Hey there summoned by your request in The Sewing Queue
Sorry it's a bit late;; ( a bit ) ( a month )
If I refer to a point in a slider, keep in mind that the first point is the head of the slider.
Ex: 00:10:830 (5) - in easy would have 3 points.
If something I say just doesn't make sense, because sometimes I put in reasoning with weird descriptions and not even realize it, feel free to PM me.
I hope I didn't miss anything ;w;
[General]
This map
is super cool
I like it a lot
I can't stop playing it like woah it's awesome
and now the song is stuck in my head.
'v'
Awwww thanks 
[Easy]
00:06:030 (1) - Current shape looks a bit funky maybe move the second point to x:99 y:309 for a smoother look? -
Fixed00:27:630 (1) - Also looks a bit funky maybe second point to x:173 y:305 -
Fixed00:29:730 (2) - This 1/2 seems a bit out of place in this easy. Try moving it to 00:29:430 - ? It'll follow the music and lessen the risk of a player clicking far too early. Don't forget to reposition so that DS is still happy. -
Fixed00:36:630 (4) - Ahh yess I can feel my purpose of being here come to life 2nd point to x:396 and y:279 and the third point to x:343 y:368 should improve that blanket :3c -
Wait what? this makes the slider longer on the timeline and it's overlapping the previous note o.o (unless i am baka ;w;)01:09:630 (3) – Slider blankets my are weakness but let's try the third point to x:167 y:80 and the fourth point to x:121 y:71 if that's better. -
Fixed01:32:430 (1) - Slider looks stressed. Try moving the second point down somewhere like x:303 y:293 (doesn't have to be those exact values just down a bit) -
Fixed01:36:030 (2) – Slider also looks stressed. Try moving down the third point just a little. -
Okay i moved third to y51 and the 2nd anchor just a tad up01:39:630 (1) - ? You should probably delete one of the points to make it a regular 3 point curve slider so that it looks more symmetrical unless serving some special purpose that I can't figure out. -
Yeah good point. Didn't notice this owo01:44:130 (5) - ? This note feels late since so far in the easy mostly everything is 1/1 and mapping the music rather than the vocals. -
Good point01:51:630 (1) – This spinner may end too close to the next vocals to give a beginner the recovery time they would need. A good rule of thumb to use is that if the next hit object is displaying during the middle of a spinner, the spinner end and the object are most likely too close together. -
Okay i made the next slider after spinner a bit shorter and added a circle note01:58:830 (3) - MY CALLING second point to x:143 y:32 and third point to x:196 y:11 for improved blanket :3 -
Fixed02:01:230 (5) - ^ if you did that then of course resymmetry here yes. -
Yup 02:08:430 (1) – Same concern with the spinner here. -
Dragged back by a whole white tick :302:14:430 (4) - Ooo a blanket move second point to x:37 y:97 and third point to x:45 y:46 to further its greatness. -
Fixed02:22:230 (4) - Oh my another blanket – improve by moving the second point to x:206 y:108 and the third point to x:317 y:124 -
Fixed[Normal]
There was an update for it when I was mid mod so I'm not gonna re-check and hope for the best because there doesn't seem to be conflict looking at the most recent mod I think. ;w;
00:08:430 (5) - Is this supposed to be a blanket. I'm actually unsure. I'm really really unsure. I think this is where I insert a suggestion to blanket please. Not that it's bad, but it almost looks like it's meant to be something else..
00:25:230 (8) – Second point to x:486 y:81 and third point to x:441 y:55 may help it look a bit smoother ye. This also allows for the red anchor to be on a white tick. -
Fixed00:27:630 (3) -
How about something like this that looks less wrinkled. -
I removed the Anchor00:28:830 (4) – This too? Is it meant to be ??
00:32:430 (3) – Maybe could be made to be a bit smoother looking
Like this -
hope it's okay now00:40:830 (1,2,3) – Ooh nice a blanket duo I like it- - For (1) move the second point to x:300 y:348 and the third point to x:351 y:306 for further blanket greatness. -
Fixed00:48:630 (6,7) - ? Let's just say fix
this blanketbecause I can't figure out good coordinates that wouldn't require repositioning the entire next combo >~< -
Alright i tried my best to fix it >w< hope it's okay01:07:830 (6,7) - Waffle. Try something a bit more symmetrical like
this perhaps. -
dem waffles XD, Okay i tried my best x301:23:430 (2) -
Relax it a bit -
annnnd relax :301:33:030 (5,6) - no
Blanket fix ok ;;I GOT THIS it'll be distance snapped and everything and the flow wont be changed significanlty I hope
01:33:030 (5) – first point to x:230 y:254 second point to x:234 y:171 third point to x:282 y:134
01:33:930 (6) – move to x:305 y:216
01:34:230 (7) – x:373 y:166
PROFIT
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hehe yay XD01:39:030 (3) - First point to x:104 y:340 ? Maybe -
okay owo01:39:630 (4) – Slider looks stressed try giving it a nice long stretch like
this -
The slider is happy now 01:44:430 (4) – Improving the blanket is as simple as moving the second point to x:398 y:257 and the third point to x:330 y:273 ovo/ -
\ovo02:24:930 (8,3) - Overlap su -
ooo thanks o: did not notice02:55:830 (4,7) – Overlap man -
^[Hard]
00:10:830 (3) -
Maybe a slider like this instead? -
Fixed00:15:630 (1) -
A destressed curve for life and peace -
Just £2.50 a month can save this stressed curve ;w;. Fixed XD00:19:230 (1,2) – Now to reconsider whether those sliders in the normal difficulty really weren't meant to be blankets because this, this is good. -
hehe x3 i'm sure it's fine being fixed anyway .00:25:230 (2) -
Maybe this instead yes -
Yeah i was meaning to change that ;w;00:36:330 (3,4) – second point to x:359 y:204 and third point to x:396 y:184 for cuddly blanket warmth -
(3) is nice and snuggled now :300:40:230 (3,1) – Good. Good. C: -
=D00:57:630 (1) - Improve blanket by moving the third point to x:361 y:146 for quick blanket cuddles. -
he is warm and toasty now :301:31:830 (4,5,6,1) - Excellent -
:$01:43:530 (5) – Perhaps moving the first point to x:100 y:51 and the second point to x:64 y:91 and the third point to x:54 y:127 would be beneficial to this blanket. -
Fixed01:56:730 (4) – Could be made to blanket (5) by moving the second point to x:374 y:284 and the third point to x:418 y:286 -
It would ruin the symmetry at 01:55:830 ;w;02:48:630 (3) –
Maybe something like this will look less crumpled? -
i changed it into a moustache looking slider instead 
Moustaaaache :{3 (like Markipliers XD)[Insane]
00:21:630 (6,7) – wut. move the first point to x:295 y:216 for instant betterment of blanketness -
Fixed owo00:21:630 (6) – Saving this blanket and making it quite nice is as easy as moving the second point to x:399 y:29 -
ahhh i am confused here D: i thought the last one was (6). Too confused ;w;00:46:830 (1) – Restore the blanket 2k15 by moving the second point to x:79 y:71 and the third point to x:69 y:122 -
Fixed :301:41:730 (4,5) – What a nice blanket what on earth dramatic improvement A+ -
Aww yeea >:DThanks Dorothy
This helped a lot (literally used all suggestions
)
why not think of something more creative in terms of something that scales up? like petty earnin, then cash earnin, then something, idk, something that makes more sense. LOL as long as it shows a clear progression between every diff it's still rankable.
why not just map through it?
