
2015-04-19 21:27 NewIpas: I must go right now
2015-04-19 21:27 sheela901: Okay. I'll post a recheck in the thread
2015-04-19 21:27 NewIpas: I will online at 4-9 PM (GMT+7)
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: I guess It will be morning at your
2015-04-19 21:28 sheela901: Yeah
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: country
2015-04-19 21:28 sheela901: Canada
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: 7 AM at your place
2015-04-19 21:28 sheela901: That's good
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: WIll you online at 7 AM?
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: I will online 'till 10 AM
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: I'll try. I get lazy when I wake up
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: xD
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: Goodbye
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: Bye bye
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: Have a nice Dream xD
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: thanks
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: Good night/ /Morning
2015-04-20 19:50 sheela901: Hello
2015-04-20 19:51 NewIpas: HI~
2015-04-20 19:51 NewIpas: I'm waiting for you ><
2015-04-20 19:51 sheela901: lol. Can't make it this morning. Too lazy to get up
2015-04-20 19:51 NewIpas: xD
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: Ohh, wait first
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: Sure
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: I want finish my mod
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674462 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [Walao's Insane]]
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: You can just write it on notepad or anything first
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: I made a GD in that mapset
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: Okay
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: Yes xD
2015-04-20 19:53 NewIpas: Ohh, wkyik said that its fine when you qualify it
2015-04-20 19:54 sheela901: Cool
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: It comes to your GD xD
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674403 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [sheela's Lunatic]]
2015-04-20 19:56 sheela901: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
2015-04-20 20:10 sheela901: You posted two times
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: EHHH
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: SORRY
2015-04-20 20:11 sheela901: You can delete the post
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: Let's continue our work
2015-04-20 20:13 sheela901: Wait, I'll just apply the mod
2015-04-20 20:14 NewIpas: But, give me time to eat, take a bath, and go to sit again
2015-04-20 20:14 sheela901: Go ahead
2015-04-20 20:14 NewIpas: 21:13
2015-04-20 20:14 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-20 20:14 sheela901: OK
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: Aku mau ranked kan alisa takigawa dulu
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: I'm baaack
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: *Sorry, wrong chat
2015-04-20 20:41 sheela901: Lolo
2015-04-20 20:41 sheela901: I restarted my PC
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: Let's go Let's Gooooo ><
2015-04-20 20:42 sheela901: Okay. In Normal, 00:05:059 (2) - the tail has a hitsound which doesn't match with the music
2015-04-20 20:43 NewIpas: Where I should put it then?
2015-04-20 20:43 NewIpas: removed
2015-04-20 20:43 sheela901: The hitsound?
2015-04-20 20:44 NewIpas: Yes
2015-04-20 20:45 sheela901: It's removed, okay. But what's "where should I put it"
2015-04-20 20:45 NewIpas: I don't have to move that hitsound to another note right?
2015-04-20 20:45 sheela901: No
2015-04-20 20:45 sheela901: Now go in Hard
2015-04-20 20:46 NewIpas: OK then It's fine xD
2015-04-20 20:46 NewIpas: Haaaard xD
2015-04-20 20:46 sheela901: Yaeah
2015-04-20 20:47 sheela901: 01:11:097 to 01:11:663 - Try a 1/4 rhythm, like this: http://puu.sh/hlcRE/6565c4a738.jpg ?
2015-04-20 20:48 sheela901: In Hard, there's no 1/4 rhythms, so maybe adding one would help the spread between this and Insane
2015-04-20 20:48 sheela901: The pattern can be like this: http://puu.sh/hlcWG/bce2779d14.jpg
2015-04-20 20:50 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-20 20:50 sheela901: Done?
2015-04-20 20:51 NewIpas: Done
2015-04-20 20:51 sheela901: Now go in Insane
2015-04-20 20:51 NewIpas: Yeaay xD
2015-04-20 20:52 sheela901: 00:36:569 (3,4) - Maybe reduce the distance between them? It's quite large
2015-04-20 20:52 sheela901: Try 2.ox
2015-04-20 20:53 NewIpas: Wait
2015-04-20 20:53 NewIpas: [http://puu.sh/hldc0/9dac30bc16.jpg How about this?]
2015-04-20 20:54 sheela901: Looks great
2015-04-20 20:55 NewIpas: :3
2015-04-20 20:56 sheela901: Alright, you can update the mapset. I'll make a final recheck to see any unrankable issues
2015-04-20 20:57 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-20 20:59 NewIpas: Updated~
2015-04-20 20:59 sheela901: Alright
2015-04-20 21:08 sheela901: In Hard, 01:11:474 (4,5) - the distance is inconsistent. It's just little thing. Not noticeable so you can keep it
2015-04-20 21:09 sheela901: Overall, the mapset looks clear! It's time for a qualification! Let me do the things...
2015-04-20 21:10 NewIpas: Yeaaaah xD Thanks~

Qualified!

sheela901 wrote:

I couldn't qualify it yesterday (and this morning...), so this is what we did yesterday.

Summary:

1. Revised hitsounds
2. Changed some rhythms and patterns

IRC

2015-04-19 20:45 NewIpas: Inconsistency of finish at Kiai ><
2015-04-19 20:45 sheela901: Oh
2015-04-19 20:47 sheela901: You didn't fix the offset
2015-04-19 20:48 NewIpas: Forgot it ><
2015-04-19 20:48 NewIpas: Sorry
2015-04-19 20:48 sheela901: No problem
2015-04-19 20:50 sheela901: Update the mapset when the timing has changed
2015-04-19 20:51 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-19 20:59 NewIpas: Updated :3
2015-04-19 20:59 NewIpas: Fixed offset
2015-04-19 20:59 sheela901: Okay
2015-04-19 20:59 sheela901: Recheck...
2015-04-19 21:07 sheela901: In Easy and Hard, the finish on 00:23:927 - doesn't fit very well
2015-04-19 21:08 sheela901: In Easy, the same suggestion with the head of 00:27:512 (3) - 
2015-04-19 21:08 NewIpas: 00:29:965 (2) - End of this slider too I guess
2015-04-19 21:09 NewIpas: Easy*
2015-04-19 21:09 NewIpas: 00:44:304 (2) - too
2015-04-19 21:10 NewIpas: 00:32:229 (2) - Normal hit doesn't fits with end of this slider
2015-04-19 21:10 sheela901: 00:29:965 (2) - I don't hear anything on the end
2015-04-19 21:10 sheela901: There's no finish?
2015-04-19 21:11 NewIpas: 00:29:965 (2) - This? I think finish at the end doesn't fits
2015-04-19 21:11 sheela901: It doesn't fit
2015-04-19 21:12 sheela901: 00:32:229 (2) - The normal at the end doesn't go with the music
2015-04-19 21:13 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-19 21:14 sheela901: Now go in Normal
2015-04-19 21:15 sheela901: lol. I'm modding two maps at the same time, if that doesn't bother you
2015-04-19 21:15 NewIpas: Ehhh
2015-04-19 21:15 NewIpas: It doesn't bother me but
2015-04-19 21:15 NewIpas: Do you tired?
2015-04-19 21:16 NewIpas: If you tired, stop mod 1 map
2015-04-19 21:16 sheela901: It's fine. The other map is ready, so I'll just do a quick check
2015-04-19 21:17 NewIpas: Wew
2015-04-19 21:18 sheela901: For now, check the hitsounds in Normal. There's an object with a finish at the beginning of the map that doesn't fit
2015-04-19 21:18 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-19 21:23 NewIpas: Fixed
2015-04-19 21:24 sheela901: Alright, give me a second
2015-04-19 21:24 NewIpas: And I don't have time to online anymore ><
2015-04-19 21:25 NewIpas: I want to go to my Grandma's House
2015-04-19 21:25 sheela901: Lol
2015-04-19 21:25 sheela901: Do an update
2015-04-19 21:25 NewIpas: Updated
2015-04-19 21:26 sheela901: Alright, I'll deal with the map
2015-04-19 21:27 sheela901: Are you leaving later?
2015-04-19 21:27 NewIpas: Yes
2015-04-19 21:27 NewIpas: I must go right now
2015-04-19 21:27 sheela901: Okay. I'll post a recheck in the thread
2015-04-19 21:27 NewIpas: I will online at 4-9 PM (GMT+7)
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: I guess It will be morning at your
2015-04-19 21:28 sheela901: Yeah
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: country
2015-04-19 21:28 sheela901: Canada
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: 7 AM at your place
2015-04-19 21:28 sheela901: That's good
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: WIll you online at 7 AM?
2015-04-19 21:28 NewIpas: I will online 'till 10 AM
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: I'll try. I get lazy when I wake up
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: xD
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: Goodbye
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: Bye bye
2015-04-19 21:29 NewIpas: Have a nice Dream xD
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: thanks
2015-04-19 21:29 sheela901: Good night/ /Morning
2015-04-20 19:50 sheela901: Hello
2015-04-20 19:51 NewIpas: HI~
2015-04-20 19:51 NewIpas: I'm waiting for you ><
2015-04-20 19:51 sheela901: lol. Can't make it this morning. Too lazy to get up
2015-04-20 19:51 NewIpas: xD
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: Ohh, wait first
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: Sure
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: I want finish my mod
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674462 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [Walao's Insane]]
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: You can just write it on notepad or anything first
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: I made a GD in that mapset
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: Okay
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: Yes xD
2015-04-20 19:53 NewIpas: Ohh, wkyik said that its fine when you qualify it
2015-04-20 19:54 sheela901: Cool
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: It comes to your GD xD
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674403 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [sheela's Lunatic]]
2015-04-20 19:56 sheela901: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
2015-04-20 20:10 sheela901: You posted two times
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: EHHH
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: SORRY
2015-04-20 20:11 sheela901: You can delete the post
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: Let's continue our work
2015-04-20 20:13 sheela901: Wait, I'll just apply the mod
2015-04-20 20:14 NewIpas: But, give me time to eat, take a bath, and go to sit again
2015-04-20 20:14 sheela901: Go ahead
2015-04-20 20:14 NewIpas: 21:13
2015-04-20 20:14 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-20 20:14 sheela901: OK
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: Aku mau ranked kan alisa takigawa dulu
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: I'm baaack
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: *Sorry, wrong chat
2015-04-20 20:41 sheela901: Lolo
2015-04-20 20:41 sheela901: I restarted my PC
2015-04-20 20:41 NewIpas: Let's go Let's Gooooo ><
2015-04-20 20:42 sheela901: Okay. In Normal, 00:05:059 (2) - the tail has a hitsound which doesn't match with the music
2015-04-20 20:43 NewIpas: Where I should put it then?
2015-04-20 20:43 NewIpas: removed
2015-04-20 20:43 sheela901: The hitsound?
2015-04-20 20:44 NewIpas: Yes
2015-04-20 20:45 sheela901: It's removed, okay. But what's "where should I put it"
2015-04-20 20:45 NewIpas: I don't have to move that hitsound to another note right?
2015-04-20 20:45 sheela901: No
2015-04-20 20:45 sheela901: Now go in Hard
2015-04-20 20:46 NewIpas: OK then It's fine xD
2015-04-20 20:46 NewIpas: Haaaard xD
2015-04-20 20:46 sheela901: Yaeah
2015-04-20 20:47 sheela901: 01:11:097 to 01:11:663 - Try a 1/4 rhythm, like this: http://puu.sh/hlcRE/6565c4a738.jpg ?
2015-04-20 20:48 sheela901: In Hard, there's no 1/4 rhythms, so maybe adding one would help the spread between this and Insane
2015-04-20 20:48 sheela901: The pattern can be like this: http://puu.sh/hlcWG/bce2779d14.jpg
2015-04-20 20:50 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-20 20:50 sheela901: Done?
2015-04-20 20:51 NewIpas: Done
2015-04-20 20:51 sheela901: Now go in Insane
2015-04-20 20:51 NewIpas: Yeaay xD
2015-04-20 20:52 sheela901: 00:36:569 (3,4) - Maybe reduce the distance between them? It's quite large
2015-04-20 20:52 sheela901: Try 2.ox
2015-04-20 20:53 NewIpas: Wait
2015-04-20 20:53 NewIpas: [http://puu.sh/hldc0/9dac30bc16.jpg How about this?]
2015-04-20 20:54 sheela901: Looks great
2015-04-20 20:55 NewIpas: :3
2015-04-20 20:56 sheela901: Alright, you can update the mapset. I'll make a final recheck to see any unrankable issues
2015-04-20 20:57 NewIpas: Ok
2015-04-20 20:59 NewIpas: Updated~
2015-04-20 20:59 sheela901: Alright
2015-04-20 21:08 sheela901: In Hard, 01:11:474 (4,5) - the distance is inconsistent. It's just little thing. Not noticeable so you can keep it
2015-04-20 21:09 sheela901: Overall, the mapset looks clear! It's time for a qualification! Let me do the things...
2015-04-20 21:10 NewIpas: Yeaaaah xD Thanks~

This is mapset is ready to get forward! Enjoy!

Qualified!

sheela901 wrote:

2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674462 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [Walao's Insane]]
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: You can just write it on notepad or anything first
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: I made a GD in that mapset
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: Okay
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: Yes xD
2015-04-20 19:53 NewIpas: Ohh, wkyik said that its fine when you qualify it
2015-04-20 19:54 sheela901: Cool
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: It comes to your GD xD
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674403 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [sheela's Lunatic]]
2015-04-20 19:56 sheela901: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
2015-04-20 20:10 sheela901: You posted two times
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: EHHH
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: SORRY
2015-04-20 20:11 sheela901: You can delete the post
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: Let's continue our work

NolanM wrote:

Wow congrats!
LOL This is funny.
You, NewIpas, modded my beatmap yesterday, including a difficulty of sheela's..
and now sheela qualified your map
Congrats though

sheela901 wrote:

2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674462 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [Walao's Insane]]
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: You can just write it on notepad or anything first
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: I made a GD in that mapset
2015-04-20 19:52 sheela901: Okay
2015-04-20 19:52 NewIpas: Yes xD
2015-04-20 19:53 NewIpas: Ohh, wkyik said that its fine when you qualify it
2015-04-20 19:54 sheela901: Cool
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: It comes to your GD xD
2015-04-20 19:56 NewIpas: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674403 IOSYS - Cirno's Perfect Math Class [sheela's Lunatic]]
2015-04-20 19:56 sheela901: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
2015-04-20 20:10 sheela901: You posted two times
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: EHHH
2015-04-20 20:11 NewIpas: SORRY
2015-04-20 20:11 sheela901: You can delete the post
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: OK
2015-04-20 20:13 NewIpas: Let's continue our work

Lol I have hawk eyes =w=

Sastra wrote:

cie ranked

i-pas and in-tan

Sastra wrote:

cie ranked

i-pas and in-tan