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DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. Firstly, a major problem lies within the BPM. The BPM that you used was 64.41. Rarely will you ever need to adjust a BPM to the hundredth. Jloughman14 and I have both attempted to fix the BPM and we've both gotten numbers ~129. Please be sure to re-adjust the BPM. Because of this problem, we are not able to mod this map fully, as the map can be fixed. Please be sure to fix the BPM and adjust timing points first, and PM me or send another request for further modding.

thanks

DahplA wrote:

General

1. Once again, after a check I suggest you change the offset to 4679.
2. Since so many offset changes have happened, green lines and the preview point have not been snapped to place.
   
   SPOILER

   http://puu.sh/gvIkx/128849828a.PNG

Normal

1. 00:05:156 (2) - Doesn't stack properly with 00:04:691 (1) - (use numberless skin to help). IDK what this is?
2. There are multiple areas where sliders are placed so the path goes out of the mapping area. These include 00:16:307 (3) - 00:31:191 (1) - 00:33:051 (1) -
3. 00:23:749 (6) - slider is too close to the bottom of the play area.
4. 00:37:237 (4) - NC
5. 00:49:795 (3) - ^
6. 00:57:237 (2) - ^
7. 00:58:633 (3) - ^
8. 01:04:679 (4) - ^
9. 01:09:795 (6) - ^
10. 01:12:121 (1) - ^
11. 01:01:423 (2) - This slider has too many points. Change this.

Easy

1. 00:18:180 (4) - NC
2. 00:21:901 (5) - ^
3. 00:25:621 (6) - ^
4. 00:36:784 (3) - ^
5. 00:40:505 (3) - ^
6. 00:53:528 (3) - ^
7. 01:00:040 (3) - ^
8. 01:00:970 (1) - Remove NC
9. 01:09:342 (3) - NC
10. 01:15:854 (3) - NC

Everything still on the list is what I changed
Thanks for the mod

From my queue!

[Normal]-00:08:399 (1,1,1) - - The spacing here is a little much for a normal mode. I would bring these ones a little closer!
-00:08:399 (1,1,1,2,1) - This should all be one combo, instead of multiple combo's. There is nothing wrong with it, but it seemed a bit odd to start multiple combo's on one part of the song.
-00:12:585 (1,1,2) - Same thing here as well, I would make it into one combo.
-00:58:632 (3) - If you listen at this part, your slider hit is just a tad bit early! I would put a two slider blanket here, the first one starting at 00:58:865 (3) , and ending at 00:59:330, and the second one starting at 00:59:562 (4), and ending at 01:00:260! If you do this, it flows well with the vocals and a much more appeasing transition!
- 01:04:911 (2) - Something is a bit odd with this repeating slider. I can't quite put my finger on it, but some thing sounds odd here.
-01:07:004 (2) - I would shorten this slider to 01:07:237, and add one more slider at 01:07:237! With this, it's on time with the vocals. The last one you had sounded incomplete with her singing!
-01:12:120 (1,2) - The jump/spacing is a little much between these two! I would bring them closer!
-01:19:562 (1,2) - I would delete these two, and add a slider starting at 01:19:562 and ending at 01:19:911!
-01:20:492 (5,6) - I would delete these also, and add a slider starting at 01:20:492 and ending at 01:20:841!
-01:20:260- If you end up liking the two slider changes I recommended above, make sure to add a circle at the time I posted on this bullet point! That way its completely on time with vocal climax point! ( I recommend doing a blanket on the two sliders and circle!)

Aura893 wrote:

From my queue!

[Normal]-00:08:399 (1,1,1) - - The spacing here is a little much for a normal mode. I would bring these ones a little closer!

I used distance snap so putting them closer would change lots of things but I will consider it

-00:08:399 (1,1,1,2,1) - This should all be one combo, instead of multiple combo's. There is nothing wrong with it, but it seemed a bit odd to start multiple combo's on one part of the song.

Didn't change this because the combo colours go with the video

-00:12:585 (1,1,2) - Same thing here as well, I would make it into one combo.

Same as above

-00:58:632 (3) - If you listen at this part, your slider hit is just a tad bit early! I would put a two slider blanket here, the first one starting at 00:58:865 (3) , and ending at 00:59:330, and the second one starting at 00:59:562 (4), and ending at 01:00:260! If you do this, it flows well with the vocals and a much more appeasing transition!

Changed it

- 01:04:911 (2) - Something is a bit odd with this repeating slider. I can't quite put my finger on it, but some thing sounds odd here.

I don't know what it is either sadly

-01:07:004 (2) - I would shorten this slider to 01:07:237, and add one more slider at 01:07:237! With this, it's on time with the vocals. The last one you had sounded incomplete with her singing!

Changed it

-01:12:120 (1,2) - The jump/spacing is a little much between these two! I would bring them closer!

Added a circle in-between to make them sorta closer

-01:19:562 (1,2) - I would delete these two, and add a slider starting at 01:19:562 and ending at 01:19:911!
-01:20:492 (5,6) - I would delete these also, and add a slider starting at 01:20:492 and ending at 01:20:841!
-01:20:260- If you end up liking the two slider changes I recommended above, make sure to add a circle at the time I posted on this bullet point! That way its completely on time with vocal climax point! ( I recommend doing a blanket on the two sliders and circle!)

Changed it

Thank you so much for giving your time to mod my map. I really appreciate it, thank you

From Modding Queue (Even tho these are pretty much all what I'm bad at modding):

[General]
May need epilepsy warning, the video contains flashing lights.
Needs to have the volume overall reduced for the points, the notes overpower the music
Maintain consistent starting points, all difficulties but easy start at the uninherited point

[Easy]
00:47:004 (1) - You probably shouldn't end this on a red tick

[Normal]
00:47:702 (2) - ^
00:58:865 (3,4) - Fix blanket

[Hard]
00:23:283 (3,4) - Change this to what is shown below.

You can make it look like this

00:24:795 (6,7) - Move this over, make it what's below

http://puu.sh/i9fuH/15995af766.jpg
The style of blanket previously doesn't look very nice, and you will have to change the slider anyways to be shorter
00:32:237 (1) - Move to the red tick
00:38:632 (5) - Make slider end longer to be on white tick, it sounds nicer
00:41:888 (4,5,6) - I suggest moving it to be like below, and adding a note

00:44:213 (1) - Move this to the white tick
00:46:074 (4) - Make slider end on white tick
00:49:795 (1) - Move to white tick
00:55:376 (1) - I know this ain't on a your map but you need to move that note here
01:07:585 (3) - Move to red tick, shorten it by 1/4 beat
01:19:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'mprove the spacing of it, it's messy

[-Deemo-] wrote:

From Modding Queue (Even tho these are pretty much all what I'm bad at modding):

[General]
May need epilepsy warning, the video contains flashing lights.
Needs to have the volume overall reduced for the points, the notes overpower the music
Maintain consistent starting points, all difficulties but easy start at the uninherited point

Fixed all of it

[Easy]
00:47:004 (1) - You probably shouldn't end this on a red tick
Is it an unranked thing? If it is I'll change it, but if not I'll just consider it

[Normal]
00:47:702 (2) - ^
Same with Easy

00:58:865 (3,4) - Fix blanket
Removed blanket and made a different pattern cuz ds wouldn't let me make a better looking blanket than i just had

[Hard]
00:23:283 (3,4) - Change this to what is shown below.

Made changes used your e.g. for improvement

00:24:795 (6,7) - Move this over, make it what's below

http://puu.sh/i9fuH/15995af766.jpg
The style of blanket previously doesn't look very nice, and you will have to change the slider anyways to be shorter
Made changes

00:32:237 (1) - Move to the red tick
Fixed

00:38:632 (5) - Make slider end longer to be on white tick, it sounds nicer
Will consider it

00:41:888 (4,5,6) - I suggest moving it to be like below, and adding a note

Made changes

00:44:213 (1) - Move this to the white tick
Idk I'm not hearing what you hear soz

00:46:074 (4) - Make slider end on white tick
I understand what you're getting at but i prefer how it was before

00:49:795 (1) - Move to white tick
Had a hard decision with this one but i made the changes

00:55:376 (1) - I know this ain't on a your map but you need to move that note here
Idk what you mean, but i did make changes at this time frame

01:07:585 (3) - Move to red tick, shorten it by 1/4 beat
Made changes

01:19:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'mprove the spacing of it, it's messy
Man I thought it looked alright. Well I will try if i can be bothered or if someone suggests a pattern

Thanks man been looking for a mod for this map for a while, you've been great help. Really appreciate what you did for me. Thank you

Hello there. This is a mod from my queue and thanks for calling me a legend. That flattered me.

[General]

1. You have to change the black colour. this is unrankable because players tend to turn of the screen and you can't see the approach circles anymore when that happens

[Hard]

1. ADD HITSOUNDS!
2. 00:05:144 (2,3) - this could be a bit too difficult to read. The polarity is a bit off. you suddenly start a slider on a blue tick and first it's 1/2. I suggest you make a repeating slider so you cover this. Especially at the beginning of the map the player should first become used to the rhythm. so make something like this instead to make it easier to read:
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:06:074 - I suggest you add a 1/2 slider to fill the gap. it feels empty otherwise
4. 00:07:004 (2,3) - same like before. repeating slider maybe? this feels weird and is hard to read
5. 00:08:399 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - why did you suddenly change the rhythm and put in random 1/1's? that doesnt fit at all. it's too boring. how about you go with the drum-rhythm? how about you use something like this for interesting stuff?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:10:725 - you first go with the guitar the whole time and suddenly change that. how about you add guitar here?
7. 00:12:585 - this note is really strong and emphasized but you put it on the end of a slider and this is wrong. how about you make the slider a normal one and add a circle here? the song would really benefit from this
8. 00:14:213 - add a circle because basedrum
9. 00:14:446 (4) - change this into a 1/2 slider for diversity
10. 00:21:190 (1) - this double-repeating slider (kickslider?) doesn't fit the music at all. you could use 1 repeat instead and add a circle at 00:21:888 - because the vocals are really loud and starting anew here. this has to be clicked
11. 00:23:051 - add a circle here. the sound suggests it
12. 00:30:958 - ^
13. 00:33:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - this happens a lot in your map but you use different DS (distant snap) for your 1/2's. Please place your 1/2's consistent. I will point this out only once but it needs to be said
14. 00:36:074 (6) - this slider doesn't fit. instead of a repeating slider put 2 normal 1/2 slider in this
15. 00:37:469 - this should be tipped. i explained reasons for this before. the vocals are strong and all
16. 00:44:097 (1) - the sound starts at 00:44:213 - so don't make the slider start on the blue tick. this doesn't fit the music, plays weird and you know... just doesn't feel good
17. 00:45:376 (3) - change this into two circles instead of a slider to go with the music.
18. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4) - again the spacing. please. don't do this kind of spacing changes. it's not readable at
19. 01:13:051 (5,6) - now you also space the 1/1 wrong.
20. 01:13:748 - this should be tapped again because emphasized vocals.
21. 01:14:213 (6) - again. please don't use a repeating slider here. make a normal slider then put a circle at 01:14:678 - and then again use a slider at 01:14:911 -
22. 01:17:469 (5,6,7,8) - this antijump is not good placed go with normal spacing instead
23. 01:19:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    

The difficulties all have same mistakes so first look at your hard and then try to fix the mistakes with spacing, then wrong placing (putting strong vocals/ notes on slider ends) and then tidy the map up again. Hope this helped you.

After you applied my mod: PLEASE RATE IT IN MY QUEUE p/4213653

Hard wrote:

Hello there. This is a mod from my queue and thanks for calling me a legend. That flattered me.

[General]

1. You have to change the black colour. this is unrankable because players tend to turn of the screen and you can't see the approach circles anymore when that happens

Changed it

[Hard]

1. ADD HITSOUNDS!
   Will do just wanna make sure where i'm placing the notes first
   
2. 00:05:144 (2,3) - this could be a bit too difficult to read. The polarity is a bit off. you suddenly start a slider on a blue tick and first it's 1/2. I suggest you make a repeating slider so you cover this. Especially at the beginning of the map the player should first become used to the rhythm. so make something like this instead to make it easier to read:
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed
   
3. 00:06:074 - I suggest you add a 1/2 slider to fill the gap. it feels empty otherwise
   Added
   
4. 00:07:004 (2,3) - same like before. repeating slider maybe? this feels weird and is hard to read
   Fixed
   
5. 00:08:399 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - why did you suddenly change the rhythm and put in random 1/1's? that doesnt fit at all. it's too boring. how about you go with the drum-rhythm? how about you use something like this for interesting stuff?
   
   SPOILER

   
   Made changes
   
6. 00:10:725 - you first go with the guitar the whole time and suddenly change that. how about you add guitar here?
   Idk what you mean by this?
   
7. 00:12:585 - this note is really strong and emphasized but you put it on the end of a slider and this is wrong. how about you make the slider a normal one and add a circle here? the song would really benefit from this
   Changed it
   
8. 00:14:213 - add a circle because basedrum
   Added
   
9. 00:14:446 (4) - change this into a 1/2 slider for diversity
   Idk about this
   
10. 00:21:190 (1) - this double-repeating slider (kickslider?) doesn't fit the music at all. you could use 1 repeat instead and add a circle at 00:21:888 - because the vocals are really loud and starting anew here. this has to be clicked
    Made changes
    
11. 00:23:051 - add a circle here. the sound suggests it
    Added
    
12. 00:30:958 - ^
    Added
    
13. 00:33:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - this happens a lot in your map but you use different DS (distant snap) for your 1/2's. Please place your 1/2's consistent. I will point this out only once but it needs to be said
    I think I fixed most of it
    
14. 00:36:074 (6) - this slider doesn't fit. instead of a repeating slider put 2 normal 1/2 slider in this
    Made some changes
    
15. 00:37:469 - this should be tipped. i explained reasons for this before. the vocals are strong and all
    Idk what you mean
    
16. 00:44:097 (1) - the sound starts at 00:44:213 - so don't make the slider start on the blue tick. this doesn't fit the music, plays weird and you know... just doesn't feel good
    Fixed
    
17. 00:45:376 (3) - change this into two circles instead of a slider to go with the music.
    Changed
    
18. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4) - again the spacing. please. don't do this kind of spacing changes. it's not readable at
    Made the spacing smaller
    
19. 01:13:051 (5,6) - now you also space the 1/1 wrong.
    I think I fixed it?
    
20. 01:13:748 - this should be tapped again because emphasized vocals.
    made changes
    
21. 01:14:213 (6) - again. please don't use a repeating slider here. make a normal slider then put a circle at 01:14:678 - and then again use a slider at 01:14:911 -
    Made changes
    
22. 01:17:469 (5,6,7,8) - this antijump is not good placed go with normal spacing instead
    Made spacing bigger
    
23. 01:19:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    Still trying to find a solution
    

The difficulties all have same mistakes so first look at your hard and then try to fix the mistakes with spacing, then wrong placing (putting strong vocals/ notes on slider ends) and then tidy the map up again. Hope this helped you.

After you applied my mod: PLEASE RATE IT IN MY QUEUE p/4213653

Thank you, you've been great help really appreciate it

Hi from my queue!


Sorry I couldn't be much help, I'm having trouble with this one myself
Good luck!^^

UltraRik wrote:

Hi from my queue!

Easy

The song setup is a bit much for easy, try somewhere around:
HP 2
OD 2
Tbh I think putting the OD and HP down any lower will make easy, too easy. The diff is already below 1 star so I'll leave it as it is for now

00:47:004 (1) - I would end this on 00:48:399 -
Will consider it cause I really feel that it ends on

00:49:795 (1) - make a return slider?
I made the easy diff so it wouldn't have any short return slider, so that the normal wasn't to familiar you know

Normal

I would prefer it if you distance snapped everything.
I checked and fixed the major ones I think

00:33:051 (1) - Replace with circles since there is no vocal?
I think the slider sounds better

I don't feel like some beats represent the song properly, like 01:08:399 (1,2,3,4) - they just feel like filler beats.
I think it's cause I haven't added hitsounds yet
I'd suggest putting more work into this diff.

Hard

You seem to be very percise with the song setup here,
but this isn't something you should use to try balancing out the playabilty/star difficulty of the map.

Most jump are too much for a hard, and the song is hard to map because it has a lot of wacky beats.
I suggest a remap, with less spacing and more beats. Also try to have a nice looking difficulty without
weird patterns and sudden uncalled for jumps. Some vocals felt like they should be jumpy, and they weren't,
while others were opposite. Try to equally space the diff and mapping it ~3 stars, and after that add some mild jumps.
Will try

Sorry I couldn't be much help, I'm having trouble with this one myself
Good luck!^^

It's alright, I really appreciate the time you gave just to look at my map. Thank you

Via special request


All right. Great job, keep improving.

DahplA wrote:

Via special request

General

1. I decided to edit your mp3 to boost the audio volume. Previously it was very quiet, but now I believe it's fine. No offset or BPM changes
   https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/911 ... pening.mp3
   Thanks changed it
   
2. Disable "Display Epilepsy Warning"
   But there's some flashing colours in the video
   
3. For Hard and Insane, I suggest a spinner from 00:01:423 to 00:04:213
   Added
   
4. Reduce the volume to about 70%
   Changed

Hard

1. 00:04:911 Do this
   
   SPOILER

   
   Will consider it, it matches the music perfectly but i think it'll make hard a bit to difficult you know what i mean. I will probably use this pattern for insane if i make one.
   
2. 00:05:144 (4) - Blanket here
   I will if i make an insane
   
3. 00:06:539 (6) - Make a 1/2 slider
   added
   
4. 00:07:004 (1) - Fix blanket slightly
   I think i fixed it
   
5. 00:11:190 (2) - Move this further away so it indicates 1/1 gap
   Fixed
   
6. 00:20:958 Triple here
   For insane
   
7. 00:21:888 (2,3) - Change this into a 3/4 slider with reverse starting from 2
   Made changes
   
8. 00:23:051 (4,5) - Triple
   For Insane
   
9. 00:25:609 (1) - I would remove this spinner, and add objects in here instead. It's not really the best place for a spinner
   Will consider it
   
10. 00:27:469 This pattern instead
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    
11. 00:29:330 (3) - Fix blanket slightly
    I think I fixed it
    
12. 00:34:911 (3) - I think this should be moved further away to emphasize the vocals
    Moved
    
13. 00:42:353 (5,6,7) - 3/4 slider with reverse
    Changed it
    
14. 00:43:283 Add a 1/1 slider to reduce the gap
    It makes the next notes sound weird imo so decided not to
    
15. 00:46:074 (5,1) - 3/5 slider with reverse
    How do you do this? I did a 3/4 slider instead
    
16. 00:50:260 (3,4) - Ctrl+G these two
    Does this switch it?
    
17. 00:50:958 1/2 slider
    Maybe
    
18. 00:51:423 (1,2) - Triple
    For Insane
    
19. 00:51:655 (2) - Have a slider extend from here to reduce gap
    Maybe
    
20. 00:54:213 This
    
    SPOILER

    
    Made changes
    
    
21. 00:56:772 (5) - Triple
    For Insane
    
22. 00:58:399 2 circles here?
    Added
    
23. 01:05:144 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
    This kinda ruins the flow
    
24. 01:06:074 (1) - Suggestion
    
    SPOILER

    
    Maybe
    
25. 01:07:469 Add object
    It doesn't sound like it's meant to be there
    
26. 01:11:655 (7) - Triple
    For Insane
    
27. 01:21:888 (3) - This slider shape is good, but extend it out a bit more. Make it less cramped

Altered the slider

Normal

1. Needs consistent Distance Spacing
2. 00:08:399 (1) - Why not follow the same pattern, or something similar to remove the gaps
   I attempted to fix it
   
3. 00:33:051 (1) - I think the bend here could use some work
   Idk
   
4. 00:42:818 (1) - I don't think this slider shape is the best idea
   Idk
   
5. 00:47:702 (2) - I advise against slider velocity changes like this one
   Is it an unranked thing?
   
6. 00:50:027 (2) - Can't have more than 1 reverse on sliders in Normal and Easy
   Is it also an unranked thing? Fixed it tho

Easy

1. Just a general note here. In this difficulty (as well as Normal and a bit of Hard), you've included a lot of unnecessary gaps which have sound on them. Make sure you place notes wherever possible. For the Hard mod, I've listed most of them, but you need to fix this issue in Normal and Easy. Lastly, keep in mind that you need to make the Easy more difficult and have consistent distance spacing.
   Will keep it in mind

All right. Great job, keep improving.

Again, would like to thank you for taking your time to mod this map AGAIN. Really appreciate it.

I'm here for timing fixes, and because of the song. I used a program from here.

offset: 5182
bpm: 128.9

Cyllinus wrote:

I'm here for timing fixes, and because of the song. I used a program from here.

offset: 5182
bpm: 128.9

Changed the offset
btw, so you helped me without me asking? If you did thanks really appreciate what you did