1. Hard (2,71 stars, 162 notes)
2. Normal (1,89 stars, 121 notes)
3. -Tochi's Insane (3,37 stars, 245 notes)

BlueIsraphel wrote:

Hey I'm not a modder or anything but nice map
I have a suggestion; at 00:54:116 the spinner seems unnecessary. Instead you should replace the circle at 00:53:671 to 00:54:671 with a slider that has arrows to match with the "Hodokenaiyou" or w/e he says.
Leave "Ho-" by itself, "do-" = Slider starts, "ke-" = Slider ball reverses back through track, "nai-" = Ball reverses again, "you" = Ball reverses a final time.
Also add a single circle at 00:55:227
I hope I helped a little

wobble_owo wrote:

So, now i did my own changes and the things you suggestet, without adding a circle at 00:55:227 cause it dosent fit in the normal-diff, but i addet it in the hard diff.
Thanks for your mod :3

-Tochi wrote:

Song and Map Metadata

Artist: TK from Ling Tosite Sigure

Title: unravel (TV Size)
(unravel with a small "u")

Source: Tokyo Ghoul

[ Rizen ] wrote:

Hello, this is my first ever mod so please don't take it too seriously :<

SPOILER

[General]

1. Generally, new players to osu play the Easy or Normal difficulty. That means the map must be readable to someone completely new to osu! Slider Velocity and Distance Snapping should then be consistent throughout the map (or at least for most of the map) ok
2. Same background for all difficulties why
   [Normal]
3. Try using a variety of slider shapes like curves. Straight lines can be rather boring sometimes nah, but if someone will say it again, I will change it
4. 00:23:227 (4) - Maybe add a 1/2 slider here to emphasize guitar chords? at the time point is no guitar
5. 00:19:671 (4) - End with one beat instead of 1 and 1/2. At 00:18:116 (1) - You emphasized the vocals I dont know what you mean
6. 00:35:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe try this rhythm to emphasize cymbals? nope
7. 00:36:782 (2,3,4,5) - Uneven spacing. Can be confusing your right
8. 00:45:449 (2) - Too close to the previous slider. Can be confusing mabye confusing but needed
9. 00:45:004 (2) - Maybe add a slider here, ending at 00:45:449? nope sounds weird but you gave me the idea to place circle at 00:45:004 and 00:44:227
10. 00:46:560 (4) - Too close (DS) you said already that i should use ds
11. 00:53:004 - Add 1/2 slider and remove single at 00:53:227 as the "no" starts before the current single circle thank for the hint, but moved the cicle instead of this
12. 01:06:116 (3,4) - Too far apart considering they are 1/2 beat apart I know ds
13. 01:11:449 (5) - Start slider at 01:11:227 as the vocals start there thanks
14. 01:20:338 (1) - Consider this I took a part of it
15. 01:25:449 (11) - Add a circle here and move slider (see below)
16. 01:25:449 (11) - Move slider to 01:25:671 ending at 01:27:004 sounds more in rhythm slider was cut
    
17. 01:27:227 (1) - Move slider to 01:27:449 as this is where the "main beat" is. End at same spot though
18. 01:28:782 (2) - Replace with circle as the slider here emphasizes nothing yes
19. 01:29:277 - one beat slider here to emphasize vocals no
20. 01:29:671 (3) - Awkwardly placed I thonk i changed it
21. 01:30:004 - Conflicts with instruments. Move up by 1/4 to 01:30:116 but ending at same spot yep, but I did something other
22. 01:36:116 - Try this rhythm

I take this and use a slider at the end
[Hard]

1. Try using a variety of slider shapes like curves. Straight lines can be rather boring sometimes
2. 00:23:004 (3) - Bad spacing compared to before at 00:21:449 I want a jump at this place
3. 00:46:116 (1,2,3) - Uneven spacing I dont see a problem there but changed it
4. 00:55:449 - NC sorry but what means NC?
5. 01:09:671 - Vocals is emphasized here but you've placed a slider tail here. Maybe shorten existing slider and place either a new slider start or a circle here dont want to change I mapped this on "i" and "to"
6. 01:13:227 - ^ same just other vocals
7. 01:20:338 - NC because vocals
8. 01:22:338 - Spacing yes
9. 01:23:893 - NC
10. 01:27:227 (1) - Move slider up to 01:27:449 ending at same spot Did both
11. 01:27:227 (1) - replace with circle

^
[-Tochi's Insane]

1. Increase Overall Difficulty to 7 (standard for most Insanes) GD so I ask the guest if I should change this
2. 00:39:893 (3) - End slider at 00:40:116 so player has a breather for the 4 guitar chords
3. 01:18:560 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing between these is uneven and the rhythm changes slightly at the end. You should make spacing changes to accodimate the rhythm change.

I got a little bit lazy at the end :/