Well, first things first, the mp3 is weirdly cut on both ends, the start and the end, well i assume you took it from the ranked vers. idk how that got ranked lmao, the mp3 is horrid imo | This causes you to miss a note at the start, messing up the players rhythm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOa61PHnNrg you can extract the mp3 from youtube and stuff, if you can't encode it just poke me in game or through offline pm
Same with video, if you want to put a video in you can also poke me
The BG seems to be stretched, which ruins the original ratio, basically making the faces in the BG out of proportion, I suggest to use this and crop
http://wall.alphacoders.com/big.php?i=462812 Similarly if you can't just poke me, DON'T STRETCH THE BG
OH GOD HOW DID NO ONE POINT OUT THE OFFSET IS WRONG ( or probably you rejected it w/e )
but it's a must change
Change to -23, the Up and Downbeats here are off
oh. and snap also hehe[Insane]
00:10:361 (10361|3,10476|0,10591|2,10591|4,10591|5,10707|6,10707|1,10822|2,10822|4,10822|0,10938|6) - This feels like an unneeded diff spike here, there is no elevation of music intensity to have this pattern this hard imo | I basically suggest to remove 00:10:591 (10591|4,10707|6,10822|0) - , with priority on removing these 00:10:591 (10591|4,10822|0) - since they create brackets and also is confusing to read
00:21:091 - I suggest to map in the sound effects here like this ( Highlighted notes are the ones changed )
00:32:976 (32976|2,32976|0,33207|1,33207|0) - This is extremely awkward to execute imo | I suggest to 00:32:976 (32976|2,32976|0,33207|0) - Swap columns on both of these
layering stuff over one another is definitely going to create some chaos here, I suggest to make this whole section less awkward to play 00:32:053 (32053|1,32053|6,32053|5,32168|3,32284|4,32284|0,32399|2,32515|1,32515|5,32515|4,32630|6,32745|3,32745|2,32745|0,32861|5,32976|0,32976|6,32976|2,33091|4,33207|0,33207|1,33207|6) - |
00:56:861 (56861|0) - Move to the center column | It's just more comfortable to execute
01:00:207 (60207|0,60668|2,60899|4,61130|0,61591|2,61822|4,62053|2,62515|0) - IDK what these LNs represent here, it feels like it's just making the whole pattern more awkward to execute well,
01:19:591 - I feel that it's better to prioritize this 1/4 hammer here instead of 01:19:361 (79361|2,79361|0,79361|4,79361|6,79476|4,79476|0,79476|6,79476|2) - , basically like this
01:23:745 (83745|1,83745|3,83861|4,83861|2,83976|3,83976|5,83976|0,84091|4,84091|1,84091|6,84207|5,84207|2,84322|6,84322|3,84438|2,84438|5,84553|1,84553|4,84668|5,84668|2,84784|6,84784|3) - Feels like you are just pulling this pattern off cause it looks cool, i honestly don't know what does it represent in the music?
01:25:361 (85361|6,85361|4,85476|5,85591|4,85591|6,85707|5,85822|6) - This bracket is very awkward to play I suggest to re-pattern to something else
01:28:476 - I suggest another note here for the synth
[Hard]
00:07:361 - Idk what you are mapping with the 1/4s here honestly, it feels inconsistent and i feel that mapping to the synths here would be better | I know it's a rather general comment here, i don't feel like pointing out everything though
00:23:976 - Not sure what happened here, it feels like 1/4s after this is neglected in this section (?)
00:31:015 (31015|2,31130|4,31361|4,31476|2,31707|2,31822|4) - I can see that you are mapping to the synths somewhat here | 00:34:130 (34130|0,34361|2,34591|4,34591|1,34822|3,35053|0,35284|2,35515|0) - And idk what happened here, you seem to fall into mapping the ( boring ) 1/2s here, it just feels monotonous and inconsistent with this
00:38:515 (38515|3,38745|2,38745|4) - Feels like you should have the same note patterning for these as they are both kicks OR they should have at least a hammer | Similar on what you did here 00:42:207 (42207|3,42438|6,42438|3) -
00:58:938 - Maybe add one for vocals here
01:19:591 - Feels like you are missing out a very loud sound effect here, I highly recommend to fit this in with a note or 2
01:27:668 (87668|1,87668|3,87668|5,87784|4,87784|2,87784|6,88015|3,88015|1,88015|5,88130|4,88130|2,88130|6,88130|0) - Not sure if players would enjoy a big bracket at the end here after a long song, it might just easily ruin plays ( how evil )
[Normal]
00:03:668 (3668|4,3899|0,4130|3,4130|1,4361|5,4476|3,4591|6,4822|6,5053|5,5053|3,5168|1,5515|0,5515|6) - You can utilize this 1/4 sound effect here to make an alternating hand pattern instead of extrapolating the background sound again and again | Something like this
00:12:553 (12553|2) - This 1/4 feels out of place imo, it doesn't really emphasize anything strong here, i suggest to remove or move 1/4 forward
00:31:015 (31015|4) - ^
00:42:207 (42207|3,42438|2,42438|4) - I suggest to have the same exact pattern or hammer at least 1 note here
00:53:515 (53515|2,53745|2) - Don't think is necessary to hammer, unless you plan to hammer these 00:56:284 (56284|4,56515|2) - 00:58:130 (58130|4,58361|2) - and so on for consistency
01:19:476 (79476|3) - same thing, i suggest to map to the louder sound here |
Nothing else i guess ( i'm fucking late for this mod )