1. Close (2,53 stars, 97 notes)
2. Easy (0,98 stars, 35 notes)
3. Normal (1,59 stars, 52 notes)

• pessoalmente eu acho que dá pra fazer de boa um Hard nesse mapa sem forçar muito a música, se vc n conseguir me avisa q eu tento

• acredito que AR2 funcione melhor por causa da densidade das notas

1. 00:34:150 (3) - da pra deixar esse slider um pouquinho mais bonito tipo assim
2. 00:37:732 (1) - botando isso em 336;316 fica mais bonito acho (mas ai vc tem q arrumar o posicionamento das prox notas acho)

1. 00:23:404 (1,2) - acho q ficaria melhor se vc colocasse o redpoint exatamente no meio, q nem 00:16:240 (1) - aqui
2. 00:43:105 (1) - podia fazer o redpoint ficar exatamente em 00:44:001 pra combinar com os vocais

Blue Dragon wrote:

[General]

• pessoalmente eu acho que dá pra fazer de boa um Hard nesse mapa sem forçar muito a música, se vc n conseguir me avisa q eu tento oi?

[Easy]

• acredito que AR2 funcione melhor por causa da densidade das notas fixed

1. 00:34:150 (3) - da pra deixar esse slider um pouquinho mais bonito tipo assim fixed
2. 00:37:732 (1) - botando isso em 336;316 fica mais bonito acho (mas ai vc tem q arrumar o posicionamento das prox notas acho) fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:23:404 (1,2) - acho q ficaria melhor se vc colocasse o redpoint exatamente no meio, q nem 00:16:240 (1) - aqui fixed
2. 00:43:105 (1) - podia fazer o redpoint ficar exatamente em 00:44:001 pra combinar com os vocais fixed

Kalindraz wrote:

bem, olá

Normal

1. bem, acho que voce esqueceu uma nota aqui 00:39:299 - , seria bom colocar para enfatizar com essa 00:42:881 (4) - para deixar os ritmos similares e estabilizados. nesse caso aí eu to seguindo um padrão bem certo, adicionar uma nota ali ou aqui deixaria essa seção meio meh e fora do conceito
2. 00:48:478 (1,4,1,4,1) - não tem muito o que dizer sobre essas notas, digo você extendeu os slider para um tick vermelho, ignorando batidas ocasionadas no tick branco que se encontra nesses pontos: 00:48:926 - >> 00:50:717 - >> 00:52:508 - >> 00:54:299 - , bem nao é obrigatório mas o único que recomendaria fixar no caso seria esse aqui 00:50:269 (4) - encurta-lo até esse ponto 00:50:717 - para que possa segui com o vocal conforme você fez com os outros.

Easy

1. 00:51:613 - bem tem uma beat forte ai, recomendo adiciona-la para seguir com o mesmo padrão rítmico que você fez aqui 00:43:105 (4,5,1) -

small mod aproveite e boa sorte!

1. first of all i think you need a hard diff for this map (the bpm is possible to make a hard diff) even though the rhythm looks slow but i think you need it (try ask BN about this)
2. the song is sooo good i like it,maybe put lyric on it for make it better ~

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hey m4m

[General]

1. first of all i think you need a hard diff for this map (the bpm is possible to make a hard diff) even though the rhythm looks slow but i think you need it (try ask BN about this)
2. the song is sooo good i like it,maybe put lyric on it for make it better ~

[Easy]
00:19:822 (3) - move to 208,136 for better flow with the previous object the flow is nice
00:28:777 (4,1,2) - this pattern looks good but i think you can make the pattern like this http://prnt.sc/e1r6je ? for make the flow little bit better? I don't want it linear
00:37:284 (5) - move to 260,296 ^ the reason same as above ^
00:43:105 (4) - ctrl h here? for make the pattern looks good i guess... ?
00:55:642 (3) - i think straight slider looks great here than curve slideror this slider? http://prnt.sc/e1r89x

nice diff but i think you can make variation rhythm because its too boring if you just add 1/1 sliders,maybe you can add some 1/2 sliders / 1/2 reverse sliders or 1/1 reverse slider instead? but its ok your diff still solid tho ~

[Normal]
1,4x ds? quite high tho,im never use high ds on normal diff (for me 1,0x its enough)

00:17:583 - its quite odd if you leave it blank (try add circle on this blank part) *i think you should add circle for all blank part because if you leave it blank the rhythm just same as easy diff lol I think it's fine tbh
00:21:389 (4,5) - for this pattern i think you should stack it because it would make the player confused (cause im feel it xd) *this for all pattern that the pattern like this uh, I don't know if it's really necessary to stack because the emphasys is on all those sliders that aren't stacked after
00:44:896 - ok on this kiai time maybe you must try to change the rhythm because its too dense for normal diff imo.heres my rhythm for this part example 1 : http://prnt.sc/e1re4n example 2 : http://prnt.sc/e1remo example 3 : http://prnt.sc/e1reyr

the note same as easy xd

ok thats it from me
sorry for short mod and bad english
GL!

• Easy

1. I have the same suggestion as -NanoRIPE- 00:16:240 (1,2,3) - i think this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7189457 looks and flows better
   Passionate
2. 00:43:105 (3) - shape of this slider is bad imo http://puu.sh/tGGMm/ad731817db.jpg something like that works better..maybe
3. 00:34:150 (1,3) - These are kinda boring (too simple and repeat during all the song- its short so variety of shapes is needed) and there is sound on red ticks, for example 00:34:374 - 00:34:822 - .Try that, imo works really good http://puu.sh/tGH4F/dc75de5c08.jpg
4. 00:55:642 (1,2,3) - placed random imo. maybe this; http://puu.sh/tGGBI/44f18725f7.jpg /// http://puu.sh/tGGzK/99b6cfb6f9.jpg
   Normal
5. The same thing as above. There are only 2 diferent shapes of the sliders, to me boring. Try bending them better...dunno how, maybe like that http://puu.sh/tGHjt/02ea07cbc3.jpg

Blan_C wrote:

Hey, M4M from #modreqs
And sorry for my english

• Easy

1. I have the same suggestion as -NanoRIPE- 00:16:240 (1,2,3) - i think this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7189457 looks and flows better
   Passionate
2. 00:43:105 (3) - shape of this slider is bad imo http://puu.sh/tGGMm/ad731817db.jpg something like that works better..maybe it's fine, I did it following the vocal
3. 00:34:150 (1,3) - These are kinda boring (too simple and repeat during all the song- its short so variety of shapes is needed) and there is sound on red ticks, for example 00:34:374 - 00:34:822 - .Try that, imo works really good http://puu.sh/tGH4F/dc75de5c08.jpg
4. 00:55:642 (1,2,3) - placed random imo. maybe this; http://puu.sh/tGGBI/44f18725f7.jpg /// http://puu.sh/tGGzK/99b6cfb6f9.jpg imho it's not random and makes a really good flow
   Normal
5. The same thing as above. There are only 2 diferent shapes of the sliders, to me boring. Try bending them better...dunno how, maybe like that http://puu.sh/tGHjt/02ea07cbc3.jpg my idea was making it into just 2 types of shapes, I think it's good by itself

I hope i helped somehow :s GL

Firetruck wrote:

sorry not much to say, p clean mapset xd just one thing i'd like to bring up lol

(easy) 00:28:777 (4) - this kind of slidershape doesnt fit the song imo, it's a really calm and nice song (this goes for all diffs) I used this shape to represent the oscillation of the piano sound, I think it goes well since the red point on those sliders shows the different ways it takes

yah sorry for not modding cuz ur map is too gud, i'll shoot a star <3

• [Easy]

1. 00:23:404 (1) - Perhaps CTRL+J this slider so 00:22:508 (2) - flows better into its slider start
2. 00:30:568 (1,3) - this overlap doesn't look too good, maybe point 00:32:359 (3) - a bit more downwards to avoid this. If you apply the change you'll need to slightly adjust the pattern after that aswell tho
3. 00:52:060 (1) - drag it down a bit for a more natural flow from 00:51:613 (5) - , like this
   
   [Normal]
   
4. Nothing much to say.. Fine map
   
   [Passionate]
   
5. 00:39:523 (1) - why a triple? afaik theres nothing on the white tick 00:39:971 - , perhaps remove the triple and stack 00:40:195 (2) - on 00:41:314 (1,2) -
6. 00:56:538 (3) - this pattern looks kinda weird, maybe do this instead (rotate 00:56:538 (3) - by 90 degrees and ctrl+g ctrl+j)

Voli wrote:

• [Easy]

1. 00:23:404 (1) - Perhaps CTRL+J this slider so 00:22:508 (2) - flows better into its slider start
2. 00:30:568 (1,3) - this overlap doesn't look too good, maybe point 00:32:359 (3) - a bit more downwards to avoid this. If you apply the change you'll need to slightly adjust the pattern after that aswell tho
3. 00:52:060 (1) - drag it down a bit for a more natural flow from 00:51:613 (5) - , like this
   
   [Normal]
   
4. Nothing much to say.. Fine map
   
   [Passionate]
   
5. 00:39:523 (1) - why a triple? afaik theres nothing on the white tick 00:39:971 - , perhaps remove the triple and stack 00:40:195 (2) - on 00:41:314 (1,2) -
6. 00:56:538 (3) - this pattern looks kinda weird, maybe do this instead (rotate 00:56:538 (3) - by 90 degrees and ctrl+g ctrl+j)

Nice map, good luck ranking it!

Plaudible wrote:

Jaymes Young - Habits of My Heart

General

1. The spread is a bit iffy here I think. I'd buff the normal (at least above 1.5, so the star changes and stuff) or nerf Passionate, or just make a Hard that goes in between. The spread goes from 0.5 star difference to 1.0 star difference which really is too different, IMO. Stars don't really matter here, I guess
2. Does the diff name "Passionate" really fit here you think? The full song sounds very mellow and toned down, something more chill than Passionate would be more fitting, imo. Perhaps, "Heartache" or "Lovesick," idk, or maybe something pertaining to the lyrics?
3. As far as spread goes, if you don't add another diff, consider changing Normal to have cs 3, so it's an even 2>3>4. I will keep how it's rn, let's see how it goes
   
   

Easy

1. 00:29:672 (2,1) - This flow is quite a bit harsh, but you map other similar sounding sections with a nicer flow here, could you perhaps adjust this a bit?
2. 00:34:150 (5) - Could be slightly more symmetrical here.
3. Honestly, the mapping itself is fine, there's just one really big issue overall in difficulty IMO. http://puu.sh/tHkHS/87bbe23c3c.png This is the difficulty strain overall in your Easy difficulty. Overall, your normal and Passionate diffs are fine, but the issue here is that the kiai is less intense than other parts of the song. I get that you're mapping the circles before the kiai to the vocals, and that the kiai has lower density for vocals to be mapped to, but perhaps adjust your mapping then in that sense so that, difficulty wise, it plays better to the song overall. Maybe nerf the part before the kiai or try to find ways to buff the kiai.

Normal

1. So yea, again, if you could bump up the difficulty just a tad so the star is different, just me being nitpicky xd you could honestly do 1.1x spacing, and that should do the trick.
2. 00:22:508 (4,5,1) - (1) feels a bit distant, would be nicer if you could pull it closer so it blankets (4) better. If you choose to do this, be sure to re-snap DS for upcoming notes.
3. Ahh sorry, just realized. Notes like 00:18:478 (4) - are overmapped. The vocals start on the red tick before the 1/1 slider. Unless you put a sliderhead on the part where she breathes in, this feels a bit awkward. A circle would probably represent the rhythm better. Notes where the piano is playing though like at 00:22:956 (5) - are fine. Overall there's only like 5 to fix, but I suggest you switch to a circle instead so you aren't overmapping the rhythm. This applies in the kiai as well, btw.
4. 00:53:851 (4,5) - Questioning your rhythm choice. The vocals begin at (5), wouldn't it be better to put a slider there to fully represent that sound? If you do this, maybe make (4) a shorter slider or something. Same for areas like 00:47:583 (4,5).
5. Overall, evaluate your rhythm choices in this difficulty, you emphasize some vocals with sliders, and some you don't, and there's overall that issue of overmapping to sounds that aren't in the song.

Passionate

1. 00:36:165 (2) - The end of this slider isn't snapped, please re-snap it~
2. 00:16:240 (1,2,3,4) - My biggest issue with this is that you aren't mapping 1/1 or 1/2 overlaps differently. Perhaps manually stack them or something, but you should make it obvious for players that there's a difference here.
3. 00:25:195 (1) - ctrl+h perhaps? :< Harsh flow from (4) to (1) here is a bit rough, and by putting the harsh flow onto (2) with more rhythmic distance in between fits better, in my opinion.
4. 00:27:098 (2,3) - Improve this blanket a bit. http://puu.sh/tHlPf/3455562cf7.jpg
5. 00:29:672 (3,4) - You don't use 1/4 anywhere else. Can you just make this 1/2 as well? The vocals are 1/2 anyways so it would better represent that. There's no sound to justify making this 1/4 :<
6. 00:40:195 (2,3,4) - This is rather confusing to read. The spacing is too similar, especially with the difference in 1/4 and 1/2 rhythms. Try to make it more clear in spacing, so that this isn't so muddled. I've actually made it with the same spacing emphasis I did use for every single tick
7. Overall, this diff just needs some work on making it more readable for players to differentiate between 1/2 and 1/4 and more consistent spacing for the same reason.

Pretty cool song dude. Good job, and good luck! o/