1. Hard - 4Key (2,4 stars, 266 notes)
2. Normal - 4Key (1,54 stars, 179 notes)

Steinstwo wrote:

mods Easy

just 00:58:483 (58483|0) - - at here 00:58:483 (58483|1) -

mods NM

00:05:500 (5500|0) - finish like this 00:05:500 (5500|0) -
00:34:090 (34090|1,34090|0) - you can add notes here
00:38:078 (38078|0) - finish here 00:38:078 (38078|0) -
01:02:063 (62063|2) - finish here 01:02:063 (62063|2) -
you can add LN here 01:06:635 (66635|0) -

mods HD

00:05:437 (5437|0) - lije this 00:05:500 (5500|0) -
00:34:090 (34090|2,34090|0,34090|1) - you can add note here too
00:38:078 (38078|1,38078|0) - like this too.
00:40:941 (40941|3) - line white
00:41:657 (41657|1) - line white
00:42:373 (42373|0,42373|2,42731|3) - red line
00:49:533 (49533|0) - line white
00:50:965 (50965|2) - LN finish here 00:50:965 (50965|2) -
00:51:681 (51681|1) - LN finish here
00:53:829 (53829|2) - LN finish here
00:55:261 (55261|3) - LN finish here
00:56:693 (56693|1) - LN finish red line
00:18:062 (18062|0) - 00:19:090 (19090|0) - 00:20:090 (20090|0) - 00:21:090 (21090|0) - 00:22:090 (22090|1) - 00:23:090 (23090|1) - 00:24:090 (24090|2) - 00:25:090 (25090|2) - 00:26:090 (26090|1) - 00:27:090 (27090|1) - 00:28:090 (28090|1) - 00:30:090 (30090|0) - 00:31:090 (31090|0) - 00:32:090 (32090|2) - 00:33:090 (33090|2) - red line
00:58:483 (58483|0) - finish red line too

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

yo random check

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asdf - important

General

1. Disable Widescreen Support while there's no SB :C
2. You haven't combo colours yet. I choose for you :
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 128,128,192
   Combo2 : 128,128,255
   Combo3 : 0,128,255
   Combo4 : 128,0,128

3. I suggest to add AudioLeadIn : 2000 because the objects appears very faster
   

   AudioLeadIn: 2000

4. There's a spread gap between Normal Collab and Nikollo's Hard.Normal have 1.71 stars while Hard have 3.51 stars.Considering making the normal diff a bit harder or making the hard a bit easier I choose hard since looks like an Insane diff :p
5. Remove ''shoujo'' from tags while it's placed at source and add to the tags ''Nikollo'' since is the GDer of your map and ''piano'' because this is a piano song.Don't forget to add ''instrumental'' to tags.

Normal Collab

1. Why you not use here 1.0x or 0.9x DS ? The current DS is 1.1x which is equal with the SV and maybe you should change =/
2. 00:01:500(1)- I suggest to remove here NC because there's no new instruments.Also for next note keep the NC
3. 00:02:500(5,6,7)- I suggest to rotate the whole pattern by 4 degress for a better and balanced flow.The current makes the flow unbalanced and desoriented
4. 00:05:500(2)- Add here the NC because there cames the piano with a louder sound.Also rotate it by -2 degress and then move the last gap to 337|302 for a better cursor movement http://puu.sh/gIGmc/a80375081a.jpg
5. 00:08:500(1)- Rotate it by -20 degress to make a pattern with previous slider for flow improvement
6. 00:18:090(1,2,3,4,5)- There's some beats which are ignored D: I suggest to use this rhythm http://puu.sh/gIHX6/ba6a20897a.jpg to follow the piano rhythm much better and to add sounds on important beats
7. 00:25:090(5)- Instead adding a 1/1 slider with 3 reverses I mean 3/1 slider it will be much better for piano if you add just a 1/2 slider and 2 notes then http://puu.sh/gIIgZ/9a8616545f.jpg

I will stop here unfortunately :C This map needs a lot of work especially on rhythms and on missing beats , NCs , patterns , blankets and flows.
And about metadata , try to talk with some QATs or BNs

Good Luck ~

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

yo random check

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General

1. Disable Widescreen Support while there's no SB :C
2. You haven't combo colours yet. I choose for you :
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 128,128,192
   Combo2 : 128,128,255
   Combo3 : 0,128,255
   Combo4 : 128,0,128

3. I suggest to add AudioLeadIn : 2000 because the objects appears very faster
   

   AudioLeadIn: 2000

4. There's a spread gap between Normal Collab and Nikollo's Hard.Normal have 1.71 stars while Hard have 3.51 stars.Considering making the normal diff a bit harder or making the hard a bit easier I choose hard since looks like an Insane diff :p
5. Remove ''shoujo'' from tags while it's placed at source and add to the tags ''Nikollo'' since is the GDer of your map and ''piano'' because this is a piano song.Don't forget to add ''instrumental'' to tags.

Normal Collab

1. Why you not use here 1.0x or 0.9x DS ? The current DS is 1.1x which is equal with the SV and maybe you should change =/ - No changes. I like 1.1 DS. Maybe I'll fix it later.
2. 00:01:500(1)- I suggest to remove here NC because there's no new instruments. Also for next note keep the NC. NC on 00:01:500(1) removed. Added NC there 00:02:500 (1)
3. 00:02:500(5,6,7)- I suggest to rotate the whole pattern by 4 degress for a better and balanced flow.The current makes the flow unbalanced and desoriented Fixed
4. 00:05:500(2)- Add here the NC because there cames the piano with a louder sound.Also rotate it by -2 degress and then move the last gap to 337|302 for a better cursor movement http://puu.sh/gIGmc/a80375081a.jpg Fixed
5. 00:08:500(1)- Rotate it by -20 degress to make a pattern with previous slider for flow improvement Rotated by -15 degrees.
6. 00:18:090(1,2,3,4,5)- There's some beats which are ignored D: I suggest to use this rhythm http://puu.sh/gIHX6/ba6a20897a.jpg to follow the piano rhythm much better and to add sounds on important beats Dereku's part
7. 00:25:090(5)- Instead adding a 1/1 slider with 3 reverses I mean 3/1 slider it will be much better for piano if you add just a 1/2 slider and 2 notes then http://puu.sh/gIIgZ/9a8616545f.jpg Dereku's part

I will stop here unfortunately :C This map needs a lot of work especially on rhythms and on missing beats , NCs , patterns , blankets and flows.
And about metadata , try to talk with some QATs or BNs

Good Luck ~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Dereku-san >.<)/

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Hi Dereku-san >.<)/
Mod from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( X ) If you add an additional 4K difficulty to your set, you must also design a whole 4K spread, same with 5K and 7K
Metadata : ( X ) in tag: delete katawa, is already in source
Timing : ( X ) Check Aimod
Audio : ( X ) you must use hitsound
Background : ( √ )

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)

box "EZ 4K":
00:05:500 - add note, high pitch sound
00:25:340 - add note?
00:26:090 - ^
00:33:590 (33590|0) - remove
00:53:829 (53829|3) - should end here 00:55:261
00:55:261 (55261|3) - move diffirent collum & end here 00:56:693
00:58:483 (58483|1,58483|0) - orz, hear piano end
01:02:063 (62063|2) - ^


box "NM 4K":
00:04:500 (4500|1,5000|3) - why 1 note? check 00:04:000
00:10:500 (10500|2,11000|3,11500|2) - i think remove, this sound similiar like 00:10:000 (10000|3)
00:20:840 (20840|0) - move to 4, hand balance
00:21:340 (21340|1,21590|2) - Ctrl + G
00:25:590 (25590|2,25840|1) - ^
00:33:340 (33340|1,33340|0,33590|1,33590|2,33840|2,33840|3) - i can't understand this pattern


box "HD 4K":
00:04:500 (4500|3,5000|2) - same problem NM 4K
00:49:175 (49175|0) move to 2, follow stair sound

Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Timing : ( X ) Check Aimod | I do not like SV. Without timing sections map becomes difficult.

1. You are mapping a normal diff, do not use a huge jump. Changing DS isn't fobidden, but, if it's too much, or too close, don't do it. If you want to increase the spacing, I'd suggest to use 1,4~1,6 ; not something like 2,40, it's a way too much.
2. 00:00:000 (1,2,3) - Why your spacing is inconsistent ? Your spacing between 1 & 2 is 1,2 and your spacing between 2 & 3 is 0,8. Make it consistent.
3. 00:03:000 (2) - that's what I'm talking about, just don't use a big jump like this on normal
4. 00:03:000 (2,3) - If you want a anti jump here, just stack it. Because atm, it can only be confusing with the irregular spacing.
5. 00:03:500 (3,1,2) - So, what is your basic DS ? 1,2 ? 0,8 ? 1,0 ? those one are consistent, but I can't find which one is supposed to be your basic DS, since it's irregular.
6. 00:05:000 (2,1) - the jump is really weird for a normal diff, especially with the confusion.
7. 00:05:500 (1,2,3,4) - still the same thing, I still don't which DS you are using, since it's irregular
8. 00:08:500 (5,1) - anti jump doesn't fit here. Also, just don't use it on normal, and also, even if you stack it won't be really good, just use a normal DS.
9. 00:10:000 (2,1,2) - just don't use jump on normal diff.
10. 00:14:000 (3) - ^
11. 00:18:590 (1) - 00:19:590 (1) - NC isn't necessary here.
12. 00:20:590 (1,2,3) - the irregular spacing is really weird.
13. 00:20:090 - 00:20:590 - swap NC.
14. 00:22:340 (6) - add NC to be more consistent.
15. 00:23:090 - just don't use jumps.
16. 00:23:590 (1) - remove NC to be more consistent.
17. 00:25:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:31:090 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:33:090 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing is weird + this part is a way harder than the other. You have to tap the whole part 1/2 compared to other part.
18. 00:28:590 (1,2,3,1) - ^ same thing goes here, without the spacing.
19. 00:26:090 (5) - add a NC to be more consistent.
20. 00:27:090 (7) - Just don't use jump.
21. 00:28:090 (10,1) - swap NC.
22. 00:29:340 (1) - remove NC it's better with the piano for both of them.
23. 00:32:590 (2) - don't use jump, especially when it's not really good to read with the stack.
24. 00:33:840 (4) - the last note can be a 1/4 slider, it's sound better with the piano here : 00:33:965 -
25. 00:38:078 (1,2) - 00:39:509 (4,1) - I don't recommend you to use 2 different kind of stack on a normal diff.
26. 00:40:583 (2,3) - the anti jump is really weird on normal diff.
27. 00:46:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the fact it's only circles, make it a way harder than it's supposed to be. Try to change some circle to 1/2 sliders.
28. 00:43:805 (1,2,3) - again inconsistent spacing.
29. 00:51:681 (3,1,1) - same goes here.
30. 00:53:113 (1) - the NC isn't necessary here, you can remove it.
31. 00:53:113 (1,2) - I do not recommend this kind of stack on a normal diff.
32. 01:06:374 (2) - resnap this note on the red tick

1. 00:00:000 (1,2,3,4) - I highly suggest to use the same spacing between those note
2. 00:02:000 (5) - add NC for the piano.
3. 00:21:840 (4,1) - I highly suggest to make 1 more spaced to 4. Because it's actually look like this pattern : 00:30:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . But it has a different timeline.
4. 00:33:090 (7) - add a NC here, the combo is really long.
5. 00:44:521 - I think this note should be clicked instead of this one : 00:44:163 - .
6. 00:48:459 (4,5) - don't hide the arrow with a circle.
7. 00:49:533 - I'd be better to click this note which is stronger. So, I think it should be better to make this slider 00:48:817 (5) - without kick, and then add a circle here : 00:49:533 -

1. 00:04:500 (5,6) - don't kill your spacing for the sake of blanket D:
2. 00:26:090 (5,1) - swap NC, it'd be better for the piano.
3. 00:45:237 (1,2) - the anti jump here doesn't flow really well, use the same spacing as the other circle/slider in this part.

1. 00:05:437 (5437|0) - this note is more high pitched than this one 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - .
   So I think it should be better to move this note : 00:05:437 (5437|0) - to |4| ; and then move those one : 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - to |1| & |5|
2. The strong note is actually here : 00:18:965 - and not here 00:19:090 - . So the double note should be there 00:18:965 - and not there : 00:19:090 - .
   Maybe try something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2947429
3. 00:19:965 (19965|1,20090|5,20090|0) - same thing goes here
4. 00:20:965 (20965|1,21090|5,21090|0) - ^
5. 00:21:965 (21965|1,22090|0,22090|5) - ^
6. 00:22:965 (22965|1,23090|5,23090|0) - ^
7. 00:23:965 (23965|1,24090|5,24090|0) - ^
8. 00:26:965 (26965|1,27090|0,27090|5) - ^
9. 00:27:965 (27965|1,28090|5,28090|0) - ^
10. 00:28:965 (28965|1,29090|0,29090|5) - ^
11. 00:30:965 (30965|2,31090|0,31090|5) - ^
12. 00:31:965 (31965|2,32090|0,32090|5) - ^
13. 00:32:965 (32965|1,33090|0,33090|5) - ^
14. 00:29:965 - add another note on |6| ?
15. 00:51:681 (51681|3) - this note sounds a lil more high pitched than the previous one, move it to |6| ?

Kin wrote:

• 
  [Awang's 6K]
  
  

1. 00:05:437 (5437|0) - this note is more high pitched than this one 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - .
   So I think it should be better to move this note : 00:05:437 (5437|0) - to |4| ; and then move those one : 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - to |1| & |5| ok
2. The strong note is actually here : 00:18:965 - and not here 00:19:090 - . So the double note should be there 00:18:965 - and not there : 00:19:090 - .
   Maybe try something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2947429 i heard otherwise did You hear it at a slower speed? nice pattern tho xP
3. 00:19:965 (19965|1,20090|5,20090|0) - same thing goes here same
4. 00:20:965 (20965|1,21090|5,21090|0) - ^ same
5. 00:21:965 (21965|1,22090|0,22090|5) - ^ same
6. 00:22:965 (22965|1,23090|5,23090|0) - ^ same
7. 00:23:965 (23965|1,24090|5,24090|0) - ^ welp same
8. 00:26:965 (26965|1,27090|0,27090|5) - ^ same
9. 00:27:965 (27965|1,28090|5,28090|0) - ^ same
10. 00:28:965 (28965|1,29090|0,29090|5) - ^ hmm
11. 00:30:965 (30965|2,31090|0,31090|5) - ^ Y'know
12. 00:31:965 (31965|2,32090|0,32090|5) - ^ I maYbe heard it wrong but
13. 00:32:965 (32965|1,33090|0,33090|5) - ^ I'm kind of positive that these are wrong ;w;w;w;
14. 00:29:965 - add another note on |6| ? welp
15. 00:51:681 (51681|3) - this note sounds a lil more high pitched than the previous one, move it to |6| ? ok?

well, that's all from me, good luck ~

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Title:Jitter
TitleUnicode:Jitter
Artist:NicolArmarfi
ArtistUnicode:NicolArmarfi
Creator:Dereku
Version:Awang's 6K
Source:Katawa Shoujo
Tags:4Leaf Hanako Steinstwo Nikollo Awang411 instrumental piano
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469,192,23715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,23840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,23965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,24090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,24090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,24215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,24340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,24465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,24590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,24715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,24840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,24965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,25090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,25090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,25215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,25215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,25340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,25340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,25465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,25465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,25590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,25590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,25715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,25715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,25840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,25840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,25965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,25965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,26090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,26090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,26090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,26215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,26340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,26465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,26590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,26715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,26840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,26965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,27090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,27090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,27215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,27340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,27465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,27590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,27715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,27840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,27965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,28090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,28090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,28215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,28215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,28340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,28340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,28465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,28465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,28590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,28590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,28715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,28840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,28965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,29090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,29090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,29215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,29340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,29465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,29590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,29715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,29840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,29965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,30090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,30090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,30215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,30340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,30465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,30590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,30715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,30840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,30965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,31090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,31090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,31215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,31340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,31465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,31590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,31715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,31840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,31965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,32090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,32090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,32215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,32340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,32465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,32590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,32715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,32840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,32965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,33090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,33090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,33215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,33215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,33340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,33340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,33465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,33465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,33590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,33590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,33715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,33715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,33840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,33840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,33965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,33965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,38078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,38793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,39151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,39509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,39867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,40225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,40583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,40941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,41657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,42373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,42731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,43089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,43447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,43805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,43805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,44163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,44521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,44879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,44879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,45237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,45237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,45595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,45595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,45595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,45953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,45953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,45953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,46311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,46311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,46311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,46669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,46669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,46669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,47027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,47385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,47385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,47743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,48101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,192,48459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,48817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,49175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,49533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,49533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,49533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,49891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,50249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,50249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,50607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,50607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,50965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,50965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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298,192,51681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,52397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,192,52397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,52397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,52755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,192,53113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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42,192,53829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,56783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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469,192,66635,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Awang411 wrote:

AnYwaY, I found some BPM problem with 00:38:078 - . Supposed to be 84 BPM. This applies to all diffs

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Kin wrote:

• 
  [Awang's 6K]
  
  

1. 00:05:437 (5437|0) - this note is more high pitched than this one 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - .
   So I think it should be better to move this note : 00:05:437 (5437|0) - to |4| ; and then move those one : 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - to |1| & |5| ok
2. The strong note is actually here : 00:18:965 - and not here 00:19:090 - . So the double note should be there 00:18:965 - and not there : 00:19:090 - .
   Maybe try something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2947429 i heard otherwise did You hear it at a slower speed? nice pattern tho xP
3. 00:19:965 (19965|1,20090|5,20090|0) - same thing goes here same
4. 00:20:965 (20965|1,21090|5,21090|0) - ^ same
5. 00:21:965 (21965|1,22090|0,22090|5) - ^ same
6. 00:22:965 (22965|1,23090|5,23090|0) - ^ same
7. 00:23:965 (23965|1,24090|5,24090|0) - ^ welp same
8. 00:26:965 (26965|1,27090|0,27090|5) - ^ same
9. 00:27:965 (27965|1,28090|5,28090|0) - ^ same
10. 00:28:965 (28965|1,29090|0,29090|5) - ^ hmm
11. 00:30:965 (30965|2,31090|0,31090|5) - ^ Y'know
12. 00:31:965 (31965|2,32090|0,32090|5) - ^ I maYbe heard it wrong but
13. 00:32:965 (32965|1,33090|0,33090|5) - ^ I'm kind of positive that these are wrong ;w;w;w;
14. 00:29:965 - add another note on |6| ? welp
15. 00:51:681 (51681|3) - this note sounds a lil more high pitched than the previous one, move it to |6| ? ok?

well, that's all from me, good luck ~

AnYwaY, I found some BPM problem with 00:38:078 - . Supposed to be 84 BPM. This applies to all diffs
Aaaaaaaaaaand I accidentlY sent mY old diff ;w;w;w;
the new one onlY have single notes at this point: 01:04:007 -
Kin's mod is also applied here

here's mY new diff :-

box "new one";

I might check on the other mania diffs later but not now xP
But pls don't abuse the LNs ;w;w;w;w;w;w;
I also might add another 6k diff to make the 6k side easier to rank xP (spread)

Dereku wrote:

Updated your diff. And BPM isn't 84

Awang411 wrote:

Dereku wrote:

Updated your diff. And BPM isn't 84

e?
But when I slowed it down to 25%, it wasn't right, but with 84 BPM, seems like correctlY snapped @@
Wat is dis @@ xD

Are You sure tho? xP
confusing xD
I'll recheck later xP

Supposed to be onlY for the time part that's highlighted onlY tho xP

Is mY diff even updated Yet?xP
Because this part, 00:18:090- until 00:20:090 - supposed to have different pattern unlike the previous one xP
Something like this: http://puu.sh/gUOe3/fec8ce5bed.png

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General

1.still not hitsounded ?
2.Please check about "tag" because many tag is conflict

4K NM

00:05:500 (5500|1) - move to 00:05:437 -
00:48:459 (48459|3) - move to 2

4K HD

00:05:500 (5500|1) - move to 00:05:437 -

5K IN

00:05:500 (5500|4,5500|2) - move to 00:05:437 -
00:53:829 (53829|3,53829|2) - LN end at 00:55:261 -
00:53:829 (53829|2,53829|1) - ctrl+H

please reply before
expired 1/5/2015

Kin wrote:

[Normal Collab]

1. You are mapping a normal diff, do not use a huge jump. Changing DS isn't fobidden, but, if it's too much, or too close, don't do it. If you want to increase the spacing, I'd suggest to use 1,4~1,6 ; not something like 2,40, it's a way too much.
2. 00:00:000 (1,2,3) - Why your spacing is inconsistent ? Your spacing between 1 & 2 is 1,2 and your spacing between 2 & 3 is 0,8. Make it consistent.
3. 00:03:000 (2) - that's what I'm talking about, just don't use a big jump like this on normal
4. 00:03:000 (2,3) - If you want a anti jump here, just stack it. Because atm, it can only be confusing with the irregular spacing.
5. 00:03:500 (3,1,2) - So, what is your basic DS ? 1,2 ? 0,8 ? 1,0 ? those one are consistent, but I can't find which one is supposed to be your basic DS, since it's irregular.
6. 00:05:000 (2,1) - the jump is really weird for a normal diff, especially with the confusion.
7. 00:05:500 (1,2,3,4) - still the same thing, I still don't which DS you are using, since it's irregular
8. 00:08:500 (5,1) - anti jump doesn't fit here. Also, just don't use it on normal, and also, even if you stack it won't be really good, just use a normal DS.
9. 00:10:000 (2,1,2) - just don't use jump on normal diff.
10. 00:14:000 (3) - ^
11. 00:18:590 (1) - 00:19:590 (1) - NC isn't necessary here.
12. 00:20:590 (1,2,3) - the irregular spacing is really weird.
13. 00:20:090 - 00:20:590 - swap NC.
14. 00:22:340 (6) - add NC to be more consistent.
15. 00:23:090 - just don't use jumps.
16. 00:23:590 (1) - remove NC to be more consistent.
17. 00:25:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:31:090 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:33:090 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing is weird + this part is a way harder than the other. You have to tap the whole part 1/2 compared to other part.
18. 00:28:590 (1,2,3,1) - ^ same thing goes here, without the spacing.
19. 00:26:090 (5) - add a NC to be more consistent.
20. 00:27:090 (7) - Just don't use jump.
21. 00:28:090 (10,1) - swap NC.
22. 00:29:340 (1) - remove NC it's better with the piano for both of them.
23. 00:32:590 (2) - don't use jump, especially when it's not really good to read with the stack.
24. 00:33:840 (4) - the last note can be a 1/4 slider, it's sound better with the piano here : 00:33:965 -
25. 00:38:078 (1,2) - 00:39:509 (4,1) - I don't recommend you to use 2 different kind of stack on a normal diff.
26. 00:40:583 (2,3) - the anti jump is really weird on normal diff.
27. 00:46:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the fact it's only circles, make it a way harder than it's supposed to be. Try to change some circle to 1/2 sliders.
28. 00:43:805 (1,2,3) - again inconsistent spacing.
29. 00:51:681 (3,1,1) - same goes here.
30. 00:53:113 (1) - the NC isn't necessary here, you can remove it.
31. 00:53:113 (1,2) - I do not recommend this kind of stack on a normal diff.
32. 01:06:374 (2) - resnap this note on the red tick

[Nikollo's Hard]

1. 00:00:000 (1,2,3,4) - I highly suggest to use the same spacing between those note
2. 00:02:000 (5) - add NC for the piano.
3. 00:21:840 (4,1) - I highly suggest to make 1 more spaced to 4. Because it's actually look like this pattern : 00:30:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . But it has a different timeline.
4. 00:33:090 (7) - add a NC here, the combo is really long.
5. 00:44:521 - I think this note should be clicked instead of this one : 00:44:163 - .
6. 00:48:459 (4,5) - don't hide the arrow with a circle.
7. 00:49:533 - I'd be better to click this note which is stronger. So, I think it should be better to make this slider 00:48:817 (5) - without kick, and then add a circle here : 00:49:533 -

[Nikollo's Shoujo]

1. 00:04:500 (5,6) - don't kill your spacing for the sake of blanket D:
2. 00:26:090 (5,1) - swap NC, it'd be better for the piano.
3. 00:45:237 (1,2) - the anti jump here doesn't flow really well, use the same spacing as the other circle/slider in this part.

$

I'm not a mania modder, but here are something which I found Inconsistent :
__________
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

[Awang's 6K]

1. 00:05:437 (5437|0) - this note is more high pitched than this one 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - .
   So I think it should be better to move this note : 00:05:437 (5437|0) - to |4| ; and then move those one : 00:05:500 (5500|5,5500|2) - to |1| & |5|
2. The strong note is actually here : 00:18:965 - and not here 00:19:090 - . So the double note should be there 00:18:965 - and not there : 00:19:090 - .
   Maybe try something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2947429
3. 00:19:965 (19965|1,20090|5,20090|0) - same thing goes here
4. 00:20:965 (20965|1,21090|5,21090|0) - ^
5. 00:21:965 (21965|1,22090|0,22090|5) - ^
6. 00:22:965 (22965|1,23090|5,23090|0) - ^
7. 00:23:965 (23965|1,24090|5,24090|0) - ^
8. 00:26:965 (26965|1,27090|0,27090|5) - ^
9. 00:27:965 (27965|1,28090|5,28090|0) - ^
10. 00:28:965 (28965|1,29090|0,29090|5) - ^
11. 00:30:965 (30965|2,31090|0,31090|5) - ^
12. 00:31:965 (31965|2,32090|0,32090|5) - ^
13. 00:32:965 (32965|1,33090|0,33090|5) - ^
14. 00:29:965 - add another note on |6| ?
15. 00:51:681 (51681|3) - this note sounds a lil more high pitched than the previous one, move it to |6| ?

well, that's all from me, good luck ~