[General]
-i think it's required to remove audio from video. should probably check this[Lover's Normal]
00:30:646 (1) - remove note? imo this rhythm might be hard for new players to grasp, since it starts on a 1/2
00:43:749 (5) - whistle on end for emphasis?
00:55:646 (4) - finish on start for emphasis? its also in other diffs
[Hard]
00:00:991 (3) - add clap on end? its there on [Insane]
00:21:163 (1,2,3) - there's an angle between 00:21:163 (1,2) - but 00:21:508 (2,3) - are parallel. imo it'd look really cool if u angle 00:21:853 (3) - up to continue the increase in angle. example
http://puu.sh/cGoWV/19801dd10d.jpg (just move the last point up 2 grids, dont forget to fix spacing after)
00:21:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo this pattern sounds really quiet. maybe add whistle at 00:21:336 - , 00:21:680 - , 00:22:025 - ? (if u accept, also change on other diffs)
00:32:025 (4,5) - spacing
00:34:267 (3) - dont get spacing here o.o imo use 1.2x makes more sense, also makes blanket look nicer
00:52:198 (3,4) - spacing
01:04:439 (2) - change to 1/2 slider? imo this rhythm is out of place since the higher diffs use a more basic rhythm here.
01:18:405 (3) - left 1 grid for better looking blanket?
01:30:474 (2,3) - same idea as 00:21:163 (1,2,3) -
01:30:129 (1,2,3) - maybe use whistle instead of finish here? imo it fits better, it's also seems more consistent since it seems u usually use whistle for piano. (if u accept, also change on other diffs)
i don't think i correctly understood the spacing on this diff. some parts seem to change between 1.1x, 1.2x, 1.3x and i don't get the reason 0.0
[Insane]
00:24:267 (6,7) - don't get why larger spacing here. imo make 00:24:267 (6,7,8) - perfect triangle looks nicer
00:25:301 (1) - copy/paste 00:25:818 (2) - ?
00:49:094 (3,4) - imo this rhythm
http://puu.sh/cGows/ac6cc38b6e.jpg fits song better. u could make it by stack (3) on 00:48:577 (5,6,1) - . just an idea
00:53:577 - flow of this combo is really weird imo
- 00:54:611 (4,5,6) - imo the increase in pace here, after an anti jump, feels really off. then i get confused by spacing at 00:54:784 (6,7) - since it's the same as before, but it's 1/2
- 00:55:301 (1) - then i think having a jump here and then a pause is kind of awkward to play. maybe change this to 1/2 slider and move it somewhere else instead?
idk. maybe it's just me ._.
01:02:887 (2) - i get it's for star pattern, but imo the decrease in spacing from the last jump makes this jump feel weird to play. how about move to x496 y128 to make a triangle pattern instead?
01:04:439 (2,3,4) - i don't think a jump is natural to play here, there's nothing in the music. use 1.2x for 01:04:956 (4) - instead of jump? (then u could also make a pentagon with 01:05:646 (2) - )
01:07:715 (3,4) - make a jump here? given the rest of the combo is all jumps, it might be more natural to play.
01:11:853 (7) - x460 y324
01:11:853 (7,1) - switch NC for vocals
01:13:749 (2) - imo, move up/left a bit for consistent jump distance?
01:14:094 (3) - move the 4th point a bit right makes curve more even
01:22:887 (1,2,3) - mb it's just me but personally i don't like long stacks such as this. how about remove 01:22:887 (1) - and end spinner at 01:22:887 - instead? just an idea
[Star]
00:08:405 (3,4) - i'm not sure if a huge jump fits this soft part. imo pattern like this
http://puu.sh/cG7dI/4de356183f.jpg would flow easier and also fit piano better. just an idea
00:17:542 (3) - i kind of think this part sounds empty, bc the whistles stopped. maybe add whistle at here, then head of 00:18:232 (3) - , then tail of 00:18:749 (4) - ?
00:19:094 (5) - missing whistle. doesn't apply if u take the above
00:27:025 (2) - copy/paste + rotate 00:26:680 (1) - ?
00:33:577 (1) - move last point right for better blanket
00:52:370 (4) - how about stack on end of 00:51:853 (2) - instead? imo it's more intuitive and could make a fun jump. just an idea
01:01:163 (7,1) - switch NCs for pattern?
01:03:922 (1) - curve? i think it might create a better flow leading into 01:04:439 (2) - . example
http://puu.sh/cG6Nz/c48f6abd4d.jpg01:18:749 (4,5) - how about make these into a slider instead? imo it fits the "hold" feeling from the vocal better. either 1/2 or 3/4 slider would work
01:25:646 (7) - missing finish, it's there on [Hard]
all are suggestions
i liked [Star] a lot, cool diff
sorry for really long mod orz. hope it helps, good luck