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Topic Starter
Demo
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Setsurei
hi M4M owo
Keywords:
  1. blanket = http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Blanket_Combos
  2. flow = http://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 / t/86329
  3. HC = Hit Circle
  4. NC = New Combo, NC is usually used when slider multiplier changes / long white tick / pattern forms
[Normal]
here goes the NC nazis
most of the NCs lies on the long white tick (do so on other diffs too)


00:09:920 (4,1) - swap NC
00:31:437 (3,1) - ^
00:33:092 - NC
00:36:403 - seems you don't need NC here since the combo is short
00:39:713 - NC is needed here because the slider multiplier changes
00:40:954 - and don't forget to NC this one too, since the speed changes
00:42:610 - no need to NC here
00:43:023 - NC
00:57:920 (4) - NC
01:00:403 (1) - remove NC
01:27:713 (3) - speed change, NC
01:28:954 (1) - remove NC
01:38:885 (2) - NC, speed change
01:42:610 (4,1) - swap NC
01:44:265 - NC
01:47:989 - remove NC
01:49:230 - NC
01:57:092 (1,2) - swap NC
02:27:299 (5,1) - ^
[]
beats
00:09:920 - might want to swap them 00:09:920 (1,2) - ,
just ctrl G both of them and the slider will be at 00:09:920 - and the HC will be at 00:11:161 - ,
don't forget to fix the positions
00:24:816 (5) - avoid using blue tick on Normal diff
00:41:368 - change to 1/1 slider, and have a follow of 1/1 slider too here 00:42:196 - since this part has a strong beat,
you might not want to make it on end slider01:22:747 - suggesting a 2/1 slider here, that ends 01:23:575 -
01:23:989 - strong beat here, might want to add a HC
01:40:127 - strong beat here, same case as 00:41:368 - ... change 01:39:299 - to 1/1 slider, and add 1/1 slider here 01:40:127 -
[]
flow
00:06:609 (1,2,3,1) - flow like this is better imo, not too crooked00:12:816 (6,1,2) - this one is crooked too
00:18:196 (3,4) - bad flow, also overlaps the slider's body
00:28:954 (3) - overlap its head and tail
00:54:610 (2,3) - I suggest you to move the (3) adjacent following the flow of the tail01:01:230 (3,4) - fix this one too
01:14:472 (1,2) - blanket seems a bit tidier than this
01:07:851 (2,3) - follow the slider flow, or just change the slider shape so it won't bent that much
01:24:403 (1,2) - did mention cases like this, similar to 00:54:610 (2,3) -
01:27:713 (1,2,3) - flow too crooked, I suggest this01:46:747 (3,4) - same case as 00:54:610 (2,3) -
02:23:989 (1,2,3) - ^
[Hard]
00:08:265 (4,1) - swap NC
00:11:989 (1) - remove NC
00:13:230 - NC
00:14:472 (1) - remove NC
00:16:541 - NC
00:17:782 (1) - remove NC
00:19:023 - I suggest don't use repeat slider here, there's a strong beat here 00:19:851 - so, make it 1/1 slider here 00:19:023 - and add HC here 00:19:851 - , don't forget to NC 00:19:851 - and remove NC 00:20:265 (1) -
00:20:678 (3,4) - swap them.. 1/1 slider here 00:20:678 - ~ 00:21:092 - , and HC here 00:21:506 - , don't forget to NC 00:21:506 - and remove NC 00:21:920 (1) -
00:34:334 (2,3) - blanket properly
00:35:575 (1,2,3,4) - flow doesn't look good here
00:39:713 - strong beat here, prefer to add slider up to 00:40:437 - , also don't forget to NC because speed change
00:40:541 (2) - NC, speed change
00:42:196 (1) - prefer not to curve this much
ok I think I don't need to mod any NC nazis, focus on the beats and flow from this now on
01:04:127 (2) - I suggest to move this somewhere on the left01:04:541 (3) - ends 01:06:092 - , and add HC here 01:06:196 -
01:17:989 (3,4) - bad flow, also overlaps
01:20:058 (2,5) - overlaps
01:22:747 - slider would be better here, ends 01:23:782 -
01:37:644 - slider here, ends 01:38:368 -
01:40:954 (5) - make it 3/4 repeats, reverse 01:41:265 - ends 01:41:575 - , add HC here 01:41:782 -
01:42:196 (1) - shift it here 01:42:092 -
overal picture 01:40:954 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - :
01:54:196 (1,2,3,4) - should be like this
01:55:437 (5) - change to HC, add 1/1 slider here 01:55:851 - ~ 01:56:265 -
02:00:816 (1,2,3) - shift (2) 02:02:782 - , and (3) 02:03:092 -
02:07:437 (7,8,9) - same case as 01:54:196 (1,2,3,4) -
02:08:678 - change this to HC, 02:09:092 - HC, 02:09:506 - HC
02:10:334 (1,2) - ctrl G, strong beat here 02:10:747 -
02:14:058 - change to 2/1 slider, that ends 02:14:885 -
02:28:954 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - don't do this lol, this is confusing, move elsewhere that can be seen clearly
[Insane]
don't forget your NC! there are lots of long combo numbers
00:14:885 (3,4) - overlap, move elsewhere
00:25:541 (8) - 1/4 sliderthat ends 00:25:644 -
00:30:816 (1) - delete, add HC here 00:30:920 -
00:31:437 - slider ends 00:31:747 - since this is strong beat, also add HC here 00:31:851 -
00:33:920 (3) - overlaps with 00:34:747 (1) -
00:39:610 - there's a beat here, add HC
00:39:713 - slider please :3 - ends 00:40:437 -
00:43:023 (1) - ah, you skipped the awesome 1/4 beats here
there's a strong beat 00:43:334 - 00:43:644 - 00:43:851 -
00:44:058 (3) - this is placed wrong, the strong beat is here 00:44:161 -
00:44:265 (4) - delete, and add HC here 00:44:678 -
01:22:747 - prefer a spinner here, ends 01:23:885 - , add HC here 01:23:989 -
01:37:644 - ~ 01:38:368 - slider please :3
01:40:954 (1) - wrong beat, should be 3/4 repeat slider, repeat is here 01:41:265 - ,
end slider is here 01:41:575 - , delete the HC on 01:41:575 -
01:54:196 (3) - same beat as ^
01:55:023 - HC
02:02:885 (2) - delete, since there's nothing there (I mean the beat)
02:06:610 (5) - don't use repeat slider here, 1/1 is enough, add HC 02:07:437 -
02:07:851 (2) - delete, same reason as before
02:30:506 - 1/4 slider that ends 02:30:610 -

good luck, sorry for the wall of texts
Topic Starter
Demo
Thanks for mod!- Will update soon!
therevenant_old
I always wanted to map this (but i suck at timing), If i made a set of 4K maps for osu mania, would you add them ?
Topic Starter
Demo
Sure thing man! :D
mrturtle99
I think that's Sasuke in the background......
Normal
00:09:092 (2) - needs to be distance snapped as it is too close to 00:08:265 (1) - in spacing
02:17:782 (1) - put in a break after this spinner, as it is a long distance with no notes
actually pretty hard to find stuff in here to correct
Hard
00:24:816 (2) - consider making this a straight slider (I don't like curved 1/8th sliders)
00:28:954 (1) - ^
00:34:334 (2,3) - spacing here should be equidistant with the spacing on 00:33:506 (1,2) -
00:38:885 (1) - consider making this a straight slider
01:04:541 (3,4) - not really sure about this rhythm, feels kind of weird, consider making the slider 1 tick mark longer and deleting the HC
01:21:816 (8,9) - I feel like the spacing between these should be the same as the stream before it
01:26:885 (1) - consider making this a straight slider and extending it by 1 repeat
01:36:816 (1) - consider making straight slider
02:17:782 (1) - should be a break after this spinner
Insane
00:25:541 (8) - tested this stream a little bit and it feels better to me if it is changed to a HC
01:21:092 (1,16) - on this stream, maybe start a NC at 01:21:920 (9) - so it doesn't go up to 16 in one combo
01:31:851 (2) - lengthen out the curves in this slider, it looks kind of unpleasant atm
02:02:782 (1,2,3) - here 02:03:092 (2,3) - need to be close together than they are to 02:02:782 (1) - for clarity purposes
02:07:747 (1,2,3) - ^
02:17:782 (1) - this slider needs a break after it
02:30:506 (16) - I feel like this should be a HC, not a slider
Other
  1. Normal, hard, and Insane difficulties all need to have the same tags
  2. Maybe take off the countdown on standard difficulties as they do conflict with the mania difficulties on that
  3. Audio bitrate needs to be compressed to less than or equal to 192 kbps, but should be done after everything else, as changing mp3s can cause the beatmap to need to be resnapped
Topic Starter
Demo
Hoho thanks for the mod and for pointing some stuff out! :D
**Updated**
naoe dami
From #Modreqs
[General]
- Umm, I don't know why use sasuke's BG in this map, I think better to use Megurine Luka BG
- Then, check the AiMod (ctrl + shift + A)

I fixing the audio bitrate, so here the new mp3 here you are. Btw, click the Direct download link
uwaahh, uncheck countdown in diff Normal, Hard, and Insane (F4 - Design - uncheck Enable Countdown)
[Normal]
00:06:609 (1,2) - blanket
00:11:161 (2,3) - make it closer, too far object
00:14:885 (3,4) - fix the blanket
00:28:954 (3,1) - blanket
00:30:196 (2,1) - ^
01:07:851 (2) - better to make straight slider
01:11:161 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:12:816 (3,4,5,6) - like this?

01:19:023 (2,3) - blanket
01:23:989 (3,1) - too far object, make it closer
01:27:713 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:34:334 (3,1) - blanket
01:57:506 (1,3) - I think it isn't symetrical, so fix it

OK just that, sorry for nazi's mod :D
Topic Starter
Demo
Ok, so i removed the countdown from the 3 diffs but i'm aware that a higher than 192kbps song can be ranked...
Just because i'm really lazy to resnap the notes i'll just leave it as it is for now and i'll have it as a last resort in case it comes in the way later on..
ALSO... WHY DOES EVERYONE HATE SASUKE!!?? T^T ( He's gonna be there for now although i do have a luka pic that might fit but that depends on player demand )

Thanks for modding!! :D
*Updated*
Faan
From Faan's Best modding Q(insert sparkle)
fking dorothy3242 is the man
Normal:
00:21:506 (5) - reduce one repeat and insert circle
00:28:541 (2,3,1) - you can adjust (3) so it flows from 2 into 4 smoothly
00:53:782 (1) - starting here the volumn should be reduced, maybe 50~60%
01:27:713 (1) - too close due to SV issue, look at the random comment down there
02:02:472 (3,4) - random stack with no major purpose
02:14:058 (1) - better to replace this with spinner
02:30:196 (4) - 1/1 slider maybe

this is normal, don't use SV change it confuses new players
especially thos 0.5x it comes as a surprise and they're get pressured and maybe die

Hard:
00:09:092 (2) - rotate 4 degrees around selection center anti-clockwise for better blanket
00:10:747 (4,5) - ^ similiar
00:20:265 (2,3) - rearrange this is bad flow+gameplay
00:24:403 (1) - move upper right more so flows from 5 better
00:27:299 (2,3) - bad flow
00:34:334 (2,3) - too close
00:37:230 (4,5) - reverse both individually for better flow? idk, if so move 00:38:885 (1) -
01:04:541 (3,4) - one slider
01:23:161 (10) - NC
01:17:368 (1,2,3) - Distance is tooooo confusing
01:17:989 (3,4) - too close
01:42:092 (1) - too far?
02:03:092 (3,4) - ^
02:07:954 (9) - red tick after

Insane:
00:33:920 (3,4) - ugly overmap
00:38:885 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - holy sweet **** ******

I really suggest remap this, but with a more consistant DS and better flow, most the flows in this is very awkward. I notice you have some very long sliders maybe make them into better shapes.
Topic Starter
Demo
I changed everything on Normal and Hard!
And also you I was considering a remap and you just gave me one more reason to, soo Insane is remapped completely! :3

Thnx for the honest mod, I appreciate it! :D
*Updated* ^^
therevenant_old
*looks at the horizon

no mods in sight for me huh ?

guess imma get this to some queues this weekend...
schwarzvgrune
request from Grun's mania queue

general
change SFX to 60 or 50%, it's very loud especially for insane if you have a lot of notes with full sfx
uncheck letterboxing
change your mp3 to 192kbps or lower. use converter

1 2 3 4

Hard
SPOILER
00:13:023 (13023|3,13127|2,13230|1) - move one box to the left (4 3 2 to 3 2 1)
00:13:437 (13437|2) - to 2
00:13:644 (13644|1) - to 3
00:15:713 (15713|0,15713|2) - if you follow the organ instrument, better keep it consistent by using 1 long note.
00:19:023 (19023|0,19023|3) - ^
00:30:920 (30920|0) - delete
00:30:920 (30920|3,30920|2) - move to 1 2
00:31:437 (31437|3,31437|2,31747|3,31747|2) - move to 3 4
00:32:265 (32265|1,32368|2,32472|0,32575|3) - if you're following the instrument, it should be 7 in total, which means the note should be placed with 1/6 beat, not 1/4.
something like this
http://puu.sh/fxRKb/a309c89c01.jpg

or this (because some parts of the song are too difficult for HD and if you don't revamp it the map cannot get ranked. try to be consistent. the difficulty can be adjusted and compared when you take a look at the bar at the left side of the mania 'keyboard'
http://puu.sh/fxRX1/a1a0c7256c.jpg

00:35:575 (35575|1,35885|2,36196|2,36403|3) - all of them have different pitch, can arrange from 1 - 4 instead of 2 3 3 4

00:38:265 (38265|2,38885|0,38885|1,38989|2,38989|3,39092|1,39092|0,39196|3,39196|2,39299|1,39299|0,39403|3,39403|2,39506|0,39506|1,39610|2,39610|3) - this one might also be over-mapped for HD, consider revising. try 1 note for each.

00:40:541 (40541|2,40541|3) - only 1 sound that you are following, better move the 00:40:541 (40541|3) - to 00:40:747 - and adjust the end of the LN too.

00:45:506 (45506|0,45610|1,45713|2,45816|3,45920|0,45920|2) - same with above. notes placing with 1/6 beat and reconsider position to avoid overmapping

this one is my preference (i like to stick on to the instrument)
00:49:437 (49437|3,49437|2,49644|0) - you;re only following 1 sound, better place it like this for example
http://puu.sh/fxSDZ/5bf6a27053.jpg

00:52:954 (52954|2,53782|1) - also supposed to be one continuous pitch, don't divide it into 2 different long notes (only my preference, you can leave it if you dont want)
00:57:920 (57920|1,58747|3) - ^
i know that you're actually following the piano. but my personal preference would be to refrain using long notes when there are instruments that supposedly fits better with using long notes (there is a violin sound on the background along with piano, better not to use LN for the piano)

01:02:885 (62885|3,64541|2,64541|1) - if you're following my suggestion with applying violin sound instead, then this LN needs to be revamped.
01:02:885 (62885|3) - only till 01:04:127 - then adds a LN till 01:04:541 -
01:21:299 (81299|1,81299|0,81506|1,81506|0,81713|0,81713|1,81920|1,81920|0,82127|0,82127|1,82334|1,82334|0,82541|1,82541|0) - these are supposed to be distributed with 1/4 beats. you can alternate between 1 3 instead, with 1/4 beats instead of 1/2 with 2 notes on 1 2 monotonously.

01:26:885 (86885|3,86885|2,87299|0) - same with 00:32:265 (32265|1,32368|2,32472|0,32575|3) - if you're following the instrument, it should be 7 in total, which means the note should be placed with 1/6 beat, not 1/4.
if you decide to use LN instead to express those 1/6 sliding notes (sliding i mean they're not dividing clearly between each note with a short staccati) then use LN for preceding section as well for consistency


01:27:713 (87713|3,87713|2,88023|3,88023|2,88230|2,88230|3,88334|1,88334|0,88437|2,88437|3,88541|1,88541|0,88851|0,88851|3) - same with my suggestion above on 00:31:437 (31437|3,31437|2,31747|3,31747|2) - move to 3 4
you can decide which one to move to where, but try not to place it where we need to press the same note twice. you can copy my earlier suggestion or alternate and place differently somehow

01:29:368 - overmapped, consider revamping the whole section

01:33:816 (93816|3,93816|1,95368|0,95368|2) - personal preference, use only 1 LN, instead put some more notes to express the beat more

01:36:196 (96196|2,96816|0,96816|1,96920|2,96920|3,97023|1,97023|0,97127|2,97127|3,97230|0,97230|1,97334|3,97334|2,97437|0,97437|1) - borderline over-mapped, consider revamping

01:40:127 (100127|2,100127|1,100541|0,100954|1,100954|2) - same with 00:32:265 (32265|1,32368|2,32472|0,32575|3) - if you're following the instrument, it should be 7 in total, which means the note should be placed with 1/6 beat, not 1/4.
if you decide to use LN instead to express those 1/6 sliding notes (sliding i mean they're not dividing clearly between each note with a short staccati) then use LN for preceding section as well for consistency

01:41:472 (101472|3,101472|2,101575|0,101575|1,101678|3,101678|2,101782|1,101782|0,102092|0,102092|1,102610|0,102610|2,102920|2,102920|0,103127|1,103127|0,103230|2,103230|3,103334|1,103334|0,103437|2,103541|3) - needs total revamping, overmapped and unsuitable placement, try not to make the player spam notes on the same place

for example you might change those to something like this
http://puu.sh/fy2Rh/f5b4e658d7.jpg
^^ dont need to follow those pattern, its just for illustrations.

01:46:747 (106747|0) - ends at 01:47:058 -
01:47:161 (107161|3) - starts at 01:47:058 - ends at 01:47:368 -

01:47:472 (107472|1) - if you listen carefully to the pitch, you may notice that this is actually 2 notes with the same pitch. the first one is followed by a short staccati and then another note with the same pitch, so something like

01:47:368 - adds note to 2

01:47:588 - adds LN to 2 ends at 01:47:885 -


another suggestions
would be better to end the song at 02:17:368 -
you can use stair patterns following the instrument.

if you do change the end of the song, also change the ending on other difficulty as well.

For HD please limit the use of speed changer, and the BPM is already fast, changing it to up to 1.5 in my opinion is not really suitable, especially since this is only for HD. try to cut those speed by 30% or 50%
i.e. 1.5 to 1.25 1.2 to 1.1 1.1 to 1.05

sorry only for hard at the moment, in my opinion this still needs a lot of fixing to be able to reach rankable quality.
therevenant_old
Done, followed most of your instructions.
Harbyter
hello~ mod req via queue for therevenant's GD


[General]

Uncheck the lettebox during the pause and the widescreen support if there isn't the sb

And for the Audio bitrate,someone already pointed that

[Timing]

please remove all those unnecessary speed increase ,lot of people play with a high scroll do you know what this mean?xD

[MOD]
This mod will focus on pattern consistency and fix a lot of snap

Column- 1-2-3-4-

[Rev's MX]

Modderino desu
00:06:609 - add note 4 ,strong intro here , and move this 00:06:609 (6609|1) - in col 3 ,after those changes move this 00:06:816 (6816|3) - in col 2 and delete this 00:06:713 (6713|2) -

now following the placement of the notes i guess you followed that tecno sound,right?If yes then apply those changes-->

00:07:334 (7334|1) - move this here 00:07:230 -

00:07:644 - add 3

00:08:885 - add a note

00:08:989 (8989|0) - del

00:10:644 (10644|1) - move here 00:10:541 -

00:14:730 (14730|0) - ??xd fix this snap in 1/4

00:15:299 - add two notes

00:16:127 - here too

00:18:299 - 00:18:506 - 00:18:713 - 00:18:920 - don't ignore those snap,suggest to put some notes

00:21:506 - remove one note

00:22:334 - how about a 1/8 stream here??Something like this ---->

example starts from here 00:22:230 -

00:28:747 - bubble pop sound here lol add a note

00:28:954 (28954|3,29006|2,29058|1,29110|0,29161|1,29213|2,29265|3,29316|2) - overmap, here there's a simple 1/4 stream ,suggest to do like this

00:32:316 (32316|0,32368|1,32420|2,32472|3,32523|0,32575|1,32627|2) - overmap,here there's a simple 1/6 stream ,try something like this

following your rythm you should delete those notes 00:33:816 (33816|1) - 00:36:713 (36713|1) -
add a note here 00:36:920 - 00:37:954 -
remove this 00:38:368 (38368|1) -
add here 00:38:678 -

00:41:472 - add note 3 and move 00:41:575 (41575|2) - in col 4

00:42:092 - add note 3

00:42:247 (42247|3,42299|2,42351|1,42403|0,42454|3,42558|1) - like the previous one,here there's a simple 1/4 ,suggest to add 1/4 LN like the previous suggestion

00:45:454 (45454|3,45506|1,45558|0,45610|3,45661|2,45713|1,45765|0,45816|3,45868|2) - this too, 1/6 here , first delete then try like this starting from here 00:45:506 -

00:47:368 - add a note

00:57:610 - add note 4

01:00:196 - add note 4

01:01:023 - add 4

01:07:023 (67023|3) - delete,you didn't put double note in other pattern like this

01:17:989 (77989|0) - move here 01:18:092 -

01:19:023 - add note 1

01:19:644 (79644|1) - move here 01:19:747 -

well now it's a little hard to guess here but i'm pretty sure this is a full 1/6 not a 1/8 stream

01:22:799 (82799|2,82851|1,82903|0,82954|3,83006|2,83058|1,83110|0,83161|3,83213|2,83265|1,83316|0,83368|2,83420|3,83472|2,83523|1,83575|0,83627|3,83678|2,83730|1,83782|3,83834|0,83885|1,83937|2) -

so delete them and suggest to start the 1/6 stream from here 01:22:747 -

01:26:782 (86782|0) - del

01:26:885 (86885|3,86937|2,86989|1,87041|0,87144|3,87196|2,87247|1) - turn this too in 1/4 LN

01:30:247 (90247|3,90299|2,90351|1,90403|0,90454|3,90506|2,90558|1) - 1/6

01:34:644 (94644|1) - remove

01:34:851 - add

01:35:885 - add 2

01:36:299 (96299|1,96713|3) - del

01:40:178 (100178|2,100230|1,100282|0,100334|2,100385|3,100437|2,100489|1) - fix this too in 1/4 LN

01:42:092 (102092|2) - remove this,overchorded xD

01:43:385 (103385|0,103437|1,103489|2,103541|3,103592|0,103644|1,103696|2,103747|3,103799|0) - del and fix with 1/6 stream like the previous suggestion

01:44:989 (104989|0) - del

01:46:644 (106644|1) - del

now from here 01:50:885 - is really mixed up ,i suggest to do a full 1/4 so just put notes where there aren't xD but first delete those two 01:54:351 (114351|2,114816|2) - this 02:02:627 (122627|1) - and this 02:07:592 (127592|2) -

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that's all,hope i'll be helpfull :)
therevenant_old
huueeeeehh, that looks like a lot of shizzle !
before starting to update I need to know if you updated the mania Demonoid ?
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Hi DemoNoidX & therevenant :)
Here as your request in HarbyCrack Modding Team for Osu!Mania

General:
Click Me!
BPM: 145
Offset: 00:06:598 - (you have put offset at 00:06:610 - x)
If you are not sure about my suggestion, try to get a look on these parts:
Set "Playback Rate" on 25%
Standard, diff "Normal" : for example, this circle at 00:07:851 (3) - ;
osu!mania, diff "Rev's NM" : for example these notes at 00:13:230 - .
How can you see/listen, these notes are not in correct time position, so my suggestion is to change offset.
Do not forget to resnap all notes, sliders, Preview Point & SVs in all difficulties!
Bye~
therevenant_old
applied most of harbyter's mod.
oreh shet that was some changes.
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