1. Crimson Muffler (2.66 stars, 659 notes)
2. Secret Brigadier (2.73 stars, 954 notes)

LinearFaze wrote:

this is for osu! not taiko

general comments

1. Consider making your hitsounds louder. I know it's a quiet song, but a 5-10% bump would go miles.
2. none of the notes are off-screen per ai-mod but to me it's discomfiting to look at ??
3. I'd say go with AR 6-7; AR 7.5 just seems wayyyyy too fast for how slow this song (generally) is.

particular notes

00:08:287 (2) - slightly off-screen
00:14:218 (5) - is this a slider because the singing is legato? This sounds like 1/2 to me not 1/1
00:19:101 (5) - slightly off-screen
00:20:845 (1) - top of this is slightly off-screen only in editor
00:29:218 (4) - blanket this with 00:28:869 (3)
00:41:427 (1,2) - blanket these two to each other?
00:55:904 (5) - overlaps with previous (but this seems intentional) it is
01:23:811 (4) - this is overlap *AND* going off screen a bit at the top there offscreen is ok, overlap is intentional, but changed shape now so look better I guess
01:30:962 (1) - slightly off-screen esp. during apex of arc
01:32:357 (3) - blanket with 01:32:008 (2) ?
01:36:543 (1) - break this up into a o---o.o. rhythm? or at least blanket with the previous slider it's fine
01:44:218 (6) - the blanket of this slider with 01:44:915 (1) is just a bit off
01:45:962 (3) - slightly off-screen
01:47:008 (5) - changing DS like this is not nice
02:04:101 (5,1) - blanket these two
02:06:543 (5,1) - overlaps intended
02:08:636 (3,4) - why are these stacked partially due to happy being one word I guess
02:17:008 (5,6) - blanket these two
02:23:985 (1) - pretty off-screen at the top no
02:23:985 (1,2) - blanket these two
02:28:520 (4,5) - ^
02:30:962 (5,6) - ^
02:41:427 (1,2) - ^
02:42:125 (2,3) - these are not the same pitch; why are they stackd? more hold I guess
02:46:311 (2,3) - blanket these two
02:48:404 (5,6,7) - that last one goes off the screen a bit
02:49:450 (2) - any particular reason to use a kick slider instead of a triplet here?
03:01:485 (5) - the first slider blankets this one but this one doesn't blanket the one before it. Looks a little odd. nah
03:23:985 (4) - slightly off-screen no
03:40:729 (4) - make this blanket with 03:41:776 (6) if possible
03:56:776 (2) - slightly off-screen at top no
03:59:566 (2,3) - strange overlap
04:05:148 (2) - blanket with 04:06:194 (4)
04:14:566 (2) - move this and that whole sequence down a bit; rght now it just looks like a bad blanket
04:18:404 (1) - off-screen
04:18:840 (2) - do you really need this 1/8 slider? but I mean like it does fit the music nicely
04:20:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is unnecessary ^
04:22:590 (3,4) - blanket these two, perhaps? not everything should be blanketed
04:23:985 (1,2) - this sounds like it should be four different notes not two sliders
04:26:194 (4,5) - I don't hear drumbeats that sound anything like a 1/6 rhythm here - it just sounds like nothing special well, it isn't the drum
04:45:787 (6) - this is a little off-screen no
05:02:357 (6,1) - again, sounds like four different notes not two sliders