Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi Rinzler ~ FIRST MOD YEAH (? (lol) i've requested in another queues but seems like they're busy or something for req via queue

columns: 1|2|3|4

NOVICE Lv.7

00:09:762 - add note in 2?
00:13:762 - ^ i can't add more note in Novice
00:19:477 - delete one note (I think hard for novice)
00:19:905 - ^
00:22:334 - ^
00:25:762 (25762|0) - move to 3 for balance this is a compensation for this note 00:25:191 (25191|2) - , so i must put the next note on the opposite side
00:26:048 - delete one note deleted, and rearranged
00:26:620 - ^
00:27:191 - ^
00:27:762 - ^
00:39:620 (39620|0) - delete and 00:39:620 (30620|1) - move to 4 i don't get it owo), rearranged instead
00:31:191 (31191|2) - delete and 00:31:191 (31191|1) - move to 1 ^
00:31:762 - do same ^ ^
00:32:334 - ^ ^
00:35:762 (35762|2) - delete
00:36:334 (36334|1) - ^
00:36:905 (36905|3) - ^
00:39:477 (36477|0) - ^
00:40:048 (40048|3) - ^
00:40:620 (40620|0) - ^
00:46:905 - put this notes like here http://puu.sh/gzZL0/092ae9563d.jpg
00:52:048 (52048|1) - delete
00:53:762 (53762|2) - ^
00:54:477 (54477|3) - u can convert this double in a ln ending here 00:54:762 - and adding note in 2
00:54:620 (54620|0, 54620|1) - why this double? i used 2 notes for whistle sound like this 00:49:477 (49477|2,49477|0) -
01:01:191 - delete one note
01:02:905 - ^
01:11:334 (71334|3) - delete
01:11:620 (71620|0) - ^
01:12:762 - http://puu.sh/gA0c2/1d0e6ebc42.png change this for this http://puu.sh/gA0cU/d7b5ef0f05.png
01:20:048 (80048|1) - delete
01:23:905 (83905|1) - move to 3 for balance
01:24:477 (84477|3) - ^
01:25:334 (85334|2) - move to 1
01:27:620 (87620|0) - ^ to 4
01:28:477 (88477|2) - ^ to 1
01:30:548 (90548|1) - why this note? if you listen carefully this part is simillar with 00:07:620 - but i didn't put a note there
01:46:620 - delete one note
01:47:762 - ^ and move to 3
01:49:048 - http://puu.sh/gA0xA/9b51b7c1ae.png change this for this http://puu.sh/gA0yV/fb5beeed27.png
01:50:477 - http://puu.sh/gA0EJ/c35471d350.png I think this looks better than http://puu.sh/gA0CE/f932dd41cd.png

ADVANCED Lv.11

It's ADVANCED, no ADVANCE xD LOL I Forgot the D

00:24:762 (24762|3) - move to 3

this diff is so hard x.x re-fix or re-edit because it has many doubles and many streams, and they are so hards XD it's not that hard i guess, that's because this song is 210 bpm, rearranged some part anyway

That's all good luck~

Rinzler wrote:

it's not that hard i guess, that's because this song is 210 bpm

• Artist : かめりあ feat.ななひら かめりあ feat. ななひら　(add space)
  Romanised artist : ok
  Title : ok
  Romanised title : ok
  source : ok
  bg : 1024 × 718 1024 × 768

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's metadate check

request from my queue
no kudos please

• Artist : かめりあ feat.ななひら かめりあ feat. ななひら　(add space)
  Romanised artist : ok
  Title : ok
  Romanised title : ok
  source : ok
  bg : 1024 × 718 1024 × 768

good luck

Rinzler wrote:

Thank you ruberusu, but the title is too long and the detail of the beatmap in forum won't updated unless i cut the title to "Conveyor Sokudo Max!?" is that okay ?

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Rinzler~
Mod from queue

[General]
Mapset: Pretty Good. Dunno why the NOVICE and ADVANCED can't update.
Hitsound:
1. Good Hitsound you have there~ But it still got an earbreaking hitsound. How about I suggest you to add this? This should cover the unhitsounded notes. i know this hitsound thank you ~
2. If you want to add Hitsound on Double Notes, instead of something like this, do it like this. If no, the hitsound will likely destroy the music there.
Timing: Good
Graphic: 1024x718 => 71:50 (Wat) No good. You need to use at least a 4:3 or 16:9 BG. Here's the version that will likely accepted. BG.jpg forgot to edit the BG thanks anyway
Metadate: Source= Conveyor sokudo Max!? Shainin kaiten zushi "Sushi & Peace" - RemyWiki i will consider this, i use this site for metadata
1. Change the Romanised Title to Conveyor sokudo Max!? Shainin kaiten zushi "Sushi & Peace"
2. For the tags, Add 夏だ！休みだ！自由研究オリジナル楽曲コンテスト It's Summer! It's Holiday! Independent Research Original Song Contest
3. Turn off Widescreen Support. It's not like you're planning to add a Storyboard, right?

Column
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[EXHAUST Lv.15]

Mods

As stated on General: Hitsound, you need to remove the double hitsound.
00:04:620 - Add a Clap on one note. Preferrably at the 1 (LN).
00:04:905 (4905|3) - ^
00:06:905 (6905|2,6905|1) - I suggest you to delete one out of these. It didn't sound that strong IMO.
00:07:048 (7048|3) - I think this note should be changed into LN as well as 00:06:905 (6905|0) -
00:07:334 (7334|0) - Delete this. No sound available here except the synth.
00:07:548 - Clearly there's a sound here. Listen carefully with 25% Playback.
00:07:834 - ^
00:07:977 - ^
00:08:548 - ^
00:08:977 - ^
00:08:905 (8905|1) - This LN seems unfitting. Delete?
00:09:120 - You can hear an instrument playing here with 25% playback.
00:09:405 - No sound here. Delete?
00:10:905 - Move 00:10:977 (10977|0,10977|1) - 2 times to right, and Move 00:11:048 (11048|2,11048|3) - 2 times to left. Jacks right? That's necessary when you take Pitch into account. current pattern is still better imo
00:13:762 - Move 00:13:834 (13834|0) - to 4, and Move 00:13:905 (13905|3) - + 00:13:977 (13977|0) - Both to 3. Jacks again.
00:18:334 (18334|3,18370|2,18405|1,18441|0,18477|3,18512|2,18548|1,18584|0) - What sound did these notes follow? I didn't hear any 1/8 notes here. Just change them to an LN. It should fit well. there are
00:18:762 (18762|0,18798|1,18834|2,18870|3) - ^ same as above
00:32:191 (32191|3,32191|2) - What do this Double follow? The previous pattern uses an LN at this kind of sound. Kick sound or something
00:39:477 - Try this http://puu.sh/gB1UL/d2dbafe8e7.png http://puu.sh/gB1UL/d2dbafe8e7.png (The next image) no thanks, if i added this, it'll hurts since i've put the chordstream after this note
00:41:762 to 00:43:858 - How about turning these into Triple Notes?
00:44:429 (44429|3,44429|1,44524|0,44524|2,45000|2,45000|0,45096|3,45096|1) - These notes should be a Jack too.... that's a transition between previous jack and the next jack
00:46:334 (46334|2,46405|1,46477|2,46548|3,46620|0,46691|1,46762|2,46834|1,46905|0) - The stream ends at 00:46:334 there is a sound that represent the note
00:52:191 (52191|1,52191|2) - Move one time to left. Hand Balancing
00:52:334 (52334|2) - Delete this note. This note didn't follow anything IMO.
00:53:191 (53191|0,53191|2,53262|3,53262|1,53334|2,53334|0,53405|3,53405|1,53477|2,53477|0) - These should be Jack. i know, even though these are same sound, but i love the current pattern
00:56:762 (56762|1,56905|2) - Delete these. These notes didn't resemble any sound IMO.
01:00:096 (60096|1,60143|2) - Delete. These 1/6 aren't necessary. there are
01:02:334 - Try this http://puu.sh/gB7PZ/c2d4c697e3.png it will kill your left fingers if you put a jack on the left side and this is a 210 bpm song, added on right side
01:19:477 (79477|2,79477|3,79548|1,79548|0,79620|2,79620|3,79691|1,79691|0) - I think Jacks should fit here.... yep i know it'll fit with jack
01:34:905 (94905|0,94905|3,95000|2,95000|1,95096|3,95096|1,95191|3,95191|0) - ^ rearranged instead
01:35:977 - You can add note here.
01:36:834 - ^
01:41:477 (101477|3,101512|2,101548|1,101584|0,101620|3,101655|2,101691|1,101727|0) - Um, Change to LN. These 1/8 aren't necessary. (It's actually still heard as 1/12 or 1/16 even with 25% playback, so it's either 1/48 or 1/64 which can't be reached).
01:42:048 - Try something like this http://puu.sh/gB85V/9e6cc01f41.png rearranged

Will Mod NOV and ADV later when the files are working normally.... NVM It's just because a change on Diff Name.... Will bump with the other Diffs Mod.

EDIT: The Mod for NOVICE and ADVANCED

[NOVICE Lv.7]

Mods

Wow, it reached 2 star.... This could ended being unrankable issues. I didn't blame you for this, the Song itself pretty much asked for a boss map (Cametek songs with 210BPM). So maybe the mod pretty much aiming to lessen the Star Difficulty Rating.
00:13:762 (13762|1) - Move to 00:13:620
00:13:762 (13762|3) - This LN ends at 00:14:048 , while you can add LN on 00:14:048 and ends it at 00:14:334
00:23:762 to 00:25:477 - Change the Doubles to Singles
00:28:334 to 00:30:048 - ^
00:32:905 to 00:34:048 - ^
00:40:048 (40048|1,40191|0) - Delete this, as in the previous pattern it doesn't like this.
00:40:620 (40620|1,40762|3) - ^
00:41:620 (41620|0) - Delete. It doesn't have any significant sound.
00:46:905 (46905|1,47024|0,47143|2,47286|1) - Better change this to LN from 00:46:905 to 00:47:477 . Pattern following Vocal doesn't NOVICE-friendly (Or if you want to create the 2nd Bangin' Burst or Water Horizon, but that's should be hard to ranked).
00:48:905 (48905|0) - Delete this. Double should works fine.
00:51:620 (51620|1,51691|2,51762|3,51905|2,51977|3,52048|0) - 1/4? No wonder the Star Rating went higher than 2 star.... Delete the 1/4?
00:55:191 (55191|3) - Doesn't really like fit for Double.
00:56:334 (56334|3) - ^
00:56:834 (56834|2,57048|1) - Delete these. It would just discomfort NOVICE players....
01:00:620 (60620|0,60762|1,60905|2,61048|3) - Better you change these LNs into Normal Notes.
01:03:762 (63762|2) - Delete. Doesn't really like fitting for loud sounds.
01:05:477 (65477|2,66048|1) - Delete. Just Single is fine for the Bell (Plus you signify them with Hitsounds).
01:06:620 (66620|3) - ^
01:07:762 (67762|3,68334|2) - ^
LN ends at 01:51:477

[ADVANCED Lv.11]

Mods

00:04:191 - Add one more note to signify the SDVX FX
00:04:477 - ^
00:04:620 (4620|0,4905|3) - Add Clap here.
00:05:191 - Add note here? Signifying the Beat and for The SDVX FX.
00:07:548 - You can add more note here.
00:07:905 (7905|1) - Move to 00:07:834 . The Sound to follow is right there. added a note instead
00:07:977 - Add one note here. There's a sound to follow here.
00:08:977 - You can add one note here.
00:09:762 - Add one more note to signify the Kick.
01:16:262 (76262|2) - Move to 01:16:120 . The Hat sounds seems to be here.
01:35:977 - You can add note here.
01:36:834 - ^
LN ends at 01:51:477

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Rinzler-chan >.<)/
Mod from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( ? ) wa... diff gapmu antara NOV dngan ADV selisi 1,5 star, hati2 bisa menjadi unrankable, diskusi sama BN/QAT soal ini Quoted from Spy : http://puu.sh/gCDli/e5fe775e8e.png, will reduce the stars diff in adv
Metadata : ( ? ) wah agak gimana yah klu psang ini 夏だ！休みだ！自由研究オリジナル楽曲コンテスト ditag kan sdh ada translatenya, bisa tmbahkan Bemani dan Masaya Oya sbagai alias dari Camellia
Timing : ( ? ) spertinya kiaimu lebih cocok disini deh 00:48:620 impactnya ga berasa, keep
Audio : ( √ )
Background : ( √ ) Moe BG :3

4K = |1|2|3|4|

NOVICE Lv.7

00:35:762 (35762|0) pindah ke 3 balance hand it's fine i guess
00:35:905 (35905|1) pindah ke 4 ^
00:36:334 (36334|0) pindah ke 2 ^
00:36:477 (36477|2) pindah ke 1 ^
00:36:905 (36905|3) pindah ke 3 ^
00:37:048 (37048|1) pindah ke 4 ^
00:37:191 (37191|3) pindah ke 1 ^
01:42:048 (102048|3) pindah ke 2 ^
01:46:191 (106191|3) pindah ke 2?
01:46:762 (106762|0,107048|1) Ctrl + G
01:47:762 bukannya harus 1 note, liat disini 01:46:620 dan 01:49:048 for consistency?

ADVANCED Lv.11

01:07:048 tmbah note, check 01:04:762
01:36:048 tmbah note? suaranya ga begitu keras saya rasa
01:36:191 ^
01:49:191 (109191|0,109191|3) lebih cocok deh pindah ke 2 & 3 keep
wah diff ini rasanya sperti mendekati EXH :v reduced some notes in adv

EXHAUST Lv.15

00:08:905 tmbah note untk consistency
00:19:620 (19620|1) remove SDVX FX
00:30:941 (30941|1,30977|2) mending Ctrl + G memang sengaja dibikin kaya gitu
00:31:512 (31512|2,31548|1) ^ sama kaya ditas
00:32:084 (32084|1,32120|2) ^ ^
00:39:548 tambah note?
00:51:191 tmbah note? ada neko sound :v hmpir sma sperti disini 00:48:905 disana memang sengaja pake 3 note, emphasizing kiai time, dan bukan di map ke suara kucing
01:00:334 disini jg ^ ^
01:13:477 (73477|3) - nah ini baru varokah :v ^
01:16:548 tmbah note no sound, keep
01:37:120 - 01:37:477 sy dnger stream sound disini tmbah LN jika kau mau nope

Hibiki Lover~ lol She is my waifu <3
Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, my Modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Novice Lv.7

SPOILER

*00:18:048 (18048|3,18048|2) - shift them 2 times to the left, plot it as a narrow image
of 00:18:048 (18048|3,18048|2) -
You may later Press Ctrl + H on 00:18:334 (18334|0,18620|3,18620|1) -

*00:19:191 (19191|2) - move to 4, widened gap seem better imo
01:11:905 (71905|2) - move to 2 for pattern
01:12:191 (72191|1) - move to 4 pattern flow

*01:12:762 (72762|1,72905|0) - shift them 1 time to the right, and
01:13:048 (73048|2) - move to 1, resuming stair 01:12:762 (72762|2,72905|1,73048|0) -

*01:36:477 (96477|0) - move to 2
^All Appiled ~

Advanced Lv.11

SPOILER

00:40:762 (40762|1,40762|0) - suggest to align them the same with 00:40:620 (40620|2,40620|0) -

*01:09:905 (69905|0,70191|0) - Move them to column 2 instead
01:10:334 (70334|1) - Move to 1
01:10:620 (70620|3) - Move this long note to 3 and 01:10:905 (70905|2) - to 4 instead
All Applied

- Good luck with your map c:

Muu-chan wrote:

Hi there ｡◕‿◕｡ mod here as requested from ✿Nekoworks
All of them are just suggestions, you can decline it if unnecessary ｡◕‿◕｡
|1|2|3|4|

Novice Lv.7

* Nice difficulty ^^ i don't find any mean problem here~ But i just think it is a little bit hard for Novice.
Little thing
* 00:44:334 (44334|0,44620|1,44905|2,45191|1) - i suggest to delete them~ it would be better if only following the "hiii~" vocal. Beside that, it is novice difficulty~ Try to make a simple one ^^ she says it "Waaaaaasaaaaabiiiii" i guess
* 01:29:905 (89905|3,90048|2,90191|1,90334|3,90548|1,90762|2,90905|3) - same here with ^
* 00:56:191 - i suggest to add note here for vocal, same with 00:54:762 (54762|2,54905|1) -
All Applied ~

everything seems fine to me (after checking with kruzon san's mod too~ ^^ beside that i can't really mod a SDVX song because of that noisy sound .w.
uhm sorry for delay and really a little mod ;w; it's okay, i don't mind
GOOD LUCK >n<" take my star then xD thank you >w<

Lenfried- wrote:

Offset is good
no kds

rhalp10 wrote:

HERES MY MOD

[Conveyor Sokudo Max!? Shining*Kaiten Zushi "Sushi & Peace"]

[NOVICE Lv.7]
00:07:191 (7191|2,7191|3) - Ctrl +Left Arrow keep
00:08:905 (8905|2,8905|1) - Ctrl+Right Arrow
00:51:191 (51191|3) - Move 2 i love the current pattern, keep
[ADVANCED Lv.11]
00:50:620 (50620|2,50905|1) - Ctrl+Right Arrow Keep
[EXHAUST Lv.15]
01:03:334 (63334|3) - Add 4

Good Luck <3

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

wtf


anyway you need a difficult under 2.00 star for this mapset

Starry- wrote:

Erm...

Count 0123

[EXHAUST Lv.15]

00:01:191 (1191|0) - end it 00:01:762 - to make room for spreading these out 00:01:834 (1834|2,1905|1,1977|2,2048|1) -

00:04:191 (4191|3) - Etc. these patterns could feel cleaner. For this, try:
00:04:191 (4191|3) - Move to 1
00:04:334 (4334|1) - Move to 2
00:04:477 (4477|0,4477|2) - Move right by 1
00:04:620 (4620|3) - Move to 2

00:06:334 (6334|3) - Try: (more clean)

Ex.1

00:13:762 (13762|3,13834|3) - This is a jack but 00:13:905 (13905|2,13977|1) - isn't?
00:13:905 (13905|2) - Move to 1
00:14:048 (14048|2) - Add at 3 for the fx

00:17:048 (17048|2) - Move to 1 for balance.

00:25:477 (25477|3) - LN here but not for 00:25:191 - ? i didn't follow the vocal, just like this 00:30:048 (30048|0) -

00:58:905 (58905|3,59048|2,59191|3,59334|2,59477|3,59620|2) - No need for this repetition, best to spread these notes out. okay, re arranged

01:00:477 (60477|2) - Move to 1 for balance and plays a lot better.

01:22:334 (82334|3,82405|2,82477|3,82620|3,82691|2,82762|3,82834|2) - Unbalanced stream, best to spread it out. re arranged

[ADVANCED Lv.11]

00:03:334 (3334|1) - Move to 0, works better with chords you put

00:05:334 (5334|0) - Move to 2, no need for this anchor

00:24:620 (24620|3) - Move to 2
00:24:762 (24762|2) - Move to 3
00:24:905 (24905|0) - Move to 2, plays better.

00:32:905 (32905|0) - Move to 2 for balance.

00:52:334 (52334|2) - Move to 0
00:52:477 (52477|0) - Move to 2 so it can be another close together chord for the fx
00:52:620 (52620|2) - Move to 1 for balance after

01:15:048 (75048|3) - Move to 1
01:15:120 (75120|1) - Move to 0, this stream is unnecessarily awkward.

01:47:048 (107048|2) - Move to 1 or 3 for balance.
^All applied
[NOVICE Lv.7]

00:02:905 (2905|1) - Move to 2
00:03:048 (3048|3) - Move to 1
00:03:334 (3334|1) - Move to 0, more balanced pattern this way.

00:14:620 (14620|2) - Move to 3

00:30:762 (30762|1,31334|2) - Big jumps might be confusing for new players, CTRL+H.

00:44:048 (44048|1) - Move to 2, balances it out.

00:50:620 (50620|2,50905|1) - CTRL+H for balance.

01:03:334 (63334|2) - Move to 3 for balance.

01:07:048 (67048|0) - Move to 1 for balance.

01:17:762 (77762|1,78334|0) - CTRL+G for balance.

01:40:905 (100905|0,101191|3) - Maybe best to have LNs here.
^All applied
[]

Really sleepy~ 3am, goodluck.

@Harbyter it's a bug, the desc doesn't update, but novice is under 2*.

schwarzvgrune wrote:

NM

exhaust
00:04:405 - add a note, clear audible emphasis of the beat. i will consider this
00:04:548 - ^ ^

00:11:262 - audible sound you're following. add ^
00:11:405 - ^

00:56:620 (56620|2,56620|1,56834|0,56834|3,57048|1,57048|0) - how about using 3 notes instead? very strong emphasis, to differentiate with ur earlier pattern of only useing 2 notes.
00:57:334 (57334|0,57334|3) - '
01:01:191 (61191|2,61191|0,61334|1,61334|3,61620|0,61620|1) - ^

01:03:048 (63048|3,63048|2) - add a note, you do that here 01:03:334 (63334|3,63334|0,63334|2) - removed the notes and use 2 notes instead
same emphasis, so use same amount of note



advanced
00:08:405 - add a note consistency. there is no sound imo, keep

the rest are fine