1. Hard (2.23 stars, 431 notes)
2. Luminous (2.75 stars, 540 notes)
3. Normal (1.35 stars, 266 notes)

guineaQ wrote:

stealing another first post just to be annoying

Kibbleru wrote:

guineaQ wrote:

stealing another first post just to be annoying

u owe me a mod for that B)

SPOILER

pkk wrote:

quinea for BAT next round

quality of mod is astounding

you should take notes kibb

guineaQ wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

u owe me a mod for that B)

fk bakaleru

[General]
Bakaleru why you hate preview points oops .-.

[Normal]
wtf do you want me to say about this

only thing that bothers me is no breaku for first 3 minutes

[Hard]
wowowow u gave 0 love for DS fuk all the ds

00:02:065 (2,3,4) - perfect triangle ffs uhh k
00:05:665 (4,1) - inconsistent DS its freakin 1.3x not 1.2x k
00:13:165 (1) - move it up by like 15 units so that its on the same level as 00:12:265 (4) - k
00:32:365 (1,2,3,4) - i smell copy pasta fix the triangle liek 00:02:065 (2,3,4) - i didnt copy pasta D: ^
00:34:765 (1,2,3,4) - looks messy to me imo, maybe have the distance between the beginning of the sliders nearly identical i like how this looks :<
00:52:465 (2) - move it down by 1 unit to match the height of slider end of 00:51:565 (1) - lolk
01:05:965 (1,2,3) - this triangle does not impress me k
01:07:915 (1) - why NC, if you are gonna NC for emphasis do it on 01:07:765 (4) - since trumpet starts on there i'd rather put it on the finish (strongest sound)
01:16:615 - you missed a note here, you can use 1/4 reverse slider this part is actually 1/6 and i don't want to map any 1/6 in a hard diff
01:26:965 (5,2) - gakrnglkw;nta;dlgha stack perfectly i like the imperfectness
01:28:465 (3,4,5) - auto stack looks ugly here, fuck all manual stacking :>

SPOILER

manual stack for world peace
01:38:665 (4,5,1) - gwkjetlq;jeavb;aldfkaf why u no make perfect triangle what are you illuminati?
01:41:065 (3,4) - why u no blanket no :>
01:41:965 (1,2,3,4) - why u so lazeh to make everything even and niceu idk
02:09:565 (4,5,1) - do you want me to eat you alive for this triangle
02:12:715 (5) - plays awkwardly imo
02:17:065 (4,1) - same as 01:07:915 (1) -, if you are gonna NC to emphasize trumpets, do it on 4
02:33:565 (1) - remove NC to please consistency sama oops
02:58:315 (1) - I would actually change this into 1/2 slider + circle that starts on blue tick OwO i prefer drums ;w;
03:16:465 (2,3,1) - this one is actually gud
03:17:665 (1) - why NC thou
03:29:065 (3,1) - please the consistency sama (02:17:065 (4,1) -, 01:07:915 (1) -)
03:36:265 (3) - yo this blanket is off
04:02:157 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - this is going to hard as fk to play due to bpm changes lolol yeah not too sure what else to do

[Insane]
Testplay (DT) : http://puu.sh/cLPEs/212f89c388.osr

wtf can I say
none of the patterns really bothered me so I'll pass this diff
(EXCEPT FOR THOSE LONG SLIDERS)

Summary: rhythm is gud2go but it could really use some aesthetics nazi mod on Hard diff primarily

pkk wrote:

quinea for BAT next round

quality of mod is astounding

you should take notes kibb

Sonnyc wrote:

[Insane]
00:28:615 (3) - Don't you think the whistle suits better at the end than the head? Not sure if the current hitsound is arbitrary, but you can hear there is something obvious to follow. yeah i see what ur getting at to be honest i think so too, but i really want at least some emphasis on the vocal otherwise my rhythm would sound weird >_<
01:07:615 (5) - Mind doing something like a ctrl+G? It may break the flow you were aiming, but the jump to 01:07:915 (1) is way too stressful compared to your overall map. Please at least make more relaxing as 02:17:515 (1). m yeah good idea
01:18:765 (2) - New combo? Just for a consideration. i see what ur getting at but imo that would be a bit too many ncs lol
01:48:865 (6) - Well honestly it's fine as it is, but I'm little concerned that some player can be in confusion because of the distance reduction with (1). ill see if i get any more opinions on this, but i didn't find it to be too hard
02:31:465 (3) - I think it won't hurt to add a whistle at the head to fit the bell sound. k
04:04:194 (1) - Mind making this a 1/8 reverse slider? lol yeah i guess that would be fine lol. im just a bit worried since 1/8 or 1/16 tend to be a bit glitchy.

Gaia wrote:

m4m my queue you didnt even have to m4m my queue is a give back queue remember
[General]
bg sux pls add better textures take that to gaia
other diffs just follow the normal's hitsound mod where applicable

[Normal]
00:10:765 (1) - blanket no
00:13:165 (1) - nc inconsistency, keep it every 2 measures so remove this one fixed all nc
00:16:765 (2) - missing clap on head fix all
00:23:965 (5,6) - ^
00:28:765 (6) - ^ wtf man
00:32:365 (1) - another nc thing
00:43:165 (5) - can u like add the drum thing and not a whistle uh
00:47:965 - something here pls cuz it's a 4 and ur claps would be inconsistent otherwise. just stack like u did with 00:22:465 (3,4) - or sth i wanted a break since there are alot of consecutive 1/2s
01:07:165 (5) - y no blanketerino r u knotts yes
01:20:365 (1) - i really think finish would fit nicely k
01:23:665 (5) - might as well start the slider here since u ignored the 2 at 01:20:365 (1) - eh the istrument
01:29:965 (1) - finish? doesnt fit
01:33:565 (2) - something on the head? there is whistle
02:16:765 (5) - hitsounds off on the end here oop
02:41:965 (4) - such high note on guitar y no whistle or sth//// also end 02:42:565 - and circle+slider pattern for 02:42:865 - to hit the drums
02:51:565 (4) - it's a guitar solo after all, try this rhythm
03:13:165 (3) - something like this would be noice http://puu.sh/cRiUk/2a8b038b28.jpg
03:19:165 - maybe consecutive 1/2 sliders here? leaving this blank doesnt fit imo since there's both the drums and the whatever instrument that is (trumbone or sth idek lol) no
03:22:765 (4) - (212, 140) satisfy my ocd k
03:41:965 (1) - hah and who was the one that told knotts to blanket :v was i? or was it my evil twin brother
04:01:165 (1) - circle+spinner 1/4 after just like 02:58:765 (1,1) - for consistency? k

[Hard]
00:10:765 (1) - pls more curve so end isnt so close to 00:10:165 (4) - looks better too if you ask me. http://puu.sh/cRjUR/72aee66b37.jpg k
00:14:965 (5,1) - isnt great flowwww, maybe curve 5 the other way whats flow
00:50:365 (2,3,1,2) - a totally random suggestion that idm if u reject lol http://puu.sh/cRk3T/5629b21f81.jpg ew
00:56:365 (1) - why not make a triangle at the end, prevents the overlap with (5) too http://puu.sh/cRk95/f2ea1da21a.jpg ..?
01:03:115 (5,1) - look at how nicely this flows ;w; http://puu.sh/cRkgl/139286fab1.jpg k
01:04:765 (4,5) - just blanket thissss no
01:05:965 (1) - curving this the other way really contrasts with 01:05:365 (5) - nicely, gunna have to change 01:06:565 (2,3) - slightly tho k
01:18:565 (2) - i know there's a bell chime here but i think following the vocals at 01:18:765 - (no reverse) would be easier to follow/read no because 1/1 gaps are easier to follow rather than 4/3 which i would have needed if i followed vocals
01:41:065 (3) - just blanket thisssss no
01:43:165 (3) - blanket gg
01:45:565 (3,4) - why not make 3 completely straight and curve 4 more? nice contrast imo .-.
01:57:565 (3) - something really noticeable is missing on the head idk what to put, and sound isnt that strong
02:25:765 (2) - hitsound is off at the end here k
02:28:165 (2) - same as other part
02:41:965 (1) - hitsound same as normal k
02:46:165 (5) - wuts with the finish here don't really know
02:48:415 - ^^^ ????? the music there is a strong sound thing
02:52:165 (2) - clap here or something ya
03:58:765 (1) - y no blanket

i-it's not like i got lazy for the last minute or anything.... b-baka !!

[Insane]
00:56:365 (1) - cool idea, just maybe put the anchors on top instead so its more noticeable? dunno if its uglier but i guess that's subjective ew looks bad
01:29:965 (1) - finish or sth dont hear anything
01:53:665 (5) - do u have a drum sound instead not a whistle whistle closest i can get
01:57:415 - no sound here, why 1/4? circle sounds good enough vocal?
02:16:465 (3,4,5,1) - not digging this overlap at all get a shovel
02:31:465 (3) - to follow the jingle bells nng
02:37:165 (1) - ocd move up 2 pixels to avoid overlap with the slider beginning k
02:47:365 (2) - full ham rite here k
02:57:265 (3) - why
03:16:765 (3) - i think curving this other way and shifting 4 a bit looks cool http://puu.sh/cRmjy/85aac91183.jpg eww D:
03:24:715 (8) - like curve this down and it leads to 1 soooooooooooooooooooooooo well not the pattern i was going for
03:41:965 (1) - u no likie this flow? http://puu.sh/cRmsh/90ce0d8139.jpg mine flows better, its circular
03:54:865 (4) - 03:55:915 (7) - welp overlap (>gosh it doesn't matter) well it matters to me ;w; u cant even see that in game


sb in december ...s:
cool stuffs gl hf

Aerous wrote:

M4M !

General :

Neko BG <3
Take my star , since I don't think my mod would help. (Whoops , please wait until I get KD and I'll come back)
btw, are you planning to make a easy?

Insane :
00:00:565 Suggestion : Add a note here Ex : http://puu.sh/cS9KI/2246e41876.jpg if i were to add a note there i would prefer mapping the whole thing out and the piano is a bit weird to map
00:05:065 (4) Suggestion : Overlap the repeat slider to the next slider http://puu.sh/cS9NY/2446def2ed.jpg doesn't look good imo
00:14:665 (4,5,6) Make this into a triangle shape? http://puu.sh/cS9W7/5da52b1b09.jpg triangles boring D:
00:19:465 (3,4) Suggestion : Ctrl + G the 3 , and bring the four closer to the repeat slider. http://puu.sh/cS9Zk/13a785d484.jpg i think it should be fine due to the leniency on sliders
00:34:765 (1,2,3,4) Clone this , and Ctrl + H ? Change this if you want nah i prefer to keep mine :3


And I can't find other problems that bothered me in this mapset :3

Sorry if this didn't help , first time modding a slow song like this.

1. There's so many pictures of AKB48 out there and you use generic anime girl BG lel
   
2. Both the star rating and map styles are screaming for you to fix up distance snap in the lower diffs and just call it ENH instead of NHI. Your 2.76 star insane is 1 whole star below the 3.75 minimum for Insane, and it's not mapped with particularly complicated patterns either. Don't need to call your diffs harder than what they actually are.
3. Or at the very least, give your insane a custom diff name or call it Harder, cause you can pass off normal and hard as what they are but not this diff. An insane of this difficulty is an insult to insanes everywhere >.<

1. 02:41:965 (4) - sounds better to end at 02:42:565

1. 00:42:265 - don't undermap this beat. what's wrong with this rhythm:
   
2. 00:50:665 - make the slider 1/2 repeat so you don't miss this beat
3. 01:05:965 (1) - ctrl-H and move to the left a bit more than its current position for better flow
4. 01:48:565 (4) - Isn't this placement much less confusing to play?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:51:865 - same as 00:42:265
6. 02:05:965 (1,1,1) - don't need all these NC's
7. 02:07:765 (1) - same as earlier, the direction of the repeat slider can be changed so the repeat end doesn't get in the way and make it confusing for new players
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:19:465 (3,4) - have the circle closer to the slider head/tail like your others, since this jump is too big, and changing it will make it flow better too.
2. 00:29:065 (4,5,6) - this is a lot easier to play if you flip the slider tail around so the cursor bounces back to the next circle
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:42:265 - don't undermap this beat. what's wrong with this rhythm:
   
4. 00:50:665 (4,5,6) - swap locations of 00:50:665 (4,6) - and 00:50:965 (5) - so the jump's flow 00:51:265 (6,1) - isn't so awkward
5. 02:05:965 (1,1,1) - calm down with the NC spam, it's not necessary
6. 03:34:315 (8) - ctrl-H flows better from 03:33:565 (6) -
7. 04:02:910 (1,1) - I thought it's unrankable to have sliders of same length and different speeds especially without slider ticks

xxdeathx wrote:

[General]

1. There's so many pictures of AKB48 out there and you use generic anime girl BG lel
   
2. Both the star rating and map styles are screaming for you to fix up distance snap in the lower diffs and just call it ENH instead of NHI. Your 2.76 star insane is 1 whole star below the 3.75 minimum for Insane, and it's not mapped with particularly complicated patterns either. Don't need to call your diffs harder than what they actually are. ive explained it to many ppl already, i know the star rating does not state that this is an insane, hard, etc, but don't look at the star rating, look at the patterns. would you map a hard diff like this??
3. Or at the very least, give your insane a custom diff name or call it Harder, cause you can pass off normal and hard as what they are but not this diff. An insane of this difficulty is an insult to insanes everywhere >.< however i will do this once i find something nice to name it

[Normal]

1. 02:41:965 (4) - sounds better to end at 02:42:565 eh wanted to get the guitar tho

[Hard]

1. 00:42:265 - don't undermap this beat. what's wrong with this rhythm: i tend to undermap vocals for certain effects, since the drums sound prominent for this section of the song, i decided to focus on that
   
2. 00:50:665 - make the slider 1/2 repeat so you don't miss this beat hmm i kinda want to get the calm feeling by using a simpler rhythm though, i will change if i get more opinions
3. 01:05:965 (1) - ctrl-H and move to the left a bit more than its current position for better flow break flow for emphasis
4. 01:48:565 (4) - Isn't this placement much less confusing to play? it seems perfectly fine to me. but again, ill get some opinions, but it should be okay considering the bpm?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:51:865 - same as 00:42:265 ^
6. 02:05:965 (1,1,1) - don't need all these NC's they indicate SV change. and i like NC D:
7. 02:07:765 (1) - same as earlier, the direction of the repeat slider can be changed so the repeat end doesn't get in the way and make it confusing for new players ^
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:19:465 (3,4) - have the circle closer to the slider head/tail like your others, since this jump is too big, and changing it will make it flow better too. these are fine to be perfectly honest. slider leniency makes this ALOT easier than what the numbers actually say
2. 00:29:065 (4,5,6) - this is a lot easier to play if you flip the slider tail around so the cursor bounces back to the next circle ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:42:265 - don't undermap this beat. what's wrong with this rhythm: same as hard
   
4. 00:50:665 (4,5,6) - swap locations of 00:50:665 (4,6) - and 00:50:965 (5) - so the jump's flow 00:51:265 (6,1) - isn't so awkward emphasis
5. 02:05:965 (1,1,1) - calm down with the NC spam, it's not necessary same as hard
6. 03:34:315 (8) - ctrl-H flows better from 03:33:565 (6) - for emphasis
7. 04:02:910 (1,1) - I thought it's unrankable to have sliders of same length and different speeds especially without slider ticks i actually don't know about that o-o ill ask around
   
   Edit: confirmed with charles, not unrankable but not necessarily recommended
   Added some SV changes manually to try to balance out slider speed.

Lanturn wrote:

Metadata. Just passing by. no KD obviously.

Romanised Title: Yoyakushita Christmas
http://www.akb48.co.jp/english/disc/index.html -> http://puu.sh/cUZrX.jpg

Add "Chance no junban" "チャンスの順番" (Album) and if you want "Akihabara" (AKB means Akihabara) to the tags.

maybe I'll mod this later. For now you can check metadata off the list <3

wcx19911123 wrote:

from Xmas queue

[General]
fine, maybe need to double check the timing of the song's end yeah i intend to do that soon hopefully

[Normal]
00:34:765 (1,2) - make 2's head line up with 1? like what you did at 00:35:965 (2,3) - , would look better k
00:48:265 (5) - move it to 00:47:965 - ? fit the song better imo(and you can follow the drums at 00:48:565 - too) hm i wanted a bit of a break for the players, also i can't find a good way to do that without the placement being awkward
01:33:565 (2) - move to x:320 y:216 for better blanket? you may need to fix the spacing to the next object too if you accept this suggestion ok

really nice map, nothing to point out..
good luck with it :3

1. About the SV in slow part, I'd prefer 0.9x SV seems you only added +10% DS instead of +15% DS there. Just personal opinion
2. 00:47:965 - I'd put a circle for clap
3. 00:49:165 - I'd use back 1.0x SV or something faster here, but both works
4. 00:49:165 - Finish sounds here in song? (low vol)
5. 00:52:465 - ^ for 01:17:365 -
6. 01:03:565 (1) - Missing whistle at tail? It has whistle for 01:13:165 (1) -
7. 01:07:165 (5) - ^
8. 01:11:665 (5) - Missing whistle?
9. 01:29:965 - New combos starting here are not constant, previous are every 2 beat (big white tick), from there is every 1 beat. I'd prefer every 1 tick for all tho, your choice
10. 01:38:365 (2) - Whistle?
11. 01:39:565 (4) - Should NC here if you want 1 beat NC
12. 01:49:165 - Backed to 2 beat ; w ;
13. 01:52:765 - Normal add + Clap, bass sound
14. 01:58:765 - Finish?
15. 02:02:065 - ^

1. AR: +0.5 (6) , feels more suitable for SV
2. 00:49:165 - Finish? 00:52:465 - too
3. Looks ok

1. 01:49:165 (1) - Might mistake to hit 1/4 here. Maybe make 01:48:865 (6) - slider or space further?
2. 04:04:194 (1) - Sounds 4 hits of 1/8

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Clearing mod requests

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3

I'm not sure about how it's hitsounded, seems a bit complicated for me x_x (especially whistles). Might wanna double check them k

[Normal]

1. About the SV in slow part, I'd prefer 0.9x SV seems you only added +10% DS instead of +15% DS there. Just personal opinion hmm .9 not enough of a change to me imo xD, also the ds, i just chose something that was close enough, so imo its close enough.
2. 00:47:965 - I'd put a circle for clap i wanted a gap here for players to rest, its consistent with other part so i think its fine
3. 00:49:165 - I'd use back 1.0x SV or something faster here, but both works <
4. 00:49:165 - Finish sounds here in song? (low vol) eh don't rly hear one
5. 00:52:465 - ^ for 01:17:365 -
6. 01:03:565 (1) - Missing whistle at tail? It has whistle for 01:13:165 (1) - yep
7. 01:07:165 (5) - ^ ^
8. 01:11:665 (5) - Missing whistle? nah not for this one
9. 01:29:965 - New combos starting here are not constant, previous are every 2 beat (big white tick), from there is every 1 beat. I'd prefer every 1 tick for all tho, your choice the fk, i think i was drunk. NC should be consistent now :>
10. 01:38:365 (2) - Whistle? k
11. 01:39:565 (4) - Should NC here if you want 1 beat NC ^
12. 01:49:165 - Backed to 2 beat ; w ;
13. 01:52:765 - Normal add + Clap, bass sound dont hear one here
14. 01:58:765 - Finish? ^
15. 02:02:065 - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. AR: +0.5 (6) , feels more suitable for SV hmm this keeps a more balanced spread though i think this ar is good
2. 00:49:165 - Finish? 00:52:465 - too ^
3. Looks ok

[Luminous]

1. 01:49:165 (1) - Might mistake to hit 1/4 here. Maybe make 01:48:865 (6) - slider or space further? eh i played around with it slightly, but i think its playable enough
2. 04:04:194 (1) - Sounds 4 hits of 1/8 its actually 1/12 but yeah thx for helping me realize.

There will be a Christmas queue soon, keep an eye~ yeh im in that team :3

Nice diffs!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

AndreasHD wrote:

Hello! I'll try to mod this map the best I can


[General]

00:20:365 This inheriting section exists, just so you know. It's for no use, plz remove. yee

Your Normal difficulty has "E" icon on website and your Hard difficulty has "N" icon. I dunno, change it if you can I guess. as ive been explaining q: it doesnt actually PLAY like an easy and normal. or certainly not mapped to be that way

[Normal]

Can't seem to find anything here. Seems ready to me.


[Hard]

01:41:065 (3) - make this slider more curvy so that it makes a blanket, its only one grid to the right, and your good. prefer not to, dont intend to blanket

I looked through the whole diff, and I can't really find anything else to improve..gj



[Luminous]

00:07:165 (3) - Im not a big fan of overlaps like this, its okay with sliderends, but not singlenotes or beginning of sliders. Change it if you want a better map ^^ i like them though

00:08:965 (2,3,4) - The rhythm you're using here is extremly odd, and it caught me off guard when playing for the first time. It doesn't follow the music either. Im not sure how to change it though, without making a 1/3 stream. but it represents the music well.. the music is odd in general here.

00:16:765 (3) - Overlay's like this is ugly to read.. ^

00:31:465 (4) - Make the angle more visible, looks better that way fixed i guess? clarification needed.


Sorry for small mod, but it's pretty much ready for rank in my eyes. Good luck with it

Pururut wrote:

hi~ o/
from MQ.
awesome bg :> gaia<3
your map is pretty fine

[Luminous]
00:05:365 - remove drum clap? there is a drum there in the music though
00:10:165 - remove clap,whistle is enough. yeah nice
00:53:665 (4,1) - parallel. fine imo
01:39:565 (1) - ctrl g better flow i don't rly see how, but i like this
01:54:865 (2) - ^ nah

[Hard]
00:07:465 (3) - ctrl+g? hmm i will consider this one owo but idk i like this pattern. its kinda interesting atm
01:36:865 (1) - fnish 30% vol? i think this is fine
02:12:265 (4,5,1) - a bit ugly idk it looks quite fine to me o-o do u have any suggestions though?

[Easy]
Fine normal not easy ><

i can't point any more
hope you can get this ranked on xmas day

1. 00:11:665 (2) - I think this would be better curved the other way to lead more nicely into (3): http://puu.sh/d8u4g/0f0deb36e4.jpg
2. 00:24:565 (6) - Maybe add normal clap on the end? It matches the drum.
3. 00:28:765 (6) - Whistle to go with the piano or whatever.
4. 00:43:165 (5) - Add normal clap on head?

1. 00:31:165 (4) - Fix stack.
2. 00:35:365 (2,3) - Maybe you can give it a little jump or a larger direction change, just to distinguish the pattern more.
3. 01:13:765 (3) - I think it sounds better if you add a whistle on the end.
4. 03:34:165 (6,7) - Fix stack.
5. 03:44:365 (1) - Just in my opinion, it flows better if you move it like this: http://puu.sh/d9ed2/c0ed34358d.jpg
6. 03:57:565 (4) - Fix stack.

1. Nothing to point out.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From in-game.
How to even mod this?

no kds pls oops

[Normal]

1. 00:11:665 (2) - I think this would be better curved the other way to lead more nicely into (3): http://puu.sh/d8u4g/0f0deb36e4.jpg hmm what i have looks better imo
2. 00:24:565 (6) - Maybe add normal clap on the end? It matches the drum. yee
3. 00:28:765 (6) - Whistle to go with the piano or whatever. yee
4. 00:43:165 (5) - Add normal clap on head? naw not the same sound here

[Hard]

1. 00:31:165 (4) - Fix stack. ye
2. 00:35:365 (2,3) - Maybe you can give it a little jump or a larger direction change, just to distinguish the pattern more. nah i think i like it the way it is
3. 01:13:765 (3) - I think it sounds better if you add a whistle on the end. dont want to spam too much whistle
4. 03:34:165 (6,7) - Fix stack. ya
5. 03:44:365 (1) - Just in my opinion, it flows better if you move it like this: http://puu.sh/d9ed2/c0ed34358d.jpg did something similar
6. 03:57:565 (4) - Fix stack. ye

[Luminous]

1. Nothing to point out. fixed

Took me forever because maps with low SV make me sleepy every time I start modding them.

Ninja Bunny wrote:

Sorry for late mod!

[General]

1) Timing: beat is right on except from 03:01:165 - to 03:20:365 - due to this section starting ~20ms faster. So first add a timing point at 03:20:365 - and then add another timing point at around 03:01:142 - i think this is fine o-o not rly early imo.

2) hitsounds look great

[Luminous]

• 
  
  [*Timing/composition/flow]

1. 03:10:765 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - vocal uses simpler rhythm, so reduce the 1/8 sliders? i wanted to emphasize in the little vocal things idk
   
2. 04:02:157 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - this part is unnecessary imo. Replace with a spinner from 04:02:059 -
   to 04:04:194 - ? eh. i wanted to map those out. idk ill get more opinions cuz ill probably end up replacing it with a spinner since its awkward to play
3. 02:29:965 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/d9nnf.jpg nah
   
4. 02:58:765 (1) - reduce to 03:00:865 - ? ^
   
   
   [*Aesthetics/ patterns]
   
5. 02:57:940 (5) - move to 372,112 so that it looks neater not rly o-o
   
6. 00:47:365 (2) - drag down the tail to 136, 52 so that it looks neater don't prefer so
   
7. 00:48:790 (5) - move to 196, 328? that goes off screen? o-o
   
8. 01:19:165 (3,4) - move to 168, 216 for a more symmetrical look k
   

[Hard]

[*Timing/composition/flow]

1. 00:45:865 - 00:50:065 - add note? (add normal "additions" clap if you apply this mod) nah not mapping vocals this section
   
   
   
   [*Aesthetics/ patterns]
   
2. 01:46:765 (1) - move to 180, 212? k
3. 01:17:515 (1,2) - 02:27:115 (1,2) - cswap NC? yep
4. 03:38:365 (3) - move the tail to 132, 168? k

[Normal]

00:09:565 (6,1) - improve blanket? gud enough ><
03:40:765 (3,1) - kinda hard to blanket these, but try..? XD didnt intend to blanket but i made it more diverse since i guess it does look almost like a blanket atm

Lust wrote:

log

16:18 Lust: are you free for me to check over yoyakushite christmas now
16:20 Kibbleru: yes i am
16:20 Lust: i can bubble it today and you can wait until christmas for it to be qualified
16:20 Kibbleru: yeah thats fine :3
16:29 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/530223 AKB48 - Yoyakushita Christmas [Luminous]]
16:29 Kibbleru: yey
16:29 Lust: 00:38:365 (3) - i suggest you ctrl+g or something because it is inconsistent with the spacing youve already set out with this rhythm before at 00:29:365 (5,6) - and other places
16:30 Kibbleru: hmm
16:30 Kibbleru: the thing is for those is
16:30 Kibbleru: due to the leniency on sliders
16:30 Kibbleru: imo they all play
16:30 Kibbleru: basically the same
16:30 Lust: no
16:30 Lust: 00:29:665 (6) - 
16:30 Lust: this does not have any leniency
16:31 Lust: the spacing is further in comparison to 00:38:665 (4) - 
16:31 Kibbleru: hm i suppose so
16:31 Lust: 00:38:365 (3,4) - with this current setup, the spacing that you have set is inconsistent with before, possibly making it confusing to those who are already accustomed to the rhythm
16:32 Kibbleru: ill do this instead
16:32 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/dewma/61676cc669.jpg
16:32 Lust: 01:16:465 (3,4,5) - this is fine because of the leniency
16:32 Lust: yeah thats cool
16:41 Lust: hard looks good
16:41 Kibbleru: aight
16:43 Lust: you made this normal right?
16:43 Kibbleru: yes
16:43 Kibbleru: why owo
16:44 Lust: go back through it and make sure that all the objects are evenly spaced at either 1.0 or 1.1
16:44 Lust: at some places it goes all whacky
16:44 Lust: and then after youve done that, go through all the diffs to make sure you are satisfied with everything
16:44 Lust: report to me any changes you make (if any)
16:44 Kibbleru: k
16:44 Lust: and then post in the thread that you are ready

What we fixed:

1. A confusing pattern in the Luminous difficulty that was inconsistent in spacing to other patterns
2. Resnapped objects in the Normal difficulty that were starting to be a little inconsistent

Call me back!

Lust wrote:

Removed the .osb, now we are looking sharp!

To the BATs interested in qualifying this, Kibbleru has requested not to until December 25th (that could change if he decides otherwise).

Sellenite wrote:

lets 18th

Xinely wrote:

Talked with kibbleru before. I will check around 18th or 19th :3

Reserved post for mod here
mfw my community asked me to be staff on chruch for christmas so i will be busy at 18th and 19th for preparing it, i will mod this one now and so i just need to press heart at 18th :3

• 
  Normal

1. 00:05:365 - i think this time has quite strong bell sound so you should map it this, try change 00:05:065 (4) - become 1/2 slider repeat? i feel one slider can express the extent of the drum things better
2. 00:08:965 (5) - i almost cant hear drum sound at slider's head, try remove the clap here? i think whistle only is enough it sounds pretty loud to me imo
3. 00:12:565 - and 00:12:865 - are continuing music so imo both of them should be mapped together here, how about 00:11:665 (2) - remove repeat and add circle 00:12:565 - here? i feel like this one is weaker so i decided not to map this one out since i wanted a bit of a break for players
4. 00:26:065 (2) - according your previous flow from previous slider's tail to this slider's head, it would be consistent if you remove middle node in this slider and move node of tail to 468,144 ah that doesnt look good for me lol
5. 00:48:265 (5) - hmm try use 1/2 slider repeat instead? since i feel drum at 4th whitetick is quite strong and should be mapped with clap sound here, somehow feels too empty right now they're not exacty mapped out but i expressed them with the kinks in the slider so imo that is enough. main reason is because i wanted a bit of variety. didn't want to spam the same rhythm too much so i changed some of these into 1/1 sliders with kinks
6. 01:17:365 (1) - how about add finish on this tail? imo the music (bell sound) need finish here altho that isnt cymbal, just my personal taste though eh sounds a bit wierd to me lol, i prefer expressing bells with whistles and only put finish if necessary from the music
7. 01:23:965 (6) - missing whistle at head? altho that's intentional imo trumpet sound quite strong here so it should be hitsounded okay
8. 01:31:465 - guitar sound quite strong here so it should be mapped just like first part did 00:21:565 (2) - same reason as before
9. 02:14:365 (2,3) - hmm im not fan of flow's type like this actually, imo the flow could be catch and feel more natural with http://puu.sh/djcOL.jpg fix
10. 02:45:865 (2) - hmm i dont hear cymbal sound at slider's repeat, remove the finish then coz it feels too loud k
11. 02:49:165 (1) - should be add finish on head because the music has crash cymbal k
12. 03:18:115 - unnecessary greenline lol k

• 
  Hard

1. 00:05:665 (4) - hmm imo the jump feels better if you do jump for next slider which has cymbal sound instead of this circle which has drum sound only http://puu.sh/djdeH.jpg i prefer not, the zigzag motion imo gives enough emphasis and i really think this pattenr is fun to play
2. 00:50:665 - imo you should to map this drum since this sound is continuing from previous whitetick, i feel quite empty here yea
3. 00:52:465 (2) - add finish on head. i feel i hear cymbal/strong music here yea
4. 00:59:815 (3) - is normal sampleset here intentional? according the music, it's sound heard very week here so i prefer to use default soft hit normal or change drum sampleset yeah i wanted to hitsound that feint drum and i do them on insane too
5. 01:02:065 (3) - same here as above for this slider's repeat, if you agree to fix for all objects which similar like that ^
6. 01:03:115 (5) - actually i cant hear a sound in slider's tail here, i hear a drum around 01:03:490 - so i prefer make this slider end at 01:03:265 - yea
7. 01:07:915 (5) - hmm up to you to keep or not but actually i feel no need NC for this one altho the background music suddenly crashed i felt like i needed an nc for kiai end
8. 01:35:665 (2) - i prefer to ctrl+G this slider actually so it would be give more natural flow on both previous and next slider, just my taste again uh i like the current placement cuz flow break emphasizes sounds like these quite nicely
9. 01:57:565 (3) - missing clap here? i hear a drum sound here and you used clap for previous 3rd whitetick yeah fixed for all diffs too also with the previous section
10. 02:31:765 (4,1) - hmm i feel this jump looks quite weird imo, well since the music is relax part here, try 02:31:765 (4) - ctrl+G this one? so it will have 1 normal spacing and 1 jump for next yea i just ctrl g
11. 02:47:965 (3,4) - hmm finish on (3)'s tail heard so bad imo, it would better if you end (3) slider to 02:48:265 - and move (4) start from 02:48:415 - end at 02:48:865 - so the cymbal is clickable for this part hehe yeah originally i had it like this because imo it was easier to start those repeat kicksliders on white ticks but fixed
12. 04:02:910 (1) - the jump quite rude and confusing because the red lines here. i really strong suggest to ctrl+G this one so it would be easier to catch even the time is still hard to read for first play oh nice!
13. 04:06:472 - please give same decreasing volume too since it has only at Luminous's diff, i guess inconsistency here yeah forgot x_x

• 
  Insane

1. 00:05:065 (4) - maybe just for me but i cant hear any 1/6 sounds here listen closely with headphones, there are drums here
2. 00:09:065 - i cant hear sound at this time too ^
3. 00:19:465 (3) - hmm if we follow the drums sound here, actually they are placed on 1/4 uhh yeah im not too sure, ill get some opinions because i sorta hear the drums on 00:19:665 - it's also really close to the 1/4 tick too but to me it sounds closer to the 1/6 k the majority seems to think 1/4 so fixed
4. 00:29:965 (1) - maybe add finish on head coz it has quite strong music + bell sound i prefer using whistles for the bell sounds >_< finish sound a bit too much to me for this type of song
5. 00:52:465 (2) - finish at head same as Hard ok i fixed both for these
6. 01:16:465 (3) - normal hit normal here sound so loud for me, try change with drum finish instead? , if you fix this so do for 02:26:065 (3) - 02:57:265 (3) - 03:38:065 (4) - too reduced volume, drum hitfinish a bit weird for me
7. 01:35:665 (4) - same as 00:29:965 (1) - (loud piano for this time) ^
8. 01:39:565 (1) - finish at head coz cymbal music here ^
9. 01:56:965 (2) - actually for the flow i prefer to ctrl+G this one, but this is just my taste again lol k
10. 02:02:065 (2) - same as 00:52:465 (2) - k

call me back around 18th ><

Xinely wrote:

recheck~

just nazi thing that 00:39:562 - unsnapped greenline here, should be snapped at 00:39:565 - (for all diffs)

sadly 8 ranked maps already for 18th december :C
we will rank tomorrow then

Xinely wrote:

did irc mod and we added audio lead in

Merry Christmas ~ (っ･ω･)っ