sup i'm using a new kb so if i makes typoers you will knows the reasonz
[7K MX]
imma just mod 7k lmao this song is fking long my eyes will burn
Well main problem i have here is that some chords are rather awkward and some transitions could be made better, will list them down below
Yeaaa, going to list down the awkward shit and stuff you can improve ( basically a mod, why am i saying this )
00:02:905 (2905|5,2905|6,2905|4,2905|3,3128|4,3128|6,3350|4) - This pattern feels kinda weird on the right hand here, especially if you use thumb for the center key here, might want to simplify this and make into another pattern if possible
00:08:239 (8239|2,8683|1,8683|0,8683|4,8905|6,8905|5,9128|3,9128|5,9128|2,9572|2,9572|3,9572|1,9794|0,9794|2) - i think i get your transition here to the synths but i suggest to make these same as before, a 1/2 chord thing here
00:11:794 (11794|4,11794|5,12016|3,12239|2,12239|5,12239|4,12239|1,12461|6,12461|3,12683|5,12905|2,12905|4,13128|5,13128|1,13128|6,13128|3,13350|2,13572|6,13572|5,13794|4,13794|3,14016|6,14016|1,14016|2,14016|5,14239|6,14239|5) - I suggest entirely focus on the synths here, it makes it clearer to the players on what you are mapping here and so it doesn't feel like a mess of patterns
00:14:461 (14461|2,14683|5,14905|1,15350|2,15572|3,15794|4,16016|3,16239|4,16239|2,16461|3,16461|1,16683|0,16683|2) - All of these 1/2 LN that are mapped to the instrument in the music should be single notes imo, the instrument there feels staccato and using a LN to represent them feels rather weird imo
All the other 1/2 LNs after - ^
00:18:016 (18016|5,18016|4,18239|6,18239|5,18461|4,18461|6) - This is rather weird to play with the LNs heavily concentrated on the right hand
00:23:720 (23720|1) - what is this note ;;
00:28:683 - Even though this part is more intense than 00:00:239 - It feels significantly easier and more lax | I suggest to make the intro less difficult OR make this section more dense
00:32:239 (32239|3,32461|4,32683|2,32905|5,33128|1,33128|6,33572|3,33794|4,34016|2) - Same thing as ^ | This part feels too underwhelming and outstanding with respect to the other patterns in this section, i suggest to make it more dense
00:38:905 (38905|6,39128|2,39350|4,39572|1,39794|0) - yeea same thing, when compared to the start of this kiai, 00:28:683 (28683|3,28683|5,28683|1,29128|2,29128|4,29350|6,29350|3,29350|0,29572|1,29572|5,30016|4,30016|6,30239|5,30239|3,30461|0,30461|2) - it feels very very underwhelming
00:46:016 (46016|6,46016|5,46016|4) - Some chords like these don't really represent anything and i'm not sure what is the purpose of these
00:48:683 - TO 00:49:128 - AND 00:49:128 - TO 00:50:016 - I feel that these 2 sections should follow different patterns/densities as they use different sound effects/tuning to the effects here
00:56:239 (56239|4,56350|6,56572|4,56683|6) - I feel that it's better to use a constant 1/4 trill on the right hand here as the player is more used to 1/2s currently, throwing them a weird 1/4 pattern here may confuse them |
01:08:239 (68239|3) - eeeh the chords here feel fine, but i suggest to move this to 01:08:016 - 's columns so that it has a constant 2 note chord here, it feels more consistent imo
01:12:016 - Add another note here, for note count consistency
01:19:794 (79794|2,79794|4) - Move these away from the center by 1 column, it feels quite weird to hammer to a LN there
01:22:461 (82461|1,82461|5) - Same as ^
01:23:350 (83350|2,83350|4) - ^
01:24:683 (84683|4,84683|5,84683|6,84905|5) - This is really really awkward to execute, move 01:24:683 (84683|5) - to the center here
01:24:683 (84683|0) - Same as ^ | Move to the column left of the center key
01:30:461 (90461|5,90461|6,90683|3,90683|4,90905|1,90905|0,91128|3,91128|2,91350|5,91350|6,91572|4,91572|3,91794|0,91794|1,92016|3,92016|2) - Switch up the arrangement of chords here a bit, it feels too monotonous and it doesn't have the same pitch as 01:29:572 (89572|5,89572|6,89794|3,89794|4,90016|1,90016|0,90239|3,90239|2) -
01:50:905 (110905|1,110905|3,111128|4,111128|2,111794|3,111794|5,112016|4,112016|2) - May want to make these LNs for the synths
01:52:683 (112683|0,112683|2,112905|6,112905|5) - ^
02:05:128 (125128|2,125128|0,125350|3,125350|1) - ^
02:06:016 (126016|6,126016|4,126239|5,126239|3) - ^
02:06:905 (126905|1,126905|0,127128|4,127128|5) - ^
02:10:016 (130016|0) - Move to some column in the center, it gives more impact and feels less awkward when executing this chord imo due to the LN in the same hand
02:13:350 (133350|5,133350|4,133794|5,133794|6,134239|5,134239|4,134683|5,134683|6,135128|5,135128|4) - May want to make these all 1/2 LNs
02:16:683 (136683|6,136683|5,136683|1) - May want to make at least 1 a 1/1 LN or something
02:17:572 (137572|1,137572|5,137572|0) - ^
02:18:461 (138461|5) - ^
02:22:461 (142461|6) - Move somewhere to the center, same reason as before, it's less awkward
02:24:239 (144239|0) - Move right by 2 columns | Same reason as ^
02:24:905 (144905|5,144905|4,145350|6,145350|5,145794|5,145794|4) - Might want to make these 1/2 for the synths
02:27:572 (147572|4,147572|2,148016|2,148016|4,148461|2,148461|4,148905|2,148905|4,149350|2,149350|4) - ^
02:30:016 (150016|0,150016|6) - Might want to move to the center so that it's less awkward to play
02:32:905 - You might have missed out 2 notes here, consistency with 02:31:128 (151128|5,151128|4,152016|5,152016|6) -
02:33:350 (153350|4,153350|6) - I suggest another pattern here for consistency with 02:34:016 (154016|1,154016|3,154016|0,154016|6,154461|4,154461|3,154461|5) - |
02:44:461 (164461|1,164461|2,164683|6,164683|0,164905|1,164905|2,165128|4,165128|5,165128|3,165350|0,165350|6,165572|4,165572|5,165794|0,165794|6,166016|3,166016|2,166016|1,166239|5,166239|4) - this feels like 1 big pattern, however, the synths do not really feel consistent in the music here , I suggest to make these 02:44:683 (164683|0,164683|6) - 1/1 LNs or something
02:46:016 (166016|1) - Might want to make this a 1/1 LN due to the synths
02:53:128 (173128|6,173128|2,173128|0) - May want to make some of these notes into a 1/1 LN | Remove these if needed to
03:39:794 (219794|1,220016|0,220016|2,220239|2) - Quite awkward to execute here, repattern this if possible
03:41:572 (221572|6) - Same ^ | Might want to move this LN to the left hand if possible
03:46:016 (226016|2,226461|3,226461|5,226905|6,226905|4,227350|3,227350|1,227794|2,227794|0,228239|5,228239|3) - This repeating pattern is way too monotonous, switch it up a bit using longer patterns or different patternings
04:00:461 (240461|4,240461|6,240683|0,240683|5,240683|1,240683|2,240905|4,240905|6,240905|5,241128|1,241128|0,241128|2,241350|4,241350|1,241350|6,241350|5,241572|2,241572|1,241572|3,241572|5,241572|0) - wow this is way more awkward than brackets, I suggest to swap the columns of the whole section here instead to make this more comfortable like this |
04:03:572 - The mp3 cuts off rather weirdly here, i suggest to use audacity to fade out this last part so that it doesn't feel like a strict cut
Oh, and AiMod pls
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[Jmeh's 7k HD]
First things first, capitalize your k in 7k HD, cause that's how the naming system rolls in this mapset
00:23:794 (23794|4,23794|6,24239|2,24239|0,24461|3,24683|6,24683|4,25128|2,25128|6,25572|4,25572|0,26016|6,26016|2,26461|0,26461|4) - The usage of 1/2 is rather inconsistent here, idk what's the purpose here of reduction of 1/2s
00:33:794 - Idk why is there no notes here, i suggest to map to the synths here
00:39:572 (39572|5,39794|4,39794|6,40016|3) - I suggest to spread these notes to the left hand a bit so that it's not too biased
00:50:683 - Same here, i suggest to map to the synths
01:13:794 (73794|6,73794|0,74016|5,74016|1,74239|2,74239|4) - I don't think these are needed here, focus on the synths solely so that it feels more clean and the players will know exactly what these LNs are mapped to, i honestly don't think the sounds here are loud enough for these notes to be mapped
01:46:461 (106461|2) - I don't think there is a synth here, i suggest to reduce this into a note
01:57:794 (117794|3,117794|6) - Don't really know why is this a 2 note chord, reduce to a 1 note
02:05:128 (125128|3) - Don't think this LN really serves much of a purpose, remove this
02:05:128 (125128|4,125128|6,125350|0,125350|5) - Might want to emphasize these synths by making these LNs or making them hammer
02:06:016 (126016|2,126239|6,126239|1) - Same here | Might want to make these 2 note chords also
02:06:905 (126905|2,126905|5,127128|6,127128|4) - Same here
02:18:461 (138461|6,138461|0) - Might want to make one of this a 1/1 LN so as to follow 02:16:683 (136683|2,137572|4) -
02:20:239 (140239|6,140461|0) - Move these 1 column closer to the center, | 02:20:239 (140239|4,140239|6,140461|0,140461|2) - These synths are different from 02:20:683 (140683|6,140683|4,140905|0,140905|2,141128|6,141128|4,141350|2,141350|0,141572|6,141572|4,141794|0,141794|2,142016|6,142016|4,142239|3) -
02:41:128 - feels like the 1/2 mapped in between LNs like these are inconsistent imo since you sometimes map them and sometimes you dont
03:14:239 (194239|0) - Might want to move 1/2 forward in the time line, for consistency with 03:12:239 (192239|2,193128|4) -
03:23:794 (203794|0,203794|2,203794|6,204239|4,204461|0,204683|4,204683|2) - I feel that the transition from the previous patterns to this 4K pattern is not established well since the transition here feels a bit random as it's not placed on a strong timing point
03:33:016 (213016|2) - Extend this by 1/4 and move back by 1/4 | don't think a 1/4 is needed here especially on a mainly 1/2 rhythm song
Well, it looks like you converted a 4k into a 7k and added some stuff to make it look like a 7k, i gotta admit some patterns here are creative but 4K patterns converted into 7k don't really fare well as they use different fingers and it really limits the patterning creativity
[7K NM]
00:18:016 (18016|1) - Move to far right for pitch relevancy
00:31:350 - Add a 1/2 LN or a note here for the synth | This is also to help players transition into the 1/2 rhythm
00:34:461 (34461|4,34905|3,35350|2) - I feel that you can map to the synths better like this |
00:38:461 - Same as 2nd mod
00:46:016 - Add a note, same reason as 2nd mod
You get the idea of transitioning from 1/2 to 1/1 i guess by adding notes
00:46:683 (46683|4,46905|2,47572|6) - in between these notes feel empty, i suggest to add some
00:50:905 - You may also want to map in some parts like these with 1/2 LNs or notes if the 1/2 synths are not that clear, this is so that the 1/2 LNs are mapped more "accurately"
00:54:016 (54016|2) - Same idea, remove this, it doesn't really have a strong synth, removing it also emphasizes 00:53:794 (53794|4,54239|4) - these 1/2 better anyways
01:18:683 (78683|5,78905|2,78905|1,79350|5,79350|4,79794|2,79794|1,80239|6,80239|4,80683|0,80683|2,81128|6,81128|4,81350|2,81572|3,81794|4,82016|2,82239|1) - kinda confused on what you are mapping here, choose mapping the synths only or bass or map them both at the same time, it feels rather inconsistent imo | this applies until 01:25:572 -
02:12:016 (132016|6,132461|0,132905|0) - I don't think these LNs are accurately mapped to the synths here? it feels weird
02:14:016 - Add a 1/2 here to make it a constant 1/2 synth stream
02:16:905 (136905|2) - Extend by 1/2 and move back by 1/2 | it maps to the synth more accurately
02:24:016 (144016|4,144239|0,144461|2) - same thing as | I don't think these LNs are accurately mapped to the synths here? it feels weird
02:26:016 - Might want to add a note here for the kick
02:26:905 - ^ | It's quite significant of a kick imo
02:31:128 (151128|4) - same as | Extend by 1/2 and move back by 1/2 | it maps to the synth more accurately
02:32:016 (152016|6) - ^
02:32:239 - Add a 1/2 LN here for the synth
02:34:016 - Might want to add 2 1/1 LNs here for synth
same thing over and over for these stuff, review this kiai and map to the synths more accurately
04:01:572 (241572|1) - I think you can remove this , 1 note should be enough for this light bass
wow long mod m8
