1. Easy (1,47 stars, 100 notes)
2. Hard (2,88 stars, 251 notes)
3. Insane (4,13 stars, 383 notes)
4. Normal (2 stars, 157 notes)

Flask wrote:

no you

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey, by you bakaish request~

General

1. I believe you forgot to add Cloudchaser's suggestion regarding vocalist. Please do. I'm still thinking about it.

Easy

1. 00:10:797 (1,2,3) - This section feels a bit blank to me, I feel like you can fill this with sliders. ATM these circles break the feeling of the map that you tried to gave, and the melody is still the same. Map this section, please ~w~ Not totally agree. But let's see what can I do.
2. 00:18:066 (3,2) - Not sure if not intended, but stack these two just because o3o Nice catch. xD
3. 00:53:418 - I would like to see a 1/1 slider here, the break doesn't feel right in the kind of map you're trying to make~ I wanted to add a little pause. But I'll try.
4. 01:07:625 (1) - You might want to be aware that the space between this and the next object isn't 4/1, which should be a must in Easy diffs. You use another spinner afterwards, and it's good but not this one. See what you can do~ I tried.
5. 01:31:744 - Did you miss hitsounding this tick? Nope. There should be a whistle, but I don't have custom whistle. xD
   
   Not much to say, really clean imo.

Normal

1. 00:02:868 (1,3) - This is an overlap you can easy avoid by just moving 00:02:868 (1) and placing it like this. No overlap, symmetric sliders, a triangle. Perfect o3o Good idea.

Some overlaps here and there, but you chose to map it this way so no comments here. Also, the rhythm seems a bit faulty in general... I noticed. Was difficult to map Normal. ;_; Trying to fixing some stuff.

Hard

My only observation about this would be the amount of overlaps, but since you chose to map it this way not much to say about that. I've learned what stacks mean. C: (?)
Make this AR8 to help fix stuff a bit I guess~ AR:8 too much for me QwQ

Insane

1. 00:09:806 (2,3,4,5) - make it look like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2050759 plays very well imo My actual pattern shouldn't be a problem~
2. 00:38:881 (2,2) - nyaaa~ please properly stack this somehow ~w~ Square feels a bit off, check it orz I hate you xD
3. 00:44:497 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Feels like a huge difficulty spike here. You probably will want to remap this part. A simple stream should do the trick imo. Yeah, you already said to me in-game. I'll think about it for now~

asdf nice

pls don't kill me for this lol

1. 00:44:497 (2,3) - I know you wanted to do this for symmetry, but the spacing is way too far.

1. I suggest you to use CS 3,0 instead of 3,2 here.

1. 00:25:665 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea to start this pattern really near where the previous one ended, I'd move it a bit more to the left.

1. AR8 would fit better in this difficulty instead of 7,6 since the slider velocity and spacing is fast enough.

1. 00:12:779 (3) - This slider isn't perfectly symmetrical if you check properly, fix it if you can.
2. 00:20:379 (2) - CTRL+G on this slider would flow way better imo.
3. 00:54:079 (3) - This slider is almost impossible to see, due to the previous slider making it completely hidden, I'd suggest you to use two circles here instead.

1. 00:56:557 (2,3,1) - This spacing change here is kinda unexpected imo, I'd space it normally here like the rest.
2. 01:23:815 - It feels like you're really missing a note here, I'd add a circle and stack it on 01:23:154 (4).
3. 01:29:101 - Same as above.
4. 01:29:762 - And same once again, you missed some nice claps.

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

1. 00:44:497 (2,3) - I know you wanted to do this for symmetry, but the spacing is way too far. true, fixed

~Normal~

1. I suggest you to use CS 3,0 instead of 3,2 here. okay QwQ

1. 00:25:665 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea to start this pattern really near where the previous one ended, I'd move it a bit more to the left. hope it's better now

~Hard~

1. AR8 would fit better in this difficulty instead of 7,6 since the slider velocity and spacing is fast enough. but AR:8 is too much imo hard would be a bit complicated... let's see if a BAT can tell me something about this

1. 00:12:779 (3) - This slider isn't perfectly symmetrical if you check properly, fix it if you can. did something different
2. 00:20:379 (2) - CTRL+G on this slider would flow way better imo. yeah, I agree
3. 00:54:079 (3) - This slider is almost impossible to see, due to the previous slider making it completely hidden, I'd suggest you to use two circles here instead. uh... let's see what I can do

~Insane~

1. 00:56:557 (2,3,1) - This spacing change here is kinda unexpected imo, I'd space it normally here like the rest. okay
2. 01:23:815 - It feels like you're really missing a note here, I'd add a circle and stack it on 01:23:154 (4). good idea, fits well
3. 01:29:101 - Same as above. ^
4. 01:29:762 - And same once again, you missed some nice claps. nah here I'm following that vocal

Your mapping is surely improving a lot, keep up the good work.

Dariano wrote:

Hi

[General]

I would change the order of the combo colours since the 2 red combos are going on after the other and there isn't like a big difference between them, which makes it look like there the 2 combos are the same. (At least that's my point of view, I don't like two similar colours coming one after the other.)
If you decide to try it, you just have to change the order in the .osu files. wooorking on it ~

[Insane]


00:13:110 (6) - A NC would be fun here ^^ nah it's not necessary
00:35:412 (4) - I highly suggest to put the NC here and not in 00:35:907 (1) - since this is where the vocals starts and the rhythm changes. (I bet you put the NC there just because you added a finish sound, it's okay, but for the sake of playabilty i suggest to add the new combo where I said before.) I just follow stanzas
00:40:698 (2) - Technically the same as above, I would start the new combo here. same
00:40:698 (2,3,4,1,2) - The spacing here is odd. Try this maybe? http://puu.sh/cfOt0/8c123612a6.jpg ah yeah, fixed
00:45:984 (2) - Why doesn't the new combo start there o.o listen, vocals start at 00:46:149 (1) - :3
01:03:991 (2) - Move this one grid to the right for a better spacing hope it's better now
01:34:883 (4) - Maybe you can make this overlap with 01:33:727 (4) - b-but the blanket
01:41:986 (1,2,3,4) - This is an insane, streams are expected in this kind of difficult there's no need o3o but I'll think about it
01:53:881 - A circle would be nice here since this is the last beat of the song, or maybe you want to make the slider longer. wasn't intentional xD fixed


[Hard]

00:53:583 (2,3) - Unrankeable o__o you cannot see the reverse slider's arrow. 01:21:832 (4) - I didn't know this is unrankeable ;_; I'll try to fix it
01:21:832 (4) - I would definitely change this reverse slider for only 2, one at the beginning of the slider and the other one at the end, because that feels overmapped, there's nothing to map in that tick of the song. I'm sure it's not overmapped xD
01:53:385 (3) - add one more reverse arrow like I stated in the insane. fixed

[Normal]

00:43:671 (1) - It should start in the next white tick, just make the slider shorter. nah I'm following vocals
01:19:519 (1) - I'd prefer if a circle were here, and not that slider. It would add a little break which is nice in normal and easy.
01:22:493 - You should definitely add a circle here, it's a very strong beat in the song. maybe in easy but here I prefer to keep this as it is
01:24:475 - Aqui, note que no seguiste usando la voz de la vocalista y usaste los tick blancos, para que no haya confusión del cambio de "ticks", deberias poner un circulo aquí. de hecho sí seguí la voz o3o


[Easy]

01:11:590 (3) - Muevelo un cuadrito a la izquiera para mejor blanket. >3> oki
01:50:246 (2) - ^ ^
01:15:885 (2) - Muevelo a x220 y168 para un mejor blanket. ^


Lindo mapa, me levanta los animos ~Star~

Suerte con el rank!

Tician wrote:

My mod =)

General

timing - OK
General Setup - OK (like the combo colours to the background - even if I can't see them due to some skin-bugs of mine =)
AiMod - OK (watch out there are some distance problems in the easy diff)

Easy

00:13:440 (1,2) - ups better blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2142965 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2142972 (still not perfect damn that's difficult >.< ) fixed
00:16:414 (2,3) - same same
00:18:066 (3,1) - try to avoid overlaps in an easy diff ok but I think there's nothing bad with this one o3o
00:25:665 (1) - I know this is made to the vocal, but you should stay with the background beginning 00:25:334 - if you would stay map to the vocal the second slider 00:26:491 (2) - should start 00:26:491 (but I do not recommend it in the easy diff to use 1/2 BSD) so my mention looks like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2143052 okay o3o
00:38:220 (4,1) - better blanket, drag the middle of the slider to 232/60 n(and of course make the slider shorter when it's getting longer^^) I guess it's fixed
00:42:185 (2) - sound off, would start it 00:42:515 and delete the circle instead it's ok imo
00:43:837 You know about active and passive sounds? This should be an active sound (active = clickable; passive = sound but not clickable - like the end of a slider^^) yeah I know but I'll think about it
00:51:436 (5,1) - blanket xD fixed
00:57:053 (4) - move to 00:57:053 sounds better nah but did something different
00:58:705 (1) - This is OK if you place a circle 00:58:374 to not ignore the big fat sound there^^ that's what I did
01:22:163 Same here use a circle nah here it's ok imo

OK let's say it in general: You should check all blankets if they are nearly perfect^^

Normal

00:24:013 (1) - delete the new combo stanza
00:25:334 - Use a circle here I wanted to start with the vocal
00:30:621 (1) - move to 00:30:621 I'm not sure about this
00:38:550 (1) - move to 00:38:550 doesn't fit well imo
01:22:163 Use a 1 tick slider that would be unrankeable because the spinner ;w;
01:24:806 (1) - I don't know why and i do not recommend this but this fits the most with the music o.o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2143248 did something different

hard

00:53:583 (2,3) - This is up to you to change, in my opinion it's damn hard to read that when playing it first I didnt saw the repeating arrow changed

Wow uhm that's all (except the blankets )

Insane

Ouh ouh a general problem:
00:07:493 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - tripples should always end on a white line not start there (there are exceptions, but this is none^^) My mention looks like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2143306 (this is for the whole song, always let tripples end on a beat not start with one) actually fits well with music lol
00:51:271 (3,4,5) - here you did it right because the music lol
01:07:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong sampleset (when playing it's like "??? where's the sound gone?"^^ nah this shouldn't be a problem

That's all I am not good in playing isnane and the more stars a song got the worse is my mod, sry >.<

Artavia wrote:

PM Request~ (Yeah, Yeah~)

[Normal]

00:06:171 (2) - Ctrl+H nah lol looks ugly

00:19:387 (2) - I think you should use the curve slider. if you're change, It will be looks like better shape. or blanket with 00:18:727 (1) - good idea but I'm not sure

00:21:370 (1) - hmm... I can't understand the purpose of you. I think feel so boring and bad timing.. o.o it follows well the music

00:31:777 (2,3) - no.. If I were you, I'll not to use it. It is not bad timing. but This will give the players to confusion. it wouldn't give confusion but I did something different

00:35:246 (5,6,1) - but it is okay o3o

00:38:220 (5) - NC and 00:38:385 (1) - Remove NC nah, (1) is in stanza

01:10:434 (3) - NC I add NC each two stanzas

[Hard]

I can't find big problems. pass it okay o3o

[Insane]

00:05:511 (1,2,1,2) - bad flow.. I think it is very boring patterns. nah but I did something in (3)

00:12:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm? ^ but it is not bad flow. well xD it's ok imo

00:21:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sadly, this is not a good flow. and a little boring I like it o3o

00:23:352 (3,4) - no. don't use copy~ I think it is a bad idea. well that's because my style I guess

00:45:158 (1) - I suggest remove it and add circle stream /w/ nah that's not my intention in this insane

00:46:975 (2) - Ctrl+G, If you're change, plz change togeter 00:47:471 (3,4) - nah, at least here

00:53:583 (2) - Ctrl+G,J okay added only Ctrl+G

01:21:502 (3,4,5) - hmm.. I think remove 01:21:584 (4) - 'cuz it is bad timing it fits with music

01:28:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try *this. only timing. not patterns. I'm not sure if your suggestion is ok but I'm not sure anyway, so I won't change anything here, actual pattern is ok

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ PM request
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- Insane :

1. 01:10:764 (3,1) - Blanket could be better if you move white anchor point to 241:63. fixed in another way
2. 01:34:883 (4,5,1,2,3) - Maybe move all of them to stack 01:33:727 (4,4) - ? stacked

- Hard :

1. 00:42:185 (3,1) - Bad blanket. fixed
2. 00:58:374 (1,2) - ^ I see it's ok, imo
3. 01:25:301 (3,1) - ^ improved a bit
4. 01:48:099 (2,1,2,3,1) - To improve aesthetic here, I would change for this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   01:49:751 (3,1) - bad blanket if you don't change the rest.
   fixed everything

- Normal :

1. 00:26:656 (3) - Move it to 192:264 to blanket them. fixed
2. 00:30:786 (1,2) - I don't think it's a good idea to change rhythm for no real reason. Would make more sens to follow white tics here, to keep it easy and don't destroy polarity. I think I already fixed it because Artavia's mod o3o
3. 01:09:112 (1) - Why start on a red tic here ? Even if you follow voice, miss the beat on white tic is strange, and you didn't do it for 01:14:233 (1) - . Bith sould be same and start on white tic. hope it's better now
4. 01:43:308 (1) - Move it to 300:108 to blanket. fixed

- Easy :

1. 00:38:220 (4,1) - Blanket can be perfect if you place first anchor point to 228:56, and red anchoir point to 229:137. done o3o
2. 00:43:506 (1) - Maybe curve it to make flow more evident with 00:44:497 (2) - ? straight slider was ok, but changed ;w;
3. 00:51:766 (1) - Move it to 216:18 to perfect blanket. ok
4. 01:11:590 (3) - Move it to 312:176 for same reason. done
5. 01:29:101 (2,2) - Maybe stack them ? nah I don't see any problem here
6. 01:50:246 (2) - Move to 312:208 (you know why). sure

That's all. Really cool Insane
Good luck. Mukyu~

Kibbleru wrote:

andrea is former bat tho lol

1. Why do these maps always have a non-relating BG?
2. This is the original song. Clearly this song is remixed, but I can't find the artist who did it. Either someone remixed it and someone else added the Nightcore elements, or this is part of a full Nightcore mix. Please look into it.
3. The two red combo colors are almost identical. It can get very perplexing, especially for newer players playing the easier diffs. Please differentiate them more.
   
   
4. The build-up to the end of the song was disappointing. It suddenly ended. Clearly the song has more to offer, but you decided to stop there. I highly recommend mapping the entire song. If not, at least edit the MP3 to have a smoother ending, instead of it being sudden.

1. It's strange that this diff has the most spinners out of all of them. Why is that?
   
   
   1. 01:05:973 (1) - Map over the spinner.
   2. 01:22:163 - Add a circle here?

1. (Optional) Reduce AR to 4
   
   
   1. 00:32:934 (4) - Circle not adjacent to (1) slider?
   2. 01:06:304 (1) - Map over the spinner.
   3. 01:22:823 - This entire part is very awkward, with beats on the red ticks. Unlike in 00:25:334 - it was very straightforward. Consider streamlining it like the 00:25:334 - part.

1. (Optional) Slightly reduce the AR to 7.5
   
   
   1. 01:24:475 - Add a circle here.

1. This diff plays like a fast hard diff, but that's just me.
2. Increase DR and OD to 8

Darcsol wrote:

M4M Request

[General]

1. Why do these maps always have a non-relating BG? then help me to find a better one D:
2. This is the original song. Clearly this song is remixed, but I can't find the artist who did it. Either someone remixed it and someone else added the Nightcore elements, or this is part of a full Nightcore mix. Please look into it. whatever, I think title is ok, since original song is from The Cranberries o3o
3. The two red combo colors are almost identical. It can get very perplexing, especially for newer players playing the easier diffs. Please differentiate them more. hmm I had a look at it and actually I think they are ok o3o
   
   
4. The build-up to the end of the song was disappointing. It suddenly ended. Clearly the song has more to offer, but you decided to stop there. I highly recommend mapping the entire song. If not, at least edit the MP3 to have a smoother ending, instead of it being sudden. following part was unnecessary for me, that's why I cut o3o sounds ok imo

[Easy]

1. It's strange that this diff has the most spinners out of all of them. Why is that? not all of them, at least.
   
   
   1. 01:05:973 (1) - Map over the spinner. did something different
   2. 01:22:163 - Add a circle here? sure

[Normal]

1. (Optional) Reduce AR to 4 AR:5 fits good since bpm is kinda high
   
   
   1. 00:32:934 (4) - Circle not adjacent to (1) slider? I tried but DS will be broken I guess
   2. 01:06:304 (1) - Map over the spinner.
   3. 01:22:823 - This entire part is very awkward, with beats on the red ticks. Unlike in 00:25:334 - it was very straightforward. Consider streamlining it like the 00:25:334 - part. fixed a bit

[Hard]

1. (Optional) Slightly reduce the AR to 7.5 same
   
   
   1. 01:24:475 - Add a circle here. following vocals :c

[Insane]

1. This diff plays like a fast hard diff, but that's just me. nah it's ok xD
2. Increase DR and OD to 8 nah but I changed HP

Even though I don't like Nightcore mixes, the map is fine. I'm not fond of symmetric mapping, but it does avoid majority of errors. I'm mainly concerned who remixed this song. Again, please look into it.

Happy mapping

streeteelf wrote:

SEE's Modding Queue

Request by PM in-game.

[General]

-00:58:374 - 01:07:625 - Unnecessary Kiai for me here. nah actual kiais are ok imo
-Enable epilepsy warning due to skin you used. hm? that's for SBs

[Easy]

-01:14:233 (1,2) - Correct blankets hope it's better now
-01:27:449 (1,1) - Why not symmetrical? fixed
-01:29:101 (2,2) - Stack them if you make ^ nah I don't consider it necessary because the next slider
-01:40:004 - Circle (?) nah, it's a little ~pause~ until next slider
-01:44:299 (2,1,2) - I suggest to map this in different way (not placement, but rhythm) eg. done

[Normal]

-01:34:883 (5,1,2) - Try this here: okay
-I'd change also: 01:37:526 (4,1) like I did ^ I'm not sure here :c

[Hard]

-00:48:793 (3,1) - Correct blanket improved a bit
-00:49:619 (3,4) - ^ same
-00:54:244 (4,1) - Can be confusing because in whole map the cursor if moving, but here it suddenly stops, it breaks flow a little. changed
-01:11:590 (1,2) - Correct blanket fixed a bit
-01:34:387 (2,2) - Maybe stack them in x:252 y:204 and later move 01:35:874 (3) to x:183 y:240. it's good enough I think D:
-01:34:387 (2) - If you do ^ then correct blanket

It's all from me at the moment, because I don't have time now to mod Insane. If you want me to do it PM me in-game again @ 8 p.m. GMT.

Generally map is nice, I like it. Good luck~

A Mystery wrote:

Hi! From PM

General

Pretty nice, it reminds me of the good old nightcore maps I bet Andrea loves this
Though I don't really like copy-paste (not a terrible problem here) but mirroring could be a bit reduced.

Insane

Nothing too big, some patterns

00:17:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't see why you wouldn't just make a normal star, I think it plays a lot better jumps are funny to play
00:19:387 (3,1) - I'm not a fan of overlaps like these, but see for yourself shouldn't be a big problem
00:35:907 (1) - you ignored pretty much every snare and bass drum in the background from here, consider mapping them together with the voice
00:44:663 (7,8,9,1) - maybe a straight line here? (looks a bit random now) http://puu.sh/cikZA/ccbbfcc034.jpg nah it's ok imo
00:46:149 (1) - unnecessary NC imo true maybe
00:56:474 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/cil9r/ce8b16cc7c.jpg the actual rhythm is like this. before this one there was a snare/bass in the BG you mapped the first circle to, but now there is nothing. If you are going to change this and you follow the distance snap then I think it is pretty readable.
- If you are not going to change the rhythm, consider changing the shape,, like a regular triangle.
00:56:887 (1) - unnecessary NC true
01:00:356 - Not sure what people are going to think of the empty space here, I don't see it as a problem though nah it's ok I'm following strong beats
01:08:286 (3,4,5,6,1) - also here, I prefer to see a regular star shape, but see for yourself >insane>jumps, simple as that
01:12:416 - Why is it empty here? (you can extend the slider to the next red line) I'm not sure but I'll think about it
01:19:519 (1) - this empty space feels very awkward to me, you should map something
01:23:980 (3,4,5,6,7) - again, a regular shape looks and plays way better imo, this patterns feels weird >_>
01:24:641 (7,1,2) - maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/cilBZ/b578ac39e8.jpg You suddenly stopped following the voice ;_; hm, shouldn't be a problem
01:27:779 (3) - consider moving it a bit upwards (feels better when playing) okay I guess it's fine now
01:29:266 (3,4,5) - Prefer something like sliders, circles feel to empty. Also the jump between 01:29:927 (5,1) - is a bit confusing (because of the previous rhythms) If you're going to keep it, move 01:29:927 (5) - one pixel down and left for a perfect stack fixed a bit
01:41:986 (1,2,3,4) - the actual rhythm is this, then why not do so? :p http://puu.sh/cim5X/22351a4aeb.jpg
01:44:630 (1,2) - maybe something like this http://puu.sh/cimbh/9265767457.jpg to be more accurate with the voice

Blanket fixes/blanket suggestions feel free to ignore the suggestions, but ignoring wrong blankets is lazy :< I'll have a look later in all diffs :3

00:08:154 (1) - make it a bit more accurate, it's a short slider so it doesn't stand out that much
00:13:771 (2,3) - first anchor to x=348 y=143 and slider end to x=344 y=102, then copy-paste and ctrl+h
00:18:727 (1,2) -
00:46:480 (1) - first anchor x=108 y=281 slider end x=225 y=304 then copy paste to 00:46:975 (2) - and ctrl+h ctrl+g
01:16:216 (4) - same as first suggestion
01:33:231 (3) - first anchor x=462 y=114 slider end to x=350 y=123
01:34:883 (4,1,3) - maybe a blanket?
01:49:916 (1) - first anchor x=59 y=281 slider end to x=70 y=226

Hard

There are some elements here that I miss in the insane, it feels like it was mapped by someone else lol.
For a hard the stacks are very confusing. Consider removing most of them since they are hard to read. (things like these 00:14:101 (4,1) - , 00:16:414 (2,3,4,1) - ,...), they are not bad, but too hard for a hard.
I like the anti jumps.

00:21:370 (1) - I suggest placing 1/1 circles instead of 2/1 hm, actual stuff is good imo
00:54:244 (4,1) - you really shouldn't stack this, doesn't fit here and I don't think it's good for a hard shouldn't be a problem, some hards are like this
01:24:641 (1,2) - consider moving them a bit upwards to increase the distance between 01:24:641 (1,3) - done
01:18:859 (2) - same with the awkward silence

Blanketsnshizz

00:42:350 (1) - move anchor to x=232 y=151 slider end to x=216 y=219
00:48:958 (1) - make it a bit better
00:53:088 (1,2) - ^
00:58:870 (2) - sorry I am getting too lay to tell you the coordinates
01:09:442 (3) -
01:11:590 (1) - pls
01:25:301 (3,1) - .
01:36:370 (4) - make one of it
01:39:013 (4) -

I think this is the best diff of the mapset \:D/

Normal

Some rhythms feel random, I pointed some out

00:13:440 (1,3) - avoid overlap I'll think something different, uh
00:23:022 (2) - this slider is pretty random, doesn't follow anything in the music. maybe it's weird but it follows
00:38:220 (5,1) - consider this http://puu.sh/cioJ5/4b42786293.jpg not sure D:
00:43:671 (1) - also random nah it's like following "stream"
00:51:271 - consider adding a circle here (and change the distances ofc) nope, I don't wanna make it more difficult
00:59:696 (3) - idk why I always like these sliders in nightcore maps and with the skin xD xD nice
01:01:843 (3) - consider a reverse slider http://puu.sh/cip1y/7918473b1d.jpg nah it will ignore important music :c
01:04:321 (2,3,4,5) - the alternation between the sliders and the circles are weird here (music-wise), consider something like this http://puu.sh/cipa1/d0b1f6eaae.jpg shouldn't be a problem imo, (3) slider fits well too xD
01:23:815 (4,1) - maybe keep it simple with 1/2, this feels weird changed
01:01:843 (3,4,5,1) - consider doing it more like this http://puu.sh/cipmx/bcf381e918.jpg would make more sense imo actual pattern should be fine
01:34:883 (5) - kinda weird that there is no circle on the beat, you could add one (should be okay at 180 bpm) aaand actual slider should be ok as well

Blankets

See for yourself

Easy

Same as normal. I know you can't use complex rhythms but if you place 2 beat return sliders or 3 beat sliders wrong they will sound weird
00:16:414 (2,1) - for an easy you should avoid every overlap some overlaps are ok unless they are difficult to read o3o
00:58:705 (2,3,1) - sounds pretty random follows well the music xD
01:09:938 (2,3) - ^ you should at least start a new slider every 4 beats (so the larger white line) should be ok D: it's not too bad
01:15:885 (2) - ^ same
01:31:414 (3) - blanket fixed
01:34:718 (1) - also weird it's fine imo o3o
01:40:334 (1) - spinner is not necessary here, just map it I'm not sure but should be fine enough ~
01:50:246 (2) - also weird, just use 1/1 or 2/1 sliders did something different

Not bad, needs some work I guess, but good luck!

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

• I think this diff can be a bit easier to have an Easy icon. It's not the only reason, some moments are a bit hard for beginners.

1. 00:06:502 (2) - You can delete this circle, beginners should have some rest. Don't forget to fix the spacing then.
2. 00:26:326 (2) - ^
3. 00:13:440 (1,2) - Blanket could be better.
4. 01:09:938 (2,1) - ^
5. 01:14:233 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:31:083 (2,3) - ^
7. It'd be better if you move 00:40:863 (2) - this circle at 00:40:531 -
8. 00:48:793 (1) - It is not recommended to ignore the downbeats, do I suggest to make it this way (also it's a bit easier way). I know it'll destroy your symmetry, but c'mon! Symmetry isn't the best variant in some cases.
9. 01:39:674 (2) - Move this circle to 01:40:004 -
10. 01:46:942 (2) - Delete this circle.

1. 00:13:440 (1,3) - This overlap isn't so good. Fix this somehow ;w;
2. 00:24:013 (1,1) - This moment is unrankable because of the spacing issue. You have to use distance snap in Easy and Normal diffs. Fix this, it's necessary.
3. 01:36:370 (4,5) - Same here.

1. 00:43:837 (1,1) - You have to give some more time for recovering after the spinner, or/and to move that slider closer to the center.

1. 00:02:868 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mm... quizás por legibilidad podrías hacer Ctrl+H en estas notas?? así evitarías el devolver el puntero en 00:12:119 (3,1) - , me parece que puede ser un distractor para los noobs.
2. 00:05:511 (1,2) - si, aunque es simetrico, ¿por qué el spacing entre ellos no quedó del todo bien? (está a 1.14, cuando lo otros están a 1.10). mueve un poco el final del slider, y arma la simetría de nuevo :3
3. 00:20:379 (2) - Si no haces esto perfectamente simetrico gero te colgará (?) xD (hazlo como en 00:46:480 (1) - )
4. 00:25:334 (1,2) - algo parecido a lo del principio.
5. 00:31:282 (2) - spacing, deberías dejarlo a 1.10x.
6. 00:35:577 (2) - Yo preferiría el NC aquí, para poder tener la excusa del spacing irregular xD
7. 00:41:193 (1) - este blanket se puede mejorar.
8. 00:48:793 (1,3) - tienen una forma bastante "apeñuscada", quizas algo así haga mejor su lectura: http://puu.sh/cn04b/a362b43ea9.jpg
9. 00:50:114 (2) - es como un poco evil este espacio ahí? xD, quizas sea mejor un slider desde 00:49:784 (2) - para mantener mejor el ritmo, ya sabes, está intenso ahí.
10. 00:57:053 - nota fuerte sin sonido??
11. 01:09:938 (2) - lel, la forma del blanket no esta tan buena... mejor haz copy/paste de 01:11:590 (1) - , y luego acomodalo en el lugar.
12. 01:31:414 (3) - se puede mejorar el blanket
13. 01:32:735 (1,1) - demasiado apeñuscados... separalo un poco para que el camino del slider sea más notorio: http://puu.sh/cn0lh/26c7584d10.jpg

1. 00:08:815 (2) - lo ideal sería que pusieras algo para golpear en el tick grande.
2. 00:19:387 (2) - ^
3. 00:35:907 (1) - a partir de aquí es demasiado confuso xD. Ya leí que dijiste que el normal fue dificil de hacer, pero, creo que el problema es que intentaste seguir la voz aquí, cuando para hacerlo la dencidad de notas creo que debe ser mayor... Yo te sugeriría mejor seguir la batería, debido a que se siente más consistente que la voz.
   
4. 00:38:550 (1) -
   
5. 00:51:436 (5) - EVIL. Ni siquiera lo tienes espaciado perfectamente xD
6. 00:51:766 (1) - el blanket se puede mejorar (estoy lazy con los blankets..... deale una revisada a todos por si las moscas xD)
7. 01:01:348 (2) - mm.. para seguir más correctamente esta intención haría falta una nota más, y mover este slider y eliminar otro:
   
8. 01:29:266 (5) - si seguías la voz, por qué lo cambiaste aquí?? no queda muy consistente imo
9. Bueno, no sé, toda esa parte que hiciste poniendo todo en los red ticks se siente medio rara... quizas tengas que conciderar más adelante cambiarlo, pero en fin, no se.

1. 00:39:872 (1) - ._. desaprovechaste la batería ahí...
2. 01:07:708 (1,2) - D: aquí suenan unos buenos triples...
3. 01:12:416 - claramente falta una nota.
4. 01:13:242 (2,3) - posibles triples D:
5. 01:31:579 (2) - aquí por la intencidad, se siente la falta de un jump.
6. 01:32:735 (1) - ^

AlexaBM wrote:

sorry for the delay >.>
hi andrea

[Easy]

• I think this diff can be a bit easier to have an Easy icon. It's not the only reason, some moments are a bit hard for beginners.

1. 00:06:502 (2) - You can delete this circle, beginners should have some rest. Don't forget to fix the spacing then. okay
2. 00:26:326 (2) - ^ ^
3. 00:13:440 (1,2) - Blanket could be better. improved
4. 01:09:938 (2,1) - ^ ^
5. 01:14:233 (1,2) - ^ fixed a bit
6. 01:31:083 (2,3) - ^ this is fine imo
7. It'd be better if you move 00:40:863 (2) - this circle at 00:40:531 - sure
8. 00:48:793 (1) - It is not recommended to ignore the downbeats, do I suggest to make it this way (also it's a bit easier way). I know it'll destroy your symmetry, but c'mon! Symmetry isn't the best variant in some cases. I did something different
9. 01:39:674 (2) - Move this circle to 01:40:004 - it doesn't sound good for me ;w;
10. 01:46:942 (2) - Delete this circle. done

[Normal]

1. 00:13:440 (1,3) - This overlap isn't so good. Fix this somehow ;w; finally fixed
2. 00:24:013 (1,1) - This moment is unrankable because of the spacing issue. You have to use distance snap in Easy and Normal diffs. Fix this, it's necessary. tried to fix it although I think I could do it better ;w; I'll ask for help
3. 01:36:370 (4,5) - Same here. oops, fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:43:837 (1,1) - You have to give some more time for recovering after the spinner, or/and to move that slider closer to the center. fixed

too noob to mod insanes >.>
Good luck o3o

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi o3o/

No kudo (for now)

No alcancé a modearlo el fin de semana, ._. sin embargo, alcancé a mirar el insane y el hard por encima. Por ahora dos cosas:
1) Pusiste en los colores de combo, dos tonos de rojo seguidos... la idea de los combos es que se puedan diferenciar entre cambio y cambio, así que, pienso sería mejor que cambies el orden de forma que no queden los dos rojos seguidos okay xD
2) La canción no tiene un BPM excesivamente alto, ni tu Insane es demasiado dificil, ni tiene una cantidad absurda de jumps ni "deathStreams" como para ameritar un OD tan bajo. En serio, subelo a 8, probablemente no te guste porque obviamente el OD7 es más cómodo para sacar SS, pero no, de verdad creo que es un mal criterio el no ponerlo en 8 o 9. Como sé que no accederás a ponerle 9, ponlo en 8. done, y te doy kudosu porque ya por esto quiero dártelo xD

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

H!

from game chat

Easy

Tick Rate is 2→1 chenge

00:42:185 Note
00:42:515 ~ 00:43:176 slider

okay I'll try to do something different

00:56:392 finish? it doesn't fit here imo

01:19:519 i think Break Time hm... maybe

Normal

Tick Rate is 2→1 chenge

00:40:533(4)　remove finish fits well with music imo :3

00:51:436 I Confused shouldn't be a problem, DS is correct

Hard

00:26:491 NC remove it's ok because consistency if I'm not mistaken
01:22:493 ^ same

01:36:370 Exactly Blanket fixed
01:39:013 ^ ^

Insane

00:45:158 00:43:837 (1,2,3,4,5)　Same　DS plz . Cleanly hm? this part is ok, I don't see any problem

01:52:394 volume down it's not necessary
01:52:724 ^ same
01:53:055 ^ same

Good song

Good luck!!

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

[easy]
Se nota que Gero no te ha modeado aun xD

1. 00:02:868 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mm... quizás por legibilidad podrías hacer Ctrl+H en estas notas?? así evitarías el devolver el puntero en 00:12:119 (3,1) - , me parece que puede ser un distractor para los noobs. bueno
2. 00:05:511 (1,2) - si, aunque es simetrico, ¿por qué el spacing entre ellos no quedó del todo bien? (está a 1.14, cuando lo otros están a 1.10). mueve un poco el final del slider, y arma la simetría de nuevo :3 espero que esté bien ahora :/
3. 00:20:379 (2) - Si no haces esto perfectamente simetrico gero te colgará (?) xD (hazlo como en 00:46:480 (1) - ) done
4. 00:25:334 (1,2) - algo parecido a lo del principio. lo mismo, se me da mal arreglar estas cosas, pero lo intenté
5. 00:31:282 (2) - spacing, deberías dejarlo a 1.10x. ^
6. 00:35:577 (2) - Yo preferiría el NC aquí, para poder tener la excusa del spacing irregular xD he hecho otra cosa
7. 00:41:193 (1) - este blanket se puede mejorar. yo creo que está mínimamente decente
8. 00:48:793 (1,3) - tienen una forma bastante "apeñuscada", quizas algo así haga mejor su lectura: http://puu.sh/cn04b/a362b43ea9.jpg no debería ser un problema, pero meh
9. 00:50:114 (2) - es como un poco evil este espacio ahí? xD, quizas sea mejor un slider desde 00:49:784 (2) - para mantener mejor el ritmo, ya sabes, está intenso ahí. no sé, lo he probado y suena peor imo
10. 00:57:053 - nota fuerte sin sonido?? no lo veo como nota fuerte aun siendo stanza, idk
11. 01:09:938 (2) - lel, la forma del blanket no esta tan buena... mejor haz copy/paste de 01:11:590 (1) - , y luego acomodalo en el lugar. fixed
12. 01:31:414 (3) - se puede mejorar el blanket creo que ya intenté mejorarlo varias veces, está bien >_>
13. 01:32:735 (1,1) - demasiado apeñuscados... separalo un poco para que el camino del slider sea más notorio: http://puu.sh/cn0lh/26c7584d10.jpg fixed

[normal]

1. 00:08:815 (2) - lo ideal sería que pusieras algo para golpear en el tick grande. bueno, no lo considero necesario
2. 00:19:387 (2) - ^ lo mismo
3. 00:35:907 (1) - a partir de aquí es demasiado confuso xD. Ya leí que dijiste que el normal fue dificil de hacer, pero, creo que el problema es que intentaste seguir la voz aquí, cuando para hacerlo la dencidad de notas creo que debe ser mayor... Yo te sugeriría mejor seguir la batería, debido a que se siente más consistente que la voz.
   
4. 00:38:550 (1) -
   
5. 00:51:436 (5) - EVIL. Ni siquiera lo tienes espaciado perfectamente xD lo he comprobado y está bien espaciado como mínimo :/
6. 00:51:766 (1) - el blanket se puede mejorar (estoy lazy con los blankets..... deale una revisada a todos por si las moscas xD)
7. 01:01:348 (2) - mm.. para seguir más correctamente esta intención haría falta una nota más, y mover este slider y eliminar otro:
   
8. 01:29:266 (5) - si seguías la voz, por qué lo cambiaste aquí?? no queda muy consistente imo
9. Bueno, no sé, toda esa parte que hiciste poniendo todo en los red ticks se siente medio rara... quizas tengas que conciderar más adelante cambiarlo, pero en fin, no se.

[hard]
01:26:127 (1) - blanket fixed
bueno, creo que todo lo sentí bien... aunque me da pereza mirar cosas nazi xD

[insane]

1. 00:39:872 (1) - ._. desaprovechaste la batería ahí... igual estoy sorda pero no sé a qué te refieres (aunque sigo la voz)
2. 01:07:708 (1,2) - D: aquí suenan unos buenos triples... I don't think so
3. 01:12:416 - claramente falta una nota. no estoy segura ya que seguía las notas fuertes
4. 01:13:242 (2,3) - posibles triples D: hm... puede ser, pero no estoy segura
5. 01:31:579 (2) - aquí por la intencidad, se siente la falta de un jump. he probado otra cosa a ver
6. 01:32:735 (1) - ^ lo mismo

Ahora si me gané el kudosu

1. Rhythm improvements
2. A few nazi fixes

20:51 Inyuschan: btw, my NC map is in your list, right?
20:51 -Bakari-: it is 
20:51 -Bakari-: ah, whatever. let's check it now
20:51 Inyuschan: okay
20:52 -Bakari-: let me re-dl it to be sure
20:52 Inyuschan: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/214156 in case you need it o3o
20:53 -Bakari-: okay, let's start with general 
20:53 Inyuschan: okay ><
20:54 -Bakari-: so,  we've got a few missing elements. 
20:54 -Bakari-: cursormiddle.png
20:55 Inyuschan: asd, let me look for it orz
20:55 -Bakari-: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
20:55 -Bakari-: You can grab one from default skin template
20:56 -Bakari-: sliderpoint10.png / sliderpoint30.png
20:56 -Bakari-: Well, you can chceck it yoursel. I think we can leave it for later and move on
20:57 Inyuschan: yep I guess so, thanks for check it too :3
20:59 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/503322 The Cranberries - Zombie (Nightcore Mix) [Easy]]
20:59 -Bakari-: 00:16:414 (2) - I strongly suggest to avoid such sliders. 
20:59 -Bakari-: Sudden change of its direction is confusing for beginners
21:00 -Bakari-: moreover, the way how 00:16:414 (2,1) - are overlapped is also quite confusing
21:00 -Bakari-: 00:25:334 (1,2) - I think it is a serious problem. the shapes are too agressive, it is hard to understand them even for me
21:02 Inyuschan: (I'm fixing all for now)
21:02 -Bakari-: 00:27:647 (3) - you don't really need this circle, do you? it seems a bit unfitting here, if you ask me
21:04 Inyuschan: true
21:05 -Bakari-: 00:35:577 (2) - beats on the red ticks are much stronger, so, having a circle here feels odd
21:08 Inyuschan: however, I'm not sure about this, because red tick and 00:35:577 (2) - has almost the same volume :3u
21:08 -Bakari-: 00:41:193 - feels off vocals and instruments to me. try to ficus more and we get something like http://puu.sh/cAm3K.jpg 
21:08 Inyuschan: but adding notes on red ticks being easy I think sometimes can be confuse for beginners
21:08 Inyuschan: so idk
21:08 -Bakari-: there's a 3/1 gap which is confusing to play, anyways 
21:08 Inyuschan: I'll try then o3o
21:09 -Bakari-: if we remove the circle, stuff gets 200% easier 
21:09 Inyuschan: okay, looks good then
21:10 -Bakari-: 00:48:793 (1,3) - don't do this, please ;_;
21:10 -Bakari-: 00:56:722 (4) - replace with an 1/1 slider, we can't have downbeat unstressed :P 
21:10 Inyuschan: true, those sliders xDu
21:11 Inyuschan: you mean this? http://puu.sh/cAmkj/0f914b46ad.jpg
21:11 -Bakari-: yeah, exactly. :)
21:12 Inyuschan: uh, okay owo
21:13 -Bakari-: 01:26:127 (2,3) - feels totally out of your style. everything was symmetrical, and then suddenly
21:15 Inyuschan: well, I think everything symmetrical can bore people a bit
21:15 Inyuschan: symmetry is good but o3o
21:15 Inyuschan: anyway I can try something different, I guess
21:15 -Bakari-: that'd be great
21:16 -Bakari-: anyways, that's it for the Easy. 
21:16 Inyuschan: okay *prepares for Normal since it's kinda bad mapped*
21:19 -Bakari-: nah, it's fine
21:19 -Bakari-: you could add a few 1/2s to non-kiai parts because they feel too easy now
21:20 Inyuschan: o3o okay
21:20 Inyuschan: I thought it but since bpm is high I think it would be a bit difficult, like Normal+
21:20 Inyuschan: so I'm not sure ><
21:20 -Bakari-: 00:31:612 (2,3) - any reason for the stack here? 
21:21 -Bakari-: not too many 1/2s, just to make it a bit more challenging, because this is still a Normal diff
21:21 Inyuschan: hmmm had to fix some patterns and I didn't know how to do it well
21:21 Inyuschan: :3u
21:21 Inyuschan: yeah I know
21:21 -Bakari-: 00:38:385 (1,2,3) - the transition feels sorta forced. at least for me
21:22 -Bakari-:  00:43:671 (1) - i really don't get the rhythm here
21:23 Inyuschan: maybe because I wanted to follow those "streams", if you can hear them
21:23 -Bakari-: apparently, you are trying to follow the vocals, but lots of words and accents are unstressed
21:24 Inyuschan: the problem here is that vocals are mostly on red ticks, so it's really difficult to map this song
21:24 Inyuschan: x__x
21:25 -Bakari-: well, polarity helps a lot, in this case
21:26 Inyuschan: yeah maybe o3o
21:26 -Bakari-: 00:45:158 (4) - a circle or an 1/2 slider here. as I've mentioned, polarity. 
21:27 Inyuschan: where where
21:28 -Bakari-: sdadbhisdbhasdfbhsfbhv
21:28 -Bakari-: 00:51:271 - 
21:28 Inyuschan: I have selected (2) when I click there
21:28 Inyuschan: xDD
21:28 -Bakari-: 01:32:240 - polarity, music. EVERYTHING suggest you to have something clickable here. 
21:29 -Bakari-:  01:44:630 (2,2) - and these two sound sorta unnatural with the vocals 
21:29 Inyuschan: polarity = http://puu.sh/cAnIJ/1e8ccec52b.jpg?
21:30 Inyuschan: asd
21:30 Inyuschan: http://puu.sh/cAnIJ/1e8ccec52b.jpg
21:30 -Bakari-: basically, polarity is about avoiding 3/2 and 3/4 gaps between objects
21:31 Inyuschan: ah ok o3o
21:35 -Bakari-: ok, rest of the Normal is ok
21:35 -Bakari-: just pay a bit more attention to rhythm and stuff
21:38 Inyuschan: okay ><
21:38 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/503323 The Cranberries - Zombie (Nightcore Mix) [Hard]]
21:40 -Bakari-: 00:48:958 (1,3) - those minor curves in the end represent basically nothing, so I would just remove the red nods
21:40 Inyuschan: sure o3o
21:43 -Bakari-:   01:04:817 (1,2,3) - minor- you could use (1) to blanket (2). [http://puu.sh/cAoHi.jpg rough example]
21:44 Inyuschan: fixed ~
21:46 Inyuschan: (continue writing here or post mod, I'll be afk for a while)
21:47 -Bakari-: we've got only Insane diff
21:47 -Bakari-: I'll post the log afterwards
21:47 Inyuschan: okay ~
21:51 -Bakari-: 00:15:092 (2,3) - having a little jump here to add some variety and represent the music would be cool
21:52 -Bakari-: 00:15:423 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - well, tbh, I feel like this whole part needs less circles. there are a bit too many and it is quite hard to hit them all
21:54 -Bakari-: however, 00:17:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - this did not work well with the vocals. but the jumps are small, so it might be okay. 
21:54 -Bakari-: 00:44:663 (7) - new combo. to warn about 1/4 sliders with high DS
21:56 -Bakari-: 01:45:456 (2,1,2,3) - 01:50:742 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 
21:56 -Bakari-: compare these two. It is obvious that the second patterns fits way better

256,152,8484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,52,8649,1,0,0:0:0:0:

176,92,87449,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,87614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,20,87779,1,8,0:0:0:0:

DakeDekaane wrote:

Cierta personita se la ha pasando acosandome para que checara este mapa.

dis mapping style ;w; qué problema tienes </3

[General]
¿Por qué una imagen de un vampiro? >.>
Apuesto que hay una variedad de chicas anime zombie (?) ayúdame a buscar uno (?)

[ Easy]
01:19:519 - Remueve el break, las flechas son algo estresantes para los principiantes, además que el HP es muy bajo y es poco probable que los jugadores mueran, a no ser que sea demasiaaado malos. k

[ Normal]
Nada malo, buen trabajo. thx

[ Hard]
01:20:841 (1,2,3,4) - Sería mejor si le hicieras Ctrl+G a cada slider, los jumps son un poco extremos? supongo, no queda mal owo

[ Insane]
00:08:154 (1,2,3,4) - Esta parte se vería mejor si el spacing fuera regular. eeeh me hice un lío pero creo que lo arreglé

256,152,8484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,52,8649,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:17:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - Este se vería mejor si fuera algo más regular, no está mal, pero se ve raro considerando el estilo. well no cambiaré nada por ahora, no lo veo raro owo
00:37:559 (2) - Siento que este círculo debería estar apilado con 00:36:898 (4), el jump solo hace inconsistente y confusa todo esta parte 00:37:064 (1,2,3,4,5) - cierto
00:40:698 (2,3,4,1) - El spacing reducido aquí es a propósito? Porque no se ve muy bien :c no realmente, espero que ahora esté mejor ;_;
00:45:984 (2) - Esta nota bien está de más, al removerla haces una pausa, permitiendo que 00:46:149 (3,4) - den una buena introducción al kiai al seguir las notas más fuertes. quizá xD fixed
01:08:451 (4,5,6,1) - No un cuadro perfecto? o3o no buscaba un cuadro (? idk
01:12:086 (3) - Pienso que sería mejor hacer este slider uno de 1/1, para seguir mejor el sonido principal? ugh, no estoy del todo segura porque sigue la vocal y queda bien y no sé ya veré qué hago
01:27:449 (1,2,3,4) - Algo similar a la primera sugerencia, puedes mover 01:27:449 (1,2,3) un poco hacia arriba. why not

176,92,87449,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,87614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,20,87779,1,8,0:0:0:0:

En general hay varios blankets que deberías de checar y mejorarlos, no serán muy notorios, pero harían un poco mejor el mapa para aquellos que se obsesionan con el orden.

=w=b

1. Cambia el BG pls

1. 00:06:502 Se siente tan raro y extraño que dejes este lugar sin una nota cuando uno juega esta dificultad. Si pusiste notas en los otros lugares.¿Porquè no poner una nota aqui?
2. 00:19:718 (^)
3. 00:25:334 (1) Al comienzo de este slider se logra escuchar notoriamente un sonido fuerte en la mùsica, para enfocar mejor ese sonido te sugerirìa usar un Sampleset Normal solo al comienzo del slider, encajarìa muy bien con la musica en mi opinion.
4. 00:33:264 (1) Este combo se ve un poco raro en mi opinion debido a que solo posee una nota y se siente algo raro comparado al resto de combos. Te sugeriria eliminarlo , pero no estoy muy seguro
5. 00:55:731 (3) Estoy seguro que estàs usando los claps con la idea de qaue encajen con los claps de la musica, pero si escucha cuidadosamente notaràs que el Clap que se està usando en el Slidertick no tiene de donde acojerse debido a que en esa parte los claps de la musica ya no suenan, en vez de eso suenan algo similar a los Finish. En conclusion te sugiero quitar el clap que suena en el Slidertick
6. 00:56:722 (4) (^) Serìa mucho mejor si quitas este Clap
7. 01:17:537 (3) Los sliders anteriores tienen curvaturas, cosa que este slider no. Siento que este slider no encaja bien con los anteriores debido a ellos, asi que seria genial si le das un poco de curvatura a este slider. Ejemplo:
   
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8. 01:40:334 (1) No sè, pero siento que este spinner no juega para nada bien. Serìa mejor si mapearas esta parte u.u
9. 01:51:238 (1) Claramente se escucha el sonido fuerte , el Finish encaja mejor aque un Whistle imo

1. 00:21:370 (1) Sè que no soy el indicado para hablar de mejorar los sliders, pero siento que este slider, si bien no luce mal podrìa ser mejorado un poco.
   
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2. 00:25:334 (1) Misma sugerencia con respecto al histound de la cabeza del slider
3. 00:30:621 (1,4) !Nazi! Apila apropiadamente (4) con la cabeza del slider (1)
4. 00:43:506 (4,1) El ritmo se siente realmente raro , hubiese sido mejor si usabas 2 circles antes del slider. Ejemplo:
   
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   *NOTA* De todos modos este "long slider" me està incomodando un poco, siento que se "traga" todo la musica ignorandola por completo :/
5. 00:48:958 (1) No estoy seguro pero este slider suena raro si trato de darle sentido con la voz/musica, serìa muchisimo mejor si le quitas una repeticion y posteriormente le agregas un 1/2 slider. Ejemplo:
   
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6. 01:05:973 (1) No sè si lo hiciste por lazy o algo, pero este spinner no juega para nada bien imo
7. 01:52:559 (1) Misma sugerencia que en la Easy

1. Mismas sugerencias en cuanto a Hitsounds

XinCrin wrote:

Hola!!!

General

1. Cambia el BG pls Dije 75934759485 veces que personalmente no encontré otro mejor, si alguien me ayudase... ;w;

Easy

1. 00:06:502 Se siente tan raro y extraño que dejes este lugar sin una nota cuando uno juega esta dificultad. Si pusiste notas en los otros lugares.¿Porquè no poner una nota aqui? Porque quiero que haya pequeñas pausas/descansos ya que el ritmo es algo alto.
2. 00:19:718 (^) Lo mismo.
3. 00:25:334 (1) Al comienzo de este slider se logra escuchar notoriamente un sonido fuerte en la mùsica, para enfocar mejor ese sonido te sugerirìa usar un Sampleset Normal solo al comienzo del slider, encajarìa muy bien con la musica en mi opinion. Lo probé y no lo siento igual xDu
4. 00:33:264 (1) Este combo se ve un poco raro en mi opinion debido a que solo posee una nota y se siente algo raro comparado al resto de combos. Te sugeriria eliminarlo , pero no estoy muy seguro Bueno, no estoy segura, pero como dices no hay nada después, así que supongo que no es un problema.
5. 00:55:731 (3) Estoy seguro que estàs usando los claps con la idea de qaue encajen con los claps de la musica, pero si escucha cuidadosamente notaràs que el Clap que se està usando en el Slidertick no tiene de donde acojerse debido a que en esa parte los claps de la musica ya no suenan, en vez de eso suenan algo similar a los Finish. En conclusion te sugiero quitar el clap que suena en el Slidertick Quizá sea sólo cosa mía pero me suena raro sin el clap :/ Prefiero dejarlo así.
6. 00:56:722 (4) (^) Serìa mucho mejor si quitas este Clap Lo mismo.
7. 01:17:537 (3) Los sliders anteriores tienen curvaturas, cosa que este slider no. Siento que este slider no encaja bien con los anteriores debido a ellos, asi que seria genial si le das un poco de curvatura a este slider. Ejemplo: Why not.
   
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8. 01:40:334 (1) No sè, pero siento que este spinner no juega para nada bien. Serìa mejor si mapearas esta parte u.u Ese spinner en concreto prefiero conservarlo, pero soy consciente de que en E / N hice algo raro en general orz
9. 01:51:238 (1) Claramente se escucha el sonido fuerte , el Finish encaja mejor aque un Whistle imo No es tan fuerte para mí.

Normal

1. 00:21:370 (1) Sè que no soy el indicado para hablar de mejorar los sliders, pero siento que este slider, si bien no luce mal podrìa ser mejorado un poco. Tienes razón, muchas gracias~
   
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2. 00:25:334 (1) Misma sugerencia con respecto al histound de la cabeza del slider Lo mismo.
3. 00:30:621 (1,4) !Nazi! Apila apropiadamente (4) con la cabeza del slider (1) Cierto xD
4. 00:43:506 (4,1) El ritmo se siente realmente raro , hubiese sido mejor si usabas 2 circles antes del slider. Ejemplo: Nah, no quería añadir tantas notas seguidas (para mí es mucho para un Normal -con este BPM, me refiero-)...
   
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   *NOTA* De todos modos este "long slider" me està incomodando un poco, siento que se "traga" todo la musica ignorandola por completo :/ Siento que es como una forma de seguir todo el stream que suena.
5. 00:48:958 (1) No estoy seguro pero este slider suena raro si trato de darle sentido con la voz/musica, serìa muchisimo mejor si le quitas una repeticion y posteriormente le agregas un 1/2 slider. Ejemplo: Es una buena sugerencia pero veo mejor lo que usé yo.
   
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6. 01:05:973 (1) No sè si lo hiciste por lazy o algo, pero este spinner no juega para nada bien imo Fíjate en la cantidad de spinners de cada dificultad. Es decir, no, no fue por lazy, tampoco queda mal en mi opinión ya que luego viene un descanso pequeño.
7. 01:52:559 (1) Misma sugerencia que en la Easy Lo mismo.

Hard/Insane

1. Mismas sugerencias en cuanto a Hitsounds Lo mismo.

Bueno este no fue un mod completo, solo unos cuantos puntos que no me gustaron de tu mapa. Buena suerte! :)

Cloudchaser wrote:

‎Add into tags: Dolores O'Riordan (La vocalista) y también Noel Hogan (Es el compositor y guitarrista)

1. Que te parece usar el sliderborder de color gris? para ser honesto encajaría mejor con el BG..
   

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2. Considera la eliminacion de "cursormiddle.png" ya que prácticamente es un archivo basura ya que no esta destinado a realizar ninguna acción dentro del editor/o al jugar el mapa.
3. 00:46:067 - Que hay sobre mover el preview time a este punto? siento que donde lo tienes actualmente la vocal empieza demasiado temprano y para ser sincero es un tanto incomodo al oído.

1. 00:13:440 (1,2) - Nazi* creo que el blanket entre ambos objectos no es el ideal por lo que te recomiendo rehacer un poco la curvatura de 2 para mejorar un poco de alguna manera la estetica.
2. 00:43:506 (1) - Siento decirlo pero este slider no sigue el ritmo correctamente ya que el sonido mas fuerte se produce al final del mismo por lo que te recomendaría eliminar esto y añadir una nota en 00:43:506 - y por lo consiguiente un slider empezando de aquí 00:43:837 - hasta 00:44:497 - igual lo que podrías hacer seria la eliminación de los siguientes circulos y darle un repeat a el slider antes mencionado para evitar ritmos complejos y cambios bruscos.
3. 00:49:784 - Deberías de considerar añadir un circulo acá ya que como el ritmo es constante se siente bastante vació, una solución rápida seria añadir un slider 1/1 de 00:49:784 - hasta 00:50:114 - obviamente eliminando el siguiente circulo, para evitar algún cambio de spacing podrías hacer algo como esto.
   
   Aquí esta el código por si lo deseas:
   
   

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4. 00:53:418 (2,3) - Ya que el ritmo en esta parte es diferente al de las demás te recomendaría la eliminación de ambos círculos para después añadir uno en 00:53:749 - creo que queda muchísimo mejor ya que sigue el sonido que se produce en ese tiempo.
5. 00:56:722 (4) - Tal vez solo sea yo pero creo que un buen toque que podrías darle al final del kiai seria mover este circulo al siguiente tick (rojo) para que encaje con el final de la vocal y de un efecto mas apegado a la música y no en una parte random como lo esta ahora mismo.
6. 01:02:339 (2,2) - Intenta evitar este tipo de overlaps en dificultades fáciles ya que podría crear una cierta confusión al jugarlo ya que cuando llega el momento de dar click a 01:04:321 (2) - esta nota, todavía se puede apreciar la sobreposición de este 01:02:339 (2) - una solucion rapida podria ser dar CTRL + J a este slider 01:04:321 (2) - y colocarlo en X:256 Y:172
7. 01:18:198 (1,1) - Demasiado largo el tiempo de transición del spinner a la siguiente nota, asi que te recomiendo añadir un break manual en esta parte.
8. 01:31:414 (3) - Whistle en ambas polaridades del slider? creo que encaja muy bien con la vocal, deberías de intentarlo.
9. 01:34:718 (1) - Elimina este NC ya que para ser honesto es bastante corto en comparación a los demás patrones.
10. 01:40:334 (1) - Tal vez solo sea yo pero en general este spinner no encaja para nada con el ritmo constante de esta parte por lo que altamente te recomiendo remapear un poco esta parte.

1. 00:41:193 - Es bastante curioso que en Easy/Hard y por supuesto en Insane no hayas añadido whistles en estas partes a comparación de la normal, y para ser honesto suena bastante horrible ya que podrías haber realizado un patrón de whistles un poco menos complejo, considera trabajar de nuevo en tus hitsounds por favor. (Esto aplica también para la Easy que tiene varios custom ticks en ticks rojos.)
2. 00:45:819 - Una nota aquí no estaría de mas así que considera añadirla en X:308 Y:264 por si acaso quieras mantener la simetría.
3. 00:56:887 (6) - Whstle?
4. 01:01:348 (2,3) - En si el ritmo no esta del todo mal pero creo que podría mejorarse un poco de la siguiente manera, considera cambiarlo por favor.
5. 01:19:519 (1) - Clap en lugar de whistle suena mucho mejor, claro que considera bajarle un poco el volumen para que no suene tan fuerte, un poco mas de 25 % para que encaja bien con el background.
6. 01:40:334 (1) - Lo mismo que mencione acerca de este spinner.
7. 01:52:559 (1) - Un sampleset normal en lugar de un whistle soft sonaría mucho mejor respecto al fondo de la canción, si lo consideras aplicar hazlo en todas las dificultades obviamente.

1. 00:12:119 (1,2,3) - No me gusta mucho la estética de este patrón, estoy bastante seguro de que puedes hacer algo mejor acá, un ejemplo podría ser algo como esto (Considera cambien el cambio de ritmo)
2. 00:20:048 (1,2,3) - El flujo me parece un poco forzado por lo que te recomendaría hacer algo como esto en lugar de el patrón que tienes actualmente.
   
   
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3. 00:56:557 (2,1) - Para evitar cualquier problemas en un futuro o cualquier cuestiones antes de rank te recomiendo que en dificultades que no sean Insane/Extra cambies el inicio del spinner y lo muevas al siguiente tick rojo.
4. 01:04:817 (1) - Esto es spam en toda regla ya que aquí no se produce un sonido fuerte o algún cambio para colocar un NC así que lo ideal seria quitarlo.
5. 01:10:764 (2,1,2,3) - Simplemente no, realmente el flujo no es el indicado y los overlaps tampoco ayudan mucho, intenta algo diferente, estoy seguro que puedes pulir mas estos detalles en la dificultad.
6. 01:17:702 (3) - Spacing?
7. 01:27:945 (3,1) - Vale un comentario nazi no hará daño pero ambos no son simétricos totalmente ya que 1 esta creo que 2 grids mas abajo que 3, ten en cuenta esto cuando hagas algún patrón similar en el futuro.
8. 01:34:883 (3,1) - Intercambia el combo acá, ya que en el slider 3 comienza el "In your head" lo mismo sucede en para estos 01:36:370 (4,1) - ten cuidado al agregar tus combos ya que pueden haber este tipo de errores.
9. 01:40:334 (3,1) - ^
10. 01:51:898 (4) - Considera la posibilidad de agregar un NC aquí ya que como hay cambio de ritmo (exactamente un sonido fuerte) podría quedar bastante bien de alguna manera.
    01:53:385 (3) - El ritmo de este slider debería de empezar en el anterior tick ya que si escuchas cuidadosamente esta parte a 25 % de velocidad exactamente se produce un efecto fade que va subiendo gradualmente.
    01:53:385 (3) - Misma sugerencia respecto a el sampleset normal en lugar de un whistle.

1. 00:07:493 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - No es por molestar a tu patron de ritmos pero estos son los unicos cirulos en los cuales haz marcado el ritmo que se encuentra en el fondo a diferencia que en otras partes como 00:09:806 - esta, 00:15:092 - esta, 00:18:066 - esta, 00:20:379 - esta, 00:23:352 - o esta lo ignoraste por completo lo cual crea un poco de inconsistencia realmente, así que tienes dos soluciones, eliminar el ritmo de esos círculos o añadirlos en esos tiempos que te he mencionado.
2. 00:13:275 - que opinas sobre agregar una nota aquí? en mi opinión queda muy bien, algo que podrías hacer seria es apilar este circulo sobre 00:13:440 - este slider de manera que haga un salto de 1 a 1 simultáneamente, obviamente añadiendo un NC en 00:13:110 - para que sea mucho mas fácil de leer. (Ejemplo)
3. 00:21:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Un aumento de espacio entre cada apilamiento encajaría super bien, es mas seria un tanto divertido de alguna manera en general, toma unos ejemplos para que veas lo que podrías hacer:
   
   
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4. 00:38:055 (4,1) - Intercambia los combos, ya que es en 4 donde se produce el cambio de vocales.
5. 01:04:817 (1,3) - Se ven un poco feos no crees? que opinas sobre hacer algo como esto?
6. 01:08:203 - Una nota aquí no estaría de mas, por favor considera añadir mas triples en partes que sean similares a esta ya que solo clickear sliders 1/2 o círculos 1/2 es un poco aburrido, tienes bastantes ritmos que estas ignorando y básicamente eso me pone un poco triste...
7. 01:12:416 - Lo mismo, tienes bastantes cortes de flujo en casi toda la dificultad, considera ser mas constante respecto a esto y no forzar los ritmos para hacer algún patrón simétrico, (01:13:903 (4,1,2) - Algo como lo que hiciste aquí funciona bastante bien)
8. 01:16:876 (1) - CTRL + G? un salto aquí encaja muy bien con el que hiciste anteriormente.
9. 01:48:099 (4) - ^
10. 01:29:266 (3,4,5) - Otra vez el rompimiento del flujo... considera rehacer esto mediante sliders 1/2 que comiencen en ticks rojos para seguir la voz o algo por favor.
11. 01:31:579 (2,3,4) - Lo mismo para estos.
12. 01:40:004 - ^
13. 01:39:591 (2) - Esto claramente esta overmapeado, la única solución es eliminarlo ya que escuchando a 25 % de velocidad no hay ningún sonido que sea notable aquí.
14. 01:51:898 (4) - La misma sugerencia que mencione en la hard sobre añadir un NC ya que se produce un cambio de ritmo.
15. 01:53:385 (4) - Igual lo que mencione sobre este slider en la hard.