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GARNiDELiA - grilletto (TV Size Ver.) [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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lolia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 2월 8일 일요일 at 오후 4:46:17

Artist: GARNiDELiA
Title: grilletto (TV Size Ver.)
Source: 魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags: Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei the Irregular at Magic High School opening
BPM: 191
Filesize: 13640kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hard (3.31 stars, 252 notes)
  3. Insane (4.55 stars, 366 notes)
  4. Normal (2.03 stars, 158 notes)
  5. Rain (3.93 stars, 346 notes)
Download: GARNiDELiA - grilletto (TV Size Ver.)
Download: GARNiDELiA - grilletto (TV Size Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - 100% (By me)
Normal - 100% (By me)
Hard - 100% (By me)
Insane - 100% (By me)

Rain - 100% (By me) ??? I don't know
Ringating
bg mod

your bg was 4:3, so I made a 16:9 version by simply extending the right side of the image then using some gradients to make it as seamless as possible. Here is the new image:or, if you prefer using jpg (ever-so-slightly lesser quality, ever-so-slightly smaller file size) you can use this version.

no kudosu
Topic Starter
lolia

Ringating wrote:

bg mod

your bg was 4:3, so I made a 16:9 version by simply extending the right side of the image then using some gradients to make it as seamless as possible. Here is the new image:or, if you prefer using jpg (ever-so-slightly lesser quality, ever-so-slightly smaller file size) you can use this version.

no kudosu
Thanks! I'll upload it later
Ujimatsu Chiya
' ㅅ' 하드겟난 해도 되나욤?
Topic Starter
lolia

eINess wrote:

' ㅅ' 하드겟난 해도 되나욤?
이미 풀셋이라,,죄송합니다 ㅜㅜ
rew0825
Hi from my request [PM] :)

[Rain]
00:33:937 (1,2,3) - Change note this >>>
00:36:136 (5) - x:216
00:36:214 (6) - x:288
00:36:372 (8) - x:424
00:39:278 (3) - x:360
00:39:592 (5) - x:340
00:58:126 (1) - This slider end at 00:58:597
00:58:754 (1) - This slider end at 00:59:068
01:08:649 (4) - x:112
01:08:963 (6) - x:108

Good luck :) :) :) :)

And take my Star :)
Topic Starter
lolia

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my request [PM] :)

[Rain]
00:33:937 (1,2,3) - Change note this >>> fixed

00:36:136 (5) - x:216 decreased the DS this stream
00:36:214 (6) - x:288 ^
00:36:372 (8) - x:424 ^
00:39:278 (3) - x:360 fixed
00:39:592 (5) - x:340 moved to 368
00:58:126 (1) - This slider end at 00:58:597 I want to keep this rhythm with the music. :)
00:58:754 (1) - This slider end at 00:59:068 ^
01:08:649 (4) - x:112 fixed
01:08:963 (6) - x:108 fixed

Good luck :) :) :) :)

And take my Star :)
Thanks for modding and star!! xD
HabiHolic
[General]

None

[Easy]

00:06:293 (1) - 첫부분에 피니쉬를 삽입 후에 드럼 셈플셋을 넣는게 강조하기에 효과적이라고 생각합니다. 휘슬로는 좀 부족한 감이 있네요
00:42:419 (2) - 첫부분과 리버스에 아무 힛사도 넣지 않으셨는데 넣으시는게 좋을듯요
00:53:414 (3,1) - 1번 슬라이더를 좀 다듬으셔서 3번 슬라이더랑 평행이 되도록 맞추시면 모양이 훨씬 좋네요

00:58:126 - 보컬 따라가시는게 좋을듯요 카리아님 맵 특징을 보니까 보컬위주로 맞추시지 않는 부분도 있으신데 보컬 위주로 맞춰야 되는 부분도 많기에 지적을 해보았습니다. 그냥 노트 추가하시는게 어떠신가요
01:04:094 - 이곳의 피니쉬는 별로 안어울린다는 생각입니다. 휘슬을 사용하시는게 어떤가요

[Normal]

00:11:319 (1,2,3,4) - 제 생각에는 별로 리듬에 안어울리고 패턴도 적합하지 않다는 의견입니다.
00:13:832 (1,2,3,4) - Same(^)
00:29:225 (2,1) - 힛사 안들어갔네요 혹시 이유라도 있으신지..?
00:51:529 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬가 좋을듯요 휘슬은 빼시고
00:52:628 (3) - 슬라모양이 이상해서 흐름이 좀 이상해지는 기분이네요. 그냥 깔끔한 모양으로 바꾸시는걸 권장드립니다.
00:58:126 - 이지랑 같은데 여기도 보컬을 따라가기 위함으로 노트를 추가하세요
01:02:052 (2,3) - 이런 겹침은 저도 별로 안쓰는데.. 리듬이 가까울때는 겹침을 쓰는데 멀리 있는 리듬에는 겹침을 되도록 전 안쓰는 편입니다. 그냥 다른곳에 배치하시는게 어떠신가요?
01:27:812 (4) - 뉴콤보?

[Hard]

00:01:110 (1) - 보컬 따라가시니 오히려 어색하네요 그냥 뒤에 음악 따라가시는게 좋을듯요
00:05:979 - 노트 추가해주세요
00:06:136 - ^
00:06:607 (2) - 플로우가 좀 이상한데 Ctrl + g 하시는게 흐름이 좋아지는것 같습니다. (제 생각입니다)
00:11:319 (1,2,3,1) - 뒷부분처럼 00:13:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이런 리듬이 좋을것 같아요... 앞 뒤 패턴 리듬 다르면 플레이하기 힘드니 하나로 통일 시키세요
00:36:136 - 연타 스트림 추가하시는건 어떨까요 드럼 소리 들리는데 강조하기 좋을듯요
00:47:288 (3) - Ctrl + g? 수정하면 플레이하기 편해질듯 합니다.
00:58:126 - 노트 추가요 이지랑 같은 내용
01:15:874 (2) - 시작부분과 끝부분 휘슬 추가해주세요 01:16:503 (1,3) - 마찬가지로 똑같이 해주세요
01:17:602 (4) - Clap?

[Insane]

00:09:435 (1,2,3,4) - 점프가 좀 이상하다고 느껴지는건 저뿐인가요?
00:11:319 (1,2,3,4) - 하드랑 마찬가진데 이거 그냥 뒷부분이랑 맞추세요
00:41:476 (1) - Ctrl + g 하시면 플로우 좋아질듯
00:51:529 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬 추가요 휘슬은 지우시고

Good Luck
Topic Starter
lolia

HabiHolic wrote:

[General]

None

[Easy]

00:06:293 (1) - 첫부분에 피니쉬를 삽입 후에 드럼 셈플셋을 넣는게 강조하기에 효과적이라고 생각합니다. 휘슬로는 좀 부족한 감이 있네요 드럼쪽은 아직 익숙하지가 않아서,,피니시추가했습니다 ㅎ
00:42:419 (2) - 첫부분과 리버스에 아무 힛사도 넣지 않으셨는데 넣으시는게 좋을듯요 뭘 넣으면 이상하게 들리는 자리라..지적 좀 더 들어오면 리듬을 고쳐야겠네요 ㅋ
00:53:414 (3,1) - 1번 슬라이더를 좀 다듬으셔서 3번 슬라이더랑 평행이 되도록 맞추시면 모양이 훨씬 좋네요 fixed

00:58:126 - 보컬 따라가시는게 좋을듯요 카리아님 맵 특징을 보니까 보컬위주로 맞추시지 않는 부분도 있으신데 보컬 위주로 맞춰야 되는 부분도 많기에 지적을 해보았습니다. 그냥 노트 추가하시는게 어떠신가요 이지이기도하고,,그냥 보컬따라가는게 나을수도있겠네요 ㅎㅎ
01:04:094 - 이곳의 피니쉬는 별로 안어울린다는 생각입니다. 휘슬을 사용하시는게 어떤가요 고조되는부분이라 일단 피니시를 넣어줬는데,,지적 좀더 들어오면 고치겠습니다 ㅎ

[Normal]

00:11:319 (1,2,3,4) - 제 생각에는 별로 리듬에 안어울리고 패턴도 적합하지 않다는 의견입니다. 뒤의 다른 난이도에서도 공통적으로 맞춘거이기도 하고 왠진 모르겠는데 전 한번씩 이런 음을 따라가고싶다는 느낌을 받아서 ㅋㅋ (starlog에도 비슷한게 있다고 기억해요) 이건 그냥 두고싶네요 ㅎㅎ
00:13:832 (1,2,3,4) - Same(^) ^
00:29:225 (2,1) - 힛사 안들어갔네요 혹시 이유라도 있으신지..? 엇,,? 추가했습니다
00:51:529 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬가 좋을듯요 휘슬은 빼시고 피니시 추가했습니다 ㅎ
00:52:628 (3) - 슬라모양이 이상해서 흐름이 좀 이상해지는 기분이네요. 그냥 깔끔한 모양으로 바꾸시는걸 권장드립니다. 최근들어 좀 쓰는건데 전 왠지 이런게 좋던..ㅋㅋ
00:58:126 - 이지랑 같은데 여기도 보컬을 따라가기 위함으로 노트를 추가하세요 fixed
01:02:052 (2,3) - 이런 겹침은 저도 별로 안쓰는데.. 리듬이 가까울때는 겹침을 쓰는데 멀리 있는 리듬에는 겹침을 되도록 전 안쓰는 편입니다. 그냥 다른곳에 배치하시는게 어떠신가요? 전 노말에선 이런걸 좀 써서..설명하기가 힘든데 개인적으론 어울리는곳이라 생각해요 ㅎㅎ
01:27:812 (4) - 뉴콤보? fixed

[Hard]

00:01:110 (1) - 보컬 따라가시니 오히려 어색하네요 그냥 뒤에 음악 따라가시는게 좋을듯요 00:01:267 쪽으로 옮겼지만 리듬은 이대로 두고싶네요..
00:05:979 - 노트 추가해주세요 개인적 취향인데 여기는 보컬을 따라가고싶지가 않네요 ㅜ
00:06:136 - ^ ^
00:06:607 (2) - 플로우가 좀 이상한데 Ctrl + g 하시는게 흐름이 좋아지는것 같습니다. (제 생각입니다) 음,,전 괜찮은거같은데,,일단 이대로 두고싶네요 ㅎㅎ
00:11:319 (1,2,3,1) - 뒷부분처럼 00:13:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이런 리듬이 좋을것 같아요... 앞 뒤 패턴 리듬 다르면 플레이하기 힘드니 하나로 통일 시키세요 이유는 노말에,, :)
00:36:136 - 연타 스트림 추가하시는건 어떨까요 드럼 소리 들리는데 강조하기 좋을듯요 fixed
00:47:288 (3) - Ctrl + g? 수정하면 플레이하기 편해질듯 합니다. fixed
00:58:126 - 노트 추가요 이지랑 같은 내용 하드에선 이렇게둬도 큰 문제가 되진 않을꺼같아요 ㅎ
01:15:874 (2) - 시작부분과 끝부분 휘슬 추가해주세요 01:16:503 (1,3) - 마찬가지로 똑같이 해주세요 fixed
01:17:602 (4) - Clap? 여기는 그냥 두고싶네요 ㅎㅎ

[Insane]

00:09:435 (1,2,3,4) - 점프가 좀 이상하다고 느껴지는건 저뿐인가요? 아마 문제는 없는부분일꺼같은데,,이번주내로 테스트해보고 결정할게요 ㅎ
00:11:319 (1,2,3,4) - 하드랑 마찬가진데 이거 그냥 뒷부분이랑 맞추세요 마찬가지의 이유로,,!
00:41:476 (1) - Ctrl + g 하시면 플로우 좋아질듯 뒷부분이 엉망이 되기도 하고 아마 지금도 괜찮을꺼라 생각해요 ㅎ
00:51:529 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬 추가요 휘슬은 지우시고 피니시 추가했습니다 ㅎ

Good Luck
Thanks for modding!
litoluna
hi~
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
  1. add tags:opening
    it need not contain but it would actually work.
  2. not used custom combo color??
[Easy]
  1. 01:08:178 (2) - change clap?
    beautiful map
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:743 (5) - add finish
    other dff is whistle and finish at identically place
  2. 00:30:010 (1) - remove NC
    The one that excluded NC thinks 1/2 Rhythm is plain
  3. 00:45:874 (4) - remove double Reverse
    I think that you should change it because you invite confusion and I think no problem use one reverse slider
  4. 01:28:126 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
    01:27:026 (2,2) - I think this overlap so to be confused for Normal diff
    if you change this,01:27:340 (3) - follow next note
[Hard]
  1. 00:43:990 (1,2) - ummm.I think this overlap so to be confused(hidden note 00:44:775 (2) - )
    my idea:
  2. 01:05:037 (4) - add whistle?
    Similar Insane diff
  3. 01:09:906 (4,1) - I think you can more vocal follow Rhythm
    idea:
[Insane]
  1. 00:26:084 - volume+10%?
    i think fit back sound ;)
  2. 00:46:031 (6) - add NC?
    00:46:031 (6,7,8) - Rhythm where is different from 00:45:403 (1,2,3,4,5) -
Good Luck~ :D
Iceskulls
Let's see

[General]
How about add some custom colours?

[Insane]
  1. 00:09:435 (1,2) - Too high spacing , I guess the beat (3) feel emphasized just like (2) so try to make spacing from (1) to (2) and (2) to (3) same http://puu.sh/bPqGT/046fe46768.png
  2. 00:46:031 (6,7,8) - Somehow spacing here need to be consistent so it flow better
  3. 00:54:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I find that it sound better when follow the vocal here http://puu.sh/bPr3s/d2c4d04a70.png
  4. 01:08:492 (3,4,5,6) - Try symmetry?
    Notes seems to be a bit untidy but if it your style then that fine
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:817 (2,4) - Stack
  2. 00:06:921 (3,4) - Don't overlap maybe it not looking good for me
    Pretty fine for me
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:293 (1,3) - Blanket
  2. 00:24:670 (2) - Should make curve to the right a little bit so it flow with (3) better
  3. 00:45:874 (4) - A bit confusing for Normal here
  4. 01:27:026 (2,2) - This overlap doesn't look nice for me
    Pretty solid
[Easy]
  • Polished Easy
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
lolia

litoluna wrote:

hi~
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
  1. add tags:opening fixed
    it need not contain but it would actually work.
  2. not used custom combo color?? ?!?! fixed
[Easy]
  1. 01:08:178 (2) - change clap? oh, fixed
    beautiful map x)
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:743 (5) - add finish
    other dff is whistle and finish at identically place fixed
  2. 00:30:010 (1) - remove NC
    The one that excluded NC thinks 1/2 Rhythm is plain yeah
  3. 00:45:874 (4) - remove double Reverse
    I think that you should change it because you invite confusion and I think no problem use one reverse slider sure
  4. 01:28:126 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
    01:27:026 (2,2) - I think this overlap so to be confused for Normal diff
    if you change this,01:27:340 (3) - follow next note fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:43:990 (1,2) - ummm.I think this overlap so to be confused(hidden note 00:44:775 (2) - ) Uuuh,,I want to keep this @3@..Sorry
    my idea:
  2. 01:05:037 (4) - add whistle?
    Similar Insane diff yeah
  3. 01:09:906 (4,1) - I think you can more vocal follow Rhythm fixed
    idea:
[Insane]
  1. 00:26:084 - volume+10%? yeah
    i think fit back sound ;)
  2. 00:46:031 (6) - add NC?
    00:46:031 (6,7,8) - Rhythm where is different from 00:45:403 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmm,,maybe np with current NC imo..?
Good Luck~ :D

CelsiusLK wrote:

Let's see

[General]
How about add some custom colours? yeah

[Insane]
  1. 00:09:435 (1,2) - Too high spacing , I guess the beat (3) feel emphasized just like (2) so try to make spacing from (1) to (2) and (2) to (3) same http://puu.sh/bPqGT/046fe46768.png idk exactly but in playing, no problem I felt xD
  2. 00:46:031 (6,7,8) - Somehow spacing here need to be consistent so it flow better I like current DS ;w;
  3. 00:54:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I find that it sound better when follow the vocal here http://puu.sh/bPr3s/d2c4d04a70.png Maybe I want to follow the biggg and stronggg beats only :D
  4. 01:08:492 (3,4,5,6) - Try symmetry? Maybe no problem now,,??
    Notes seems to be a bit untidy but if it your style then that fine I like that xDD
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:817 (2,4) - Stack Intentional xD
  2. 00:06:921 (3,4) - Don't overlap maybe it not looking good for me HaHa,,I like this overlap xP
    Pretty fine for me :3
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:293 (1,3) - Blanket yeah
  2. 00:24:670 (2) - Should make curve to the right a little bit so it flow with (3) better moved (3)
  3. 00:45:874 (4) - A bit confusing for Normal here YEAH
  4. 01:27:026 (2,2) - This overlap doesn't look nice for me @3@
    Pretty solid ;)
[Easy]
  • Polished Easy ;D
Good luck :)

Thanks for moddings!
Starfall9908
From Nacchan's Modding Queue

[General]
  1. 00:16:031 - 00:16:189 - Kiai Mode is activated for less than 15 seconds
  2. 01:18:859 - 01:19:016 - ^
[Easy]
  1. 01:05:351 (3) - Make the slider shape be like a blanket to 01:06:293 (4)
  2. 01:06:293 (4) - X: 316 Y:152
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:293 (1,3) - Fix the blanket
  2. 01:05:979 (4,2) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:445 (4) - Stack it with 00:16:817 (2)
  2. 00:42:576 (1) - Stack the head of the slider under 00:41:948 (2)
  3. 00:50:272 (1) - Make the slider shape to be like a blanket to 00:49:958 (4)
  4. 01:03:937 (5,1) - This is confusing ._. delete 5 and put 2 circles instead.
  5. 01:26:555 (1) - Same thing as 00:50:272 (1)

Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
lolia

nadapan wrote:

From Nacchan's Modding Queue

[General]
  1. 00:16:031 - 00:16:189 - Kiai Mode is activated for less than 15 seconds These two issues is no problem I think :D
  2. 01:18:859 - 01:19:016 - ^
[Easy]
  1. 01:05:351 (3) - Make the slider shape be like a blanket to 01:06:293 (4)
  2. 01:06:293 (4) - X: 316 Y:152 These two placements are intentional things xD
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:293 (1,3) - Fix the blanket ok
  2. 01:05:979 (4,2) - ^ Already good imo @3@
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:445 (4) - Stack it with 00:16:817 (2) This is an intentional overlap ;w;
  2. 00:42:576 (1) - Stack the head of the slider under 00:41:948 (2) ^
  3. 00:50:272 (1) - Make the slider shape to be like a blanket to 00:49:958 (4) ok~
  4. 01:03:937 (5,1) - This is confusing ._. delete 5 and put 2 circles instead. Not big problem imo. Sorry
  5. 01:26:555 (1) - Same thing as 00:50:272 (1) yeah

Good Luck ;)
Thanks for modding!
gorgonzoler
from soga's queue
hi I m gorgonzoler
my mod is just advise.so it is not a good mod.and i am not a hair picker
easy
00:24:513 (2) - add a finish or clap sound at the end of the slider.
00:25:298 (3) - add finish or clap sound both of them.and NC it.
00:26:398 (1,2) - avoid bit lap as possible in this diff.but i think okay here.(someone said about it on my map :D )
hmm~i think normal is okay to me.
hard
i think it is okay.
00:01:267 (1,1) - increase the distance.(i saw your insane,)
00:43:204 (3) - is that really okay to map outside the grid? ignore it if is yes.
insane…………is beyound my ability.QAQ
don’t usually play this style of the song.I m already give my best shot.Please don't give kud if you think this mod is helpless
Topic Starter
lolia

gorgonzoler wrote:

from soga's queue
hi I m gorgonzoler
my mod is just advise.so it is not a good mod.and i am not a hair picker
easy
00:24:513 (2) - add a finish or clap sound at the end of the slider. clap on (2,3)
00:25:298 (3) - add finish or clap sound both of them.and NC it.
00:26:398 (1,2) - avoid bit lap as possible in this diff.but i think okay here.(someone said about it on my map :D ) Maybe np :D
hmm~i think normal is okay to me.
hard
i think it is okay.
00:01:267 (1,1) - increase the distance.(i saw your insane,) ok
00:43:204 (3) - is that really okay to map outside the grid? ignore it if is yes. That's ok cuz this isn't off-screen xD
insane…………is beyound my ability.QAQ
don’t usually play this style of the song.I m already give my best shot.Please don't give kud if you think this mod is helpless
Thanks for modding~
-Nanaka-
hi :)

[General]
fine

[Normal]
  1. 01:25:770 (4,5) - incompatibility

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:822 (1) - 1.2 from the SV0.5 is difficult to difficult to read in the intro Accelerating effect is sufficient SV1
  2. 00:38:492 (5) - x248y200 Best flow
  3. 01:00:325 (1,2,3) - I want in a little easier lol
  4. 01:03:937 (7,1,2) - 01:02:052 (4,5,3,4) - I can not read the pattern of difference here
sorry for late I'm busy :o
I think it's perfect without any problems hit sound :)
I'm sorry it is not accustomed to the force :(

go-go-
PatZar
hiii from PM req

[rain]
00:44:304 (2) - ctrl+ g and move it to 392
00:44:618 (3) - 259
00:44:775 (4) - 332 | so it's jumpy and flow

00:25:298 (2) - 320
00:25:613 (3) - 208/200 | it's jumpy and readable for rain

00:57:654 (2) - move this to 312
01:08:649 (4,6) - move both to left a bit and same this too 01:08:492 (3,5) - move both to right a bit
01:09:120 (1) - 268

01:28:440 (3) - 72

tbh, this rain is fun :P
good luck for rank !
Topic Starter
lolia

-Nanaka- wrote:

hi :)

[General]
fine

[Normal]
  1. 01:25:770 (4,5) - incompatibility fixed

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:822 (1) - 1.2 from the SV0.5 is difficult to difficult to read in the intro Accelerating effect is sufficient SV1 With the next SV 1.0 slider, current is better imo xD
  2. 00:38:492 (5) - x248y200 Best flow np I think QwQ
  3. 01:00:325 (1,2,3) - I want in a little easier lol A bit decreased DS xD
  4. 01:03:937 (7,1,2) - 01:02:052 (4,5,3,4) - I can not read the pattern of difference here cuz from 01:04:094 (1) - this, the music is changed haha..
sorry for late I'm busy :o
I think it's perfect without any problems hit sound :)
I'm sorry it is not accustomed to the force :(

go-go-

Genocide wrote:

hiii from PM req

[rain]
00:44:304 (2) - ctrl+ g and move it to 392
00:44:618 (3) - 259
00:44:775 (4) - 332 | so it's jumpy and flow fixed above jump with this

00:25:298 (2) - 320
00:25:613 (3) - 208/200 | it's jumpy and readable for rain ok

00:57:654 (2) - move this to 312 fixed
01:08:649 (4,6) - move both to left a bit and same this too 01:08:492 (3,5) - move both to right a bit Not sure this. I'll get more moddings ;w;
01:09:120 (1) - 268 fixed

01:28:440 (3) - 72 ok

tbh, this rain is fun :P
good luck for rank !

Thanks for moddings~ (And star!)
-Nya-
Hello! From Nya's Standard Modding Queue
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
00:07:864 (3,1) – Maybe you can try to avoid a overlap like this by curving 00:08:806 (1) – a bit to blanket 00:07:864 (3) – (The overlap is probably not such a big issue, so you can keep it if you want)00:12:733 (2) – Maybe this will work better?
00:15:246 (2) – Same here
00:16:974 (2) – I think this looks better
00:26:398 (1,2) – Rather blanket. Just to avoid the overlap and I think it looks nicer01:12:733 (3) – Maybe make this slider’s shape look more like this slider’s shape: 01:11:634 (1) - . In other words curve 01:12:733 (3) – like 01:11:634 (1) – (Use copy and paste; just a suggestion)No other problems found (All of them are suggestions anyway)

Normal:
00:38:963 (1) – I think this looks better
Copy and paste 00:38:335 (3) - and then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:51:215 (5,1) – Blanket?01:16:031 (4) – I’ll say curve this slider like these 01:16:660 (1,2) – (It then forms a kind of shape if you curve it)Nice diff

Hard:
00:07:236 (4) – Rather place it like this
00:16:817 (2,4) – Stack?00:48:387 (3) – Move the slider’s tail a bit so it looks like this
Just to support 00:48:073 (2) – Wow! Your Hard looks so nice.

Overall, excellent mapset.
I’ll shoot a star for you.
Good Luck! :D
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