1. Easy - 4Key (1.22 stars, 201 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (2.74 stars, 724 notes)
3. Ikin's Muzukashii (2.85 stars, 297 notes)
4. Insane - 4Key (3.33 stars, 838 notes)
5. Nardo's Futsuu (2.23 stars, 182 notes)
6. Nardo's Kantan (1.52 stars, 102 notes)
7. Nardo's Oni (3.7 stars, 432 notes)
8. Normal - 4Key (1.87 stars, 397 notes)

Pharos21 wrote:

heya.. ^.^

Mod from my Queue here ^0^

i think i've been here before... am i right?

ohh my.... another keysounded BeatMap... Nice ^.^ (Get it ranked already!!!)

ehem... ok

[general]

FINE~

[MOD]

Column 1-2-3-4

Easy

00:02:205 (2205|1,2368|2) - Move 1 column to left (pitch) < no, the pitch is correct. its F G and F G. you confuse the pitch with the volume. thats why the second one sounds 'higher' because the volume and emphasis.

00:12:640 (12640|2,12966|3,13292|1,13618|2) - make it like this (for pitch)

and then
00:13:944 (13944|0,14596|2,14922|1) - Move 1 column to right
00:15:575 (15575|1) - Move to 3
00:15:901 (15901|1,16553|2) - LN on 3 Note on 2
00:16:879 (16879|2) - Move to 2

00:17:531 (17531|3) - Not too high, move to 3

00:33:509 (33509|1) - high note. move to 4

the rest implemented, thanks!!!!!!

Normal

just a warning for you.. there's some pattern that not suposed to be in NM (in other word.. too hard for NM)
like here
00:01:227 (1227|3,1879|1,1879|2,2205|0,2205|1,2368|3,2368|2,2694|0,2694|3,3020|1,3020|2,3183|2,3183|0,3509|0,3509|2) - Small LN are too hard for NM
edited!

00:11:988 (11988|2,12314|1,12640|1,12640|2,12966|3,12966|1) - that 1st and 2nd LN are too hard, plus placing this 00:12:314 (12314|1) - not in the end of the LN 00:11:988 (11988|2) - makes it even harder
hi yes, this is the consequence of me strictly following the accompaniments and the main instrument, do you have any suggestion?
i don't know how should i change? should i just replace that LN into SN?

00:26:009 (26009|3,26335|3,26988|3,27314|3) - placing it here makes it unbalance, move it to 1
^beware of pattern that unbalance like this (Do LN and Note with 1 hand)

sorry if i makes any mistake cuz it's happening in My SeeU too (before i re-mapped it)
Thanks! all but the one noted, has been implemented

HD

hmm... honestly it's a bit hard for me to mod this Diff cuz it's almost perfect

i'll be very very carefull on modding this ^.^

00:03:020 (3020|1) - delete and then 00:03:020 (3020|2) - move to 2 (better play) thanks

00:04:162 (4162|2,4325|3,4406|2,4488|3,4651|3,4651|2) - Make 1/4 stream and end it with dual note
00:06:118 (6118|1,6281|0,6363|1,6444|0,6607|0,6607|1) - This too
00:08:075 (8075|2,8238|3,8319|2,8401|3,8564|3,8564|2) - ^
for pattern like this.. do 1/4 stream and end it with Dual note
ill stick with mine first, if a lot of ppl requested for that then i might change. i followed the accompaniments in this case, that is why i stick with consistent pattern. (no other ways of placing it cuz its only 4k XD

thanks!

Kay.. i give up... no more bad part till the end ^.^

Insane

00:00:248 (248|0) - Delete and then 00:00:248 (248|2) - move to 1
thanks. i might change if others also request it. i am following the guitar accompaniments and the woodwind sound, that is why there are 2 notes at the beginning. (and i think there is less rules esp. cuz it's insane lol)

Nothing more. already good ^.^)b

ahh damn.. already too many diff.. i can't GD here (Too bad TT^TT)

if i know it sooner that you'll req mod to me... i'll save up my Kudo for you.. it's soo good TT^TT ,poor me

Good Luck ^.^

00:11:988 (11988|2,12314|1,12640|1,12640|2,12966|3,12966|1) - that 1st and 2nd LN are too hard, plus placing this 00:12:314 (12314|1) - not in the end of the LN 00:11:988 (11988|2) - makes it even harder
hi yes, this is the consequence of me strictly following the accompaniments and the main instrument, do you have any suggestion?
i don't know how should i change? should i just replace that LN into SN?

Pharos21 wrote:

00:11:988 (11988|2,12314|1,12640|1,12640|2,12966|3,12966|1) - that 1st and 2nd LN are too hard, plus placing this 00:12:314 (12314|1) - not in the end of the LN 00:11:988 (11988|2) - makes it even harder
hi yes, this is the consequence of me strictly following the accompaniments and the main instrument, do you have any suggestion?
i don't know how should i change? should i just replace that LN into SN?

about this part

do this ?



No Kudo Plis ^.^

therevenant wrote:

mod from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

SPOILER

EZ

01:17:042 (77042|3) - move 4 to 3

added, thanks

NM

00:19:814 (19814|1) - 3 notes might be too much :/
ideally there should not be 3 notes for NM, but my HD is 2.92 star, so some 3 notes on NM is still acceptable i think, depending on the situation.

00:26:335 (26335|0) - and 00:27:314 (27314|0) - add 1 to keep the pattern
i did not follow the beat sound, i follow the woodwind accompaniment sound, so the pattern is already correct, lest i follow the beat sound as well, i need to add several notes more not only on that part, which would make that part overmapped cuz you have 1 LN

00:49:814 (49814|1) - same here ^^^

HD

00:26:498 - add 1 (im surprised you didnt map the diminuendo here..)
I did follow the diminuendo, and it starts 2/4 beats after your place recommendation above (in which case, i did add the full set, except one if you notice with 25% playback.

don't have much to say, hope it still helps

schwarzvgrune wrote:

sure don't mind, modding is a part of learning :3
thanks for your help! and if you think my mod earlier for your map was any helpful at all, feel free to request more from my thread, I'll give you a ticket (meaning you can bypass all of the rules that i posted as prerequisites for requesting NM mod on my thread)

Pharos21 wrote:

schwarzvgrune wrote:

sure don't mind, modding is a part of learning :3
thanks for your help! and if you think my mod earlier for your map was any helpful at all, feel free to request more from my thread, I'll give you a ticket (meaning you can bypass all of the rules that i posted as prerequisites for requesting NM mod on my thread)

How about me?? can i get too >.<

/me Run

hehehe >.<

Harbyter wrote:

hello again o/


timing is wrong, i called a friend to try to fix it , he will posto soon or later


PS: call me again for this song when you have fixed it

Harbyter wrote:

hi again,here the mod

SPOILER

[GENERAL]


if the mapset is only 4k i think you should remove the 4k in the difficulties titles
I WILL ADD OTHER SETS SOMETIMES, :3


[MOD]

Column-1-2-3-4-



[Insane 4K]

i think we don't need 2 notes for this guitar,00:00:298 (298|2) - those are single notes ,so remove ?
THERE IS 1/4 FLUTE SOUND, THAT'S WHY ITS THERE (ALSO WITH HITSOUND)
00:01:276 (1276|3) - suggest to start this LN here 00:01:357 - like the previous one then 00:01:276 (1276|2,1317|1) - CTRL+J for pithc revelancy
NO, THE 1/6 NOTES ARE FOLLOWING THE GUITAR, LN FOLLOWING FLUTE.
00:02:254 (2254|0) - suggest to move this in col 4 then 00:02:308 (2308|1) - snap it in 1/8 here 00:02:295 - and add a note 1 here 00:02:336 -
THOSE 2 NOTES ARE FOLLOWING THE FLUTE, THAT'S WHY ITS 2X1/6.
IF OTHERS SUGGEST ME TO REMOVE IT THEN I'LL REPLACE THEM AND FOLLOW THE GUITAR INSTEAD.

those LN should be 1/3

00:12:363 (12363|3,12363|1,12689|1,12689|3) -
00:13:341 (13341|0,13341|3,13667|2,13667|0) -
00:14:319 (14319|1,14319|3,14645|3,14645|1) -
00:15:297 (15297|3,15297|0) -
00:15:624 (15624|3,15624|0,15624|1) -

ACTUALLY IT SHOULD BE 1/4 STACCATI, THE REASON WHY I USE 2/4 IS THAT IT WOULD BE TOO DIFFICULT FOR INSANE TO HAVE 1/4 LN.
AND BECAUSE OF THE INSTRUMENT, THAT IS WHY THERE IS A SUSTAINED SOUND AND IT SOUNDS LIKE IT IS A 1/3 BEAT SOUNDS
and etc etc

00:15:624 - according with those pattern those sound should be only 2 LN,so remove one??
00:16:602 - here too
NO, 2LN FOLLOWING THE BACKGROUND SUSTAINED SOUND, AND THE OTHER 1 IS FOLLOWING THE MAIN FLUTE/WOODWIND INSTRUMENT SOUND (AGAIN FULLY HITSOUNDED, SO IT'S FIXED WITH 3)
00:30:624 - remove one??i think 4 notes are a little too much here 00:31:602 - here too
00:32:580 - ~

00:34:537 - ~

00:35:189 - ~

NO, 3 SNS FOLLOWING THE BEAT WHILE THE LN FOLLOWING THE INSTRUMENT (HITSOUND, SAME REASON)

00:36:534 (36534|0,36575|1) - 1/6 snap here

00:38:490 (38490|1,38531|0) - ~
ALL OF THEM ARE BASED ON THE FLUTE SOUND WHICH SOUND LIKE A SHORT 1X TRILL (D E D, ETC)

00:43:341 (43341|0,43667|1) - unique sound ,suggest to turn in a single LN

00:43:993 (43993|1) - this LN should end here 00:44:319 -

00:44:645 (44645|3) - this LN should end here 00:44:971 - and move din col 1 or 2 for better pitch revelancy

00:44:971 (44971|3) - this LN should end here 00:45:297 -

00:45:297 (45297|0,45624|3) - unique sound, and it should end here 00:45:950 -

00:45:950 (45950|3) - this LN should end here 00:46:276 -

00:46:276 (46276|1,46602|3) - unique sound, suggest to turn this into a single LN too
NO TO ALL. I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN, BUT THE ISSUE IS PLACING LIMITATION FOR 4K,
THOSE LN ARE FOLLOWING THE BACKGROUND ORGAN/ORGEL LIKE SOUND.
ALL OF THE MAIN FLUTE INSTRUMENT FOR THE WHOLE PHASE ARE NOT EXPRESSED IN LN ACTUALLY.
IF I MAKE THEM INTO LN, THEN I WILL HAVE TO TURN THE BACKGROUND ONE INTO SN, AND THERE IS SOME ISSUE WITH THIS.
1. I ALREADY HAVE THAT PATTERN AT THE BEGINNING.
2. IT WOULD LESS DIFFICULT AND ALSO MORE CLOSER TO HD DIFFS ON THAT PLACE, (THAT PLACE ON HD DIFFS ARE THE SAME EXCEPT THAT I OMIT ALL LN FOR SIMPLIFICATION



00:47:254 (47254|2,47254|0,47254|3,47295|1,47336|2,47580|1,47580|3,47743|2) - something like this

00:48:884 (48884|1) - suggest to move in col 3 then 00:48:558 (48558|1,48884|2) - turn in 1/1 LN

00:49:211 (49211|3,49537|1,49863|1) - single sound ,suggest to turn in a single LN

00:54:102 (54102|2) - this LN end here 00:54:591 -

00:55:121 (55121|2) - here 00:55:134 -

00:55:189 - add a note

00:55:162 (55162|1) - starts here 00:55:243 -
NO FOR THE SAME REASON AS THE 1ST COMMENT.
your suggestion on the last part is different with earlier place where there is also 1/6 1/6 (short trill) then LN. you asked me to delete earlier pattern but change this o.o??
so no to all.

if more people take issues with that then i'll delete and not express the trill alltogether, PiraTom has asked me to do so, and seems that you're also not really comfortable with that placing.

my reason for that placement is because i'm strictly following the main instrument for insane.

[Hard 4K]

00:02:308 (2308|1) - since this isn't a 1/6 suggest to move here 00:02:336 -
it's 1/6, flute sound.

01:05:841 - turn some notes in a LN??like in the insane??
i already have that on the 2nd phase. so no.


rest is oky


[Normal 4K]

00:00:298 (298|2,624|0) - CTRL+J for hand balance

00:18:884 (18884|1,19537|3) - CTRL+H and 00:19:211 (19211|2) - in col 4 for hand balance

00:20:515 (20515|1) - col 4 ~

00:21:493 (21493|3) - col 2~

00:24:754 (24754|1,25080|2) - 1 col on right and 00:25:406 (25406|2) - col 1 ~

00:36:493 (36493|2,36819|3) - CTRL+J ~

00:43:667 (43667|1) - col 4~

00:43:993 (43993|1) - col 3 ~

00:47:906 (47906|3,48232|0) - CTRL+J

00:50:189 (50189|1,50841|3) - CTRL+H and 00:50:515 (50515|2) - col4

00:51:819 (51819|1,52797|3) - CTRL+J


just a note, it's fully hitsounded (with instrument) so becareful with suggesting CTRL thingie (i did not use CTRL at all, moved everything manually)

---------------

ok that's all ,hope i'll be helpfull

Harbyter wrote:

i thought you followed the guitar the other part XD whata mess this mod

btw yes,i forgot about the hitsound placement with CTRL ,will remmeber it next times

LordRaika wrote:

^^ jst take a quick look, im not here for mod...

jst want to say the pitch and hitsound everything looks really good... you even use Chord harmonically...
really doesnt sounds anything bad at all...

so... keep it up... jst some pattern is really hard to be play XD
try to avoid some unnecessary mini jack?

Feerum wrote:

Hello schwarzvgrune
Sorry for the delay :3

Testplay Screen Insane

Alright, first of all: Dude?! I realy like your mapping style! Theres so little to mod D:

BUT! How LordRaika already told you "try to avoid some unnecessary mini jack?" in the Insane Diff, they are reeeeealy hard to play
(Don't look at my score, i don't play so much mania in the last Time :c)

Testplay Screen Hard

here looks everything fine

To the normal:
01:13:178 (73178|0) - This one. I'm not realy sure but it.. it plays a little bit strange.

Thats all. Again. Great map schwarzvgrune.
Wish you good luck!

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7
just suggestion

Normal

00:25:080 (25080|2) - move to 3
00:30:624 (30624|1,30624|2) - ctrl+H
00:30:134 (30134|2) - move to 3
00:31:276 (31276|2) - ^ 3
00:31:602 (31602|3,31602|1) -^ 2,4
00:31:928 (31928|2) -^ 3
00:32:254 (32254|3,32254|1) - ^ 2,4
00:40:406 (40406|1) - ^ 2
00:41:547 (41547|3) - ^ 4
00:52:797 (52797|1) - ^ 2
00:53:124 (53124|0) - 6 1
00:53:450 (53450|1) - ^ 2
00:54:102 (54102|1) - ^ 2
01:04:211 (64211|3,64374|2,64537|3,64700|2,64863|0,64863|1,65352|3,65352|2) - ctrl + H maybe ?
01:03:884 (63884|1,63884|2) - move to 2,3

Insane

because mini jack in this dif is many,so i will point a little. fix the rest by yourself
00:04:211 (4211|2,4211|0,4211|1,4374|3,4455|2,4537|3,4700|3,4863|2,5026|1,5189|3,5189|2,5189|0,5352|1,5433|0,5515|1) - like this maybe ?

00:00:298 (298|2) - remove
00:00:624 (624|0,624|1,950|3,950|2,1276|0,1317|1,1357|0) - like this

00:03:069 (3069|0) - remove(not strong sound)
00:47:254 (47254|3) - ^

for the rest i don't know how to fix it without changing the patern

the other dif seem fine to me

Pharos21 wrote:

Hey Ha~

Re Check From my Queue (since there's no Modder availabel on my Queue atm)

PS. No Kudo since i already MOD this

[General]

Fine~ (of course >.<)

[MOD]
1-2-3-4

NM

i'm focusing on pitch relevancy (since you following the Piano)

00:01:276 (1276|3) - Move to 3 (pitch are lower than 00:00:298 (298|3) - )

00:01:928 (1928|2,2254|1,2417|2) - move 1 column to left

00:13:993 (13993|1) - move to 3 (you already know what i mean right?)

00:14:971 (14971|2) - to 2 ^

00:15:624 (15624|2) - ^

00:46:276 (46276|0) - Move to 2.. too far since the prev. pattern do LN-N not LN-blank-N like this 00:47:254 (47254|2,47906|1) -

the rest are clear~

DIDNT FOLLOW YOUR EXACT SUGGESTION, BUT I REVAMPED THE PATTERN TO BETTER SUIT THE PITCH BUT AT THE SAME TIME TAKING BALANCE AS CONSIDERATION.

NM

00:11:058 (11058|1,11058|3,11058|0) - i think i laready say this to you.. and this triple here are really bugging me, reduce it please
not changed, it signifies phase change, i will change if many more suggest that.


00:33:232 (33232|1) - delete.. (i know there's a sound here.. but for me.. it's hard to catch this note
not changed, will wait for others first

00:35:189 (35189|1) - ^ same

Becareful on the hard part of this diff.. some of it are catch able and some are not....0

The Fine~

HD

00:00:298 (298|2,298|0) - really hard to press here, reduce please
nop.
00:01:928 (1928|2,2417|2) - for this.. why dont you use this pattern? => 00:00:950 (950|0,1276|3) - *
nop because i'm following the pitch, and that's how it actually should be. try 25% :3

00:38:613 (38613|2) - move to 1 (mirroring prev. pattern
^ i dont understand, so no?
00:47:417 add note (like 00:00:950 (950|0,1276|3) - theres 3 Stream here)
^i don't understand? and also, pitched instrument are already included, just that there is no LN because i'm following the beat and other sound as well, its too difficult to incorpporate a lot of SN with LN at the same time, i do that for insane, but not for hard.

00:55:080 (55080|1,55162|1) - do * pattern (placement up to you
no, no sound to follow whatsoever, the gap should be there, and it applies for the whole song.

01:09:917 (69917|2) - delete? =< and other patern like this

End~

GL ^.^

Wait for my GD kay ^.^

Pharos21 wrote:

orz.. why it's soo hard to MOD yours Grune....

anyway.. i'll make the GD tomorrow.. still searching for a good pattern and learning the music atm

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Hey Schwarzvgrune :3

here is your NM mod as requested. :3

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

- NM -

00:11:384 - Maybe I would add this clap sound to the song. (on 3 maybe? )
00:11:547 - This one aswell! (I'd suggest 2 here)
well, it does not make much difference though, and i need to adjust the volume if i change it into clap because the clap sound is too loud, and i have to do that for the whole diffs... so maybe i'll keep it at that (yeah i know im lazy >_<)


00:19:863 - Remove one note? 4 seems like alot of notes, and at other points of the song (00:21:819 - ) with a similar amout of Instruments, you've used 3-Chords aswell!
its actually three....
and i can't do anything cuz its insane, if i reduce it then it would be exactly the same as HD..


00:22:797 (22797|2) - I think this LN should be longer to match the tone! (until here: 00:23:287 - ) but this might break your pattern, so it's your decision
?? i have done that o.o?? did you mod my earlier version?? IDK but on my latest version i have done this though o.o


00:33:069 - for this part, I would suggest using tiny LN's to fit the long, thrilly tones;
()
actually i was thinking of that, but then i have to reduce the amount of notes considerably. all of the notes are already hitsounded to follow each of the instrument, if i delete one then it will be inconsistent.. and its 4K so i have no choice.. not many place to put notes XD


00:34:537 - Add a note on 4 for the drum-sound! (You've used two notes before, like here! 00:29:645 - )
00:37:471 - Add one here (on 2 maybe) for the same reason (this happens a few more times during the song, just check for yourself!)
yes i've revamped the whole phase (not all song) thanks for reminding <3


00:43:341 (43341|2) - I think this LN should be longer too! (until here; 00:43:830 - )
actually i'm following the background instrument.. not the main. the main is expressed in short notes because of limited placing

00:54:102 (54102|2) - This one, too! (until here; 00:54:591 - ) ^

00:58:830 - if you follow the notes I think you follow, then you should add one note here! (maybe on 2 and move this note; 00:58:667 - to 1)
only 4 notes here... so i can't add another... the one i'm following is 1/4 x 4

The outro is perfectly fine

I hope I could help you a little bit!
Good Luck with all of your projects man! :3

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

some little mod with irc as pharos request

irc

2015-02-28 22:04 Pharos21: Lon
2015-02-28 22:04 [ A v a l o n ]: ya ?
2015-02-28 22:05 Pharos21: kau bisa play 7K ngga??
2015-02-28 22:05 [ A v a l o n ]: bisa tapi yg ez nm doank :v
2015-02-28 22:06 Pharos21: OK then..
2015-02-28 22:06 Pharos21: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/620931 Nakagawa Ken, Achiwa Daisuke - Go Novice Alchemist]
2015-02-28 22:06 Pharos21: test play please ( my GD 7K EZ NM)
2015-02-28 22:06 kalo bisa sekalian MOD *hehehe
2015-02-28 22:07 [ A v a l o n ]: ane dl dlu . . . btw tadi siang spy- nge obrak abrik beatmap wa . . njirr
2015-02-28 22:07 Pharos21: wehhh...
2015-02-28 22:07 Pharos21: dia bilang apa?
2015-02-28 22:09 [ A v a l o n ]: not bad :/ . . . beatmap yg kemarin lu bikin GD itu . . 
2015-02-28 22:09 Pharos21: ohh... yang lain??
2015-02-28 22:09 [ A v a l o n ]: dia obrak abrik itu doank . . .itu pun hampir 3 jam LOL
2015-02-28 22:10 Pharos21: EZ ku yang di obrak abrik?
2015-02-28 22:10 [ A v a l o n ]: HD punya wa XD
2015-02-28 22:11 Pharos21: ohh.. baguslah kalo HD mu.. biar lebih cantik
2015-02-28 22:11 [ A v a l o n ]: spectate wa
2015-02-28 22:12 Pharos21: Done~
2015-02-28 22:12 [ A v a l o n ]: EZ dlu nih
2015-02-28 22:13 Pharos21: daff. salah spectate orz
2015-02-28 22:14 [ A v a l o n ]: orz . . .EZ mu kebanyakan LN
2015-02-28 22:14 Pharos21: well.. ak ngikut synth
2015-02-28 22:14 [ A v a l o n ]: edit dlu . . 
2015-02-28 22:14 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/652445 Nakagawa Ken, Achiwa Daisuke - Go Novice Alchemist [Iris (Pharos' 7K Easy)]]
2015-02-28 22:14 Pharos21: saram please~
2015-02-28 22:15 Pharos21: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/652445 Nakagawa Ken, Achiwa Daisuke - Go Novice Alchemist [Iris (Pharos' 7K Easy)]]
2015-02-28 22:16 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:33:339 - ini klo bisa jgn di ujung . . karena yg ini 00:33:232 (33232|6) - udah di ujung juga sebelumnya 
2015-02-28 22:16 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:33:558 (33558|6) - ini maksudnya jgn di ujung
2015-02-28 22:16 Pharos21: ini?? 00:33:395 (33395|0) -
2015-02-28 22:16 [ A v a l o n ]: LN
2015-02-28 22:16 Pharos21: Oh.. saran enaknya di mana??
2015-02-28 22:17 [ A v a l o n ]: pindah ke kolom 4 . . enakan
2015-02-28 22:17 Pharos21: 6 ato 5?
2015-02-28 22:17 [ A v a l o n ]: eh 5 maksud aku
2015-02-28 22:17 Pharos21: Mid?
2015-02-28 22:17 Pharos21: orz
2015-02-28 22:17 [ A v a l o n ]: XD
2015-02-28 22:18 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:45:297 (45297|3) - move to 5 lebih enak dipencetnya :3
2015-02-28 22:18 Pharos21: ngimbangin 00:46:276 (46276|2) - ?
2015-02-28 22:19 [ A v a l o n ]:  ya,,, dan juga lebih sesuai abis mencet ini 00:44:971 (44971|6) - 
2015-02-28 22:19 Pharos21: Ohh OK
2015-02-28 22:19 [ A v a l o n ]: btw 00:45:950 (45950|5) - ini bisa dipindah ke tengah nih
2015-02-28 22:20 Pharos21: Pitch bang... (maunya sih gitu...
2015-02-28 22:20 [ A v a l o n ]: yaa, pindah ke tengah aja . . . more simple
2015-02-28 22:20 [ A v a l o n ]: dan ini pindah ke 2 00:46:276 (46276|2) - 
2015-02-28 22:21 Pharos21: hmm... gimana ya.. keep aja dolo... kalo banyak yang protes baru ak pindah
2015-02-28 22:21 Pharos21: deh... pitch nya.. OK deg
2015-02-28 22:21 [ A v a l o n ]: karena ini 00:46:928 (46928|2) - kamu pitchnya dengan ini 00:47:254 (47254|2) - masa ke tumpuk dengan ini yg dibawah ? 00:46:276 (46276|2) - 
2015-02-28 22:21 Pharos21: *deh
2015-02-28 22:22 [ A v a l o n ]: 7K ribet amat XD
2015-02-28 22:23 Pharos21: well. sebenarnya tiga tiganya tuh sama nadanya.. but ok deh.. change
2015-02-28 22:23 Pharos21: sekalian latian MOD
2015-02-28 22:24 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:58:015 (58015|6) - saran ane kurang pas deh ini dipojok . . . mubazir bgt . .soal nya 2 yg dibawah udah sama side kanan tangan kita
2015-02-28 22:25 Pharos21: Remapped
2015-02-28 22:25 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:03:395 (63395|3,63884|2) - ctrl G . . . mantab =w=)b
2015-02-28 22:25 Pharos21: sama yang di bawahnya
2015-02-28 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: sesuai dgn nadanya . . .klo kamu ctrl G itu
2015-02-28 22:26 Pharos21: oh iya ya.. atasnya juga kaya gitu >.<
2015-02-28 22:26 Pharos21: Fixed
2015-02-28 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: lebih enakan juga
2015-02-28 22:26 Pharos21: OK
2015-02-28 22:27 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:11:711 (71711|2) - move to 1 biar keliatan balance, karena dari sini 01:10:406 - kamu make 3 note yg sama juga
2015-02-28 22:28 Pharos21: Sep... Fixed
2015-02-28 22:28 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:20:841 (80841|3) - MOVE TO 3 ? well, menurut ane lebih enakan sih
2015-02-28 22:29 [ A v a l o n ]: sama kek gini 01:13:015 - 
2015-02-28 22:29 Pharos21: sep..
2015-02-28 22:29 Pharos21: Fixed
2015-02-28 22:29 Pharos21: OK
2015-02-28 22:29 [ A v a l o n ]: sip . . .  saran ane kurangin LN nya XD
2015-02-28 22:29 [ A v a l o n ]: kita coba yg NM
2015-02-28 22:29 Pharos21: ehh... wa mo tanya
2015-02-28 22:29 Pharos21: 01:17:580 (77580|2,78558|4) - ini di tengah ada naik nada ya??
2015-02-28 22:29 [ A v a l o n ]: ya
2015-02-28 22:30 Pharos21: pas di 01:18:232 -
2015-02-28 22:30 Pharos21: kalo ak tambah Mid di situ terus 1st LN wa potong bagus ngga?
2015-02-28 22:31 [ A v a l o n ]: kurang jelas sih . . .  saran aq di part ini kamu nggk usah ikutin syth nya . . variasikan aja .. . krna synth nya kurang jelas disini
2015-02-28 22:31 Pharos21: hmm.. OK
2015-02-28 22:31 [ A v a l o n ]: bentar aku coba test dlu
2015-02-28 22:32 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:18:232 - poeong aja LN nya sampe itu
2015-02-28 22:32 [ A v a l o n ]: lol potong maksudnya
2015-02-28 22:33 Pharos21: OK
2015-02-28 22:33 Pharos21: dah... tambah Note ngga di point tuh>
2015-02-28 22:33 Pharos21: ?
2015-02-28 22:33 [ A v a l o n ]: kagak deh kayaknya . .synthnya putus disana
2015-02-28 22:34 Pharos21: hmm.. OK deh
2015-02-28 22:34 [ A v a l o n ]: klo mau ditambahin juga . . .paling 1 single note aja  buat suara kicknya
2015-02-28 22:34 Pharos21: MID gimana??
2015-02-28 22:34 [ A v a l o n ]: jadi mau lu tambahin nih ?
2015-02-28 22:35 Pharos21: iya
2015-02-28 22:35 Pharos21: dan DONE~
2015-02-28 22:35 Pharos21: OK next Diff
2015-02-28 22:35 [ A v a l o n ]: test dlu cuy . . . biar pas 
2015-02-28 22:35 Pharos21: wait.. ak kirimin hasilnya
2015-02-28 22:36 [ A v a l o n ]: lol, kagak usah dikirim . . . males wa XD . .. yg penting uda kamu fix
2015-02-28 22:36 Pharos21: gehh.. OK deh
2015-02-28 22:36 [ A v a l o n ]: udah spectate kan ?
2015-02-28 22:37 Pharos21: dah
2015-02-28 22:37 Pharos21: dan wa test.. LN yang ngga perlu wa jadiin Note dan lebih enak di mainin
2015-02-28 22:37 [ A v a l o n ]: udah belom . . .ni ane ydah main nih . . lu nggk ada di daftar spectatro
2015-02-28 22:44 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/652446 Nakagawa Ken, Achiwa Daisuke - Go Novice Alchemist [Viese (Pharos' 7K Normal)]]
2015-02-28 22:45 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:02:254 (2254|0,2417|4) - lol, remap this . . . .terlalu jauh jangkauannya
2015-02-28 22:45 Pharos21: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/652446 Nakagawa Ken, Achiwa Daisuke - Go Novice Alchemist [Viese (Pharos' 7K Normal)]]
2015-02-28 22:46 Pharos21: Done
2015-02-28 22:47 Pharos21: LN bawah wa pindah ke 2
2015-02-28 22:47 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:13:341 (13341|4,13667|1) - delete
2015-02-28 22:48 [ A v a l o n ]: cukup LN aja
2015-02-28 22:48 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:14:319 (14319|5,14645|4) - ini juga . . . confusing jadinya
2015-02-28 22:49 Pharos21: Remapped bagian itu...
2015-02-28 22:49 Pharos21: yang atasi ok deleted
2015-02-28 22:49 Pharos21: ayng bawah wa remapped
2015-02-28 22:50 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:15:297 (15297|1,15624|1,15624|2) - ini parah abis . . . . masih bnyk ruang bro . . . ini bukan 4K map XD . . . remap cuy :3
2015-02-28 22:50 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:15:624 (15624|1) - maybe ini pindah ke 5
2015-02-28 22:51 Pharos21: lol.. sorry kalo penyakit 4K ku nular ke sini
2015-02-28 22:51 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:18:558 (18558|1) - middle . . . XD
2015-02-28 22:51 Pharos21: Done all~
2015-02-28 22:52 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:18:558 (18558|1) - suggest to delete . . . krna seperti menyatu dngn ini 00:26:711 (26711|3,26711|0,27037|1,27363|2) - pdhl beda
2015-02-28 22:52 Pharos21: Done~
2015-02-28 22:53 [ A v a l o n ]: remap juga bisa
2015-02-28 22:53 Pharos21: Re mapped
2015-02-28 22:54 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:33:558 (33558|6,33884|5,34047|4,34211|3) - coba digeser ke kiri 1 langkah
2015-02-28 22:54 [ A v a l o n ]: karena ini beda 00:33:232 (33232|4,33232|6,33558|6) - 
2015-02-28 22:54 Pharos21: OK done~
2015-02-28 22:54 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:34:211 (34211|1,34537|0) - ctrl G
2015-02-28 22:55 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:35:189 - maybe add 1 note ?
2015-02-28 22:56 Pharos21: jadi Dual??
2015-02-28 22:56 [ A v a l o n ]: terserah sih .  . .krna ane denger ada hentakan disana
2015-02-28 22:57 Pharos21: Doen~
2015-02-28 22:57 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:43:178 (43178|2,43341|6) - terlalu jauh
2015-02-28 22:58 Pharos21: Move to Mid
2015-02-28 22:58 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:46:276 (46276|2) - pindah nih . . .ke jack sama yg diatas XD
2015-02-28 22:59 [ A v a l o n ]: ke kolom 2 lebih enakan
2015-02-28 22:59 Pharos21: ko kita singkron
2015-02-28 22:59 [ A v a l o n ]: :v
2015-02-28 22:59 Pharos21: dah wa pindah duluan
2015-02-28 22:59 [ A v a l o n ]: jodoh kali . . .. hueeeekkkkkk XD
2015-02-28 23:00 Pharos21: orz
2015-02-28 23:00 Pharos21: lanjut
2015-02-28 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:04:537 (64537|5,64537|1) - why 2 note . . . ? suaranya kagk kenceng
2015-02-28 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:06:004 (66004|0,66167|1,66330|2,66493|4,66656|5) - XD . . .  .expert
2015-02-28 23:01 Pharos21: Delete 1 and move to mid
2015-02-28 23:02 Pharos21: lol.. mo wa bikin greget.. ok
2015-02-28 23:02 Pharos21: a jadiin LN
2015-02-28 23:03 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:22:471 - blum selesai ?
2015-02-28 23:04 Pharos21: emang Cut di situ
2015-02-28 23:04 Pharos21: liat punyanya si Grune
2015-02-28 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: orz . . . musiknya masi ada . . . XD . . .ane aja kena semprot BN gara di cut XD . . . 
2015-02-28 23:05 Pharos21: well... tanyakan si Grune~
2015-02-28 23:06 [ A v a l o n ]: done~
2015-02-28 23:06 Pharos21: ok save terus di post
2015-02-28 23:06 [ A v a l o n ]: di post ya ;w; ?
2015-02-28 23:06 Pharos21: biar di kasi Kudo
2015-02-28 23:06 [ A v a l o n ]: XD . . .. ya udah
2015-02-28 23:06 Pharos21: lha lu mau di kasi kudo ngga?
2015-02-28 23:06 Pharos21: kalo ngga ya gpp
2015-02-28 23:07 [ A v a l o n ]: oh ya saran ane , liat konsistensi note lu aja cuy . . . mana yg harus 1 mana yg harus 2

Good Luck

Pharos21 wrote:

and Here's the HD Diff (Fix the HS problem and do major improvement ^.^

Pharos' 7K HD

ps.. did i laready sent you the Kick sound?

Kagu-chan wrote:

As requested via PM

I dont looked over hitsounds since im new on hitsounding and cant say much for this, sorry

General

1. Set Offset to 300 MS

no, 298 was given by C r a c k, he is an offset master so i'll stick to his recommendation first. ill try and look for others to chcek


1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Iris (Easy 4K)

1. 00:10:080 (10080|1,10569|3) - Move to 1 | 3
2. 00:15:624 (15624|2) - Move to 1 or 2
3. 00:31:276 (31276|0) - Move to 4
4. 00:31:276 (31276|3) - Add one and use e.g. 2 | 4 i followed the pitch, so no
5. 00:26:711 - Add a note
6. 00:34:537 - Add a note (1)
7. 00:34:863 - Add a note (3)
8. 00:47:254 - Add a note (1 or 4)
9. 00:55:080 - Add a note (4)

i see what you mean, but no. ^ its easy, so i'm limiting the use of 2 notes. i reserve that for NM.

Viese (Normal 4K)

1. 00:12:037 (12037|2) - Should end 00:12:526 -
2. 00:14:971 (14971|1) - Should end 00:15:461 -
3. 00:19:863 (19863|3) - Should end 00:20:352 -
4. 00:22:797 (22797|2) - Should end 00:23:287 -
5. 00:43:341 (43341|2) - Should end 00:43:830 -
6. 00:46:276 (46276|0) - Should end 00:46:765 -
7. 00:51:167 (51167|3) - Should end 00:51:656 -
8. 00:54:102 (54102|2) - Should end 00:54:591 -
   i see what you meant for all those, my map was originally like that (all of those LN especially)
   but i edited that to suit NM difficulty, because of the irregularity of the note (being 2/4 beat longer than the constant 4/4 beat of the accompaniment instruments. i changed it as per suggestions by Pharos.
   but i will look into this further and wait for other people's opinion, whether to water down the placing for easing the difficulty or to strictly keep the length in accordance with the pitch. so no for the moment.
   
   
9. 00:04:211 (4211|2,4211|0,4700|3,4700|1,6167|1,6167|0,6656|3,6656|2,8124|2,8124|0,8613|3,8613|1,10080|1,10080|0,10569|3,10569|2) -
   i see what you mean, but i put that note at the end of LN, so its actually only 2 notes to press because at that time you have to already release the LN. and i'm following the main instrument, so no.
   
   For this i would remove one hit from end and add one at begin of LN´s instead

Felt&Viese (Insane 4K)

I would suggest to avoid 1/4 Haystacks / Jacks. I try to give suggestions to remove them.

1. 00:33:069 (33069|3,33069|2,33151|1,33232|0,33232|2,33232|3) -
   I would suggest:
   
2. 00:36:493 (36493|2) - Delete no, its a 1/8 note changes, i'll keep it.
3. 00:00:298 (298|2) - Delete no that one follows the pitched instrument
4. 00:38:450 (38450|0) - Delete and move 00:38:531 (38531|1) - to 1 same
5. 00:47:254 (47254|3) - Delete and move 00:47:336 (47336|2) - to 4 same
6. 00:55:080 (55080|1) - Delete same

Ups... i realized very late that im looking the insane and not HD... ._. But i think that the Jacks are too much, sorry xD

Felt (Hard 4K)

I dont find anything, but i cant play this map as good today to see issues correctly ^^

Im beginner in modding, so i hope this could help you a bit.
Greetings and good luck, i like the theme

• 01:21:493 (81493|0) - Remove this note, there isn't a stronger sound at that part, so the LN should be enough

• Remove 00:19:863 (19863|0) - or 00:19:863 (19863|1) - , there isn't a stronger sound to make a double necessary imo
  Remove 00:51:167 (51167|0) - or 00:51:167 (51167|1) - ^^^
  Move 01:04:863 (64863|0,64863|1) - to 01:04:863 (64863|2,64863|3) - , and 01:05:352 (65352|3,65352|2) - to 01:05:352 (65352|1,65352|0) -
  Move 01:04:211 (64211|3,64374|2,64537|3,64700|2) - to 01:04:211 (64211|0,64374|1,64537|0,64700|1) - Since the right hand seems to do most of the work at that part

• 00:35:189 (35189|2) - Remove this note

KaitoKid1998 wrote:

Mod request, so here I am . This are just some minor suggestions I think should make the map better

1 2 3 4

[Iris (Easy 4K)]

• 01:21:493 (81493|0) - Remove this note, there isn't a stronger sound at that part, so the LN should be enough

i use the whistle hitsound to denote the end of the song, and it gives a nice emphasis so no.

[Viese (Normal 4K)]

• Remove 00:19:863 (19863|0) - or 00:19:863 (19863|1) - , there isn't a stronger sound to make a double necessary imo
  Remove 00:51:167 (51167|0) - or 00:51:167 (51167|1) - ^^^
  no its fully hitsounded, following main instrument and background accompaniments (both pitched hitsound)
  the 2nd one follow main instrument and beat.
  
  Move 01:04:863 (64863|0,64863|1) - to 01:04:863 (64863|2,64863|3) - , and 01:05:352 (65352|3,65352|2) - to 01:05:352 (65352|1,65352|0) -
  Move 01:04:211 (64211|3,64374|2,64537|3,64700|2) - to 01:04:211 (64211|0,64374|1,64537|0,64700|1) - Since the right hand seems to do most of the work at that part

^^ yes i missed that.. pattern changed thanks for pointing that out

[Felt&Viese (Insane 4K)]

• 00:35:189 (35189|2) - Remove this note

no, its hitsounded, and also its insane anyways, i've taken hand balance into consideration, it should still be appropriate.


Well, that's all I can help you with for now, I couldn't find anything wrong with the 7K diffs (can't pass the 7K Insane, so I won't deal with it, for obvious reasons). Call me if you need anything else ;D

Anyways, good luck with the beatmap

Pharos21 wrote:

wait a minute... is that a nwe diff? Rebirth? wow.. Nice~ (why dont you make it 8K instead 7K? (just suggestion ehehe~))

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Pharos21 wrote:

wait a minute... is that a new diff? Rebirth? wow.. Nice~ (why dont you make it 8K instead 7K? (just suggestion ehehe~))

i dont know how that works for 8K. my 8K playing style is 4 + 4
i think 7+1 map is more popular right? (in which case i don't know how to map)
and are there lots of players who play that?

schwarzvgrune wrote:

i hope osu can actually provide player statistics XD
ill stick to 7K and lets see where it goes, i doubt people play 8K.
my song is already not popular than the mainstream song mapped here.
mapping an unpopular song with a rarely-played keyset? hmm...

Pharos21 wrote:

schwarzvgrune wrote:

i hope osu can actually provide player statistics XD
ill stick to 7K and lets see where it goes, i doubt people play 8K.
my song is already not popular than the mainstream song mapped here.
mapping an unpopular song with a rarely-played keyset? hmm...

not really.. there's some pro player who's looking for 8K map.. but.. it's up to you as the owner.. ^.^