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Yun*chi - Wonderful Wonder World* [CatchTheBeat]

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rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 มีนาคม 2558 at 15:41:19

Artist: Yun*chi
Title: Wonderful Wonder World*
Source: ログ・ホライズン
Tags: log horizon anime ending ゆんち bank78952 Sentrysam
BPM: 128
Filesize: 4241kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bank's Platter (2.73 stars, 262 notes)
  2. Cup (1.28 stars, 134 notes)
  3. Rain (3.6 stars, 267 notes)
  4. SentrySam's Salad (1.94 stars, 190 notes)
Download: Yun*chi - Wonderful Wonder World*
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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CTB Mapset
Artist : Yun*chi
Title : Wonderful Wonder World*
Source : Log Horizon
BPM : 128
CTB - Cup by Me
- Salad by SentrySam
- Platter by -B a n k-
- Rain by Me
Last edited by rew0825 , edited 21 times in total.
bank78952
bank78952
:P
[general]
Hitsound หัดเพิ่มมั่งเถอะ ;w;
BG ใหญ่ไป (1240x720 or 1330x768 เถอะ)
BG อันนี้ 1336x768
[Cup]
มั่ว mod :P
01:40:007 เพิ่มโน๊ตได้ (มั้ง)
01:40:475 ลดเสียงลงไปเรื่อยๆ (95%,80% บลาๆ)
[Sam's Salad]

miss ตัวสุดท้าย
00:07:194 (3) ย้ายไปที่ 00:07:428 แล้วลดความยาวลงให้มาที่ 00:07:663 แล้วทำ rev.slider :v
^
00:11:530 (6,7) ไม่ค่อยแน่ใจนะ ลบ
[Rain]

ง่าย :P
01:01:569 (3) ลบ
01:02:038 (1) remove NC
01:09:850 (5) x:336
01:21:257 - 01:25:007 stream+1/6 กรรม (พิมพ์เล่น) :v
01:39:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/4 ก็พอแล้วไม่ใช่หรือ
01:40:710 ลดเสียงลงเรื่อยๆ
rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825

-B a n k- wrote:

:P
[general]
Hitsound หัดเพิ่มมั่งเถอะ ;w; ไม่ใส่หรอก :v
BG ใหญ่ไป (1240x720 or 1330x768 เถอะ) กำลังดีเเล้ว ขนาดเเบบเนี่ย
BG อันนี้ 1336x768
[Cup]
มั่ว mod :P
01:40:007 เพิ่มโน๊ตได้ (มั้ง) ไม่
01:40:475 ลดเสียงลงไปเรื่อยๆ (95%,80% บลาๆ) อะเค

[Rain]

ง่าย :P
01:01:569 (3) ลบ อะเค
01:02:038 (1) remove NC ไม่อะ
01:09:850 (5) x:336 ไม่อะ
01:21:257 - 01:25:007 stream+1/6 กรรม (พิมพ์เล่น) :v ไม่อะ
01:39:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/4 ก็พอแล้วไม่ใช่หรือ ไม่รู้จักหรอ เราจะต้องทำให้มานยากจนถึงที่สุด :D
01:40:710 ลดเสียงลงเรื่อยๆ อะเค
เเต้งกิ้ว :)
SentrySam
10 posts
Joined November 2013
SentrySam
[Sam's Salad]

miss ตัวสุดท้าย
00:07:194 (3) ย้ายไปที่ 00:07:428 แล้วลดความยาวลงให้มาที่ 00:07:663 แล้วทำ rev.slider :v แก้ละ
^
00:11:530 (6,7) ไม่ค่อยแน่ใจนะ ลบ ไม่อ่ะ พอลบทิ้งแล้วมันแปลกๆ
ขอบใจมาก :)
osu file format v13

Update
osu file format v13
[General]
AudioFilename: Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54772
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20085,21022,21960,27585,45632,46335,60866,64850,77038
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:rew0825
Version:SentrySam's Salad
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:tv size log  horizon anime ending ed -B a n k- Sentrysam
BeatmapID:554941
BeatmapSetID:240070

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825
Ok Update :D
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
lazy mod incoming!

[General]
- your BG dimension is too huge. you must resize it to 1366x768 to make it rankable
- uncheck widecreen support on all diff since you don't have any SB on it
- uncheck letterbox during break on all diff since you didn't put any break on it
- disable countdown on your salad diff
- woaaaah you need to reduce the general volume here please. they're too loud imo. i have a suggestion here (they're should applied on all diifs)
00:00:632 - change the volume here to 40%
00:04:382 - ^ to 70%
00:11:882 - ^ to 50%
00:26:882 - ^ to 60%
00:55:007 - since the kiai sound is not really intense, a 80% would be enough
01:25:007 - change the volume here to 60%
01:45:632 - change it to soft-sample set instead. looks weird as the end of the spinner if you use a normal-sample set here since you lower the volume on this spinner periodically

[Cup]
change the tick rate to 1 pls. due many slider you place with the shape like 00:00:632 (1), it's really high potential to miss the slider tick for beginner player. this is one of many reason why i never recommend to use any tick rate besides 1 on CtB diff. for the sake of playability, really :3
00:03:678 (3) - you can ctrl+g this to keep the distance symmetry with the prev pattern. and also it makes the flow better with the upcoming pitch on the next note
00:04:382 (1) - add finish on head as introducing a new part of music. i can hear the song began stronger here
00:08:132 (1) - add finish on head? same reason as above. more likely
00:11:882 (1) - ^
00:47:507 (5) - add finish here to emphasize the cymbal sound on music
00:51:257 - this is really should be deserves a fruit as the cymbals crashes so loud here . you can try this rhythm and pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2322358. also don't forget to add finish on (3)'s tail
00:52:194 - same as above http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2322362. add finish on (5)
00:55:007 (1) - add finish on head as introducing a kiai
01:06:257 (1) - finish on head
01:09:538 (4) - finish on tail

the only good on this cup is your general spacing and the consistency of it. the rhythm and pattern could be improved tho, you are using too many (well it's almost all of them) a "c" shaped slider which i think is a bit uncreative at my sight. not boring but it just feel untidy atm. and also where's the hitsound?

[SentrySam's Salad]
00:02:507 (3,1) - just a bit. decrease the distance here a bit so the movement could be balanced with the prev note. i'd say move (1) by 1 grid to left
00:06:257 (1,2,3) - try this pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2322537
00:45:163 - add note here? there's clearly a clap beat here that should be mapped
00:47:038 - add 1/1 slider because there's a beat
00:55:007 (5) - x:16?
00:55:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add more spacing here to introduce well of this kiai section. the current movement is too little tho

nah there are still a plenty of issue that i haven't pointed out here yet. you only mapped the vocal out here and ignore so many important beat such as clap or cymbal sound that should be definitely mapped. also again, where's the hitsound? lol

[Bank's Platter]
HP 5 for better spread?
00:06:725 - i think the greenline should be on 00:06:842 instead. the current you made is also make the slider tick become nearly silence as well. if you are intended to make the slider tick silence, then you may igrone this. but imo don't you think 5% is just too low? i prefer 10% here
00:07:663 (4,5,6) - nah the distance of (5) and (6) should be higher as you can see the finisher on (6) so they can emphasize well and the movement could be better
00:17:272 (1) - a left curved one would make the movement more natural here to catch up the next note
00:20:788 (4,5) - make the distance similar with 00:18:678 (4,1) for consistency to make it less confusing
00:22:663 (3,4) - here as well.
00:25:475 (3,4) - maybe swap their position? i found this movement way better to catch up the pitch vocal on these notes
00:32:975 (3) - x:216?
00:45:632 (4,5,1) - make their distance same each other
00:48:444 (1) - this slider makes play bad. it doesn't fit at all with the background. please don't force to make 3/4 slider if it's not in the rhythm
00:49:382 (3) - remove whistle on body. dunno either you place it intended or not, it's disturbing a lot
00:50:436 (4,5) - i don't recommend this little stream.
00:54:069 (3,4) - unstack this? i mean place (4) in different x from (3) since it is down beat
01:08:600 (6,1) - they're too far. make the distance 2.0x
01:10:007 (4) - x:48? a HDash fit here
01:19:850 (5,1) - same here. make the distance 2.0x
01:20:788 (2,3) - why HDash here? nothing in the music support it so better to remove the HDash tho
01:24:772 (4) - x:288?
01:32:038 (1,2) - add HDash? also add finish on (2)'s head
01:35:788 (5,6,1) - imo the HDash should be on (6) instead

[Rain]
00:39:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - tell me why 1/2 stream here? :3
00:46:803 (2) - maybe add reverse? it will result a nice HDash as emphasize the finisher on the next note
00:41:882 (1,2,3) - the distance between (1) and (2) is too far imo. and also you put a 1/4 HDash between (2) and (3) which is kinda sudden and unreadable at first sight. if you want to keep the HDash is okay but at least reduce the distance of (1) and (2)
00:54:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - the distance here is break the movement really bad. i must say this is stupid. the movement stream you made on 00:53:132 (1,2,3,4) and 00:53:600 (5,6,7,8) it goes well but then it completely destroyed by this 00:54:616 (2,3,4,5,6) stream cz of suddenly huge change on distance. and also why it is 1/6 stream here?
01:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not this 1/6 stream again.
01:24:538 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - here too
01:39:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - did you know that 1/6 stream you made from the beginning is all overmapped thing? BAT will notice this for sure :3

this mapset still need more improvement tho. and again i didn't see any hitsound in this diff

once again, they're just lazy mod. not at my best but i hope you pay more attention from what i mentioned there.
good luck :)
rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825

Vhy wrote:

lazy mod incoming!

[General]
- your BG dimension is too huge. you must resize it to 1366x768 to make it rankable Ok Fixed
- uncheck widecreen support on all diff since you don't have any SB on it Fixed
- uncheck letterbox during break on all diff since you didn't put any break on it Fixed
- disable countdown on your salad diff Fixed
- woaaaah you need to reduce the general volume here please. they're too loud imo. i have a suggestion here (they're should applied on all diifs)
00:00:632 - change the volume here to 40% Fixed
00:04:382 - ^ to 70% Fixed
00:11:882 - ^ to 50% Fixed
00:26:882 - ^ to 60% Fixed
00:55:007 - since the kiai sound is not really intense, a 80% would be enough Fixed
01:25:007 - change the volume here to 60% Fixed
01:45:632 - change it to soft-sample set instead. looks weird as the end of the spinner if you use a normal-sample set here since you lower the volume on this spinner periodically Fixed

[Cup]
change the tick rate to 1 pls. due many slider you place with the shape like 00:00:632 (1), it's really high potential to miss the slider tick for beginner player. this is one of many reason why i never recommend to use any tick rate besides 1 on CtB diff. for the sake of playability, really :3 Umm...not change in this
00:03:678 (3) - you can ctrl+g this to keep the distance symmetry with the prev pattern. and also it makes the flow better with the upcoming pitch on the next note Fixed
00:51:257 - this is really should be deserves a fruit as the cymbals crashes so loud here . you can try this rhythm and pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2322358. Fixed
00:52:194 - same as above http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2322362. Umm...not change

the only good on this cup is your general spacing and the consistency of it. the rhythm and pattern could be improved tho, you are using too many (well it's almost all of them) a "c" shaped slider which i think is a bit uncreative at my sight. not boring but it just feel untidy atm. and also where's the hitsound?

[Rain]
00:39:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - tell me why 1/2 stream here? :3 1/6 !? Ok change to 1/4
00:46:803 (2) - maybe add reverse? it will result a nice HDash as emphasize the finisher on the next note Fixed
00:41:882 (1,2,3) - the distance between (1) and (2) is too far imo. and also you put a 1/4 HDash between (2) and (3) which is kinda sudden and unreadable at first sight. if you want to keep the HDash is okay but at least reduce the distance of (1) and (2) Ok change (1) to same this pattern 00:40:944

00:54:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - the distance here is break the movement really bad. i must say this is stupid. the movement stream you made on 00:53:132 (1,2,3,4) and 00:53:600 (5,6,7,8) it goes well but then it completely destroyed by this 00:54:616 (2,3,4,5,6) stream cz of suddenly huge change on distance. and also why it is 1/6 stream here? Umm...Fixed 00:54:616 (2,3,4,5,6) to 1/4
01:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not this 1/6 stream again. Ok Fixed to 1/4
01:24:538 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - here too Fixed to 1/4
01:39:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - did you know that 1/6 stream you made from the beginning is all overmapped thing? BAT will notice this for sure :3
Ohh I don't No ;w; I will change to 1/4

this mapset still need more improvement tho. and again i didn't see any hitsound in this diff

once again, they're just lazy mod. not at my best but i hope you pay more attention from what i mentioned there.
good luck :)
Ok thanks :) and about hitsound I want to time to fine a good hitsound so I not change hitsound in this :D
bank78952
bank78952

Vhy wrote:

lazy mod incoming!
I'm so lazy for fix it :P
[Bank's Platter]
HP 5 for better spread? 5.5 please :3
00:06:725 - i think the greenline should be on 00:06:842 instead. the current you made is also make the slider tick become nearly silence as well. if you are intended to make the slider tick silence, then you may igrone this. but imo don't you think 5% is just too low? i prefer 10% here i want to make the slider tick silence but i fix to 10%
00:07:663 (4,5,6) - nah the distance of (5) and (6) should be higher as you can see the finisher on (6) so they can emphasize well and the movement could be better i want to make a little jump in this part :3 ( (4) x368 (5) x168 and (6) x240)
00:17:272 (1) - a left curved one would make the movement more natural here to catch up the next note fix but Little curved :3
00:20:788 (4,5) - make the distance similar with 00:18:678 (4,1) for consistency to make it less confusing fix
00:22:663 (3,4) - here as well. fix
00:25:475 (3,4) - maybe swap their position? i found this movement way better to catch up the pitch vocal on these notes fixed
00:32:975 (3) - x:216? No
00:45:632 (4,5,1) - make their distance same each other fix
00:48:444 (1) - this slider makes play bad. it doesn't fit at all with the background. please don't force to make 3/4 slider if it's not in the rhythm fix
00:49:382 (3) - remove whistle on body. dunno either you place it intended or not, it's disturbing a lot ok
00:50:436 (4,5) - i don't recommend this little stream. because it's not a rain diff :3 Fix
00:54:069 (3,4) - unstack this? i mean place (4) in different x from (3) since it is down beat (4) move to x128
01:08:600 (6,1) - they're too far. make the distance 2.0x fix
01:10:007 (4) - x:48? a HDash fit here ok added
01:19:850 (5,1) - same here. make the distance 2.0x fix
01:20:788 (2,3) - why HDash here? nothing in the music support it so better to remove the HDash tho fix
01:24:772 (4) - x:288? ok move
01:32:038 (1,2) - add HDash? also add finish on (2)'s head no Hdash but add finish on (2)'s head
01:35:788 (5,6,1) - imo the HDash should be on (6) instead add
Ty~
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i'll change hitsound latter
SentrySam
10 posts
Joined November 2013
SentrySam

Vhy wrote:

lazy mod incoming!
[SentrySam's Salad]
00:02:507 (3,1) - just a bit. decrease the distance here a bit so the movement could be balanced with the prev note. i'd say move (1) by 1 grid to left Fixed
00:06:257 (1,2,3) - try this pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2322537 Fixed
00:45:163 - add note here? there's clearly a clap beat here that should be mapped Fixed
00:47:038 - add 1/1 slider because there's a beat Fixed
00:55:007 (5) - x:16? Ok
00:55:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add more spacing here to introduce well of this kiai section. the current movement is too little tho Fixed

nah there are still a plenty of issue that i haven't pointed out here yet. you only mapped the vocal out here and ignore so many important beat such as clap or cymbal sound that should be definitely mapped. also again, where's the hitsound? lol
Thank :)
Update
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54772
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:rew0825
Version:SentrySam's Salad
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:tv size log  horizon anime ending ed -B a n k- Sentrysam
BeatmapID:554941
BeatmapSetID:240070

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825
Ok Update all :D
GAMI
582 posts
Joined February 2014
GAMI
yo! mod req from ♬♪Endless Modding/GD Team♪♬

Cup
00:25:007 (3) - x:224 y:256
00:47:272 (5) - try to added note at here like http://puu.sh/dFbBv.jpg
01:06:960 (2) - added note?
01:16:569 (3) - x:224 y:192
01:36:022 (3) - added note?

Salad
01:01:335 (3) - x:352 y:80
01:18:913 (2,3) - why dont ctrl+g ? (seems bored here lol)

Platter
00:04:382 (2) - x:104 y:176
00:04:850 (3) - x:136 y:312
00:31:803 (6) - x:72 y:240
00:32:038 (1) - x:376 y:200
01:32:038 (1) - x:48 y:232
01:40:475 (5) - x:423 y:192

Rain
00:14:694 (3) - x:432 y:272
00:18:678 (1) - x:416 y:208
01:14:460 (2) - x:64 y:80
01:16:335 (2) - x:464 y:224
01:16:569 (3) - x:80 y:224

sorry if I didnt really help ^^ anyway GL for rank :D
bank78952
bank78952

GAMI wrote:

yo! mod req from ♬♪Endless Modding/GD Team♪♬

Gami moe >.<

Platter
00:04:382 (2) - x:104 y:176 Fix
00:04:850 (3) - x:136 y:312 Fix
00:31:803 (6) - x:72 y:240 Fix
00:32:038 (1) - x:376 y:200 Nope
01:32:038 (1) - x:48 y:232 Fix
01:40:475 (5) - x:423 y:192 Fix (but move to x416)
UpDaTe
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rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825

GAMI wrote:

yo! mod req from ♬♪Endless Modding/GD Team♪♬

Cup
00:25:007 (3) - x:224 y:256 um...not change
00:47:272 (5) - try to added note at here like http://puu.sh/dFbBv.jpg Fixed
01:06:960 (2) - added note? um...not change
01:16:569 (3) - x:224 y:192 um...not change
01:36:022 (3) - added note? Fixed

Rain
00:14:694 (3) - x:432 y:272 Fixed
00:18:678 (1) - x:416 y:208 um...not change
01:14:460 (2) - x:64 y:80 Fixed
01:16:335 (2) - x:464 y:224 Fixed
01:16:569 (3) - x:80 y:224 Fixed

sorry if I didnt really help ^^ anyway GL for rank :D
Thanks mod and update Bank's platter
SentrySam
10 posts
Joined November 2013
SentrySam
Salad
01:01:335 (3) - x:352 y:80 Fixed
01:18:913 (2,3) - why dont ctrl+g ? (seems bored here lol)Fixed
Thank :D
Update
osu file format v13

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rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825
Ok Update all
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
ok from Raika's hentai modding team \w/

@rew can we m4m? :^) but later 55

[Rain]
00:28:053 (3) - x64 please for flow
00:32:272 (1) - 1/2 slider reverse and
00:56:882 (1) - make this as 1/2 slider reverse for consistent pattern with 00:58:288 (3) - :v
00:59:928 (3) - delete and 00:59:460 (2) - 1/2 reverse slider and 01:00:163 - note here x448
01:01:569 - add note x304 and here too 01:01:803 - 432 there still have rhythm , so 4/2 break is weird to me
01:05:085 (2) - make this as 1/2 reverse slider
01:09:186 - and 01:09:421 - add note x288
01:09:655 (2) - x128 and for consistent 01:09:889 (4) - 384
01:13:991 (1) - ctrl + g this for make a flow
01:14:928 (3) - make this as 1/2 slider and move 1/2 ahead , 01:14:460 (2) - make this as 1/2 reverse
01:29:694 (3) - delete and 01:29:225 (2) - 1/2 reverse slider 01:29:928 - notex512 and 01:28:991 (1) - 208
01:30:163 (4) - make this Y coordinate to 256
01:37:663 (4) - delete and 01:37:194 (3) - 1/2 reverse slider and 01:37:897 - add note x416

Will mod lower diffs tomorrow maybe 3pm will continue this you know what i mod this at 3am:D de
rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825

Genocide wrote:

ok from Raika's hentai modding team \w/

@rew can we m4m? :^) but later 55 No =w=

[Rain]
00:28:053 (3) - x64 please for flow Umm..No , I think that pattern will be hard
00:32:272 (1) - 1/2 slider reverse and No , not good rhythm
00:56:882 (1) - make this as 1/2 slider reverse for consistent pattern with 00:58:288 (3) - :v ^
00:59:928 (3) - delete and 00:59:460 (2) - 1/2 reverse slider and 01:00:163 - note here x448 Fixed
01:01:569 - add note x304 and here too 01:01:803 - 432 there still have rhythm , so 4/2 break is weird to me at 01:01:569 - Add not at x:256 not change after
01:05:085 (2) - make this as 1/2 reverse slider No , not good rhythm
01:09:186 - and 01:09:421 - add note x288 No but Add note at 01:09:186 - x:336
01:09:655 (2) - x128 and for consistent 01:09:889 (4) - 384 No not change
01:13:991 (1) - ctrl + g this for make a flow Fixed
01:14:928 (3) - make this as 1/2 slider and move 1/2 ahead , 01:14:460 (2) - make this as 1/2 reverse Umm...not change
01:29:694 (3) - delete and 01:29:225 (2) - 1/2 reverse slider 01:29:928 - notex512 and 01:28:991 (1) - 208 Nooooooooooooooooooo
01:30:163 (4) - make this Y coordinate to 256 ...?
01:37:663 (4) - delete and 01:37:194 (3) - 1/2 reverse slider and 01:37:897 - add note x416 No not change

Will mod lower diffs tomorrow maybe 3pm will continue this you know what i mod this at 3am:D de
Thanks :D
Seph
Seph
[General]

Tag conflicts, fix them

[Cup]

  1. 00:00:632 volume should be 30%
  2. 00:04:382 volume should be 40%
    both are pretty loud for the beginning imo
  3. 01:39:772 (5) - this should just be a slider

    thats that, the cup is pretty simple so id leave it as it is

    [SentrySam's Salad]
  4. 00:07:428 (3,4) - reduce the distance between the two, its pretty far for a Salad
  5. 00:28:288 (5,1) - ^
  6. 00:43:757 (6,1) - ^

    [Bank's Platter]
  7. 00:54:772 (4,5) - this jump is too big
  8. 01:40:475 (5) - why not just make this into a spinner like the other diffs? suits it better

    thats it, very nice platter i must say

    [Rain]
  9. 00:35:319 (1,2,3,4) - id have to say try a different pattern than this
  10. 00:37:194 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  11. 00:50:202 (2,3) - reduce distance
    ^^^ i suggested these ones but not on the others because one pattern similar to what i pointed was a prechorus jump so its fine, and the others are on kiai time so there's nothing bad with using them on those
rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
rew0825

Seph wrote:

[General]

Tag conflicts, fix them Ok Fixed

[Cup]

  1. 00:00:632 volume should be 30% Fixed
  2. 00:04:382 volume should be 40% Fixed
    both are pretty loud for the beginning imo
  3. 01:39:772 (5) - this should just be a slider Fixed

    thats that, the cup is pretty simple so id leave it as it is

    [Rain]
  4. 00:35:319 (1,2,3,4) - id have to say try a different pattern than this Fixed
  5. 00:37:194 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
  6. 00:50:202 (2,3) - reduce distance Fixed
    ^^^ i suggested these ones but not on the others because one pattern similar to what i pointed was a prechorus jump so its fine, and the others are on kiai time so there's nothing bad with using them on those
Thank you :)
SentrySam
10 posts
Joined November 2013
SentrySam

Seph wrote:

[SentrySam's Salad]
00:07:428 (3,4) - reduce the distance between the two, its pretty far for a Salad Fixed
00:28:288 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
00:43:757 (6,1) - ^ Fixed
Thank you <3
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320,160,77975,6,0,L|400:160,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,78913,2,0,L|208:256,2,80,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,79850,2,0,L|304:256,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,80788,6,0,L|16:80,2,160,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,82194,2,0,L|176:160,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,160,83600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,83835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,84538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85007,12,4,88757,0:0:0:0:
256,128,89225,6,0,L|336:128,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,90163,2,0,L|48:128,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,91100,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,240,91569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,112,91803,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,92038,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,112,92272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,92975,2,0,L|176:272,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,93913,2,0,L|464:160,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,160,94851,2,0,L|128:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,95319,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,160,95553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,288,95788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,288,96022,2,0,L|256:288,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,96725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,192,96960,2,0,L|240:192,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,97663,6,0,L|416:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,98132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,98366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,98600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,304,98835,2,0,L|208:304,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,99303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,99538,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,128,99772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100475,12,0,105632,0:0:0:0:
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