1. Again (4.42 stars, 1122 notes)

VINXIS wrote:

dis is gunna be worth so much pp LOL

Anything outside of diff

Uncheck letterbox Aight, didn't know what this does tbh
yo u should get a storyboard for this that'd be sick Know someone that can do one for me?
also add some custom hitsounds! I have a pack of koan snare and kicks if u want me to send them to u Yes please

Again

when i played this it was perfect and amaziing the map fit the song so well and i could've fcd if misses didn't exist lo l Thanks bud
now for the stuf

...OD 8.3? This will make the leaderboards more competetive

(mostly things about the beginning, the rest seems fine to me)

00:07:427 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1) - tbh if ur gunna use 1/3 spacing for teh circles you should do that for the sliders as well nvm lol
00:55:810 (4,5,6,7,8) - tbh i would make the distance of the jumps smaller but it's fine either way They were a bit much
00:30:369 (3) - add repeater? yep.
01:07:574 - add circle? yep.
01:37:722 (2,3,4,5,6) - you could add a couple more circles in the stream and connect with the slider tbh Done, but it doesn't really go with the music, I'll see what other people say abouit.

02:18:310 (1,2,3,4) - imo better if u ended them on blue ticks instead of yellow ticks (or made them short one yellow tick so they end in blue ticks... like this) Yeah this definitely sounds better.
01:49:486 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

04:23:457 (8) - x:161 y:153 Done.

05:38:457 (1) - remove NC Done.

if ur actually going srs for app ill shoot a star because i saw 4 maps that are graveyarded. (I'll probably star around a month later if you're still goin 4 it) Yeah I am going for approval, so i'll look forward to that star

sullyjhf wrote:

Uncheck letterbox Aight, didn't know what this does tbh
yo u should get a storyboard for this that'd be sick Know someone that can do one for me?

Osuology wrote:

00:08:898 (1,1,1,1) - These I don't think really belong separate to each other, I think they are rather the same rhythm.
As here:
00:12:869 (1,1) - Same. Yo I don't really know what you mean by this and the comment above.
00:22:722 (3) - And I believe this repeat is not short enough. Made into a 1/8 repeat.

sullyjhf wrote:

Osuology wrote:

00:08:898 (1,1,1,1) - These I don't think really belong separate to each other, I think they are rather the same rhythm.
As here:
00:12:869 (1,1) - Same. Yo I don't really know what you mean by this and the comment above.
00:22:722 (3) - And I believe this repeat is not short enough. Made into a 1/8 repeat.

Osuology wrote:

Osuology wrote:

00:08:898 (1,1,1,1) - These I don't think really belong separate to each other, I think they are rather the same rhythm.
As here:
00:12:869 (1,1) - Same. Yo I don't really know what you mean by this and the comment above.
00:22:722 (3) - And I believe this repeat is not short enough. Made into a 1/8 repeat.

There are a bunch of new combos, and I think only one new combo is needed. Also, will mod more when I'm out of school.

Osuology wrote:

01:38:898 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not sure if this type of stuff is rankable( I dunno, but make sure it is.) I can't see why it wouldn't be rankable?
05:44:780 (1,1,1,1) - Also I think should be same combo. (This is your choice just making sure you know this.)
05:51:839 (1,1,1) - As here.
05:54:192 (1,1,1,1) - And here.
05:58:898 (1,1,1,1) - And. here.
06:10:663 (1,1,1) - ^
06:20:074 (1,1,1,1) -
06:24:780 (1,1,1,1) - </3
06:29:486 (1,1,1,1) - Is this tag4?
06:34:192 (1,1,1) - .........
all of these are fine and easier to read than if they were the same combo, because their rhythm changes from 1/4 to 1/3 so having them all NC makes it slightly easier to read

sullyjhf wrote:

Osuology wrote:

01:38:898 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not sure if this type of stuff is rankable( I dunno, but make sure it is.) I can't see why it wouldn't be rankable?
05:44:780 (1,1,1,1) - Also I think should be same combo. (This is your choice just making sure you know this.)
05:51:839 (1,1,1) - As here.
05:54:192 (1,1,1,1) - And here.
05:58:898 (1,1,1,1) - And. here.
06:10:663 (1,1,1) - ^
06:20:074 (1,1,1,1) -
06:24:780 (1,1,1,1) - </3
06:29:486 (1,1,1,1) - Is this tag4?
06:34:192 (1,1,1) - .........
all of these are fine and easier to read than if they were the same combo, because their rhythm changes from 1/4 to 1/3 so having them all NC makes it slightly easier to read

-Tochi wrote:

M4M from my Q

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  General

1. As you can see here https://soundcloud.com/koan-sound/this-time-around-feat-koo The "(" and ")" isn't used to be there. But idk if you want to keep it. I would delete them if i were you. Fixed
2. The HP Drain Rate is 7, and this is a marathon. Maybe move it to 5,5 - 5 - or 6. Fixed
3. Remember to add Combo Colours for your map. And 5 out of 6 of the colours should fit the background imo. Done
4. I would add the Letterbox during breaks. If you can find it then follow this: song setup>Design Done, but doesn't this do nothing if you don't have a storyboard?
5. I would change the AudioInLead to 2000 So the map doesn't start too sudden: Done
   
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   You can find it in the osu. file.

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  Again

1. 00:03:604 (1,2,3,4) - I would move (1) 4 grids to the left, (while (1) (2) (3) and (4) is selected) so it stacks with 00:02:427 (1) - instead of an awkward overlap. And it looks/feels better like this imo. Done
2. 00:14:781 (4,2) - Please avoid this overlap. Done
3. 00:20:810 (2,3,4) - Is too close to 00:20:663 (1) - imo. Done
4. 00:23:457 (1) - Stack with 00:21:839 (8) - And remember to select all this 00:23:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - when you move the note. Done
5. 00:28:310 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Move it to here (while all is selected) So the slider stacks with 00:28:016 (4) - like: Done
   
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6. 00:35:369 (2) - This slider should end at 00:35:663 - so it fits with the song. And remember not to overlap it with 00:34:192 (1) - Done
7. 00:37:722 - Why not put a note here? It sounds empty there if don't put a note there. The note should stack with 00:36:839 (1) - And just so you know it. You shouldn't really not put a note on big white ticks. That's usually there were the beat starts, or that there is a beat there. Done
8. 00:42:722 (1,2,3) - Make this part look better like: Done
   
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9. 00:48:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is there suddenly a change on this stream? Fix the last note please. Done
10. 00:57:869 (3,4,5) - This overlaps with 00:58:310 (6,7,8,9) - Consider moving 00:57:869 (3,4,5) - to And make this not 00:58:310 (6) - a start of a new combo. Done
11. 01:02:133 (3,5) - Try to avoid this overlap. Done
12. 01:05:663 (2) - Why not stack it on this slider's 01:04:633 (3) - end? Done
13. 01:07:354 (5,1) - Nicely made. Thanks dude
14. 01:08:310 (1,2) - Avoid the overlap. Done
15. 01:13:604 (5) - New combo on this note? Done
16. 01:15:957 (1) - This blanket can be improved: Done
    
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    After/Improved

    
17. 01:17:574 (5) - I suggest on reshape it, and move it so it looks like this:
    
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18. Move this 01:18:604 (3) - to Do Ctrl + H on 01:18:751 (4) - and move it to so the flow improves.
19. 01:19:780 (6) - Can you hear that the slider ends on the wrong place? The slider-end shouldn't end on a big white tick, where the beat starts like here. I suggest to move 01:19:780 (6) - so it starts here 01:19:780 (6) - on the big white tick. And put a circle here 01:19:780 - that stacks on the slider-head of 01:20:074 (6) - so it's gonna look like this: Done
    
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20. 01:22:280 (4,1,2) - This sounds weird, and feels weird to play, because you didn't map at the start of the next beat, which starts here 01:22:427 - You could for example make a slider there, so it fills up the music here 01:22:427 - and here 01:22:574 - Try to put 2 notes there and hear how good it fits, before you put a slider or whatever you put there. Done
21. 01:24:486 (8,2) - This overlap looks bad. Please avoid it. Made it stack on top of the other note
22. 01:28:898 (7,1) - Here too. Why not move 01:29:486 (1) - a bit mor up? Done
23. 01:50:369 (4,2) - Avoid overlap. Done
24. 02:08:898 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - This part is mapped as almost this part 00:42:722 (1,2,3) - Just with more notes. Make it look good like that part. (You can make it symmetrical) Done
25. 02:13:163 (3) - Why not stack with the end of this slider? 02:11:839 (1) - It also avoids the overlap between them. Done
26. 02:18:310 (1,2,3,4) - There's no reason for it to be so close to 02:17:427 (1,2) - Please do something to make it look more correct spaced. Done
27. 02:22:427 (2) - 02:20:810 (4,2) - Stack the circle on the slider-head. Done
28. 02:22:427 (2,1) - Avoid overlap. Done
29. 02:32:722 (7) - I suggest to make this a stream instead. Done
30. 02:39:339 (3,4,5) - the overlap looks awkward. Please avoid it. Done
31. 02:59:780 (2,3) - Avoid this weird overlap, it looks awkward: Done
    
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32. 03:19:486 (3) - This slider shouldn't touch this slider's 03:18:604 (2) - head, just like these two sliders 03:17:722 (1,2) - Done but it kinda looks funky now, the last slider isn't as curved idk what to do
33. 03:22:280 (7,3) - Avoid overlap. Done
34. 03:23:898 (7) - This slider is too curvy the wrong way. You could rotate it. Done
35. 03:27:133 (1) - Add a green line here, and set the volume to 5% so it mutes the spinner. Done
36. 03:45:663 - If you were thinking on setting a green line here, you shouldn't. Haha ok
37. 03:49:045 (6,1) - Why the big overlap? It looks ugly, when it's the only one that is overlapped. You should follow your patterns. Done
38. 04:01:545 (4,5) - This is confusing to play. Either stack them or delete 04:01:692 (5) - You're right it's confusing to play but i found deleting the (5) made it even more weird, so I deleted the 4 and put a NC on the 3
39. 04:13:163 (2,1) - Avoid this overlap. You don't have to, if u think it destroys the pattern. But it looks kinda awkward imo. Done
40. 04:13:751 (3,1) - Same with these. Done because of ^
41. 04:31:692 (5,6) - Avoid the overlap here. Done
42. 04:36:398 (2) - A triple would fit better imo. Done
43. 04:44:192 (2,4) - Stack? Done
44. 04:49:045 (4,5,2) - I don't really like this overlap. Done
45. 05:14:633 (5,7) - This is hard to play. Fixed
46. 05:19:486 (5) - I suggest to move it a bit more to the left. Done
47. 05:23:457 (1) - And i think a triple would fit more. Done
48. 05:24:780 (1,1) - Avoid this overlap Done
49. 05:46:545 (1,2) - Same as above ^ Done
50. 06:01:692 (4) - This is place at an awkward position. I would Stack it with this slider's 06:01:251 (3) - end. Done
51. 06:08:604 (4) - It starts too early, it should start here 06:08:751 - at the end of the slider. Like this circle do 06:11:104 (1) - Done
52. 06:23:310 (1,2) - Please improve the blanket. Done (I think)
53. 06:32:574 - Why is there suddenly a default soft sample here? Fixed

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  Feedback

  
  I think you should improve the way you make patterns, and where you place the notes, and when to put a circle, and when to put a slider. The hitsounds were fine, i liked it. Overall: It still needs mods, and a lot of work.

1. 00:02:133 (3) - Change to 1/6 BSP here, listen to it carefully using 25% Playback Rate, it will sound much accurate.
2. 00:04:486 (4,2) - I know the player won't see them overlap, but I still think they shouldn't overlap, it goes ugly.
3. 00:07:427 (1,2,3,4,5) - It may be hard, but try to follow the background rings in this part, there are some 1/6 and 1/8 notes here, if you can make it accurate, it could be amazing.
4. 00:17:133 (2,3) - It looks like there is supposed to be some connection between the sliders, but there is none, either make them resemble something together or just change it so they won't resemble each other at all.
5. 00:28:604 (1,2,1) - It looks weird, the sliders are not pointing towards each other and the circle is not distance snapped equally.
6. 00:30:222 (2) - DS, because now it looks a bit ugly.
7. 00:33:016 (1,2,3,4) - Make the hitsounds gradually increase in volume here, an other cool thing you can do is increase the SV of each slider with it.
8. 00:34:192 (1,2) - The flow from the first slider is not going well with the second one. If you move the first point of the slider to x=340 it will be better.
9. 00:36:839 (1,2) - Don't overlap.
10. 00:40:663 (2,3,4,5) - The incosistency is weird.. A small thing to do to fix it is to CTRL+G on 3.
11. 00:43:604 (4) - Move it a bit to the left (or rotate anti-clockwise) so it will flow with the previous circle better.
12. 00:55:516 (1,8) - Stack properly.
13. 01:00:957 (1,2) - I don't like the way they combine, but it may be just me.
14. 01:03:016 (5,6) - Try to blanket it a bit better.
15. 01:07:133 (4,5,6) - Why such high spacing with such low SV? The slider just unfits here, it looks dead 1/4 even though it is not.
16. 01:14:045 (3,4) - Blanket better.
17. 01:19:780 (6) - Make it repeat, it will follow the vocals nicely and the beat as well.
18. 01:21:839 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is equal for first 3 notes then gets increased with an uneven number. It looks weird and feels weird because they are all going in the same flow, but if you'd make a jump to an other side it would player better, but you need to fix the distance snapping here.
19. 01:30:810 (5,6,7,8) - Try to make a more interesting pattern here, I think it is really pale.
20. 01:35:074 (2,3) - Please don't end those 1/8 tick before the next slider. It sounds bad and it looks bad! Just end them on a strong before before the sliders. (01:35:663 and 01:36:545) OR end them on the 1/4 ticks, since it sounds really awful on the 1/8 ones.
21. 01:37:722 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Lower the DS a bit, it is really hard to know that a 204 bpm stream is incoming, and even harder to see when it is snapped like that. Overall it was a really calm part but then 204 BPM and huge DS stream? It's wrong.. That's a clear overmap, only the first 3 notes are 1/8 triplet, this part is calm, no need to overmap for no reason.
22. 01:46:398 (4,5) - It looks bad, change the pattern.
23. 01:48:310 (1,2) - Like before.
24. 01:50:516 (1) - Rotate 275 degress and move a bit to the left, it will play much better.
25. 01:57:869 (2) - Add one more repeat (and a whistle or something in the end)
26. 02:02:427 (1,2,3) - Egh, like before, please change those.
27. 02:17:427 (1,2) - I think you can make it look better somehow.
28. 02:23:016 (3) - You made a nice shape, but it is not related to anything, just randomly dropped, be creative! Maybe blanket the curve with 02:24:486 (2) - or something, whatever cool goes!
29. 02:28:163 (8,1) - I think it looks really ugly too..
30. 02:32:722 (7,8,9,10,1) - What's up with the spacing?
31. 02:49:560 (1,2,3) - Zzzz this again, I just noticed there are strong piano-ish like notes in the sliders, maybe use them as indicators? It will sound and play better.
32. 02:54:192 (1,2,3) - ^
33. 02:58:898 (1,2,3) - Get over this pattern man, it sucks :\ (Now I am going to stop noting them, they just keep on coming..)
34. 03:24:780 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It looks and plays great, but I think the distance is too much, it is not kiai, you made it so intense while the rest of the map so far was much less like that.
35. 03:51:104 (3,1) - Blanket better.
36. 04:13:310 (3,4) - Stack properly.
37. 04:16:251 (4,5) - Why stopping in place? There wasn't even a small change in the music.
38. 04:23:163 (7,8) - Stack properly.
39. 04:31:545 (4,5,6,7) - The odd DS makes the pattern look ugly / weird.
40. 04:32:427 (1,1) - Stack properly.
41. 04:34:633 (2,3) - You can blanket a bit better.
42. 04:44:045 (1,2,3) - A bettet pattern here will be appreciated, weirdish 'straight' line, looks weird and plays weird.
43. 04:59:192 (2) - CTRL + G, some creation won't be bad, it plays nicely as well.
44. 04:59:780 (1) - ^ Plays much much better like that
45. 05:08:604 (2) - The placement is a bit random, try to fight a better place to fit this slider.
46. 05:19:192 (4,5) - CTRL + G each one of them SEPERATELY.
47. 05:23:457 (1,2,3) - Just make a regular curve / straight line. The oddness here is bad.
48. 05:26:692 (2) - Bad placement with the previous slider. (Doesn't flow well with the ending point)
49. 05:42:427 (4,5) - Make the flow a bit better here.
50. 06:01:251 (3,4) - Stack properly.
51. 06:08:604 - Add a note here for consistency.
52. 06:15:369 (3,4) - Ugly and the flow isn't that good.

Avishay wrote:

Hey, from my queue, I'm a bit sleepy now so I hope it will be good enough!

1. 00:02:133 (3) - Change to 1/6 BSP here, listen to it carefully using 25% Playback Rate, it will sound much accurate. I see, done.
2. 00:04:486 (4,2) - I know the player won't see them overlap, but I still think they shouldn't overlap, it goes ugly. Aight done.
3. 00:07:427 (1,2,3,4,5) - It may be hard, but try to follow the background rings in this part, there are some 1/6 and 1/8 notes here, if you can make it accurate, it could be amazing.I literally hav no idea where any of the sounds are in this bit, i've done something but i'd really appreciate it if you could show me an alternative, this took me too long anyway ;-;
4. 00:17:133 (2,3) - It looks like there is supposed to be some connection between the sliders, but there is none, either make them resemble something together or just change it so they won't resemble each other at all.Don't really get what you mean here, the shape of the sliders is because of the vocals (in the first slider there is a wave in the vocals and in the second there isn't) and they shouldn't be new combo's because again, they are the following the same vocal line.
5. 00:28:604 (1,2,1) - It looks weird, the sliders are not pointing towards each other and the circle is not distance snapped equally.Fixed by putting a big circle slider underneath both of them and lining them up.
6. 00:30:222 (2) - DS, because now it looks a bit ugly. done.
7. 00:33:016 (1,2,3,4) - Make the hitsounds gradually increase in volume here, an other cool thing you can do is increase the SV of each slider with it. done.
8. 00:34:192 (1,2) - The flow from the first slider is not going well with the second one. If you move the first point of the slider to x=340 it will be better. Sort of done because of the last point.
9. 00:36:839 (1,2) - Don't overlap. ok.
10. 00:40:663 (2,3,4,5) - The incosistency is weird.. A small thing to do to fix it is to CTRL+G on 3. done.
11. 00:43:604 (4) - Move it a bit to the left (or rotate anti-clockwise) so it will flow with the previous circle better. done.
12. 00:55:516 (1,8) - Stack properly. They are? but I knid of repositioned them anyway just in case.
13. 01:00:957 (1,2) - I don't like the way they combine, but it may be just me. curved better and moved a bit to make it flow and look better.
14. 01:03:016 (5,6) - Try to blanket it a bit better. ok.
15. 01:07:133 (4,5,6) - Why such high spacing with such low SV? The slider just unfits here, it looks dead 1/4 even though it is not. Increased SV a bit but it didn't really help because that sv is quite high anyway.
16. 01:14:045 (3,4) - Blanket better. ok.
17. 01:19:780 (6) - Make it repeat, it will follow the vocals nicely and the beat as well. oh sweet, nice.
18. 01:21:839 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is equal for first 3 notes then gets increased with an uneven number. It looks weird and feels weird because they are all going in the same flow, but if you'd make a jump to an other side it would player better, but you need to fix the distance snapping here. done.
19. 01:30:810 (5,6,7,8) - Try to make a more interesting pattern here, I think it is really pale. maybe done lol.
20. 01:35:074 (2,3) - Please don't end those 1/8 tick before the next slider. It sounds bad and it looks bad! Just end them on a strong before before the sliders. (01:35:663 and 01:36:545) OR end them on the 1/4 ticks, since it sounds really awful on the 1/8 ones. okey dokey.
21. 01:37:722 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Lower the DS a bit, it is really hard to know that a 204 bpm stream is incoming, and even harder to see when it is snapped like that. Overall it was a really calm part but then 204 BPM and huge DS stream? It's wrong.. That's a clear overmap, only the first 3 notes are 1/8 triplet, this part is calm, no need to overmap for no reason. fixed.
22. 01:46:398 (4,5) - It looks bad, change the pattern. fixed with tiny blanket.
23. 01:48:310 (1,2) - Like before. hopefully this looks better.
24. 01:50:516 (1) - Rotate 275 degress and move a bit to the left, it will play much better. done.
25. 01:57:869 (2) - Add one more repeat (and a whistle or something in the end) sounds a bit weird but i did it.
26. 02:02:427 (1,2,3) - Egh, like before, please change those. maybe good now.
27. 02:17:427 (1,2) - I think you can make it look better somehow. might be confusing to play now but it looks cool.
28. 02:23:016 (3) - You made a nice shape, but it is not related to anything, just randomly dropped, be creative! Maybe blanket the curve with 02:24:486 (2) - or something, whatever cool goes! done.
29. 02:28:163 (8,1) - I think it looks really ugly too.. did same as last one.
30. 02:32:722 (7,8,9,10,1) - What's up with the spacing? idk it's all distance snapped.
31. 02:49:560 (1,2,3) - Zzzz this again, I just noticed there are strong piano-ish like notes in the sliders, maybe use them as indicators? It will sound and play better. idk what to do but i cut the sliders shorter.
32. 02:54:192 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
33. 02:58:898 (1,2,3) - Get over this pattern man, it sucks :\ (Now I am going to stop noting them, they just keep on coming..) aaaa
34. 03:24:780 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It looks and plays great, but I think the distance is too much, it is not kiai, you made it so intense while the rest of the map so far was much less like that. made it less intense + added kiai, idk if necessary but whatever.
35. 03:51:104 (3,1) - Blanket better. this was an accidental blanket actually haha, made it better
36. 04:13:310 (3,4) - Stack properly. ok.
37. 04:16:251 (4,5) - Why stopping in place? There wasn't even a small change in the music. sorted.
38. 04:23:163 (7,8) - Stack properly. eee slider ends are hard.
39. 04:31:545 (4,5,6,7) - The odd DS makes the pattern look ugly / weird. i agree, fixed.
40. 04:32:427 (1,1) - Stack properly. done because of last point.
41. 04:34:633 (2,3) - You can blanket a bit better. i think done.
42. 04:44:045 (1,2,3) - A bettet pattern here will be appreciated, weirdish 'straight' line, looks weird and plays weird. doone.
43. 04:59:192 (2) - CTRL + G, some creation won't be bad, it plays nicely as well. okey.
44. 04:59:780 (1) - ^ Plays much much better like that hmm ye i agree.
45. 05:08:604 (2) - The placement is a bit random, try to fight a better place to fit this slider. done. i think
46. 05:19:192 (4,5) - CTRL + G each one of them SEPERATELY. dunne why separately cos it does the same thing but ok.
47. 05:23:457 (1,2,3) - Just make a regular curve / straight line. The oddness here is bad. ok done.
48. 05:26:692 (2) - Bad placement with the previous slider. (Doesn't flow well with the ending point) i think fixed.
49. 05:42:427 (4,5) - Make the flow a bit better here. done.
50. 06:01:251 (3,4) - Stack properly. done?
51. 06:08:604 - Add a note here for consistency.ok.
52. 06:15:369 (3,4) - Ugly and the flow isn't that good.fixed.

Overall, BE CREATIVE, make some cool patterns, the same short 1/2 sliders over and over that just head the same way. Make patterns CONNECT, make it look COOL, good luck! Thanks for the advice

sullyjhf wrote:

1. 00:17:133 (2,3) - It looks like there is supposed to be some connection between the sliders, but there is none, either make them resemble something together or just change it so they won't resemble each other at all.Don't really get what you mean here, the shape of the sliders is because of the vocals (in the first slider there is a wave in the vocals and in the second there isn't) and they shouldn't be new combo's because again, they are the following the same vocal line. This is how it looks now: http://puu.sh/dEWX9/44620cee2e.jpg, the curve shapr in the slider 2 resembles slider 3, but it flows bad together overall, either change the shape of 3 completely or create some flow, like this: http://puu.sh/dEX3C/af816c393b.jpg In this case, 3 blankets 1 as well.
2. 00:55:516 (1,8) - Stack properly. They are? but I knid of repositioned them anyway just in case. You can see if they are stacked properly by looking at the top right of the screen co-ordinates (x and y points) of the slider start / hit circle, if you press on it you can change it manually.
3. 02:17:427 (1,2) - I think you can make it look better somehow. might be confusing to play now but it looks cool. It is a bit conusing, you can try to rotate the slider a bit, like this: http://puu.sh/dEXd1/6fe539737e.jpg
4. 02:28:163 (8,1) - I think it looks really ugly too.. did same as last one. ^
5. 02:32:722 (7,8,9,10,1) - What's up with the spacing? idk it's all distance snapped. 0.92 to suddenly 0.97 on the last notes, I can see in my eyes that the stream is a bit weird.

Overall, BE CREATIVE, make some cool patterns, the same short 1/2 sliders over and over that just head the same way. Make patterns CONNECT, make it look COOL, good luck! Thanks for the advice