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Buen map 
nice map 
Topic Starter
puxtu wrote:
nice map
Thanks man, but i need a modder. ;~;
hi ~
from my queue
|1|2|3|4|
from my queue
|1|2|3|4|
mod
good luck[General]
Tag delete : Naruto
Easy : HD6 OD6
Normal : HD7 OD7
Insane : HD8
[Hard]
00:16:371 - delete one note
00:17:324 - ^
00:20:181 - add 4
00:23:514 - delete one note
00:27:086 - ^
00:30:657 - ^
00:31:133 - ^
00:38:276 - ^
00:41:609 - ^
00:44:467 (44467|3) - delete
00:44:229 (44229|1) - move to 2 (end to 00:44:705 - )
00:45:181 - delete one note
00:46:848 - ^
00:45:419 - add 3
00:47:324 - ^
00:48:990 (48990|3) - move to 00:49:109 -
00:50:181 - delete one note
00:51:609 (51609|2) - delete
00:51:967 (51967|0) - ^
00:52:562 (52562|3) - ^
00:53:276 (53276|1) - ^
00:53:276 (53276|1) - add 4
01:05:419 - ^3
Tag delete : Naruto
Easy : HD6 OD6
Normal : HD7 OD7
Insane : HD8
[Hard]
00:16:371 - delete one note
00:17:324 - ^
00:20:181 - add 4
00:23:514 - delete one note
00:27:086 - ^
00:30:657 - ^
00:31:133 - ^
00:38:276 - ^
00:41:609 - ^
00:44:467 (44467|3) - delete
00:44:229 (44229|1) - move to 2 (end to 00:44:705 - )
00:45:181 - delete one note
00:46:848 - ^
00:45:419 - add 3
00:47:324 - ^
00:48:990 (48990|3) - move to 00:49:109 -
00:50:181 - delete one note
00:51:609 (51609|2) - delete
00:51:967 (51967|0) - ^
00:52:562 (52562|3) - ^
00:53:276 (53276|1) - ^
00:53:276 (53276|1) - add 4
01:05:419 - ^3
Topic Starter
All fixed, you are very good!
Thanks for mod!
Thanks for mod!
Hello. Sorry i'm late 
this your req mod
Good Luck >.<b
this your req mod
Check It!
Easy
00:42:086 - add note
Normal
00:41:371 (41371|1) - move to here 00:40:895 for ballance
00:58:514 - add note
Hard
00:03:157 (3157|1) - delete
00:10:419 (10419|2) - ^
00:20:062 - add note
00:27:919 (27919|0) - delete
00:42:562 (42562|0) - move to here 00:42:086
00:52:681 - add note
01:08:633 - ^
01:08:871 - ^
01:09:109 - ^
01:09:586 - ^
01:09:824 - ^
Insane
00:14:467 - add note
00:14:586 - ^
00:25:776 - ^
00:33:157 - ^
00:33:395 - ^
00:42:443 - ^
00:42:086 - add note
Normal
00:41:371 (41371|1) - move to here 00:40:895 for ballance
00:58:514 - add note
Hard
00:03:157 (3157|1) - delete
00:10:419 (10419|2) - ^
00:20:062 - add note
00:27:919 (27919|0) - delete
00:42:562 (42562|0) - move to here 00:42:086
00:52:681 - add note
01:08:633 - ^
01:08:871 - ^
01:09:109 - ^
01:09:586 - ^
01:09:824 - ^
Insane
00:14:467 - add note
00:14:586 - ^
00:25:776 - ^
00:33:157 - ^
00:33:395 - ^
00:42:443 - ^
Good Luck >.<b
Topic Starter
Ryouta- wrote:
Hello. Sorry i'm late
this your req modCheck It!Easy
00:42:086 - add note
Normal
00:41:371 (41371|1) - move to here 00:40:895 for ballance
00:58:514 - add note
Hard
00:03:157 (3157|1) - delete
00:10:419 (10419|2) - ^
00:20:062 - add note
00:27:919 (27919|0) - delete
00:42:562 (42562|0) - move to here 00:42:086
00:52:681 - add note
01:08:633 - ^
01:08:871 - ^
01:09:109 - ^
01:09:586 - ^
01:09:824 - ^
Insane
00:14:467 - add note
00:14:586 - ^
00:25:776 - ^
00:33:157 - ^
00:33:395 - ^
00:42:443 - ^
Good Luck >.<b
Fixed, thanks Ryouta. :3!
Hello!
From osu!mania PH Modding Queue
Mod as requested
Good luck~!
From osu!mania PH Modding Queue
Mod as requested
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
4K = |1|2|3|4|Everything modded
[Timing]
• 00:54:943 ~ 01:27:324 - I suggest kiai time here
[Easy]
• 00:20:657 (20657|0) - Extend LN to 00:22:562 - sound stops here
• 00:38:276 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:39:229 - ^
• 00:41:133 - ^
• 00:43:038 - ^
• 00:43:990 - ^
• 00:58:752 (58752|2) - Move to 4, for spread note
[Normal]
• 00:03:990 - Add a note, for the hi-hat
• 00:07:800 - ^
• 00:12:086 - ^
• 00:13:514 - ^
• 00:15:419 - ^, for the snare drum
• 00:16:371 - ^, ^
• 00:18:276 - ^, ^
• 00:19:229 - ^, ^
• 00:58:752 (58752|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:59:229 (59229|2) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:59:705 (59705|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 01:00:181 (60181|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 01:01:133 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 01:21:133 - ^
[Hard]
• 00:03:276 (3276|1,3514|2) - Ctrl+H
• 00:03:752 (3752|1) - Move to 1, if above is applied (hand balance)
• 00:06:133 (6133|1,6371|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 00:10:419 (10419|2,10538|1) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:10:895 (10895|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:13:276 (13276|1,13514|2) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:13:752 (13752|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:14:467 (14467|2) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:18:514 (18514|3,18752|1) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:24:229 (24229|0,24467|2) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:28:990 (28990|2,29109|1) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:29:467 (29467|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:44:705 (44705|1) - Move to 3, then 00:44:943 (44943|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:59:467 (59467|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 01:01:133 (61133|2) - Move to 1, for spread note
• 01:15:657 (75657|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:20:419 (80419|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 01:24:467 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
[Insane]
• 00:05:181 (5181|1,5419|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 00:06:252 (6252|1,6371|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:06:848 (6848|3,7086|0) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:13:514 (13514|1) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:13:752 (13752|3) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:14:943 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:16:848 - ^
• 00:17:324 - ^
• 00:43:276 (43276|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:43:514 (43514|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:43:752 (43752|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:45:181 (45181|2) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:49:705 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:50:181 - ^
• 00:50:657 - ^
• 00:50:895 (50895|0,51133|2) - Ctrl+G, for hand balance
• 00:59:705 (59705|1,59943|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 01:14:705 (74705|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:15:181 (75181|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 01:25:895 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:54:943 ~ 01:27:324 - I suggest kiai time here
[Easy]
• 00:20:657 (20657|0) - Extend LN to 00:22:562 - sound stops here
• 00:38:276 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:39:229 - ^
• 00:41:133 - ^
• 00:43:038 - ^
• 00:43:990 - ^
• 00:58:752 (58752|2) - Move to 4, for spread note
[Normal]
• 00:03:990 - Add a note, for the hi-hat
• 00:07:800 - ^
• 00:12:086 - ^
• 00:13:514 - ^
• 00:15:419 - ^, for the snare drum
• 00:16:371 - ^, ^
• 00:18:276 - ^, ^
• 00:19:229 - ^, ^
• 00:58:752 (58752|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:59:229 (59229|2) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:59:705 (59705|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 01:00:181 (60181|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 01:01:133 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 01:21:133 - ^
[Hard]
• 00:03:276 (3276|1,3514|2) - Ctrl+H
• 00:03:752 (3752|1) - Move to 1, if above is applied (hand balance)
• 00:06:133 (6133|1,6371|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 00:10:419 (10419|2,10538|1) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:10:895 (10895|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:13:276 (13276|1,13514|2) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:13:752 (13752|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:14:467 (14467|2) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:18:514 (18514|3,18752|1) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:24:229 (24229|0,24467|2) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:28:990 (28990|2,29109|1) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:29:467 (29467|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:44:705 (44705|1) - Move to 3, then 00:44:943 (44943|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:59:467 (59467|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 01:01:133 (61133|2) - Move to 1, for spread note
• 01:15:657 (75657|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:20:419 (80419|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 01:24:467 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
[Insane]
• 00:05:181 (5181|1,5419|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 00:06:252 (6252|1,6371|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:06:848 (6848|3,7086|0) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:13:514 (13514|1) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:13:752 (13752|3) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:14:943 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:16:848 - ^
• 00:17:324 - ^
• 00:43:276 (43276|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:43:514 (43514|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:43:752 (43752|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:45:181 (45181|2) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:49:705 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:50:181 - ^
• 00:50:657 - ^
• 00:50:895 (50895|0,51133|2) - Ctrl+G, for hand balance
• 00:59:705 (59705|1,59943|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 01:14:705 (74705|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:15:181 (75181|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 01:25:895 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
Good luck~!
Topic Starter
DrawdeX wrote:
Hello!
From osu!mania PH Modding Queue
Mod as requestedI only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance4K = |1|2|3|4|Everything modded[Timing]
• 00:54:943 ~ 01:27:324 - I suggest kiai time here
[Easy]
• 00:20:657 (20657|0) - Extend LN to 00:22:562 - sound stops here
• 00:38:276 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 00:39:229 - ^
• 00:41:133 - ^
• 00:43:038 - ^
• 00:43:990 - ^
• 00:58:752 (58752|2) - Move to 4, for spread note
[Normal]
• 00:03:990 - Add a note, for the hi-hat
• 00:07:800 - ^
• 00:12:086 - ^
• 00:13:514 - ^
• 00:15:419 - ^, for the snare drum
• 00:16:371 - ^, ^
• 00:18:276 - ^, ^
• 00:19:229 - ^, ^
• 00:58:752 (58752|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 00:59:229 (59229|2) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:59:705 (59705|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 01:00:181 (60181|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 01:01:133 - Add a note, for the snare drum
• 01:21:133 - ^
[Hard]
• 00:03:276 (3276|1,3514|2) - Ctrl+H
• 00:03:752 (3752|1) - Move to 1, if above is applied (hand balance)
• 00:06:133 (6133|1,6371|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 00:10:419 (10419|2,10538|1) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:10:895 (10895|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:13:276 (13276|1,13514|2) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:13:752 (13752|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:14:467 (14467|2) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:18:514 (18514|3,18752|1) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:24:229 (24229|0,24467|2) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:28:990 (28990|2,29109|1) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:29:467 (29467|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:44:705 (44705|1) - Move to 3, then 00:44:943 (44943|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 00:59:467 (59467|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 01:01:133 (61133|2) - Move to 1, for spread note
• 01:15:657 (75657|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:20:419 (80419|0) - Move to 3, ^
• 01:24:467 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
[Insane]
• 00:05:181 (5181|1,5419|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 00:06:252 (6252|1,6371|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 00:06:848 (6848|3,7086|0) - Ctrl+H, ^
• 00:13:514 (13514|1) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:13:752 (13752|3) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:14:943 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:16:848 - ^
• 00:17:324 - ^
• 00:43:276 (43276|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:43:514 (43514|3) - Move to 1, ^
• 00:43:752 (43752|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 00:45:181 (45181|2) - Move to 2, ^
• 00:49:705 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:50:181 - ^
• 00:50:657 - ^
• 00:50:895 (50895|0,51133|2) - Ctrl+G, for hand balance
• 00:59:705 (59705|1,59943|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 01:14:705 (74705|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:15:181 (75181|1) - Move to 4, ^
• 01:25:895 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
Good luck~!
Thanks so very much!
All is fixedJaizi sham <3, por fin te hare el mod (?)
Consejos:
1- Respeta tanto las doble notas y tripletes, no los pongas a lo random, por darte un ejemplo
Xk aca pones dos dobletes seguidos http://puu.sh/fDNJX/1c17824ab5.jpg y aca solo pones 1 nota sii son el mismo sonido http://puu.sh/fDNRx/a1eb0026cb.jpg (Esto es en la diff normal)
Siempre que vayas a empezar a hacer una diff escucha bien la cancion y ve mirando en donde iran los dobletes y los tripletes, siempre tendran mas prioridad que poner una nota o ln's en vocal, asi que no te lo comas xD.
2- Esta bien en algunas partes poner ln's en vocal, le añade un poco de dificultad o simplemente para variar para que no sea monotono al jugarla, pero solo en algunos casos, no lo pongas tan seguido o en todo el mapa ya que mania solo es ritmo mas no vocal, esto aplica solo para las ln's, con notas trata de no ponerlas en vocal.
Columnas
1|2|3|4
Suerte con el mapita Jaizi \o/
Consejos:
1- Respeta tanto las doble notas y tripletes, no los pongas a lo random, por darte un ejemplo
Xk aca pones dos dobletes seguidos http://puu.sh/fDNJX/1c17824ab5.jpg y aca solo pones 1 nota sii son el mismo sonido http://puu.sh/fDNRx/a1eb0026cb.jpg (Esto es en la diff normal)
Siempre que vayas a empezar a hacer una diff escucha bien la cancion y ve mirando en donde iran los dobletes y los tripletes, siempre tendran mas prioridad que poner una nota o ln's en vocal, asi que no te lo comas xD.
2- Esta bien en algunas partes poner ln's en vocal, le añade un poco de dificultad o simplemente para variar para que no sea monotono al jugarla, pero solo en algunos casos, no lo pongas tan seguido o en todo el mapa ya que mania solo es ritmo mas no vocal, esto aplica solo para las ln's, con notas trata de no ponerlas en vocal.
Columnas
1|2|3|4
Normal
Creo que seria mejor que desde 00:01:610 - hasta 00:14:467 - fuera sin dobletes, osea solo haz esta parte con solo 1 nota asi: http://puu.sh/fDR5P/cd32e8214d.jpg
00:03:752 (3752|1) - Delete
00:04:229 (4229|3) - Delete
00:04:705 - Agrega nota (Sigue este ritmo)
00:05:657 - ^
00:06:609 - ^
00:08:514 - ^
00:08:990 - ^
00:10:895 - ^
00:11:848 - Delete
00:12:324 - Agrega nota
00:12:800 - ^
00:13:276 - Delete
00:14:229 - Agrega nota
00:14:467 - Aca empieza con los dobletes
00:14:705 - Agrega nota
El resto de la diff me parece bien, solamente acomoda las doble notas en las lineas blancas, cuando las acomodes me avisas.
00:03:752 (3752|1) - Delete
00:04:229 (4229|3) - Delete
00:04:705 - Agrega nota (Sigue este ritmo)
00:05:657 - ^
00:06:609 - ^
00:08:514 - ^
00:08:990 - ^
00:10:895 - ^
00:11:848 - Delete
00:12:324 - Agrega nota
00:12:800 - ^
00:13:276 - Delete
00:14:229 - Agrega nota
00:14:467 - Aca empieza con los dobletes
00:14:705 - Agrega nota
El resto de la diff me parece bien, solamente acomoda las doble notas en las lineas blancas, cuando las acomodes me avisas.
Hard
Tripletes: Te aconsejo solo ponerlos en sonidos fuertes, ejemplo: 00:14:943 - triplete 00:37:800 - triplete (Con esos dos ya te das cuenta a los sonidos que me refiero xD, las demas partes no pongas tripletes y menos en una hard, ya que es 4K y los tripletes limita un poco al poner streams)
00:00:895 - Hasta 00:01:610 - Yo por mi parte no te recomendaria empezar la diff asi, ya que es solo vocal esa parte.
00:02:681 - "Siempre que vayas a empezar a hacer una diff escucha bien la cancion y ve mirando en donde iran los dobletes y los tripletes, siempre tendran mas prioridad que poner una nota o ln's en vocal, asi que no te lo comas xD" A esto me refiero, si comenzaste la diff a poner dobles en ese sonido no te los comas solo por poner una Ln en vocal, deberias re-editar eso tanto en la diff hard y insane y guiarte mas en la cancion por el ritmo y no por vocal.
00:09:705 - ^
00:10:657 - ^
00:14:943 - Agrega nota
00:17:198 - ^
00:20:300 - ^
00:20:538 - ^ Ejemplo: http://puu.sh/fDVTp/35e49d330d.jpg
Desde 00:22:562 - Hasta 00:37:800 - Para mi, los dobletes deberian ir solo en estos sonidos 00:23:276 - 00:27:800 - 00:30:895 - Ya que son los sonidos mas fuertes en esas partes, si pondras los dobletes asi como te dije, deberias seguir ese ritmo, ejemplo agregar notas en partes como estas 00:29:348 - 00:29:586 - 00:29:709 - 00:33:395 - 00:37:205 - 00:37:568 - 00:37:681 -
Desde 00:37:800 - 00:54:943 - Elimina los tripletes como te dije al comienzo
Apartir de 00:54:943 - en adelante tambien elimina los tripletes como te dije ^ y no te comas los dobletes asi 00:56:850 - 01:00:181 - Re-edita todas esas partes.
00:00:895 - Hasta 00:01:610 - Yo por mi parte no te recomendaria empezar la diff asi, ya que es solo vocal esa parte.
00:02:681 - "Siempre que vayas a empezar a hacer una diff escucha bien la cancion y ve mirando en donde iran los dobletes y los tripletes, siempre tendran mas prioridad que poner una nota o ln's en vocal, asi que no te lo comas xD" A esto me refiero, si comenzaste la diff a poner dobles en ese sonido no te los comas solo por poner una Ln en vocal, deberias re-editar eso tanto en la diff hard y insane y guiarte mas en la cancion por el ritmo y no por vocal.
00:09:705 - ^
00:10:657 - ^
00:14:943 - Agrega nota
00:17:198 - ^
00:20:300 - ^
00:20:538 - ^ Ejemplo: http://puu.sh/fDVTp/35e49d330d.jpg
Desde 00:22:562 - Hasta 00:37:800 - Para mi, los dobletes deberian ir solo en estos sonidos 00:23:276 - 00:27:800 - 00:30:895 - Ya que son los sonidos mas fuertes en esas partes, si pondras los dobletes asi como te dije, deberias seguir ese ritmo, ejemplo agregar notas en partes como estas 00:29:348 - 00:29:586 - 00:29:709 - 00:33:395 - 00:37:205 - 00:37:568 - 00:37:681 -
Desde 00:37:800 - 00:54:943 - Elimina los tripletes como te dije al comienzo
Apartir de 00:54:943 - en adelante tambien elimina los tripletes como te dije ^ y no te comas los dobletes asi 00:56:850 - 01:00:181 - Re-edita todas esas partes.
Insane
Aplica todo lo que te dije en la Hard, re-edita las partes que te sugeri, cuando termines de acomodarlas me avisas y vuelvo a revisar el mapa completo :3
Suerte con el mapita Jaizi \o/
Abrelo OwO
Hola Jessi ^-^ Aquí está tu mod :3
Columns:
l1l2l3l4l
[General]
El punto de vista prevía colócalo aquí 00:54:229 - ya que es la parte emocionante de la canción y casi la parte del kiai que te voy a sugerir.
Comienza el kiai aquí 00:54:943 - debido a que empieza la parte pro xD
Te voy a sugerir dos lugares para terminar el kiai, puede ser aquí 01:23:514 - o aquí 01:27:324 -
[Hitsounds]
Necesitas Hitsounds, te remociendo el "Clap", que te lo dejaré ahora mismo :3
http://puu.sh/kYfLs/85217390a6.rar Lo que tienes que hacer es descomprimir y te saldrá el Hitsound. Luego de eso coloca el Hitsound en la carpeta del Beatmap.
Luego de eso te sales de la carpeta, entras a Osu! y entras a Edit, Song Setup y te metes en la opción de Audio, y le das click en "Enable custom overrides" para que el Hitsound ingrese.
Por si las dudas te mando este capture --->
[Easy]
00:17:324 (17324|1) - Cambialo a la columna 1 y esta 00:17:324 (17324|2) - A la columna 4, para tener el mismo ritmo y patrón con las notas anteriores.
00:25:895 (25895|0) - Elimina esa nota, no lo veo necesario. Pero sí aquí 00:26:371 - agrega una en la comuna 2.
00:33:514 (33514|0) - Elimina esa nota, no lo veo necesario. Pero sí aquí 00:33:990 - agrega una en la comuna 2.
00:37:324 (37324|1) - Elimina esa nota, en esta dificultad no puede haber muchas notas dobles.
00:38:276 (38276|1) - ^
00:40:181 (40181|1) - ^
00:42:086 (42086|2,42086|1) - Puedes eliminar cualquiera de una de esas dos, ya que como dije antes, muchas notas dobles no puede haber en Easy.
00:43:038 (43038|3,43038|2) - ^
00:43:990 (43990|2) - Elimina esa, misma razón ^
00:47:800 (47800|2) - ^
00:48:276 (48276|3) - ^
Lo demás está excelente :3
Como dijo Momo: "Respeta tanto las doble notas y tripletes, no los pongas a lo random."
[Normal]
Se te olvidó quitar el Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/kYh7a/7fe36cfbb8.jpg
00:23:990 (23990|3) - Cambialo a la columna 3, tendría una gran secuencia y ritmo.
00:27:800 (27800|1) - Cambialo a la columna 2, misma razón^
Lo demás está excelente :3
[Hard]
00:04:467 (4467|3) - Cambialo a la clumna 3, tendría una gran secuencia y ritmo.
00:04:705 (4705|0) - Cambialo a la clumna 2, misma razón^
00:07:324 (7324|3) - Sería mejor que lo cambies a la columna 3.
00:42:086 (42086|3) - Cambialo a la columna 2, tendría mejor secuencia con las demás notas.
00:56:848 (56848|1) - Cambialo a la columna 4, verás que tendrá mejor ritmo y patrón con las demás.
Lo demás está excelente :3
[Insane]
Se te olvidó quitar el Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/kYhQI/3a0dd47457.jpg
01:14:229 (74229|2) - Es mejor si lo cambias a la columna 2.
01:15:419 (75419|3) - Cambialo a la columna 3, tendría un mejor patrón.
Lo demás está excelente :3
Columns:
l1l2l3l4l
[General]
El punto de vista prevía colócalo aquí 00:54:229 - ya que es la parte emocionante de la canción y casi la parte del kiai que te voy a sugerir.
Comienza el kiai aquí 00:54:943 - debido a que empieza la parte pro xD
Te voy a sugerir dos lugares para terminar el kiai, puede ser aquí 01:23:514 - o aquí 01:27:324 -
[Hitsounds]
Necesitas Hitsounds, te remociendo el "Clap", que te lo dejaré ahora mismo :3
http://puu.sh/kYfLs/85217390a6.rar Lo que tienes que hacer es descomprimir y te saldrá el Hitsound. Luego de eso coloca el Hitsound en la carpeta del Beatmap.
Luego de eso te sales de la carpeta, entras a Osu! y entras a Edit, Song Setup y te metes en la opción de Audio, y le das click en "Enable custom overrides" para que el Hitsound ingrese.
Por si las dudas te mando este capture --->
[Easy]
00:17:324 (17324|1) - Cambialo a la columna 1 y esta 00:17:324 (17324|2) - A la columna 4, para tener el mismo ritmo y patrón con las notas anteriores.
00:25:895 (25895|0) - Elimina esa nota, no lo veo necesario. Pero sí aquí 00:26:371 - agrega una en la comuna 2.
00:33:514 (33514|0) - Elimina esa nota, no lo veo necesario. Pero sí aquí 00:33:990 - agrega una en la comuna 2.
00:37:324 (37324|1) - Elimina esa nota, en esta dificultad no puede haber muchas notas dobles.
00:38:276 (38276|1) - ^
00:40:181 (40181|1) - ^
00:42:086 (42086|2,42086|1) - Puedes eliminar cualquiera de una de esas dos, ya que como dije antes, muchas notas dobles no puede haber en Easy.
00:43:038 (43038|3,43038|2) - ^
00:43:990 (43990|2) - Elimina esa, misma razón ^
00:47:800 (47800|2) - ^
00:48:276 (48276|3) - ^
Lo demás está excelente :3
Como dijo Momo: "Respeta tanto las doble notas y tripletes, no los pongas a lo random."
[Normal]
Se te olvidó quitar el Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/kYh7a/7fe36cfbb8.jpg
00:23:990 (23990|3) - Cambialo a la columna 3, tendría una gran secuencia y ritmo.
00:27:800 (27800|1) - Cambialo a la columna 2, misma razón^
Lo demás está excelente :3
[Hard]
00:04:467 (4467|3) - Cambialo a la clumna 3, tendría una gran secuencia y ritmo.
00:04:705 (4705|0) - Cambialo a la clumna 2, misma razón^
00:07:324 (7324|3) - Sería mejor que lo cambies a la columna 3.
00:42:086 (42086|3) - Cambialo a la columna 2, tendría mejor secuencia con las demás notas.
00:56:848 (56848|1) - Cambialo a la columna 4, verás que tendrá mejor ritmo y patrón con las demás.
Lo demás está excelente :3
[Insane]
Se te olvidó quitar el Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/kYhQI/3a0dd47457.jpg
01:14:229 (74229|2) - Es mejor si lo cambias a la columna 2.
01:15:419 (75419|3) - Cambialo a la columna 3, tendría un mejor patrón.
Lo demás está excelente :3
Me gustó mucho tu Beatmap :33! Espero que mi mod te haya ayudado, cualquier cosa me llamas
! Suerte ^w^
Topic Starter
game rock wrote:
Abrelo OwOHola Jessi ^-^ Aquí está tu mod :3
Columns:
l1l2l3l4l
[General]
El punto de vista prevía colócalo aquí 00:54:229 - ya que es la parte emocionante de la canción y casi la parte del kiai que te voy a sugerir.
Comienza el kiai aquí 00:54:943 - debido a que empieza la parte pro xD
Te voy a sugerir dos lugares para terminar el kiai, puede ser aquí 01:23:514 - o aquí 01:27:324 -
[Hitsounds]
Necesitas Hitsounds, te remociendo el "Clap", que te lo dejaré ahora mismo :3
http://puu.sh/kYfLs/85217390a6.rar Lo que tienes que hacer es descomprimir y te saldrá el Hitsound. Luego de eso coloca el Hitsound en la carpeta del Beatmap.
Luego de eso te sales de la carpeta, entras a Osu! y entras a Edit, Song Setup y te metes en la opción de Audio, y le das click en "Enable custom overrides" para que el Hitsound ingrese.
Por si las dudas te mando este capture --->
[Easy]
00:17:324 (17324|1) - Cambialo a la columna 1 y esta 00:17:324 (17324|2) - A la columna 4, para tener el mismo ritmo y patrón con las notas anteriores.
00:25:895 (25895|0) - Elimina esa nota, no lo veo necesario. Pero sí aquí 00:26:371 - agrega una en la comuna 2.
00:33:514 (33514|0) - Elimina esa nota, no lo veo necesario. Pero sí aquí 00:33:990 - agrega una en la comuna 2.
00:37:324 (37324|1) - Elimina esa nota, en esta dificultad no puede haber muchas notas dobles.
00:38:276 (38276|1) - ^
00:40:181 (40181|1) - ^
00:42:086 (42086|2,42086|1) - Puedes eliminar cualquiera de una de esas dos, ya que como dije antes, muchas notas dobles no puede haber en Easy.
00:43:038 (43038|3,43038|2) - ^
00:43:990 (43990|2) - Elimina esa, misma razón ^
00:47:800 (47800|2) - ^
00:48:276 (48276|3) - ^
Lo demás está excelente :3
Como dijo Momo: "Respeta tanto las doble notas y tripletes, no los pongas a lo random."
[Normal]
Se te olvidó quitar el Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/kYh7a/7fe36cfbb8.jpg
00:23:990 (23990|3) - Cambialo a la columna 3, tendría una gran secuencia y ritmo.
00:27:800 (27800|1) - Cambialo a la columna 2, misma razón^
Lo demás está excelente :3
[Hard]
00:04:467 (4467|3) - Cambialo a la clumna 3, tendría una gran secuencia y ritmo.
00:04:705 (4705|0) - Cambialo a la clumna 2, misma razón^
00:07:324 (7324|3) - Sería mejor que lo cambies a la columna 3.
00:42:086 (42086|3) - Cambialo a la columna 2, tendría mejor secuencia con las demás notas.
00:56:848 (56848|1) - Cambialo a la columna 4, verás que tendrá mejor ritmo y patrón con las demás.
Lo demás está excelente :3
[Insane]
Se te olvidó quitar el Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/kYhQI/3a0dd47457.jpg
01:14:229 (74229|2) - Es mejor si lo cambias a la columna 2.
01:15:419 (75419|3) - Cambialo a la columna 3, tendría un mejor patrón.
Lo demás está excelente :3
Me gustó mucho tu Beatmap :33! Espero que mi mod te haya ayudado, cualquier cosa me llamas
Gracias Naru ;3 ♥ Todo arreglado. Lo único así que no te acepté fue el hitsound porque ya los tiene 0.0 Gracias :3
Hihi JessiChan~
[Easy]
00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - Maybe map differently to follow song/vocal/drum another way
00:40:895 (40895|2) - Remove?
[Normal]
00:22:562 (22562|3) - Move to 2
00:20:657 (20657|3) - End at 00:22:562 -
00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - I think this part is mapped weird again?
[Hard]
00:14:546 - Add note?
[Insane]
00:14:407 - Add
00:14:546 - Add
00:25:538 - Add
00:29:348 - Add
00:29:586 - Add
00:32:205 - Add
00:32:443 - Add
00:32:919 - Add
00:36:014 - Add
00:36:252 - Add
01:14:943 - Add
01:23:157 - Add
Naruto........ haha.... well you can't blame the song for the anime and manga being terrible
I see you're not really wanting to follow the drum but this part 00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - idk it feels kinda strange
good luck JessiChan~
[Easy]
00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - Maybe map differently to follow song/vocal/drum another way
Bad changes
00:38:990 (38990|1) - Remove?You can probably find a better way to do this than this than these
like 00:24:467 (24467|3,24943|0,25419|2,25895|3) - remove
00:23:990 (23990|2) - Change to LN to 00:25:657 -
00:28:276 (28276|3,28752|1,29229|0,29705|2) - Remove
00:27:800 (27800|1) - Change to LN to 00:29:467 -
or different pattern
like 00:24:467 (24467|3,24943|0,25419|2,25895|3) - remove
00:23:990 (23990|2) - Change to LN to 00:25:657 -
00:28:276 (28276|3,28752|1,29229|0,29705|2) - Remove
00:27:800 (27800|1) - Change to LN to 00:29:467 -
or different pattern
00:40:895 (40895|2) - Remove?
[Normal]
00:22:562 (22562|3) - Move to 2
00:20:657 (20657|3) - End at 00:22:562 -
00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - I think this part is mapped weird again?
Bad changes
You can probably find a better way to do this than this than these
00:36:848 (36848|0) - Move to 00:36:609 -
00:37:086 (37086|3) - Move to 00:36:967 -
00:29:229 (29229|0) - Move to 00:28:990 -
00:29:467 (29467|1) - Move to 00:29:348 -
00:25:419 (25419|3) - Move to 00:25:181 -
00:25:657 (25657|2) - Move to 00:25:538 -
00:33:038 (33038|3) - Move to 00:32:800 -
00:33:038 (33038|1) - Move to 00:33:157 -
00:36:848 (36848|0) - Move to 00:36:609 -
00:37:086 (37086|3) - Move to 00:36:967 -
00:29:229 (29229|0) - Move to 00:28:990 -
00:29:467 (29467|1) - Move to 00:29:348 -
00:25:419 (25419|3) - Move to 00:25:181 -
00:25:657 (25657|2) - Move to 00:25:538 -
00:33:038 (33038|3) - Move to 00:32:800 -
00:33:038 (33038|1) - Move to 00:33:157 -
[Hard]
00:14:546 - Add note?
this part again
00:25:538 - add
00:25:776 - add
00:26:014 (26014|1) - Remove
00:29:109 (29109|1) - Remove
00:29:348 - Add
00:29:586 - Add
00:33:395 - Add
00:36:967 - Add
00:37:205 - Add
00:37:562 - Add
00:37:681 - Add
00:25:776 - add
00:26:014 (26014|1) - Remove
00:29:109 (29109|1) - Remove
00:29:348 - Add
00:29:586 - Add
00:33:395 - Add
00:36:967 - Add
00:37:205 - Add
00:37:562 - Add
00:37:681 - Add
[Insane]
00:14:407 - Add
00:14:546 - Add
00:25:538 - Add
00:29:348 - Add
00:29:586 - Add
00:32:205 - Add
00:32:443 - Add
00:32:919 - Add
00:36:014 - Add
00:36:252 - Add
01:14:943 - Add
01:23:157 - Add
Naruto........ haha....
well you can't blame the song for the anime and manga being terribleI see you're not really wanting to follow the drum but this part 00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - idk it feels kinda strange
good luck JessiChan~
Topic Starter
Hestia- wrote:
Hihi JessiChan~
[Easy]
00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - Maybe map differently to follow song/vocal/drum another wayBad changes00:38:990 (38990|1) - Remove?You can probably find a better way to do this than this than these
like 00:24:467 (24467|3,24943|0,25419|2,25895|3) - remove
00:23:990 (23990|2) - Change to LN to 00:25:657 -
00:28:276 (28276|3,28752|1,29229|0,29705|2) - Remove
00:27:800 (27800|1) - Change to LN to 00:29:467 -
or different pattern
00:40:895 (40895|2) - Remove?
[Normal]
00:22:562 (22562|3) - Move to 2
00:20:657 (20657|3) - End at 00:22:562 -
00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - I think this part is mapped weird again?Bad changesYou can probably find a better way to do this than this than these
00:36:848 (36848|0) - Move to 00:36:609 -
00:37:086 (37086|3) - Move to 00:36:967 -
00:29:229 (29229|0) - Move to 00:28:990 -
00:29:467 (29467|1) - Move to 00:29:348 -
00:25:419 (25419|3) - Move to 00:25:181 -
00:25:657 (25657|2) - Move to 00:25:538 -
00:33:038 (33038|3) - Move to 00:32:800 -
00:33:038 (33038|1) - Move to 00:33:157 -
[Hard]
00:14:546 - Add note?this part again00:25:538 - add
00:25:776 - add
00:26:014 (26014|1) - Remove
00:29:109 (29109|1) - Remove
00:29:348 - Add
00:29:586 - Add
00:33:395 - Add
00:36:967 - Add
00:37:205 - Add
00:37:562 - Add
00:37:681 - Add
[Insane]
00:14:407 - Add
00:14:546 - Add
00:25:538 - Add
00:29:348 - Add
00:29:586 - Add
00:32:205 - Add
00:32:443 - Add
00:32:919 - Add
00:36:014 - Add
00:36:252 - Add
01:14:943 - Add
01:23:157 - Add
Naruto........ haha....
I see you're not really wanting to follow the drum but this part 00:22:562 - 00:37:800 - idk it feels kinda strange
good luck JessiChan~
Thanks for your help. I rejected your mods in the Hard and Insane Diff. Sorry.
...eh
[Easy]
00:55:419 (55419|1,55419|2) - remove one
[Normal]
00:15:895 - 00:16:371 - 00:19:705 - change to 2 notes as Easy or kill Easy's notes
01:22:324 - add 2 notes
[Insane]
01:14:943 - add?
[Easy]
00:55:419 (55419|1,55419|2) - remove one
[Normal]
00:15:895 - 00:16:371 - 00:19:705 - change to 2 notes as Easy or kill Easy's notes
01:22:324 - add 2 notes
[Insane]
01:14:943 - add?
Topic Starter
NlHIL wrote:
...eh
[Easy]
00:55:419 (55419|1,55419|2) - remove one
[Normal]
00:15:895 - 00:16:371 - 00:19:705 - change to 2 notes as Easy or kill Easy's notes
01:22:324 - add 2 notes
[Insane]
01:14:943 - add?
All acepted! Thanks for your Help
I haven't heard this song in literally years and it makes me so happy.
NM request from t/390864
1|2|3|4
as a note, i noticed that you rejected another mod based on adding/removing notes. however, it's not a matter of "i like it this way" or "it plays better this way", because the song is so simple that notes where there shouldn't be notes is simply wrong, and not having notes added detracts from the map as a whole. Especially because you manage to be very inconsistent in which notes you leave out/add in erroneously, I almost couldn't play through the difficulty because of how quite literally "wrong" it was.
NM request from t/390864
1|2|3|4
as a note, i noticed that you rejected another mod based on adding/removing notes. however, it's not a matter of "i like it this way" or "it plays better this way", because the song is so simple that notes where there shouldn't be notes is simply wrong, and not having notes added detracts from the map as a whole. Especially because you manage to be very inconsistent in which notes you leave out/add in erroneously, I almost couldn't play through the difficulty because of how quite literally "wrong" it was.
Insane
because there's so many technical errors, i'm not commenting on layering for this mod really, just concentrating on fixing rhythms and missed/extra notes
00:01:133 (1133|2) - remove
00:02:443 - note (probably on the 3)
00:02:562 (2562|2) - remove
00:02:800 (2800|2) - remove
00:03:157 (3157|2) - move to 00:03:038
00:04:348 - note
what exactly are the holds going to in this first section
00:06:014 (6014|3) - remove
00:07:205 - note
00:09:824 (9824|1) - remove
00:09:943 - why are you stepping 16ths here? there's nothing for them to be going to
00:11:014 (11014|1) - remove
00:13:871 - note
00:14:109 (14109|0) - remove
00:14:586 - note
00:15:657 (15657|1) - remove
00:16:729 (16729|2) - remove
00:17:086 (17086|2) - remove
00:19:109 - note
00:19:824 (19824|2) - remove
00:24:109 (24109|1) - remove
00:24:824 - note
00:25:538 - note
00:26:609 (26609|2) - remove
00:27:919 (27919|3) - remove
00:28:633 - note
00:29:109 (29109|3) - remove
00:29:348 - note
00:29:586 - note
00:31:729 (31729|0) - remove
00:32:443 - note
00:35:538 (35538|3) - remove
00:36:252 - note
00:36:371 - note
00:36:490 (36490|2) - remove
00:36:729 (36729|1) - remove
00:40:062 (40062|1) - remove
00:41:967 (41967|1) - remove
00:44:348 - note
00:44:586 (44586|0) - remove
00:49:586 - note
00:50:062 (50062|0) - remove
00:50:300 (50300|2) - remove
00:50:538 (50538|2) - remove
00:51:729 - note
00:51:967 - note
00:52:443 - note
00:52:681 - note
00:52:800 - note
00:52:919 - note
00:55:776 - note
00:56:490 (56490|2) - remove
00:56:729 (56729|2) - remove
00:57:205 - note
00:58:157 - note
00:59:586 - note
01:01:014 - note
01:02:205 - note
01:02:443 - note
01:02:919 (62919|1) - remove
01:03:276 - note
01:04:109 (64109|2) - remove
01:04:348 (64348|1) - remove
01:04:705 - note
01:05:300 (65300|1) - remove
01:05:776 - note
01:06:729 - note
01:08:633 - there's an extra drum pattern that goes like http://puu.sh/lH4C6/abe2816817.jpg if mapped
01:11:014 (71014|3) - remove
01:12:324 (72324|2) - remove
01:12:443 - note
01:14:348 - note
01:15:300 - note
01:16:252 - note
01:17:205 (77205|2) - remove
01:17:443 - note
01:17:562 (77562|0,77562|2,77562|3) - remove
01:17:681 - note
01:17:919 (77919|3) - remove
01:19:109 - note
01:19:943 (79943|2) - remove
01:20:300 (80300|1) - remove
01:20:538 (80538|3) - remove
01:20:776 (80776|1) - remove
01:21:014 (81014|1) - remove
01:21:967 - note
01:23:157 - note
01:23:871 - note
01:24:229 - note
01:24:348 (84348|1) - remove
01:25:300 (85300|1) - remove
01:25:538 (85538|1) - remove
01:26:014 (86014|1) - remove
01:26:252 (86252|1) - remove
a lot of your layering is very inconsistent and doesn't match the intensity of the sounds in the song either. that should cover the majority of the notes (i may have put one or 2 add/removes in there that are wrong because i forgot to pay attention to vocals for a little while, but it should be mostly right). Layering needs to be fixed big time still, but getting rhythms correct is first priority. Also, there's plenty of instances where I feel holds are completely unjustified and need to be changed up.
00:01:133 (1133|2) - remove
00:02:443 - note (probably on the 3)
00:02:562 (2562|2) - remove
00:02:800 (2800|2) - remove
00:03:157 (3157|2) - move to 00:03:038
00:04:348 - note
what exactly are the holds going to in this first section
00:06:014 (6014|3) - remove
00:07:205 - note
00:09:824 (9824|1) - remove
00:09:943 - why are you stepping 16ths here? there's nothing for them to be going to
00:11:014 (11014|1) - remove
00:13:871 - note
00:14:109 (14109|0) - remove
00:14:586 - note
00:15:657 (15657|1) - remove
00:16:729 (16729|2) - remove
00:17:086 (17086|2) - remove
00:19:109 - note
00:19:824 (19824|2) - remove
00:24:109 (24109|1) - remove
00:24:824 - note
00:25:538 - note
00:26:609 (26609|2) - remove
00:27:919 (27919|3) - remove
00:28:633 - note
00:29:109 (29109|3) - remove
00:29:348 - note
00:29:586 - note
00:31:729 (31729|0) - remove
00:32:443 - note
00:35:538 (35538|3) - remove
00:36:252 - note
00:36:371 - note
00:36:490 (36490|2) - remove
00:36:729 (36729|1) - remove
00:40:062 (40062|1) - remove
00:41:967 (41967|1) - remove
00:44:348 - note
00:44:586 (44586|0) - remove
00:49:586 - note
00:50:062 (50062|0) - remove
00:50:300 (50300|2) - remove
00:50:538 (50538|2) - remove
00:51:729 - note
00:51:967 - note
00:52:443 - note
00:52:681 - note
00:52:800 - note
00:52:919 - note
00:55:776 - note
00:56:490 (56490|2) - remove
00:56:729 (56729|2) - remove
00:57:205 - note
00:58:157 - note
00:59:586 - note
01:01:014 - note
01:02:205 - note
01:02:443 - note
01:02:919 (62919|1) - remove
01:03:276 - note
01:04:109 (64109|2) - remove
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a lot of your layering is very inconsistent and doesn't match the intensity of the sounds in the song either. that should cover the majority of the notes (i may have put one or 2 add/removes in there that are wrong because i forgot to pay attention to vocals for a little while, but it should be mostly right). Layering needs to be fixed big time still, but getting rhythms correct is first priority. Also, there's plenty of instances where I feel holds are completely unjustified and need to be changed up.
Topic Starter
Daeris wrote:
I haven't heard this song in literally years and it makes me so happy.
NM request from t/390864
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as a note, i noticed that you rejected another mod based on adding/removing notes. however, it's not a matter of "i like it this way" or "it plays better this way", because the song is so simple that notes where there shouldn't be notes is simply wrong, and not having notes added detracts from the map as a whole. Especially because you manage to be very inconsistent in which notes you leave out/add in erroneously, I almost couldn't play through the difficulty because of how quite literally "wrong" it was.Insanebecause there's so many technical errors, i'm not commenting on layering for this mod really, just concentrating on fixing rhythms and missed/extra notes
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what exactly are the holds going to in this first section
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01:05:300 (65300|1) - remove
01:05:776 - note
01:06:729 - note
01:08:633 - there's an extra drum pattern that goes like http://puu.sh/lH4C6/abe2816817.jpg if mapped
01:11:014 (71014|3) - remove
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01:12:443 - note
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01:21:967 - note
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a lot of your layering is very inconsistent and doesn't match the intensity of the sounds in the song either. that should cover the majority of the notes (i may have put one or 2 add/removes in there that are wrong because i forgot to pay attention to vocals for a little while, but it should be mostly right). Layering needs to be fixed big time still, but getting rhythms correct is first priority. Also, there's plenty of instances where I feel holds are completely unjustified and need to be changed up.
Accepted = O
Rejected = X
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00:02:443 - note (probably on the 3) X
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00:03:157 (3157|2) - move to 00:03:038 X
00:04:348 - note O
what exactly are the holds going to in this first section
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00:07:205 - note X
00:09:824 (9824|1) - remove O
00:09:943 - why are you stepping 16ths here? there's nothing for them to be going to
00:11:014 (11014|1) - remove O
00:13:871 - note X
00:14:109 (14109|0) - remove O
00:14:586 - note X
00:15:657 (15657|1) - remove O
00:16:729 (16729|2) - remove O
00:17:086 (17086|2) - remove O
00:19:109 - note O
00:19:824 (19824|2) - remove O
00:24:109 (24109|1) - remove O
00:24:824 - note O
00:25:538 - note O
00:26:609 (26609|2) - remove O
00:27:919 (27919|3) - remove O
00:28:633 - note O
00:29:109 (29109|3) - remove O
00:29:348 - note X
00:29:586 - note O
00:31:729 (31729|0) - remove O
00:32:443 - note O
00:35:538 (35538|3) - remove X
00:36:252 - note O
00:36:371 - note O
00:36:490 (36490|2) - remove O
00:36:729 (36729|1) - remove O
00:40:062 (40062|1) - remove O
00:41:967 (41967|1) - remove O
00:44:348 - note O
00:44:586 (44586|0) - remove O
00:49:586 - note O
00:50:062 (50062|0) - remove O
00:50:300 (50300|2) - remove X
00:50:538 (50538|2) - remove X
00:51:729 - note O
00:51:967 - note X
00:52:443 - note O
00:52:681 - note O
00:52:800 - note O
00:52:919 - note O
00:55:776 - note O
00:56:490 (56490|2) - remove O
00:56:729 (56729|2) - remove O
00:57:205 - note O
00:58:157 - note O
00:59:586 - note O
01:01:014 - note O
01:02:205 - note O
01:02:443 - note O
01:02:919 (62919|1) - remove X
01:03:276 - note O
01:04:109 (64109|2) - remove O
01:04:348 (64348|1) - remove X
01:04:705 - note O
01:05:300 (65300|1) - remove O
01:05:776 - note O
01:06:729 - note O
01:08:633 - there's an extra drum pattern that goes like http://puu.sh/lH4C6/abe2816817.jpg if mapped O
01:11:014 (71014|3) - remove O
01:12:324 (72324|2) - remove X
01:12:443 - note O
01:14:348 - note O
01:15:300 - note O
01:16:252 - note O
01:17:205 (77205|2) - remove O
01:17:443 - note O
01:17:562 (77562|0,77562|2,77562|3) - remove X
01:17:681 - note O
01:17:919 (77919|3) - remove O
01:19:109 - note O
01:19:943 (79943|2) - remove O
01:20:300 (80300|1) - remove X
01:20:538 (80538|3) - remove X
01:20:776 (80776|1) - remove X
01:21:014 (81014|1) - remove O
01:21:967 - note O
01:23:157 - note O
01:23:871 - note O
01:24:229 - note O
01:24:348 (84348|1) - remove O
01:25:300 (85300|1) - remove O
01:25:538 (85538|1) - remove O
01:26:014 (86014|1) - remove X
01:26:252 (86252|1) - remove X
Thanks so very much :3 You are good.
[Insane]
00:18:990 (18990|2,18990|1,19109|2,19229|2) - What the hell is this? An autoconvert? Move 00:18:990 (18990|2) - right and delete 00:19:229 (19229|2) -
00:24:229 (24229|0,24467|1,24467|3,24586|2,24705|3,24824|1,24943|1) - No. Get rid of 00:24:824 (24824|1) - to make somewhat better
00:24:824 (24824|1,28514|1,28633|0,28752|0) - Boy you love LN+side jacks, don't you? Guess what? This is not fun to play. Delete 00:28:752 (28752|0) -
00:29:229 (29229|2,29467|1,29586|1) - No, putting a jack after an LN doesn't work either. Not at this difficulty and song at any case. Move
00:29:586 (29586|1) - left and move 00:29:705 (29705|1) - to column 2
00:35:657 (35657|1,35657|2,35657|0,35895|2,36133|2,36133|3) - eh, I'll this one slide. Happy?
00:43:752 (43752|0,44229|3,44229|1,44348|2,44467|2) - But not this one. Yea, yea these is a double beat, chime, or whatever, but let's face it, it can be better! Move 00:44:467 (44467|2) - one or two left. Whatever to get rid of that thing
00:52:324 (52324|3,52324|1,52443|3,52562|0,52562|2,52562|3,52681|2,52800|1,52919|1) - O_O I will need a therapist now because either I'm seeing things or the jacks are spreading like cancer. I don't know where to begin to this one since I don't think it has a cure :S
00:58:038 (58038|2,58157|1,58276|3,58276|0,58276|1) - Yea, yea... mhm... side jack was not enough? Mhm... Put a full chord to force the tapping in an unconventional way? What a brilliant idea! Just brilliant... 
01:00:895 (60895|0,61014|2,61133|2,61133|1) - I just realized I stopped giving suggestions on what to do with these, oh well
01:06:371 (66371|3,66609|2,66729|1,66848|0,66848|1,66848|2) - Probably the only LN side jack I may approve. Wowzers!
Eh, I give up. You get the point. At least the other diffs are nice. What you have to get is while the jack are hittable, they don't really give a good playable value. It's easy to abuse jacks to the point where the map is a bazillion time harder than it needs to. I believe this map can be more enjoyable without them. Jacks are usually fun to play when the whole song is based on it like Dadadadaa or when they properly mapped to a flow, but your map doesn't have a the design that has a significant flow (like a stream map). I don't really know a good way to say what I mean, so I guess that's all I got.
00:18:990 (18990|2,18990|1,19109|2,19229|2) - What the hell is this? An autoconvert? Move 00:18:990 (18990|2) - right and delete 00:19:229 (19229|2) -
00:24:229 (24229|0,24467|1,24467|3,24586|2,24705|3,24824|1,24943|1) - No. Get rid of 00:24:824 (24824|1) - to make somewhat better
00:24:824 (24824|1,28514|1,28633|0,28752|0) - Boy you love LN+side jacks, don't you? Guess what? This is not fun to play. Delete 00:28:752 (28752|0) -
00:29:229 (29229|2,29467|1,29586|1) - No, putting a jack after an LN doesn't work either. Not at this difficulty and song at any case. Move
00:29:586 (29586|1) - left and move 00:29:705 (29705|1) - to column 2
00:35:657 (35657|1,35657|2,35657|0,35895|2,36133|2,36133|3) - eh, I'll this one slide. Happy?
00:43:752 (43752|0,44229|3,44229|1,44348|2,44467|2) - But not this one. Yea, yea these is a double beat, chime, or whatever, but let's face it, it can be better! Move 00:44:467 (44467|2) - one or two left. Whatever to get rid of that thing
00:52:324 (52324|3,52324|1,52443|3,52562|0,52562|2,52562|3,52681|2,52800|1,52919|1) - O_O I will need a therapist now because either I'm seeing things or the jacks are spreading like cancer. I don't know where to begin to this one since I don't think it has a cure :S
00:58:038 (58038|2,58157|1,58276|3,58276|0,58276|1) - Yea, yea... mhm... side jack was not enough? Mhm... Put a full chord to force the tapping in an unconventional way? What a brilliant idea!
Just brilliant... 01:00:895 (60895|0,61014|2,61133|2,61133|1) - I just realized I stopped giving suggestions on what to do with these, oh well
01:06:371 (66371|3,66609|2,66729|1,66848|0,66848|1,66848|2) - Probably the only LN side jack I may approve. Wowzers!
Eh, I give up. You get the point. At least the other diffs are nice. What you have to get is while the jack are hittable, they don't really give a good playable value. It's easy to abuse jacks to the point where the map is a bazillion time harder than it needs to. I believe this map can be more enjoyable without them. Jacks are usually fun to play when the whole song is based on it like Dadadadaa or when they properly mapped to a flow, but your map doesn't have a the design that has a significant flow (like a stream map). I don't really know a good way to say what I mean, so I guess that's all I got.